Olivia was at her desk, starting helplessly at her parter; his broad shoulder, his muscular chest her eyes wonder down to his thighs then back to his arm. A soft moan escaperd her lips as flexed.
"Liv, you ok?" he was asking, and she blushed all the way down to her toes.
"Yea" she said getting up and walking to her locker, to get her belonging, it was already way past ten.
"Ok why don't you wait for me, and I give you a ride home?" he asked as she placed her bag on her shoulder.
"No I think I will get a cab, you need to go home to you family." Yea his family! Elliot Stabler the man I wake up reachng for at night is married, with five children.
Elliot cocked his head to the side and stared at her holding her captive. And Olivia found herself breath-less in a trance.
"Um..." she cleared her throat her mouth had been so dry and her brain ceased to function "...I got to go" she said and partically ran from the precinct.

Elliot watched her leave and smiled inwardly, she a strange woman he thought as he picked up the file he was reading. And just his luck he couldn't get her out of his mind.
He knew he should go home to his family, but now more than ever he wanted to stay away. He lazed around the office some more and then finally having enough he walked over to the coat rack when the phone rang.
"Detective Stabler"
"Um this is special victims unit?"
"Yea" Elliot replied as he listened to the grumpy man on the other line.
"We got a stiff, all cut up with no clothes..."
Elliot wrote down the information then called Cragen who never picked up the phone.

Olivia cell phone was ringing, picking it up she saw the I.D El. Tossing it aside she snuggled back against her pillow when the house phone rang.
"Hello"
"Benson, we got a case" Olivia listened to him then got up from the bed and dra ged on some clothes.

This seems interesting

The December wind was brutal against her face as she made her way down the steps and into the waiting cab. “20^th Street” she instructed rubbing her hands on her cold face.

“Miss there seems to be a problem the road is blocked off” the cab driver said while Olivia groaned taking out the money she paid her fare.

“Leave me here” said softly gearing up to face the cold once more.

“Miss I don’t think it’s a good idea for such a pretty lady to be by her self on this road” the driver said turning to face Olivia.

“No worries I can take care of myself” she said, touching her holster with a smile full of pride, yea she loved her job.

“You a cop?” he asked as he opened the door for her.

“Yea” she replied stepping out into the cold night.

“Take care of your self ma’am” he said giving her back her money, Olivia looked at it then shook her head.

“No I like paying my own bills.” She said sweetly pushing his hand away.

“Okay, I’m Kevin” he said giving her a smile. “Call me when you going out and I’ll be at your service” he continued as she started to walk off.

“Ok Kevin, have a nice evening,” she said taking the business card. Not bothering to read it she shoved it in her jeans pocket and walked toward the crowd.



Elliot was walking around the body never in his life had he seem so many cuts on one human. The eyes were plucked out the nose slashed down the middle and the eyes missing. Elliot groaned and for a minute he wanted to puke. “What do we have here?” he heard the familiar voice of his partner and turned around to face. Elliot looked and smiled as he noticed her rubbing her gloved hands.

“Meet Jane Doe” Elliot said handing her a pair of gloves.

“Oh my God” Olivia exclaimed when she finally had a look at the victim.

“Oh my God is right” Melinda the medical examiner said holding up a bag.

“What’s that?” Elliot asked looking at the flesh.

“This Detective is Jane Doe’s vulva” she said shaking her head looking at the Caucasian victim who couldn’t be more than twenty five years olds.

“You mean…” Olivia said recognition dawning on her.

“Yea, and she has been dead about two hours- Stop Liv don’t move!” Melinda screamed as she noticed a bloody shoe print.

Olivia froze as Melinda called someone from CSU to scan the shoe print.

“I will tell you more when we get to the lab.” She said packing up her stuff.

Elliot’s eyes wondered around the crime scene and then to his partner. “You ok Liv?” he asked as he watched stare blindly at the woman.

“Yea” she replied bending to take a look at something that was gleaming in dark beside the victim. “El, take a look at this” Olivia said holding up a small device.

“What is it?” he asked looking at the silver box she was holding up.

“I don’t know, let hope it can tell us something about our victim, she said bagging it and handing it to one of the uni’s.

“I think we are all done here, wanna grab a bite am starved” Elliot said. And Olivia smiled.

“Stabler go home,” she said shaking her head.

“Liv, I can’t” he said tightly as they walked away from the body. “Come on that diner where you look to buy burger should still be open.”

Hope that was what she felt and a smile found it’s way to her lips. “Okay, but you are buying” she said with a girlish giggle.

Good job! Very interesting!! Can't wait for more!
Doink Doink

I dunno know about you, but I wouldn't be able to eat after that scene lol. Also, I liked your opening scene. For a moment, I thought they were in bed together and not in the precinct! Great writing there. Please add more

I totally agree..no eating for me after that. lol!

Olivia and Elliot sat down and ordered there meals.

“So how are things at home?” Olivia asked as she took a bite of her burger. Elliot stiffened he didn’t want to talk about her, he wanted to talk about them.

“Things are fine.” He said trying to avoid the whole topic.

“El,” Olivia started.

“No Liv I don’t want to talk about it” Elliot said placing his burger back on the wrapper.

“Ok fine” she said taking a sip of the beer.

“So ho are things with your brother?” Elliot asked.

“Stabler you have some nerve, you want to poke around in my personal life but yours are off limits?” she asked getting angry.

“Liv come on”

“No Elliot I think I’m full” she said dumping the remainder of her burger on the wrapper and standing to her feet.

And without another word Olivia was out the door. Elliot sat back ad shook his head, this was there relationship lately either they didn’t speak or they argued. Elliot paid for the meal feeling defeated and all too tired he walked out into the night.



Kathy was sitting up in bed when Elliot opened his bedroom door.

“Where are you coming from?” Kathy asked turning on the light so he could change.

“I am coming from work” Elliot replied pulling off his shoes.

“That’s a lie Elliot I called and the office empty and Fin and Munch said that the case was closed for the day” Kathy almost yelled.

Placing his head in his hands Elliot groaned he didn’t want this talk again.

“I went to have something to eat with Liv” Elliot replied stuffing his socks into his shoes.

Kathy stood placing her hands on her hips she walked around to where Elliot was standing unzipping his pants.

“Elliot let me get this straight it’s now 2:30 and are telling me that you where out having dinner with Olivia!” now Kathy was shouting.

“Kathy, please not now” Elliot said softly walking away from the steaming woman.

“Then when Elliot? You work with her and now instead of coming home you stay and you eat with her?” Kathy asked and a lone anger tear rolled down her cheek.

“Kathy she’s my best-friend, and I am trying to work thing out with her.” Elliot answered ad walked over to his dresser in the corner of the room.

“And I am your wife, Elliot I can’t do this anymore, I can’t I really can’t” she said softly and walked over to the place where the traveling bags were kept.

“Kathy what are you doing?” Elliot asked when she came with the bag.

“I want you to leave and this time for good.” Kathy said and started taking his stuff and placing them in a bag.

“Kathy would you please cut it out?” Elliot asked encircling her waist.

“No Elliot this isn’t working I want you gone, we’ve tried and I can’t try any more” she said wiping the tears that were now streaming down her face.

“Kathy can’t we talk?”

“No Elliot we can’t I tried I really did but I can’t not again.” She said zipping up the bag and placing it at his feet.

“Goodbye Elliot” she said and kissed his softly on his lips before walking out of the room

I feel bad for Kathy

but not too bad!



write more please!



wow, that's a lot of emoticons...

Great Update! Can't wait for more!!
Doink Doink

Thank you all for the wonderfull reviews.

Elliot felt broken like he never had before, dumping his bags in the back of his car he took out his cell phone. "Fin"
"Yo Stabler I can't talk now" Fin said and ended the conversation without another word. As he stopped at the red light he thought when it pours it rains! No one was available and the one person who would be probably wasn't talking to him! Dialing the number he know so well he waited for it to go to voicemail but she answered on the first ring.
"El, listen I'm sorry about earlier I over-reacted" Olivia said hurriedly.
"It's okay I deserved it, mind if I swing by?" Elliot asked hoping she would say yes since she was in the forgiving mood.
"Sure, but should you-"
"Ok then I should be there in five minutes" Elliot said and hung up.
Turing left Elliot flew to her place before she had to second guess her decision, quickly he found a parking space parked and jumped out. Looking at his watch it was 3:45. Taking the elevator to her floor he practised what he was going to say.

The door swung open on the second knock and there she was wrapped in a robe. She stepped out of his way and in he walked.
"So what's up?" Olivia asked walking in the living room with two steaming cups of chocolate.
"Kathy left me"

Oh my I love this!
Update soon, no NOW!

I love it, please update !!