The rain was pouring down, washing away the evidence it seemed that even the universe was against them on this case. 'Oh no' someone groaned and came to an abrupt halt. 'The trail has gone cold, we can't go on" Captain Cragen announced wiping the water off his face.
"But Captain she's out there!" Elliot spoke up shielding his face from the heavy down pour.
"I know we've got two more days, but the trail has washed away, we can't go on" Captain said turning up the hill
"Captain that is bull and you-"
"Elliot let it go, we can't go on we are up to our knees in water, we go back and try to figure out his next move." Olivia said trying to calm her partner.
"Um guys I think I found something." Fin said looking at a clump of hair hanging from a branch. He took out the evidence bag and placed the hairs in it.
"And I think something found us, go, go, go!" Munch commanded making a hasty retreat from where he just stopped the wires and home made bomb.
"Oh sh*t!" they all screamed and moved up the hill.
"This is captain Cragen I need the bomb squad and EMS on stand by-"
KABOOM!


Captain Cragen opened heavy eyes to see nothing but white walls and flowers. The room smelt clean and he snuggled against the white sheet and fixing his head on the pillow. "Glad to see you are awake" A voice said from behind him and Cragen turned to see a woman in white coat and flowing black hair, she looked pale and reminded him of an angel. "Mr. Cragen can you hear me?" she asked when Cragen only stared at her.
"Yes" he replied and watched as the corners of her mouth turned into a sweet smile.
"Do you remember what happened?" she asked placing a cold stetiscope on his chest, "please inhale for me" she listened to the strong beat of his heart then she checked his lungs and smiled, for someone they thought wouldn't make it he seemed to be coming along just fine. "So do you remember?"
"Yes where is my team?"

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Cragen watched as she stiffened and the smile that was hovering on her lips disappeared. He felt something begin to knot in his stomach as memories of the accident flooded his mind. 'Oh God no please let them be okay' he prayed, closing his eyes against what he knew was to come.
"I'm sorry Mr. Cragen, but three member of your team are still missing" she saidplacing the thermometer beneath his arm.
"Which- which three?" he nervously asked his voice filled with the raw emotion fear.
She couldn't answer how could she tell him that the only other person they managed to rescue was in a coma with little hope of recovery? How could she tell him in his current state that the other three where best presumed dead after three day? "Why won't you answer me?" he croaked the emotions overwhelming now and tears began stinging his eyes.
"I'm sorry but I'm not at liberty to diluge such information" she replied shinging a bright light into his eyes.
She saw the tears in his eyes, she knew he was being tough trying his best not to let them fall. Now all she wanted to do was reach out to him and tell him that everything would be alright. But she knew better than that! "Is there anything I can get you Mr. Cragen, any one I can call?" she asked as she adjusted the blinds in his room.
"What's the name of the other per-"
"Captain" a soft voice called, and Cragen looked up to see Melinda standing in the doorway, she brought flower and from the way she look she seemed to have been through hell.
"Melinda," he said his voice still heavy.
"Excuse me" the doctor said and walked out the room.

Melinda looked around the room and saw nothing but the flowers she had brought. Her eyes filled with tears as she rested her eyes on Cragen, his face white and he didn't look so big and powerful he looked vulnerable and surprisingly small. And those eyes glistened with unshed tears. "How are you?"
Cragen closed his eyes and forced a smile but the effort was too great "I don't know, how is everyone?" he asked turning the attention away from himself hoping he would find peace in hearing what was going on.
"Munch is still out of and Liv, El and Fin are presumed-" she couldn't say it she was overcome by the tears and she couldn't help but cry, nor could she help the sobs that rock her entire being.
"Dead! Is that it" Cragen shouted and his shout was accompanied by a loud sound a sound she knew all too well! In seconds the room was filled with people those ushering her out and all she could hear was "He's going into cardiac arrest"

Oh no please tell me Liv and El and Fin are not dead. If they are the world is going to end. NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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"Wake up, wake up sleepy head" a voice called bringing Elliot back from deep sleep. His eyes and he saw nothing but darkness. "He's finally awake!" A gruffy voice said poking him.
"Hm?" Elliot moaned in pain his entire being rocking in pain. "Mm Where am I, what happened?" he groaned turning to see a masked man standing behind him.
"Lets keep this at a need to know basis." he said sharpening his knife. Elliot's eyes adjusted to darkness to realise he was in chains as he moved his hands and made a clinking sound. "Aw you are in a house and what happened I thought that was pretty obvious. isn't it?" he walked towards a tray where Elliot could see syringes and other knives. Elliot opened his mouth to ask another question and was silenced. " Before you ask about them, two of them were rescued and you three were too under too much rumble so I guess they gave up on you.
Elliot looked around and for the first time he noticed his co-workers, Benson and Fin. They were chained to the wall and were still pretty out of it. He closed his eyes and opened them again in an effort to will them away. But when he opened his eyes they were stilll there. What was this place? Who was this masked stranger? And how the hell were they going to get out? "Come on stop I can see the wheels spinning in your head and before you think of screaming for help let me tell you no one can hear you. And no antics because if you do you will die, I won't hesitate to kill" Elliot swallowed this was like a nightmare one in which he couldn't wake up out of.
"Mm" They heard a moaned and looked to see Olivia opening her eyes.
"Aw glad you could finally join us pretty lady" the masked stranger walked towards Olivia and caressed her face. She stiffened and opened her eyes to take in her surrounding her eyes were closing again and she fought to keep open.
"Where am I?" she asked looking at Elliot and Fin. The masked man laughed then groaned then moved the hair that was hanging loose in her face. Elliot struggled in his chains as he watched her flinch.
"Such a dumb question for such I beautiul woman." he drawled leaving her to walk back over to were Elliot stood. He walked around the small room making them dizzy then the phone rang and pulled it from his pocket to answer it."Yes, okay Sir, I'll be there shortly. Okay Okay I'm on my way" he yelled and slammed the phone down. "My little darlings I have to go, please don't do anything that would make me mad. Kiss, Kiss pretty lady" he said and disappeared through a door.
"Liv!" "El!" they called in unison to each other and Elliot felt something move deep within him as she noticed the scars where the chains were cutting into her wrists.
"Are you okay?" Elliot asked her closing his eyes once more against the nightmare.
"As alright as can be" she made an effort to laugh but her ribs hurt and she looked down to notice she was wrapped in gauze. "What the hell happened to us?"
"We were blown up!" Fin answered holding up his head. "It's nice to see all of you awake. We are at an underground old factory, oh and instead of us catching our perp our perp caught us."
"Wait how do you know all of this?" Elliot asked wrapping his mind around the information he just recieved.
"Because I woke up yesterday, and met with our masked captour"

ahhh now i wish they were dead. I know that sounds jacked up but im kinda scared to find out what happens next. NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!