Olivia smiled as she got out of the car and walked up to Elliot’s apartment, her heart was racing slightly but she figured it was just the hormones. She couldn’t wait to see the look on his face when he heard she was pregnant. At the thought the smile on her face widened and she looked at the stunning gold and diamond engagement ring on her finger. Knocking on his door seem futile, looking at the watched she noticed it was just twenty minutes past eight, maybe she was too early she thought, or maybe he hasn’t forgiven you. At that thought the events from the last weekend came rushing back, and sadly she realized they had hardly spoken since she accused him of having a thing for his new partner Dani Beck.
“Olivia come on, be reasonable, I was once your partner you know what the job requires.” That day she had been sick as dog and he promised to be home early, Cragen had even given him the time of ordered him to go home and relax but instead he stayed with Dani.
“I’m not being unreasonable it’s just that I missed” she had said holding his arms and kissing them and well with their chemistry no need to tell you what happened…
Now as she got the spare key she was given she wondered if he had really forgiven her. Of course he had, he sent her flowers and chocolate the following day, she decided not willing to let anything break her spirits. His apartment still had on lights from the previous evening, taking her time she turned them off and headed in the direction of his bedroom. As she got closer her heart started to pound as she heard the loud breathing, was something wrong with him was there an intruder she thought as she saw the smashed vase, panic struck her and she walked slowly to where he keep his personal fire-arm. With the gun now in hand she approached his room with caution, turning the knob quietly but slowly she held her arm, but as the door opened and the sight before her caught her eyes, the gun slipped from her hands unto the floor with a loud thrud. They both looked up at her, ahe couldn’t move thought she wanted to get the hell out and run she stood still, while they frantically searched for their hastily discarded clothes.
Elliot blues met those of Olivia brown eyes that were filled with shock. She stared him in the eyes and wouldn’t lowered her gaze, pulling his gaze from her face he looked down he couldn’t continue to look the betrayal on her face too evident and pain in her eyes much worse.
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The grand opportunity she was given she took, running from the apartment outside the rain wiped her but she barely felt it. Her hair was pasted to her face as she got in the car the only thing she could she was the wavy hair dark blonde hair, and the slender back barely cover by the spread as she clung to Elliot and her cries of ecstasy bellowed in her ears.
It pained her as she drove through the pouring rain and she would give anything to be blind to wipe away the things she had just seen. In the solitude of her own apartment she crawled onto the sofa and wept.
Olivia awoke to the sound of her buzzer looking up at the wall clock she realized it was past six. Getting up her legs felt shaky, she walked to the door. Looking through the hole she saw the familiar face of Casey Novak the Assistant District Attorney her closest friend. Pulling the locks she let her in.
“Liv, what’s up you were supposed to meet me for lunch.” Casey said looking at her friend’s face taking note of her puffy eyes and tears dried to her small face. “Hey what happened, why you were crying?” she asked as they walked over to the sofa.
“Case,” Olivia paused knowing that the first person who should know about her pregnancy was indeed the father. But Casey big grey eyes had away of making her spill her soul. “I’m- I’m pregnant” she blurted out and the tears filled her eyes at the memory of what she had seen the one she knew she would never forget. Olivia knew that no matter what she had to get away for her child and her mental status.
Olivia sat at computer when the alarm went off stretching and yawning she walked into the kitchen to prepare Amanda’s break-fast. The sun in the little community of Denver was already high in the sky, warming her bones. Opening the windows she welcomed the morning as the sweet aroma from her garden greeted her.
Amanda sat at the small dining table and looked over at her mother who was slowly cutting the pancake and placing it in her mouth. Which meant her mood was good. Slowly she broached the subject of spending the holiday with her best friend Brandon.
“Mom” Olivia looked up from the newspaper she was now reading on the settee in the living room.
“Yes Manda” Olivia said patting the place next to her, her daughter took a seat.
“Mom, Aunt Brenda and Brandon are going to spend the summer in New York, can I go please?”
New York, Elliot! Her brain screamed.
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It pained her as she drove through the pouring rain and she would give anything to be blind to wipe away the things she had just seen. In the solitude of her own apartment she crawled onto the sofa and wept.
Olivia awoke to the sound of her buzzer looking up at the wall clock she realized it was past six. Getting up her legs felt shaky, she walked to the door. Looking through the hole she saw the familiar face of Casey Novak the Assistant District Attorney her closest friend. Pulling the locks she let her in.
“Liv, what’s up you were supposed to meet me for lunch.” Casey said looking at her friend’s face taking note of her puffy eyes and tears dried to her small face. “Hey what happened, why you were crying?” she asked as they walked over to the sofa.
“Case,” Olivia paused knowing that the first person who should know about her pregnancy was indeed the father. But Casey big grey eyes had away of making her spill her soul. “I’m- I’m pregnant” she blurted out and the tears filled her eyes at the memory of what she had seen the one she knew she would never forget. Olivia knew that no matter what she had to get away for her child and her mental status.
13 years later.
Olivia sat at computer when the alarm went off stretching and yawning she walked into the kitchen to prepare Amanda’s break-fast. The sun in the little community of Denver was already high in the sky, warming her bones. Opening the windows she welcomed the morning as the sweet aroma from her garden greeted her.
Amanda sat at the small dining table and looked over at her mother who was slowly cutting the pancake and placing it in her mouth. Which meant her mood was good. Slowly she broached the subject of spending the holiday with her best friend Brandon.
“Mom” Olivia looked up from the newspaper she was now reading on the settee in the living room.
“Yes Manda” Olivia said patting the place next to her, her daughter took a seat.
“Mom, Aunt Brenda and Brandon are going to spend the summer in New York, can I go please?”
New York, Elliot! Her brain screamed.
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Amanda stared at her mother with big blue eyes, pleading with her to let her go. Olivia's insides twisted as she looked into the blue depths just like her father's. "Baby you can't go," Olivia said trying to come up with a valid excuse. "Brenda want time with her son" Olivia said.
"But Mom, Aunt Brenda said it was fine. And Brandon's my best friend-"
"Amanda honey I will talk to Brenda, and then I gi-"
"Olivia!" Brenda called from the closed doorway. Getting up she allowed her to come in.
"Manda go get your karate uniform, Brandon is waiting." she said as sje opened the door.
"Good morning" Brenda said, walking inside with Brandon on her heels.
"Morning Brenda." Olivia said to the only friend she now had. Brenda had been a friend took care of her during her pregnancy and was there to hold her hand during labour. And helped her with Amanda. She was the only person she trust with her baby girl, and on days when Olivia was out in the field working Brenda took care of Amanda.
Olivia motioned her towards the kitchen.
"Brenda why didn't you tell me you told Manda it was okay to go with you to New York?" Olivia asked sitting in the dining room chair.
"It wasn't me it was the boy and she asked I don't have a problem with her coming, but if you don't want her to come I can come up with a plan to turn her down" Brenda eyes immediately sadden.
"Brenda that's not what I mean-" Olivia explaination was cut off by ringing of the phone.
"Benson. Yes. I am on my way." Olivia said placing the phone on the hook.
"Go, I will take care of her" Brenda said, before Olivia had the time to ask.
"Brenda, it's just that you know who lives in New York, and, and" Olivia sighed. brenda embraced her.
"Honey, it's okay. I will take good care of her, and we leave Sunday" Olivia eyes widened at the part of the sentence.
"But brenda today is Saturady, when were you planning to tell me?" Olivia asked.
"I did have you listened to the machine I left the message." Brenda said, and playing the messages that where piled on Olivia's phone.
"Okay, okay since I have a case you can how long?"
"Two weeks."
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"But Mom, Aunt Brenda said it was fine. And Brandon's my best friend-"
"Amanda honey I will talk to Brenda, and then I gi-"
"Olivia!" Brenda called from the closed doorway. Getting up she allowed her to come in.
"Manda go get your karate uniform, Brandon is waiting." she said as sje opened the door.
"Good morning" Brenda said, walking inside with Brandon on her heels.
"Morning Brenda." Olivia said to the only friend she now had. Brenda had been a friend took care of her during her pregnancy and was there to hold her hand during labour. And helped her with Amanda. She was the only person she trust with her baby girl, and on days when Olivia was out in the field working Brenda took care of Amanda.
Olivia motioned her towards the kitchen.
"Brenda why didn't you tell me you told Manda it was okay to go with you to New York?" Olivia asked sitting in the dining room chair.
"It wasn't me it was the boy and she asked I don't have a problem with her coming, but if you don't want her to come I can come up with a plan to turn her down" Brenda eyes immediately sadden.
"Brenda that's not what I mean-" Olivia explaination was cut off by ringing of the phone.
"Benson. Yes. I am on my way." Olivia said placing the phone on the hook.
"Go, I will take care of her" Brenda said, before Olivia had the time to ask.
"Brenda, it's just that you know who lives in New York, and, and" Olivia sighed. brenda embraced her.
"Honey, it's okay. I will take good care of her, and we leave Sunday" Olivia eyes widened at the part of the sentence.
"But brenda today is Saturady, when were you planning to tell me?" Olivia asked.
"I did have you listened to the machine I left the message." Brenda said, and playing the messages that where piled on Olivia's phone.
"Okay, okay since I have a case you can how long?"
"Two weeks."
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Amanda smiled up at her mom as she said her prayer and closed her eyes to sleep. "Mommy don't cry" Amanda said peeping up at Olivia, whose big brown eyes had gone all teary. Smiling Olivia kissed the top of her head.
“I won’t cry just as long as you promise to be a good girl,” Olivia said.
“Ok mom, now kiss me and let me fall asleep” Amanda replied lifting her forehead to met Olivia lips.
“Muah,” Olivia exclaimed “Night my Princess”
“Night my Queen” Amanda answered as Olivia turned out the light.
Amanda waited 20 minutes before throwing back the covers and sneaking into the basement. Quietly she moved and found the album; the forbidden book was what Olivia called it. Dusting it off, she opened it and smiled. Her mother with short brown hair holding onto a man who she knew without a doubt was her father. Picking it up she turned and to leave the room when another fell from it with a little box, slowly and quietly she picked them up and walked back to her room.
Turning on the night light she opened the book and began to read.
Dear Diary,
The day is finally here! I have never been so happy in my life. Though I walked away from the job I love, nothing can bring me down. Elliot Stabler proposed to me!
I didn’t know it was possible to love one person the way I love him but every-day I love him a little more.
Elliot Stabler where have I heard that name before? Amanda wondered as she opened the box. “Wow!” she exclaimed as she picked up the diamond ring inspecting it she found a inscription 'My love, El & Liv 4 ever' “My dad was smooth with the ladies” Amanda said to herself while she hid the album, diary and ring in her luggage. Crawling back into bed with a smile on her face she fell a sleep.
“Amanda honey wake up” Olivia said shaking her gently.
“Mommy, what time is it?” she groaned rubbing her eyes and holing onto the sheet.
“It’s time for you to get you lazy bones out of bed.” Olivia said dragging the sheet from her small daughter’s body.
“Mom!” she screamed.
“Well if you want to miss you flight go back to bed” Olivia said and turned to walk out the door.
Amanda bolted upright instantly. “Mom what time is it?” she asked jumping out of bed.
“It time for you and I to have breakfast” she said kissing her forehead.
Amannda was rushing passed Olivia into the dining area when Olivia grabbed her pajama top. “Mom!” Amanda squealed
“Don’t mom me go brush your teeth and change you flight my princess leaves in four hours.” Olivia said walking door the stairs leaving a pouty face Amanda.
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[size="3"]“Mom please don’t cry, you’re going to make me cry” Amanda begged at the airport while Olivia embraced her.
“I’m not going to cry just be good and you have the emergency numbers I gave you?” Olivia asked.
“Yes, Grandpa Cragen at 1-6 precinct if I get into trouble or Auntie Casey at the DA’s office or her cell” Amanda repeated walking off with Brandon while Brenda and Olivia said good byes.
“Oliivia don’t worry I will take care of her” Brenda reassured her.
“I know, take care of your self and let me know as soon as the plane lands” Olivia replied they hugged each other and a lonely tear ran from both their eyes. “I’ll miss you.”
“Me too, first time in 13 years. Take Benson” she said and walked off.
“I won’t cry just as long as you promise to be a good girl,” Olivia said.
“Ok mom, now kiss me and let me fall asleep” Amanda replied lifting her forehead to met Olivia lips.
“Muah,” Olivia exclaimed “Night my Princess”
“Night my Queen” Amanda answered as Olivia turned out the light.
Amanda waited 20 minutes before throwing back the covers and sneaking into the basement. Quietly she moved and found the album; the forbidden book was what Olivia called it. Dusting it off, she opened it and smiled. Her mother with short brown hair holding onto a man who she knew without a doubt was her father. Picking it up she turned and to leave the room when another fell from it with a little box, slowly and quietly she picked them up and walked back to her room.
Turning on the night light she opened the book and began to read.
Dear Diary,
The day is finally here! I have never been so happy in my life. Though I walked away from the job I love, nothing can bring me down. Elliot Stabler proposed to me!
I didn’t know it was possible to love one person the way I love him but every-day I love him a little more.
Elliot Stabler where have I heard that name before? Amanda wondered as she opened the box. “Wow!” she exclaimed as she picked up the diamond ring inspecting it she found a inscription 'My love, El & Liv 4 ever' “My dad was smooth with the ladies” Amanda said to herself while she hid the album, diary and ring in her luggage. Crawling back into bed with a smile on her face she fell a sleep.
“Amanda honey wake up” Olivia said shaking her gently.
“Mommy, what time is it?” she groaned rubbing her eyes and holing onto the sheet.
“It’s time for you to get you lazy bones out of bed.” Olivia said dragging the sheet from her small daughter’s body.
“Mom!” she screamed.
“Well if you want to miss you flight go back to bed” Olivia said and turned to walk out the door.
Amanda bolted upright instantly. “Mom what time is it?” she asked jumping out of bed.
“It time for you and I to have breakfast” she said kissing her forehead.
Amannda was rushing passed Olivia into the dining area when Olivia grabbed her pajama top. “Mom!” Amanda squealed
“Don’t mom me go brush your teeth and change you flight my princess leaves in four hours.” Olivia said walking door the stairs leaving a pouty face Amanda.
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[size="3"]“Mom please don’t cry, you’re going to make me cry” Amanda begged at the airport while Olivia embraced her.
“I’m not going to cry just be good and you have the emergency numbers I gave you?” Olivia asked.
“Yes, Grandpa Cragen at 1-6 precinct if I get into trouble or Auntie Casey at the DA’s office or her cell” Amanda repeated walking off with Brandon while Brenda and Olivia said good byes.
“Oliivia don’t worry I will take care of her” Brenda reassured her.
“I know, take care of your self and let me know as soon as the plane lands” Olivia replied they hugged each other and a lonely tear ran from both their eyes. “I’ll miss you.”
“Me too, first time in 13 years. Take Benson” she said and walked off.
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Olivia felt miserable and lonely as she sat in the house. The case was wrapped in the past two hours and she had nothing to occupy her time. Sighing she walked into her bedroom and popped an Aspirin for the headache that was threatening to keep her up all night. Yawning she climbed into bed pulled the covers up and drofted off to sleep.
"What's that?" Brandon asked Amanda as she read her mother's diary.
"It's a book" she replied hating the fact that he interrupted her.
"What kind of book?" Brandon asked again as he gulped down the orange juice the flight attendant had given him.
"Brandan shhh!" she said and going back to the her reading.
Dear Diary,
Who know that planning a wedding was so much work!?
And keeping a secret from the man you love even harder.
I am however still keeping the romantic weekend for two a secret!
Still happy now that I am with the only man I've ever really loved.
--Liv
Brandon hadn't given up talking to Amanda and was listening to his Ipod, when he noticed her eys became watery.
"Manda what's wrong?" he asked in a hushed toned.
Her lips quivered as attempted to answer his question. "My mother and father loved each other," she said half smiling and half crying. "Don't you see I was conceived in love." swallowing the lump that was now in her thraot preventing her from speaking.
Brandon however believed differently. He knew people who loved each other stayed together, they remained a family. "Well I'm glad for you." he answered placing the headphones once again in his ears tuning her out but most hiding from the pain, he missed his own father.
The phone on the bedside table rang and slowly came awake and answered it.
"Hello" she said sleep still evident in her voice.
"We're here, Manda wants to say hi." Brenda said
"Mommy,"
"Hey sweet-heart, how was your flight?" Olivia now fully awake.
"It was great, will you be online later?" she asked as the urgent need to urinate overtook her.
"Yes why?" Olivia slightly confussed.
"I got to pee." she whispered into the phone. Olivia chuckled and relaxed it was all going to be all right she told herself.
"What's that?" Brandon asked Amanda as she read her mother's diary.
"It's a book" she replied hating the fact that he interrupted her.
"What kind of book?" Brandon asked again as he gulped down the orange juice the flight attendant had given him.
"Brandan shhh!" she said and going back to the her reading.
Dear Diary,
Who know that planning a wedding was so much work!?
And keeping a secret from the man you love even harder.
I am however still keeping the romantic weekend for two a secret!
Still happy now that I am with the only man I've ever really loved.
--Liv
Brandon hadn't given up talking to Amanda and was listening to his Ipod, when he noticed her eys became watery.
"Manda what's wrong?" he asked in a hushed toned.
Her lips quivered as attempted to answer his question. "My mother and father loved each other," she said half smiling and half crying. "Don't you see I was conceived in love." swallowing the lump that was now in her thraot preventing her from speaking.
Brandon however believed differently. He knew people who loved each other stayed together, they remained a family. "Well I'm glad for you." he answered placing the headphones once again in his ears tuning her out but most hiding from the pain, he missed his own father.
The phone on the bedside table rang and slowly came awake and answered it.
"Hello" she said sleep still evident in her voice.
"We're here, Manda wants to say hi." Brenda said
"Mommy,"
"Hey sweet-heart, how was your flight?" Olivia now fully awake.
"It was great, will you be online later?" she asked as the urgent need to urinate overtook her.
"Yes why?" Olivia slightly confussed.
"I got to pee." she whispered into the phone. Olivia chuckled and relaxed it was all going to be all right she told herself.
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Amanda was surprised by the noise of this great yet she embraced something about it just seemed right. Break-fast was over and she was packing out her stuff when her laptop chime. Folding her slender legs beneath her she picked up the laptop and saw her mom talking with her.
Liv: Hey Baby, you there?
Manda: Morning mom, New York is noisy.
Manda: Have you ever been here?
Liv: Yea! It's a great city, How'd you sleep?
Manda: I slept great 'cept the nise takes a little getting used to.
Liv: Wow Noise kept you up?! You sleep through anything! (lol)
Manda: Very funny Mom. Have you ever felt like you were met to be some where?
Liv: Yea, y?
Manda: Nothin, this place I feel like something important is here, kno wat I mean?
Liv: Not really.
Olivia felt herself panicking at her daughters last IM. What if she finds out about Elliot? She thought.
Manda: Mommy, who is Elliot Stabler?
Now Olivia was frozen, immobile!
Liv: He was a friend of mine y?
Manda: Nothin, I saw his name in the morning paper, and I think I heard it somewhere.
Olivia relaxed and breathed.
Liv: What does it saw in the paper about him?
Manda: He's the new Captain of Manhatten SVU, and one of his daughter's were raped.
Liv: Who?
Olivia found her heart racing and clenching, praying that they were all right.
Manda: Kathleen, Mom I've got to go, I'm going to the park with Brendon.
Liv: Okay, be good. I luv u
Manda: luv u 2 bye.
Olivia stared at the phone wanting to call, but not finding the courage. Walking down to the basement she looked for her album. Searching she realozed she couldn't find it! Where was it?
Liv: Hey Baby, you there?
Manda: Morning mom, New York is noisy.
Manda: Have you ever been here?
Liv: Yea! It's a great city, How'd you sleep?
Manda: I slept great 'cept the nise takes a little getting used to.
Liv: Wow Noise kept you up?! You sleep through anything! (lol)
Manda: Very funny Mom. Have you ever felt like you were met to be some where?
Liv: Yea, y?
Manda: Nothin, this place I feel like something important is here, kno wat I mean?
Liv: Not really.
Olivia felt herself panicking at her daughters last IM. What if she finds out about Elliot? She thought.
Manda: Mommy, who is Elliot Stabler?
Now Olivia was frozen, immobile!
Liv: He was a friend of mine y?
Manda: Nothin, I saw his name in the morning paper, and I think I heard it somewhere.
Olivia relaxed and breathed.
Liv: What does it saw in the paper about him?
Manda: He's the new Captain of Manhatten SVU, and one of his daughter's were raped.
Liv: Who?
Olivia found her heart racing and clenching, praying that they were all right.
Manda: Kathleen, Mom I've got to go, I'm going to the park with Brendon.
Liv: Okay, be good. I luv u
Manda: luv u 2 bye.
Olivia stared at the phone wanting to call, but not finding the courage. Walking down to the basement she looked for her album. Searching she realozed she couldn't find it! Where was it?
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Amanda and Brandon walked in sync in the park. They had been best friends since birth and today they still are. “Manda there’s a nice spot race you to it” Brandon exclaimed and ran towards the bench that was near the lake.
“No fair wait up” Amanda replied running after him. They settle down and once again Amanda dung into the bag she carried for her mother’s diary.
Dear Diary
Elliot has a new a partner, I am not too thrilled and again I woke up and puked.
I don’t know why but she puts me on edge. Maybe I’m just jealous, but I do trust Elliot I know he wouldn’t cheat on me but I don’t know.
Till next time
-Liv
“Manda can’t you give that book a rest?” Brendon asked throwing stones into the water.
“Come on I just want to know why my mom never talks about my dad” Amanda replied turning the page.
Dear Diary
This sick feeling hasn’t left me and Elliot and I had a huge argument about his new partner Dani. I love him but lately he’s pushing me away. On a happier note, Kathy made me Eli God-Mother, I’m so happy. I just wish I could have a child of my own.
-Liv
“What’s wrong now?” Brandon asked when he noticed Amanda staring into space.
“Nothing.” She replied.
“Help me!” A high pitch scream broke through and the two children turned to see a little girl covered in blood running towards them. She somehow didn’t get far as she collapsed on the ground looking lifeless.
“Hey are you alright?” Brandon asked leaning over the little girl.
“Help me” she said gripping Amanda’s hand.
“Brandon, give me the towel” Amanda demanded. Doing as he was told. Amanda folded the towel and placed it on the child tummy where the blood was oozing out.
“Call 991” she said again.
“Emergency hotline this is Kerry, how may I help you?”
“Hello could you please help me?”
“Where are you?”
“I’m in a park I can’t remember the name”
“What happened?”
“There a little girl here and she is bleeding.
“What can you see?”
“I see trees I am beside a lake, Miss please help me” Brandon pleaded.
“Okay can the girl talk?”
“Yes she asked for help.”
Slowly Brandon spoke to the little girl who told them where they were.
“Miss we are in Central Park”
“Okay I’m sending help right away” Kerry said and dialed for ambulance and the Special Victim Unit.
Siren were getting louder and a little crowd was now gathered around the little girl.
The paramedics were there and worked effectively to get the little girl in the ambulance.
“Excuse who is here with her?” a medic asked. “Ok then who called 911” Slyly Brandon and Amanda raised their hands.
“Where are your parents?” The medic asked.
“Mom had a meeting my mom isn’t here” Amanda replied.
“Okay hop in” he said and they obeyed.
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“No fair wait up” Amanda replied running after him. They settle down and once again Amanda dung into the bag she carried for her mother’s diary.
Dear Diary
Elliot has a new a partner, I am not too thrilled and again I woke up and puked.
I don’t know why but she puts me on edge. Maybe I’m just jealous, but I do trust Elliot I know he wouldn’t cheat on me but I don’t know.
Till next time
-Liv
“Manda can’t you give that book a rest?” Brendon asked throwing stones into the water.
“Come on I just want to know why my mom never talks about my dad” Amanda replied turning the page.
Dear Diary
This sick feeling hasn’t left me and Elliot and I had a huge argument about his new partner Dani. I love him but lately he’s pushing me away. On a happier note, Kathy made me Eli God-Mother, I’m so happy. I just wish I could have a child of my own.
-Liv
“What’s wrong now?” Brandon asked when he noticed Amanda staring into space.
“Nothing.” She replied.
“Help me!” A high pitch scream broke through and the two children turned to see a little girl covered in blood running towards them. She somehow didn’t get far as she collapsed on the ground looking lifeless.
“Hey are you alright?” Brandon asked leaning over the little girl.
“Help me” she said gripping Amanda’s hand.
“Brandon, give me the towel” Amanda demanded. Doing as he was told. Amanda folded the towel and placed it on the child tummy where the blood was oozing out.
“Call 991” she said again.
“Emergency hotline this is Kerry, how may I help you?”
“Hello could you please help me?”
“Where are you?”
“I’m in a park I can’t remember the name”
“What happened?”
“There a little girl here and she is bleeding.
“What can you see?”
“I see trees I am beside a lake, Miss please help me” Brandon pleaded.
“Okay can the girl talk?”
“Yes she asked for help.”
Slowly Brandon spoke to the little girl who told them where they were.
“Miss we are in Central Park”
“Okay I’m sending help right away” Kerry said and dialed for ambulance and the Special Victim Unit.
Siren were getting louder and a little crowd was now gathered around the little girl.
The paramedics were there and worked effectively to get the little girl in the ambulance.
“Excuse who is here with her?” a medic asked. “Ok then who called 911” Slyly Brandon and Amanda raised their hands.
“Where are your parents?” The medic asked.
“Mom had a meeting my mom isn’t here” Amanda replied.
“Okay hop in” he said and they obeyed.
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Brandon and Amanda where sitting in the waiting area the room was cold and they were nervous two men came and sat beside them. The double door to the theatre opened and out walked the doctor, the men stood and walked over to the doctor and they spoke for a while then they came to stand before them. "Hi I'm Detective John Munch and this here is Detective Lake and we would like to ask you a few questions, but we would like to ask you them at our precinct"
"Okay" Brandon replied and swallowed hard.
Brandon held Amanda's hand and together they got up and walked beside the detectives.
The drive was long and boring as the tall man with grey hair spoke about conspiraces.
Finally they were there the room was filled with people, people in uniforms and suits with telephones ringing fax machines beeping and everybody moving about busily. "Come this way" Munch said to the little girl. She didn't reply but followed.
Amanda scoured the room taking note of everything. "So tell me are you the one who called 911?" Munch asked
"No" she said tapping her little on the cold surface of the metal table.
"Where is Brandon?" Amanda asked
"He's with Detective Lake"
"Are we in trouble?" she aske squaring her shoulders.
"Are you supposed to be in trouble?" Munch asked raising his eyes at the little girl, there was something very familar about her but he couldn't place it.
"If I am may I borrow your phone?" she asked not answering.
"Okay so who are you going to call?"
"I don't think that's any of your business sir" Amanda said standing.
"Okay then" Munch said holding back a chuckle.
"Dani!" Munch shouted and a curly dirty blond came to the doorway. "Take Miss. what's your name sweety?" Munch asked.
"Amanda"
"Okay take Amanda here to make a phone call." Dani reach for the child's hand but Amanda didn't noticed and together they walked to the desk.
"What's the number?" Dani asked
"It's private I would like to dial it myself please" Amanda answered reaching for the reciever, and she dialed the number then placed the reciever at her ears.
"Hello... Grandpa Cragen, it's-" "Can you excuse me please?" Dani stared at her then stepped back "It's Amanda Benson"
"Okay" Brandon replied and swallowed hard.
Brandon held Amanda's hand and together they got up and walked beside the detectives.
The drive was long and boring as the tall man with grey hair spoke about conspiraces.
Finally they were there the room was filled with people, people in uniforms and suits with telephones ringing fax machines beeping and everybody moving about busily. "Come this way" Munch said to the little girl. She didn't reply but followed.
Amanda scoured the room taking note of everything. "So tell me are you the one who called 911?" Munch asked
"No" she said tapping her little on the cold surface of the metal table.
"Where is Brandon?" Amanda asked
"He's with Detective Lake"
"Are we in trouble?" she aske squaring her shoulders.
"Are you supposed to be in trouble?" Munch asked raising his eyes at the little girl, there was something very familar about her but he couldn't place it.
"If I am may I borrow your phone?" she asked not answering.
"Okay so who are you going to call?"
"I don't think that's any of your business sir" Amanda said standing.
"Okay then" Munch said holding back a chuckle.
"Dani!" Munch shouted and a curly dirty blond came to the doorway. "Take Miss. what's your name sweety?" Munch asked.
"Amanda"
"Okay take Amanda here to make a phone call." Dani reach for the child's hand but Amanda didn't noticed and together they walked to the desk.
"What's the number?" Dani asked
"It's private I would like to dial it myself please" Amanda answered reaching for the reciever, and she dialed the number then placed the reciever at her ears.
"Hello... Grandpa Cragen, it's-" "Can you excuse me please?" Dani stared at her then stepped back "It's Amanda Benson"
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Dani watched the child from the corner of her eyes. There was something about that child which unnerved her deeply.
There was something very familiar about the air of authority she walked with. And her eyes there were something too familiar about them.
Dani strained to hear what was being said but still she couldn’t hear.
Cragen closed his eyes then opened them again “Could you repeat?” he asked afraid that it might not be true.
“I’m Amanda Benson, mommy said to call you if I got into trouble” Amanda said as she listened to the voice at the other end of the line she always wanted to talk with him but mom had forbidden it all she did was tell her stories of the man who was like a father to her.
“Benson, as in Olivia Benson?” Cragen asked and knew that she had some connection to Olivia she had disappeared some years without a trace.
“Yes mom said to call you or Aunt Casey but I wanted to meet you,”
“You’re at precinct 1-6, what is the matter?” Cragen asked his heart racing so much he thought he was going in cardiac arrest. He looked over to the bed side and there was the picture of him and Olivia dancing at her engagement party she had been so happy, he closed his eyes and he could remember the way she told him how she loved him, how it was her dream come true. Cragen thoughts came to an end when Amanda spoke again.
“They are questioning us about a girl who fainted in the park and we helped her.”
“US?” Cragen asked
“Yes me and my best friend Brendon, Grandpa will you come?” Amanda asked shyly.
“Yes I will be there in five minutes until I get there say nothing to no-one” Cragen spoke firmly, knowing that there must be a reason Olivia had gone through such great lengths to keep her a secret.
Olivia was impatient, she felt she knew something was wrong, and Brenda wasn’t answering either phone, and neither of the kids where responding. Olivia typed her daughter a message. Then decided against it, it was time to face to go back and hopefully she didn’t have to face any of them.
Cragen arrived in under three minutes breaking speeding limits and running lights. He walked in he didn’t know what to say he just knew he had to find her.
“Hey Cap’n” Elliot called as she noticed him walking down stairs.
“Elliot am retired” Cragen said with a little smile.”
“Yea not that I can remember, I’ve got two kids here who found a girl in the park and none of them are talking, they called 911.”
“Want me to take a crack at the girl?” Cragen asked
“How did you know there was a girl?” Elliot asked as they walked to the interview room. “She in there with Munch and Dani, by the way you didn’t answer me are you coming to Munch’s surprise party?” Elliot asked casually.
“Lets see I have no job, no where to go and no family, of course I’ll be there” Cragen said with a half smile as he opened the door to the interview room and saw the little girl.
She was the splitting image of Olive except for her blue eyes.
Amanda knew who he was as he opened the door, she couldn’t help it she had to run to him it was like at last she was home as she sprinted towards he and hugged him with all her strength. “Grandpa Cragen” she whispered she voiced thickened by emotion so strong that tears welled up in her eyes as he answered.
“yes, Munch, could you give us a minute?” Munch nodded and walked out.
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Dani watched the child from the corner of her eyes. There was something about that child which unnerved her deeply.
There was something very familiar about the air of authority she walked with. And her eyes there were something too familiar about them.
Dani strained to hear what was being said but still she couldn’t hear.
Cragen closed his eyes then opened them again “Could you repeat?” he asked afraid that it might not be true.
“I’m Amanda Benson, mommy said to call you if I got into trouble” Amanda said as she listened to the voice at the other end of the line she always wanted to talk with him but mom had forbidden it all she did was tell her stories of the man who was like a father to her.
“Benson, as in Olivia Benson?” Cragen asked and knew that she had some connection to Olivia she had disappeared some years without a trace.
“Yes mom said to call you or Aunt Casey but I wanted to meet you,”
“You’re at precinct 1-6, what is the matter?” Cragen asked his heart racing so much he thought he was going in cardiac arrest. He looked over to the bed side and there was the picture of him and Olivia dancing at her engagement party she had been so happy, he closed his eyes and he could remember the way she told him how she loved him, how it was her dream come true. Cragen thoughts came to an end when Amanda spoke again.
“They are questioning us about a girl who fainted in the park and we helped her.”
“US?” Cragen asked
“Yes me and my best friend Brendon, Grandpa will you come?” Amanda asked shyly.
“Yes I will be there in five minutes until I get there say nothing to no-one” Cragen spoke firmly, knowing that there must be a reason Olivia had gone through such great lengths to keep her a secret.
Olivia was impatient, she felt she knew something was wrong, and Brenda wasn’t answering either phone, and neither of the kids where responding. Olivia typed her daughter a message. Then decided against it, it was time to face to go back and hopefully she didn’t have to face any of them.
Cragen arrived in under three minutes breaking speeding limits and running lights. He walked in he didn’t know what to say he just knew he had to find her.
“Hey Cap’n” Elliot called as she noticed him walking down stairs.
“Elliot am retired” Cragen said with a little smile.”
“Yea not that I can remember, I’ve got two kids here who found a girl in the park and none of them are talking, they called 911.”
“Want me to take a crack at the girl?” Cragen asked
“How did you know there was a girl?” Elliot asked as they walked to the interview room. “She in there with Munch and Dani, by the way you didn’t answer me are you coming to Munch’s surprise party?” Elliot asked casually.
“Lets see I have no job, no where to go and no family, of course I’ll be there” Cragen said with a half smile as he opened the door to the interview room and saw the little girl.
She was the splitting image of Olive except for her blue eyes.
Amanda knew who he was as he opened the door, she couldn’t help it she had to run to him it was like at last she was home as she sprinted towards he and hugged him with all her strength. “Grandpa Cragen” she whispered she voiced thickened by emotion so strong that tears welled up in her eyes as he answered.
“yes, Munch, could you give us a minute?” Munch nodded and walked out.
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please add more!!!! please
please
Yes I know it has been ages! And I am sorry. I hope you enjoy this chapter it's a little long
Cragen was happy sad, perplexed everythin in one! He felt like he was robbed of something of not getting to kow this little girl who called him Grandpa. He wanted to cry he wanted to squeeze her tight and never let her go but he just sat still looking at her the replica of her mother except for her eyes they were baby blue. "Would you like some juice?" he asked her looking around the room.
"Nope can I see Brandon please." she pleaded looking up at Cragen with those blue eyes melting his heart.
She was just so like her mother twisting his heart making him wish for the things he couldn't have; a family. Yet her mother was the only human who cared enough about him to call every sunday whether she was on a case or not, the only person who called him 'dad' when no-one else was listening, Olivia Benson he missed her more than he could say she was like a light in ths office. "Sure but just for a minute" Cragen replied and walked to the next interrogation room.
Amanda dung in her bag and took out the diary and began to read again.
Dear Diary,
I'm not sure what is happening I know his work is demanding, but last night when he didn't come home or check in on me I freaked we had an arguement and though he sent me flowers this morning oh and I puked on them. I am going to the doctor to check this puking thing! It is really gross I really hope it's just seasonal allergies and nothing worse.
Dad keeps me inform on what's happening at the office, maybe that's it I just miss my job, It has been my whole life for so long. I am confussed.
Tillnext time
-Liv
Amanda was a confussed as the writer when she finsihed reading that entry. Who knew mom could be that crazy? she thought as she turned the page. The page was crumpled and wavey like it was exposed to water Amanda tried her best to read the it.
Dear Diary,
I'm so I don't even know how to explain it. I am happy about my pregnancy, I can't wait to tell Elliot can you believe I am pregnant, I'm going to have a baby. Oh my I'm going to be a mom.
Dear baby I know you don't know what I am doing but I am so overwhelmed right now, I promise that as long as I am alive no harm hurt or danger will come to you as long as I can prevent it! I will ensure that you are always happy and with the times that I know the ters will fall with able be there to wipe them away. I love you my baby and I pray to God that I will be a good mom.
Till next time *I'm going to tell El now*
-Liv
Amanda's eyes where misty with tears when she finish reading and wipe her eyes dry as Brandon walked in the room. She ran to him and hugged him tight. "I'm so sorry about all this, did you get through to your mom?" she asked.
"Nope, but I want to go home, I don't like it here. Too many people with guns and that Chinesse guy is trying to get inot my head. Hey what's the matter why were you crying?" Brandon asked looking at her.
"Nothing," she grinned and let him go and turned to see the woman standing there.
"Sorry to interrupt, but you kids are free to go. Do you have any one to call to come for you?" Dani asked.
"Mom isn't home." Brandon spoke holding onto Amanda's hand.
"Well I'm sorry but you will have to stay here for a while longer, would you like something to eat?" she asked.
Amanda took her in again she didn't what it was though what the woman was saying was kind she didn't like her and as a man came to stand in the doorway she fel her stomach turn over she looked at him realization setting in, turning her already pale skin to chalk white, it was the man from the album, the man from this morning's paper. It was Elliot, Elliot Stabler, my father!
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Cragen was happy sad, perplexed everythin in one! He felt like he was robbed of something of not getting to kow this little girl who called him Grandpa. He wanted to cry he wanted to squeeze her tight and never let her go but he just sat still looking at her the replica of her mother except for her eyes they were baby blue. "Would you like some juice?" he asked her looking around the room.
"Nope can I see Brandon please." she pleaded looking up at Cragen with those blue eyes melting his heart.
She was just so like her mother twisting his heart making him wish for the things he couldn't have; a family. Yet her mother was the only human who cared enough about him to call every sunday whether she was on a case or not, the only person who called him 'dad' when no-one else was listening, Olivia Benson he missed her more than he could say she was like a light in ths office. "Sure but just for a minute" Cragen replied and walked to the next interrogation room.
Amanda dung in her bag and took out the diary and began to read again.
Dear Diary,
I'm not sure what is happening I know his work is demanding, but last night when he didn't come home or check in on me I freaked we had an arguement and though he sent me flowers this morning oh and I puked on them. I am going to the doctor to check this puking thing! It is really gross I really hope it's just seasonal allergies and nothing worse.
Dad keeps me inform on what's happening at the office, maybe that's it I just miss my job, It has been my whole life for so long. I am confussed.
Tillnext time
-Liv
Amanda was a confussed as the writer when she finsihed reading that entry. Who knew mom could be that crazy? she thought as she turned the page. The page was crumpled and wavey like it was exposed to water Amanda tried her best to read the it.
Dear Diary,
I'm so I don't even know how to explain it. I am happy about my pregnancy, I can't wait to tell Elliot can you believe I am pregnant, I'm going to have a baby. Oh my I'm going to be a mom.
Dear baby I know you don't know what I am doing but I am so overwhelmed right now, I promise that as long as I am alive no harm hurt or danger will come to you as long as I can prevent it! I will ensure that you are always happy and with the times that I know the ters will fall with able be there to wipe them away. I love you my baby and I pray to God that I will be a good mom.
Till next time *I'm going to tell El now*
-Liv
Amanda's eyes where misty with tears when she finish reading and wipe her eyes dry as Brandon walked in the room. She ran to him and hugged him tight. "I'm so sorry about all this, did you get through to your mom?" she asked.
"Nope, but I want to go home, I don't like it here. Too many people with guns and that Chinesse guy is trying to get inot my head. Hey what's the matter why were you crying?" Brandon asked looking at her.
"Nothing," she grinned and let him go and turned to see the woman standing there.
"Sorry to interrupt, but you kids are free to go. Do you have any one to call to come for you?" Dani asked.
"Mom isn't home." Brandon spoke holding onto Amanda's hand.
"Well I'm sorry but you will have to stay here for a while longer, would you like something to eat?" she asked.
Amanda took her in again she didn't what it was though what the woman was saying was kind she didn't like her and as a man came to stand in the doorway she fel her stomach turn over she looked at him realization setting in, turning her already pale skin to chalk white, it was the man from the album, the man from this morning's paper. It was Elliot, Elliot Stabler, my father!
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