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[color="#000080"][/color]PRECINCT
" Hey Liv whos your valentine this year?" Munch
said jokingly. Olivia shot him alook of frustration." Noone. Im single this
year. why did you get lonesome?" "Thats not funny." "Yeah well neither are you."
Oliva was a little frustrated because her date cancled then dumped her. So
now she was going home alone again. And john wouldnt shut up about how elliot should
take her out on a date. " Liv, can i see you in the crib please?" Elliot said cautiosly.
" oooo!!!!" " john if your not careful youll find out waht makes me laugh."
Ok lets go up to the crib come on." Elliot urged. He set a hand on her lower back
and led her up the stairs.
CRIB
" What is your problem today?" "Frack off Elliot! Its none of your buisness."
Olivia went to slid past him but he grabbed hold of her arm and spun her around
to face him. " Your not leaving till i get answers." " You want an answer? Fine
how would you feel if someone dumped you over a txt message and the guy you love to death
and would die for is just to freaking stupid to notice that you like him no matter how many
signs you give off? Eeliot i just want someone who cares for me not just because we have sex but because
he sees whats really inside." A tear rolled down her cheek nd elliot wiped it away with his thumb.
" Dont touch me." She stated sadly. "Thats what he said." "Your so stupid elliot." "Yeah but it gets you to
smile right?" "Sure. Wellmy shift is over im gonna go home and fall asleep." Elliot rushed to the door
and locked her inside the crib." Elliot i swear there will be hell to pay if you dont let me out right now."
Elliot ran down the crib stairs."John, do not let her out till i call you ok? Finn make sure he doesnt."
" wahts wrong with you man? Shes gonna kill you." "Well she can do that later right no i have to go
get ready. Just please trust me." "Whatever bro."
OLIVIAS APARTMENT
Elliot hurried to spred the rose petals on the floor in the bathroom and in the bed room.
He lit every candle he had set up. he got dinner going so that it would be ready by the time she got home.
He even put on her favorite music. Rascal Flats My Wish
He dialed johns number and gave hm the insrtuctions on what do tell olivia.
PRECINCT
John opened the door and out came olivia. She was furious. " Where is the cock suckeR?Im gonna kill him!!"
" Liv you have to calm down. Ok. You have to go to your house right now. Stay calm and drive safe.
We'll take care of elliot for you. Just hurry up and get to your hime please." " JOhn you better tell me whats going on."
" Sorry i cant do that. You have to find out yourself. Now go or youll be late." "Whe do i have to be there?"
"In exactly 5 minutes. Now go!!!"

OLIVIAS APARTMENT



PLZ READ AND REVIEW TO FIND OUT WHT HAPPENS NEXT. WILL OLIVIA BE ANGRY T HER SURPRISEOR WILL SHE FINNALLY GIVE IN? FIND OUT ON MONDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tongue.gif
ABHAYA
smile.gif he he i think you should continue..FASTER smile.gif
luvluvluvsvu
QUOTE (ABHAYA @ Feb 15 2009, 10:02 PM) *
smile.gif he he i think you should continue..FASTER smile.gif



yeah! like now =] =]
bensonsbabe
Olivia forgot about driving calmly. She was thinking that joseph changed his
mind and asked elliot to help him set up. thats why she was in the
closet. Well her mind was way off. Joseph was out screwing his knew girl and elliot was getting nervous.
Olivia raced up the eight flights of stairs, fumbled trough her purse for her keys and unlocked her door.
Elliot could hear the locks tumbling in the chambers as Olivia tried to get in. He tried to calm
hiimself down but failed. He kept thinking what olivias reaction would be.If she would
scream at him and tell him to leave or if she would except his surprise and sit with him.
He turned around just in time to see Olivia fall through her door way. He held out the flowers
he had gotten for her and just gave her that famous stabler grin. "Happy Valentins Day
Olivia." Olivia just stared in amazement at what Elliot had put together for her. "El,
what is goin on?" "Listen i knew you were upset and i thought it would be nice
of me to put somethin together for you. i dont want you to be lonly on a special night."
"Elliot Valentines Day is not special ok? Its just a holiday for young lovers to have fancy dinners and have great sex.
Thats all it is." "Oh well, i thought you seemed pretty upset about what joseph did and i thought this would
make you feel a little better. But i guess it made you even more angry. ill go now sorry." Elliot puthis head down and headed
for the door when olivia grabbed his bicep." Now i never said that it made me angry or that i didnt want to celebrate.
i would love to have dinner with you Elliot. If your still up for it?" " Oh yeah. Of course!" Elliot pulled out her chair like
a gentle man and served her the steak. "This is really good El. So you locked me in the closet for this? Well it was worth
it. ill say that much." Elliot smiled at the thought of olivias compliment then his mind drifted somewhere else.
wait till later ill have you tied to your own head board screaming my name out of pleasure. He thought.
He hoped olivia didnt catch him smiling. To late. " What are you so happy about?" " Well i got some pretty
girl to have dinner with me even though i broke into her house and locked her in a crib at work. So im pretty happy.
One more thin. Will you dance with me?" He held out his hand and to his surprise olivia took it.
" So how much trouble did you go through just for this?" " Well getting munch to keep quiute was easy seeing as
hes afraid of finn but doing this well under pressure thats a different story. Enough about how i did all this. This night is all
about you got it?" " El, i..." Elliot pressed his lips against hers. Olivia didnt fight she simply placed her arms around his neck and ran her tongue over his bottom lip. A sligt moan escaped her lips as elliot massaged his tonue over hers. When she pulled away
Elliot could see the lust in her brown eyes. He loved that look. Especiaaly when it was him who cause her to get it in her eyes.
" Elliot i want to tell you something." "Go right ahead." " I love you." Elliot pressed his lips to her neck this time instead of her lips.
Olivia tilted her head to give him better access. " Im glad you feel the same." He said a liitle muffled but still audiable.
He lifted her into his arms and rested her against a wall. Olivia could feel his erection pressing against her thiigh.




PLEASE R&R
WILL OLIVIA TELL HIM TO STOP OR WILL SHE LET HIM CONTINUE HIS MAJIC? FIND OUT NEXT TIME
luvluvluvsvu
first off, loved the last chapter
second, THANKS SOOO MUCH for letting me write this last part=]
hope you enjoy smile.gif
“Elliot, please.” Olivia moaned

“What” Elliot smiled

“Not tonight. I really do want you, just not all at once.”

Elliot felt bad he knew he had been pushing the limits but he wanted to go farther, “I’m sorry”

“No, don’t be”

“So…” Elliot paused “Where does this put us? Co-workers, lovers, friends?”

Olivia just stood there, what were they? She knew they could go back to work the next day and pretend they were just friends. Lovers? Olivia knew she wanted him, for a really long time she has known this, but she wasn’t sure if she could risk it all. Co-workers would throw away their friendship and also risk her job. Olivia walked out the door she didn’t know where she was going but she knew she had to get out of her apartment

“Liv!” Elliot called “Liv, where are you going?” Elliot stood there dumbstruck, he didn’t want to admit he was rejected because then he would have to admit she didn’t love him as much as he loved her.

Olivia walked past her car and past the bus stop, she did have money to flag a cab, she just wanted to walk to just clear her head.

No phone. No money. No Elliot. Olivia had regretted leaving him there but she felt like she had to, but what if he disappeared, what if he left. She quickly shook her head to get that thought out of her head. After about a mile’s worth of walking she found she was at The English Pub. Joseph had taken her there for their first date and now it was her favorite place. So she walked in

“Hey Olivia!” Said a waitress who had come to know Olivia very well and who Olivia had confided in sometimes.

“Hi Joanna. Can I have the usual table if its not taken.” Olivia said but she took a look around the main room was empty why would the back room, where the table was, be full?

“Of course. How was your single awareness day?”

Olivia laughed and said “Very different, I’ll tell you about it over some coffee.”

“Comin’ right up!”

Olivia walked back to her table and sat down. She spun her mothers ring around her finger, she had developed this habit awhile back and she hated it.

“Okay Olivia, what’s up with you? I can tell something is wrong.” Joanna said as she set the coffee down

“Well, Joe broke up with me and remember what I said about Elliot?” She sighed

“The stupid ass hole that never paid any attention to your feelings?”

Olivia smiled “Yeah, well he just told me he loved me and I said the same back but he went too far to fast, I really didn’t know why I rejected him but I felt if we had sex on the first date that the relationship would end like mine and Joe’s” Olivia was going to say more but she was interrupted by the bell on the front door.

“Hold on sweetie, I gotta get this.” Joanna got up and went to go wait on the person at the door

[[front room]]

“Welcome to The English Pub, would you like to sit somewhere special? Anywhere we’re empty.” Joanna said not paying full attention to who was at the door

“Well, Jay, we will sit at my usual table.” A deep voice said

“What?” She looked up only one person called her Jay

“You know in the back.” He coaxed

“No, sorry, its taken” Joanna tried to stall

“You said you were empty and Kayla wants to see the table” He pushed back to the room

[[back room]]

Olivia heard Joanna’s voice come closer so she looked up from her coffee and there were three people standing at the door. Joanna with her dark brown hair and sorry blue eyes, Some blonde girl that slightly resembled Britney spears and Joe.

“Oh,” Joe said Kayla looked up at him like a little kid, she looked half his age

“Do you know this woman, Joey? We can sit by her if you want.”

Olivia felt like she wanted to throw up. Joey? Like hell they were going to sit by her.

“Joseph” I said

“Olivia” He said back

At that second the bell rang again.

Joanna turned around to see who it was but I would know that voice anywhere

“Olivia!” It called “Liv, if you’re here, I’m sorry, I truly am!”

I started to cry and by the time Elliot was in the back room and holding me Joe and the blonde girl were out of there “Liv, are you okay? Who where those people? Did they make you cry?”

I shook my head no and just decided to drop it

“Take me home El?”

Elliot nodded yes and we walked back to my place. Elliot stayed the night but nothing major happened, It was the perfect valentines day.

bensonsbabe
QUOTE (luvluvluvsvu @ Feb 18 2009, 08:58 PM) *
first off, loved the last chapter
second, THANKS SOOO MUCH for letting me write this last part=]
hope you enjoy smile.gif
“Elliot, please.” Olivia moaned

“What” Elliot smiled

“Not tonight. I really do want you, just not all at once.”

Elliot felt bad he knew he had been pushing the limits but he wanted to go farther, “I’m sorry”

“No, don’t be”

“So…” Elliot paused “Where does this put us? Co-workers, lovers, friends?”

Olivia just stood there, what were they? She knew they could go back to work the next day and pretend they were just friends. Lovers? Olivia knew she wanted him, for a really long time she has known this, but she wasn’t sure if she could risk it all. Co-workers would throw away their friendship and also risk her job. Olivia walked out the door she didn’t know where she was going but she knew she had to get out of her apartment

“Liv!” Elliot called “Liv, where are you going?” Elliot stood there dumbstruck, he didn’t want to admit he was rejected because then he would have to admit she didn’t love him as much as he loved her.

Olivia walked past her car and past the bus stop, she did have money to flag a cab, she just wanted to walk to just clear her head.

No phone. No money. No Elliot. Olivia had regretted leaving him there but she felt like she had to, but what if he disappeared, what if he left. She quickly shook her head to get that thought out of her head. After about a mile’s worth of walking she found she was at The English Pub. Joseph had taken her there for their first date and now it was her favorite place. So she walked in

“Hey Olivia!” Said a waitress who had come to know Olivia very well and who Olivia had confided in sometimes.

“Hi Joanna. Can I have the usual table if its not taken.” Olivia said but she took a look around the main room was empty why would the back room, where the table was, be full?

“Of course. How was your single awareness day?”

Olivia laughed and said “Very different, I’ll tell you about it over some coffee.”

“Comin’ right up!”

Olivia walked back to her table and sat down. She spun her mothers ring around her finger, she had developed this habit awhile back and she hated it.

“Okay Olivia, what’s up with you? I can tell something is wrong.” Joanna said as she set the coffee down

“Well, Joe broke up with me and remember what I said about Elliot?” She sighed

“The stupid ass hole that never paid any attention to your feelings?”

Olivia smiled “Yeah, well he just told me he loved me and I said the same back but he went too far to fast, I really didn’t know why I rejected him but I felt if we had sex on the first date that the relationship would end like mine and Joe’s” Olivia was going to say more but she was interrupted by the bell on the front door.

“Hold on sweetie, I gotta get this.” Joanna got up and went to go wait on the person at the door

[[front room]]

“Welcome to The English Pub, would you like to sit somewhere special? Anywhere we’re empty.” Joanna said not paying full attention to who was at the door

“Well, Jay, we will sit at my usual table.” A deep voice said

“What?” She looked up only one person called her Jay

“You know in the back.” He coaxed

“No, sorry, its taken” Joanna tried to stall

“You said you were empty and Kayla wants to see the table” He pushed back to the room

[[back room]]

Olivia heard Joanna’s voice come closer so she looked up from her coffee and there were three people standing at the door. Joanna with her dark brown hair and sorry blue eyes, Some blonde girl that slightly resembled Britney spears and Joe.

“Oh,” Joe said Kayla looked up at him like a little kid, she looked half his age

“Do you know this woman, Joey? We can sit by her if you want.”

Olivia felt like she wanted to throw up. Joey? Like hell they were going to sit by her.

“Joseph” I said

“Olivia” He said back

At that second the bell rang again.

Joanna turned around to see who it was but I would know that voice anywhere

“Olivia!” It called “Liv, if you’re here, I’m sorry, I truly am!”

I started to cry and by the time Elliot was in the back room and holding me Joe and the blonde girl were out of there “Liv, are you okay? Who where those people? Did they make you cry?”

I shook my head no and just decided to drop it

“Take me home El?”

Elliot nodded yes and we walked back to my place. Elliot stayed the night but nothing major happened, It was the perfect valentines day.

let me just say this, DAMN GIRL HOW DO YOU DO IT? THATWAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WAS THINKING SOMETHING TOTALLY DIFFERENT BUT YOU SURPRISED ME!!!!!THATS A GOOD THING TO. GREAT JOB LOVED THE FINISHED PRODUCT.
ILoveSvu
aww i was so sad that liv rejected el but i guess it turned out well. good job stupid dude that dumped liv he dont know what he is missing
bensonsbabe
QUOTE (ILoveSvu @ Feb 18 2009, 11:47 PM) *
aww i was so sad that liv rejected el but i guess it turned out well. good job stupid dude that dumped liv he dont know what he is missing

i know thank luvluvluvsvu fr the ending it was amzing did you like it?
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