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bensonbrave
Well everybody's been telling me to change my story line. So that's what I'm going to do. I just need fresh ideas 'cuz I really have none! I just am writing some stuff with Cassie. (Now she is my torture victim of insaness) (Sorry cheesy)

Do me a favor, vote for kill the chapter "somewhere in brooklyn." It'll held you all alot. All of you please. 'Cuz if you knew what that chapter contains (well I'm still not going to tell you) you guys would puke.

I'd think it'd be funny if somebody voted for "Kill of abbi" Ironic actaully
Um... The vote choices I'm writing them as I think of it. So I'm not trying to offend the charecters in anyway.

Now Bobby being killed... that one... I don't like it either. Infact I don't like most of my choices.

And I'm torturing Abby the most in the balet because she's a pain in the butt to most of you I think.

That's all I can come up with for now. Most of these I probably won't do but... it's just fun to see how people answer and how much they hate Abbi. ::laughs:: Alright I admit I do toture abby more than the rest. Ok? Thanx! And off we go!! (Now I have willie wonka stuck in my heaed.
Now I'm using this text so that if you do not want to read this you don't have to!!

There Bubba!! Now Everyone please vote for screw the chapter somewhere in brooklyn. It's really getting on my nerves, and if you tell me to take it out I sincerly will.
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, if you want someone to read your post, you going have to make your font bigger where someone can read it.
tornheartworld
Sorry I wanted to see if someone PM'd me. I think it's rather funny someone voted for KIll off abby and Abby kills herself. Who was that? I'm not mad... more amused. Now I'm laughing my ass off at the votes. And no I am not about to kill off Abbi. (Oo... robins spelling(the full names quite funny) She's only died in an alternate version in where Alex dies of a gunshot by nicole first. Then when she's like 20 years old she gets herself killed.
And yes that is the only version where she does die. (Bowling for soup: when we die)

I'm not going to stop writing though... hey I'll continue Tatto, and Grow. (Danny and Alex shippy is the last story (wordiness)
tornheartworld
Alright then someone give me something to write about 'cuz I'm really bored and I'm in the mood to write. Challenge anyone?
CIobbsessed
Ok here's some ideas
#1 If you're not going to do something with Abby like kill her off, or do something crazy like that, stop writing. We don't want to hear about her.
#2 Bring in the older kids more. They're intresting aren't they? )I'm sure they're not as lame as Abby is. tongue.gif )
#3 Yes do add some more romanitic tension between Alex and Bobby. Like when she was raped, maybe she felt uncofertable having sex with him because of the after shock.
#4 Yes please kill Abby off. She's the most annoying thing I have intcountered in fanfiction(no I take that back it's my mooninites/thranduil (he was demented) from my lord of the rings fanfiction) But she sure as hell is annoying
#5 Have Ross say he's sorry for their loss. Where the heck is that? That's like required in a charecter death story!
#6 Have Abby stay in her room at all cost until the nights over please. If you're going to rewrite it
#7 Was Abby raped? We never heard that? And frankly it wasn't explained quite right if she was or wasn't.
#8 Just kill Nicole off already, and frank. Please
I have a question for you to answer. How would Bobby feel if one of his kids were on drugs/alcohol and what would he do? If you can't answer that question you should stop writing. You have no talent whatsoever in writing. I have no idea why I'm asking that question but it could help.


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