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Olivia’s eyes slowly fluttered and the bright light caused them to ache. “Liv” Elliot called again his hands resting on her shoulder helping her to turn.
“Hmm?” she responded weakly as she opened her eyes again, this time it wasn’t the light that cause her to flinch or sudden fear to over shadow her; it was the well built naked man was kneeling in front of her with an unreadable expression on his face.
“Olivia wake up! What happened?” he almost shouted shaking her aching body.
“Nothing happened” Olivia responded moistening her lips.
“What do you mean nothing happened take a look around!” he yelled this time as he noticed the bruises on her skin in the most delicate places. Elliot groaned and threw the sheet to cover her, yelling at her naked wasn’t doing much good to his anatomy. But he regretted a moment later when he was the blood! His eyes roamed her body now and there it was pooled on her thighs that ran to the white sheet, his stomach churned and he empty the contents of his stomach, his head spinning violently. “Olivia! Did I do that?” Elliot heard himself ask.
Tears were in her eyes and running softly down her cheeks. “El, it’s not your fault you were drugged” she tried to explain while dragging the sheet to cover her body from his piercing gaze.
“What do you mean I was drugged? I want to know what happened.” He said his body dropping to the bed he felt weak.
“The party he drugged you and then…” a soft sob escaped her lips as she tried to explain.
“Did I rape you?” he asked softly taking her hands in his only to have her flinch and pull away. “No!” Elliot screamed from somewhere deep within himself when he realized that this was his work the bruises the blood everything her reaction; he raped his partner!
“No, El, you didn’t rape me I gave myself to you freely” Olivia said trying to fix the damage she just created.
“Dammit Olivia be honest!” he said dragging back the sheet and looking at the dark mark and the blood that was now dried to her skin.
“No you didn’t rape me!” Olivia yelled “You couldn’t Elliot the drug causes you to act that way” she said with tears streaming down her face and she was unable to stop them.
Elliot breathed loudly and stormed off into the bathroom to run her a bath. Elliot returned and without a word he picked her up and brought her with him then deposited her into the warm water. “Liv, I’m so sorry, but were you thinking look at you what if I had killed?” he question as he applied soap to her sponge and started to bathe her.
“I can bathe myself” Olivia grumbled taking the sponge and staring at him.
“Why did you do it?” Elliot asked letting go the sponge and keeping her gaze
“Cause if I didn’t if would be a someone else or you wouldn’t make it” Olivia said still staring at him wishing he would leave her alone.
“Who else?” Elliot asked looking down he saw blood pooling in the water. “Were you a virgin?”
Olivia froze, her eyes following his gaze to the diluted blood at her ankles.
“No, but it has been along time” she said, closing the shower door.

Elliot swallowed hard as he stood beside her, and waited for the team to meet them, they hadn’t spoken in two days, she was jumpy especially around him, and it was eating him away. He didn’t care if it was consensual or not he just didn’t feel like a man any more and all those things that the rapist had throw back at him landed in his face. “Take away the gun, and the badge and you are just like me a rapist!”

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POOR OLIVIA...I FEEL SO BAD FOR HER AND ELLIOT ALSO...I NEED TO KNOW WAT HAPPENS SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Ali,

I love it !!!

Please continue asap!!!!!

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fantistic writer!

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WOW!!!
Can't wait to see where this goes from here! Update soon!

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Sirens blaring that how Detective Tutuola and Munch made their grand entrance as Olivia and Elliot stood silently waiting for them.
With his pistols posed on hips they made their way over to Mackenzie who was collecting money from one of the honey-mooners. Slowly Munch walked towards him with the handcuff making little sounds.
“Mr. Mackenzie?” Fin asked giving his friends a wink.
“Yes” he answered with a little too much confidence for Elliot’s purpose.
“You are under arrest for unlawful possession of illegal substance, soliciting and kidnapping young ladies” Fin said with a smile.
“You have the right to remain silent anything you say can and will be used against you in the court of law. You have the right to an attorney if you can’t afford one, one will be appointed to you…”

Elliot smiled and slowly he felt his deflated ego begin to grow. But it was gone the minute he looked over at Olivia and saw her shiver.
“Liv?” Elliot question just to see her jump then force a smile to her lips.
“I’m sorry” she replied and placed a little distance between them and Elliot swore softly as they made their way to the jeep.
Mackenzie looked at them and shook his head and a wry smile graced his lips. “Detective Stabler how does it feel to be a rapist?” he asked sheepishly “And my dear Detective Benson how does it feel to be the victim? You see I made you too for cops and then I researched you. You see those cars lined up down there, they are here for me, if you have any sense you will let me go or they will have fun killing you off” he said with his smile spreading broadly on his lips.
“Well you see my deary I rather die then have a piece of crap like you roaming the streets. Oh and your homies will be joining you, you’ll probably be cell mates” Olivia said in his face
“You are making a big mistake” he said with a smile
“Really watch me” Olivia said and gave Elliot the signal.
“Cap’n they are all yours” Elliot into the walkie talkie and sirens started blaring and surround the cars they were waiting on side walk.
“crap” Mackenzie exclaimed as he realized his faith.

Applause erupted as the detectives entered the precinct. “Detectives my office now”

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That was great! Update soon im wondering why he wants them in the office! Plz lol

oooo, he probably found out, we just need to wait and see!!

i LUV it!!!

OMG!!!! i luv this story! i am also a big fan of ALL of Alicia's stories. please post more soon!

It's great and all..
But this story is on http://www.fanfiction.net/ also...
So.. what's up with that??

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uh oh...i wonder what he wants them for and i cant wait forever so please UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!!!

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Elliot looked down at Olivia at the captain’s request and saw fear flicker in her brown eyes. He wanted to squeeze her hand tell her that it would be alright but he knew that it wouldn’t everything had changed. Slowly they walked to the office dreading what was to come. The door creaked on it hinges as Elliot held it open for Olivia, They both swallowed hard.
“Come in have a seat” Cragen said as he studied the faces of his detectives.
“I think I will remain standing” Olivia replied as she watched Elliot lower himself to the chair.
“Okay” Cragen replied sitting in his own chair. “I just wanted to thank you and congratulate you on the wonderful job you have done. He smiled then picked up a folder.
“Here you two need to fill these out, and have a great two weeks holiday” Cragen smiled.
“Cap’n are you ok?” Elliot asked, watching how the older man’s smiled widened and he sat back in his chair.
“Yes, now fill out the forms and get your butts out of here and keep your cell phones close we might have t call on you” he replied.
“You’re serious? Olivia asked
“Yes now get out of here both of you,” he paused then grinned “You look like crap” he finished and a little chuckle.

The day was at a close and Elliot couldn’t seem to drag his eyes from his partner. Watching her as she scribbled on a piece of paper and past it to John and he smiled. “Come on Livvy, tell me something I don’t know, like did you have to kiss Elliot?” Munch asked with a devilish grin on his face. But what he saw as a simple joke backfired.
“Screw you John!” Olivia exclaimed and stormed out into the falling night.
Munch looked at Elliot as he followed Olivia.
“Liv wait up!” Elliot called after, he didn’t know what he was going to say but he was going to fix it.
“Leave me alone” Olivia replied running into a bar.
“Liv!” Elliot screamed when he searched and couldn’t find her. “Fine I’ll leave you alone” Elliot said not caring about the eyes that stared at him. “I’m not a rapist” Elliot said softly trying to convince himself more than anything.

The words rang out loudly in her ears and it broke her heart. ‘So much for self sacrifice’ Olivia thought as she faced him.
“What do you want?” she asked taking off the cap of her beer bottle.
Elliot was startled, “I-I want to talk” Elliot said moving out of the door way.
“What about?” Olivia asked as she led the way out the door.
“I didn’t mean for what hap-“
“I know Elliot, stop stressing it! I know!” Olivia said angrily.
“Why is it you treat me like I’m a rapist?” Elliot asked holding unto her arm forcing her to face him.
“I don’t know, I just need some time” Olivia replied but even as she spoke to him she could still hear his words.
“Liv you know if I wasn’t drugged I would have never had sex with you” Elliot said to her.
But Olivia had had it! She knew it was all an act he didn’t love or even want her, but the sick thing was in all the games she lost her heart to a man who didn’t even want her. Elliot Stabler.

OMG so good! plz update!

WOW!!! Poor Liv! Great Job!
Can't wait to rad more!
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OMG......YOU KILLED ME.....
I like your updates, please continue!!!

Great Job Allie!
Becky

OOOOOHHHH please update soon.....x

how sad. poor Liv.

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Okay thank you guys for all those lovely reviews!
I hope you like this chappy let me know what you think!
Two months had flown by and Olivia had made up her mind she didn’t want to be there anymore; the memory of the cruise was now a nightmare and she wanted it to end.
Slowly she typed her resignation.

Elliot couldn’t get the images out of his head! He couldn’t bring himself to talk to Olivia and he wanted everything to go back to the way it was before that stupid trip!
He stopped at her door but he still didn’t know how and what to say to her.

The office was empty but light was on in Cragen office; Olivia inhaled and boldly walked up to his office and knocked.
“Come in” Cragen said pulling off his glasses
“Good Morning” Olivia said and letting out the breath she was holding.
“Is everything alright?” Cragen asked notice the sad look on her face and her skinny frame.
“No Captain, I want out” Olivia replied and a lone tear ran down her cheek. Cragen stood to his feet
“Why?” Cragen couldn’t help but ask.
“Cragen It’s complicated” Olivia said and handed him the letter.
Cragen could see the pain in her eyes and he felt her heart twist, the lone tear that escaped her eyes didn’t go unnoticed by Cragen.
“Baby what’s wrong?” Cragen asked pulling her into a warm embrace. And in his arms she cried really cried.
“Liv let me help you what’s wrong?” Cragen asked her when the tears subsided
“I-I just have to go” Olivia replied using the Kleenex to wipe her now red nose.
“But why Liv, where will you go?” Olivia was like a daughter to him and he didn’t want her to leave.
“I am going back to my house.” Olivia answered him truthfully. Cragen knew that something really wasn’t right now because the last place Olivia wanted to go was home!
“Liv please tell me why, let me help you.”
“You can’t, just give Elliot this for me please” Olivia said and handed him a letter and walked

Elliot noticed her desk was empty and walked to Cragen’s office.
“Where is Liv?” Elliot asked
“She’s gone, she asked me to give you this.” Cragen said and handed him the letter.

I really never meant to ruin your life. I really was just trying to help you.
So I am leaving so you want have me the constant reminder of that nightmare to burden you.
Goodbye Elliot
Love Liv

Ali ! I loved it, please update !!

Great Job!! But so sad. Poor Liv....
Hope El can talk out if leaving.
Can't wait for more!
Update soon!
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omg i love it you cant
just stop there!
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Hello my dear friends and readers thank you all for reading the story!
Part two is up "Forced to wed!" I hope you like it.
Ali

So if you have stories here you can't have them on fanfiction.net?
Anyway I love the story ALI

great story post more soon new reader