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FusseKat
A/N: This is an original story and script idea, or least mostly original - after billions of hours spent watching crime dramas, I can't be too sure - All rights to the recognizable characters from the world of Law & Order: Criminal Intent belong to others. I mean no harm.

I started this about three years ago. Got stuck, put it away, forgot about it, thought I'd lost it when my computer crashed, was prompted to think about it after seeing a post on the site yesterday, found it - YEA! - and am working on it again. I've written a good bit today, so it would seem I'm back 'into it', although I don't have it all planned out yet, still have many scenes to plan and write. Can't you almost hear the "Doink Doink"? When I started this that format still was in place, and I'm going to go forward with it....


Posting just a part of this to get a sense if reading a script appeals to anyone (everything posted so far was written long ago, but I do have a little more ready to go).... Please let me know. R & R. All feedback greatly appreciated.
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SCENE 1


INT. HOTEL ROOM
CLARIDGE HOUSE HOTEL, 7TH AVENUE.
APRIL 29th 12:30 pm


Scene opens with CSU photographer pulling back after taking several photos of the body of a young woman. Her nude body is lying face down. Her hair and upper body are covered in blood. Her head is turned so that the right side of her face is lying in the blood that has pooled around her head.

Detectives ALEX EAMES and ROBERT GOREN enter through the open door.

EAMES:
What have you got for us?

EAMES asks as GOREN kneels down next to the body.

CSU TECH:
Detectives, what we have so far is a Jane Doe victim Best guess is she's been dead about eight hours, of course we'll be able to narrow that down during the full autopsy. Blunt force trauma to the head. No obvious sign of a murder weapon.

GOREN:
Her name is Sheila Larsen.

Goren is still kneeling next to the body, but now his hand is raking through his hair.

EAMES:
You know her?

GOREN:
She's…. I used to date a friend of hers.

CSU TECH:
(UNFAZED BY THE DETECTIVE'S WORDS, CONTINUES)
Signs of sexual activity. The bed has been used. Several towels also. Looks like they took showers after the fact.

Glancing back at GOREN before she asks the question…

EAMES:
DNA? Semen?

CSU TECH:
Doesn't look like it so far. The sheets haven't come up a positive. Maybe we can pull something from the towels.

GOREN:
If we're looking for her sex partner, we need to be looking for a woman. Sheila Larsen was gay.


ooOOoo

SCENE 2

INT: CLARIDGE HOTEL, FRONT DESK

A dignified looking man wearing a name badge proclaiming him as Michael Anderson - Front Desk Manager. He is in his late 40's is looking down at the computer screen in front of him as Goren and Eames wait. Goren leans over the desk trying to get a glimpse of the screen for himself.

ANDERSON:
The room was reserved three days ago with a company credit card. Under the name of Sheila Larsen.

EAMES:
Does that give you the name of the company on the card?

ANDERSON:
Yes, it's Hazelhurst Productions. Brooklyn. But I don't have the street address.

GOREN sighs and nods his head.

GOREN:
I know where it is.

EAMES:
Thank you Mr. Anderson. If we have any more questions, we'll be in touch.

ooOOoo

SCENE 3


INT OF CAR
THE DETECTIVES ARE IN THEIR SUV STUCK IN TRAFFIC. EAMES IS DRIVING, TAPPING HER FINGERS ON THE STEERING WHEEL AS THE CAR COMES TO A COMPLETE STOP IN TRAFFIC. GOREN SITS SILENTLY. STARING OUT THE PASSENGER SIDE WINDOW.


EAMES:
Did you know her well?

GOREN:
Well enough. She was a good person. Very kind. But it's been over three years since I've seen her. A lot can change in three years. She could have been mixed up in something…

THE REST OF THE DRIVE IS IN SILENCE, UNTIL THEY NEAR THE BROOKLYN EXIT.


GOREN:
Take the next exit off the freeway. Then turn right. It'll be on the left, about two blocks down.

EAMES:
How do you know where this Hazelhurst Productions is?

GOREN:
Sheila's partner…

EAMES turns to face GOREN

GOREN:
… her business partner is a woman I used to date. Allison… Allison Tyler.
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, I like how you did it. Good job!
janpop4
Nice start. Is there more? Please continue if there is more.
FusseKat
Okay, so I don't really need all that much encouragement - LOL. (THANKS BUBBA & CIFAN)
I've changed the formatting a little - added scene numbers, and bolded some lines - hopefully to make it easier to read.
With this post, I've now posted everything I wrote years ago (with a few editorial tweaks, a few changes and additions). I wrote like a demon yesterday and now have 10 new scenes (some are very short scenes) to post as soon as I tweak them a little - probably not until Saturday or Sunday.


ooOOoo

SCENE 4

HAZELHURST PRODUCTIONS
3657 DWYER
APRIL 29
TH 3:30 PM


THE RECEPTION AREA IS DECORATED WITH SEVERAL BLACK LEATHER SLING BACK CHAIRS, LOTS OF GLASS AND CROME ACCESSORIES. BEHIND THE HIGH FRONT DESK A YOUND WOMAN LOOKS UP AS THE TWO DETECTIVES ENTER. SHE'S SPEAKING INTO THE TELEPHONE HEADSET ATTACHED TO HER EAR. SHE SMILES AS THEY COME FORWARD.

The two detectives show their badges as they come forward.

GOREN:
We'd like to see Allison Tyler. Is she in?

RECEPTIONIST:
Yes, just… just one moment. Can I tell her what this is regarding? Your names please?

GOREN:
Detectives Eames and Goren.

RECEPTIONIST:
Does this have anything to do with Sheila? We…we haven't been able to find her all day and she missed an important meeting this …

The receptionist's voice slowly trails off as Eames looks over at Goren and then back at the receptionist.

EAMES:
Could you let Ms. Tyler know that we're here?

RECEPTIONIST:
Yes, of course.

The young woman punches in a number into the switchboard.

RECEPTIONIST:
Allison, there are two detectives out here who'd like to speak with you.

PAUSE AS THE RECEPTIONIST LISTENS TO HER HEADSET

RECEPTIONIST:
They haven't said.

PAUSE AS THE RECEPTIONIST LISTENS TO HER HEADSET

RECEPTIONIST:
Their names are Eames and Goren.

PAUSE AS THE RECEPTIONIST LISTENS TO HER HEADSET

RECEPTIONIST:
Um.. Yes.

Drawing out her reply, she looks up at Goren standing in front of her.

RECEPTIONIST:
OK…. (PAUSE) Allison said she'll meet you in the conference room. And that you should know where that is.

GOREN:
Yes, I do.

ooOOoo

Scene 5

INT- CONFERENCE ROOM - HAZELHURST PRODUCTIONS

EAMES AND GOREN ARE SEATED FACING THE DOOR AND WALL OF FROSTED WINDOWS FACING THE INTERIOR OF THE BUILDING. THEY CAN SEE THE SILHOUETTE OF A WOMAN APPROACHING THE DOOR. THE DOOR DOESN'T OPEN IMMEDIATELY. WHEN IT DOES A TALL WOMAN IN HER MID 30'S WALKS IN. SHE'S DRESSED IN SLIM BLACK PANTS, WHITE BUTTON DOWN BLOUSE WITH THE SLEEVES CASUALLY ROLLED UP. HER LONG BROWN HAIR IS PULLED BACK INTO A PONYTAIL SITTING LOW ON THE NAPE OF HER NECK.

She walks into the room and looks at the two detectives. Her arms wrap around her waist as she looks over at Goren.

ALLISON: (SOFTLY)
Just tell me. Just say it, Robert.

EAMES speaks up before GOREN can.

EAMES:
We're sorry to have to tell you that your partner was found dead earlier today. We're sorry for your loss.

ALLISON'S eyes fill with tears and she looks away, out the window overlooking a vacant lot. She nods her head. She walks over to the table and sits, raising a trembling hand to her lips, pressing hard.

GOREN leans forward and puts his hand on her one hand that rests on the table.

GOREN:
I'm so sorry Allison. I know how close you two were.

ALLISON looks down at GOREN'S hand on hers and then up into his face. She slowly nods, acknowledging his words.

ALLISON: (SADLY)
Thank you Bobby. How? What happened?

EAMES:
She was found beaten to death at the Claridge Hotel in Manhattan. Is there anything you can tell us about why she'd be at the Claridge?

ALLISON:
I… I really don't know. Um… there isn't any business reason that she'd have gone there. It, it must have been personal, but she didn't mention anything to me about it.

EAMES:
Was she involved with anyone? Seeing someone new?

ALLISON:
Not that I know of. She broke up with her girlfriend several months ago and hasn't mentioned meeting anyone new. We've been working so hard the last month or so that I wouldn't think she'd have met anyone. But we haven't had the time or inclination to catch up with each others lives, even though we see each other almost everyday.

GOREN:
What have you been working on?

ALLISON:
We have a film that is almost finished that we're entering in the documentary competition at the Tribeca Film Festival and we're also negotiating a new distribution deal with Universal for several of our pictures.

GOREN:
What type of film? How's that going?

ALLISON:
It's a documentary about…

(looks uncomfortably at Detective Goren before continuing)

… three people living with schizophrenia. And what it's been like for their families.

EAMES glances over at GOREN and notes his frozen expression, sensing a stillness settle over her partner.

GOREN:
I'd like to see that.

ALLISON:
I… I'll see that you get an invitation to the premiere, if we get accepted into Tribeca.

(CONTINUING NERVOUSLY)

The film is coming together nicely and we'll have all the post-production work finished by the end of the month. The distribution deal is mostly being handled by our lawyers now. Sheila and I and Universal have agreed on all the particulars. Sheila was instrumental in hooking us up with the distributor. We should also be ready to sign that by the end of the month too.

GOREN nods and looks over at EAMES.

EAMES:
Well, congratulations. That would seem to be a big deal for you.

ALLISON:
It is. This is what we've been working towards for a long time. It's a big boost for the house.

EAMES:
So, you've been working on the film? And Sheila the distribution deal?

ALLISON: (NODDING)
Yes, mostly. Although we both tended to want to be involved in every aspect of the process.

EAMES:
Can we see her office?

ALLISON:
Certainly. Would you like to do that now?

EAMES:
Yes, if it's convenient.

ALLISON:
Yes, of course. I'll show you the way.

ooOOoo

SCENE 6

INT - HAZELHURST PRODUCTIONS
OUTSIDE SHEILA LARSEN'S OFFICE


The three leave the office and walk down the hall. ALLISON stops at a desk in front of a door marked SHEILA LARSEN. Her assistant MARY JENKINS sits at the desk.


ALLISON:
Mary, these officers are going to need full access to Sheila's files and her office. I trust that you'll help them with whatever they need.

MARY:
Then you still haven't heard from Sheila?

ALLISON:
These are detectives from the Major Case Squad, they're here because Sheila was killed last night … it looks like she was murdered.

MARY:
Murdered? OHMIGOD. No....

ALLISON: (NODDING)
I'll be in my office. If I can help you with anything, just have Mary call me. Mary, if you could try to keep this quiet for now. I'm going to gather everyone together as soon as I can and make a formal announcement, before everyone goes home today.

MARY: (SHOCKED)
Sure, Allison. (PAUSE) If you'll follow me Detectives, I'll get you set up.

ooOOoo

SCENE 7

INT - HAZELHURST PRODUCTIONS
INSIDE SHEILA LARSEN'S OFFICE


EAMES:
I'm not seeing anything here. It all looks like straight forward business paperwork. I did find out who the lawyers are. Do you think Ms. Tyler will waive privilege so that they can talk to us?

GOREN:
Yeah, I'm not finding anything that could give us a starting point. It will look suspicious if she doesn't.

EAMES walks over to a bookcase and finds a picture of SHEILA LARSEN and ALLISON TYLER.

EAMES:
Is this awkward for you? Considering your history with Sheila's partner?

GOREN:
Sure, a little. Aren't most things a awkward for me anyway?

EAMES:
You've got a point.

ooOOoo

SCENE 8

ONE POLICE PLAZA
MEDICAL EXAMINERS OFFICE
APRIL 30
TH 10:00AM


M.E. RODGERS IS COMPARING SLIDES UNDER A MICROSCOPE AS DETECTIVES EAMES AND GOREN WALK INTO THE EXAMINING ROOM. TURNING TO FACE THE DETECTIVES, SHE PICKS UP A FILE FOLDER AND HANDS IT TO EAMES.

RODGERS:
Take your pick Detectives. Do you want a death by blunt force trauma, barbiturate overdose or complications due to the AIDS virus?

EAMES:
She had AIDS?

RODGERS:
Tox reports came back with AZT and lexvira. This has been ongoing long-term treatment. It looks like it's been well-controlled for years, but she was no longer just hiv-positive, the virus had gone active. She was about to become a very sick young woman.

EAMES:
Would she have been aware of that?

RODGERS:
Depends on the last time she visited her doctor. My guess is yes.

GOREN:
What kind of barbiturates had she ingested?

RODGERS: (NODDING TO THE REPORT IN EAMES HAND)
Not ingested, but injected. Phenobarbital. I found two needle marks. One on the left buttock and the other behind the ear. One injection would have been more than enough to do the job. Two is just overkill.

EAMES:
And the blunt force trauma?

RODGERS:
Something rounded, but with a protrusion, I've never seen anything like it before. The center of the wound is more deeply indented than the edges which are curved. I'd say fairly heavy. Or swung with incredible force.

GOREN:
She was injected first. So… so that she'd be unconscious when she was beaten to death? Why the second injection?

EAMES:
Maybe the first one didn't act fast enough and she was fighting against her killer.

RODGERS:
I saw no real signs of a struggle. No skin, blood or fibers under her nails. Despite what the CSU tech said, signs of physical sexual activity are inconclusive. I understand that she was gay, so physical signs of activity aren't always present. Sheila Larsen was also six weeks pregnant.
flashymom
Sounds like a hate crime. Someone didn't like the fact that Sheila and her partner were going to have a baby......

This is good. I don't mind reading a script. Keep it going, please.


janpop4
This is good and I like reading it this way. Easier for me to read in my opinion.
FusseKat
SCENE 9

APARTMENT BUILDING OF SHEILA LARSEN
3625 CENTRAL PARK WEST, APARTMENT 1208
APRIL 30
th 1:15PM

GOREN AND EAMES STEP OFF THE ELEVATOR WITH THE BUILDING’S MANAGER. AS THEY WALK DOWN THE CORRIDOR, THE BUILDING MANAGER CASTS SEVERAL LOOKS BETWEEN THE TWO DETECTIVES.

BUILDING MANAGER:
Are you sure this is proper?

EAMES:
I’m sure Ms. Larson won’t object.

GOREN:
Do you know of any visitors Ms. Larson may have had lately?

BUILDING MANAGER:
Well, I think she may have had a new boyfriend.

GOREN and EAMES exchange looks.

GOREN:
We hadn’t heard about a boyfriend yet. Did you ever meet him?

BUILDING MANAGER:
No, not formally. But I did see him with Ms. Larsen on several occasions. And, well they seemed very friendly.

GOREN:
Ever hear his name?

BUILDING MANAGER:
No, not that I can recall.

EAMES:
How about a description?

BUILDING MANAGER:
Oh, let’s see. Mid 30’s, sandy brown hair, on the thin side, about as tall as you, Detective Goren.

They reach SHEILA LARSEN’S apartment, the building manager unlocks the door, and steps back to allow the detectives to enter. The man stays, shifting from side to side trying to see into the apartment.

EAMES:
We can handle it from here. Thank you.

EAMES pushes the door closed and exchanges a look with Goren as she shakes her head.

ooOOoo

SCENE 10

INT: APARTMENT OF SHEILA LARSEN

EAMES:
Do you think he wanted to help us with the search? My guess is that it wouldn’t be the first time he’s searched a tenant’s apartment. For such a ritzy address, he seems like he’d be more at home as a flophouse manager.

GOREN:
Well, at least he’s attentive enough to know about a boyfriend. And now we do too.

EAMES:
Did Sheila play for both teams? Or was he really just a friend, maybe her beard?

GOREN:
The Sheila I knew was a very friendly, fun girl. She had a lot of friends – male and female, gay and straight. She was always very secure with who she was, she wasn’t the type to need a beard.

GOREN walks over to the desk and pages through an open appointment book. Eames is shuffling through the stack of unopened mail they had brought up with them.

EAMES:
Just bills and advertisements. An invitation to a gallery opening in SoHo.

GOREN:
She had several appointments with a Roger Bly of Cascade Films. I thought Allison told us their deal was with Universal?

EAMES:
She did.

EAMES wanders out into the kitchen.

EAMES:
I think I just found the boyfriend. A picture of Sheila and a slim, tall sandy hair man in his mid 30’s.

As EAMES walks out of the kitchen with the picture in hand, the two detectives turn back to the front door as they hear a key in the lock. Both reach for their guns.

The door opens and ALLISON TYLER enters.

GOREN:
Allison? What are you doing here?

ALLISON:
OH… you scared me. I … there should be a copy of the final version of the contract with Universal in Sheila’s desk. I need to get it to our lawyers this afternoon. It wasn’t at work, so I’d hoped it would be here. Her death has put the future of the movie in jeopardy and the lawyers are meeting to try and find a way out of this.

GOREN:
I’m sorry to hear that, Allison.

EAMES:
So, you have a key to Sheila’s apartment? Have you been here since she was found?

ALLISON:
(looks perplexed at the questions)
Um, yes I have a key. I’ve had one for a long time. And no, I haven’t been here since she was found. I called and spoke with your Captain Deakins and he said it shouldn’t be a problem for me to come in and get it. The apartment wasn’t part of the crime scene.

EAMES’ cell phone rings. She reads the caller ID – it reads: DEAKINS

EAMES:
Yes, Captain. She’s here now.

The room is quiet as EAMES listens.

EAMES:
I’ll let him know. Thanks Captain.

GOREN:
Let me know what?

EAMES:
Ms. Larsen’s doctor, Dr. Sorenson is back in town. He called Deakins and told the captain he’d be available to see us at our convenience. The Captain also apologized for not letting us know you were on your way down here.

ALLISON:
So, is it all right if I look for the contracts?

GOREN:
Yes. Sure. Let me ask you a question though.

GOREN reaches over and takes the photo of SHEILA and the unknown man and walks over to ALLISON.

GOREN:
Can you tell us who this man is?

Allison reaches out and takes the photo.

ALLISON:
Oh, well, that’s Mark. Mark Davis.

EAMES:
How long had Sheila and Mr. Davis been seeing each other?

ALLISON: (SHOCKED)
What? No… no they weren’t. Mark and I …

Slowly ALLISON sinks onto the sofa as realization begins to dawn on her.

EAMES:
Well this photo does make it seem otherwise.

The photo shows SHEILA LARSEN and MARK DAVIS on a beach toasting each other with a tropical looking drink.

GOREN:
How long have you and… Mark, been seeing each other? Did the three of you ever take a vacation together?

ALLISON: (SHAKING HER HEAD)
Mark and I have been together about a year. And no, the three of us never took a vacation together. I’m not much for vacations in the middle of a project, but that didn’t stop Sheila, she took a trip to St. Barts about four months ago. And Mark… that’s the same time that he had business meetings in Los Angeles.

PAUSE

ALLISON: (SADLY)
He… he didn’t have meetings in Los Angeles, did he?

GOREN:
We… we’re going to have to find out.

ALLISON reaches across GOREN for a pen and a piece of paper and writes…

ALLISON:
This is his work number and his cell. He works for Cascade Films.

Handing the sheet of paper to GOREN she sees the contract she’d stopped by to pick up.

ALLISON:
This… I think this is the paperwork I needed. Is it all right if I take it?

GOREN:
Certainly. Here you go.

GOREN picks up the contract and hands it to ALLISON. With a nod, she turns and walks past EAMES and opens the door. Stopping in the doorway, she turns back to face the detectives, and looks closely at GOREN.

ALLISON:
I’d appreciate it if you could keep me informed about.. about the investigation.

GOREN:
Of course we will.

Again, ALLISON nods and glances over to EAMES.

ALLISON:
Thank you. Thank you detectives.

Turning back she walks out of the apartment and quietly closes the door.

EAMES:
Well, I guess our next stop is Cascade Films.

When GOREN doesn’t answer, EAMES takes a few steps closer to him…

EAMES:
Bobby? You… you really liked her didn’t you?

GOREN:
I told you Eames, Sheila was a nice friendly girl.

EAMES:
I wasn’t talking about Sheila Larsen.

GOREN: (A LONG PAUSE)
You’re right Eames, our next stop is Cascade Films.

GOREN picks up his notebook and starts for the door. When he opens the door, he turns to see EAMES standing where he left her.

GOREN:
Are you coming?

EAMES shrugs as she follows GOREN out of the apartment.

ooOOoo

SCENE 11

CASCADE FILMS
3515 34
th STREET
APRIL 31
st 10:30AM


THE A YOUNG RECEPTIONIST IS LEADING GOREN AND EAMES TO A CONFERENCE ROOM WHERE ROGER BLY AND ANOTHER MAN MARK DAVIS ARE IN THE MIDST OF A HEATED EXCHANGE. BEFORE THE DETECTIVES REACH THE CONFERENCE ROOM, MARK DAVIS STORMS OUT OF THE CONFERENCE ROOM AND BARRELS PAST GOREN AND EAMES. HE STRIDES INTO HIS OFFICE AND SLAMS THE DOOR BEHIND HIM. ROGER BLY WIPES A HAND ACROSS HIS FACE. AS HE NOTICES THE APPROACHING HIM HE STRAIGHTENS HIS SHOULDERS AND STEPS UP TO GREET THEM.

EAMES:
Well, he seems a little upset…


ROGER:
Um… just a little artistic difference. He’s working out a marketing campaign for our latest movie and seems to be having a little conflict with the actor/director/producer of the film. I was trying to smooth things out… but I don’t think I was very successful with it.


GOREN:
Would any of his stress have to do with the death of Sheila Larsen would it?


ROGER:
Well, obviously Mark would be upset about that. He worked with Sheila on several projects and the two have become quite friendly over the years.


GOREN:
Any thing more than ‘quite friendly’?


ROGER:
Not that I’m aware of, you’d have to ask Mark.


GOREN:
We will.


ROGER: (LOOKING NERVOUS)
Why… why don’t we go into my office. It’s just across the hall.


INT: ROGER BLY’S OFFICE

ROGER BLY, A FIFTY-ISH LOOKING MAN, DRESSED CASUALLY IN DOCKERS AND OPEN NECKED SHIRT WALKED AROUND HIS DESK TO SIT AS HE WAVES THE TWO DETECTIVES TO THE SOFA AND CHAIRS ON THE FAR SIDE OF THE ROOM. GOREN AND EAMES CHOOSE THE CHAIRS PLACED IN FRONT OF THE SOFA. GOREN PLACES HIS NOTEBOOK ON THE TABLE.

ROGER BLY:
I was shocked to hear about Sheila. She was… was a lovely girl.

GOREN:
How did you know her?

ROGER:
Sheila has been shopping projects all over town for the last half-dozen years. There are only so many outlets for the type of films, documentaries mainly, that Hazelhurst makes. We’ve worked with Sheila and Allison several times over the years.

GOREN:
Is that how Allison Tyler and Mark Davis met?

ROGER: (FIDGETS IN HIS SEAT)
I believe so.

GOREN:
So it would also be how Sheila Larsen and Mark Davis met?

ROGER:
Again, I believe so.

GOREN:
It’s our understanding from Allison that Universal is handling their current film. And yet we found several appointments…

GOREN leans forwards and opens his binder.

GOREN:
…over a dozen with you in the last month. What would those have been about?

After several moments of silence, ROGER sighs before answering.

ROGER:
Sheila was considering leaving Hazelhurst. We… we were in talks to bring her here. She wanted more then a small film company, we’re a little bigger with a higher profile. She saw us as another stop on her way to Los Angeles.

GOREN:
Did Allison know about Sheila’s plans to leave?

ROGER:
I really wouldn’t know. We didn’t discuss it. We really did keep our conversations about contract negotiations.

EAMES:
You never asked if her partner knew if she was planning to leave?

ROGER:
It was really none of my business. I figured that was between Sheila and Allison.

EAMES:
What can you tell us about Sheila Larsen and Mark Davis?

ROGER:
Not much. They worked together on several projects. Seemed to like each other. But then most people seemed to like Sheila. Most people seem to like Mark as well.

EAMES:
Did they have a personal relationship as well as business?

ROGER:
I know they had dinner several times lately, but other than that… I really don’t know.

GOREN stands and starts walking around the office. He peers closely at several awards lining the walls.

GOREN:
The Tribeca Film Festival, Cannes Film Festival, Sundance… You’ve been very successful, lately.

ROGER:
We’ve been very fortunate. I have a great staff, dedicated and hardworking who just want to film, produce and get great films out to people.

GOREN:
That photo on your desk. The one with you and Sheila? When was that taken?

ROGER:
Um… that was… earlier this year at the Sundance Film Festival.

GOREN:
So, has everything always been strictly professional between you and Sheila?

ROGER:
I never said things had always been strictly professional, merely our latest talk. Sheila, Allison and I have been friendly for years. Now, it that’s all I have some calls I need to return to the West Coast. If I can be of any other assistance, please call my assistant and we’ll see when we can fit you in.

ooOOoo

SCENE 12

INT: MARK DAVIS’ OFFICE

MARK DAVIS SITS AT HIS DESK, AND GOREN AND EAMES ARE SITTING IN TWO CHAIRS IN FRONT OF THE DESK

MARK DAVIS:
So you’re Robert Goren. Bobby. Allison’s mentioned you. You’re not exactly what I was expecting. Although if you were to ask me what I was expecting, I couldn’t tell you, other than you’re not it.

EAMES:
Mr. Davis, could you tell us then, how long you’ve been seeing both Allison Tyler and Sheila Larsen?

MARK:
Well, I’ve known both girls since I came here to Cascade. About two years now. Allison and I started seeing each other about a year ago. Sheila and I about six months ago.

EAMES:
We were under the impression that Sheila Larsen was gay.

MARK:
Well, all I can tell you, is she decided the other team wasn’t as bad as she thought.

EAMES:
Does Allison Tyler know about your relationship with Sheila?

MARK:
I think you know the answer to that, especially after yesterday afternoon. I certainly never told her. Sheila may have always gone after what she wanted, but she would never have intentionally wanted to hurt Allison.

EAMES:
And she wanted you?

MARK:
Apparently. Look, it wasn’t a big deal. Sheila was just, I don’t know, experimenting with a different life choice. And Allison, well that’s never been as serious as she thought it was.

EAMES:
Was?

MARK:
As you can imagine, she was a little upset last night.

GOREN:
When was the last time you saw Sheila?

MARK:
The night she died. We had dinner at La Chateux. She was drinking – a lot. We had an argument, she left me at the restaurant and I went home. I tried calling her at work the next day, and then later that afternoon, I heard that she was dead.

GOREN:
Did you know that Sheila Larsen was pregnant?

MARK:
So… she hadn’t taken care of that yet. Hmm. Yes, detectives, I knew. She told me about a month ago. She was going to have an abortion. I didn’t want a kid and she didn’t want a kid. It happened.

EAMES:
You seem real broken up by it.

MARK:
Look, I told you, it wasn’t that big a deal between us. She was incredibly nice and I liked her, hell everyone liked Sheila, but we weren’t in love. It was just sex.

EAMES:
What about Allison Tyler?

MARK sits in silence as GOREN stares at him. Silence.


EAMES:
That’s what I thought.

ooOOoo

SCENE 13

EXT. CASCADE FILMS BUILDING

GOREN AND EAMES EXIT THE BUILDING AND WALK TOWARDS THEIR CAR. EAMES CAUTIOUSLY LOOKS OVER AT HER PARTNER.

EAMES:
We’re going to have to question her, again. In greater detail.

GOREN: (NODDING SLOWLY)
I know. I… I think you should probably take that one, on your own. We can split up and I’ll go see Dr. Sorenson.

EAMES:
OK. First thing tomorrow, we’ll split up. We need to get back and brief the captain before the captain's meeting this afternoon.

ooOOoo

SCENE 14

MANHATTAN GENERAL HOSPITAL
MAY 1
ST 10:30AM


INT: MEDICAL OFFICE OF WILLIAM SORENSON, M.D.

WILLIAM SORENSON IS A MAN IN HIS EARLY 40’S, RECEDING HAIR LINE, DEEPLY TANNED. SORENSON AND GOREN ARE IN THE DOCTOR’S LOUNGE EACH WITH A CUP OF COFFEE IN FRONT OF THEM. GOREN’S NOTEBOOK IS BALANCED ON HIS CROSSED LEG.

GOREN:
How long had Sheila Larsen been a patient of yours?

SORENSON:
Almost ten years.

GOREN:
So you’re very familiar with her history…

SORENSON:
Yes. A great deal of it. Her HIV status required frequent visits. She became one of my patients just after her diagnosis with HIV.

GOREN:
The Medical Examiner found that her status had changed. She had aids now.

SORENSON: (NODDING)
We fought it for a long time, but yes her status changed about six months ago. We were fighting it aggressively and she had a very positive attitude. Her prognosis was still very good.

GOREN:
The M.E. also says that she was approximately six months pregnant.

SORENSON: (SHOCKED)
I wasn’t aware of that. I take it she was artificially inseminated by another doctor.

GOREN:
We haven’t been able to find any evidence that she was.

SORENSON:
You don’t mean..?

GOREN:
You tell me.

SORENSON:
She never said anything that would lead me to believe that she wasn’t still in a same sex relationship or that she was engaged in risky practices.

GOREN:
When was the last time you saw her?

SORENSON:
She had an appointment just last week.

GOREN:
She didn’t seem worried or concerned about anything?

SORENSON:
She was responding well to treatment and it was a very uneventful visit. She was excited about her latest project. She and her partner were entering one of their documentaries in the Tribeca Film Festival.

GOREN closes his binder and stands, extending his hand.

GOREN:
Thank you for your time, Dr. Sorenson. Here’s my card. If you think of anything, please give me a call.

SORENSON:
I will detective. i…I hope you find whoever did this. Sheila was a wonderful girl.

GOREN:
That’s how I remember her too, Dr. Thank you again, doctor.

SORENSON:
Then you know.

GOREN:
Yes I do.

FusseKat
Sorry about not getting this updated sooner. I hate when RL interferes with my obsessions. But I realized there are a couple of scenes I needed to add. So this is it for now, but I should be able to update again sometime on Wednesday.
Thanks for reading and don't be shy --- leave a comment --- good, bad or indifferent.

QUOTE (flashymom @ Jul 4 2008, 05:41 PM) *
Sounds like a hate crime. Someone didn't like the fact that Sheila and her partner were going to have a baby......

This is good. I don't mind reading a script. Keep it going, please.

Thanks FM! I wanted to try finishing this. It was an idea from long ago.
Don't forget, this is a CI based story - all is not as it seems at first. (hopefully, that's how it will play out in the end.

QUOTE (cifan70 @ Jul 4 2008, 06:02 PM) *
This is good and I like reading it this way. Easier for me to read in my opinion.

I agree, the first posting was a little difficult to read. Hope the story is making sense.
janpop4
Well this is getting interesting. She had Aids and she had sex to make her pregnant. Very curious on this.
FusseKat
The relatives are still here and I've been having a great time with them - my niece and nephew are just the best! But I've really wanted to get this finished and posted - so here it is finally. All complete. Anyone reading please review and let me know what you think about the script format. Also any thoughts you might have about the story, the reveal - I wouldn't presume to call it an 'aria' ....

ooOOoo

SCENE 15

HAZELHURST PRODUCTIONS
3657 DWYER, BROOKLYN,
MAY 1
ST 10:30 AM


EAMES AND ALLISON TYLER ARE IN THE CONFERENCE ROOM THEY MET IN YESTERDAY. PAPERS ARE STREWN ACROSS THE TABLE. ALLISON TYLER APPEARS TIRED AND NERVOUS.

EAMES:
I hope this isn't an inconvenient time for us to meet? I have just a few more questions.?

ALLISON: (DISTRACTEDLY)
Where's Bobby… uh, Detective Goren?

EAMES:
He… We felt it might be easier if I conducted this interview.

ALLISON: (NODDING)
Oh, because… because of our previous relationship. I guess I can understand.

EAMES: (LOOKING AROUND THE CONFERENCE ROOM)
Things seem to have come a bit unraveled since yesterday.

ALLISON:
I… we… the lawyers and I haven't been able to find the draft that Sheila and I agreed to with Universal. Now , Universal has records that seemingly show that we agreed to an all together different draft. One that allows them to take ownership of our films. I would never have agreed to that. NEVER. Sheila would never have agreed to that.

EAMES:
Is it possible that Sheila changed the agreements and didn't tell you? Or your lawyers?

ALLISON:
What? Why would she…

PAUSE

Oh… I see. You think that she was dealing with Universal behind my back… and that maybe I found out about it. And… Am… am I a suspect in her death?

EAMES sits quietly, watching as ALLISON stands and starts pacing around the room.

ALLISON:
Well, so that's really why Bobby… Detective Goren isn't here. This would be really awkward if he were here. No detective, Sheila wouldn't have played a game like that… that's not the type of person she was. And as I said, she would never have agreed to give away ownership of our work. And no, I didn't kill Sheila. Sheila was like family to me. Closer than my own sister.

EAMES:
Ms Tyler, I need to ask. Were you and Ms. Larsen lovers?

ALLISON: (WITH A BITTERSWEET SMILE ON HER LIPS)
No, detective. We were never lovers. We've … we'd been friends for close to twenty years. We didn't have secrets from each other. There were everyday things we hadn't had a chance to tell the other, but we didn't have any secrets.

EAMES:
What about Mark Davis? Apparently that was a secret she was keeping from you, or was he one of those everyday things you hadn't had a chance to tell each other.

ALLISON: (HEAVY SIGH)
I think I'd have to classify Mark Davis as one of those everyday things we hadn't had a chance to tell the other. And to save you from asking, I would be much more likely to go after Mark than Sheila. I have already come to believe what Mark said, when I confronted him about it the other day.- our relationship was never what I thought it was – he was right. I wanted it to be more than it was, so I convinced myself it was.

EAMES looks down at her notes as she begins to ask her question.

EAMES:
Did you also know about her …

EAMES looks up and focuses on ALLISON

EAMES:
… the change in her HIV status or her pregnancy?

ALLISON:
Wh… what? Her change? She had AIDS? And she was pregnant?

EAMES nods.

ALLISON: (LOOKS UNCERTAIN AND DOES'NT MEET EAMES EYES)
No… no… I didn't know about either of those. She.. she… oh my god. She never said anything. I … I don't think anyone here knows about this.

EAMES:
I'm sorry, but it would seem she was better at keeping secrets than you imagined.

ALLISON:
I'm sure it was just to keep us from worrying about her. Mark… was Mark the father?

EAMES:
I really don't know. Apparently, she told him he was. He appears to have believed her. He also told us she was planning to have an abortion. Do you see Mark as the father type? Would he have taken on his share of the responsibility of raising a child?

ALLISON:
No. She wouldn't have done that. She always wanted to have a child… at some point. She wouldn't … and Mark, he's always made it clear that children and marriage were not what he wanted.

EAMES:
Do you think that he could have harmed Sheila if she decided to go ahead with the pregnancy?

ALLISON:
He's not violent. I may have just discovered that he's an incredible jerk, but I … I can't believe he'd react that way. He might say that Sheila was on her own if she decided to have the baby, but he wouldn't have hurt her or killed her. Sheila was independent enough to raise a child on her own, and … and if she ever became so ill that she couldn't, there is her family or me.

EAMES:
What about Roger Bly and Sheila?. What can you tell me about their relationship? Did you know that Sheila had been meeting with Roger Bly about…

ALLISON:
About going to work for him. Yes, I knew. She told me when he first approached her about three months ago. It's an open secret in the office. I was happy for her. She is … was very talented and wanted to make big, important movies.

EAMES:
She told you that Roger Bly approached her?

ALLISON:
Yes. She said it was a couple of weeks after we came back from Sundance.

EAMES:
I see. Thank you. I think that's all I'm going to need.

EAMES stands, turns, and walks to the door. She grasps the doorknob and turns back to look at ALLISON.

EAMES: (SOFTLY)
Have you ever been tested? It … it might be a good idea if you were.

ooOOoo

SCENCE 16

ONE POLICE PLAZA
MAJOR CASE SQUAD ROOM
MAY 1
st 1:30PM


INT: INTERVIEW ROOM
DETECTIVES GOREN AND EAMES ARE REVIEWING THEIR NOTES IN ONE OF THE INTERVIEW ROOMS. CAPTAIN JAMES DEAKINS ENTERS THE ROOM.


DEAKINS:
Where are we on this?