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Chapter 11
There was a shocked silence for a split second before Elliot and Fin raised their guns, mimicking Munch’s attack stance.
“Do you really want to risk her life?” Mikey Rogers nodded toward Kelsey. Her eyes were wide and terrified.
“Put down the gun or you are going to die today.” Elliot hissed.
“I don’t think so. You see I know how you police people work. It’s true you’re full of yourself and think your above the law and everyone else but you would never, ever risk her life.” He smiled.
“Be reasonable. You know we’re not going to leave here without her.” Fin’s voice was composed but he couldn’t quite cover the anger. This man had tortured Olivia after all. He deserved death.
He noticed the look on the detective’s faces and smiled his grip on the gun relaxing. “Your friends of Detective Benson’s aren’t you.” He smiled again and a dreamy look clouded his angry face. “Would you like me to tell you how she screamed?”
Three tempers broke and three guns went off. Mikey Rogers fell in a pool of blood, a gunshot wound in his left shoulder, stomach, and right side.
The three men looked at each other for a split second before racing to Kelsey’s side.
“Get a bus down here right now. We have Kelsey. The perps dead.” Fin yelled instructions into his two-way as he leaned down, his fingers feeling the absence of a pulse on the cop killer himself.
Elliot elevated Kelsey’s head while Munch put pressure on the worst of the wounds.
“D-did O-Olivia get o-out?” Kelsey struggled to speak.
“Yes. You need to survive… for her. She’s made us work around the clock to find you.” Elliot helped lift her into the stretcher.
Three and a half hours later Detectives Tutuola, Munch, Stabler, and Benson were sitting in the waiting room. Over the past couple hours people would wander in and out, never giving them a second glance.
Fin and John sat against the far wall looking at Olivia and Elliot. Olivia was sitting with her head on Elliot shoulder. Elliot was whispering quickly and quietly in her ear. Suddenly Olivia stood up as a nurse walked into the waiting room.
“Kelsey is out of surgery. She’s in pretty bad shape but she can have visitors now.”
Olivia walked into the recovery room and looked down on Kelsey. “How are you feeling?”
Kelsey opened her eyes. “Olivia. I can’t believe you’re okay. He kept telling me he’d killed you.”
Olivia smiled. It was a tight smile, but still a smile. The first one since she got back. “I’m not that easy to kill.”
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“Olivia…” Elliot was in Olivia’s apartment talking with her, pleading with her. “How am I supposed to understand if you won’t talk to me?” He sat down on the couch.
“El, I don’t have anyone else in my life. I’ve been alone for as long as I can remember, and that’s okay. But in that moment, I needed to hold onto something. I needed to hold onto someone. You have Kathy… and the kids. I only have you…” Olivia sat down on the couch not looking at him.
“Olivia. Look at me Olivia. Every second you were gone I missed you. I couldn’t think about anything other than your safety. I couldn’t eat, I couldn’t sleep. Do you understand? Olivia I love you.”
Olivia looked up, shocked. “I love you too. You kept me going despite everything.”
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4 months later
“I understand what you’re going through, really… but you need to talk to me if we’re going to catch this guy.” Olivia looked down on the 25 year old woman who was a victim of kidnapping and rape.
“How could you? How could you know what I’ve been through?”
Olivia leaned down and whispered in her ear. “Because, I’ve been there.”
Yes, they were all healing but the experience would forever affect them.
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*********
R&R
Sooooo what do you guys think about my first ever fanfiction? Do you think I should write another one? I had so much fun writing this. Message me if you have any ideas for my new fanfic.
Also please send me other sites I could post this on. Thanks.
p.s I like writing dramatic fiction. Not particularly fluff, however fun that is.
There was a shocked silence for a split second before Elliot and Fin raised their guns, mimicking Munch’s attack stance.
“Do you really want to risk her life?” Mikey Rogers nodded toward Kelsey. Her eyes were wide and terrified.
“Put down the gun or you are going to die today.” Elliot hissed.
“I don’t think so. You see I know how you police people work. It’s true you’re full of yourself and think your above the law and everyone else but you would never, ever risk her life.” He smiled.
“Be reasonable. You know we’re not going to leave here without her.” Fin’s voice was composed but he couldn’t quite cover the anger. This man had tortured Olivia after all. He deserved death.
He noticed the look on the detective’s faces and smiled his grip on the gun relaxing. “Your friends of Detective Benson’s aren’t you.” He smiled again and a dreamy look clouded his angry face. “Would you like me to tell you how she screamed?”
Three tempers broke and three guns went off. Mikey Rogers fell in a pool of blood, a gunshot wound in his left shoulder, stomach, and right side.
The three men looked at each other for a split second before racing to Kelsey’s side.
“Get a bus down here right now. We have Kelsey. The perps dead.” Fin yelled instructions into his two-way as he leaned down, his fingers feeling the absence of a pulse on the cop killer himself.
Elliot elevated Kelsey’s head while Munch put pressure on the worst of the wounds.
“D-did O-Olivia get o-out?” Kelsey struggled to speak.
“Yes. You need to survive… for her. She’s made us work around the clock to find you.” Elliot helped lift her into the stretcher.
Three and a half hours later Detectives Tutuola, Munch, Stabler, and Benson were sitting in the waiting room. Over the past couple hours people would wander in and out, never giving them a second glance.
Fin and John sat against the far wall looking at Olivia and Elliot. Olivia was sitting with her head on Elliot shoulder. Elliot was whispering quickly and quietly in her ear. Suddenly Olivia stood up as a nurse walked into the waiting room.
“Kelsey is out of surgery. She’s in pretty bad shape but she can have visitors now.”
Olivia walked into the recovery room and looked down on Kelsey. “How are you feeling?”
Kelsey opened her eyes. “Olivia. I can’t believe you’re okay. He kept telling me he’d killed you.”
Olivia smiled. It was a tight smile, but still a smile. The first one since she got back. “I’m not that easy to kill.”
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“Olivia…” Elliot was in Olivia’s apartment talking with her, pleading with her. “How am I supposed to understand if you won’t talk to me?” He sat down on the couch.
“El, I don’t have anyone else in my life. I’ve been alone for as long as I can remember, and that’s okay. But in that moment, I needed to hold onto something. I needed to hold onto someone. You have Kathy… and the kids. I only have you…” Olivia sat down on the couch not looking at him.
“Olivia. Look at me Olivia. Every second you were gone I missed you. I couldn’t think about anything other than your safety. I couldn’t eat, I couldn’t sleep. Do you understand? Olivia I love you.”
Olivia looked up, shocked. “I love you too. You kept me going despite everything.”
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4 months later
“I understand what you’re going through, really… but you need to talk to me if we’re going to catch this guy.” Olivia looked down on the 25 year old woman who was a victim of kidnapping and rape.
“How could you? How could you know what I’ve been through?”
Olivia leaned down and whispered in her ear. “Because, I’ve been there.”
Yes, they were all healing but the experience would forever affect them.
********************************************************************************
*********
R&R
Sooooo what do you guys think about my first ever fanfiction? Do you think I should write another one? I had so much fun writing this. Message me if you have any ideas for my new fanfic.
Also please send me other sites I could post this on. Thanks.
p.s I like writing dramatic fiction. Not particularly fluff, however fun that is.
QUOTE (xoanna21 @ Aug 26 2008, 11:24 PM) 
Chapter 11
There was a shocked silence for a split second before Elliot and Fin raised their guns, mimicking Munch's attack stance.
"Do you really want to risk her life?" Mikey Rogers nodded toward Kelsey. Her eyes were wide and terrified.
"Put down the gun or you are going to die today." Elliot hissed.
"I don't think so. You see I know how you police people work. It's true you're full of yourself and think your above the law and everyone else but you would never, ever risk her life." He smiled.
"Be reasonable. You know we're not going to leave here without her." Fin's voice was composed but he couldn't quite cover the anger. This man had tortured Olivia after all. He deserved death.
He noticed the look on the detective's faces and smiled his grip on the gun relaxing. "Your friends of Detective Benson's aren't you." He smiled again and a dreamy look clouded his angry face. "Would you like me to tell you how she screamed?"
Three tempers broke and three guns went off. Mikey Rogers fell in a pool of blood, a gunshot wound in his left shoulder, stomach, and right side.
The three men looked at each other for a split second before racing to Kelsey's side.
"Get a bus down here right now. We have Kelsey. The perps dead." Fin yelled instructions into his two-way as he leaned down, his fingers feeling the absence of a pulse on the cop killer himself.
Elliot elevated Kelsey's head while Munch put pressure on the worst of the wounds.
"D-did O-Olivia get o-out?" Kelsey struggled to speak.
"Yes. You need to survive¡K for her. She's made us work around the clock to find you." Elliot helped lift her into the stretcher.
Three and a half hours later Detectives Tutuola, Munch, Stabler, and Benson were sitting in the waiting room. Over the past couple hours people would wander in and out, never giving them a second glance.
Fin and John sat against the far wall looking at Olivia and Elliot. Olivia was sitting with her head on Elliot shoulder. Elliot was whispering quickly and quietly in her ear. Suddenly Olivia stood up as a nurse walked into the waiting room.
"Kelsey is out of surgery. She's in pretty bad shape but she can have visitors now."
Olivia walked into the recovery room and looked down on Kelsey. "How are you feeling?"
Kelsey opened her eyes. "Olivia. I can't believe you're okay. He kept telling me he'd killed you."
Olivia smiled. It was a tight smile, but still a smile. The first one since she got back. "I'm not that easy to kill."
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Olivia¡K" Elliot was in Olivia's apartment talking with her, pleading with her. "How am I supposed to understand if you won't talk to me?" He sat down on the couch.
"El, I don't have anyone else in my life. I've been alone for as long as I can remember, and that's okay. But in that moment, I needed to hold onto something. I needed to hold onto someone. You have Kathy¡K and the kids. I only have you¡K" Olivia sat down on the couch not looking at him.
"Olivia. Look at me Olivia. Every second you were gone I missed you. I couldn't think about anything other than your safety. I couldn't eat, I couldn't sleep. Do you understand? Olivia I love you."
Olivia looked up, shocked. "I love you too. You kept me going despite everything."
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
4 months later
"I understand what you're going through, really¡K but you need to talk to me if we're going to catch this guy." Olivia looked down on the 25 year old woman who was a victim of kidnapping and rape.
"How could you? How could you know what I've been through?"
Olivia leaned down and whispered in her ear. "Because, I've been there."
Yes, they were all healing but the experience would forever affect them.
********************************************************************************
*********
R&R
Sooooo what do you guys think about my first ever fanfiction? Do you think I should write another one? I had so much fun writing this. Message me if you have any ideas for my new fanfic.
Also please send me other sites I could post this on. Thanks. ļ
p.s I like writing dramatic fiction. Not particularly fluff, however fun that is.
There was a shocked silence for a split second before Elliot and Fin raised their guns, mimicking Munch's attack stance.
"Do you really want to risk her life?" Mikey Rogers nodded toward Kelsey. Her eyes were wide and terrified.
"Put down the gun or you are going to die today." Elliot hissed.
"I don't think so. You see I know how you police people work. It's true you're full of yourself and think your above the law and everyone else but you would never, ever risk her life." He smiled.
"Be reasonable. You know we're not going to leave here without her." Fin's voice was composed but he couldn't quite cover the anger. This man had tortured Olivia after all. He deserved death.
He noticed the look on the detective's faces and smiled his grip on the gun relaxing. "Your friends of Detective Benson's aren't you." He smiled again and a dreamy look clouded his angry face. "Would you like me to tell you how she screamed?"
Three tempers broke and three guns went off. Mikey Rogers fell in a pool of blood, a gunshot wound in his left shoulder, stomach, and right side.
The three men looked at each other for a split second before racing to Kelsey's side.
"Get a bus down here right now. We have Kelsey. The perps dead." Fin yelled instructions into his two-way as he leaned down, his fingers feeling the absence of a pulse on the cop killer himself.
Elliot elevated Kelsey's head while Munch put pressure on the worst of the wounds.
"D-did O-Olivia get o-out?" Kelsey struggled to speak.
"Yes. You need to survive¡K for her. She's made us work around the clock to find you." Elliot helped lift her into the stretcher.
Three and a half hours later Detectives Tutuola, Munch, Stabler, and Benson were sitting in the waiting room. Over the past couple hours people would wander in and out, never giving them a second glance.
Fin and John sat against the far wall looking at Olivia and Elliot. Olivia was sitting with her head on Elliot shoulder. Elliot was whispering quickly and quietly in her ear. Suddenly Olivia stood up as a nurse walked into the waiting room.
"Kelsey is out of surgery. She's in pretty bad shape but she can have visitors now."
Olivia walked into the recovery room and looked down on Kelsey. "How are you feeling?"
Kelsey opened her eyes. "Olivia. I can't believe you're okay. He kept telling me he'd killed you."
Olivia smiled. It was a tight smile, but still a smile. The first one since she got back. "I'm not that easy to kill."
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"Olivia¡K" Elliot was in Olivia's apartment talking with her, pleading with her. "How am I supposed to understand if you won't talk to me?" He sat down on the couch.
"El, I don't have anyone else in my life. I've been alone for as long as I can remember, and that's okay. But in that moment, I needed to hold onto something. I needed to hold onto someone. You have Kathy¡K and the kids. I only have you¡K" Olivia sat down on the couch not looking at him.
"Olivia. Look at me Olivia. Every second you were gone I missed you. I couldn't think about anything other than your safety. I couldn't eat, I couldn't sleep. Do you understand? Olivia I love you."
Olivia looked up, shocked. "I love you too. You kept me going despite everything."
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
4 months later
"I understand what you're going through, really¡K but you need to talk to me if we're going to catch this guy." Olivia looked down on the 25 year old woman who was a victim of kidnapping and rape.
"How could you? How could you know what I've been through?"
Olivia leaned down and whispered in her ear. "Because, I've been there."
Yes, they were all healing but the experience would forever affect them.
********************************************************************************
*********
R&R
Sooooo what do you guys think about my first ever fanfiction? Do you think I should write another one? I had so much fun writing this. Message me if you have any ideas for my new fanfic.
Also please send me other sites I could post this on. Thanks. ļ
p.s I like writing dramatic fiction. Not particularly fluff, however fun that is.
that was really good!
QUOTE (8ElandLiv8 @ Aug 27 2008, 02:50 PM)
that was really good!
It's done! I'm sad
but I think you should write more lol so I can have something to look forward to when I get home from work...great job!
Wow that was great!
I hope you write another one soon
I hope you write another one soon
that was amazing.
i lovee it.
i lovee it.
Thank you all so much for all the wonderful support and reviews. I'm posting this story on fanfiction.net as well so comment it there too.
does anyone have any really creative ideas for a new story for me to write? Something that hasn't been way overdone?
does anyone have any really creative ideas for a new story for me to write? Something that hasn't been way overdone?
new reader hope u write a second story to this one loved it
New reader---- can't wait to read more stories from you!
Good story. Once I got started I couldn't stop. It's now 1:50 am. So it'll be your fault if I fall asleep at work tomorrow
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