so yes this is only my like 2nd attemp at this fanfiction business.
so be harsh lol.(being sarcastic). i dont own any of things crazy characters that need to just grab each other and got at it, but Dick Wolf does.
Here we go.....
The room is so dark, and its a bit chilly. It is now 9:08 and i've been sitting on this couch for 4 hours now. I get up to check the heat. I turn in up just a tad bit and head back over to the couch. Before i hit it though, i turn the stero on.
"They tell you where you need to go, they tell you when you'll need to leave. They tell you what you need to know ,tell you who you need to be..."
I knew that was true. Casey had just told me the other day that maybe it was time to stop waiting for him to notice me again, to notice that i love him to notice everything i've been waiting for him to notice. He hadnt even seemed to even know i existed after the undercover accident. It was no accident. I wanted to take my shirt off, hop in his sweat pants that he left on the bathroom floor and throw myself at him. I WANTED TO. He was trying so hard not to look at me, or atleast i thought he was?
Just for a second when they were pulling me away he gripped my hand and wouldnt let go. I surely thought for a second that this would change everything and that he wanted me as well. Well yeah it changed everything, for the worst.
The stero wasnt loud at all. Just seem loud enough for I could hear it. My favorite song turned into one i absolutely hate.
All the precint talk saying i got him shot, and i believed it. No matter how many times i apologized he just told me it wasnt my fault. It was tho. If i hadnt been such a inlove freak and went to see if he was alright, he wouldnt have been shot. Luckly i didnt get him killed.
"And you're on fire When He's near you You're on fire When He speaks
You're on fire Burning at these mysteries"
Ahh i bet he's at home right now, tucked away with his wife that clearly doesnt want him. She was willing and ready to leave him. I made the stupidest mistake that night. I talked her into to staying. Why do i that.
Ipull the blanket from behind the couch and tugg it around me so tight. I need warmth. Need somethng to embrace me and take me away from this place i'd never thougth id be.
My phone brings me out of my trance when it lights up and plays the ting ting noise. The noise Elliot had set on my phone. I pick it up not wanting to be called in or any of that junk. I flip it open to a name that seems so strangerest. When I'm on fire ,when You're near me ,i'm on fire ,when You speak and I'm on fire burning at these mysteries these mysteries...
"Elliot." i whisper.
I click the view button. Will you open your door.
I look at the door hesitant. I get up in a stumble and walk towards the door. I grip the knob then slowly open it. What was in front of me was the most terrifying thing ive witnessed tonight. He was all scrouched up with dark pale blue eyes that looked like they'd been crying and havent slept for days. I didnt need to look at his apparel, which wasnt very good as well, to see that he was miserable as well as me.
Elliot, what are you doing here? He looked down the hall like he was expecting someone then down to the florr when he realized no one was coming. He didnt look up or even try to when he whispered...
......." Im on fire when YOURE near"
Full Version: Fires.
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QUOTE (ABHAYA @ Feb 21 2009, 11:43 PM) 
so yes this is only my like 2nd attemp at this fanfiction business.
so be harsh lol.(being sarcastic). i dont own any of things crazy characters that need to just grab each other and got at it, but Dick Wolf does.
Here we go.....
The room is so dark, and its a bit chilly. It is now 9:08 and i've been sitting on this couch for 4 hours now. I get up to check the heat. I turn in up just a tad bit and head back over to the couch. Before i hit it though, i turn the stero on.
"They tell you where you need to go, they tell you when you'll need to leave. They tell you what you need to know ,tell you who you need to be..."
I knew that was true. Casey had just told me the other day that maybe it was time to stop waiting for him to notice me again, to notice that i love him to notice everything i've been waiting for him to notice. He hadnt even seemed to even know i existed after the undercover accident. It was no accident. I wanted to take my shirt off, hop in his sweat pants that he left on the bathroom floor and throw myself at him. I WANTED TO. He was trying so hard not to look at me, or atleast i thought he was?
Just for a second when they were pulling me away he gripped my hand and wouldnt let go. I surely thought for a second that this would change everything and that he wanted me as well. Well yeah it changed everything, for the worst.
The stero wasnt loud at all. Just seem loud enough for I could hear it. My favorite song turned into one i absolutely hate.
All the precint talk saying i got him shot, and i believed it. No matter how many times i apologized he just told me it wasnt my fault. It was tho. If i hadnt been such a inlove freak and went to see if he was alright, he wouldnt have been shot. Luckly i didnt get him killed.
"And you're on fire When He's near you You're on fire When He speaks
You're on fire Burning at these mysteries"
Ahh i bet he's at home right now, tucked away with his wife that clearly doesnt want him. She was willing and ready to leave him. I made the stupidest mistake that night. I talked her into to staying. Why do i that.
Ipull the blanket from behind the couch and tugg it around me so tight. I need warmth. Need somethng to embrace me and take me away from this place i'd never thougth id be.
My phone brings me out of my trance when it lights up and plays the ting ting noise. The noise Elliot had set on my phone. I pick it up not wanting to be called in or any of that junk. I flip it open to a name that seems so strangerest. When I'm on fire ,when You're near me ,i'm on fire ,when You speak and I'm on fire burning at these mysteries these mysteries...
"Elliot." i whisper.
I click the view button. Will you open your door.
I look at the door hesitant. I get up in a stumble and walk towards the door. I grip the knob then slowly open it. What was in front of me was the most terrifying thing ive witnessed tonight. He was all scrouched up with dark pale blue eyes that looked like they'd been crying and havent slept for days. I didnt need to look at his apparel, which wasnt very good as well, to see that he was miserable as well as me.
Elliot, what are you doing here? He looked down the hall like he was expecting someone then down to the florr when he realized no one was coming. He didnt look up or even try to when he whispered...
......." Im on fire when YOURE near"
so be harsh lol.(being sarcastic). i dont own any of things crazy characters that need to just grab each other and got at it, but Dick Wolf does.
Here we go.....
The room is so dark, and its a bit chilly. It is now 9:08 and i've been sitting on this couch for 4 hours now. I get up to check the heat. I turn in up just a tad bit and head back over to the couch. Before i hit it though, i turn the stero on.
"They tell you where you need to go, they tell you when you'll need to leave. They tell you what you need to know ,tell you who you need to be..."
I knew that was true. Casey had just told me the other day that maybe it was time to stop waiting for him to notice me again, to notice that i love him to notice everything i've been waiting for him to notice. He hadnt even seemed to even know i existed after the undercover accident. It was no accident. I wanted to take my shirt off, hop in his sweat pants that he left on the bathroom floor and throw myself at him. I WANTED TO. He was trying so hard not to look at me, or atleast i thought he was?
Just for a second when they were pulling me away he gripped my hand and wouldnt let go. I surely thought for a second that this would change everything and that he wanted me as well. Well yeah it changed everything, for the worst.
The stero wasnt loud at all. Just seem loud enough for I could hear it. My favorite song turned into one i absolutely hate.
All the precint talk saying i got him shot, and i believed it. No matter how many times i apologized he just told me it wasnt my fault. It was tho. If i hadnt been such a inlove freak and went to see if he was alright, he wouldnt have been shot. Luckly i didnt get him killed.
"And you're on fire When He's near you You're on fire When He speaks
You're on fire Burning at these mysteries"
Ahh i bet he's at home right now, tucked away with his wife that clearly doesnt want him. She was willing and ready to leave him. I made the stupidest mistake that night. I talked her into to staying. Why do i that.
Ipull the blanket from behind the couch and tugg it around me so tight. I need warmth. Need somethng to embrace me and take me away from this place i'd never thougth id be.
My phone brings me out of my trance when it lights up and plays the ting ting noise. The noise Elliot had set on my phone. I pick it up not wanting to be called in or any of that junk. I flip it open to a name that seems so strangerest. When I'm on fire ,when You're near me ,i'm on fire ,when You speak and I'm on fire burning at these mysteries these mysteries...
"Elliot." i whisper.
I click the view button. Will you open your door.
I look at the door hesitant. I get up in a stumble and walk towards the door. I grip the knob then slowly open it. What was in front of me was the most terrifying thing ive witnessed tonight. He was all scrouched up with dark pale blue eyes that looked like they'd been crying and havent slept for days. I didnt need to look at his apparel, which wasnt very good as well, to see that he was miserable as well as me.
Elliot, what are you doing here? He looked down the hall like he was expecting someone then down to the florr when he realized no one was coming. He didnt look up or even try to when he whispered...
......." Im on fire when YOURE near"
wow! grl u have got to update! this is amazing im in luv w/ these fanfics!its killing me that u havent updatd! sorry t push u but ur just so good! i was hooked on the first sentence realy i was i was upset when i got to te end cause it didnt continue u update ur stories and i update mine deal?
bensonsbabe...
DEAL!!!!
DEAL!!!!
QUOTE (ABHAYA @ Feb 24 2009, 10:32 PM)
bensonsbabe...
DEAL!!!!
DEAL!!!!
k im holding u to that lol great story update soon
QUOTE (bensonsbabe @ Feb 24 2009, 11:49 PM)
k im holding u to that lol great story update soon
i am writing right now. just not perfect.
gota get it tomy beta then........it will be posted
QUOTE (ABHAYA @ Mar 1 2009, 07:53 PM)
i am writing right now. just not perfect.
gota get it tomy beta then........it will be posted
gota get it tomy beta then........it will be posted
new at this ht is tomy beta? thnx cant wait to read the next part im jumping out of my skin right now im that anxious
alright i dont own these characters. some guy with the name DICK WOLF.
MT BETA hasnt read or confirmed this. Had to post because i made a deal with bensonsbabe
sorry for any mistakes. beena bad day and i wanted to make someone happy by posting.
hope you like.....
*******************
“ We're you snooping around my door Mr. Stabler? I smirk.
He looks up at me and I discover something in his eyes that clicks. He dusts himself off as he stands.
“ Never in my life would I snoop” he says says returning the smile.
“ Would you like to come in” I ask. I didn't wait for him to reply as I walk towards my couch. The door shuts as he sits besides me.
“ Olivia I...”” You wanna go out? I rush in interrupting him.
“Out Where?”
“Clubbin!?....” His face expressed everything that was going through his head. He clearly thought I was crazy.
“Come on El, you cant be that old, you can go out with me.”
“When do You party Liv?!” He finally breaks.
“ I met these girls, Leah and Brooke, the other day at the coffee shop. We had a conversation and they invited me to this club with them last weekend. I loved it. So they invited me again tonight.”
“And you're gonna go?”
“We're Gonna Go” I stand up making my way over to my kitchen table.
“What are you doing?” he asks.
“Calling Casey, she's coming with us.”
“ Who said I was even going?” he says.
“I DID”
“Liv I'm not dressed tog o out. I just wanted to talk about....” “ Well go home and change El. It's 9:46 right now so we'll meet there at around 11, okay?” I know I just cut him off again. I really don't wanna discuss whats on his mind.
He gets off the couch and comes towards me.
“ You're serious aren't you” he asks in a low whisper.
“Thats a positive” I hear myself saying.
“ Well okay then” he finishes and walks away. He's hesitant to and open the door and turns around to look at me.
“ So you will text the directions?” he asks.
“Another positive” I say again. I smile at him. He smiles and heads out the door.
He probably thinks I lost my mind. I am trotting around here acting like going to clubs like they are my thing. I been once and I have to admit I loved it. Great release when I'm stressed. How could I tell him that. He'd just look at me even more crazier. I'd just have to show him. Show him why I love it, love the feeling, love him.
…................
I get into my car and let out a huge puff. I can't believe I went to her to tell her my feelings and she tells me we're going out. To a CLUB. WTF. I fell the corners on my mouth turn up as I put the key in the ignition.
It takes me about 10 minutes to get home. I hurriedly hop in the shower. Clubbing. A club. Is it even called clubbin? I am going to a club, dance club with Olivia Benson and some random girls she met. I never saw this coming” I say to myself. I chuckle a little and turn off the shower head. I step onto the towel on the floor Maureen made me out out. She says its dangerous to not have something on the floor. Why? Have no clue.
I look into the mirror memorized by what I see. A 40 year old man inlove with his partner and heading to a club on Saturday night. My phone startles me out of my daze. Its Liv. I know it is. I knew it.
Liv Cell
El, the place is at 18 Little West St.
Se ya l8ter.
Clicking out of her text I roam for Fin's number.
“What” he says with his broad annoyed voice.
“ What you mean what, I get no Hi, no Hello? I say.
“Hello Stabler, WHAT..”. He's not very good at acting as if he doesn't want me calling him. I can hear his snickering.
“ Wanna go to a club with me, Liv and her friends. Its at 18 little....”
“...Yeah yeah I know where you're talking about. Exclusive. And yeah I'm going. I go every weekend. What time tho?
“Around 11ish.”
“Aite, ill be there.
“Thanks Fin.
“Yeah yeah”..he mumbles off as he hangs up. I brush my teeth and start getting ready. Going to my closet to pick out my new black dress shirt with jeans. Slip on my shoes and a little cologne.
I cant believe I'm doing this. I stand in front of the mirror. I let out a breathe grab my jacket, keys and head out the door.
MT BETA hasnt read or confirmed this. Had to post because i made a deal with bensonsbabe
sorry for any mistakes. beena bad day and i wanted to make someone happy by posting.
hope you like.....
*******************
“ We're you snooping around my door Mr. Stabler? I smirk.
He looks up at me and I discover something in his eyes that clicks. He dusts himself off as he stands.
“ Never in my life would I snoop” he says says returning the smile.
“ Would you like to come in” I ask. I didn't wait for him to reply as I walk towards my couch. The door shuts as he sits besides me.
“ Olivia I...”” You wanna go out? I rush in interrupting him.
“Out Where?”
“Clubbin!?....” His face expressed everything that was going through his head. He clearly thought I was crazy.
“Come on El, you cant be that old, you can go out with me.”
“When do You party Liv?!” He finally breaks.
“ I met these girls, Leah and Brooke, the other day at the coffee shop. We had a conversation and they invited me to this club with them last weekend. I loved it. So they invited me again tonight.”
“And you're gonna go?”
“We're Gonna Go” I stand up making my way over to my kitchen table.
“What are you doing?” he asks.
“Calling Casey, she's coming with us.”
“ Who said I was even going?” he says.
“I DID”
“Liv I'm not dressed tog o out. I just wanted to talk about....” “ Well go home and change El. It's 9:46 right now so we'll meet there at around 11, okay?” I know I just cut him off again. I really don't wanna discuss whats on his mind.
He gets off the couch and comes towards me.
“ You're serious aren't you” he asks in a low whisper.
“Thats a positive” I hear myself saying.
“ Well okay then” he finishes and walks away. He's hesitant to and open the door and turns around to look at me.
“ So you will text the directions?” he asks.
“Another positive” I say again. I smile at him. He smiles and heads out the door.
He probably thinks I lost my mind. I am trotting around here acting like going to clubs like they are my thing. I been once and I have to admit I loved it. Great release when I'm stressed. How could I tell him that. He'd just look at me even more crazier. I'd just have to show him. Show him why I love it, love the feeling, love him.
…................
I get into my car and let out a huge puff. I can't believe I went to her to tell her my feelings and she tells me we're going out. To a CLUB. WTF. I fell the corners on my mouth turn up as I put the key in the ignition.
It takes me about 10 minutes to get home. I hurriedly hop in the shower. Clubbing. A club. Is it even called clubbin? I am going to a club, dance club with Olivia Benson and some random girls she met. I never saw this coming” I say to myself. I chuckle a little and turn off the shower head. I step onto the towel on the floor Maureen made me out out. She says its dangerous to not have something on the floor. Why? Have no clue.
I look into the mirror memorized by what I see. A 40 year old man inlove with his partner and heading to a club on Saturday night. My phone startles me out of my daze. Its Liv. I know it is. I knew it.
Liv Cell
El, the place is at 18 Little West St.
Se ya l8ter.
Clicking out of her text I roam for Fin's number.
“What” he says with his broad annoyed voice.
“ What you mean what, I get no Hi, no Hello? I say.
“Hello Stabler, WHAT..”. He's not very good at acting as if he doesn't want me calling him. I can hear his snickering.
“ Wanna go to a club with me, Liv and her friends. Its at 18 little....”
“...Yeah yeah I know where you're talking about. Exclusive. And yeah I'm going. I go every weekend. What time tho?
“Around 11ish.”
“Aite, ill be there.
“Thanks Fin.
“Yeah yeah”..he mumbles off as he hangs up. I brush my teeth and start getting ready. Going to my closet to pick out my new black dress shirt with jeans. Slip on my shoes and a little cologne.
I cant believe I'm doing this. I stand in front of the mirror. I let out a breathe grab my jacket, keys and head out the door.
QUOTE (ABHAYA @ Mar 3 2009, 06:37 PM)
alright i dont own these characters. some guy with the name DICK WOLF.
MT BETA hasnt read or confirmed this. Had to post because i made a deal with bensonsbabe
sorry for any mistakes. beena bad day and i wanted to make someone happy by posting.
hope you like.....
*******************
“ We're you snooping around my door Mr. Stabler? I smirk.
He looks up at me and I discover something in his eyes that clicks. He dusts himself off as he stands.
“ Never in my life would I snoop” he says says returning the smile.
“ Would you like to come in” I ask. I didn't wait for him to reply as I walk towards my couch. The door shuts as he sits besides me.
“ Olivia I...”” You wanna go out? I rush in interrupting him.
“Out Where?”
“Clubbin!?....” His face expressed everything that was going through his head. He clearly thought I was crazy.
“Come on El, you cant be that old, you can go out with me.”
“When do You party Liv?!” He finally breaks.
“ I met these girls, Leah and Brooke, the other day at the coffee shop. We had a conversation and they invited me to this club with them last weekend. I loved it. So they invited me again tonight.”
“And you're gonna go?”
“We're Gonna Go” I stand up making my way over to my kitchen table.
“What are you doing?” he asks.
“Calling Casey, she's coming with us.”
“ Who said I was even going?” he says.
“I DID”
“Liv I'm not dressed tog o out. I just wanted to talk about....” “ Well go home and change El. It's 9:46 right now so we'll meet there at around 11, okay?” I know I just cut him off again. I really don't wanna discuss whats on his mind.
He gets off the couch and comes towards me.
“ You're serious aren't you” he asks in a low whisper.
“Thats a positive” I hear myself saying.
“ Well okay then” he finishes and walks away. He's hesitant to and open the door and turns around to look at me.
“ So you will text the directions?” he asks.
“Another positive” I say again. I smile at him. He smiles and heads out the door.
He probably thinks I lost my mind. I am trotting around here acting like going to clubs like they are my thing. I been once and I have to admit I loved it. Great release when I'm stressed. How could I tell him that. He'd just look at me even more crazier. I'd just have to show him. Show him why I love it, love the feeling, love him.
…................
I get into my car and let out a huge puff. I can't believe I went to her to tell her my feelings and she tells me we're going out. To a CLUB. WTF. I fell the corners on my mouth turn up as I put the key in the ignition.
It takes me about 10 minutes to get home. I hurriedly hop in the shower. Clubbing. A club. Is it even called clubbin? I am going to a club, dance club with Olivia Benson and some random girls she met. I never saw this coming” I say to myself. I chuckle a little and turn off the shower head. I step onto the towel on the floor Maureen made me out out. She says its dangerous to not have something on the floor. Why? Have no clue.
I look into the mirror memorized by what I see. A 40 year old man inlove with his partner and heading to a club on Saturday night. My phone startles me out of my daze. Its Liv. I know it is. I knew it.
Liv Cell
El, the place is at 18 Little West St.
Se ya l8ter.
Clicking out of her text I roam for Fin's number.
“What” he says with his broad annoyed voice.
“ What you mean what, I get no Hi, no Hello? I say.
“Hello Stabler, WHAT..”. He's not very good at acting as if he doesn't want me calling him. I can hear his snickering.
“ Wanna go to a club with me, Liv and her friends. Its at 18 little....”
“...Yeah yeah I know where you're talking about. Exclusive. And yeah I'm going. I go every weekend. What time tho?
“Around 11ish.”
“Aite, ill be there.
“Thanks Fin.
“Yeah yeah”..he mumbles off as he hangs up. I brush my teeth and start getting ready. Going to my closet to pick out my new black dress shirt with jeans. Slip on my shoes and a little cologne.
I cant believe I'm doing this. I stand in front of the mirror. I let out a breathe grab my jacket, keys and head out the door.
MT BETA hasnt read or confirmed this. Had to post because i made a deal with bensonsbabe
sorry for any mistakes. beena bad day and i wanted to make someone happy by posting.
hope you like.....
*******************
“ We're you snooping around my door Mr. Stabler? I smirk.
He looks up at me and I discover something in his eyes that clicks. He dusts himself off as he stands.
“ Never in my life would I snoop” he says says returning the smile.
“ Would you like to come in” I ask. I didn't wait for him to reply as I walk towards my couch. The door shuts as he sits besides me.
“ Olivia I...”” You wanna go out? I rush in interrupting him.
“Out Where?”
“Clubbin!?....” His face expressed everything that was going through his head. He clearly thought I was crazy.
“Come on El, you cant be that old, you can go out with me.”
“When do You party Liv?!” He finally breaks.
“ I met these girls, Leah and Brooke, the other day at the coffee shop. We had a conversation and they invited me to this club with them last weekend. I loved it. So they invited me again tonight.”
“And you're gonna go?”
“We're Gonna Go” I stand up making my way over to my kitchen table.
“What are you doing?” he asks.
“Calling Casey, she's coming with us.”
“ Who said I was even going?” he says.
“I DID”
“Liv I'm not dressed tog o out. I just wanted to talk about....” “ Well go home and change El. It's 9:46 right now so we'll meet there at around 11, okay?” I know I just cut him off again. I really don't wanna discuss whats on his mind.
He gets off the couch and comes towards me.
“ You're serious aren't you” he asks in a low whisper.
“Thats a positive” I hear myself saying.
“ Well okay then” he finishes and walks away. He's hesitant to and open the door and turns around to look at me.
“ So you will text the directions?” he asks.
“Another positive” I say again. I smile at him. He smiles and heads out the door.
He probably thinks I lost my mind. I am trotting around here acting like going to clubs like they are my thing. I been once and I have to admit I loved it. Great release when I'm stressed. How could I tell him that. He'd just look at me even more crazier. I'd just have to show him. Show him why I love it, love the feeling, love him.
…................
I get into my car and let out a huge puff. I can't believe I went to her to tell her my feelings and she tells me we're going out. To a CLUB. WTF. I fell the corners on my mouth turn up as I put the key in the ignition.
It takes me about 10 minutes to get home. I hurriedly hop in the shower. Clubbing. A club. Is it even called clubbin? I am going to a club, dance club with Olivia Benson and some random girls she met. I never saw this coming” I say to myself. I chuckle a little and turn off the shower head. I step onto the towel on the floor Maureen made me out out. She says its dangerous to not have something on the floor. Why? Have no clue.
I look into the mirror memorized by what I see. A 40 year old man inlove with his partner and heading to a club on Saturday night. My phone startles me out of my daze. Its Liv. I know it is. I knew it.
Liv Cell
El, the place is at 18 Little West St.
Se ya l8ter.
Clicking out of her text I roam for Fin's number.
“What” he says with his broad annoyed voice.
“ What you mean what, I get no Hi, no Hello? I say.
“Hello Stabler, WHAT..”. He's not very good at acting as if he doesn't want me calling him. I can hear his snickering.
“ Wanna go to a club with me, Liv and her friends. Its at 18 little....”
“...Yeah yeah I know where you're talking about. Exclusive. And yeah I'm going. I go every weekend. What time tho?
“Around 11ish.”
“Aite, ill be there.
“Thanks Fin.
“Yeah yeah”..he mumbles off as he hangs up. I brush my teeth and start getting ready. Going to my closet to pick out my new black dress shirt with jeans. Slip on my shoes and a little cologne.
I cant believe I'm doing this. I stand in front of the mirror. I let out a breathe grab my jacket, keys and head out the door.
holy crap that was amazing! thnx for keeping ur side of the deal srry i got my com taken away wnt be able to post fro awhile
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