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moark
Okay this week I fell apart. I decided I wanted to write something. So I wrote this.
I sat down next to my Dad. He smiled, and put his hand on mine. It had been a rough week, and I wasn’t feeling good. It was soothing to know that he was there.

"You okay?"

"Yea . . . I’m fine."

He chuckled. "Tell the truth."

For some reason he had a habit of chuckling when I lied.

"I’m not. It’s. . . It’s getting to me. Everything."

He tilted his head to the side a bit, looking into my eyes. "It’s okay Serena, you’re with me."

Given him a big hug, I said: "I love you Daddy."

I think it's sweet.


~Moark.


Jryan
cute, can I be mommy?! laugh.gif
moark
QUOTE (Jryan @ Mar 22 2009, 01:57 PM) *
cute, can I be mommy?! laugh.gif



awww thanks J!

Sure you can! Since you said it first, you can have first dibs. wink.gif

~Happy Smily Moark.

moark
Just posted on FF.net.

Please review it.
moark
Haha my aunt just finished reading this and is moving onto RF.

And I'm like 'no move onto the other version and go to the third chapter' (Yea the 3rd is more true to the story. just a little flunk in what the 3rd chapter of that one??(on the same page))

~moark~
moark
Anybody willing to beta this? ~moark~
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