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FusseKat
My attempt to do justice to 100 word fic. My attempt to explain Detective Robert Goren

Justice

It was something he strived for every day of his life, that pinnacle of purity that all people yearned for, but often abdicated. Justice. Justice was blind, but he couldn't afford to be. He was its eyes, ears and teeth, its unrelenting enforcer. Ensuring the scales balanced.

A hard and thankless job, but it had to be done. He'd walk their line, do whatever was necessary to get back.

The job was that important, not merely his livelihood, but his life. He wondered why no one seemed to get that.

He also wondered if he would ever find his justice.


EDIT: added another (this was inspired by a story I just read at fanfiction.net - Sticks and Stones by the wonderful Scribere Est Agere)

Justice, Part Deux

He slowly lowered himself to the bed and slid between the sheets, pulling up the blanket that meant comfort to his weary mind, comfort for his bruised and battered body. Bumps and bruises were an occupational hazard, tonight’s beating was more than he’d ever endured. He’d paid a harsh price for justice tonight - with the pounding of his flesh. The battering, a new marker of his enduring legacy.

Tomorrow, the battle would begin again, as it always had. Tonight he no longer sought justice. Tonight, he sought a soothing refuge from pain, as he surrendered to sleep’s seductive embrace.
Quaxo
Nice job! Definitely a well rounded little flash fic!
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, an excellent job on both of them. Good work!
flashymom
Good work. I could never do this. I talk to much!
ciaddict
QUOTE (flashymom @ Jun 20 2008, 07:48 AM) *
Good work. I could never do this. I talk to much!


That's what I thought about me! I tried one and its HARD! I started with 123 words and it HURTS to cut them down. I applaud everyone who does these so well. And this one is a great one. Bobby and justice--they just seem to go together, don't they?
janpop4
Very nicely done. I definitely applaud anyone that do these little stories because I simply cannot write and for those of you reading my story, I am not writing it. tongue.gif laugh.gif
AmandaB
Both of these are excellent, FuseKat. You totally have Goren in character. Sometimes when writing him, it's hard to remember that the job is the most important thing to Bobby, no matter what, and that's what drives him.
cifan, I really like your story. Are you saying you've hired a ghostwriter now? wink.gif
spookycc
Excellent portrayal of Goren, Kat! Very well-constructed!
Lozzie
Lovely job on 'Justice'.

I too read that story by Scibere Est Agere (she posts here occasionally, too - ) and loved it. I suggested she do a companion fic where Bobby goes for a prostate exam


QUOTE (ciaddict @ Jun 20 2008, 10:07 AM) *
That's what I thought about me! I tried one and its HARD! I started with 123 words and it HURTS to cut them down. I applaud everyone who does these so well. And this one is a great one. Bobby and justice--they just seem to go together, don't they?


I found that once I started doing these things, I got addicted to them.
spookycc
I read the inspiration for your second flash fic last night, KAt:

Sticks and Stones by the wonderful Scribere Est Agere.

It was GREAT! smile.gif
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