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hitothebye
Ok if you want to goin in feel free... i will write a part of the story and then someone else will continue with it picking up where i left of and so on... it will keep going.
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hitothebye
It was 3 am and olivia was in her bed sleeping when the phone rang. She reached to pick it up but completely missed the phone. Half asleep she sat up and grabed it.
"Hello, liv are you there"
"Yeah, el is that you? Why are you calling so early?"
"I got a call from fin saying there is an emergance and we need to get into the office right away"
"Ok el. I will meet you there"
"Well actually look out your window."

Liv goes to the window still in her pjs and sees el standing out there. He was in the poring rain holding up a cup of coffie and waving at her.
"Elliot, you are crazy. Get in here or get your but back in that car. Don't make me mad."
"Well if you would get dressed and stop giving me that stare then i wouldn't be standing out here now would I."
"You are the most stubern person."
"Yeah, and your welcome for driving all the way out her to get you."

Liv gives him one of those its 3 in the morning and dont mess with me looks as she runs into the bathroom and gets dressed. About 5 minutes later her phone rings again and she races over to grab it.
"Hey come on what is taking you so long"
"Im a girl. Whats your excuse, mr. happy go lucky."
"Its going to be a great day"
"Will you shut your mouth and get in here. I dont want to have you smelling like wet dog all day."
"Ok (long pause) Wait what is that spose to mean."

Liv hangs up as el runs through the door. Liv has on her clothes and is putting on her make up. Seeing her at the mirror el, runs in and tackles her. He picks her up carries her to the bed and starts to tickle her. She begins laughing uncontrolable. After a few minutes she grabs her pillow and starts hitting him.
"Come on el you really didnt think i would make a come back. You know me better then that."
"Ok, liv, i surender you win. But we got to go or else we will both be in trouble."
"ok, ok, can i at least fix my hair."

El then picks her up and throughs her over his sholder, grabs her purse and her coat and carries her out the door.
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Elliot and Olivia drove into the parking garage and walked in the pouring rain to get inside the warm office building.
"John." Elliot stated as he walking into the bull pin "What is this?"
John just laughed and sat back down at his desk leaving Elliot with unanswered questions.
"Really John, come on tell me." Olivia begged "Please?"
John laughed even harder at Olivia's pleading smile.
"Okay, who called me in here at three in the MORNING?"Fin yelled "I will bust your ass!"
Elliot smiled at this cocky little plan John had concocted
"Stabler. Cranky Balls, I knew it was you!" Fin continued to yell
"What! No, it was John. John said Cragen needed us!"
Everyone looked at John who was laughing his ass off by now.
"It answered my question, and I was lonely" John replied innocently
"What question, John?" Olivia muttered through her clenched teeth
"If you were sleeping with Stabler, haha great Job Elliot!"
Olivia's face turned a bright red and Fin laughed so hard that he couldn't breath
"What the hell are all of you people doing in here?" I masculine voice said from behind.
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They all look around.
Olivia: "We were just talking about uhhh.... ummmm..."
Fin: "About how good it is to get and early start."
Olivia: Yeah thats it boss."
Boss: "Yeah right, i got my eye one you"
John: "Ok, sir."

The boss walks away and all of them sigh.
Olivia: "John, you are dead."
El: "Down girl, its better to get him when he is least expecting it."
Olivia: "You got lucky this time."

Olivia takes a quick threatening step toward John and points her finger at him. He flinches then laughs. Then the boss walks out again.
"Well its good you got here early. Looks like we got a girl found in motel bound to the bed, she is still alive. Heres the adress get out their as fast as you can."
El: "Me and liv got it."

The boss hands el a peace of paper with the adress on it and liv and el head for the car. They get in the car and el starts it then looks at liv who is having a hard time staying awake
El: "So do you want to take a nap and i will wake you up when we get there."
Olivia: "Yeah, that would be great thank you."

Before el could say another word she was out. He looked at her and smiled. `I wish I could have her to myself. She is so beautiful.` He then brushed her cheek and began driving.
WarnerIsLove
Hey do you guys need Melinda?? if so could I join and play her??
hitothebye
Yeah... you can join and add whatever you want to the story... you dont even have to play a certain carecter... add in whenever and whatever you want
WarnerIsLove
okay...then I'll just add something.

Melinda Warner was in the morgue just finishing up an autopsy on the victim from SVU's latest case, when her phone rings she takes off her gloves, and googles and throws them into the bio hazard bin, she goes over to her and picks it up off it's cradle and speaks. "Hello"?
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On the other end of the phone it was liv.
Liv: "Hey i have a girl her and i was hoping you could meet us at the hospital. She needs to be tested for any STDs."
Liv, then gets called for by el.
Liv: "Hey, i got to go. Bye see you there."
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Liv runs over to see what el was calling about. She gets there and looks down.
Liv: "Oh no... is that some kind of joke."
Laying right infront of the house there was a spy camera pointing towards the house.
El: "Looks like someone likes to be a perv. Maybe it is good for us though. It may lead us closer to our perp."
Liv: "I hate stalkers."
Fin: "Sorry to tell you, but they arnt the worst ones."
El: "Unfortunately."

Olivia gives them a weird look and starts to walk away. Elliot stops runs after her and stops her.
El: "Hold up what was that about."
Liv: "Nothing i just remembered i told Dr. Warner i would meet her at the hospital."
El: "Well you could have told me and i would come with you."
Liv: "You seem to fallow where i go so i figured you'd come anyway... and oh look at that... how right was I."
El: "Am i realy that predictable."
Liv: "Yeah, i have been your partner for how long?"
El: "Well that could explain it."
Liv: "Are we going to stand here all day or are we going to do our job?"

Elliot gives Olivia a wierd look and they walk to the car. When they get to the hospital, olivia sees Dr. Warner and walks over.
Olivia: "How is she? Did she say anything?"
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Melinda: "She's fine and no she didn't say to me, maybe you or Elliot can get her to open up...anyway let me know if you need anything else I've gotta to get back to the morgue" Melinda walks away from the two and out of the hospital.
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Liv walks into the hospital room where el is. El looks at her and nods his head. She knew he was saying 'Go talk to her i will wait here.' Liv walks over to the girl who is laying there. The girl looked so helpless it was almost unbarable.
Liv: "Hey, my name is olivia benson. I am here to help you ok. Can you tell me your name."
Girl: "I'm kelly."
Liv: "Nice to meet you kelly, can you tell me how old you are."
Kelly: "I'm 10."
Liv: "Ok, thank you. I am going to go talk to my partner and we will talk again when you are feeling better."
Kelly: "Wait, am i going to be ok."
Liv: "Yes, you are safe now."
Kelly: "I'm scared, will you stay with me."
Liv: "Ok, i will stay right here. Get some sleep now."

Liv walks over and sits in the chair next to Kelly's bed. Kelly begins to dose off. When she is fully asleep she slowly opens the door and motions for elliot to come over. El gets up and walks over.
El: "What she say?"
Liv: "Her name is Kelly and she is 10 years old. She looked tired so i told her we would talk after she gets some sleep."
El: "Ok, well she is asleep lets go back to the precient."
Liv: "Umm... I can't."
El: "Why?"
Liv: "She said she was scared and she asked me to stay with her."
El: "Liv your not getting to attacked are you."
Liv: "No, I'm just doing my job. I will see you later you go. I have to get back in there before she wakes up."

El walks away. Before turning the corner he sees liv look at the girl and put her head up against the glass.
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Chapter two~~~~~ "Into the night."

About three hours have passed, and olivia had fallen asleep in the chair next to Kelly's bed. Kelly was still asleep also. El desided to call liv and she how she was doing. The phone rings in livs pocket and she springs out of the chair. 'Oh, its just my phone' she thought to herself. She flips the phone open and puts it to her ear.
Liv: "Benson."
El: "Yeah, Liv it's just me."
Liv: "Ok, what do you have for me?"
El: "Well we have been working on tracing down the person who planted the camera. So far we have one potential suspect. His name is Neomi. We are on our way to his job right now. How are things there?"
Liv: "Alright. She is still asleep. I will give you a call when she wakes up."
El: "K, got to go we are at his work place. Talk to you soon."

Liv, sits back down and stares at Kelly. 'Why would anyone want to hurt such an helpless little girl'. As she sat there thinking, Elliot and Fin were at Neomi's worksight. They walked up to Neomi's boss and ask to see Neomi. He leads them to where Neomi is. Fin and Elliot then flash their badges at Neomi.
El: "Hello, I'm detective Stabler and this is my partner. We would like to ask you a few questions."
Neomi: "I already told the police i didn't mean to hit her it was self defense and ever sence the restraining order..."
Fin: "Hold on now, don't get ahead of yourself. We arn't the cops."
Neomi: "Then why are you here."
El: "We are the Special Victims Unit... We deal with sex crimes."
Neomi: "Oh... Well then why are you looking for me?"
Fin: "How about we ask you a few questions."
Neomi: "Shoot."
El: "Where were you early this morning?"
Neomi: "I was sleeping in a bed at the Motel."
El: "Can anyone conferm that?"
Neomi: "Yeah, my girlfriend."
Fin: "Does this girlfriend have a name?"
Neomi: "Yeah, Lissa. She lives right down the street if you want to talk to her."
El: "Can you show us where?"
Neomi: "Sure, exactly three buildings down, to your right. Apartment number 28."

They walked to the building he pointed out and went up two floors till they saw apartment number 24. They knocked on the door. A woman with dark brown hair, blue eyes, and pjs on answered.

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hitothebye
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El: "Hello, mam. Is there a Lissa there?"
Lissa: "Yes, that would be me. How may i help you?"
El: "We are from Detectives.
They flash their badges."Do you know a man by the name of Neomi?"
Lissa: "Yes he is my boyfriend."
Fin: "Well was your boyfriend with you early this morning."
Lissa: "Yea he was with me from 7 last night to 7 this morning, when he left for work. Why is he in trouble?"
Fin: "No mam, we are just looking at many different options. Thank you for your time."

'He must not be our guy they thought.' They walked back to the car. El pulled out his phone and dialed liv's cell number.

Sorry guys gtg post again soon. See you. Add suggestions on what should happen next.
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"Benson." olivia said with a worn out oice. "hey, you ok?" "yeah im fine el. what do you need." "neomi's alibi checks out. he was wit his girlfriend till 7 last night to 7 this morning. hes not our guy." "ok well, kellie hasnt woken up yet." "ok well i headeed in th direction of thehospital so ill see you soon." "kay, bye." "bye." elliot showed up at the hospital in 5 minutes. "how is she?" "shes fine. shes still asleep. i guess this guy made her stay up all night." "yeah. hey what would hapen if you went home and i stayed?" "shed probably freak out that i was gone and that some random dude was in her room. another words it prbably wouldnt be the best idea if i leave." "oh, well guess im staying over night then." " what do you mean?" "i mean that im not leaving you ere by yourself." "stabler, i cantake care of myself thank you." "i know but i just want to make sure you dont get hurt. so im staying thats final liv." "ok suit yourself." elliot puled a chair up next to livs and sat down. he wigled around till he got somewhat comfotable and leaned his head back. when olivia looked over she could see that elliots eyes were closed and he was smiling just a tad bit. "hes so beautiful." kellie hispered. "oh hey honey. how you fealing?" "im fine. my legs hurt but im ok. whos the cute guy in the chair?" olivia smiled. "thats my partner elliot. but he goes by el." "well your partneris very cute." " i know try working with him every day and youll see how cute he really is." they laughed for a little bit. "so you dont look 10 years old. how old are you really?" " im 16. " "now that makes more sense." "so how big is he?" "what?!" olivia had a shocked look on her face when kellie asked her that. although olivia did wish she knew how big he was. "i mean, how much muscle does he have?" "oh. you scared me there for a sec. um, well when he takes his shirt off hes pretty big. and hes so tan." "did you think i meant the below the belt area?" "for a second there i did." kellie burst out into laughter. "now that is hilarious." "well when you deal with sex crimes thats pretty much your reaction every time someone says 'how bid are they?' i swear." "do you like him?" olivia looked at kellies serious face. "do you mean love or as a friend?" "i mean as both." "wel as a friend hes perfect. hes like a big brother you know? hes always there ot protect me. but as a lover, i dont know. sometimes i wish i was isand sometimes i wish i never met him." "tell me about you guys." "what do you want to know?" "everything. except the confidential stuff." "ha.ok. well when i first met him i didnt really like him cause he was annoying. he would drop me off from work and he would tell me to flick my lights twice whn i was in. and if i didnt he would come up to my room and make sure himself that i was ok." "that sounds so romantic. really it does." "yeah. well anyway, we got to know each other. and i felt like i could trust him with every thing. and i still do." elliot slowly woke up. he smiled as he heard olivia say that she still trusted him. " so he knows things that i would rather just forget and never ralk about.hes like my big brother in a way. never leaves my side when we're on the job. hes always making ure that im ok." "now you see. thats true love right there. if you ask me i think he likes you." "him? no way! he could never like me." "dont say that!" kellie snapped. "from what it sounds like, he really likes you olivia. maybe you should give it a shot." "i cant." "why not? are you afraid of being rejected?" "no. its just that our job doesnt allow that stuff. the whole dating the co-worker deal. they find it distracting." "honey ever heard the expression 'rules are made so that we can break them' ?" " yeah. but.." "well there you go! and no more buts. you need to step up your game woman. he likes you and im sure you like him." " trust me i do." "well then there you go. thats your clue. one thing, has he ever acted wierd when you bring dates into the precinct?" "what do you mean weird?" "oh my god! get with the program lady! weird as in does he figet or keep silent,? anything like that? maybe a bad comment about how he thinks the person your with isnt good for you. any of that?" "well a couple times he said he didnt like my new boyfriend." "well there you go! the man likes you. hes jealous that your with someone other than him. he wants you to flick your lights twice so he knows your safe when hes not there. he wants you. i bet he stares at you all day long when your not looking." elliot really would wish kellie would shut up now. she was giving away his secret. "i have caught him a fe times staring don my shirt i just never said anything cause i didnt want to embaress him." "good. cause if you did you would make him feel like you didnt want him. " "where do you get all this info from?" "COSMOPOLITAN MAGAZINE! havent you ever heard of it?" "yeah. i used to read it when i was your age. they had to cut down on the sex talk cause it got to the point where it was being to much for the public to handle." " oh yeah trust me i know just about everything aout cosmopolitan mag." olivia just smiled and looked over at elliot. she pictured herself with him. when she thought about it kellie was right. she did have very strong feelings for her partner.
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Liv after her vision of being with Elliot tucks her head into her pillow. Kellie looking over to see Livs face realizes she was dead one with what she said. Then, she looks over at Elliot who is all red with a slight grin on his face. She closes her eyes to go back to sleep, but before she fell asleep the flashbacks came to her. She saw the dark misterious figure and what happened to her. She began crying lightly, hoping no one would hear her. Liv heard though and jumped up. El was still fast asleep so she walked over to Kellie quietly and wispered"Kellie, hunny. Shhh. Its ok, im hear calm down. It's Liv."
Kellie: "I'm fine go back to sleep."
Liv: "You sure you don't want to talk about it."
Kellie: "No, I'm fine. Leave me alone please."
Liv: "OK. Good night. Im here if you need me."

Kellie turns over and listens for liv to sit back down. Liv starts to walk back to her chair and looks back but Kellies back was to Liv. Liv sat back down but couldn't fall asleep. She looked at Kellie and then Elliot. Then, she finaly falls asleep after looking at the two of them for about a half hour. Later that night Liv wakes up and looks over. Both of them were still asleep. She has to go to the bathroom so she gets up silently and heads to the bathroom. When she gets their she sees that a cop comming out of the mens bathroom. She runs into him and looks up.
Cop: "Excuse me miss sorry."
Liv: "Ummm... sorry she says as she runs into the back room."
Cop: "Hmmm... whats her problem?"

The cop walks away. The man she had ran into happened to look alot like the guard that tryed to rap her at sealview. Liv locks the bathroom door and begins having flashbacks of what happened to her at sealview. When the flashbacks are done she begins to cry and gets sick to her stomick. By this time Elliot has seen that Liv was gone, and is on his way to see where she went. Liv can no longer keep it together and runs to the first stall. Elliot hears her crying and breaks down the door. He sees her throwing up and locks the door behind him.
Elliot: "Liv whats going on?"She trys to talk but turns right back to the toilet. She couldnt hold it together.Elliot: "It's ok, let it out... I got you... Your going to be ok.Liv begins to fall over, and elliot catches her. He pulles her hair back as she continues. When she is done she tryes to push Elliot away. El doesn't get the hint, so he trys to turn her toward him. She resists him then in a calm voise he says:"Liv, turn around."
Liv: "No get out of here."
Elliot: "I can't."
Liv: "You need to learn to leave me alone sometimes El."
Elliot: "I can't."
Liv: "Just get away from me."

Elliot realizes she is right but can't force himself to leave. He grabs her from behind and hugs folds her over into his arms. At first she tryes to resist but can't. She starts to cry as he squeezes tighter. After a couple minutes he realizes noone was with kellie. He thinks what am i going to do. I can leave her like this but i can't leave Kellie alone. He flips out his phone behind Livs back and texts fin. 'Hey Fin can you come watch kellie for a minute. We need a break. Elliot takes his coat off and puts it around Liv. When he carries her out side and puts her in his car. She is sleeping in the passanger seat so he takes her back to her place.
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