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Judyg
What a nice surprise - chapter 6. biggrin.gif I have been spending the day reading - and NOT reading what I had planned.

I'm so relieved that Grandpa is out of danger and home. And I love that Bobby and Annie will work through this disagreement as well as anything else that comes along. Their's is a strong, healthy marriage. They'll argue more but they will always be there for each other.

Whipped cream, huh? I wonder where you got the idea for that! tongue.gif
ciaddict
QUOTE (Judyg @ Aug 31 2008, 04:16 PM) *
What a nice surprise - chapter 6. biggrin.gif I have been spending the day reading - and NOT reading what I had planned.

I'm so relieved that Grandpa is out of danger and home. And I love that Bobby and Annie will work through this disagreement as well as anything else that comes along. Their's is a strong, healthy marriage. They'll argue more but they will always be there for each other.

Whipped cream, huh? I wonder where you got the idea for that! tongue.gif



I can't tell you how long I've been wanting to work whipped cream into the story! No handcuffs yet, though. laugh.gif

Thanks for your comments, Judy. There might be more disagreements in their future, but I try to keep them "fair fights" and not let them escalate to saying really hurtful things. Something I never seemed to get the hang of in RL. blink.gif
Judyg
QUOTE (ciaddict @ Aug 31 2008, 07:25 PM) *
I can't tell you how long I've been wanting to work whipped cream into the story! No handcuffs yet, though. laugh.gif

Thanks for your comments, Judy. There might be more disagreements in their future, but I try to keep them "fair fights" and not let them escalate to saying really hurtful things. Something I never seemed to get the hang of in RL. blink.gif



I liked how neither of them really backed down from their point of view, but they got passed it and still support and love each other. I understand about the 'fair fight' issue - that was why Charli said "I don't like you very much" and went for a walk. Better to take a breath and think before you say something you can't take back.
flashymom
Another great job, cousin! Hopefully I can go hole up in my room and get more done on my story. I have a great scene I need to get down on paper before I lose it.

Whipped cream, huh? biggrin.gif I also like the Christmas presents. I'll just bet Christmas Eve is Annie's fave day of the year if Bobby keeps giving her sexy lingere...so he can peel it off her slowly and ::thud!::

The whole reaching over to grab her hand and hold it while driving -- that is SO totally me and Hubby; missed it yesterday having to drive for 8 hours in the van and him driving the truck. Kinda hard to hold hands when your driving 75 miles an hour down the highway!
ciaddict
QUOTE (Judyg @ Aug 31 2008, 03:38 PM) *
I liked how neither of them really backed down from their point of view, but they got passed it and still support and love each other. I understand about the 'fair fight' issue - that was why Charli said "I don't like you very much" and went for a walk. Better to take a breath and think before you say something you can't take back.


Whoo Hoo! I got on, at my mother's house! I did it the way Janx said and it worked!

I think I said something about liking the way you wrote Bobby and Charki's fight (at least I hope I said it). I liked her being able to say that and walk away. Not "I hate you!", but "I don't like you very much." Much better.

QUOTE (flashymom @ Aug 31 2008, 05:44 PM) *
Another great job, cousin! Hopefully I can go hole up in my room and get more done on my story. I have a great scene I need to get down on paper before I lose it.

Whipped cream, huh? biggrin.gif I also like the Christmas presents. I'll just bet Christmas Eve is Annie's fave day of the year if Bobby keeps giving her sexy lingere...so he can peel it off her slowly and ::thud!::

The whole reaching over to grab her hand and hold it while driving -- that is SO totally me and Hubby; missed it yesterday having to drive for 8 hours in the van and him driving the truck. Kinda hard to hold hands when your driving 75 miles an hour down the highway!


I'll be watching my e-mail for the next chapter, FM. Hope you won't have to stay away for too long.

For the next chapter I was going to mention another Christmas tradition--Bobby always gives her a dress to wear to a New Year's Eve party. But I started looking at web sites to find a dress I wanted and made the mistake of asking my daughter's advice. She has the PERFECT dress in mind and is scouring the internet to find it. I told her to just describe it to me; that's the only reason I wanted a picture, so I could describe it. But oh NO! It has become a crusade to find THE dress! I think I'll skip that part for now and go on with the rest of the chapter. laugh.gif
flashymom
QUOTE (ciaddict @ Aug 31 2008, 09:47 PM) *
For the next chapter I was going to mention another Christmas tradition--Bobby always gives her a dress to wear to a New Year's Eve party. But I started looking at web sites to find a dress I wanted and made the mistake of asking my daughter's advice. She has the PERFECT dress in mind and is scouring the internet to find it. I told her to just describe it to me; that's the only reason I wanted a picture, so I could describe it. But oh NO! It has become a crusade to find THE dress! I think I'll skip that part for now and go on with the rest of the chapter. laugh.gif

Maybe you should get Bobby to help you shop for your MOTG dress.... wink.gif
AmandaB
Great chapter, once again. I'm glad that Grandpa is all right, and that Bobby and Annie have made up. I look forward to the next chapter.
spookycc
QUOTE (Judyg @ Aug 31 2008, 07:16 PM) *
What a nice surprise - chapter 6. biggrin.gif I have been spending the day reading - and NOT reading what I had planned.

I'm so relieved that Grandpa is out of danger and home. And I love that Bobby and Annie will work through this disagreement as well as anything else that comes along. Their's is a strong, healthy marriage. They'll argue more but they will always be there for each other.

Whipped cream, huh? I wonder where you got the idea for that! tongue.gif


Yeah, not like we've ever talked about whipped cream in HERE. wink.gif

QUOTE (ciaddict @ Aug 31 2008, 07:25 PM) *
I can't tell you how long I've been wanting to work whipped cream into the story! No handcuffs yet, though.

Thanks for your comments, Judy. There might be more disagreements in their future, but I try to keep them "fair fights" and not let them escalate to saying really hurtful things. Something I never seemed to get the hang of in RL.


I KNOW! I wanted the handcuffs in there, too! tongue.gif
ciaddict
REBUILDING
Chapter 7


This chapter is set around the episodes Legion and Cherry Red.

Thank you Spook!



The ringing of Bobby’s cell phone pulled Annie from a deep sleep and she groaned in protest as she lost the warmth of his body curled around hers when he reached to answer it. She looked at the clock next to her bed as he mumbled words of agreement with whoever was on the other line. 12:07 AM. Annie had been asleep for about two hours. It was actually early for Bobby to be asleep. She wasn’t sure when he had come to bed, but thought he probably hadn’t been asleep for long. She stayed where she was as she listened to his end of the conversation.

“Uh huh. Yeah. What’s the address? OK, yeah, I got it. Meet you there.”

He ended the call and rolled back against Annie. She snuggled against his warmth, knowing that he would be getting up and leaving in a moment. He nuzzled her hair and whispered into her ear, “We caught a body. I’ve gotta go.”

“OK. Bundle up, it’s probably still snowing.”

He kissed her cheek as he got up from the bed. He tucked his pillows against her back and tucked the blankets in around her. Annie smiled at his thoughtfulness. She didn’t get up, but lay in bed watching him dress. He squatted down next to the bed to kiss her before leaving. She reached out and ran her hand over the wool cap he had pulled on. She loved the way he looked in that cap. But then, she loved the way he looked all the time. He smiled at her and then he was out the door. Annie settled back into bed and drifted back to sleep.

It was early January. Christmas and New Year’s had come and gone. Bobby and Annie explained to the children not to expect a puppy for Christmas, but they would talk about it again in the spring. Their neighbor, Rob, had a brother who owned a restaurant. He threw a New Year’s Eve party every year and Bobby and Annie always attended. She loved going to that party; the beautiful decorations, the dancing, the kiss at midnight.

She was aware when he returned to bed around three in the morning, and she rolled over to wrap her arms around him and try to warm him up. He hugged her close and kissed the top of her head.

“Tough case?” she murmured.

“Yeah,” he whispered.

For the next week Bobby didn’t say much about the case. She found out that the body he had been called about in the middle of the night had turned out to be two bodies, a boy and his father. Their throats had been slit and they had been left in a shallow grave in Prospect Park. But the father hadn’t died immediately and made his way out of the park and into the street, where he was hit by a car. Annie knew that cases involving children were especially difficult for Bobby. He told her that they had found several “John Doe” cases that turned out to be the bodies of young boys who were all from the same neighborhood as this boy and his father.

She was working when a call came in from an ambulance transporting a teenage boy who had attempted suicide. Annie and Dr. Silva met the paramedics at the door as they wheeled the gurney in. Just behind them were Bobby and Alex. The paramedics had started an IV and administered an anticonvulsant. They told Dr. Silva they tried to intubate (insert a tube into his lungs), but were unable to get it in. Dr. Silva noticed Bobby and Alex and asked if they were the ones who called for the ambulance. When they responded that they were, he waved them into the room as they wheeled the gurney in.

“Tell me what happened leading up to this,” Dr. Silva said.

Alex answered, “When we arrested him, he turned his back to us and put his hand to his mouth before turning back and surrendering. By the time we got him down to our vehicle, he seemed confused and wasn’t making much sense.”

Bobby added, “He was quoting Marcus Aurelias but didn’t seem to be able to track our conversation, almost like he was drunk. In the car, he started to breathe fast and white foamy sputum came out of his mouth just before he started having seizures. We think he took some kind of poison when he saw us.”

Annie told him, “Heart rate is 130, BP is 80 over 50, O2 saturation is…95%?” That seemed wrong, he was barely breathing.

“Right, false high. Skin is cherry red. Any thoughts?” Dr. Silva turned to the two interns who had followed them in.

“Cyanide poisoning?” suggested one.

“Yes, most likely. Annie, start another IV line and get the Cyanide Antidote Kit. We need ABGs and blood lactate level. Have them check cyanide concentration, but by the time it shows up there it’ll be too late. We need to go ahead treat this as though it is cyanide. Dr. Gray, try intubating him again, but if you can’t get in we’ll do a trach.”

Bobby and Alex stepped out of the room as everyone moved in a flurry of activity. They removed his clothing and covered him with a hospital gown while they were working. Annie started the second IV line while another nurse drew the blood for the lab tests. They administered the IV sodium nitrite, and sodium thiosulfate from the Antidote Kit. They were not able to get a tube down his throat and into his lungs so Dr. Silva performed a tracheotomy, a surgical incision through the throat into the trachea to allow oxygen to the lungs, and then a ventilator was attached by tubing. Once his airway was safe, they inserted a tube through his nose to his stomach and administered activated charcoal.

Annie found his driver’s license in his wallet and called his home. The boy’s name was Frank Marino; he was seventeen years old. She spoke with his father and explained that it looked like he had taken poison and they were treating him. She tried to explain how serious the situation was and asked him to come in right away. He was noncommittal and Annie told him again that his son’s condition was very serious and he should come to see him soon. She saw through the window that Dr. Silva had gone out to talk to Bobby and Alex.

An hour later, she noticed that not only had Bobby and Alex remained, but another man had arrived and was talking to them. The boy’s father had not arrived and Annie tried calling him again but there was no answer. The ventilator was breathing for Frankie and his heart was still beating, but he was not responding to the antidote medications as they hoped. She prayed his father would arrive soon. She knew that saying goodbye would be an important step towards closure.

Another hour passed and Frankie’s heart stopped. They attempted to resuscitate him, but Dr. Silva finally stopped them and announced the time of death. Annie wanted to cry, but she didn’t. They all hated losing any patient, but when a child died it was even more tragic. And knowing that Frankie died surrounded by strangers made Annie’s heart break. She wondered again where his father was. Dr. Silva and the interns left Annie to clean up and prepare Frankie’s body to be taken to the morgue.

But first she went out to inform Bobby and Alex. She found them down the hall.

“Bobby, the Marino boy didn’t make it. The doctor will be out to talk to you. I need to notify the next of kin…the father.” She picked up the phone at the desk.

“Annie,” Bobby said, “His father, he’s not gonna care.”

Annie put the phone down and looked over at Bobby. He was speaking softly to the man who had joined them.

“Excuse me, but I really do need to notify the parents.”

The man walked over to her. “Nurse, I’m Ronald Carver, Assistant District Attorney. I need to explain something to you. It’s very important for our investigation that no one know that the boy is dead just yet. We need for you to delay calling his father.”

Annie looked from Carver to Bobby and Alex.

“I…I can’t do that,” she said. “This boy is a minor; I’m required to notify his father as soon as possible. Besides, I already called and told his father that he was here and that he was in serious condition. He could show up any minute. I can’t lie to him.”

“My office will be getting a court order immediately. But we need for you to hold off calling the father until we get it.”

“But there isn’t a court order right now, and right now I have an obligation to notify his father.”

Mr. Carver said, “I think I need to speak to someone in charge. Before you make that call.”

“Fine, I’ll get Dr. Silva; he’s the attending physician. And I’ll call Dr. Barrows, the chief of staff. Are they ‘in charge’ enough?”

“Yes, thank you.” Mr. Carver ignored her sarcasm.

Within a few minutes Annie, Dr. Silva, Mr. Carver, Bobby, and Alex were all gathered in Dr. Barrows’ office. Ron Carver presented his request that the hospital hold off notifying the boy’s father until he had a chance to get a court order. Dr. Barrows looked at Dr. Silva, who simply shrugged. He turned to Annie.

“Ms. Paine? What’s the problem?”

“The problem is that we have a minor child who just passed away. His father has already been notified that he is here and could show up at any time. I’m not comfortable lying to, or withholding information from, a parent. We have a legal and ethical duty to notify this father as soon as possible. He wasn’t able to be here before the boy died, but he may want to see him before we send his body off to the coroner.”

Bobby had been quiet until this point, but now he spoke up.

“Look, Frankie was ordered to poison himself by the same person who led him to steal and commit murder, someone who is responsible for the murders of several young boys in the neighborhood. It’s important that this person and the other boys involved in this gang think that Frankie is alive and able to talk to us so that one of them will make incriminating statements.”

“Is Frankie’s father the suspect?” Annie asked.

“No, he isn’t.”

“Then there isn’t any reason to keep his son’s death from him. Losing a child is difficult enough. How much worse will it be for him if he finds out that we kept it a secret from him for…what will it be? Hours? Days? Especially if he shows up here at the ER looking for his son and we lie to him and give him the run around.” Annie was becoming annoyed.

Bobby waved his hand dismissively. “If Mr. Marino knows that his son is dead, everyone in the neighborhood will know and we will have lost a valuable tool. This father is not going to show up. Frankie has been here for over two hours and his father hasn’t been here. When we went to his apartment looking for him, his father wanted a reward to tell us where to find Frankie. He won’t come because he doesn’t care.”

“I don’t make value judgments about who does or does not ‘deserve’ to have me follow the rules. My first obligation as a nurse is to be a patient advocate. The needs of my patient come first, and the needs of the family come next—whether I approve of their parenting or not.” She folded her arms across her chest and glared at Bobby. Alex touched her hand to her face and looked uncomfortable.

Bobby looked at Annie steadily for a moment, and then he turned to Dr. Barrows.

“Excuse me, Dr. Barrows, but this isn’t really a decision that is up to a nurse to make, is it? Wouldn’t this be something that is more appropriately decided by a doctor?”

There was silence in the room for a moment. Annie uncrossed her arms and put her hands on her hips as she narrowed her eyes.

“Excuse me?” she said softly. But before she could go on, Dr. Barrows interrupted and took charge of the meeting.

“OK, OK. Annie, I mean no disrespect, but the detective is correct. In this hospital, I do outrank you and this will be my decision.” He turned to Ron Carver. “Mr. Carver, you say that your office is in the process of getting a gag order?”

“It will be here within the hour,” Carver nodded.

“Alright then, here’s what we are going to do. I am ordering the staff to say nothing about the death of Frank Marino for the next hour, pending a court order. After that, we will abide by whatever the gag order says. Go ahead and get the body ready to be released to the coroner.” He raised his hand as Annie opened her mouth to speak. “And if anyone, including the boy’s father, comes in and asks about his condition, he will be referred to me. I will handle it myself. Is that understood?” The question was directed to both Annie and Dr. Silva, but Dr. Barrows was looking at Annie.

“Yes sir,” she said as she turned to walk out of the room. She stopped at the sound of Bobby clearing his throat.

“Uh…we, uh, need a picture of Frankie with all the equipment still attached.”

Annie rolled her eyes before saying, “We have a Polaroid camera at the nurse’s station. I’ll get the picture for you.” Then she turned on her heel and stalked out.

She didn’t wait for Bobby and Alex to follow, but went to ER reception and relayed Dr. Barrows’ orders concerning Frankie Marino. She pulled the camera from under the counter and went to the room where Frankie lay. Bobby and Alex caught up with her as she entered. Without saying anything to them, she took three pictures from different angles. She reached out her hand to give them to Bobby, then pulled back as he reached for them.

“That was a low blow,” she said.

“Yes, it was,” he agreed.

Out of the corner of her eye she could see Alex easing towards the door. It occurred to her that in all their years of marriage, she and Bobby had been careful to keep their occasional disagreements private. Yet this was second argument they’d had in public in a month. She felt sorry for Alex, but she had one more question.

“Is this payback for Frank?”

Bobby looked her in the eye and shook his head. “No, no it’s not. This is about catching a murderer.”

She nodded her head and handed the pictures to him.

“Well, you have your gag order and you have your pictures. If you’ll excuse me, I need to get Frankie’s body ready for transport, since it seems his father will not be allowed to view his body before it leaves the hospital.”

Bobby took the pictures from her without a word and put them in his jacket pocket. He turned to Alex and said, “It’s time to round up some legionnaires.” And they left.

Annie turned back to the body of the teenager. She began cleaning the room and disconnecting the IVs, cardiac monitor, and ventilator. She put a fresh hospital gown on him and covered him with a sheet. As she worked she thought how young and innocent his face seemed in death. He didn’t look at all like a hardened criminal or murderer, but simply a young boy. Her eyes filled with tears at the wasted young life, and at the thought of a parent being unaware of the death of his child.

She tried to maintain her anger at Bobby and convince herself that he was being vindictive. She had challenged him in front of his fellow detectives, and now he had challenged her in front of her coworkers. But she had never known Bobby to be vindictive and she just couldn’t manage to reconcile that image of him with the man she knew and loved. She thought about how he looked and sounded during the meeting in Dr. Barrows’ office and here in this room afterwards. While he had sounded frustrated at the delay she was causing his investigation, he had not looked or sounded angry. Simply determined to get this settled quickly and get on with his case.

By the time Annie’s shift ended that evening Frankie’s body had been picked up by the coroner’s office, but there had been no inquiries from Mr. Marino, in person or by phone. Bobby was right, he wasn’t going to call or come in. It was unfathomable to her that a parent would not care that his son was seriously ill. She gave her report to the next shift and went home.

Bobby wasn’t home yet and he didn’t come in until she and the children were already in bed. He came into the bedroom and changed out of his suit. As usual, he got into bed and cuddled with Annie until she fell asleep. She knew once she was asleep he would get up and go back downstairs. They talked quietly for a few minutes about the children and plans for the weekend. Neither of them mentioned what had happened at the hospital. Annie didn’t ask about the case and he didn’t offer any information. She rested her face against his chest and drifted to sleep.

As usual, he was already up when she woke up in the morning. Again nothing was said about his case as they went through the morning activities. Annie went to work and again, there were no calls from Frankie’s father. That evening was just like the one before, with Bobby coming in late. She knew that meant he was working on a case and could only presume it was the one involving Frankie. She worked again the next day and by now she held no illusions about having to deal with answering Mr. Marino’s questions about his son. It was obvious he had no questions and no interest in his son’s condition.

Just before her shift ended, Annie was called to the reception desk. When she got there, Bobby and Alex were waiting for her. There was an older Hispanic man with them.

Bobby watched her as Alex explained, “Nurse Paine, this is Anthony Marino, Frankie Marino’s father.” Annie raised her eyebrows in surprise as Alex continued. “After arresting Jojo Rios this morning for the murders of four neighborhood boys, we informed Mr. Marino of his son’s death and took him to the Medical Examiner’s office to view Frankie’s body. We thought he might have some questions about his care and the details of his death, so we offered to escort him here to speak with you.”

She glanced at Bobby but couldn’t read his expression. “Why don’t we step in here?” she asked and led them into an empty exam room. She knew that Mr. Marino had not asked about Frankie’s death, that Bobby thought she needed to talk to this father. Had he asked for information they would have directed him to the doctor who treated him, not one of the nurses.

She closed the door and turned to Mr. Marino. She explained to him what had happened from the time Frankie arrived in the ER and that they did everything they could to save him, but the cyanide had worked too quickly. Anthony Marino had said nothing since he arrived.

Now he asked, “So the Medical Examiner told me it was definitely cyanide.”

“Yes,” Annie told him. “The blood work confirmed it. Apparently the detectives saw him put something in his mouth, and that was most likely when he took it. Taken orally like that, cyanide works very fast.”

“So…” Marino said slowly. “He took the cyanide when they came to arrest him, right?”

“That seems to be what happened,” Alex said.

Marino faced Annie and asked, “So do you think I’ve got a lawsuit against them?”

Annie was taken off guard by the question. “A…a lawsuit? Against the detectives?”

“Yeah….they made him commit suicide, right? I could sue them, right? And the whole NYPD. Maybe even the city. You think they would have to pay me for….uh…for my….pain and suffering…that’s what it’s called, right?”

Annie looked at him incredulously. She couldn’t believe what he was asking. Finally she found her voice.

“So let me get this straight”, she began.

Bobby saw the look on her face and interrupted. “I…uh…think that’s a question you should ask a lawyer, Mr. Marino.”

Anne glanced at Bobby and then back to Marino. She continued, “You want to know if I think you should sue the detectives and the NYPD for the death of your son?” She spoke softly.

“Yeah. Do you think I got a case?”

“These two detectives here…they are the ones you want to sue? The two detectives who started CPR, called an ambulance, and got Frankie to the hospital as quickly as possible? The two detectives who then went out and found the evidence to arrest the person who convinced your son to commit suicide? Those are the detectives who you want to sue?” Annie took a deep breath and went on before he could answer. “I think that is an excellent idea Mr. Marino. I absolutely think you should hire a lawyer and go to court and let the entire world know just what a worthless father you were to that boy.” Marino opened his mouth to argue but she was furious now and cut him off. “I think any judge, any jury, and the newspapers would just love to hear all the details of that boy’s life and how your neglect of him drove him to look for a father figure who led him into a life of crime, who taught him how to commit murder, and who convinced him to kill himself. But make sure that your lawyer calls me as a witness because you certainly wouldn’t want the court to miss out on hearing how I personally called you the day your son was admitted and told you how serious his condition was and encouraged you to come in as soon as possible. They will be thrilled to hear how not only did you not come in, you did not even call to find out how he was. For two days you made no effort at all to find out about the condition of your son. The one whose death has caused you such ‘pain and suffering.’ Please, please sue the detectives so that the entire world will know just what a sorry excuse for a father you were to that poor boy!”

Her voice had risen as she spoke until she was almost shouting. Marino’s face had gone from shocked to angry to enraged as she spoke. As she finished he stammered, “No one talks to me like that, you…” He stepped towards her, but his sentence and his forward motion were stopped as Bobby smoothly stepped between them, grabbing Marino by the front of his shirt and propelling him backwards toward the door.

At the door, Alex grabbed the back of his coat, turned him around, and pushed him out of the room. Annie saw Alex speak to two uniformed officers who took hold of Marino’s arms and escorted him out. Bobby and Annie stood looking at each other across the room for a moment, then without saying a word Bobby stepped out of the room. Annie saw him speak to Alex who nodded. She turned and waved to Annie and walked away. She went out to where Bobby was standing.

He looked down at her and said, “I told Eames that I would ride home with you. Can I wait in the break room?” She nodded and he turned towards the break room.

Annie gave report to the next shift, then went to the break room. Bobby was sitting on the sofa, leafing through a magazine. He stood up and watched her silently as she opened her locker and got her things. She turned to face him and they looked at each other for a moment.

Finally Bobby grinned at her and said, “First Frank and now Anthony Marino. Is this what they call driving men wild?”

Annie managed not to laugh, but couldn’t prevent the smile from spreading across her face. She struggled to look serious as she said, “What you said in Dr. Barrows’ office is still a low blow.”

“Yes it was,” he agreed with a serious look.

She waited for a moment but when he didn’t say anything else she said, “And you aren’t going to apologize?”

“No I’m not,” he said and smiled his most devastating smile.

She waited half a beat before saying, “You suck!”

Bobby laughed loudly. He crossed the room, lifted her off the floor, and kissed her. She put her arms around his neck and returned the kiss enthusiastically. Bobby rested his forehead against hers and whispered, “Take me home, Nurse.”

She knew their laughter caused heads to turn their direction as they left the hospital on their way home.

Two weeks later, Annie was cleaning up after dinner when Bobby burst through the front door and found her in the kitchen. He was smiling and she couldn’t remember the last time he had looked so excited. He grabbed, kissed her, and then held his hand to her nose.

“Smell my hand,” he said.

Annie pulled her head back as she laughed and said, “I think I’ve heard this one before. Is it anything like ‘pull my finger’?”

Bobby laughed and put his hand back under her nose and said, “No, really, smell my hand.”

She looked at him suspiciously and carefully sniffed his fingers. There was a faint smell of leather.

“Leather?” she asked.

“Well, it’s faded…I tried not to wash my hands today.” He grinned. “It’s Italian leather. C’mere!” He grabbed her hand and pulled her after him down the stairs to his office in the basement. He sat down at his desk and pulled her onto his lap as he pulled up the internet on the computer. “There! Look at that!” he exclaimed excitedly.

She looked at the computer screen and saw a red sports car. “Pretty,” she said.

“Pretty?! That is a ’62 Ferrari GTO. Only 32 made. And I sat in one today!”

Annie smiled at the excitement in his voice and the look of wonder on his face. He looked like child on Christmas morning.

“So, what….you took one for a test drive? Are you planning on trading in the Mustang?”

She laughed and he laughed with her. “No, I didn’t test drive it. I wanted to, but Eames made me get out. It was a stolen car that we recovered from a murder suspect. But that car was…I…I can’t even describe what it was like to sit in that car and feel that powerful engine. The guy had model cars that he put together when he was a kid. Look…”

He reached across her to the computer and in a few minutes had six more pictures of cars. “These were the cars he had models of. Ron Carver and I were looking them over. The detail on each one of them was amazing. He spent hours on them.”

Annie ran her fingers through his dark curls. She loved seeing this boyish side of him. He was looking at the pictures on the computer, smiling.

“Lewis collected model cars like this. I don’t remember how many he had. He saved all his money to buy them, and his parents would get them for him for his birthday and Christmas. He let me help with some of them, but they were his babies; mostly he did all the work himself.” He looked at her and she saw the familiar shadows in his eyes that came with childhood memories. “I really wanted one of those models, you know? I did odd jobs for the neighbors and saved up my money until I had enough to buy one.” He tapped the computer screen. “I bought that one….the ’57 Bel Aire; it was beautiful. I spent hours putting that thing together. I put it on the dresser in my room.” He sighed and looked at the picture on the computer.

“What happened?” Annie asked softly. Bobby looked at her and shrugged.

“My mom, you know? She…she went on one of her rampages, looking for ‘bugs’. She, uh, thought there were bugs in the car and she…smashed it.”

Annie sighed and hugged him. She thought how quickly Bobby’s happy childhood memories turned to unhappy ones. He held her for a moment, then pulled back and smiled at her. The happy, boyish smile was back.

“You know….it really was amazing to sit in that car today. These muscle cars, they’re really an aphrodisiac for guys. You know what I mean?”

Annie giggled as his hands began to roam. “The kids…” she said softly.

“They’ll stay upstairs for a while, don’t you think?” He smiled and kissed her.

“Mommy!” came Ally’s voice from the top of the basement stairs. “Phillip and Andrew hid my doll and won’t give her back!” They looked at each other and began laughing as they got up to go upstairs.

The next night Annie was sitting on the couch watching the news when Bobby came in. He looked around and whispered, “Where are the kids?”

“Upstairs, why?”

He grinned at her as he took off his coat and hung it up. He grabbed her hand and pulled her off the couch and led her to the kitchen. Looking back in the living room again, he went to the back door and opened it.

“Take your time, Goren. It’s not like it’s forty below out there or anything,” said Alex Eames as she stepped into the kitchen. Annie’s eyes widened at the yellow ball of fur Alex was holding in her arms. Bobby had stepped outside and was now bringing in a small dog crate and a box containing puppy food, toys, blanket, and brush. He closed the door and turned to Annie, his face excited and smiling just as it had the night before over the cars. Annie looked at him incredulously.

“Wh…what have you done?”

“This morning, we were at a crime scene…”

“You brought home a dog from a crime scene?”

“No, no, no. We were leaving a crime scene and out on the street these kids were trying to give away this puppy. They had given away two others, but hadn’t been able to find anyone to take this one. They said their dad was going to take her to animal control if they didn’t give her away today.”

“You picked up a puppy off the street and brought it home? You don’t know those kids, you don’t know if the puppy has some illness or birth defect or anything about it!”

“Well, they had the mother there and I looked her over as well as the puppy. They both seemed fine. And…I took her to a vet to be checked out. She’s healthy. She’s eight weeks old and the vet guesses she’s a mix of Golden Retriever, Lab, and Shepherd; she got her first set of shots today and I already made an appointment for her to be spayed when she’s six months. And then Eames and I went to the pet store and I bought everything she needs.”

“But…we agreed to wait until spring. And I thought we would pick one out together.”

Alex sat down in one of the chairs and focused her attention on the puppy as Bobby led Annie into the living room.

“I know…but Annie…you should have seen her out there on that street with those kids. It was cold and she was shivering….” Bobby looked down at his shoes then back at her. “It’s just that…seeing those cars yesterday, and remembering how much I wanted a model…..it made me think, you know? The kids have been so patient…they haven’t bugged us even though they all want this really badly. And…I know that we can’t, and shouldn’t, give them everything they want. But, Babe, sometimes surprising them with something that they want so much…it’s a memory that will stay with them all their lives.”

He stopped and looked at her, his brown eyes pleading. She looked at him, thinking about the wounded little boy that lay beneath the accomplished, intellectual, successful detective. She realized that there was nothing she could do about his childhood memories, but she could help him create happy memories for his children. She smiled and walked over to the bottom of the stairs.

“Ally, Phillip, Andrew,” she called. The three children came down the stairs. Annie told them, “Daddy and Aunt Alex have a surprise for you in the kitchen.”

Bobby smiled and mouthed “Thank you” to her as he led the children into the kitchen.

“A puppy!” All three children squealed with delight as they descended on Alex and the puppy.

“Hey! Be careful there,” warned Alex. “Puppies and aunts need gentle touches.” She sat the puppy on the floor and the children plopped down with her. They all laughed as the puppy scrambled over each of them, licking their faces.

Ally jumped up and hugged Alex, then ran and wrapped her arms around her father’s leg. “Thank you, thank you, thank you! This is the best present in the whole world!”

Bobby laughed and squatted down to hug her as the twins also ran over to hug and thank him. He went over and sat on the floor with the children and the puppy. Alex put her coat back on and stooped to kiss each of the children goodbye. She paused in the entryway where Annie was leaning against the wall, and they both watched Bobby and the children playing with the puppy.

“Carbon copies,” Alex said with a laugh. She hugged Annie and left.

Annie stood watching for a few more minutes, just enjoying the sight of her husband looking so childlike. The puppy suddenly ran to where she was standing and grabbed the toe of her slipper in her mouth. She growled and tugged on the slipper, shaking her head vigorously back and forth. Annie reached down and picked her up. She held her up and looked at her. She had medium long fur that was yellow with a white chest and white feet. Her ears were long and flopped forward.

“If you pee on my carpet, you and I are going to have a problem,” Annie said in a somber voice. The puppy looked at her face for a moment and then began twisting and wriggling to get free, while also trying to reach out and lick Annie’s face. She laughed and handed her to Andrew. She went over and sat on the floor next to Bobby. He put his arm around her and leaned over to whisper, “Thank you” in her ear. She scooted closer to him and leaned her head on his shoulder as they watched the children playing with their puppy.

End chapter 7
AmandaB
Cherry Red is one of my favourite episodes of season 2, and you capture Bobby's enthusiasm very well. The puppy is very cute, and I hope Bobby and the kids have many happy hours playing with her. Good job.
TennesseCIFAn
so, now do we get to name the puppy???

hmmmm, this requires some thought.......
ciaddict
QUOTE (TennesseCIFAn @ Sep 3 2008, 07:10 PM) *
so, now do we get to name the puppy???

hmmmm, this requires some thought.......


That's funny! I was actually thinking of asking everyone what they thought. So I guess I will ask.

What do you think the puppy's name should be?

And thank you Amanda and TCIF! One more to go for this "episode".
FusseKat
QUOTE (ciaddict @ Aug 31 2008, 04:00 PM) *
I usually don't post a chapter until I have the next one ready. But to tell the truth, I'm beginning to confuse myself.



I wish I could write like this - posting a story while still working on later chapters, that's so amazing to me. I don't see how anyone can keep these multi-chapter gems flowing so well, that's an ability I do not have. I usually find that I have to go back to earlier chapters to add things to explain developments in later chapters.

Caught up on chapters 6 & 7 tonight. Especially loved "smell my hand" absolutely adore the puppy.... sooooo cute. So sad about Frankie, I thought so in the RL episode, but the way you wrote about him... and his no good 'father'. IT'S BRILLIANT!
flashymom
Really good! Really, really, really good! Did I say this is good? lol

Loved it all! Really like how you worked Annie in as the nurse in Legion. How many times did you have to re-watch that to get it right? wink.gif Perfect!

Love the bit about the puppy, and happy Bobby.

You should have Annie surprise Bobby with a model kit for the Bel Aire that his mom smashed. That would be a great addition to your story, and totally in keeping with Annie......


spookycc
I LOVE Bobby's enthusiasm from Cherry Red! I still remember the look on his face when Eames told him he had to get out of the car. tongue.gif
Judyg
An excited 'little boy' Bobby and a puppy!! This chapter ranks right up there with all the others. The inclusion of events from Legion were perfectly placed with the episode. I like that Annie was against withholding the information from the father about his son's death, but saw that Bobby had been right - the father didn't care (and that Bobby could never be vindictive with her). His excitement in Cherry Red made that one of my favorite episodes - I like how you played that here. He wanted to share it with Annie, proving what an important part of his life she is.

And a name for the puppy? That's a tough one...

Looking forward to the next chapter, ciaddict.

ciaddict
QUOTE (FusseKat @ Sep 3 2008, 08:27 PM) *
I wish I could write like this - posting a story while still working on later chapters, that's so amazing to me. I don't see how anyone can keep these multi-chapter gems flowing so well, that's an ability I do not have. I usually find that I have to go back to earlier chapters to add things to explain developments in later chapters.

Caught up on chapters 6 & 7 tonight. Especially loved "smell my hand" absolutely adore the puppy.... sooooo cute. So sad about Frankie, I thought so in the RL episode, but the way you wrote about him... and his no good 'father'. IT'S BRILLIANT!


Thanks Kat! I don't think I can continue writing a chapter ahead of the one I'm posting, I'm getting confused and at least once I've put the wrong chapter number. I'm going to have to either go back to waiting until the entire story is finished before posting anything or just post them as I finish them. But then, like you I've gone back to change something in an earlier chapter to make a later chapter work--which I couldn't do this time.

QUOTE (flashymom @ Sep 4 2008, 08:20 AM) *
Really good! Really, really, really good! Did I say this is good? lol

Loved it all! Really like how you worked Annie in as the nurse in Legion. How many times did you have to re-watch that to get it right? wink.gif Perfect!

Love the bit about the puppy, and happy Bobby.

You should have Annie surprise Bobby with a model kit for the Bel Aire that his mom smashed. That would be a great addition to your story, and totally in keeping with Annie......


Thank you FM! I put the subtitles on the DVD and had to keep pausing it and rewinding it to get the dialogue exactly right--with my added dialogue, of course! I wanted it as close as possible to what was actually said. And I thought about Annie getting him the model for his birthday. But this story will end before his next birthday, so I may follow up with it in the next one. I checked my timelines and his birthday will fall during the "Bishop era". tongue.gif Not sure what I'm going to do with Bishop--I'm afraid she hasn't inspired me too much yet.

QUOTE (spookycc @ Sep 4 2008, 09:17 AM) *
I LOVE Bobby's enthusiasm from Cherry Red! I still remember the look on his face when Eames told him he had to get out of the car. tongue.gif


Thanks Spook! I paused the DVD on that shot of his face after Eames told him he had to get out of the car and left it there while I wrote that part. Oh shoot! I just remembered I meant to mention Lewis and his admiration for Detective Alex! Oh well, I think Lewis may show up in the next story so I'll have another opportunity.

QUOTE (Judyg @ Sep 4 2008, 09:56 AM) *
An excited 'little boy' Bobby and a puppy!! This chapter ranks right up there with all the others. The inclusion of events from Legion were perfectly placed with the episode. I like that Annie was against withholding the information from the father about his son's death, but saw that Bobby had been right - the father didn't care (and that Bobby could never be vindictive with her). His excitement in Cherry Red made that one of my favorite episodes - I like how you played that here. He wanted to share it with Annie, proving what an important part of his life she is.

And a name for the puppy? That's a tough one...

Looking forward to the next chapter, ciaddict.



Thank you Judy! I had originally intended this to be the BIG fight, but then Frank came along and caused the BIG ONE so I dialed this one down. And I'm glad now. When I watch Bobby, especially in the early seasons, he is SO focused on his investigations that he doesn't seem to notice how people react to his methods sometimes. Sometimes when Eames rolls her eyes or makes a snarky comment, he will acknowledge it with a little smile. But other times it just seems to go over his head. "Sharks don't have scales." It always cracks me up when he says that so seriously! So when I got to this part I thought it would probably not even register with him at first that Annie would be insulted by his comment that it's not her decision.

And now to finish the last chapter.
flashymom
I'm recruiting my 7 year old, The Princess, to help. She's got stuffed puppies in her bedroom named Sparkles and Sarah. She recommends Maggie -- we had a dog with that name for 13 years; she was half German Shepherd, half Black and Tan Coonhound.

We also think the twin boys would try to name the puppy a boy's name, even though it's a girl, which could cause some nice fun moments of family bliss rolleyes.gif for Bobby and Alex to have to deal with. Can't you just see Ally getting upset over the boys suggesting Buster or Spot? laugh.gif

I like Goldie, since her fur is golden, or Brownie since her eyes are brown. Maybe even Angel -- that would get a good rise out of the boys should Ally suggest that.

You're gonna have TONS of fun with the whole "naming of the dog" scene.


TennesseCIFAn
My nine year old's suggestion is Jewels. (of course, he did say he took that name from the 102 Dalmation movie....)
flashymom
I like the name Jewels. I also like that the kids might choose the name from a movie....
TennesseCIFAn
QUOTE (flashymom @ Sep 4 2008, 09:49 PM) *
I like the name Jewels. I also like that the kids might choose the name from a movie....



considering they were using a movie to try and convince their parents..........
ciaddict
I haven't seen 102 Dalmatians. So Jewels is from that movie? I like naming her after a movie dog, too. I considered making it a male and naming it Skip after the movie they used in their campaign. But I just like female animals better.
janpop4
Here I am, bad again about posting here and at FF. I figured once I posted at FF about dog's names, I better come over here and see if you were taking suggestions. laugh.gif No, I don't have any. I am not a dog person, so I couldn't give you a name if I wanted to. I do like the names suggested here though. I had to say that I loved this chapter, Cherry Red and all. One of my favorite episodes. The look on Bobby's face is priceless when he is in that car. The end of the chapter where Annie told the dog not to pee on her carpet was great. I laughed at that. Excellent chapter and looking forward to more.
ciaddict
QUOTE (janpop4 @ Sep 4 2008, 08:01 PM) *
Here I am, bad again about posting here and at FF. I figured once I posted at FF about dog's names, I better come over here and see if you were taking suggestions. laugh.gif No, I don't have any. I am not a dog person, so I couldn't give you a name if I wanted to. I do like the names suggested here though. I had to say that I loved this chapter, Cherry Red and all. One of my favorite episodes. The look on Bobby's face is priceless when he is in that car. The end of the chapter where Annie told the dog not to pee on her carpet was great. I laughed at that. Excellent chapter and looking forward to more.



Thank you Cifan! I read your review at ff.net as well. I'm bad about remembering to post both places. But I appreciate comments in either place, or both places. Reading the reviews and comments is almost as much fun as actually writing the story.
flashymom
QUOTE (ciaddict @ Sep 4 2008, 10:40 PM) *
Thank you Cifan! I read your review at ff.net as well. I'm bad about remembering to post both places. But I appreciate comments in either place, or both places. Reading the reviews and comments is almost as much fun as actually writing the story.


You got any extra tacos and cheesecake lying around here, cousin? I'm off to post now...noticed that InfinityStar had posted another chapter of Bridges and I got distracted.....Oh, bring tissues with you......
ciaddict
QUOTE (flashymom @ Sep 4 2008, 08:51 PM) *
You got any extra tacos and cheesecake lying around here, cousin? I'm off to post now...noticed that InfinityStar had posted another chapter of Bridges and I got distracted.....Oh, bring tissues with you......


::Sets out tacos, cheesecake, and tissues::

Better buckle your seatbelts. It's going to be a bumpy night.
flashymom
QUOTE (ciaddict @ Sep 4 2008, 10:55 PM) *
::Sets out tacos, cheesecake, and tissues::

Better buckle your seatbelts. It's going to be a bumpy night.



I don't know what was going on with my computer, but it took me several tries and way too much work to get it posted. But, it's up now, so y'all go read and let me know what you think......

Oh, and not over here, cuz....over in MY thread! tongue.gif
Judyg
QUOTE (flashymom @ Sep 4 2008, 10:49 PM) *
I like the name Jewels. I also like that the kids might choose the name from a movie....


Our dog's name is "Chance" after Homeward Bound - I'm not real original with pets names, either. My cat is named "Phoebe" after Phoebe Buffet on Friends. When the then kitten 'found' us, she definitely was in need of a bath and we kept calling her Smelly Cat after the song from Friends, which eventually became Phoebe. smile.gif

QUOTE (ciaddict @ Sep 4 2008, 11:40 PM) *
Thank you Cifan! I read your review at ff.net as well. I'm bad about remembering to post both places. But I appreciate comments in either place, or both places. Reading the reviews and comments is almost as much fun as actually writing the story.


I never remember to post in both places, but I agree, reading the reviews is almost as much fun. Getting peoples opinions and helping guide the story is very important.

QUOTE (flashymom @ Sep 5 2008, 12:12 AM) *
I don't know what was going on with my computer, but it took me several tries and way too much work to get it posted. But, it's up now, so y'all go read and let me know what you think......
Oh, and not over here, cuz....over in MY thread! tongue.gif


So - my intentions last weekend were to catch up on "It Always Comes Back", I got distracted with real life (twins 4th birthday, son person, etc.) and only peeked at a chapter - Tomorrow son person is out of the house, sister person is working and I am going to catch up on your story. Please save me some tacos, cheesecake and tissues - I'll be there bright and early.

I've had a horrible time at the forum lately, freezing up, losing posts, etc. It is not user friendly as of late.
DaCarz
QUOTE (ciaddict @ Sep 4 2008, 11:55 PM) *
::Sets out tacos, cheesecake, and tissues::

Better buckle your seatbelts. It's going to be a bumpy night.


Hi, mom! You really amaze me with your writing talents! How about writing a love story of me and Desiree and ask Director Ang Lee to direct a movie of your story? wink.gif
ciaddict
QUOTE (DaCarz @ Sep 5 2008, 11:32 AM) *
Hi, mom! You really amaze me with your writing talents! How about writing a love story of me and Desiree and ask Director Ang Lee to direct a movie of your story? wink.gif


I'll get right on that. Do you have Ang Lee's phone number? I seem to have misplaced it. laugh.gif
janpop4
QUOTE (Judyg @ Sep 5 2008, 06:08 AM) *
Our dog's name is "Chance" after Homeward Bound - I'm not real original with pets names, either. My cat is named "Phoebe" after Phoebe Buffet on Friends. When the then kitten 'found' us, she definitely was in need of a bath and we kept calling her Smelly Cat after the song from Friends, which eventually became Phoebe. smile.gif



I never remember to post in both places, but I agree, reading the reviews is almost as much fun. Getting peoples opinions and helping guide the story is very important.


You have reminded me that I need to get my Friends DVD's out and watch them. I have them all but haven't seen them in ages. biggrin.gif

I agree, I love to read the reviews. I love to hear what people think. I don't like to reply so much though. I never know what to say.
flashymom
QUOTE (janpop4 @ Sep 5 2008, 09:04 PM) *
I agree, I love to read the reviews. I love to hear what people think. I don't like to reply so much though. I never know what to say.


"Good job" or "I liked it" usually works for me! wink.gif
janpop4
QUOTE (flashymom @ Sep 5 2008, 09:15 PM) *
"Good job" or "I liked it" usually works for me! wink.gif


It works for me too but Mary likes a little more or so she told me anyway and I am the one replying to everyone so I never know how to reply. Usually I just say "Thanks for the review" or "More to come" or something like that. That's what I do over at FF. Here you see what I do. wink.gif
ciaddict
REBUILDING
Chapter 8


This begins just after the events of the last chapter, but is set primarily during A Person of Interest
Thank you as always, Spook, for beta'ing this for me. And thank you Spook and Judy for input on this last chapter; there was one section I was insecure about and your encouragement helped immensely.



A week after Bobby brought the puppy home she still didn’t have a name. There was a debate raging among the three children and Annie was staying out of it. She just smiled as Bobby looked at her over the heads of the arguing children.

“I like Buster,” declared Phillip.

“I want Skip like in the movie,” Andrew argued.

“Those are boy names and she’s a girl. She should have a girl’s name, like Jewels from 102 Dalmatians,” was Ally’s contribution.

Finally one night, Bobby sat them down to referee and try to come to a consensus as to what to call the puppy. He let them present their positions again and listened seriously to each one.

He told the boys, “Your sister has a point that she is a girl dog, so Buster or Skip might confuse people and make them think she’s a boy.”

“But Jewels is too girly,” protested Andrew.

“She is a girl,” said Ally primly.

“But she’s not girly,” insisted Phillip.

Bobby held up his hand for silence. He thought for a moment and then suggested, “How about Sandy?”

“Like in ‘Annie’?” asked Ally, interested.

“But Sandy was a boy,” pointed out Phillip.

“Yes,” Bobby said, “in the movie Sandy was a boy. But it can be either a boy’s name or a girl’s name. And she is yellow like Sandy was in the movie.”

All three children were quiet for a moment. Then Andrew nodded his head.

“I like Sandy,” he said.

“Me too,” said Phillip.

Bobby looked at Ally and asked, “How about you, Sweetheart?”

She smiled and said, “I like Sandy, too.”

For the next two months Sandy gradually learned her name. Even more gradually she learned to potty outside. Spring approached and the snow melted, making it easier to convince Sandy to go outside.

As spring vacation for the children approached, Annie talked to Bobby about going to Grandpa’s. He was doing well since his heart surgery and she wanted to take the children to spend time with him. Bobby agreed, but he wasn’t sure he would be able to get time off. Annie was able to get a week off, but had to be back at work on Friday.

About a week before they were to leave, Bobby and Alex caught the case of a former Air Force nurse who had been murdered. As usual, he didn’t give her too many details, but once it became clear it was somehow related to missing anthrax she knew that there was no way Bobby would be going with them to Connecticut.

They left on Friday and would return the following Thursday. As Bobby kissed her before she got in the car, she teased him about eating out while they were gone. He enjoyed going to Sal’s, and tended to eat there most nights any time she and the children were out of town. While Annie was used to waitresses flirting with her handsome husband, there was one waitress at Sal’s who was particularly smitten with him. She never seemed to mind that he was accompanied by his wife and would flirt with him outrageously. To Annie’s amusement, Bobby would blatantly flirt back. He told her he only did it because it got them excellent service. She had to agree that the waitress, Rhoda, was very attentive to their table every time they ate there.

Annie kissed Bobby and told him, “Be sure to give Rhoda my regards.” He laughed and kissed her as she got into the car.

It was good to see Grandpa. He was doing well since the surgery, although he still tired easily. He and his housekeeper, Martha, had bonded and he treated her like one of his grandchildren. Martha kept his house clean, prepared his meals, and made sure he took his medications and followed doctor’s orders.

That evening, after the children were in bed, Annie and Grandpa watched the news and saw the press conference that ADA Ron Carver had held outside Haznostics. They were surprised to also see Bobby challenging Dr. Croyden to come in for a blood test to prove his innocence.

Annie and the children enjoyed the weekend. They had brought Sandy with them and she was excitedly exploring Grandpa’s big backyard. On Monday Bobby called her and somberly told her about Croyden committing suicide. They talked for a long time, Bobby seeming to need to hear her voice.

She saw for herself on the news that Croyden had been exonerated. She also heard the speculation that Detective Goren had hounded him until he drove him to kill himself. Bobby called her late Tuesday night and said that he suspected someone had used Croyden to set him up to look “ruthless and incompetent.” He didn’t know who could have done it or why.

Then he called again late Wednesday night. “It was Nicole Wallace,” he said simply. He told her about Nicole following him into Sal’s, taunting him about Croyden and ruining his career, then flaunting her rich husband. He knew she had orchestrated the whole thing, but didn’t know how to prove it.

“What does Alex say?” Annie asked.

Bobby sighed. “She says we’re going to get her back.”

“Sounds like a plan to me,” Annie said softly.

Again Bobby talked to her for a long time. When they finally said their goodnights, Annie reminded him they would be home the next day and they would talk some more.

They got home the next afternoon. After unpacking and settling in, Annie ordered pizza for dinner. Bobby came home late, but made sure to go in and kiss all the kids.

As they lay in bed that night, Bobby talked about the case, about Nicole, and about going to see her husband that day. He and Alex weren’t able to convince him that his wife was actually a murderer named Nicole Wallace. With her new citizenship and her husband’s money, Nicole seemed insulated. Bobby and Alex were working on a plan that would allow them to arrest her and bring her in for questioning.

When Annie fell asleep, Bobby didn’t get up as he usually did. He stayed in bed with her, holding her as she slept.

Annie was having lunch in the hospital cafeteria the next day, her nose buried in a book, when her attention was pulled from her book by a woman’s English accent.

“May I sit here? There don’t seem to be any empty tables.”

She smiled and indicated the chair across from her. “By all means, you’re more than welcome to join me.” The woman smiled at her and sat down. Annie asked, “Are you visiting a patient?”

“I’m here to see the wife of a friend. And you…are you a doctor or a nurse? Hospital attire is so confusing to me, I can’t tell the difference between a surgeon and a lab technician,” she laughed.

Annie laughed with her. “That would be our American passion for a classless society. I’m a nurse; I work in the Emergency Room.”

The woman leaned forward with interest. “That sounds very exciting. You must see plenty of life and death situations.”

Annie chuckled. “Sure, we see more of those than we would like. But we also see plenty of broken arms, scrapes and bruises, and vomiting children.”

“Well, I think you are probably being modest. I have always admired nurses. You do all the dirty work that the doctors don’t want to do and for much less money.”

“Hmm….are you our new union representative?”

Annie and the woman both laughed. Officers Johna Jones and Harlana Simmons waved hello to Annie from across the room. The woman nodded in their direction and said, “I think that uniformed police officers face the same plight as nurses: All the dirty work for less money than the detectives.”

Annie nodded. “You’re correct; the uniformed officers do work hard. But I know a lot of detectives and I can assure you that they do their share of the dirty work.”

The woman leaned forward and said, “Really? You probably meet a lot of police in your work.”

“Sure, they come into the ER to interview witnesses or they bring in suspects who have been wounded.”

“Wounded suspects? That must be frightening to be so close to violent criminals.”

“Frightening? Sometimes, I suppose,” Annie said. “But all of the cops who come in here are very good at securing someone who might be violent. And if they have been in a fight with the police, then by they time they get here the fight has usually gone out of them.”

“Of course the television makes it look like the police routinely brutalize suspects. Or that they are…what do they call it? Dirty? You know, framing innocent people and all that. Have you ever seen anything like that?”

Annie laughed. “That may make for interesting TV, but no, I don’t know any ‘dirty’ cops.”

“Well then, I’m certainly glad you don’t know this one. If he’s not dirty, his methods seem to be….questionable…at best.”

She opened her paper and laid it on the table, facing Annie. Annie froze as she saw the headline “Scientist Innocent!” The woman read out loud, “Innocent man driven to suicide by ruthless and incompetent detective.” She smiled at Annie. “You have to feel sorry for the detective’s poor family. It must be so humiliating to have your husband’s…inadequacies…advertised on the front page for all to see.”

Annie stared at the paper for a moment and then looked at the woman. She realized now that this was no chance meeting. The blond hair and the English accent should have been clues. But, she reasoned, she wasn’t a detective so why would she have been looking for clues? Just like watching the end of a murder mystery first, the clues were easy to spot once you knew what to look for. The woman’s age, appearance, and voice were all just as Bobby had described. Annie leaned her folded arms on the table.

“Well I guess introductions aren’t necessary, are they? You seem to know who I am. And you are obviously Nicole Wallace.”

“Ah, I see your husband has been talking about me; how flattering. But, poor Bobby seems to be having a terrible run of luck these days. He hounds poor, innocent, Dr. Croyden until he kills himself. And he has once again botched his identification of me.” She held her hand across the table. “Actually my name is Elizabeth Haynes. But please call me Elizabeth…Annie.”

A detached part of Annie’s brain thought how surreal it was to sit here sharing tea and conversation with a serial killer, and wondered why she wasn’t feeling panicky and rushing to call Bobby. But as she looked at Nicole’s smiling face she realized that she wasn’t afraid. Annie wasn’t sure what it was supposed to feel like to be stalked by a killer, but this felt more like…..a game. Nicole was playing a game with her, with Bobby, and she seemed to be enjoying herself enormously. She ignored Nicole’s outstretched hand and steadily held her gaze.

“Is there something I can help you with?” Annie asked.

Nicole’s smile grew brighter and she folded her hands on the table in front of her.

“Oh no, I don’t need anything at all. But you do like to help, don’t you Annie? That’s why you became a nurse. Do you help Bobby with his poor, sick mother? It must be a terrible strain on a marriage to have a mentally ill mother-in-law foisted upon you. Tell me…” She leaned forward conspiratorially. “How hard was it to convince Bobby to lock her away in Carmel Ridge? It must have made things so much easier to have her up there where you can control just how often you’re forced to see her.”

“Is there a point to all this, Nicole? What is it you want?”

“The name’s Elizabeth. Bobby paid my husband a little visit yesterday and I just wanted to return the favor. And I admit to being a tiny bit curious about ‘the woman behind the man’. The brilliant detective and his devoted wife. Although the brilliant part seems to be in question these days.” She lowered her voice and assumed a concerned look. “I do hope that’s not because of any problems at home. It was surprising to see that Bobby ate out, alone, five nights in a row. He isn’t feeling…unwelcome…at home, is he? You know, they have some excellent books on rekindling romance.”

“Your concern is touching.”

“I should think you would be concerned, too. Has it occurred to you that your husband’s anger towards Dr. Croyden wasn’t just because he reminded Bobby of his father, but that he sees those same traits in himself?”

“My husband is nothing like his father and nothing like Croyden.” Annie knew it was a mistake to engage in this verbal sparring match with Nicole, but she found herself drawn in.

Nicole smiled smugly. “Really? His father left his sick wife and his children. Dr. Croyden left his sick wife and his child. But you’re nice and healthy, aren’t you? No mental illness, no cancer, and I hope no lingering effects from that vicious attack on you…what was it? Almost two years ago now? Except perhaps a few scars. Do you ever worry that Bobby is repulsed by them? That they remind him of another man’s hands on his precious wife?”

Annie felt as though she had been slapped. Bobby had told her that Nicole was talented at finding a person’s weakness and exploiting it. But she was shocked that she had so easily honed in on one of the few insecurities that Annie had. The scars on her abdomen and back left by the knife that Martin Ramsey had stabbed her with. When she looked at those scars, she felt the pain of losing the baby girl she had been pregnant with at the time.

But it was the suggestion that Bobby was repulsed by her scars that caused her to feel as though Nicole had just thrust a knife into her heart. Annie had never been vain about her looks, but Bobby had always made her feel beautiful. Although he still looked at her the same way he always had, she did indeed wonder if he was repulsed by those scars. Because the truth was that Annie found them repulsive.

As Nicole’s jab hit its mark, Annie felt a flash of anger. She leaned forward and said softly, “The only worry I have about my husband is how frequently he encounters psychotic killers.”

Nicole laughed with delight. “Very good, Annie, very good. But then, not everyone he encounters is a psychotic killer, are they? Some are just poor innocent men who incur his wrath because they remind him of his dear, departed father.”

Annie realized she was out of her league and needed to end this.

“As….ah…interesting as this has been….Nicole….I need to get back to work.”

“Oh, of course, of course. Must get back to saving lives.” Nicole stood up. She carefully folded her newspaper and placed it under her arm. “Do give my regards to Bobby. Tell him that I look forward to more….stimulating….conversations.” She smiled again, then turned and walked away.

Annie sat and watched Nicole until she left the cafeteria. Then she got up and went back to the ER. She pulled her cell phone out of her pocket and dialed Bobby’s cell.

“Hi Babe,” he answered. She could tell he was distracted by whatever he was working on at the moment.

“Um...Bobby, I, uh…had a visitor at lunch.”

“Uh huh…” he mumbled to someone, probably Alex. Then his attention came back to Annie and he asked, “Who was it?”

“Nicole Wallace.” There was silence for several beats and she wondered briefly if he had heard her. “Bobby?”

“Is she there now?” he asked quietly.

“No, she left.”

“Where are you?” His voice was still soft, but there was a strange quality to it that Annie couldn’t quite put her finger on.

“I’m in the ER, of course. I’m at work.”

“Hold on,” he said. He moved the phone away from his mouth and she could hear him speaking to someone, but couldn’t make out the words. When he came back on the phone he told her, “Annie, I want you to stay where you are. I’m on my way over there. Don’t leave the ER; don’t go anywhere alone, just stay where there are other people.”

“What?”

“I’m on my way. Don’t move.”

He ended the call abruptly. She looked at the phone for a moment, confused. She had expected him to have questions, but she hadn’t expected him to drop everything and rush over. Annie went to the reception area and let them know that her husband would be coming to see her. Then she picked up a chart and went to an exam room. She had taken vital signs on the patient and was in the process of asking questions about the woman’s abdominal pain when the curtain around the woman’s bed was abruptly drawn back by Bobby. Annie and the woman both looked up in surprise to see him towering over them. Annie didn’t see how he could have gotten there so quickly.

Bobby told her, “We need to talk.”

“OK…I…I just need to finish…”

“Now,” he cut her off as his hand closed around her wrist and he pulled her after him. Annie handed the chart to another nurse as Bobby pulled her past, and quickly asked her to finish up with the woman. He pulled her down the hallway, then turned to her and asked, “Empty room?”

Annie nodded and pointed to a room. Bobby went into the room, still holding her wrist firmly. He closed the door behind them and only then did he let go of her.

“What did she say?” he asked abruptly.

Annie stared at him for a moment and then said, “Well…she didn’t introduce herself at first; she just asked if she could sit with me in the cafeteria. We struck up a conversation. She said she was here to visit the wife of a friend; I suppose you are the ‘friend’ she was talking about. She asked about my job and then she was talking about nurses in general and then the police and then she laid the newspaper on the table with the story about Croyden’s suicide. She made a comment about the detective in the story….and I realized she brought it up deliberately because she knew I was your wife.”

“And what did you say when you knew who she was?”

“I told her I knew that she was Nicole Wallace. She said her name was Elizabeth.”

Bobby was pacing back and forth in the room. He rubbed his hand over the back of his neck as he asked, “Did she say why she came?”

“She said that you ‘visited’ her husband yesterday and she wanted to return the favor, and she said she was curious about me. Then she started talking about your mother and your father and about…well, you know, just the same stuff she has said to you.”

Bobby stopped pacing and looked at her closely. It had always made her feel…cherished…that he could read her emotions and her thoughts so well. But sometimes, like now, there were things she didn’t want to talk about and that same trait of his made her uncomfortable. But she could see it in his eyes; he knew that there was something she wasn’t telling him. And he was not going to let her avoid his questions.

“What else did she say, Annie?”

“Nothing,” she looked down at the floor.

Bobby tilted his head and leaned down to look her in the eye, but she wouldn’t meet his gaze. He repeated, “What else did she say, Annie?”

She sighed and backed up a few steps. Her hands felt sweaty and she wiped them on her shirt. “She….asked about….the…um…the attack, and my…scars, and…and…how you feel…about….” She trailed off as Bobby reached out and pulled her to him. He wrapped his arms around her and held her tightly. She felt tears sting her eyes, but blinked them back. He kissed the top of her head and then pulled away, all business again.

“OK, I sent Eames and Jefferies to pick the kids up from school. They’ll meet us here and then Jefferies is going to drive the four of you to your grandfather’s. We’re investigating the details of Nicole’s citizenship hearing. As soon as we have something we can arrest her on, you can come home.”

Annie stared at him. She wasn’t sure what to respond to first, so she started with his first statement. “You…Eames is picking the kids up?”

“Yes,” he said slowly, as though he were explaining some difficult concept to one of the children. “She’s bringing them here so that Jefferies can drive you all up to Connecticut.”

“We aren’t going to Connecticut, Bobby. I have to work; the kids have school.”

“You are going,” he said firmly. “I want you away from here, away from Nicole. I doubt that she will leave town right now, so it should be safe to go to your grandfather’s. But Captain Deakins is contacting the police up there and arranging for a squad car to sit outside his house.”

“Nicole is not trying to kill me, Bobby; she’s just trying to upset me and plant doubts about our marriage. I’m not leaving,” she repeated.

Bobby ran his hand through his hair, agitated again. “You are going,” he said. “You may be right about Nicole, but I need for you and the kids to be safe. You’re going,” he repeated.

“No I’m not.” She said each word slowly, emphasizing each one.

His raised his voice now. “You don’t know what she is capable of, so just stop this, Annie! You and the kids are leaving.”

“You are the one who told me a few months ago that she only kills when her victim has something she wants or could harm her in some way, and that there is no advantage to her if she harms me or the kids. I’m not going to be run out of my own home by her little games!”

He suddenly grabbed her upper arms and lifted her until her feet were barely touching the floor. He brought her face close to his. She cringed as he almost yelled, “Listen to me! I can’t concentrate on catching her unless I know that you and the kids are safe. You. Are. Leaving.”

His grip on her arms was painful and tears slipped down her cheeks as she whispered, “Bobby, you’re hurting me.”

He released her immediately and stepped back. He raised his hands with his palms facing outward and backed up.

“I’m sorry, Annie. I…I’m…sorry.”

He turned his back to her and leaned his hands on the wall as he closed his eyes and lowered his head. Annie watched him in shock. She had seen Bobby angry before, but never like this. He didn’t seem angry so much as he seemed….scared. The revelation hit her like a fist in her stomach. Bobby was scared.

She went over to him and slipped in between his body and the wall. His eyes were closed and his breathing was ragged. Annie reached up and held his face gently between her hands. She pulled him down and kissed him gently on the lips. He didn’t respond, but didn’t pull away.

“Babe,” she whispered. “I’m sorry. We’ll leave; we’ll go to Grandpa’s.”

His warm, brown eyes opened and looked deeply into her blue ones. He pulled her into his arms and held her for several minutes.

“I’m sorry, Annie, I’m so sorry.”

“I know, Babe, I know.” She pulled back and looked at him. “I just need to go talk to my supervisor, OK?”

He nodded and kissed her before letting her go. Annie left him in the room and went to find her supervisor. She explained that a family emergency had come up and she needed a few days off. When she got back to the exam room where Bobby was waiting, Alex was there too. And they were arguing about something.

“….and Deakins will pull you off this case,” Alex was saying as Annie opened the door. They both fell silent and looked at her as she walked in and closed the door behind her. She looked at her husband and the frightened look from a few minutes ago was gone. Now he definitely looked angry.

“Why would the captain pull you off this case?” Annie asked.

“He won’t,” Bobby said as Alex answered at the same time, “Because Bobby wants to go threaten Nicole Wallace and tell her to stay away from you and the kids.”

“And that’s why we are leaving town. So there’s no reason for you confront her about this, Bobby.” Annie had never seen Bobby this angry and this afraid. She feared what he might do to Nicole.

“I’m not going to sit back while she stalks my family and threatens my wife.”

Annie walked over to him and put her hand on his chest. “Bobby, please don’t do anything that you’ll regret.”

He backed away from her and said, “I wouldn’t regret strangling the life out of her. But I’ll settle for making sure she knows what will happen the next time she approaches my wife.”

Alex moved to stand in front of Bobby. “You aren’t thinking clearly, Goren. If you do this, it could compromise any case we might build against her. We have a plan in motion to see if she will try to bribe that judge who granted her citizenship. If she does that, we’ll have a reason to bring her in and question her. But if you go rushing over there like an enraged husband, you could blow the whole thing and Nicole Wallace will live happily ever after with her rich husband. Is that what you want Bobby? Is the satisfaction of confronting her over this really worth losing the one chance we might have to put her in prison where she belongs?”

Bobby didn’t answer, but stood staring down at his partner. In spite of the seriousness of the situation, Annie had to suppress an urge to laugh at the sight of tiny Alex Eames standing there with a very angry, very large, man towering over her. But Alex stood her ground and held Bobby’s gaze without wavering. Suddenly the anger just seemed to evaporate from Bobby. He looked down and took a step back from Alex. He raised his hands in surrender.

“OK,” Alex said as she turned to Annie. “I left Jefferies in the waiting room with the kids. Let’s get you guys on the road so we can get on with this case.”

They went out and collected the children and Jefferies. The children were excited as they talked and laughed on the way to the car. None of them seemed the least bit curious about being pulled out of school by their Aunt Alex and going on an unexpected trip to Grandpa’s in the middle of a school day. It was just a big adventure for them. At the car Annie realized that Alex had also stopped by their house and packed some clothing for them and collected Sandy, who was curled up in her dog crate in the back of the SUV. Bobby knelt and hugged and kissed each one of the children and made sure they were buckled into the back seat. Before Annie got in the front seat of the department SUV that Jefferies would chauffeur them in, Bobby pulled her close.

“Babe…” he whispered.

She put her finger on his lips to stop him. She put her arms around his neck and whispered in his ear, “Just go get her, Detective.”

He kissed her and helped her into the SUV. She and Jefferies made small talk on the drive to Connecticut. The children were excited at first and alternately argued and played games, before each of them fell asleep. When they reached Grandpa’s, Annie noted there was a patrol car parked outside. The children woke up and after thanking Detective Jefferies (with some prompting from their mother), they all ran up to the house to see Grandpa. Annie thanked Jefferies as well and he helped her carry their things into the house. After he had driven away, she called Bobby and told him they had arrived (although she suspected Jefferies was already talking to Alex) and that there was a patrol car outside the house. They talked for a few minutes and then said “I love you” and hung up.

Except for the patrol car sitting on the street in front of the house, and following them whenever they left the house, it felt like they had simply extended their spring vacation. Two days after they arrived at Grandpa’s, Annie took the kids and Sandy to the beach, followed by their police escort. It was still too cold to go swimming, but the children had fun running up and down the beach with Sandy and digging in the sand. Phillip was holding onto Sandy’s leash when the puppy suddenly began barking. Phillip lost the leash when she took off running at top speed toward a man walking from the road on the other side of the sand dunes.

Annie called Sandy but she ignored her and kept running. She looked at the tall figure walking towards them. The children all recognized him at the same time she did. They all yelled, “Daddy!” and ran after Sandy. He knelt down to pet Sandy and then all three children launched themselves at him. After hugging and kissing them and listening to their excited stories for a few minutes he stood up and walked towards Annie, with the dog and the children dancing around him. She smiled as she watched him. He was wearing her favorite black tee shirt, jeans, and running shoes. When he reached her, he smiled as he wrapped his arms around her waist and lifted her up. His lips touched hers gently and then pushed hers open for a deep, passionate kiss. He held her like that kissing her for several long moments as Ally giggled and clapped her hands, the twins groaned and hid their eyes, and Sandy barked furiously and jumped up and down. He finally ended the kiss and set her down.

Neither of them mentioned Nicole Wallace as they spent the next two hours playing on the beach with their kids. When they left, Annie noticed that the patrol car was no longer in attendance. Annie had driven Grandpa’s car to the beach and Bobby had arrived in their SUV. The children all wanted to ride back to the house with Daddy. Back at the house, Annie made lunch. Afterwards, she left Bobby talking to Grandpa while she and the children packed their clothes to go home. Bobby loaded the car and put Sandy in her crate for the ride home as Annie and the children hugged Grandpa goodbye.

They didn’t talk about Nicole until the children were in bed and asleep that night. Annie locked the bathroom door as she showered and dressed for bed. She sighed as she looked in the mirror at the bruises on her upper arms, where Bobby had grabbed her the day Nicole came to the hospital. They were beginning to fade, but were still visible. She could see his fingerprints clearly delineated on her skin. She knew that he already felt incredible guilt for having handled her so roughly and wasn’t sure how he would react if he saw the bruises he had left. It was too warm to wear long sleeves so she pulled on a pair of cotton sleep pants decorated with grape vines and wine glasses and the white three-quarter sleeve shirt embroidered with a matching design. The sleeves covered the bruises without being too warm.

Lying in bed, Bobby told her all that had happened with Nicole; how she had taken their bait and tried to bribe a judge, which allowed them to arrest her and bring her in for questioning. During the interview, Bobby and Alex tricked her into thinking she had been exposed to the anthrax virus and she revealed that she had been vaccinated for it. Since there was no record that Elizabeth Hitchens had ever been vaccinated for anthrax, but Nicole Wallace had, Ron Carver was able to get a court order for a blood test. Once they were able to prove that she was Nicole Wallace, she would be charged with murder. For now she was in jail. Bobby expected her husband to bail her out, but he no longer felt there was any danger for Annie and the children. She noticed that he didn’t say very much about the interview itself, but she knew that Nicole would not have given in easily.

“So what did Nicole say this time?” she asked as she lay with her head on his chest and his arm around her shoulders.

“Oh, you know, she tried to get to me, to distract me from asking questions she didn’t want to answer.”

“Like what?”

Bobby sighed and ran his fingers through her long blond hair. “Well, last time she tried to get to me by talking about Mom’s illness. This time it was Dad and how he abandoned us. That was the whole point of using Croyden. She knew he was like my father and I wouldn’t be able to remain objective. She counted on me going after him like I did. She asked if I was worried that I would follow in my father’s footsteps and abandon my family.”

“She asked me if I worry about that, too,” Annie said.

“What did you tell her?”

“I said that all I worry about are the psychotic killers you have to deal with.”

He laughed and tilted her head back to kiss her. Then he said thoughtfully, “Nicole is so…intelligent, and she reads people so well. She had the strength and determination to survive her childhood. Intelligence, insight, strength…with those character traits she could have been anything. She played a literature professor so well; she could have actually been one. But instead she let the anger and hatred for her parents turn inward towards herself and outward towards everyone else. She could have been anything, but she chose to use people, just about everyone she met, to act out all the anger of her childhood.”

Annie was silent as she thought about what he had said. Finally it made sense why this killer, more than any of the others he had arrested, held a bizarre fascination and revulsion for him. Nicole had told Annie that Bobby saw his father’s traits in himself and it angered him. But she realized that Bobby saw himself in Nicole, and it both frightened him and attracted him. It repulsed him to see how she used people and murdered without conscience, yet he couldn’t resist wondering if the “sparkling little girl” was still in there and if she could be saved, in spite of all she had done. He had survived his childhood too, but had made different choices in his life. Maybe he was afraid that he could just as easily have become what Nicole had become.

Her musings were interrupted when Bobby shifted positions so that he was facing her. He looked at her face and ran his thumb across her cheek.

“About those things she said to you. About your scars…” Annie opened her mouth to stop him, but he put his finger across her lips. “Shh…let me say this. I know that even after two years, it’s hard for you to look at them. Those scars are a part of who you are, the experiences that have made you who you are, and there is nothing ugly or repulsive about them to me.”

Bobby pulled her so that she was lying on her stomach next to him and lifted the hem of her shirt to expose the scar on her lower back. She tried to pull the shirt down, but he pushed her hand away. He leaned down and gently placed a kiss on the scar. Her breath caught in her throat and her heart rate accelerated at the feel of his lips on her skin. He lowered her shirt and rolled her onto her back. He smiled at her as he again lifted the hem of her shirt and leaned down to kiss these scars also; one on the right side of her abdomen and the other just under her left breast. She was definitely having difficulty breathing now. Bobby raised himself up and rested on his elbow as he looked down at her.

“The scars don’t bother me at all, Babe. But this does,” he said as he reached for one of her sleeves and pulled it up to reveal the bruises she had been hiding. He gently ran a finger along the bruise. His face reflected his guilt and his revulsion over what he had done.

“I didn’t mean to hurt you,” he whispered.

“I know you didn’t.”

“But there’s no excuse for this,” he said.

“No there isn’t,” she agreed.

He looked up from the bruise and met her gaze.

“Do you want me to leave?” he asked.

She kept her eyes on his as she answered. “No, I don’t. But this can’t happen again. Ever.”

He nodded and ran his thumb over her cheek. Annie put her arms around his neck and pulled him down to her. He kissed her as his hands again slipped under her shirt.

As they lay together later, Annie’s head on his chest, she listened to the comforting thud of his heart. She thought about Nicole and the turmoil she had brought into their home. She was glad she was in jail, and she hoped that once she was convicted she would be in prison for the rest of her life. She shifted her weight to snuggle closer to Bobby and his arm tightened around her. She felt him kiss the top of her head.

“I love you Annie,” he whispered.

“I love you, too, Bobby,” she whispered back.

End Season 2


This is the last chapter of this story. I will be working on a story for season 3, but I don't know how long that will take. So far I have a few ideas but no BIG story. Thank you all for reading and for your comments.
flashymom
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Bobby pulled her so that she was lying on her stomach next to him and lifted the hem of her shirt to expose the scar on her lower back. She tried to pull the shirt down, but he pushed her hand away. He leaned down and gently placed a kiss on the scar. Her breath caught in her throat and her heart rate accelerated at the feel of his lips on her skin. He lowered her shirt and rolled her onto her back. He smiled at her as he again lifted the hem of her shirt and leaned down to kiss these scars also; one on the right side of her abdomen and the other just under her left breast. She was definitely having difficulty breathing now.


I was also having difficulty breathing by the end of this paragraph. I like the name "Sandy" for the dog. I also loved the scene with Bobby coming over the sand dunes wearing a black tee shirt and blue jeans......::thud::

Nice job!
Judyg
I know I told you how much I liked this story and this final chapter is no exception. You captured the moods and emotions perfectly. Bobby's fear was for Annie and his family - protecting them from whatever Nicole might be capable of was his first and only thought. His anger was directed at himself and Nicole - Nicole for being so blatantly wanting to provoke him into reacting but at himself, I think, for never thinking Nicole would approach Annie. No matter who the woman in his life - Annie, Charli, Rena - I see Bobby as a man who can allow most things to 'run off his back', but NOT knowing that they would be threatened in any way.

I like that Annie stands up to him at first. She sees no reason to fear Nicole, even if Bobby knows different. Finally consenting shows that they are equal partners and she is willing to listen to him - to trust his judgment in most things.

"It can never happen again..." very simply stated and accepted. Bobby did not mean to hurt Annie - he would never physically harm anyone he cared about intentionlly. In his desparation to make her understand, he overreacted. It as not something I took as abuse, but a man deeply concerned about his wife and family. You wrote that very well without making it the main focus of the story - nicely done.

Bobby in the sand dunes with the BTSOH and jeans ::thud:: and the scene with the scars - yeah - that was definitely heavy breathing material.
mcllwain71
Thank you for another great chapter.
It would be interesting to see,how Bobby would be today(after frame),
if there would be a wife like Annie and kids on the show.
I look foward to your next story.
ciaddict
QUOTE (Judyg @ Sep 7 2008, 05:38 AM) *
I know I told you how much I liked this story and this final chapter is no exception. You captured the moods and emotions perfectly. Bobby's fear was for Annie and his family - protecting them from whatever Nicole might be capable of was his first and only thought. His anger was directed at himself and Nicole - Nicole for being so blatantly wanting to provoke him into reacting but at himself, I think, for never thinking Nicole would approach Annie. No matter who the woman in his life - Annie, Charli, Rena - I see Bobby as a man who can allow most things to 'run off his back', but NOT knowing that they would be threatened in any way.

I like that Annie stands up to him at first. She sees no reason to fear Nicole, even if Bobby knows different. Finally consenting shows that they are equal partners and she is willing to listen to him - to trust his judgment in most things.

"It can never happen again..." very simply stated and accepted. Bobby did not mean to hurt Annie - he would never physically harm anyone he cared about intentionlly. In his desparation to make her understand, he overreacted. It as not something I took as abuse, but a man deeply concerned about his wife and family. You wrote that very well without making it the main focus of the story - nicely done.

Bobby in the sand dunes with the BTSOH and jeans ::thud:: and the scene with the scars - yeah - that was definitely heavy breathing material.


Thank you Judy. You know how nervous I was about that scene, wanting to make sure Bobby didn't come across as abusive and Annie didn't come across as making excuses for abuse. I'm glad that it came out the way I saw it in my head.

I like to work in that BTSOH every once in a while, just because. rolleyes.gif And that bit with the scars I had intended to write into the first story, but for some reason I didn't. So I thought it fit in nicely here. That came about because of an interview I saw with Fran Drescher years ago. She told about when she and her husband were robbed in their home, and Fran was raped at gunpoint (I read that the rapist was caught and convicted). She said that the first time she and her husband made love after that she was so traumatized that she closed her eyes and all she could see was the rapist. She said that her husband told her to open her eyes and look at him. When she did he said, "What's my name?" He made her look at him and repeat his name several times until she finally relaxed and was able to make love. That has always stuck in my head, his tenderness and compassion for her after such a traumatic experience. And it took the form of Bobby kissing Annie's scars. Sorry to say Fran and Peter separated about ten years later and eventually divorced.

QUOTE (mcllwain71 @ Sep 7 2008, 06:05 AM) *
Thank you for another great chapter.
It would be interesting to see,how Bobby would be today(after frame),
if there would be a wife like Annie and kids on the show.
I look foward to your next story.



Thank you Mcllwain. I actually have in my head what happens after Frame, but by the time I work my way through the seasons it may change, depending on what happens in season 8. I had a story all worked out after Endgame, but then Untethered came along and I had to change a bunch of stuff. I had Frank coming to Sunday dinner every week--obviously that didn't happen! laugh.gif
AmandaB
This is a great way to end the story. I really like that Bobby would be that protective, he probably wouldn't think that Nicole would visit Annie. I look forward to your season 3 story.
janpop4
I loved the name Sandy and I loved Nicole's appearance in this chapter and Bobby's overprotective nature of Annie. Great end to a great story and looking forward to season 3 of this.
FusseKat
This was a great ride. And as others have said, your characters are dead on - as always.

I can hardly wait for Season 3!
TennesseCIFAn
Loved this last chatper!


So is season 3 ready yet?
ciaddict
I'm working on the season 3 story and chapter one is about done. But I needed some input. Bobby and Annie's daughter, Ally will be turning 10 soon and I wanted to write something about her birthday. Flashymom suggested I ask for ideas about a party for a 10 year old girl. So...any ideas?
Jryan
I enjoyed it, oh and Instead of Hot lips from Mash, I get to be Hotpants!
ciaddict
QUOTE (Jryan @ Sep 13 2008, 12:36 PM) *
I enjoyed it, oh and Instead of Hot lips from Mash, I get to be Hotpants!



Glad you liked it JRyan! Those two cops, Johna and Harlana, are named for my sisters and originally that whole conversation was going to be with them. But then Nurse Ryan walked in and those words just came out of her mouth instead!
flashymom
I'M BAAA-AAAACK!!!!!!!

Power went off here around 1am Central Time, and was restored in my neighborhood at 3:30 pm today! Not too bad, huh? Lots of high water all over the area, none in my immediate area. Still under curfew, but will start to lift as more power is restored to more areas.

Family in Houston is fine, BFF in Houston is also fine.

Trying to find where family in Galveston, League City and Clear Lake went, as those areas are still underwater and will not have power for days....maybe even a week or more.

Thanks for thoughts and prayers!

flashymom/Heather
ciaddict
OK, time for a new story. Around chapter 3, we will be seeing Mike Logan and a new OC. It's season 3, so he is still assigned to Staten Island. Since we know he rode the ferry, I've decided in my LOCI universe season 3 will find Logan living in the same apartment as in season 6--around the corner from Peter J's.

As always--thank you Spook.


FAMILY


Author's note: I do not own any Law and Order Criminal Intent characters, nor do I own any characters from Law and Order who might show up. Dick Wolf, of course, owns them and has done quite well by them.

I do own the other characters in this story: Annie, the children, Grandpa, and various other people (named and unnamed). They inhabit my imagination where they live out their lives trying to fit into the LOCI universe. This story goes back into the past and plays the "what if" game. What if Bobby was married and had a family? So here is a warning: There will be some necessary changes to canon in order to fit Annie and the kids into Bobby's life, creating a parallel LOCI universe. If you are not OK with that, you won't like this story (or any future installments) and I completely understand if you pass.


This story takes place during season 3 and will introduce Mike Logan (who is still assigned to Staten Island) and a new OC, Sarah Johnson.



Chapter 1



Annie Paine sat on the bed watching her husband get ready for work. She laughed as he tried, and failed, for the third time to knot his tie. It was something he did almost every day and usually he could do it in his sleep. But this morning he was definitely having difficulty. Annie got up and walked across the room to where he stood in front of the mirror over their dark oak dresser.

“Here, let me help,” she said, tying it for him. She slipped the silver tie clip in place and ran her hand down the blue and black striped tie. “You’re nervous,” she teased.

“Maybe a little,” he admitted. “I just wish Captain Deakins would let me work without a partner until Eames comes back.”

“Robert Goren, NYPD Major Case Squad detective…..afraid of a little girl?”

Bobby looked down at her grinning face for a moment, then suddenly tickled her and backed her against the wall. Annie squealed and tried to squirm away, but he leaned his body against hers as he covered her mouth with his.

“I’m not afraid of this little girl,” he whispered in her ear. He released her and went to the closet to pull out his jacket.

“Is it really all that bad to have a temporary partner? Eames will be there for the first few weeks anyway, right?”

She watched him appreciatively as he shrugged into the jacket.

“That’s just it—she’s temporary. By the time we figure out how to work together, she’ll leave.”

Annie sighed as she leaned back against the wall, watching him and thinking about how much she appreciated Alex Eames. Bobby seemed more centered since joining the Major Case Squad. During his time in uniform, he had gone through several partners. No one really disliked him or working with him. But his conversations were hard to follow as he jumped from topic to topic, driving around the city. And it was obvious to everyone that he had no intention of remaining in uniform for long. Investigation was what he had trained for in the Army and it was what he loved. He used his time on the street to add to his arsenal of knowledge of human behavior. He conversed with everyone he could; suspects that they arrested, victims they took reports from, husbands and wives disturbing neighbors with their fights, teenagers hanging out on street corners, storekeepers or people walking down the street. He questioned them about their lives, their families, their neighborhood. His partners found it boring and useless, he found it fascinating and stimulating.

When he became a detective and moved into Narcotics, his understanding of people was an asset. Annie hadn’t liked his time in Narcotics, although she never told him. He had done well there, but it was a frustrating time for him. He felt he was fighting against the tide; as many arrests as he made, there were always more drug dealers, more drug addicts, more drugs on the streets. Undercover work had suited him; it turned out that he was a good actor. Although he had a partner and a team for backup, he was on his own when he was undercover. He liked being in charge of the operations and he liked being left alone to do what he did well; mingle and assimilate with the people he was gathering information on. While he was good at what he did and had the reputation to go with it, it was difficult for him to keep a partner. They felt that Bobby treated them as part of his team, but not as a real partner. In his four years in Narcotics, he ran four undercover operations, each with a different partner.

When he was offered the transfer to Major Case, he had accepted eagerly. Here he would be able to put his profiling skills to work. The first few months with Alex as his partner had been rocky. She was the senior partner and was not about to follow him around and take orders. Despite the fact that he had always had partners, he had gotten used to working on his own since he was undercover so often. Discussing a case with someone else on a day to day, moment to moment, basis was difficult for him to adjust to. Explaining his leaps of logic was frustrating for him and he felt it slowed him down. Alex didn’t always know where he was going when interviewing witnesses or suspects and it threw him off balance to have to explain it to her. Bobby liked his new captain, Jimmy Deakins, but often felt restrained by Deakins’ insistence on “covering the basics.” But slowly, Bobby seemed to settle in and she saw the difference in him as he and Alex adjusted to one another.

Although Alex didn’t have the background in profiling that Bobby did, she was also good at reading people. As she began to understand her partner, she learned to trust him. Annie didn’t really know for sure what Alex thought of Bobby in the beginning; she never talked about it. When Annie had asked to meet his new partner, he told her time and again that Alex had some reason for not getting together with them. It was a good six months before Alex had agreed to meet them for drinks. As the two women gradually became friends, Alex didn’t discuss how she felt about Bobby in those first months and Annie didn’t ask. She just appreciated that he was happy and enthused about his work; the cases and the criminals challenged his intellect while the victims tugged at his heart.

She knew that Alex’s maternity leave would be difficult for him, even without the stress of adjusting to a new partner. At least Alex would still be in the office for a while before going on leave. Annie hoped that would help him ease into the temporary partnership. She smiled at him now, admiring how he looked in his black suit, the blue shirt picking up the blue in the tie. After eleven years of marriage, her heart still fluttered at the sight of him. She prayed that would never change. She walked over to him and ran her finger across the silver tie clip. He leaned down and kissed her good bye. As he reached the door, she called his name softly and he turned to look at her.

“Play nice with the new kid today, and share your toys,” she said with a smile.

“Eames doesn’t make me share my toys,” he replied with a mock frown.

“Well, if you play nice and share I’ll have a surprise for you when you get home tonight.”

He smiled slowly and let his eyes rove suggestively over her body before winking and slipping out the door. Annie smiled and went to make see if the children were ready for school.

She was in the kitchen preparing dinner when he got home that night, and the children were in the backyard playing with the dog. He kissed her and leaned against the counter as she cut up vegetables for the salad, stealing a slice of carrot.

“So how did it go?” she asked.

He shrugged and tossed the carrot in his mouth. “OK, I guess.”

“What is Detective Bishop like?”

He shrugged again. “Young, red hair. She seems eager to get to work on a case. But…”

“But what?”

“She….watches me.”

“Watches you?”

“Yeah, like…I don’t know…like she’s trying to read my thoughts. Her desk is behind mine and I can feel her watching me. I went over a couple of the open cases Eames and I are working on and she looked at me as much as she looked at the files.”

“She’s probably nervous and she probably wants to take advantage of this assignment to learn what she can from you. You have a reputation for being brilliant….and different.”

“I do? Where did you hear that?”

“Hey, Alex isn’t the only cop I know. I have my sources,” she laughed. “So, did you play nice?”

He smiled at her and folded his arms. “I played nice.”

“Did you share your toys?”

“I shared my toys.”

“Well, then….after the kids go to bed, I’ll give you your surprise.”

Bobby moved to stand behind her. He leaned down to kiss her neck while his hands roamed over her body, making it very difficult to slice radishes. He whispered in her ear, “And what is my surprise?”

“If I tell you that, it won’t be a surprise.”

“Think the kids are ready for bed?”

Annie giggled and turned to wrap her arms around his neck. She pulled him down and kissed him deeply. Then she put her hands on his chest and pushed him away.

“Dinner’s almost done. Go call the kids to come and wash up. And be patient.”

Annie loved this time of day. Dinner time in the Goren household was truly a “Father Knows Best” or “Donna Reed” type event. They sat together at the table eating, talking, and laughing. Usually they all worked together to clean up afterwards. It was something she had deliberately cultivated, knowing that mealtimes had been unpredictable and often filled with drama for Bobby as a child. She leaned her cheek on her hand and watched Bobby laughing at a story the twins were telling him. It occurred to her that not only did Bobby’s childhood color the way he saw the world, it also colored her own efforts to provide him with the stability he never had as a child.

After the children were in bed, Bobby put his arm around her shoulders and pulled her into their bedroom. He pushed her back against the door and slipped his hands under her shirt while he whispered in her ear, “So where’s my surprise?”

Annie giggled and held his face between her hands. She pulled him down for a long, deep kiss as his hands touched her bare skin and sent chills through her.

“Go sit on the bed,” she whispered.

He smiled down at her and went to do as she said. He watched her as she went to the closet and pulled something from the back. When she turned around with a gift-wrapped box, his surprise showed on his face. This wasn’t what he had been expecting. She sat down on the other side of the bed and placed the box in the middle.

“What’s this?”

“It’s a surprise. Open it.”

He chuckled with delight as he reached for the box and began to tear the wrapping off. He pulled the last of the paper off to reveal a box with a picture of a red Ferrari on it. She had gotten him a model of a 1962 Ferrari GTO. It was the same car that Bobby had been so excited to have been able to sit in a few months earlier. That same night he also told her about how much he wanted to build model cars when he was a child. But the one time he had saved up his money to buy a model of a Bel Aire and had spent hours putting it together, his mother destroyed it during one of her “episodes”.

Bobby was silent as he ran his fingers over the picture of the car. He looked up at her somberly and she wondered if this had been a mistake. Maybe it brought back too many painful memories. He reached over and ran his thumb across her cheek. He smiled at her and pulled her head to him and gently kissed her.

“Thank you,” he whispered. He picked up the box and the paper and set them on the table next to the bed. Then he lay down and pulled Annie down to lay next to him with his arm around her, running his fingers through her long blond hair. He buried his face in her hair and inhaled her scent.

“You know,” he said huskily, “you can’t wipe away my childhood and the things my parents did.”

She reached up and put her hand against his cheek. “I know,” she whispered back. “I just want to make you happy now.”

Bobby rolled over to look into her eyes. As he leaned down to kiss her he said softly, “You do, Babe, you do.”


End chapter 1
janpop4
I sent you my review but I'll say again, great chapter. Loved it sooo much. Loved that surprise of a car and I loved when Annie told him to share his toys. Cannot wait for more.
flashymom
It turned out well! I really like this! So, when's the 10 year old girl birthday party going to happen? I can't wait to see Bobby surrounded by a bunch of giggling, squealing girls having a girly birthday party...... tongue.gif
FusseKat
I love this series - you set such a peaceful and understanding world for Bobby to live in - off duty.

“you can’t wipe away my childhood and the things my parents did.” - Love this line, it succinctly explains Bobby's mindset.
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