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sharrie15
chapter 1: "im a the breaking point"


elliot is in the locker room talking to olivia.


olivia: what is going on with you ell?

elliot: i really srewed up this year.

olivia: you have to keep going.

elliot: im thinking about leaving svu for good.

olivia: what about all the stuff you and i been through?

elliot: i will alway remember that trust me.

olivia:are you leaving or staying ell?

ellliot:..............................................
magret2you
OMG! Good! Is Elliot leaving? He can't leave SVU and leave Liv!!! OMG!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, I will be waiting on chapter two.
sharrie15
elliot: i have to see. i will give this job two more months.

olivia: i can not afford for you to leave right now.

elliot: i love the job, but i am tired of screwing up stuff.

olivia: we have been covering up alot for each other.

elliot:are you keeping a hiding something from me?

olivia: yes i am?

elliot: what is it?

olivia:.........................................................................
...
jolec
Ok, let's create a new rule for fanfiction threads.....
NO CLIFFHANGER ALLOWED!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Next part, please!
sharrie15
olivia: i am having a baby.

elliot: when did you find out this?

olivia: three months ago.

elliot: what happen?

olivia: the guy i was dating and one night it just happen.

elliot: do i know the father?

olivia: yes?

elliot: who is it?

olivia:...........................................................
sharrie15
olivia: when i went undercover it was dean porter.

elliot: the fbi agent?

olivia: yes.

elliot: i can beleive this

olivia: im sorry

elliot: why did you hide this from me?

olivia:......................................
sharrie15
olivia: i cant tell you.

elliot: i am going home. call me when your ready to talk.

olivia: are you series?

elliot: yes?

olivia: go srew your self ell.

elliot walks out the room.

fin walks in the room.

fin: hey what just happen in here?

olivia: i dont want to talk about it.

fin: do you like elliot more then a friend?

olivia:.......................................................

magret2you
I loved it!!! wub.gif But you need to update woman!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! happy.gif
sharrie15
olivia: i do. i found this out when i first started working with him.

fin: i know you are having a baby.

olivia: yeah i am.

fin: are you telling the baby father or are you going to make elliot the father?

olivia:.....................................

jolec
Good!
Next part please
magret2you
YAY!! You updated! I love it! But hurry with the next part PEAS!!! (please)
sharrie15
olivia: i want elliot to be the father.

fin: what about the real father ?

olivia: i dont know wat dean wants.

fin: i think you need to go see him.

(later that night olivia went to dean house)

dean: hey olivia. what do we need to talk about?

olivia: i am having a baby.

dean: thats great. who is the father?

olivia: you are the father.

dean: we only did it one night

olivia: thats all it takes.

dean: do you want me in our kid life or you want someone else?

olivia:.........................................................................
....

sharrie15
olivia: i would like you to be there for our child.

dean: i would like to.

olivia: what are you thinking dean?

dean: do you want to be my girlfriend or my wife?

olivia:.........................................................................
............
magret2you
*Jaw hits the floor in shock* WHAT?!!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!! Oh My God!!!! And Update is in SERIOUS need!!!!!! So please!

Update!!! SOON!!! Please! sad.gif Because I wub.gif it!!
sharrie15
olivia: i have to decide.

dean: i would like us to be a family.

olivia: i know.

dean: if we are together and raising this child you have to get another partner.

olivia: why?

dean: you and elliot are to close.

olivia: no we are not.

dean: do you like him more then a partner?

olivia:.........................................................................
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jolec
I will be clear....If she marries Dean, I die!!!
lol..
waiting for your update!

sharrie15
olivia: he is my best friend.

dean: i will do what ever it takes to make you happy.

(they kiss)

later that night the new ada comes to see elliot.

elliot: Pietta what are you doing here?

pietta: i need to tell you something.

elliot: ok come in.

(she comes in and sit down)

pietta: where is your family?

elliot: they are at their moms house for the weekend.

pietta: ok.

elliot: what did you want to ask me.

pietta: we been dating for three months now and do you love me?

elliot:.........................................................................
..............
magret2you
*coughs, coughs, chokes!!!* OMG!!!!! Elliot is dating the new ADA?!?!?!!?!??!!?!? ohmy.gif H-how- When did that happen?!?!?! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! happy.gif UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! sad.gif
sharrie15
elliot: i do love you with all my heart.

pietta: i just want to trust you so we can work out.

elliot: trust me we will and nothing will come between us.

pietta: i think your partner will

elliot: we are just best friends.

pietta: yeah.

(a knock at the door elliot looks out the peek hole it's olivia)

elliot: my partner is at the door

pietta:...........................................................
sharrie15
QUOTE (sharrie15 @ Jul 24 2008, 01:06 PM) *
elliot: i do love you with all my heart.

pietta: i just want to trust you so we can work out.

elliot: trust me we will and nothing will come between us.

pietta: i think your partner will

elliot: we are just best friends.

pietta: yeah.

(a knock at the door elliot looks out the peek hole it's olivia)

elliot: my partner is at the door

pietta:...........................................................

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