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barneysbullet
new plot claire on burnnotice is alive and pregnant and shows up at micheals . claire is a sychic with all the cerdentuals someone wants her baby cause its sychic too . people are shocked so she becomes the client. meddy befreinds her and the relationship between fi and mickeal is pushed to the edge things micheal doesnt want too hear. bad guys think baby is valuble. the rest fill in the blanks. your know how sychics are a lot of free questiuons
she drives a truck pulling a classic car i prefer a 67 gto hard top witch sam might get out of the deal she brings fi a fovourite gun of hers she gives meddy and fi a taro reading
then questions are asked to micheal thats a start love paul
HaleyLovesBN
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 4 2009, 03:52 AM) *
new plot claire on burntice is alive and pregnant and shows up at micheals . claire is a sychic with all the cerdentuals someone wants her bay cause its sychic too . people are shocked so she becomes the client. mettie befreinds her and the relationship between fi and mickeal is pushed to the edge things micheal doesnt want too hear. bad guys think baby is valuble. the rest fill in the blanks. love paul

woah woah woah what?
teresaslo
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 4 2009, 02:52 AM) *
new plot claire on burntice is alive and pregnant and shows up at micheals . claire is a sychic with all the cerdentuals someone wants her bay cause its sychic too . people are shocked so she becomes the client. mettie befreinds her and the relationship between fi and mickeal is pushed to the edge things micheal doesnt want too hear. bad guys think baby is valuble. the rest fill in the blanks. love paul

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barneysbullet
new topic fis and sam are in a firefight potecting micheal fi is shooting and saids to sam i told my gun guy i like my fire arms to shoot a little to the left this one is shooting right on sam says maybe its your shooting fi hits sam and says no frickin way hand me another clip
barneysbullet
new episode potect the quarterback client washington speech writer female sam likes her and she likes sam bad guys are after her and if micheal is to do the job top guys in washington might notice and he might get back in
barneysbullet
new plot meddy meets a con man lurered in by fake lottery tickets con man clam she has won but it s only a way to get meddys money mom become the client filler fi takes up fencing at the loft instructor in hansom maybe a someone special or maybe a jealousy tactic the fencing is not without a catch for at the same the as fencing mr x is giving her young ladie etiquette leasons the lessons she didnt get as a young girl with each toshae fi gets an etiquette quote mr x after the lesson is over he leaves micheal gets close to her she has the mask still on micheal saids i could have fenced with you and then fi takes the mask off and shes been crying not from the work out but from the etiquette lessons micheal says fi are you crying then fi says no i have something in my eye then micheal sees a side of fi hes never seen love paul bassstickler2003@yahoo.com
barneysbullet
please down load some photos of fi and the child and the army men her true mother shows as she teaches as a tiger mom would teach her cubs . just the look in her eye just makes me think please let me see again love paul
barneysbullet
new topic sam and micheal in a conversation mike what are you going to get fi for her birthday mike says i dont know sam says there is an aution we can go too will pick something up there . continue with the episode what even it is . finally they make it to the auction and guess who they see chuck norris and clint eastwood . sam says look mike we have to bid against them . bidding get started few things go by and up comes a silver bullet from a loneranger episode mike says go for it mike so mike makes a bit and then chuck makes a bit then clint makes a bid . sam says bid mike bid and the bidding continues stakes get high chuck finally wins because he feels he couldnt win . items go by to the last . it is the famous bullet that barney carried in his pocket on the andy griffin show mike bids and wins chuck and clint give mike a silute. episode continues at the end of show the all three go to a ball game fi comes back with crackerjack sam drinks a beer mike is holding her present feeling said so they all start snacking on their crackerjack mike says im sorry fi i tried to get you something special . sam and mike after she opens it tells a the story fi says oh micheal its one of a kind maybe a kiss or maybe a look away into space or a tear . fi says eat your crackerjack what did you get mike says i got a decoder ring fi says i got a little printingpress and sam says i got a little bottle of soda . love paul
HaleyLovesBN
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 9 2009, 03:46 PM) *
new topic sam and micheal in a conversation mike what are you going to get fi for her birthday mike says i dont know sam says there is an aution we can go too will pick something up there . continue with the episode what even it is . finally they make it to the auction and guess who they see chuck norris and clint eastwood . sam says look mike we have to bid against them . bidding get started few things go by and up comes a silver bullet from a loneranger episode mike says go for it mike so mike makes a bit and then chuck makes a bit then clint makes a bid . sam says bid mike bid and the bidding continues stakes get high chuck finally wins because he feels he couldnt win . items go by to the last . it is the famous bullet that barney carried in his pocket on the andy griffin show mike bids and wins chuck and clint give mike a silute. episode continues at the end of show the all three go to a ball game fi comes back with crackerjack sam drinks a beer mike is holding her present feeling said so they all start snacking on their crackerjack mike says im sorry fi i tried to get you something special . sam and mike after she opens it tells a the story fi says oh micheal its one of a kind maybe a kiss or maybe a look away into space or a tear . fi says eat your crackerjack what did you get mike says i got a decoder ring fi says i got a little printingpress and sam says i got a little bottle of soda . love paul

are you like writing stories? no one knows what you're talking about...
barneysbullet
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 9 2009, 03:46 PM) *
new topic sam and micheal in a conversation mike what are you going to get fi for her birthday mike says i dont know sam says there is an aution we can go too will pick something up there . continue with the episode what even it is . finally they make it to the auction and guess who they see chuck norris and clint eastwood . sam says look mike we have to bid against them . bidding get started few things go by and up comes a silver bullet from a loneranger episode mike says go for it mike so mike makes a bit and then chuck makes a bit then clint makes a bid . sam says bid mike bid and the bidding continues stakes get high chuck finally wins because he feels he couldnt win . items go by to the last . it is the famous bullet that barney carried in his pocket on the andy griffin show mike bids and wins chuck and clint give mike a silute. episode continues at the end of show the all three go to a ball game fi comes back with crackerjack sam drinks a beer mike is holding her present feeling said so they all start snacking on their crackerjack mike says im sorry fi i tried to get you something special . sam and mike after she opens it tells a the story fi says oh micheal its one of a kind maybe a kiss or maybe a look away into space or a tear . fi says eat your crackerjack what did you get mike says i got a decoder ring fi says i got a little printingpress and sam says i got a little bottle of soda . love paul

you being a fan what do you think
Mishellie26
oookkk...anyone else weirded out??
barneysbullet
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 4 2009, 02:52 AM) *
new plot claire on burnnotice is alive and pregnant and shows up at micheals . claire is a sychic with all the cerdentuals someone wants her baby cause its sychic too . people are shocked so she becomes the client. meddy befreinds her and the relationship between fi and mickeal is pushed to the edge things micheal doesnt want too hear. bad guys think baby is valuble. the rest fill in the blanks. your know how sychics are a lot of free questiuons
she drives a truck pulling a classic car i prefer a 67 gto hard top witch sam might get out of the deal she brings fi a fovourite gun of hers she gives meddy and fi a taro reading
then questions are asked to micheal thats a start love paul

as a writer what would you change and as a fan what would you want to see more of
barneysbullet
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 9 2009, 12:10 AM) *
please down load some photos of fi and the child and the army men her true mother shows as she teaches as a tiger mom would teach her cubs . just the look in her eye just makes me think please let me see again love paul

did you catch fis eyes
barneysbullet
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 8 2009, 11:24 PM) *
new plot meddy meets a con man lurered in by fake lottery tickets con man clam she has won but it s only a way to get meddys money mom become the client filler fi takes up fencing at the loft instructor in hansom maybe a someone special or maybe a jealousy tactic the fencing is not without a catch for at the same the as fencing mr x is giving her young ladie etiquette leasons the lessons she didnt get as a young girl with each toshae fi gets an etiquette quote mr x after the lesson is over he leaves micheal gets close to her she has the mask still on micheal saids i could have fenced with you and then fi takes the mask off and shes been crying not from the work out but from the etiquette lessons micheal says fi are you crying then fi says no i have something in my eye then micheal sees a side of fi hes never seen love paul bassstickler2003@yahoo.com

do we dare have fi cry your choose what does the fan want to see what does the writer want to stretch
Cheffie66
Yes. laugh.gif
Karendipitee

QUOTE (Mishellie26 @ Nov 9 2009, 09:25 PM) *
oookkk...anyone else weirded out??


Yes.

QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 9 2009, 09:22 PM) *
you being a fan what do you think


OK, I'll take this one. You're new here. I am not sure what you want, but coming in new and just randomly starting new threads no one understands and no one responds to is not the way to endear yourself to any forum.

Check the top of the page. There's a New Members thread you can introduce yourself in. There's also a Questions & Cliff Notes thread with all sorts of info in it--that's the one that says "Check Here First Before Starting New Threads." It has many links to other threads. Look around, read some of them, reply to some of them.

And I checked your profile and you're not a kid, so I'll say this: Maybe standard capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and spelling don't count for some, but they sure help with the reading. If you make an effort, people might understand you better. From what I can tell, you might be trying to write fan fiction. I think you have a ways to go. Good luck.

HaleyLovesBN
there's a great website called Fanfiction.net that i think you should check out. until then, stop with these posts please. i mean, they're just kind of creepy.
Gater_pi
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as a fan what would you want to see more of


well for starters, I'd like to see the Mods institute mandatory drug testing for all new members ;0)
J0lly
QUOTE (Gater_pi @ Nov 10 2009, 05:09 PM) *
well for starters, I'd like to see the Mods institute mandatory drug testing for all new members ;0)


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JennaV
barneysbullet, thank you for getting back to me with your pm. biggrin.gif Welcome to the Burn Notice Forum and we hope you will enjoy sharing your ideas here. As members of this forum, we all share a great enthusiasm for the show. As noted in our pm's, the moderators have merged all of your writing idea threads together into this one thread, where you can express your ideas for Burn Notice.

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barneysbullet
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 7 2009, 09:11 PM) *
new topic fis and sam are in a firefight potecting micheal fi is shooting and saids to sam i told my gun guy i like my fire arms to shoot a little to the left this one is shooting right on sam says maybe its your shooting fi hits sam and says no frickin way hand me another clip

will bn let fi cuss fans against writers
barneysbullet
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 7 2009, 09:33 PM) *
new episode potect the quarterback client washington speech writer female sam likes her and she likes sam bad guys are after her and if micheal is to do the job top guys in washington might notice and he might get back in

i realize this is to short
as an episode is could mean micheal getting in behind the backs of all thhe bn people. He can protect the speech writer and sam gets the girl maybe for a little while . Fi is in disbelief.
barneysbullet
QUOTE (barneysbullet @ Nov 4 2009, 03:52 AM) *
new plot claire on burnnotice is alive and pregnant and shows up at micheals . claire is a sychic with all the cerdentuals someone wants her baby cause its sychic too . people are shocked so she becomes the client. meddy befreinds her and the relationship between fi and mickeal is pushed to the edge things micheal doesnt want too hear. bad guys think baby is valuble. the rest fill in the blanks. your know how sychics are a lot of free questiuons
she drives a truck pulling a classic car i prefer a 67 gto hard top witch sam might get out of the deal she brings fi a fovourite gun of hers she gives meddy and fi a taro reading
then questions are asked to micheal thats a start love paul

it takes so they say for a hour episode 40 minutes of script 88 pages of script and one story board for ever minute of shooting . So i cant feed a whole episode to you at one time if i was a real writer so i do starters and fillers but i would love to. barneysbullet
barneysbullet
hi out there barneysbullet here, BN is what i love so much . I was told with my suggestion writing a script take the power of the pens by looking at it this way black pen is Chuck Norris and blue pen is Clint Eastwood then I asked should I be the red pen but the question and answer people said I should be white out . I guess scripts dont deserve red or what ever I will be shortened. Your comments Please whatt do you think .
barneysbullet
Micheal needs to be pumped up and primed because he knows someone is coming for him . Sam says are you sure youre ready for this. Mom over hears . She looks worried and fi says he seems ready . Sam pops another beer and throws the cap in a bucket. The bucket is over flowing with caps . Mom says you know what your father would do . Sam Fi and Micheal are all in dismay. HESITATION , Well what would he do . Meddy walks away out to the garage and come back with a cork ball bat a bucket of caps and a glove. Meddy says your dad had great reflexes to hit the little buggers people said it was the best hand to eye corroination they ever saw. Micheal in all your travels you get that from your father. Sam says i can supply the beer caps and Fi says Sam i can catch anything you throw . Micheal says yu guys got to be kidding. Meddy says do i have to teach you how to play. love paul
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