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Jryan
Look at him, sitting there so smug. How could they give him his shield back, he is a whack job, mental case, a Rat. Captain never gives me cases I run errands and fetch this nut jobs lab reports, I will never move up with him around. *smile* He found my present, in the drawer. Your time is limited Detective.
spookycc
Cool, is that Riche talking? I SAW the camera SLOW when it came to him! tongue.gif
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, wow, that's pretty good. I could see him saying that on screen.
Jryan
QUOTE (spookycc @ Jun 22 2008, 02:39 PM) *
Cool, is that Riche talking? I SAW the camera SLOW when it came to him! tongue.gif


When I watched it again, Sat. did you notice the Blond sitting behind Bobby? she kinda put her hand under her chin and looked at him for awhile, Makes me wonder if it wasn't her, haven't seen her around. They messed up with shooting Riche, now you see him now you don't, one min. he was there on the phone, then he is gone, lol.
janpop4
Very nice. I could see this happening. Great job.
DefenderOfMen
QUOTE (Jryan @ Jun 22 2008, 01:59 PM) *
When I watched it again, Sat. did you notice the Blond sitting behind Bobby? she kinda put her hand under her chin and looked at him for awhile, Makes me wonder if it wasn't her, haven't seen her around. They messed up with shooting Riche, now you see him now you don't, one min. he was there on the phone, then he is gone, lol.

Maybe she was just enjoying Bobby's dashing good looks... tongue.gif

I liked it! I'm sorta liking flash fics. Nice and brief.
Lozzie
This is great stuff. The plot thickens!!
ciaddict
QUOTE (spookycc @ Jun 22 2008, 12:39 PM) *
Cool, is that Riche talking? I SAW the camera SLOW when it came to him! tongue.gif


No! Please, please not Riche! I like dancing with him at the parties. laugh.gif

This was great JRyan! Poor Bobby......
AmandaB
This is great. I also don't think it was Richie, though an underpaid (and underappreciated) lab tech or something is a good thought. Sometimes I wonder what the CSU techs think of Goren...
ValleyOfTheShadow
Nicely written.

I feel some evil lurking.
Jryan
QUOTE (ValleyOfTheShado @ Jun 23 2008, 03:31 PM) *
Nicely written.

I feel some evil lurking.



aww thanks for reading Valley, I think you should give a flash fic a try.
ValleyOfTheShadow
QUOTE (Jryan @ Jun 23 2008, 03:55 PM) *
aww thanks for reading Valley, I think you should give a flash fic a try.

haha, my fic would consist of..

:::Xerox Machine Breaks::
spookycc
QUOTE (ValleyOfTheShado @ Jun 23 2008, 05:04 PM) *
haha, my fic would consist of..

:::Xerox Machine Breaks::


Wow, a THREE word fanfic! Doesn't get much shorter than that, Valley! smile.gif
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