Olivia collapsed in her chair. "Guilty on all counts." she reported. She laid her head back onto her chair.
“Long day” Elliot asked laughing
“I’m so ready for a break, or a nap”
“Well don’t forget about tonight” Elliot said with a special twinkle in his eyes. “I have a very special evening planned for tonight”

“What are you too love birds going on about now” Munch teased. Elliot and Olivia looked at each other then at Munch.
“Nothing” they said in Union.
“Hey Liv, if your tired why don’t you catch a few in the crib?” Munch suggested
“Na, I don’t want to miss any of the action.” she replied but Munch knew the reason was more Elliot than anything else. Olivia put her head down on her desk and closed her eyes. Before she knew it Elliot was throwing wads of paper at her head. “What are you doing?”
“Hey, you’ve been asleep for an hour! And you have work.” Elliot told her.
“What work?” Elliot pointed to the door way. A young girl not much older than 12 was just standing there. Her brown hair hanging loosely over her shoulder and her bangs slightly in her face half covering her sea green eyes. Looking quite lost. Olivia got up and walked over to her. “Hello there, Can I help you sweetie?”
“Zoie, s– she’s in trouble.”
“What’s your name?”
“Julie”
“Julie Who is Zoie?”
“She is - She was my sister, A man came to the house and took her away two years ago, when she was 4.” Olivia did not quite know what to say. “Do you have a computer, I’ll show you what’s wrong.” Olivia brought Julie over to her computer at her desk. Julie googled something and clicked on a bunch of pictures.
Olivia stared at the computer monitor, Elliot walked over to see what she was looking at. What he saw shocked him.

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Olivia stared at the computer monitor, Elliot walked over to see what she was looking at. What he saw shocked him.
He leaned in closer to get a better look. It was child Porn. The girl was six.
"It was in a pop up. And I saw the girl was Zoie, I told my mom and she told me not to tell." The girl stoped looking a little upset and slowly went on, "I knew I had to tell so I came here."
"You know what sweetie, My friend is going to take you into a room and ask you a few questions, ok?" The girl nods and Olivia takes her hand and hands her to fin who walks her off into a room. Olivia turn their attention back to the computer. "This guy is an infamous child porn master! We finally have some one to testify!" Olivia looks down at her watch. "Come on we're going to be late for dinner!"
"YOu still want to go?" Elliot asked Olivia threw her arms around his neck.
"And miss a night out with you, I don't think so!" she grabbed her coat and waited for Elliot then they walked out together.

Olivia had a small smile when she saw Elliot the next morning when she saw him her smile grew to a wide grin annd her lips began to tingle. She walked over to his chair and gave him a small kiss. Then walked over and sat down in her own. Her smile fell as she read the case file on her desk. She looked up at Elliot.
"Yeah the girl was on the level. We gotta go check it out." Olivia sighed.
"We'll be lucky if we have the weekend off." Munch remarked.

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They were following a lead to where they thought Zoie might be, they came to an aboned wearhouse.
Olivia's heart was pounding in her cheast. "Zoie sweetheart? Can you hear me? If you can make a noise." Olivia heard thumping and moved twords the sound, "Do it again sweetie!" Olivia heard the sound coming through a door. She checked the knob it was unlocked. She slowly pushed open the door. She saw Zoie sitting in the middle of the floor her eyes wide with fear. Zoie began to shake her head widly. Trying to warn Olivia about something. But it was to late. Olivia felt a pain in the back of her head and fell to the floor. She saw a man walk to the front of her, then everything went dark.

All the officers were coming out of the building after not finding a sign of the man or the girl. Creagen was standing around with Elliot, Fin and Munch. "Where's Liv?" Creagen asked not even trying to hide the concern in his voice.

"You know her, she is probably still looking." Elliot replyed.

"No, I tryed her on her radio and her Cell." Creagen said growing more concered.

Elliot looked around, making sure that Olivia was not somewhere else. "That Basered was in there, he must have grabbed her." Elliot said trying and failing to controll his anger. "Let's go," he said to Fin and Munch. THey ran back inside the building looking for any clue that Olivia had once been there. "Over here! I need CSU!" Munch and Fin ran over to see what was there.

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The gang had been working around the clock to find Olivia. But no sign of her had come up. Elliot was pacing the floor, Fin, Munch, The caption and Casey were standing arond the white board. They had hit a wall. But at one officers desk the phone rang. Nobody noticed they were to busy. "Hey Elliot, It's for you, it's your brother!"
"My brother?" Elliot asked. "Oh my god! It's Liv." He shouted. He ran over to the phone gave the caption a look that told him to trace the call. "Hello?" Elliot said

"Who is this?" Asked the voice

"This is Elliot Stabler from the NYPD SVU." He said trying to draw out the time. "May I please talk to Olivia." He tryed to say clamly.

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The man turned around to face Olivia. "Here speak!" he shouted at her.

"What.... Elliot?" Olivia said who was very groggy from the cloraphle that had druged her. She could make out that she was sitting on a mattress on the floor. The room was small and dark with no window or lights. Her hands were tyied behind her back and her feet were tyed together. She thought about what to say that could possible help them find her. "Elliot it's dark." She reallly had no idea what else to tell him. "I love you." the man moved over to her and gaged her mouth with a pillow case. Olivia smelled something funny as the man held a cloth up to her nose and everything went dark again.

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"I love you" Elliot heard Olivia say. Then he heard the clicking of the phone on the other end.

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Elliot looked over at the caption who shook his head no. In a meaning that they did not get the the address. "But we know it's somewhere in Queens." Creagen said. As he turned around and headed back inside his office. Elliot turn around, Anger writen all over his face. Munch went up to him.
"It's not your falt man."
"Yes it is, I'm her partner, I was supposed to be with her, but we split up. Now I don't have her nor did we get the kid." Elliot said more to himself than to Munch, he walked out into the locker room. I can't belive this, It's all my falt. He thought to himself. He looked up trying not to cry, what if I lose her, I can't take that. She is so much more to me than just my partner, she was, IS my best friend.

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Olivia was waking up once again, but this time nobody was in the room. She slowly started to rememeber everything. A tear fell from her eye as she thought about the phone call to Elliot. Crying won't get me anywhere. Olivia scolded herself. I've got to get out of here. Her eyes were now ajusted to the dark of the room. She slipped her hands (Which are tied together behind her back) underneath her till they were under her knees. It hurt her arms having to strech them like that. Then she carefully slipped her arms underneath her feet so now they were in front of her.

She began to untie her arms the her legs and last the gag around her mouth. It was almost a whole hour till she got undone. She heard a sound and made out the footsteps of the man coming to the room. She quickly moved her self into a dark corner, put her hands back behind her back, turned her head away from the door and pretended to sleep. When the man opened the door, it appeared to him that Olivia was just the way he had left her. He was heading inside the room. Olivia's heart was pounding. But the man was interupted by a knock at the door. Who ever was at the door was quite demanding and flusted the man so much he turned and ran out the room. Closing but not bothering to lock the door.

Olivia lifted her head slowly to make sure he was gone. When she was sure she went over to the door and opened it, it was unlocked. She left the room and walked down a halway. She stoped at the corner when she heard voices she peeked around to see the man talking to someone at the door. She pulled her head back and turned around to go someother way. But somebody was right behind her and stopped her in her tracks.

Olivia had all but a second reacat as the man behind her grabbed her sholders and tryed to throw her agenst a wall. She kicked the man hard in his balls, and punched him a few times so he would stay down. She dragged him back to the room she was once in. Pulled him to the middle of the floor, careful to lock the door when she left. She went looking for a way out. The first window she spotted she ran at. She unlocked it and tryed very quitely to open the window and began to climb out. Half way out she hard a small voice, "What are you doing?" it asked.
Olivia pulled herself back in. She saw the girl about six with blonde hair pulled back into ponytails and with bangs hanging over her dark brown eyes. Olivia just starred at her for a second, a little shoocked to find a little girl here. "What's your name?" Olivia asked the little girl.
"Zoie, Are you here to take pictures with me?" Zoie asked as she smiled happily to Olivia.

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Cregan looked around the room to survay his men. "Fin and Munch, take the car around the east side," Cregan said as he drew lines on a map. "Elliot and I will go north and meet you here." He drew more lines to show this movment. "Evrybody know what to do." He looked arond to make sure everybody knew what htey were to do. "Ok let's go" he said and led the men out the door to hopefully where they would find Olivia.

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Elliot and Cregan arrived on the scene first to a run down old house. They waited for back up and went in. "Clear!" Elliot yelled as he looked in each bedroom. Soon it became clear that nobody was here and that they had been tricked. Elliot looked up at the sky in haste, "Why!" he shouted, He turned and punched the wall closest to him. He felt no pain as his hand began to bleed. In fact he would have never noticed it if Munch had not told him.

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Olivia looked at the little girl for a long time. The question threw her off balence she had no idea what to do, but she knew that she could not leave Zoie. "Where's your parents?"
"I don't know, The man took me away when I was four. He says that I belong to him now." Olivia was still at a disbelife. But she knew two things.
1. She had to get out of there.
2. She could not leave Zoie
So she picked Zoie up and told her "Sweetie, I'm going to take you some where. Okay?"
"Okay" Zoie replied, Olivia carfully lifted herself and Zoie out the window. She picked up the girl and ran as far away as she could from the house.

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A few hours later Elliot was back in the car following another lead, He could tell in his gut that this was where Olivia was going to be. When they arrived at the house and nobody answered the door, Elliot only had Olivia in mind as he busted down the door and ran in looking for Olivia. "Olivia! Bang on somthing if you can hear me!" He heard banging and ran to it as fast as he could.
He heard it coming from behind closed doors. He busted down the door and ran in. His heart fell when he relized that there were two men tied up inside instead of the room. Elliot was so angrey he ran over to the man banging. He pulled the gag off his mouth and began shouting at him.
"Where's Olivia, huh! What the hell did you do with her!" When the man gave no responce he grabbed the man by both shoulders and shoock him heard "Where is she!" this time with no answer he began punching the man. "Where the hell is she!?!" a single tear fell from his eye as he began to punch the man but cregan pulled him off of him before the punch landed. "I love her." he whispered.

Olivia hugged Zoie close to her as she ran down the emptey rode. Her lungs began to burn and Zoie was becoming heavier with every passing second that she just had to put her down. She grabbed the Zoie's hand and kept walking. They hand been walking for hours, if not for having to keep moving Olivia would have fallen asleep she felt a tug on her hand. "What is it sweetie?" she asked Zoie.

"Ms. Benson, I'm tired can we please find some where to sleep. Please my feet hurt so bad." Zoie pleaded. Olivia knew that they needed to stop for they were both tried and she had no idea where she was. She found a motel and went to check in. The clerck was passed out so Olivia wrote an IOU and took the key to a room.

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Elliot was sitting at his desk when Fin came out of interagation room to give Elliot an update. "Hey El." Elliot nodded in responce. "He gave us some crack pot story bout how they just hang out in a locked room. But we manged to get that Olivia knocked them out and tied them up and made an escape." Elliot just nodded "There are signs that there was a little girl living there. After taking a look on his computer we found that the little girl was Zoie."

"Knowing Liv.." Elliot said coming out of his daze, "She took Zoie with her, If she knew about Zoie she would nnever leave her." Munch walked out to join them.

"Maybe the Goverment is testing Olivia's skill as an SVU?" Munch threw in there.

"The whole Goverment?" Fin asked

"Yeah I'm sure that's the case John." Elliot said

"Elliot!" Sombody yelled from behind all three dectives turned and gasped in suprise as the person collaped they all ran to help.

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Olivia was in a deep sleep when she felt somebody shaking her awake. "Elliot?" She smiled.

"No... whos Elliot?" Zoie asked

"What?" Olivia said slowly waking up

"You've been saying his name." Zoie giggled "Elllliotttt! Oh Elliot!" Zoie mocked Olivia. BUt she stopped when she saw Olivia's face. It looked so sad that Zoie went over to her and apoligized.

"It's ok, hey what time is it?"

"Five"

"In the morning?"

"No, at night" Olivia sat up a in bed and dropped her feet over the side of the bed and slowly got up to go to the bathroom. She stopped at the door and faced Zoie.

"Better get ready to go." Zoie nodded and Olivia walked into the bathroom. Zoie walked over to turn on the light, she herself had only been awake half an hour. The room was in bad shape, One queen sized bed, and paint peeling from the wall, crackes in the celing. A bed and A lamp was all the room had and a bathroom.


An hour later Zoie and Olivia set off.

"I'm hungrey" Zoie winned.
"I know me too." Olivia replied back but I don't have any money.
"Where are we going?"
"To my work, we can find help there." Oliva said. She was begining to recinize where she was. She scooped up Zoie and began to run as fast as she could. All she could think about was getting to Elliot. The station house was 15 blocks away, Olivia ran the whole way with Zoie in her arms. When she got there only then did she put Zoie down. Olivia was just starting to feel how tired her body was that she changed her mind about taking the stairs.

When they got off the elavator Olivia looked down at Zoie and saw that she looked scared and worried, she thought it was just because of where they were. But Zoie could see how tired Olivia was. Olivia's body wanted to stop moving and quite all together but Olivia would not allow it just yet. Oliva Opened the door to see the gang sitting around Elliot at his desk.

"Elliot." she said he turned around and she smiled and allowed herself to faint.

Olivia opened her eyes, she was in a bed, not her bed. there were tubes in her arm, an IV. She looked around and noticed Elliot. "Where am I? How did I get here?" She asked him.

"Your in the hospital." he said taking her hand in his. "You collapsed in the squad room..." He looked at her to see if she remebered anything, "Do you remeber being kidnapped" He saw a spark of remeberence in her eyes. A few tears rolled down her cheecks.

"I missed you so much." She said crying " I thought I might never see you again. Elliot just nodded choking back tears of joy, relife and love. She looked at him, "Where's Zoie? What happened to her."

Elliot looked down, Olivia could see that the news was not good. "She had sever vaginal trama. When you fainted she went into shock and lost concousness a little after she arrived at the hospital. Then had an allergic reaction to the medican. She's had a rough time up it's lookin up." Elliot looked at her. " I love you."

"I love you too" Olivia said

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Zoie went back to live with her family and Olivia went back to work. Were everyone was glad to see her. Both men got 25 years for kidnapping Olivia and what they did to Zoie. As we all know Zoie lived in peace dealing with what thappened to her and Olivia just got into more trouble.
The End

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