CHAPTER 1
IT WAS ONE HOT SUMMER EVENING IN THE SQUAD ROOM EVERYBODY WAS SITTING AROUND DOING PAPER WORK WHE CRAGEN WALKED IN.
CRAGEN; ANY LEADS ON THE CASE.
LAKE; NO BUT WE HAVE A SUSPECT AND HE'S NOT TALKING.
CRAGEN; WELL PUSH HIM INTIL HE DOES.
THE CAPTIN LEAVES.
FIN; I NOT GOING TO SIT THERE AND QUESTION HIM JUST TO GET THE SAME ANSWER.
MUNCH; WELL WHO CARES.
LAKE; THE CAPTIN
MUNCH; [LOOKING AT LAKE] WHO ASKED YOU.
FIN; LETS GO OUT FOR SOMETHING TO EAT.
LAKE; CAPTIN TOLD US TO QUESTION THE SUSPECT.
FIN; WELL WE WILL DO THAT WHEN WE COME BACK.
ELLIOT; YALL GO AHEAD I WILL STAY HEAR AND CATCH UP ON MY PAPER WORK.
OLIVIA; ME TOO.
THE GUYS LEFT.
OLIVIA; SO EL HOW ARE THINGS WITH YOU AND KATHY.
ELLIOT; GOOD
OLIVIA; CAN'T BE
ELLIOT; WHY NOT
LIV; BAECAUSE YOU HAVE HER PICTURE DOWN ON YOU DESK
EL; [HE RAISED HIS VOICE] SO MAYBE I AM JUST TIRED OF LOOKING AT HER
LIV; EL TAKE IT EASY IT WAS JUST A QUESTION DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL
THERE WAS A PAUSE
EL; SHE LEFT ME
LIV; WHAT WHY
EL; SHE SAID I WAS NEVER HOME AND WHEN I WAS I NEVER PAYED ANY ATTENSION TO HER
LIV; IS THAT TRUE
EL; MAYBE, I DON'T KNOW
LIV; THINKING TO HER SELF [IT'S OK EL I AM HERE YOU CAN ALWAYS LEAN ON ME, OMG HE LOOKS SO SEXY WHEN HE IS MAD HIS MUSLES ARE ALL NICE AND TIGHT IT LOOKS LIKE HE NEED A RUB DOWN]
EL; ARE YOU LISTENING
LIV; UMMMMM YUP I AM, MAYBE YOU WERE [SHE GOT UP AND WENT AND STOOD BEHIND ELLIOT] EL MAYBE YOU JUST NEEDS TO RELAX [ SHE STARTED RUBBING HIS SHOULDRS AND WORKED HER HANDS DOWN HIS CHEST.
EL; MAYBE I DO [ OH MY GOD I HOPE SHE GOSES A LITTLE BIT LOWER.
SO YOU GUYS TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
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drats, those cliffhangers.! 
i say UPDATE.!
i LOVE it.!
you shall write more.
i say UPDATE.!
i LOVE it.!
you shall write more.
SVUFANEO IS SO RIGHT I HATE THOSE CLIFFHANGERS!!!
Sounds good. More please
PART OF CHAPTER 1
LIV; THINKING TO HER SELF [I THINK HE LIKES IT]
EL; LIV, LIV, OLIVIA WAKE UP
LIV; WHAT HUH WHAT TIME IS IT
EL; IT'S 8:00PM
LIV; DID YALL GET ANY THING ON THE CASE
EL; NO, BUT CRAGEN TOLD US TO GO HOME AND HE WILL CALL IF HE NEEDS US, SO GET UP
LIV; OK
EL; WAHT WERE YOU DREAMING ABOUT
LIV; WHAT DO YOU MEAN
EL; I MEAN YOU WERE ALL SMILELY AND HAPPY
LIV; I WILL YELL YOU LATER
SO WHAT YOU THINK SORRY I CAN'T WRITE MORE BUT I WILL LATER
EL; LIV, LIV, OLIVIA WAKE UP
LIV; WHAT HUH WHAT TIME IS IT
EL; IT'S 8:00PM
LIV; DID YALL GET ANY THING ON THE CASE
EL; NO, BUT CRAGEN TOLD US TO GO HOME AND HE WILL CALL IF HE NEEDS US, SO GET UP
LIV; OK
EL; WAHT WERE YOU DREAMING ABOUT
LIV; WHAT DO YOU MEAN
EL; I MEAN YOU WERE ALL SMILELY AND HAPPY
LIV; I WILL YELL YOU LATER
SO WHAT YOU THINK SORRY I CAN'T WRITE MORE BUT I WILL LATER
OMG I CANT BELIEVE I GOT ALL EXCITED FOR IT TO TURN OUT TO BE A DREAM YOU TRICKED ME...YOUR STORY IS GONNA INTERESTING TO READ!!!
CHAPTER 2
EL; LIV YOU WANT A RIDE HOME
LIV; SURE I MEAN IF YOU DON'T MINE
EL; NO NOT AT ALL
THEY GOT THERE THINGS ANH HEADED TO ELLIOTS CAR
THE RIDE WAS QUITE INTIL
EL; SO ARE YOU GOING TO TELL ME WHAT YOU WERE DREAMING ABOUT
LIV; TO MAKE A LONG STORY SHORT NOTHING
EL; CAN'T BE NOTHING YOU WERE HAPPY
LIV; NO I WASN'T
EL; LIV YOUR BLUSHING
OLIVIA SMILED, ELLIOT SAW AND HE SMILED TOO THEY PULLED UP TO THE FRONT OF OLIVIA'S APARTMENT
LIV; WANT TO COME IN
EL; SURE
THEY GOT OUT AND WALKED IN, THEY WAITED FOR THE ELEAVATOR TO COME, THEY GOT IN, GOT OFF ON THE 8TH FLOOR AND WENT TO HER APARTMENT.
EL; WOW, IT'S CHANGED SINCE THE LAST TIME I WAS HERE
LIV; YUP IT HAS BEEN A WHILE
LIV WALKED IN THE KITCHEN
LIV; YELLED TO ELLIOT, DO YOU WANT A SODA
EL; YELLED BACK, YUP
LIV WALKED BACK IN THE LIVING ROOM AND SAT DOWN ON THE SOFA NEXT TO ELLIOT
EL; THANKS FOR THE SODA
LIV; YOUR WELCOME, SO WHAT ARE YOU WATCHING
EL; I WAS WAITING FO RYOU TO GET BACK SO WE CAN FIND SOMETHING TOGETHER
LIV; OK
THEY SAT ON THE SOFA TRYING TO FIND SOMETHING TO WATCH, THEY STOP ON HBO THE SECRET GARDEN WAS ON AND OLIVIA SAID I LOVE THIS MOVIE, IT JUST GOT TO A SAD PART IN THE MOVIE AND OLIVIA STARTED TO CRY, ELLIOT MOVED OVER AND HUGGED HER, SHE LAYED HER HEAD ON HIS CHEST, THEN SHE LOOKED UP AT HIM HE SAW AND LOOKED DOWN AT HER THEN SHE SAT UP A LITTLE, STAREING EACH OTHER IN THE EYES ELLIOT LEANED IN FOR THE KISS, IT WAS SLOW AND LONG THEY BOTH INJOYED IT VERY MUCH. ELLIOT STARTED TO MOVE HIS HAND DOWN THE SIDE OF HER WASIT, HE THEN LAYED HER BACK ON THE SOFA HE GOT IN THE MIDDLE OF HER LEGS WHILE HE STILLED CONTIUED TO KISS HER, SHE ROLLED OVER AND GOT ON TOP STILL KISSING HE RAN HIS HAND DOWN HER BACK AND GRAB HER BUTT SHE CAME UP AND SAID WHAT ARE YOU DOING HAVING FUN AND BEFORE SHE COULD SAY SOMETHING HE KISSED HER. THEN THERE PHONES RANG.
SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND I WILL RIGHT MORE LATER.
EL; LIV YOU WANT A RIDE HOME
LIV; SURE I MEAN IF YOU DON'T MINE
EL; NO NOT AT ALL
THEY GOT THERE THINGS ANH HEADED TO ELLIOTS CAR
THE RIDE WAS QUITE INTIL
EL; SO ARE YOU GOING TO TELL ME WHAT YOU WERE DREAMING ABOUT
LIV; TO MAKE A LONG STORY SHORT NOTHING
EL; CAN'T BE NOTHING YOU WERE HAPPY
LIV; NO I WASN'T
EL; LIV YOUR BLUSHING
OLIVIA SMILED, ELLIOT SAW AND HE SMILED TOO THEY PULLED UP TO THE FRONT OF OLIVIA'S APARTMENT
LIV; WANT TO COME IN
EL; SURE
THEY GOT OUT AND WALKED IN, THEY WAITED FOR THE ELEAVATOR TO COME, THEY GOT IN, GOT OFF ON THE 8TH FLOOR AND WENT TO HER APARTMENT.
EL; WOW, IT'S CHANGED SINCE THE LAST TIME I WAS HERE
LIV; YUP IT HAS BEEN A WHILE
LIV WALKED IN THE KITCHEN
LIV; YELLED TO ELLIOT, DO YOU WANT A SODA
EL; YELLED BACK, YUP
LIV WALKED BACK IN THE LIVING ROOM AND SAT DOWN ON THE SOFA NEXT TO ELLIOT
EL; THANKS FOR THE SODA
LIV; YOUR WELCOME, SO WHAT ARE YOU WATCHING
EL; I WAS WAITING FO RYOU TO GET BACK SO WE CAN FIND SOMETHING TOGETHER
LIV; OK
THEY SAT ON THE SOFA TRYING TO FIND SOMETHING TO WATCH, THEY STOP ON HBO THE SECRET GARDEN WAS ON AND OLIVIA SAID I LOVE THIS MOVIE, IT JUST GOT TO A SAD PART IN THE MOVIE AND OLIVIA STARTED TO CRY, ELLIOT MOVED OVER AND HUGGED HER, SHE LAYED HER HEAD ON HIS CHEST, THEN SHE LOOKED UP AT HIM HE SAW AND LOOKED DOWN AT HER THEN SHE SAT UP A LITTLE, STAREING EACH OTHER IN THE EYES ELLIOT LEANED IN FOR THE KISS, IT WAS SLOW AND LONG THEY BOTH INJOYED IT VERY MUCH. ELLIOT STARTED TO MOVE HIS HAND DOWN THE SIDE OF HER WASIT, HE THEN LAYED HER BACK ON THE SOFA HE GOT IN THE MIDDLE OF HER LEGS WHILE HE STILLED CONTIUED TO KISS HER, SHE ROLLED OVER AND GOT ON TOP STILL KISSING HE RAN HIS HAND DOWN HER BACK AND GRAB HER BUTT SHE CAME UP AND SAID WHAT ARE YOU DOING HAVING FUN AND BEFORE SHE COULD SAY SOMETHING HE KISSED HER. THEN THERE PHONES RANG.
SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND I WILL RIGHT MORE LATER.
AWESOME... THAT IS ALL I CAN SAY I LOVE IT MORE PWEEZ!!!
Bloody phones! Argh update soon!
nice job
SORRY GUYS I AM AT SCHOOL KNOW I WOULD TRY TO WRITE MORE ASAP...
lol! the board is blocked at my school! keep going!
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