sharrie15
Jul 17 2008, 02:10 PM
chapter 1: "im a the breaking point"
elliot is in the locker room talking to olivia.
olivia: what is going on with you ell?
elliot: i really srewed up this year.
olivia: you have to keep going.
elliot: im thinking about leaving svu for good.
olivia: what about all the stuff you and i been through?
elliot: i will alway remember that trust me.
olivia:are you leaving or staying ell?
ellliot:..............................................
magret2you
Jul 17 2008, 02:20 PM
OMG! Good! Is Elliot leaving? He can't leave SVU and leave Liv!!! OMG!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Bubba_Bridges
Jul 17 2008, 03:36 PM
Hi Bubba here, I will be waiting on chapter two.
sharrie15
Jul 18 2008, 08:18 AM
elliot: i have to see. i will give this job two more months.
olivia: i can not afford for you to leave right now.
elliot: i love the job, but i am tired of screwing up stuff.
olivia: we have been covering up alot for each other.
elliot:are you keeping a hiding something from me?
olivia: yes i am?
elliot: what is it?
olivia:.........................................................................
...
jolec
Jul 18 2008, 08:43 AM
Ok, let's create a new rule for fanfiction threads.....
NO CLIFFHANGER ALLOWED!!!!!!!!!!!!
Next part, please!
sharrie15
Jul 18 2008, 10:32 AM
olivia: i am having a baby.
elliot: when did you find out this?
olivia: three months ago.
elliot: what happen?
olivia: the guy i was dating and one night it just happen.
elliot: do i know the father?
olivia: yes?
elliot: who is it?
olivia:...........................................................
sharrie15
Jul 21 2008, 10:31 AM
olivia: when i went undercover it was dean porter.
elliot: the fbi agent?
olivia: yes.
elliot: i can beleive this
olivia: im sorry
elliot: why did you hide this from me?
olivia:......................................
sharrie15
Jul 21 2008, 11:25 AM
olivia: i cant tell you.
elliot: i am going home. call me when your ready to talk.
olivia: are you series?
elliot: yes?
olivia: go srew your self ell.
elliot walks out the room.
fin walks in the room.
fin: hey what just happen in here?
olivia: i dont want to talk about it.
fin: do you like elliot more then a friend?
olivia:.......................................................
magret2you
Jul 21 2008, 09:20 PM
I loved it!!!

But you need to update woman!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!
sharrie15
Jul 22 2008, 08:13 AM
olivia: i do. i found this out when i first started working with him.
fin: i know you are having a baby.
olivia: yeah i am.
fin: are you telling the baby father or are you going to make elliot the father?
olivia:.....................................
jolec
Jul 22 2008, 09:00 AM
Good!
Next part please
magret2you
Jul 22 2008, 11:13 AM
YAY!! You updated! I love it! But hurry with the next part PEAS!!! (please)
sharrie15
Jul 22 2008, 12:34 PM
olivia: i want elliot to be the father.
fin: what about the real father ?
olivia: i dont know wat dean wants.
fin: i think you need to go see him.
(later that night olivia went to dean house)
dean: hey olivia. what do we need to talk about?
olivia: i am having a baby.
dean: thats great. who is the father?
olivia: you are the father.
dean: we only did it one night
olivia: thats all it takes.
dean: do you want me in our kid life or you want someone else?
olivia:.........................................................................
....
sharrie15
Jul 23 2008, 08:22 AM
olivia: i would like you to be there for our child.
dean: i would like to.
olivia: what are you thinking dean?
dean: do you want to be my girlfriend or my wife?
olivia:.........................................................................
............
magret2you
Jul 23 2008, 01:19 PM
*Jaw hits the floor in shock*
WHAT?!!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!! Oh My God!!!! And Update is in SERIOUS need!!!!!! So please!
Update!!! SOON!!! Please!
Because I
it!!
sharrie15
Jul 24 2008, 08:12 AM
olivia: i have to decide.
dean: i would like us to be a family.
olivia: i know.
dean: if we are together and raising this child you have to get another partner.
olivia: why?
dean: you and elliot are to close.
olivia: no we are not.
dean: do you like him more then a partner?
olivia:.........................................................................
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jolec
Jul 24 2008, 08:53 AM
I will be clear....If she marries Dean, I die!!!
lol..
waiting for your update!
sharrie15
Jul 24 2008, 09:55 AM
olivia: he is my best friend.
dean: i will do what ever it takes to make you happy.
(they kiss)
later that night the new ada comes to see elliot.
elliot: Pietta what are you doing here?
pietta: i need to tell you something.
elliot: ok come in.
(she comes in and sit down)
pietta: where is your family?
elliot: they are at their moms house for the weekend.
pietta: ok.
elliot: what did you want to ask me.
pietta: we been dating for three months now and do you love me?
elliot:.........................................................................
..............
magret2you
Jul 24 2008, 11:05 AM
sharrie15
Jul 24 2008, 12:06 PM
elliot: i do love you with all my heart.
pietta: i just want to trust you so we can work out.
elliot: trust me we will and nothing will come between us.
pietta: i think your partner will
elliot: we are just best friends.
pietta: yeah.
(a knock at the door elliot looks out the peek hole it's olivia)
elliot: my partner is at the door
pietta:...........................................................
sharrie15
Jul 25 2008, 08:23 AM
QUOTE (sharrie15 @ Jul 24 2008, 01:06 PM)

elliot: i do love you with all my heart.
pietta: i just want to trust you so we can work out.
elliot: trust me we will and nothing will come between us.
pietta: i think your partner will
elliot: we are just best friends.
pietta: yeah.
(a knock at the door elliot looks out the peek hole it's olivia)
elliot: my partner is at the door
pietta:...........................................................
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