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monkfan45
i have an idea for a story, and you can help write it. it is called Mr monk and the highway made of steel. i will give the first couple lines.(intro) In downtown los angeles, an amtrak is on overlay while they clear the track from a backup of Union pacific. The engineer and conductor are talking, and suddenly they run back through the train. They come across a waiter, and the waiter is poking around in the dorm car, he finds a connection to the mafia for the conducter, so the conductor kills him, and they put his body in the baggage car.
engineer:hmm, how long will this last?
conductor: what do you mean?
engineer:how long untill they discover this,
Conductor:at the next stop, but we will have alibies.



to be continued...............
(Monk: I've never been on a train before.
(disher:they are like streetcars, only a lot bigger, and faster and cleaner)
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, I will do a couple of lines ...

Natalie: Julies loves trains.

Leland: Really?

Natalie: Yeah, Mitch gave her a train set one Christmas and she loved it. She still has it.
monkfan45
i should probably finish the conversation monk and disher were having.
Monk:really?
Disher:yeah, alot better then planes,
monk:I think i wanna go and ride a train.
(insert the natalie-leland conversation)
leland:then you'll like this next case, is in ummm.....
disher: new jersey?
Leland:yeah new jersey, and the only way to get there is by train.....with air travel the price is now.
Monk:lets go to New jersey
disher:maybe you can see sharona
Monk:maybe
micheleNasser
QUOTE (monkfan45 @ Jun 12 2008, 10:04 AM) *
i should probably finish the conversation monk and disher were having.
Monk:really?
Disher:yeah, alot better then planes,
monk:I think i wanna go and ride a train.
(insert the natalie-leland conversation)
leland:then you'll like this next case, is in ummm.....
disher: new jersey?
Leland:yeah new jersey, and the only way to get there is by train.....with air travel the price is now.
Monk:lets go to New jersey
disher:maybe you can see sharona
Monk:maybe


Disher: Maybe I can see Sharona....
and stamps a silly smile in his face.
Natalie, almost inaudible, to herself: Maybe I wonīt like it at all!!!
Leland: Cīmon, letīs go, Iīll explain it in the way to the station.
the "gang" heads to the station.
monkfan45
down at the station
disher:I applied for the discount tickets
station atendent: are you a senior citizen, or a vetran?
disher:no,but i stayed at a holiday inn express.
(the train pulls in)
Monk:Is that the train
Nat:yep, an amtrak......suprisingly on time.
Monk:Disher Lied, That thing is filthy....
Leland:Monk:you don't ride on the front or top, you ride inside....and the diner car serves sierra springs water.
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