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Chapter 5 Part 5.

Don stands behind the twins. "Well go over and say hi to your mommy." Don tells them. Kendra runs over to
Olivia, and wraps her little arms around her mommies neck. "I missed you mommy." Kendra tells her. With tears
running down her face, Olivia tells Kendra, "that she also missed her so much." Kayla stands on the other side
of the room. Don looks at her. "Aren't you going to go and say hi to your mommy?" Cragen asks her. Kayla
looks over at Olivia, and runs out of the room. Don looks over at Olivia and Kendra. "I will go and see
what is going on." Cragen tells her. "Thanks uncle Don." Olivia responds back. Don steps out into the
hallway. He sees Kayla sitting on the floor, with her head buried in her knees. Don kneels down on the floor
next to Kayla. "Hey there, what's bugging you?" Kayla looks up at her great uncle. "That's not my mommy
in there. Daddy told me, that my mommy died. He even took all the pictures out of the house of mommy. I
don't know her." Kayla tells her uncle. Cragen gets up, and starts walking away from Kayla. He gets half
way down the hall, turns around, and hits the wall. "Damn him anyways." Cragen yells. He goes back over to
Kayla. He sits down on the floor by Kayla. "Kayla, we need to talk." Don tells the little girl. Kayla with
her big round brown eyes, looks at her uncle. "What do we neeed to talk about?" She asks. "Kayla your daddy
told you a big fib. Your mommy wasn't dead. Your daddy said that, because your mommy and daddy couldn't live
with each other any more. Your mommy had to move out, and a judge told you that you had to live with daddy."
Cragen tells the little girl. Kayla starts to cry. "I didn't want my mommy to go away. I am sorry if I did
something wrong, to make my mommy leave." Kayla tells her uncle. "You did nothing wrong. None of this is
your fault, and it's not Kendras or your mothers fault." Cragen tells Kayla. Kayla stands up. "I am ready
to go and see my mommy now." Kayla tells Cragen. Cragen opens the door to the room once more. Kayla slowly
goes in. She walks over to Olivia, puts her arms around her mother. "Hello mommy." Kayla tells her. "Hello
baby angel." Olivia tells her daughter, as the two cry.

Fin, and Melinda excuse themselves from the room. "I think Olivia needs time with her daughters." Melinda
tells everyone. Fin helps Melinda back to her room. After Fin and Melinda leave the room. Cragen looks at
Elliot. "I need to get back to the 1-6. Could you look after the twins for me, until you come back to the
office tonight?" Cragen asks Elliot. "Yeah, sure." Elliot tells Cragen. Cragen tells the twins that he will
see them later on. Don goes over, and gives Olivia a hug. "Take care. Don't worry, your job will be there,
when you feel up to it." Cragen tells her. "Thank you for finding my precious angels." Olivia tells her
uncle. "I am not the only one you should thank. Elliot, Fin, and John all had a part in finding Kayla, and
Kendra for you." Don tells her. Olivia turns her head, and faces Elliot. "Thank you so much, she tells him."
Elliot stands there smiling at the woman he loves.
Kathleen looks at everybody disgusted. "I hate to break up the little Hallmark moment, but I am getting
hungry. I haven't had anything to eat since I left London." Kathleen tells her father. Elliot looks at his
daughter. "How dare you talk like that. Can't you be a little more patient?" Elliot tells his daughter.
Kathleen looks over at her dad. "I shouldn't have come here to live. I didn't know that I was going to have
to share my dad with another woman, and her two daughters." Kathleen yells at her father, as she storms out
of the room. Elliot looks over at Olivia. "I am so sorry about that. Kayla and Kendra did not need to hear
that." Elliot tells her. Olivia wipes a tear from her eye. "No worries, she has every right to be mad. She
thinks that I am taking her father away from her." Olivia tells him. Elliot goes to the door, and looks out.
"I will be back. Are you going to be ok here with the twins?" Elliot asks Olivia. "Yeah I will be ok, and
besides I have Fin next door." Olivia tells Elliot, as he walks out the door, in search of Kathleen.
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George and Casey have a romantic evening together. Casey looks at her watch. "Damn, I need to get ready
for court tomorrow." She tells George, as the paper work from Deans case sits on the table. "He is going to
be arraigned tomorrow morning at 10 am." Casey tells George. George helps Casey from the couch. She thinks
over and over in her mind. "Left leg straight out, standing up first on the good leg." Casey repeats to
herself, as George helps her stand up, and steady herself with the walker. Casey walks to the kitchen table,
sits down, and takes the report from the envelope. "Oh sheesh, Dean's lawyer is Trevor Langen." Casey tells
herself. George over hearing Casey, comes over to her. "What is going on?" George asks Casey, as he begins
to rub her shoulders. "Trevor Langen is trying this case, and he will defintely try for a insanity defense."
Casey tells George. As Casey reads the reports from the both Melinda and Olivia, the police, and the hospital.
The more and more angier she becomes. Casey finally looks at the clock, it is 2 in the morning. Casey
says good night to George, and makes her way down to the bedroom. As Casey limps away, George thinks
to himself. "Why was I so stupid in letting you go the first time."
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Elliot searches for Kathleen all over the hospital. He finally goes outside and searches the grounds for her.
Kathleen is nowhere to be found. He takes the cell phone from his pocket, and decides to call the house. He
then realizes that Kathleen would not have made it to his house so quickly. He puts the cell phone in his
pocket. Just as he looks up, he sees Kathleen walking across the grassy area. "Kathleen," Elliot yells to
her. "What is it now dad. Do you really expect me to go back up there." Kathleen tells her dad. "I don't
know what has gotten into you young lady, but you will go back up to Olivia's room, and apologize to both
Olivia and her girls." Elliot tells his daughter. Kathleen follows her father back up to the room. Elliot
opens the door. The twins are telling their mommy about their home in Oregon. Kayla looks up at Olivia.
"Now that you are all better, and when daddy gets better, then we can all go home." Kayla tells Olivia.
Olivia looks over at Elliot, there are tears in her eyes. Elliot looks at the two girls. "Kayla, Kendra, it's
time to head back to see your uncle Don. Your mommy needs to get her sleep now. Don't worry, you will have
plenty of time to see her tomorrow. Mommy is coming home tomorrow." Elliot tells the girls. Kayla and
Kendra give Olivia a hug and a kiss good night. Kathleen goes over to Olivia and somewhat apologizes for her
attitude. "That's ok, I just hope we can become good friends." Olivia tells her. Kathleen walks out of the
room with her dad and the twins.

After Elliot helps the twins get buckled into the car, he pulls out onto the highway. "What do we call you?"
Kendra asks Elliot. "Well you can call me Elliot." He tells the twins. Kayla looks at Elliot, "why is my
daddy in jail?" I love my daddy, and I don't want to see him in jail." Kayla tells Elliot. Elliot not knowing
what to say. Stares straight ahead, and thinks to himself. "How do I tell a five year old, who loves her
father so much, that he hurt her mommy." Elliot tells the little girl, that her daddy did some stuff that
was wrong, and was being punished for it. Kendra looks up at Elliot, "Oh you mean like when Kayla and I get
into trouble, and we get a spanking." Kayla gets a look of fright on her face. "Sssshhhh, Kendra. We are not
suppose to talk about our spankings, or daddy will call the bad people again." Kayla tells Kendra.
Elliot stops the car. "Kayla what do you mean your spankings, and bad people?" Elliot asks her. Kayla starts
to cry. "I'm a good girl, please don't call the bad people again. When daddy thinks we are being bad, he calls
the bad people. This man comes over, and he does bad things to us." Kayla tells Elliot. "What kind of things,
does this man do to you?" Questions Elliot. Kayla begins to cry again. Kendra finally speaks up. "The man,
touches us down there. He tells us that it feels good, and we would enjoy it. I don't like it, it hurts when
he touches us down there." Kendra tells Elliot. Elliot takes the twins into his arms, and tells them, that
nobody will ever touch them ever again. Kathleen sits in the front seat staring at out the window.
Elliot pulls up to the 1-6, the girls have fallen asleep in the car. Kathleen helps Elliot carry the girls
inside. Elliot puts the girls down on the cots in the cribs. He looks at Kathleen. "I have some business
to take care of, why don't you go and say hello to Munch, he will be glad to see you." Elliot tells his
daughter. After Kathleen leaves, Elliot makes his way to the holding cells. He sees Dean laying down on
the cot. He goes in, and kicks the cot. "Hey wake up, you piece of trash." Elliot yells at Dean. Dean wakes
up, and sees Elliot standing there. "Why if it isn't the detective that is screwing my wife." Dean tells
him. Elliot picks Dean up, and punches him dead in the stomach. "That is for hurting Olivia. He then kicks
him in the stomach. "That is for hurting Melinda Warner." Elliot tells Dean, as he starts coughing. Elliot
picks him up, and shoves him aganist the wall. "You are one sick bastard, you have to go and hire people
to molest your daughters. What the hell kind of father are you?" Elliot yells at Dean.

Hearing the noise coming from the holding cells. Cragen and Munch come running in time to see Elliot laying
in on Dean. "Elliot what the hell are you doing?" Cragen yells at Elliot, as John pries Elliot's hands away
from Dean's throat. "Elliot calm down. We don't come in here and start pounding on the prisoners." Cragen tells
him. "Do you know what this scum of the earth does?" Elliot asks Cragen. "No besides what he did to Olivia and
Melinda, his record is clean." Cragen tells him. "Ask your nieces what he does. If they are bad, he calls
another man in to the house. This other man, molestes your nieces." Elliot yells at Cragen.

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