HI I'm Rina I love writing fan fiction its so fun This is my second fan fiction story
my first was "olivia,what happened" and now i am going to write about what
happened the first day Olivia was a svu detective and what happened that day when she meet Elliot Stabler her new partner.hope you injoy and please coment at the end.
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Chapter 1 : Olivia
"Hi I'm olivia,no"
"Hello I'm detective benson, no still not right"
olivia said this word to her bath room mirror trying to find the right introduction to use to day. she had been singned to to the special victims unit and she was starting today.
she wonted to make a good impression on her new capatin and hopfully stay in this
unit as long as she could.
As she looked at heself on last time befor leaving for work she stratened her black slacks and smoothed her dark shoulder langhth hair.she walked out the front door pulling on her black leather coat. The wind was blowing the snow around the cold new york air. she got into her car and drove to her "new" job the whole time she was driving she tryed to think about what her new partner would be like. would he be short? would he be fat? would he be old? would he be a he? when she reach the preecint she parked her car and just sat there trying to pull herself together.she got out of her car and walk into the building.
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(Inside the precint)
when she walked in she saw two men and a women all crouded around a desk looking at something. so she walked of to ask for help to find the captin.
Olivia. excuse me (she said in her most polite and kind voice)
they all turned to her there was a older man with gray hair siting in a seat. The woman who was standing over the dest was african american ahe had curly gold brown hair and a sweet face. but the man next to her was the thing that cought her eye his eyes where greenish-blue he was tall and built like a brick wall.he was the first to speek to her.
Hi I'm detective stabler can i help you.
Olivia. Ummm... yes can you tell me where captin cregen is?
stabler. he's in there
olivia. thank you
olivia turned to see the door that detective stabler had pointed out. she walked over and knocked.
cregen. come in
olivia opened the door and steped in.
olivia. Hi i'm detective olivia benson I was asinged here
captin cregen stood and and ofered his hand
cregen. nice to meet you i'm don creden and welcome to special victims
olivia. thinks nice to meet you to. I was hoping t get started here as soon as posible
cregen. well we don't have any open cases right now so I'll introduce you andyou can get setled in.
olivia. okay
cregen opened his doors and walked over to the group of people whe had seen earlyed
cregen. can i have you atintion please.
det. staber. whats up captin
cregen.everyone this is detective benson shes going to be your new partner elliot.
cregen. olivia this is elliot stabler, john munch, and this is Monique Jefferies.
olivia studied the faces.
cregen. that desk will be yours elliot can help you if you need anything and i'll be in my office
olivia. thank you captin
the captin walked back to his offic andolivai stood there not really knowing what to do
Olivia. hi
elliot. hi so where were you befor
olivia. ummmn I was a traffic cop
elliot and the other detectives laughed under there breath
munch. so how long have you been a detective
olivia.about three mionths now
elliot.okay,so to day sohould be easy we don't have any cases but that could chang in a mater of min. so go have a seat get comfrotable.
elliot and the other detectives turned to each other and started talking about olivia.
elliot. man what are we going to do with her
munch. what do ya mean
jeffries. he means shes not going to have a clue haw to do this job.
elliot. she's not going to know haw to question a victim or cetch the guy who did it
munch. you never know maybe she dose know something about special victims
jeffries. I don't know but you should find out elliot
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Later that evning
munch and jeffries had gone home and it was just elliot and olivia
olivia was on her computer looking something up and elliot was looking over an old case.
elliot. what are you looking at
olivia. nothing (she said quickly startled by his voice)
she hit the butin on her computer screen and tund off the moniter
elliot. if it was nothing why did ya turn off you computer
elliot said as he stood up and walk over to olivia
olivia: really its nothing i was just looking up someone
elliot: who?
olivia. you wont to go get dinner with me
elliot. okay you can tell me about you
olivia. alright but only if you tell me about you
the two closed up and wolked out.
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when they reach a dinner down the street they sat across from each other in a corrner booth the dinner was empty except for the waiter.who walk over and asked what they wonted.
elliot. all have a coffee and fries
olivia. ummm all have coffee and a salad
waiter okay
the waiter walked way. and they tuned back to talk to each other.
elliot. so how long have you been a cop
olivia. five years, you?
elliot.seven
olivia. how longf you been here?
elliot. a year
ollivia. do you like it
elliot. look you can't like this job it'll rip you up the thing you see and have people tell you. so I wish that this unit didn't have to existe but because it dose someone has to do it and i have four kids and being able to see that these horrible people are off the streets and can't hurt anyone else. well it lets me go home to my family and fill athaat i'v done something right.
olivia. I understand. your lucky you know
elliot. in what way
olivia. you have a family
elliot your not married
olivia. no
elliot. well he's out there you'll find him
there food came and they sat ther quit for a while thinking about what the other had said.
elliot. so what are your parnets like.
olivias face sadened and she got an horrble tast in her mouth at the word parents
she didn't wont him to know anything. she stood up and walk over to the register to pay for her salad and coffee. elliot was confused and stood up so go talk to her burt she turned and walked jout of the dinner and ran to the end off the block where she leand up against a wall and be gan to cry.
elliot.olivia whats wrong? did I say something to upset you.
olivia. no I just nee d to go home
elliot. well somethings wrong or you wouldn't be crying.
olivia turned to him her eyes still filled with tears
olivia.I hate my self
elliot. why
olivia. because i'm the resulte of hate
elliot. what do you mean
olivia. the only reason I'm standing here befor you is because my mother was raped.
elliot. I'm sorry olivia ( he said setting his hand on her shoulder)
olivia. my life has always been bad in some way
elliot. you wanna go some where and talk.
olivia. sure, you want to come over to my apartment
elliot. sure
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well i hope your injoing it I'll post more tomarrow if i can
please tell me what you think.
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Sounds really good. Keep it up! 
Woah!=]
Sounds interesting
Please keep going.
Please keep going.
Hey I'm back glad to hear that you are interested in my story
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When they reach Olivia's apartment they both went into
her living room and sat on her couch.they looked at each other for a while and didn't
say any thing. just thinking about what they might say and how it might change the way they
would work together. Elliodt was the one how brock the silence.
Elliot. So whats your mom like
olivia. A drunk I used to come home and she would be out. but usually it was beter when she was passed out.
Elliot. what do you mean
Olivia. well she would hit me hard and she never cared about me and whan she did she was drunk and was acting crazy.
elliot. What did you do
oliva. I gess i just told my self that it was all my falt if she hadn't have been raped she wouldn't have been stuck with me.( olivia stoped and started to cry)
Elliot. look olivia Its not your falt how cold it have been. (he lifted her chin with his right index finger holding her face close to his)
olivia.I'm sorry for crying.( she said pulling away and wiping her tears)
Elliot. Its alright
when olivia calms down she gose indsto the kitchin to get them each a cup of coffee
when she returns elliot has turned on the radio and its playing a song she dosn't reconize it but she knows its a love song.
olivia. Heres you coffe( she says as ahe hands him the white coffee mug)
elliot. thanks
olivia. so how many kids did you say you had
elliot. four, Moreen ,kathleen, elizabeth, and dicky
olivia.wow
elliot yea
elliot gets a bet closer and looks into her eyes they are beautiful a shade of brown
she stares back she really likes him he's carring and kind he knew how to make some one
see themself.but she new she would never be able to have him. so she tucked away her feelings
and hoped that there would be a day that she could tell him everything they way sdhe knew she loved him even though they had only just meet. similar thoughts ran through his mind. He saw this women this gorgous women. andhe knew that to be with her he would have to give up his life with his childern and his wife.But he couldn't maybe one day he could but not to day. To day he did have to shoe\w that he cared. so as thay sat there looking at each while. elliot Quickly leaned in and brush her lips and then planted one sweet kiss. Olivias mind rased what was he doing she knew this wasn't right and she knew she would have to pull away but in the moment he told her every thing. and that single kiss was a promis. Olivia pulled way and stared a him.
Olivia. what arew you doing.
elliot. I'm sorry please forgive me. I just.... well.... Olivia I think that you are beautiful and your kind and i think i might be the luckyest person in the world to be able to work with you. and I think that my fellings for you are already starting to become stronger then just partners but i know that this is wroung i care about my wife and cildern so understand I wont us to be parteners even become friends. but that kiss will be the only hting that i can give to you this way.
olivia nodded.
olivia, thank you elliot I belive that you are a strong man and i am glad that we are partners and as you said i hope we do bvecome friends.
they both stood and walked to the door they shook hand and olivia told him that she would she him. tomarrow and then he left.
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(the next day at the precint)
When elliot walked in olivia was seated at her desk and munch an jeffries where talking. munch signaled elliot to come over. so elliot set down some stuff on his desk and took off his coat. then he walked over and joined them.
Jeffries. so will she make it long in this unit?
elliot. yea, I think she'll fit right in.
elliot tuned and glansed at olivia.
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well thats the end let me know what you think!!!!!!
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When they reach Olivia's apartment they both went into
her living room and sat on her couch.they looked at each other for a while and didn't
say any thing. just thinking about what they might say and how it might change the way they
would work together. Elliodt was the one how brock the silence.
Elliot. So whats your mom like
olivia. A drunk I used to come home and she would be out. but usually it was beter when she was passed out.
Elliot. what do you mean
Olivia. well she would hit me hard and she never cared about me and whan she did she was drunk and was acting crazy.
elliot. What did you do
oliva. I gess i just told my self that it was all my falt if she hadn't have been raped she wouldn't have been stuck with me.( olivia stoped and started to cry)
Elliot. look olivia Its not your falt how cold it have been. (he lifted her chin with his right index finger holding her face close to his)
olivia.I'm sorry for crying.( she said pulling away and wiping her tears)
Elliot. Its alright
when olivia calms down she gose indsto the kitchin to get them each a cup of coffee
when she returns elliot has turned on the radio and its playing a song she dosn't reconize it but she knows its a love song.
olivia. Heres you coffe( she says as ahe hands him the white coffee mug)
elliot. thanks
olivia. so how many kids did you say you had
elliot. four, Moreen ,kathleen, elizabeth, and dicky
olivia.wow
elliot yea
elliot gets a bet closer and looks into her eyes they are beautiful a shade of brown
she stares back she really likes him he's carring and kind he knew how to make some one
see themself.but she new she would never be able to have him. so she tucked away her feelings
and hoped that there would be a day that she could tell him everything they way sdhe knew she loved him even though they had only just meet. similar thoughts ran through his mind. He saw this women this gorgous women. andhe knew that to be with her he would have to give up his life with his childern and his wife.But he couldn't maybe one day he could but not to day. To day he did have to shoe\w that he cared. so as thay sat there looking at each while. elliot Quickly leaned in and brush her lips and then planted one sweet kiss. Olivias mind rased what was he doing she knew this wasn't right and she knew she would have to pull away but in the moment he told her every thing. and that single kiss was a promis. Olivia pulled way and stared a him.
Olivia. what arew you doing.
elliot. I'm sorry please forgive me. I just.... well.... Olivia I think that you are beautiful and your kind and i think i might be the luckyest person in the world to be able to work with you. and I think that my fellings for you are already starting to become stronger then just partners but i know that this is wroung i care about my wife and cildern so understand I wont us to be parteners even become friends. but that kiss will be the only hting that i can give to you this way.
olivia nodded.
olivia, thank you elliot I belive that you are a strong man and i am glad that we are partners and as you said i hope we do bvecome friends.
they both stood and walked to the door they shook hand and olivia told him that she would she him. tomarrow and then he left.
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(the next day at the precint)
When elliot walked in olivia was seated at her desk and munch an jeffries where talking. munch signaled elliot to come over. so elliot set down some stuff on his desk and took off his coat. then he walked over and joined them.
Jeffries. so will she make it long in this unit?
elliot. yea, I think she'll fit right in.
elliot tuned and glansed at olivia.
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well thats the end let me know what you think!!!!!!
love it post more soon!!!
Hi Bubba here, please continue with it. You're doing a good job.
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