QUOTE (jolec @ Sep 21 2009, 06:32 AM)

Okay, I like the idea, can I start?
If you don't like the beginning, feel free to correct or start a new one, I won't mind.
This Tuesday was such a mess. The rape the whole was working on was like a puzzle of 1000 pieces for which they could join 2 of them. One thing was sure, there were three different victims, same MO, but none of the vics agree on the description of the perp. According to the first one, he was tall and athletic. The second said he was strong but not that tall, the third one said he was smelling ash pan.
The four detectives were discussing the case and Cragen was listening to each idea, trying to pick some new ideas to complete the puzzle. Olivia's desk phone rang. She finished her words and picked up the phone.
Olivia: Benson! .... Who? ...Ok, no....I have no idea but let her in.
She hung up
Cragen: Who's this?
Olivia: The receptionist. She said some girl wants to see me, apparently not related to any sexual offense. I'll see.
No, no, no, this isnt bad. I don't think it's a bad idea to start in the precinct, we can work off of it starting there...but there is no receptionist on SVU. The girl would either come into the preceinct or call on her own. But what I was thinking of was child abandonment by Simon (and we have to figure out a way for Simon to have a 13 year old/14 year old child that Olivia never knew about....hmm....I think I have an idea about that if you want to hear it) and have him call Olivia from like the airport or something and say that he is going somewhere and that he is leaving the kid behind and Olivia needs to come get her and he will call her when he can figure some things out but that he really needs Olivia to be there for him at that point. That was originally where I had the story starting in my head....does that sound like a plan?