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magret2you
Hello!!! Well, I've another fic for you guys!!! Tell me what you think! And I also want to know it you guys would like me to continue, or if it's too sucky to continue...ok? Tell me your wonderful, yet blunt thoughts! biggrin.gif ENJOY!
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Chapter 1: Jane Doe - 6 Months

Olivia and Elliot sat at their desks buried in paperwork, yet again! It was a Thursday afternoon and it had been an incredibly slow day. Elliot looked at his partner and saw how completely absorbed she was in her paperwork. Quickly he grabbed a blank piece of paper and crumpled it up before throwing it at her. Olivia didn't react and just continued writing. So, he grabbed a pencil and turned the eraser in the direction of her head. Just as he was about to throw it, and without looking up, she said, "Don't even think about it."

Elliot laughed "How'd you know?

Olivia finally looked up at him and grinned smugly. "I can read minds."

Elliot barely finished speaking when Chester and Fin walked into the bullpen after giving evidence in court. They had finished their testimony a good three hours go but Casey had kept them there all day just in case. As a result they were tired and cranky when they got back.

"How'd it go?" Olivia asked turning her chair around to face them.

"Guilty of all counts," Fin replied proudly.

"How long did they get?" asked Elliot curiously.

"18 to 25," Chester answered as he moved to get a cup of coffee.

"Not bad! So Casey came through, good on her," Elliot said, slightly distracted by … … … … … A silence fell over the group as they reflected on the case which had just concluded, one to the worst they'd had in a long time.

A few minutes later Captain Cragen came out of his office and walked towards Elliot and Olivia's desks, they looked up and stared at him expectantly.

"We've got a case," Cragen explained. "A Jane Doe at Columbia Hospital."



"A Jane Doe? She unconscious?" asked Elliot thinking that's why she didn't have a name.



"No, she's very much alive and kicking," Cragen replied.



"How old is she, Captain?" Olivia asked, grabbing her jacket.



"Six months old."

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Well, that's all for now! What do you think? biggrin.gif
Starlight
Wow I would really like you to write more!
imsvu23
this made me laugh, i read some EOness in the beginning! lol
and it also made me curious as to what will happen next, you girl YOU KNOW that i like to laugh and become curious for something! bravo

only mistake i saw on that one was you said "Chester and Lake" when i guess you meant Chester and Fin or Fin and Lake.

but i like it so far!!!!

Continue!!!!!

It was awesome!!!


magret2you
YAY!!!! You guys read my story and liked it!!!! Woohoo!!! That makes me happy! I'm gonna go and update soon... typing it now my curious little one... brb! happy.gif
Starlight
Type faster! I can't wait. smile.gif I'm watin to see the new Monk and Psych so I'll be waitin for a while. tongue.gif
magret2you
Sorry I took so long... I got distracted by SOMEONE'S story... Ok, here goes! I hope you guys enjoy!!!
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Chapter 2 Part 1: Serena

Olivia had 'shock' written all over her face "What?" was all she could muster.

Cragen just nodded sadly and replied "Yes, the commisoner has personally assigned this case to us, so I expect you guys to try and find this baby's mother. It seems as though she was taken from her home and after left in the back of a cab," he continued to brief them as they walked out to the garage and got into their car.

"The cab driver acted like a good samaratin and took the baby to a local fire station and from there to the hospital. I'm having Fin and Chester go and interview the cab driver Carlos, I want you two at that hospital, pick the baby up, and bring her back her. Olivia, you have been especially requested." Cragen said, then turned back and walked into the precint.

Elliot and Olivia looked at each other and shrugged. They entered the car anf both drove to the hospital. When they stopped at a red light, Elliot looked over at Olivia, who seemed to be fascinated by the passing buildings in New York. She had her left hand resting her thigh, and Elliot pulled her hand and held it saying "Liv, we really need to talk about what happened last night..."

Olivia turned to him, and pulled her hand away from him "Not now Elliot."

"But Liv--"

"Elliot, shut up and drive... don'teven think of touching the subject right now. " Olivia interjected firmly and turned back to the wiindow, completely ignoring him from how pissed off she was at him.

After that, no further words were exchanged. They parked outside the hospital, and began to walk inside. "This is crazy!" Olivia mumbled under her breath and Elliot nodded in agreement, and walked up to the nurse's station.

"Ah! Detectives Benson and Stabler! Nice to see you again! Dr. Davidson has been waiting for you. He's in room 219 waiting for you with the child." Nurse Trixie said with an over enthusiatic tone of voice and smiling at them.

Thy both smiled back, and said "Thaks Trix, we'll see you later."

They walked to the elevator and got upstairs. Right when the elevator doors opened, Dr. Lucas Davidson was standing infront of them.

"Hey, I was just cming to find you," he said greeting the detectives, and began to guide them to the room where the baby was with another nurse.
imsvu23
QUOTE (magret2you @ Aug 1 2008, 09:19 PM) *
Sorry I took so long... I got distracted by SOMEONE'S story... Ok, here goes! I hope you guys enjoy!!!
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Chapter 2 Part 1: Serena

Olivia had 'shock' written all over her face "What?" was all she could muster.

Cragen just nodded sadly and replied "Yes, the commisoner has personally assigned this case to us, so I expect you guys to try and find this baby's mother. It seems as though she was taken from her home and after left in the back of a cab," he continued to brief them as they walked out to the garage and got into their car.

"The cab driver acted like a good samaratin and took the baby to a local fire station and from there to the hospital. I'm having Fin and Chester go and interview the cab driver Carlos, I want you two at that hospital, pick the baby up, and bring her back her. Olivia, you have been especially requested." Cragen said, then turned back and walked into the precint.

Elliot and Olivia looked at each other and shrugged. They entered the car anf both drove to the hospital. When they stopped at a red light, Elliot looked over at Olivia, who seemed to be fascinated by the passing buildings in New York. She had her left hand resting her thigh, and Elliot pulled her hand and held it saying "Liv, we really need to talk about what happened last night..."

Olivia turned to him, and pulled her hand away from him "Not now Elliot."

"But Liv--"

"Elliot, shut up and drive... don'teven think of touching the subject right now. " Olivia


whoa......and by subject you meant Olivia right? lol that was FABulous, my little domincan BFF! wink.gif

muy bien! mas....MAS.....por fa? sad.gif <-- thats my baby face i got goin on there
magret2you
QUOTE (imsvu23 @ Aug 1 2008, 10:38 PM) *
whoa......and by subject you meant Olivia right? lol that was FABulous, my little domincan BFF! wink.gif

muy bien! mas....MAS.....por fa? sad.gif <-- thats my baby face i got goin on there


MAYBE! LOL!

LOL!! Aww!! Cute!!! I'm glad you liked it... but, I edited that version if you want to read what I added to it...
Starlight
Oh my god this is good stuff. Keep going!
magret2you
I'M BAAAACK!!! lol!! I hope you enjoy!!!
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Chapter 2: Serena, Part 2

"So, was she alright? Any form of abuse when she was brought in?" Elliot asked, as Olivia walked over to the nurse and took the baby that she was being handed.

Dr. Davidson answered reading his clipboard. "Nope, no form of abuse, or rape. She was well cared for and nurtured while she was away. She came here in clean clothes and she is very friendly."

"She is just absolutely adorable! What else did you notice about her? Any allergies or anything?" Olivia asked as she played with the baby a bit and the baby giggled.

"None that I noticed, just a diaper rash, but that's common for babies her age, they were probably using the wrong brand of diapers for her age."

"Alright, not bad... do we uhh.. need anything before we take her?" Olivia asked as Elliot walked out to take a phone call.

"I'll have Martha bring you a diaper bag with some formula, baby food, extra bottles, water, diapers, wipes and some cream for the rash," the doctor said.

"Wow, did they make you memorize that in medical school?" Olivia joked.

"Believe it or not, it was in one of my exams..." he replied smiling at her.

Martha brought in the bag with everything inside and handed it to Olivia. She recieved it and put the baby on her left arm as she took the bag. She then asked the doctor when last question "Before we leave, I wanted to know if you guys picked a name for her?"

"Nope, actually, we were hoping you guys would pick one for her for the time being. Oh sorry,excuse, I must go, I have a patient that just went into respitory arrest." He said and ran out of the room.

Olivia watched him run out and decided to sit on the hospital bed and wait for Elliot to come back in.She began to make funny faces at her and played around with her, and imediately you could tell that the baby had a great chemistry with Olivia... she was clapping her little hands and giggling as Olivia tickled her belly.

Elliot was about to walk into the room, but stopped at the doorframe and looked inside at the sound of a baby's lagh and Olivia's laugh again. It was like music to his ears, andit sounded so sincere thjat he didn't even want to interupt her. She looked happy with the baby, and Elliot was no mad that they had ever denied her of being a mother. "Damn society!"
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Sooo, what'd you think?
Starlight
Why did you stop? Keep going please!
magret2you
Olivia felt someone's eyes on her and she looked up and smiled, "Are you done?" she asked him, lifting the baby up off the bed and into her arms.

Elliot moved over and grabbed the diaper bag for her. He answered "Yep, are you ready to go?"

Olivia nodded and they walked out of the room. Elliot had his hand on her lower back as he guided her into the elevator. Oncer inside, he said to her "Cragen was who called. He wanted to let us know that once we got outside, the media would be swarming all over us. He doesn't want the baby's picture out just yet, so we'll put a blanket over her, to protect her until we get into the car, and do the same thing again when we get to the precint."

"Ok, but why doesn't he want her picture released to the media yet? Aren't we suppose to find her mother?" Olivia asked curiously.

Elliot shrugged, and they began to walk out of the elevator. He had taken a blanket from the nurse's station earlier, knowing that he'd need it later. He instructed Olivia to hold the baby as if she were sleeping, and then draped the teddy bear covered blanket over her left shoulder and the baby's body. And with that, they walked out the hospital, and sure enough, the media was all over them,pictures being taken were heard, flashes seen, questions being shouted while mics were chucked towards Olivia and Elliot aas the speed walked through the large crowd.

Elliot reached the car and opened the door for Olivia, who entered it as soon as she got to it. Elliot dropped the diaper bag in the back seat before entering himself into the driver seat. They sped off after that, with the media almost following. She situated herslf and took the blanket off the baby, who had been crying because of all the noise that was being made.
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Well, what'd you think? It just a small tease, plus I needed something to do so, I decided to update this story... did you like it? Let me know... I'll be updating soon! biggrin.gif


Starlight
I love it please update!
xoanna21
upppppdddddaaaatttttteeeeee please!
great story.
Starlight
Just waitin for an update......
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