I'm using my idea entitiling "NYPD" and doing it as a fanfic. Hope you guys like it! I feel it has everything CI needs suspense, surprise, and twists. I'm doing in my script format instead of prose. All characters from the L&O universe aren't made by me but Dick Wolf, but original characters as the victims and suspects are made by me.

Here is a short synopsis: Goren and Eames are forced to treat two officers as suspects when another officer dies in a ambush.

"In the New York City's war against crime, criminal offenders are pursed by the detectives from the Major Case Squad. These are their stories."

[Teaser]

*Int. Cop Locker's Room

(We see a young man in the officer uniform, and we see his name tag is B. Landry; we see him looking at a picture of himself and his girlfriend, Alexis)

Voice: Brody?!

Brody: (Turning around to see his partner, Stephen Scott) Hey man.

Stephen: How's Alexis? The last time I saw her she was a little big.

Brody: We just had a newborn son, CJ. Alexis is doing great.

Stephen: Congrats man, I hope he'll be just like his dad a hero.

Brody: (Smiling) That Bodega robbery was so one year ago.

Stephen: You stopped three robbers with only one gun.

Brody: Along with you.

Stephen: (Laughing and smiling)

Brody: I got to go and see my family.

Stephen: Go ahead.

(Before Brody has a chance, their captain soon enters telling them about an emergency assignment)

Capt. Anders: Hey guys, can you do one last thing before you two head out.

Stephen: And what's that captain?

Capt. Anders: You know that convicted serial killer Dante Bolívar.

Brody: I just heard he's found guilty on all counts.

Stephen: I heard too, why him?

Brody: Unless we don't have to babysit him.

Capt. Anders: Actually I chose you two to bring him to Rikers.

Stephen: You're serious?!

Capt. Anders: Just pick him up from the courts and bring him to jail.

Brody: I don't know.

Stephen: If we do it, we need another hand.

Capt. Anders: Who you have in mind?

Stephen: Johnson.

Brody: Johnson?! Why him?

Capt. Anders: He's strong, and I do feel three is enough. Inform him and remember don't forget your gear; and good luck. (Heading out)

(As the captain head out, Brody is so upset and then we see Stephen feeling he made a good choice)

***

*Int. Warehouse Hall

(Cuts inside a warehouse like room as we see three notorious gunmen looking at the television as we see a news bulletin talking about Dante Bolivar's conviction)

(We then see a front man, who looks like actor Peter Wingfield talking and talks very fluent French/Welsh hybrid, and then we see him speaking to someone mysterious on the phone)

Man: The pieces are all set. (Looking at the TV and seeing Bolivar) I understand. I'll make sure we do it; Leo out. (He hangs up)

(The man heads towards the other men looking at the TV)

Man#2: What is it Leo?

Leo: The trap is set and it's time to get things started.

(The others understand and proceed to head out as we soon see a table covered with military-type weapons, and every men retrieved one weapon)

Leo: (Telling everyone) Remember! Time is on our side.

(Leo smirking sinisterly as we shift back to them retrieving a military-weapon from the table)

***

*Ext. Street

(Cuts hours later as we see a Police swat truck heading towards Rikers)

*Int. SWAT truck

(Inside we see Dante cuffed in the back and being watched over by Johnson; then in the front, Stephen is driving and Brody is currently talking to his girl Alexis on his cell)

Brody: Sorry I can't go home and I know I told you by this time, but we had some leftover trash to carry away and then afterwards I'll head home to you and CJ.

Alexis (phone): We miss you, sweetie!

Brody: I miss both of you too, love you, bye. (He hangs up)

Stephen: Don't worry man, right after dropping off this scum in prison, you going to see your family again. I promise you that.

Johnson: (Understanding)

Dante: (Couldn't wait to jump in as he talks in a French voice) I'll give anyone 3 million dollars to set me free.

Stephen: Please, like we need your money.

Dante: It'll worth your while.

(Stephen looks Brody and then Brody sees Johnson and doesn't trust him)

*Ext. Street

(The truck continues heading forward)

***

*Ext. Street - Corner

(Cuts to a corner as we see a man working with Leo in a payphone booth faking as if he's talking on the phone really looking at the time on his wrist watch waiting for the armor SWAT truck to arrive at Riker's Delivery Side which is a feet away from the corner)

(Soon the truck arrives on schedule as Leo's men already is prepared, and the man in the payphone sees the three cops along with Dante is stepping out of the car)

(Shifts back to the cops bringing a restrained Dante along with him to the entrance door)

Dante: I promise all of you will pay for what you did to me.

Stephen: (Grabbing Dante's right arm) Please, you killed almost 15 people and we treat you like dirt. Maybe, but someone who is a cold-hearted killer deserves it and a lot more.

Brody: (Grabbing Dante's left arm) You're staying Rikers for a very long time.

Dante: I don't think that's going to happen.

Johnson: (Watching from the front) Why not?

(Shifts back to the man in the phone booth looking at something on the roof of a building on the opposite side of Rikers; and nod his head twice)

(As the officers are getting closer, out of the blue a shot can be heard, and a bullet so fast hits Bolivar's back head and he goes down immediately as the officers are stunned and realize it's an ambush)

(Shocked and don't know what to do, Officer Johnson tries to head back to the SWAT truck fast but is gunned down through his arm; we see a masked man holding a military grade sniper gun on the roof ironically the man from the phone booth was looking at; he aims at one of the cops)

(Before Stephen has a chance to head back to the truck, he's hit in his leg and falls down hard on the ground screaming)

(Brody hears his partner's scream and seeing him in pain; Brody himself is hiding as Stephen drags himself to a safe place. He soon sees his partner, Brody)

Brody: I'm coming man!

Stephen: Brody no!

Brody: I'm your partner and best friend! There is no other choice!

Stephen: That is an order Officer Landry!

Brody: (Without thinking, he heads out of his hiding place and runs to help his fallen partner, but one more bullet from the sniper hits Brody in his head and Brody instantly fall down on the ground dead on the spot)

Stephen: (Couldn't believe it) No!! (Seeing tears from his eyes coming down, and sitting up in pain with his knee he witness his partner/best friend murdered in front of his eyes. He soon shear tears) Brody, no! (Disgusted and disappointed at what just happened and hits his fist on the steel wall behind him)

(Fades out)

***

Credits roll

I like the story idea. I'm in for the ride. But from my own experience at trying a scripted story, it seems difficult for people to stay involved in 'scripted' stories (or maybe my script was just bad.)
I look forward to the other scenes....