maggiexfrenchxfry
Apr 3 2009, 03:31 PM
Chapter One
“I bet you don’t even love me! You love her more than me and I’m just sitting here all alone then you blame me for doing this? Go to hell!” Kathy yelled, the whole block could hear her and more importantly so could their 6 year old son, Eli.
Elliot was in awe, he couldn’t believe what Kathy had just said. Why would she even think that he had been unfaithful then blame him for ‘making’ her cheat.
“Kathy, I love you. Do you know that? I love you.” Elliot calmly lied. What could he say he was in love with his partner but he couldn’t be because he was married to her? Elliot approached Kathy and tried to hug her but she took a swing and knocked him off his feet. “Ow, Kathy! What happened to us? We were in love, we have 5 beautiful children! Why are you acting like this?”
Kathy made another fist then let it go and bolted up the stairs. In two minutes she was speeding down the street with Eli in the car. Elliot shut the door and closed his eyes, this couldn’t be happening. Elliot could have sworn that in the next thirty minutes his life was just a dream, but it wasn’t.
bensonsbabe
Apr 3 2009, 06:09 PM
u must continue!!!! grrr at kathy!! how dare she slap him!!! will this be an e/o? any way u have to keep going i love it!
maggiexfrenchxfry
Apr 3 2009, 07:48 PM
For You BB
Elliot didn’t really know how to cope with the accident. He would come home every now and again to an empty house with nothing to do and no one to talk to. One night, about a year after the accident, he decided he was going to be happy for once in his life. Elliot grabbed his wallet, keys, and went off to the flouriest down the street.
“Hey Donna.” Elliot greeted the sales clerk at Donna’s Delights.
“Elliot what a nice surprise! Well it isn’t a surprise but I haven’t seen you in a couple of days.” Donna replied, Elliot was her best customer for the past year and came in like clock work everyday at 4 o clock.
“Yeah well work, and things like that. Can I have 2 bouquets of red roses this time?”
Donna was shocked, maybe Elliot had found a girl or wasn’t mad at Kathy anymore and wanted to make amends.
“Okay. Here ya go Elliot, I hope to see you soon.”
Elliot flashed a smile that said thank you and left. He got into his car and drove until he got to Cedar Grove Cemetery and walked over to a pile of red roses.
“Hey little buddy, how are you?” Elliot’s voice cracked he was about to cry “Um, your birthday’s coming up, you know today’s the twentieth of November” A tear rolled down Elliot’s face “You know, in a week I was going to take you over to Billy Mae’s and we were going to fix up that old stock car in the garage but, you know this whole thing is my fault.” Elliot started to remember that day:
“Kathy was out of the door with Eli and he hates me now!” Elliot thought as he heard the car speed down the street. He closed the door and sat down it as he closed his eyes “I don’t care that I love Liv, she is happy with Rick or whatever his name is and I have Kathy, well I thought I did. What set her off?” Right then he heard a big bang and looked out his door to see what it was. No, I couldn’t be. Could it?
That's All for now I'm going to watch The Notebook
bensonsbabe
Apr 4 2009, 12:48 PM
QUOTE (maggiexfrenchxfry @ Apr 3 2009, 07:48 PM)

For You BB
Elliot didn’t really know how to cope with the accident. He would come home every now and again to an empty house with nothing to do and no one to talk to. One night, about a year after the accident, he decided he was going to be happy for once in his life. Elliot grabbed his wallet, keys, and went off to the flouriest down the street.
“Hey Donna.” Elliot greeted the sales clerk at Donna’s Delights.
“Elliot what a nice surprise! Well it isn’t a surprise but I haven’t seen you in a couple of days.” Donna replied, Elliot was her best customer for the past year and came in like clock work everyday at 4 o clock.
“Yeah well work, and things like that. Can I have 2 bouquets of red roses this time?”
Donna was shocked, maybe Elliot had found a girl or wasn’t mad at Kathy anymore and wanted to make amends.
“Okay. Here ya go Elliot, I hope to see you soon.”
Elliot flashed a smile that said thank you and left. He got into his car and drove until he got to Cedar Grove Cemetery and walked over to a pile of red roses.
“Hey little buddy, how are you?” Elliot’s voice cracked he was about to cry “Um, your birthday’s coming up, you know today’s the twentieth of November” A tear rolled down Elliot’s face “You know, in a week I was going to take you over to Billy Mae’s and we were going to fix up that old stock car in the garage but, you know this whole thing is my fault.” Elliot started to remember that day:
“Kathy was out of the door with Eli and he hates me now!” Elliot thought as he heard the car speed down the street. He closed the door and sat down it as he closed his eyes “I don’t care that I love Liv, she is happy with Rick or whatever his name is and I have Kathy, well I thought I did. What set her off?” Right then he heard a big bang and looked out his door to see what it was. No, I couldn’t be. Could it?
That's All for now I'm going to watch The Notebook
that was AMAZING!!!!!! but who died? was it dickie? hes the only one i cud think of that wud hav a garage. it was great! u must post more! dnt leave me hangin' here!
maggiexfrenchxfry
Apr 4 2009, 02:29 PM
QUOTE (bensonsbabe @ Apr 4 2009, 01:48 PM)

that was AMAZING!!!!!! but who died? was it dickie? hes the only one i cud think of that wud hav a garage. it was great! u must post more! dnt leave me hangin' here!
Nope Eli died Eli is 6 here and in the show I'm assuming he's about 1 and Dickie and Lizzie are about 15 so now they are 21. Everyone's out of the house except Eli. I'm writing right now! I'll update soon.
maggiexfrenchxfry
Apr 4 2009, 02:58 PM
It was. Elliot ran off of his steps down the street to the whole mess of flames at the end of Plane Gove Avenue. Some neighbors witnessed the accident and others looked out side when they heard the bang. Luckily Elliot was ready for work; he violently tore the walkie talkie off of his belt and barked in the situation along with his police ID. Elliot walked over to his neighbor, Josef, who was one of his best friends.
“Elliot, oh my god, Elliot!” Josef cried in his thick Russian accent “I saw it all, but what happened before she, you know.”
Elliot was speechless, it was his entire fault. “We had a f-f-fight and then she grabbed Eli.” Elliot realized something “Eli!” Elliot tried to run towards the accident but the burly Russian grabbed him before he could get any closer.
“Elliot, I know you vould try to get into that burning car to save him but you have to vait for the emergency services.”
Elliot knew Josef was right but he had to save his son.
Next part is in Olivia’s point of view! :x)
“Bored, bored, bored! God, how can living this type of life be so boring?” Olivia thought as she flipped though her Prada address book, which was one of the many things Ricky had given her over the past year including moving in to his enormous penthouse apartment on the upper east side of Manhattan. Her Friday nights consisted of either hosting or going to a sophisticated party, which made her miss her days as a cop. When she was a cop she didn’t have to worry about one of the champaign glasses being scratched or one of her shoes breaking a heel. The Detective Olivia Benson was the comfortable shoe wearing, beer or red wine drinking, ordinary woman, not a total priss. Olivia flipped open the address book to the ‘S’ section and read some of the names aloud “Allie S, Britney S, Cari S, Danielle S,” Olivia stopped she hadn’t seen or heard from the next name in, in God knows when, “Elliot Stabler.” Olivia whispered the name like an old ghost had come back to haunt her.
“Miss Olivia!” exclaimed a house keeper. Olivia was startled by her.
“Yes?” She answered snapping back to her new reality, her life as a socialite.
“You have flowers, they were at the door.” The house keeper handed her the bouquet of red roses
Haha I guess I've been watching too much Gossip Girl!
bensonsbabe
Apr 5 2009, 12:40 PM
oh my god!! they re form elliot arent they? hahaha pot soon! i feel bad for ellito though. it sux that he lost his son. and screw rickey! wheres elliot? jk! love it!! must post soon. its amazing!!! cant wait for the next part!! im like jiumping oput of my skin to see wat olivia says wen she finds out the flowers were from elliot.
jolec
Apr 5 2009, 12:55 PM
I like this story !!!
Next part, please!!
Aliecia
Apr 5 2009, 01:49 PM
This is really good. post more soon please.
-Ali
maggiexfrenchxfry
Apr 16 2009, 06:36 PM
Chapter Four
Haha one thing before this next chapter Kathy is also dead, just saying. Lol I hate her so much I forgot to say that! Jk jk. :x) And this chapter is still in Olivia‘s point of view!
Okay. Well I am walking down this familiar street, towards this familiar bar and something inside me just is urging me to jump in front of the next taxi that drives by, that’s how nervous I am.
I walk into the bar and there’s Elliot. I force a smile and walk towards him. “Hi Elliot.” I say as I sit down.
“Liv. Wow, you look amazing! I like,” He paused “Your hair, it looks better long.”
I smiled and fiddled with the silverware on the table. “Elliot,” I exhaled and opened my purse, “Elliot. I think this is yours.” I handed him the bouquet of roses out of my large purse and fumbled with an inner pocket. “Also I need to tell you something.”
Elliot looked down on the table at his roses, he took a risk and it came back and hit him in the face like a big, hard smack in the face. “What?” He mumbled
“This.” I held up my left hand to let him admire the diamond ring on my finger
“Liv,” He swallowed hard and cocked his head “Um.”
“Elliot,” I interrupted “Don’t try to bring up painful memories, I am engaged. You? Well, you lost out on that chance a couple of years ago. I’m sorry Elliot but don’t try to contact me again.” I got up from the table and left. The faster I walked the harder the tears came. After being stubborn for a couple of blocks I hailed a cab and went home.
sorry i haven't updated in 12 days!!! its short but its an update! :]]
jolec
Apr 17 2009, 12:02 AM
Ouch !! My heart's bleeding....
Update soon please !!!
bensonsbabe
Apr 24 2009, 06:18 PM
wat?!!!!!!!!!!!! how. . why. . . but. . . huh. . . how cud she do that? why wud she do that? but he loves her!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz tell me she didnt hurt him. hreat story. post again.
maggiexfrenchxfry
Apr 24 2009, 07:23 PM
QUOTE (bensonsbabe @ Apr 24 2009, 06:18 PM)

wat?!!!!!!!!!!!! how. . why. . . but. . . huh. . . how cud she do that? why wud she do that? but he loves her!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz tell me she didnt hurt him. hreat story. post again.
ik! i need to update!!! i pinky swear that right now i have the family laptop and my awesome blink 182 playlist and pages is up!! PINKY SWEAR! <3 xD
bensonsbabe
Apr 27 2009, 07:10 PM
lmao! ok! but hurry! <3
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