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Spunkykitkat
The show has great potential, but the script/writing is horrible, and the character development is very weak and overstated. The acting is overdone as well. Get rid of Jill's ex. Divya is the best. Expand the characters and have them say something that isn't stupid. Scenery is gorgeous and this location is refreshingly different. My spouse and I want this to be as good as the initial show - Get better writers!
biff
QUOTE (Spunkykitkat @ Sep 8 2009, 11:43 AM) *
The show has great potential, but the script/writing is horrible, and the character development is very weak and overstated. The acting is overdone as well. Get rid of Jill's ex. Divya is the best. Expand the characters and have them say something that isn't stupid. Scenery is gorgeous and this location is refreshingly different. My spouse and I want this to be as good as the initial show - Get better writers!


smile.gif Hey! Do you prefer Spunky or Kit-Kat? Well, I'll just call you Kit-Kat for now. wink.gif I agree that Jill's Ex needs to go. I would love to see him killed in some type of gruesome, yet funny way. I am also hoping that the next season will bring stronger story lines and character development!
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