Aliecia
May 18 2008, 05:15 PM
Part 1
Elliot Stabler sat at his desk and stared at the picture of his ex-wife, then glanced over at his
partner Olivia Benson who was typing on her computer. The squad-room was noisy and the detectives
worked there fingers to the bone trying to solve each crime. The Captain Don Cragen walked in with
the Chief on his heels. Opening his ofice door they both walked in and closed the door. Twenty
minutes later after heated discussion the Captain and the Chief walked out. Cragen was red in the
face the Chief looked angry. "Detective Benson and Stabler could you please come here." the Chief
called and they closed door as they entered. "I have an assignment for both of you." he motioned
them to sit, while Cragen was still fuming. "I have information that a ship is kidnapping young girls and
using them for sexual favor, I have tried to get my men in there but they were equiped to deal with
it."
Elliot glared at him, the only person who he liked working for was Don. "They sniffed out them out that
why I want you guys to go undercover," The Chief paused not knowing how to proceed with such a
delicate matter. "as lovers, it's a cruise for lovers. Your Captain will give you the details." he said and
walked off leaving Don with the work.
Okay so let me know what you think?
Bubba_Bridges
May 22 2008, 03:05 AM
Hi Bubba here, I thought you did a good job. Please continue.
retartedforever
May 28 2008, 10:10 PM
wow sounds intresting so far
continue!
pinkydog123
May 29 2008, 01:00 AM
QUOTE (retartedforever @ May 28 2008, 10:10 PM)

wow sounds intresting so far
continue!
OOOO sounds good, cant wait for more
jacobsmommy06
May 29 2008, 01:02 AM
Good start. Keep going.
Aliecia
May 29 2008, 10:17 PM
Thanx
Will update as soon as I can
OliviaBensonStabler
May 30 2008, 03:00 PM
Wow!
I like the start
Aliecia
May 31 2008, 08:19 AM
Cragen was still fuming as the Chief left. Oliva and Elliot watched him, "Have a seat!" he almost shouted, while sitting in his chair.
They obeyed adn waited for him to blow the steam. "Kids, my hands are tied. I think the mission is too dangerous I don't want you two on a ship with murdurers without backup." Cragen sighed and took a gulp of the orange juice that was now hot on his desk. "The Ship leaves the harbour tomorrow your identies are being made as we speak, Huang is going to profile you. Before the end of the day you will be getting the important equipment. Be careful at the first sign of trouble email and I'll land a chopper and pull your asse* out" Cragen said still fuming. He was nervous, something about this case didn't sit well with him. He dismissed them and called the shrink.
Olivia could have killed for a pants the skirt she had chosen to wear, now made her too aware of how close to him she was her sft skin brushing against the fabric of his pants. They walked hand in hand to the dock, Huang and spent the previous day thinking like a couple and now it was time to put into action.
Taking out the ticket Elliot handed it to the graud and smiled down at her and for a moment she thought it was real, returning the smile she realized he was playing the part. They were cleared and young man took their bags and brought them to their room. With hands still entwined Olivia walked in sync with him, other couples watched them as they disappeared in their room. As soon as they were alone Olivia slipped her hands out of his and started to set up her laptop.
"Honey, don't you think we should unpack fisrt?" Elliot asked as he scanned the room for camera's. Honey," I want dad to know that we have set sail. Olivia said glaring at him.
A loud knock on the door interupted there play and Elliot opened the door. "I'm sorry to bother you Mr. Morrison, I hope you enjoy your stay" the young man who had carried their bags earlier said handing him a package.
"Thank you, what your name?" Elliot asked. He smiled politely and replied.
"Andrew, enjoy the rest of the day" he said turning and walking away.
Elliot opened case, it contained champange, choclate and sweets.
justsweet
May 31 2008, 08:41 PM
I LOVE IT! Hurry write more! Please
iloveMCRandSVU
May 31 2008, 11:30 PM
oh lala!!!!! lolz i wonder wat will happen! UPDATE
gesh i love your stories
Aliecia
Jun 11 2008, 12:09 PM
He smiled at her, she returned the smile shyly. "Would you like some champagne? he asked holding up the bottle of champagne while she typed.
"Yea just a half glass" she replied sending the e-mail. "Crap!" she exclaimed. Elliot raised an eyebrow at her outburst.
"What's the matter?" he asked handing her the bubbly liquid.
"I can't send the e-mail." she replied accepting the glass. "Thanks" closing the laptop she opened her suit-case to unpack.
"Just try again later, I'm going to have a look around." he said placing the glass on the small table and walking out the door.
Olivia packed her things into a the drawers to the right and left the ones on the left side for him. Sitting on the bed she wondered how on earth she was going to get throught the next seven days living in the same room with Elliot.
Elliot walked the grounds taking note of emergency exits and hidden passages. There was no sign of anything out of the ordinary just people hugging, kissing and showing there affection to each other. Smiling at an elderly couple who was feeding strawberries to each other.
Finally he wondered back to his room.
Turning the knob he entered the room slowly, a smile spread across his lips as he watched his partner of eight years move to infectious music of socca playing on the radio. Softly he knocked the door and she jumped.
"You didn't see right?" she said suddenly going still and reaching to turn off the radio.
"Only if you didn't want me to" he said still smiling, colour flushed to her cheeks.
"I didn't want you to see." she said taking another sip of the rink he he offered her earlier.
"Then I didn't." he said picking up his case and emptying the contents on the bed
What's your take?
jolec
Jun 12 2008, 04:30 AM
Update please!!
svufaneo
Jun 12 2008, 08:56 AM
oh jeeze.!
they got the bubbly and the sweets.
this could get amazing.!
i love it.!
write more.!
OliviaBensonStabler
Jun 12 2008, 01:09 PM
Aliecia
Jun 14 2008, 07:04 PM
Two days had passed and nothing seemed out of the normal except for the waitress who kept watching their everymove. The table was set a romantic dinner for couples under the stars. For a moment she forget she was on duty and relaxed. Elliot did the same. The voice of Sean Paul rang out and Elliot asked. "May I have this dance?" Smiling she gave him an answer and they danced the night away. She relaxed against him and he just held her while they swayed to the seductive voices of the Backstreet Boys.
"I had fun tonight El." Olivia said as they walked back to their room.
"I'm glad you did it's been awhile since I danced like that." he confessed and opened the door and she got in, "What's this?" Olivia asked as she picked up a piece of paper. A note. "El listen to this; I know who you are, and why you are here meet me at the pool tonight at two. The Waitress" she read then looked up at Elliot.
"Okay so we'll meet her" Elliot said shrugging his shoulders like it was no big deal.
"What if it's a trap?" Olivia asked suddenly concerned.
"Come on Liv, I've got your back and you've got mine. We'll be alright." Elliot assured her by pulling her into a hug.
Olivia stood by the pool side while Elliot stayed unseen protecting her. A shadow emergerd from behind the staircase approaching Olivia.
Olivia stood still and tried to relax while the shadow got close, then it stopped. "Detective Benson." the waitress called and Olivia spun around to face her. "I'm Natasha Space, you probably don't remember me. I was seventeen, seven years ago when you arrested my dad beating the crap out me and raping me. I know why you're here. I was the one who sent the letter to the police."
Olivia turned to face her, not really sure what to say, so she said nothing. "You aren't going to catch him this way, he only uses his girls on couples who get engaged on board or the ones who get married here. I hope I have helped but I have to go." she said and hurried down the corrider. Elliot walked out to meet her and they walked hand in hand back to their room.
"Liv you okay?" he asked when they were safely inside and she was still quiet.
"Yea." she said with a sigh and walked into the bathroom to brush her teeth.
"Move over." Elliot said grabbing his brush. Olivia looked at him shook her head then moved over. "Tomorrow we step it up a notch, what type of ring do you want?" he asked raising brows.
"I want gold with diamond" Olivia said giving him a wink.
svufaneo
Jun 16 2008, 09:33 AM
ah.!
i need more.
UPDATE.!
Who knew you can make an awsome story?
i Do.!
Sarah1989
Jun 16 2008, 09:53 AM
That's sooooo good

More more more please
jolec
Jun 16 2008, 09:57 AM
Next chaper please, I really like your ideas!!!
OliviaMyHero
Jun 16 2008, 09:00 PM
Yes, yes please step it up a notch!
Great going Ali, this one has great potential.
Aliecia
Jun 18 2008, 02:30 PM
Olivia looked over at him sleeping him chest moving up and down in a steady ready and a smile on his lips. The sheet had fallen to the floor and Olivia picked it up and threw it over him but he grabbed her. "El" she squealed frightened.
"What were you doing?" he asked his voice husky as he let her go suddenly and she fell on him.
"I was covering you." Olivia replied getting up but he stilled her.
"Ok I like this type of covering." Elliot said teasing her. Olivia blushed hotly and quickly got off him.
"I'm going by the pool," she said picking out her only bikini, full black leaving very little to imagination.
"Okay, I'm going by the gift and jewerly place." Elliot said as he placed his legs over the side of the bed.
"Aren't you going to put on sunscreen" he asked when she returned from the bathroom with a towel around her waist.
"No I want to get a tan." she said walking past him. Elliot held onto her hand and she flet to contact down to her toes.
"Go out there like that and you'll be baked." Elliot said as he reached for the sunscreen on the dresser. "Come lay down, and I'll apply for you" Elliot said unconscious of the fire that was building.
"I think I'll pass." Olivia said knowing that to have his hands on her like that would only kill her.
"Come on!" Elliot said with a devillish grin and push her on the bed. As fast as he could he strandled her and the moment he did he knew it was a big mistake! To have Olivia pinned beneath him like that. He swallowed hard, couldn't breathe could scarely think as sensation surged through him awaking goosebumps on his flesh. Opening the bottle he squirt the screen in his hand and rubbed it together and started to rub the nape of her neck. A sigh escaped her lips as his hands worked his way down her back, and causing every fibre of her being to come awake!
jolec
Jun 19 2008, 03:55 AM
Aarrggh!! Please tell me you did not stop writing at this point ???
How are you Aliecia?
If you can please, going on with this story!
svufaneo
Jun 20 2008, 01:14 PM
agh.!
i almost cried cause you stopped.!
update please?!
i crave for this story.
its my new food group.
jolec
Jun 23 2008, 11:24 AM
My dear Aliecia,...
I'd like to read more soon..I have to move for sone days soon and I'd like to know what happens next before going......

but no pressure, at all...

lol
svusuperfreek
Jun 26 2008, 09:50 AM
WoW, great story so far. I hope you update soon!
Aliecia
Jun 26 2008, 11:33 AM
Olivia was lymph beneath Elliot touch. Her heart pounding init's cage as he massaged the cream in to her neck. A moan escaped her lips as his fingers trailed down her side. "El" she whispered closing her eyes as sensation ripped through her body.
Elliot knew he should get off but his hands move on their own accord enjoy the feel of her silky soft skin. Elliot swallowed hard as she shivered beneath him and his erection grew straining against the fabric of his pj's. Elliot wondered what she'd say if he placed a kiss to the center of her back. Elliot didn't have the power to stop as his head lowed and placed a kiss to on the nape of her neck. Olivia shivered and another moan tore free from her lips and wondered if this was really happening. "Liv" Elliot said in a husky tone as he tasted her soft flesh the shampoo and bath gel she used floated to his nose drugging him. "El... please." she whispered as the computer chimed "You've got mail" bringing them back from the road they were about to travel in the nick of time!
Elliot slid off her and Olivia felt the hardness of his arousal pressing into her flesh and a fire blazed through her. Soon the bathroom door was closing and she was all alone.
Olivia fummed as she sat by the reading a book, and watching the couples play, lowering her head once more to the book she squealed as water touched. Making a face she lowered her book only to see Elliot's smiling face. "Come on!" he called as she smiled at him. Olivia thought about the consequences and quickly said.
"No." Elliot set his hand making his intention known. "You wouldn't. " Olivia said. But soon the water hit her face. "You!" she screamed and couples turned to look at them. Placing the book down with all eyes still on her Olivia walked to steps and started to desend. Elliot greet her there on his knees he pulled the velvet box and asked.
"Will you marry me?"
svusuperfreek
Jun 27 2008, 04:55 PM
This is awesome!! Please update soon, but no pressure.

That was cute!
imsvu23
Jun 27 2008, 10:56 PM
good job sweetie! it was good!
OliviaMyHero
Jun 30 2008, 01:52 PM
Wow!
Aliecia
Jun 30 2008, 06:20 PM
For a moment just that moment, I was lost and against my own will tears misted my eyes. Get yourself together she screamed inwardly trying to force a smile, while she tried with all her might to keep his gaze. Olivia was speechless! Nodding her head she answered Elliot's proposal.
Elliot knew that it wasn't really but her reaction was so sincere, damn he thought my partner is a great actress, as he slipt the ring on her finger. Their little audience cheered and the young couples chanted "Kiss! Kiss! Kiss!" Elliot pulled her into the water and stared in her eyes losing himself in the chocolate depths. "Liv, I have to kiss you" Elliot whispered in her ear, the breath warming her neck and causing a fire to burn.
She swallowed hard but forgot to breathe as Elliot lips met hers in a sweet kiss and she was lost, forgetting about the assignment and everything else she enjoyed the feel of his lips on her own as she brought her hands to his neck.
Elliot shivered when she moaned in his mouth, and for the moment forgot it was all an act. Running his hands through her brown silky hair, it felt the way he always imagined silky and soft. Why couldn't this be the real thing? he wondered as he heard the crowd cheering and reluctantly pulled away.
Olivia blushed. "Awww!" the crowd said as Elliot hugged her and together they swam.
The eyes of everyone were on them even the eyes of the manager his eyes they wanted the most.
"Honey" Elliot said going to stand before Olivia. "Check out who is here, two o'clock"
Olivia slowly turned to the manager watching them with a creepy smile.
"Seems like phase one is complete" she replied and ran her hands down his chest loving the feel of the damp hair that was now sticking to his muscular chest. 'Why culdn't he be all mine?' she wondered as she laced her hand around his neck and placed a quick kiss to the base of his neck. 'Oh how long I have wanted to do that! Thank you Mr. Manager' she thought.
Elliot knew she had skills but dear Father this was too real! Was this really just an act or does my partner Olivia Benson really want me, God knows I really want her and if she doesn't stop this I might be forced to have her!
svufaneo
Jun 30 2008, 07:26 PM
Oh em gee.!
dont stop writing.
this story is so sweet.
i need it.
update soon.!
pinkydog123
Jun 30 2008, 09:47 PM
gosh! this is so good! update yours so i can update mine!

:D
jolec
Jul 1 2008, 09:30 AM
Hi sweetie ! I'm back and I love your story !!! Please update asap !
OliviaBensonStabler
Jul 1 2008, 08:50 PM
Aww this is sweet!
Aliecia
Jul 7 2008, 03:32 PM
Elliot lifted her in his arms with such ease it was as if she was a feather. She was soaring as she continued placing small kisses to the nape of his neck. Elliot groaned and when he thought his erection couldn't get any harder she proved him wrong when she twisted in his arms. He walked past the audience and was way down the corridor when he slid her down his body. Olivia couldn't let go for the fear that she might fall. Elliot enjoyed the feel of her small soft feminine body pressed so closely to him yet it was abosolute torture.
Elliot opened the door and they made their way inside panting for breath. And in the darkening room sense came not a minute too soon as Olivia and Elliot recoiled!
The clock on the walk ticked and silence filled the room. "So I guess we fooled them" Elliot finally said stepping out of the bathroom.
"I guess we did" Olivia replied blush covering her entire being.
"You are quite the little actress" he commented as he sat beside her on the bed so his knee was brushing against her thigh.
Olivia wanted to scream
'it's no act! I want you!' and his knee touchig her sending pleasureable waves cruising through her body. The contact was sweet yet she wanted to pull away but never finding the strength instead she savoured the moment.
"I guess I can save my life" she finally said closing her eyes; hoping he didn't see, didn't know what the simple contact was doing to her!
"I'm gonna check in with Dad," Elliot said making a face while reaching for the laptop, just then there was a knock on the door.
"I'll get it" Olivia said urging Elliot to sit while she walked to the door and opened.
"Miss Henry." a curly haired teen said handing her an envelope.
"Yes" Olivia said taking the envelope and inspecting it.
"The boss asked me to bring this to your room" he said politely.
"Thank you very much"
"Your welcome" he said and turned leaving Olivia.
"Who was that honey?" Elliot asked while Olivia slowly closed the door.
"Not sure"
"Let me see" he said stretching his hand and placing the laptop on the floor slightly closed.
Elliot ripped the letter open and read.
Dear Mr. Morrison:
As a gift to you we are hosting a private bachelor's party for you tonight at 8.
Miss Henry.
We hosting also hosting a GNO for your at 8.
Looking forward to seeing you both.
A. Mackenzie
Manager.
I want to thank all of you who took the time to comment! They made me extremely happy!
I hope you enjoy this chapter; let me know what you think please.
svufaneo
Jul 7 2008, 07:01 PM
Yey, first one to comment this time.!
anyways...
You need to update.!
because i LOVE IT!
uh oh, there about to party!
sounds fun.!
mind if i join?
jk. but, then again who wouldnt want to party with MH and CM?!
UPDATE GIRL.!
i missed you and i feed off your story.!
jolec
Jul 8 2008, 12:17 AM
I loved it !!!
Please update when you can!!!
I want to know what will happen next !!!!!
pinkydog123
Jul 8 2008, 10:00 AM
UGH! so good!! plz continue!!
justsweet
Jul 11 2008, 10:10 PM
Plz update i cant wait any longer so plz update soon plz plz *begging* P.S im a big fan of all ur stories
Aliecia
Jul 12 2008, 05:43 PM
Thank you guys so much! I hope you enjoy this chapter and leave em reviews they make me happy!
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Olivia took care in dressing; somehow something about this GNO didn't sit well with her. Olivia sighed and Elliot gave her a little hug that caught her off guard. "It's gonna be fine Liv." He said touching his hand to the gun at her ankle beneath her hipsters. She sighed and smiled in one and wondered what it would be like if this was truly them no acting just her as a woman and Elliot a man? "Come on we are going to be late" he said and dropped an unexpected kiss to her cheek. The spot burned and absently she softly caressed it.
"Okay just don't have too much fun without me" she replied giving him a wink as she let his hand go and walked down the corridor in search of the club.
Elliot watched her for a minute as her hips swayed and the small of her soft back was exposed he wished she was his and only his!
Elliot found the room with a lot of men and two girls they couldn't be more than 16 he thought as he watched the group of newly weds and engaged men grovel over them. His stomach turned and he was about to leave when he saw Mackenzie. "Mr. Morrison, leaving already? He asked ordering a drink from the bar.
"Yea, I miss my baby" Elliot said and realized without a doubt it was true he missed her.
"Oh" he said nudging him with a sheepish grin. "Ok just enjoy the guys company for a little while then you can go to your foxy girl" Mackenzie said and gave Elliot a wink.
Elliot felt like throttling him, how dare he speak of Olivia like that! Enough though he thought she was somkin' "Hey come I can acknowledge beauty" he said moving his hand as if to make a point.
Elliot calmed himself and smiled. "Yea she a beauty isn't she?" he replied, more at ease yet keeping an eye on the girl dancing with the men. "May I have a Scotch please?" Elliot asked the bartender.
"Coming right up" he replied handing Elliot the DRINK Elliot gulped it down fast and soon found he was feeling a little dizzy.
"Are you alright Mr. Morrison?" Mackenzie asked as he noticed Elliot swaying slowly and a smile crept to his lips. "Tiffany! Tiffany!" he called the red-head who was dancing with the men. "Could you take Mr. Morrison to his room?" he asked and gave her a wink.
Elliot found the child looking girl to be quite strong as she carried his.
His room was dark and spinning and helped him to the bed. "Are you alright?" she asked. But Elliot heard pure noise and she was beginning to multiply right before his eyes! A sharp pain sliced his neck and Elliot grabbed at it and she yelped. "I'm sorry!" and struggled out of his grasp which was surprisingly weak. 'What the hell is wrong with me' he thought as he felt the urgent stirring in his loins.
Olivia was dancing and having fun. Grabbing at a glass of wine that was passing her way, the waitress gave her a glass and stuffed a note into her hand. Olivia quickly excused herself from the women who were chatting with her. In the privacy of the bathroom she unfolded the note and read. DANGER!!!
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EO4EVR
Jul 12 2008, 06:43 PM
more please
Addicted2Benson
Jul 13 2008, 12:36 AM
OKAY I HAVENT BEEN HERE IN A VERY LONG TIME BUT I JUST GOT CAUGHT UP AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVE UR STORY!!!!
jolec
Jul 14 2008, 01:48 AM
I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT!!!!!!
Please update when you can!
(Hoping it won't be long.....)
pinkydog123
Jul 14 2008, 09:59 AM
oh dont stop there this is getting really good!
justsweet
Jul 14 2008, 10:10 AM
i HATE having to wait for more but i LOVE this story lol plz write more
Aliecia
Aug 3 2008, 12:43 PM
This is OUT OF CHARACTER for our Detectives, but I hope you like it. Thanks for the reviews
DANGER! The words jumped out from the paper like a physical blow, sending her adrenaline pumping in overdrive.
Her mind was racing with all different types of scenarioes as she unbuckled the slippers she was wearing and drew up her pants to find the gun. It calmed her for a moment as she walked through the now dark corridor making it to her room.
Olivia stopped looking at the door, closing her eyes she prayed a brief prayer and slowly pulled the door. "El" she whispered when she was safely inside. "No please don't!" Olivia heard a high pitched cry for help. With her back to wall she slowly opened the door. Her eyes, her heart and every part of her freezing as she watched the scene before her eyes play out and powerless to stop it.
"Please help me!" the cry came jerling Olivia back to the present forcing her to see what was really happening, but she didn't want to this wasn't really it couldn't be! Her throat left dry as she tried to speak.
"El!" her voice was soft in the room and both heads turned to see her.
Olivia watched as he trembled and let go of his prey. "What's going on?" Olivia heard herself ask as she tried to keep the angry tears abay.
"I'm sorry!" the girl whimpered. "I really didn't mean to." she cried looking at Olivia and Elliot not knowing who to trust.
Elliot advanced upon them grabbing Olivia by the wrist he pullled her violently towards him and took possesion of her lips. It took all her strength to pull away from his powerful grip. "What the hell is going on!" Olivia screamed
"It's the drugs, he doesn't know you" Tiffany cried, pleading with Olivia to understand.
"El, El!" Olivia said touching his jaw with such tenderness. He groaned gripping her tighter till she could barely feel her hand. Olivia searched his eyes but the ocean blue was now dark midnight, his brows was wet with perpiration and some-how he was trembling.
"He's going to die" Tiffany said a sob escaping his lips.
Olivia managed somehow to get her hand free and hold him captive though it was no easy task. "The drugs that Mr. Mac put in his drink causes major damage to the brain, it couses the brain stem to swell and explode." Tiffany said with her eyes glued to the floor.
"What?!" Was all Olivia could manage.
"It's some sort of rape drug, but if it's not out of your system in half an hour it's too late." she swallowed hard lifting her head to try and face Olivia's piecing brown eyes.
"Okay let me get this straight, you drug him now you're gonna tell me he's gonna die if it isn't out of his system." Olivia eyes narrowed to dangerous slits as she held the girl's gaze while struggling to hold Elliot in place.
"How the hell do I get it out?!" Olivia heard herself scream
Tiffany face went red the white all at once.
Elliot started to tremble now uncontrollably. Tiffany shivered then took a deep breath her face taking on the essence of the child she was and fresh tears brimmed her eyes as she spoke. "You have to have sex with him, that's what I was supposed to do but I can't manage him and I don't know what to do!" she confessed. And for a moment Olivia felt like hugging her and telling her it was alright, but Elliot struggled again.
"Get out of here!" Olivia commanded.
"No! I have to get the tape of us... you knowing... or Mr. Mac is going to kill my mom/" she sobbed
"If you don't get out of here I'm going to kill you" Olivia stated galring at the girl.
Tiffany heeded and left the room and Elliot broke free, causing Olivia tuble back crashing in to the facebasin.
Elliot turned to her and Olivia sighed. Elliot took her from the floor with a force. Olivia felt her self spinning then crashing to earth as he threw her on the bed!
So what do you think? All reviews please
justsweet
Aug 3 2008, 01:24 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW i didn't see that coming, I love it!!!! GREAT JOB!! Update soon
pinkydog123
Aug 3 2008, 08:12 PM
UGH!!! WHY STOP THERE! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!! and i saw you lost your account too, this whole update thing really screwed alot of ppl over
dramawitsvu17
Aug 3 2008, 09:29 PM
omg woo! cant wait for more!
dadoinkdoink
Aug 7 2008, 05:16 PM
Wonderful Job! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Please update soon!

Doink Doink
Aliecia
Aug 8 2008, 09:36 PM
Thanks for the reviews guys. I hope you like this one
This is still out of Character!
Previously on: Undercover Lover.
"Okay let me get this straight, you drug him and now you're gonna tell me he's gonna die if it isn't out of his system." Olivia eyes narrowed to dangerous slits as she held the girl's gaze while struggling to hold Elliot in place.
"How the hell do I get it out?!" Olivia heard herself scream
Tiffany face went red the white all at once.
Elliot started to tremble now uncontrollably. Tiffany shivered then took a deep breath her face taking on the essence of the child she was and fresh tears brimmed her eyes as she spoke. "You have to have sex with him, that's what I was supposed to do, but I can't manage him and I don't know what to do!" she confessed.
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Everything was happening fast! Olivia wanted to close her eyes and open them again and pray that it would all be just a really bad dream but she knew it wasn’t, this was very much real! Self Sacrifice is what they called it she reminded herself as the low-cut blouse she wore was torn from her body and against her will she shivered.
“El” she whispered in the darkness of the room and for a moment she dared to look into the black depths of his eyes. His lips came down on hers hard the kiss was demanding there was no giving all he did was take! But wasn’t that what she wanted to give? His hands found the catch of her bra with expert finger he unclasped the hook and her breast danced in freedom. She couldn’t look, this isn’t real she reminded herself as he stroked a finger over the sensitive bud. A moan from deep within broke free. “This is isn’t real!” she said out loud trying to convince herself. Her pants were gone next and so was the underwear she wore. She heard the unzipping of looked up in time to him in live and living colors. ‘crap!’ she exclaimed, Olivia couldn’t look away she just stared at him and he let out a throaty groan, then he smiled with pride when her eyes finally wondered to his face.
He grasped her hips and pulled her to the end of the bed. He never spoke he didn’t say a word and as he opened her legs he kept his eyes fixed on the face of the beautiful woman and for a moment he saw uncertainty and fear. “Argh!” he exclaimed and he placed himself deep within her and heard her cry in pain, then she called a name “El” she whispered.
For a moment his eyes were blue again and he was the man she loved again soft and gentle. Thrust after thrust after thrust and finally something within broke free and he fell uncontrollably unto the bed.
Olivia’s eyes closed her body exhausted, and silently she prayed he would be okay!
One hour and 15 Mins later.
Elliot head pounded with a full blown headache, and slowly his eyes fluttered open and thought what a strange dream. The room was pitch black and his eyes widened. But unfortunately that wasn’t much help turning lazily to his side his touched the lamp and light flooded the room.
Elliot’s heart began to beat so fast and loud it was almost audible in the still quiet room.
“L:iv” Elliot said touching the naked body of his partner. Looking around his noticed the torn clothes and his own nudity, and the dream he thought he had came to life!
Okay so what do you think? Thanks for the reviews. All reviews welcome
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