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I'M BACK!!!!!!!!!! I am soooo sorry it has taken me six days to post more... I've been busy with some finals! UGH!!! Well, here's part 2 of chapter four... you guys know what to do after you read...leave me your thoughts please! They are always so pleasent and filled with sun shine!!!
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Chapter 4 Part 2

Melinda heard the front door slam, and slowly tried to pick herself up. She groaned at the movement of her aching and sore body, but was able to pull herself to the wall pulling her legs up to her chest and crying. How could she be so vulnerable! She wiped her tears and tried to get up.



Her motions were measured and slow. Making her way to the bathroom, she turned on the hot water pouring some salt into it to help with the bruising, she got into the tub. She know what had just happened she had just lost all dignity she had, to a man, whom resembled what she saw at work day in and day out…



She sat there, thinking, and crying, if she said anything to anybody, she knew they wouldn't believe her, and not only that, but he'd threatened to kill her if she did. Just then, the phone rang. She brought it in with her, before.



She picked up and weakly said "Hello?"



"Hey Mel! How are you?" Casey exclaimed happily.



"I'm ok, what's up?" she said playing with the soap bubbles.



"Well, Alex and I were going to dinner, and since Liv is spending the night with El's kids, and you don't have Tara I thought you'd like to go with us." Casey replied hoping she'd say yes.



"I don't know Case, I mean I-" Melinda was cut off by Casey.



"Listen, when was the last time we had a girl's night out?" Casey paused for a sec then exclaimed startling Mel a bit. "EXACTLY! You're going and that's final! Be ready in an hour. Wear something sexy!" and with that, Casey hung up without letting Melinda protest with her.



Melinda hung up and said to herself "Ugh! Casey!!! I'm gonna kill you one of these days!"



She quickly finished her shower and went to get dressed. Melinda looked in the mirror of her bedroom dresser to see just how bad the bruising around her neck and cheekbone looked, and to see what kind of lie she'd tell them this time around. Melinda sighed and grabbed a knee-length black dress that had long sleeves which would be perfect for the bruising on her arms. After getting dressed, she pulled out black boots that were knee length as well, and so far she had covered almost all of the bruises.



Just as she was getting ready to get a shawl on, Casey sends her a text saying 'U better b getting ready! We'll b there to pick u up in 10 ~C.D.N.' It made Melinda smile and start doing her make up. When she felt her cheekbone, she was very happy to find that it wasn't broken or fractured, which also meant that John sometimes really did hit like a girl!



She covered the purple bash as much as she could and applied some blush to make it look like cosmetics. Right then, Casey rang the door bell, but didn't bother waiting for Melinda to answer the door and just let herself in. "Melinda, if you're not ready, I'm going to personally-"



Melinda came out ready and looking very pretty,-compared to after the beating- "You'll personally what Casey? I'm ready, and hi, how are you?"



Casey smirked and said " Hey Mel!" she gave her a kiss on her right cheek and the continued "Let's get the hell outta here!"



Melinda laughed and followed Casey out. She had a feeling tonight was going to be filled with questions, hopefully not!
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Well that's all, Rather short, I know! Sorry! Ok, so now you guys get to choose. Would you like me to go on to how the dinner went as Part 3 of Chapter 4, or fast forward to Monday morning? Won't be updating till you guys tell me what you want... ok? Ttyl!!

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Hello!!!! Ok, so now you guys get to choose. Would you like me to go on to how the dinner went as Part 3 of Chapter 4, or fast forward to Monday morning? Won't be updating till you guys tell me what you want... ok? Ttyl!!

Alrighty then... I guess I'll be fasting forward to Monday morning... Next update should be between tonight and tomorrow afternoon..okie dok?

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Hey guys! I'm back! Man, it's been a while probably more than a month since I updated this story! I feel guilty now.. I'll update now... Let me just get it typed up! Sorry about the wait guys! School was getting in the way... but not anymore!

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Hey guys! So I felt a bit guilty for not updating in such a long time, I've been REALLY BUSY!! But, I'll be around more now… I decided to give you guys a bit of where I left off so that you don't have to be going back and forth very confused. So tell me your thoughts on what you think about this! Ok? ENJOY!



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Melinda heard the front door slam, and slowly tried to pick herself up. She groaned at the movement of her aching and sore body, but was able to pull herself to the wall pulling her legs up to her chest and crying. How could she be so vulnerable! She wiped her tears and tried to get up.



Her motions were measured and slow. Making her way to the bathroom, she turned on the hot water pouring some salt into it to help with the bruising, she got into the tub. She know what had just happened she had just lost all dignity she had, to a man, whom resembled what she saw at work day in and day out…



She sat there, thinking, and crying, if she said anything to anybody, she knew they wouldn't believe her, and not only that, but he'd threatened to kill her if she did. Just then, the phone rang. She brought it in with her, before.



She picked up and weakly said "Hello?"



"Hey Mel! How are you?" Casey exclaimed happily.



"I'm ok, what's up?" she said playing with the soap bubbles.



"Well, Alex and I were going to dinner, and since Liv is spending the night with El's kids, and you don't have Tara I thought you'd like to go with us." Casey replied hoping she'd say yes.



"I don't know Case, I mean I-" Melinda was cut off by Casey.



"Listen, when was the last time we had a girl's night out?" Casey paused for a sec then exclaimed startling Mel a bit. "EXACTLY! You're going and that's final! Be ready in an hour. Wear something sexy!" and with that, Casey hung up without letting Melinda protest with her.



Melinda hung up and said to herself "Ugh! Casey!!! I'm gonna kill you one of these days!"



She quickly finished her shower and went to get dressed. Melinda looked in the mirror of her bedroom dresser to see just how bad the bruising around her neck and cheekbone looked, and to see what kind of lie she'd tell them this time around. Melinda sighed and grabbed a knee-length black dress that had long sleeves which would be perfect for the bruising on her arms. After getting dressed, she pulled out black boots that were knee length as well, and so far she had covered almost all of the bruises.



Just as she was getting ready to get a shawl on, Casey sends her a text saying 'U better b getting ready! We'll b there to pick u up in 10 ~C.D.N.' It made Melinda smile and start doing her make up. When she felt her cheekbone, she was very happy to find that it wasn't broken or fractured, which also meant that John sometimes really did hit like a girl!



She covered the purple bash as much as she could and applied some blush to make it look like cosmetics. Right then, Casey rang the door bell, but didn't bother waiting for Melinda to answer the door and just let herself in. "Melinda, if you're not ready, I'm going to personally-"



Melinda came out ready and looking very pretty,-compared to before the beating- "You'll personally what Casey? I'm ready, and hi, how are you?"



Casey smirked and said "Hey Mel!" she gave her a kiss on her right cheek and the continued "Let's get the hell outta here!"



Melinda laughed and followed Casey out. She had a feeling tonight was going to be filled with questions, hopefully not!

Just as Melinda had expected, that night was filled with many questions but, she was luckily able to answer them with the best lie she could muster. Aside from he fact that she knew, that they knew, that she was lying.



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Chapter 5 Part 1



Monday morning- 8:45am




Olivia strode into work in a lavender and pale yellow baby doll top, and dark denim jeans with her ankle-high black boots, and her chestnut hair down, just a bit past her shoulders. She was obviously walking in late, since she was supposed to be there by 7:30am but, oh well!



She came in, trying hard not move her legs too much, and Munch, who was turned to look at her after he heard someone coming in, stared at her out of pure bewilderment, and Olivia just smiled at him.



Munch asked: "Liv, why are you walking like that?" he asked from his place where Olivia used to sit before she and Elliot became an item.



Olivia walked over to her desk in front of her new partner Fin, and turned around. Eli, was behind her legs hiding so that no one would see him.



Munch laughed and said: "Hey Eli, what you doing hiding behind Liv?"



Eli came out from between Olivia's legs, and Olivia went to sit at her desk, she felt so extremely tired.



Eli: "First of all, her name is Mommy! Second, shhh!!! You supposed to see me!!"



John laughed and ruffled his cheekbone-long, dirty blonde hair, and asked Olivia: "You okay, Liv?"



Olivia nodded: "Yeah, I'm fine, where's Elliot?"



"He went out with Fin, on call. Why do you need him?" Munch asked as his phone rang.



"Nope, I just wanted to know."



As the sentence left her mouth, in came Fin, with their suspect in handcuffs taking him into interrogation, and was right behind him with a smirk that Olivia knew quite well. Eli jumped out from behind Olivia's chair and tried to "scare" his father, but he really didn't.



"Hey buddy! What are you doing here? Aren't you supposed to be in preschool?" Elliot asked as he picked up his four year old.



"You didn't sign my perr-mi-thion thlip (permission slip) for the twip (trip) to the farm, so I couldn't go!" Eli explained then crossed his tiny arms across his chest and looked at Elliot angrily



Elliot laughed "I'm sorry bud!"



Olivia laughed at the conversation between the two and stood up, wincing a bit. Elliot noticed and asked her if she was alright, she nodded and said that she was fine. She walked to the back of the squad room and entered to see the Captain and Fin looking at the suspect through the two way window.



"I'll go in, alone!" Olivia said and walked into the small gray, lifeless room.



The perp, Victor, looked ay her and had a smug smile on his face, thinking that he was most definitely going to get away with this rape, since it was a woman interrogating him. Goes to show how he obviously didn't know Olivia.



"Why'd you do it?" Olivia asked aggravated with this guy and it was only half away into the questioning.



Meanwhile, behind the glass, in the room still stood Captain Cragen and Detective Fin looking at the interrogation intently; when they heard someone enter the room, they turned around to see Elliot, finally there after playing with Eli for a few minutes. "Where's Olivia?" he asked after noticing that she wasn't there.

"Interrogating our perp…" they answered



"She's WHAT?! Why?! Couldn't one of you guys to that?!" Elliot exclaimed angrily.



"Do you have a problem with her job Stab-" Cragen was cut off by the sound of a table being turned over and a chair being thrown…..

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Hey guys! Well, here's Part 2 of Chapter 5.. I'll admit that it is very short, but please remember that this is just a little tease for what awaits for you guys either tonight or tomorrow! Hehehe! Please comment! They always make me so happy! And they brighten up my gloomy days..LOL! Enough of my Ramblings... ENJOY!!
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Chapter 5 Part 2



Just before Fin, Cragen, or Elliot could react, another chair was thrown through the two mirror, hitting Captain Cragen in the back of the head. Immediately, he lost consciousness and fell to the ground, as Fin went to aid him. Elliot without second thought as to what this psychopath was going to do went to enter the interrogation room.



Upon hearing the door open above Olivia's screams, telling Victor to stop and not do anything stupid, he grabbed Olivia's gun from its holster when she wasn't looking. Victor pulled her by her forearm to him and put her in a headlock.



He took the safety lock off her firearm and held the gun to her head, as tears were streaming down her face as she cried for help. She wasn't ready to die. Not now, she had a life inside of her that she needed to protect, that depended on her, and that she loved more than anything on this Earth. This was the scenario Elliot was greeted with, when he opened the door.



"DON'T MOVE OR I'LL KILL HER!!!!" Victor screamed, very close to Olivia's ear.



Elliot was as pale as a ghost, as he saw the love of his life at the edge of death. Olivia's legs became jelly, and she began to slip, only to have Victor tighten his grip around her neck, which was now cutting her air circulation.

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Chapter 5 Part 3 (only 2 more parts to this chapter to go!)

Munch and Chester heard the commotion going on in the interrogation room and they both quickly grabbed their guns and went to the back. "Chester, help Fin and the Captain, hurry! I'm gonna go see if I can stop this bastard from killing Liv!" Munch demanded after seeing the captain unconcious and Olivia on the verge of it.

John went on over to the other entrance of the interrogation room. Looking in, he saw that Victor had his back to Munch and Elliot had managed to get inside and was facing Victor and Munch, who hadn't even looked each other in the face yet. Noting the tight grip Victor had on Olivia's neck and hearing how breathing become more and more difficult for her, Munch just hoped that he'd be able to get her out of there alive.

Elliot began to speak to Victor to try and calm him down and make sure he didn't do anything stupid. Munch stepped in and quickly grabbed hold of Victor's neck and whispered in his ear "I suggest you let her go, if you don't want to die today."

After 15 minutes of hold her hostage, as if some miravle, he let her go and Olivia fell to the ground from how weak she felt. Just then, two uniformed officers ran in and put Victor under arrest, "Victor Padalecki, you are under arrest for assaulting a police officer and holding her hostage. You have the right to remain silent, you give up that right anything you say can, and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to an attorney, if you can not afford one, one will be appointed to you..." Officer Johnson said as he led Victor out of the interrogation room.

Elliot quickly ran to Olivia's side and held her, hoping "Olivia, baby, honey, please tell me you're alright baby, please!" He exclaimed frantically as he saw how frail and weak Olivia looked.

All color had left her face, she seemed breathless and dizzy, weak and and looked as if she were about to topple over. Munch called for two buses and made sure that they had gotten to memo to "HURRY UP!!!!!" He had screamed into his walkie-talkie

Elliot pulled Olivia up to his lap and put her head on his chest and began to swing back and forth. "Elli-El... What... ab-ab-out... Eli?" SHe asked with difficulty.

She was definently not going to leave behind her first baby! Elliot smiled, she always put others before herself, even in the worst of situations. Right when he went to respond, sirens were heard outside indicating that the ambulance was near. But for Olivia, that meant that it was time for her to take just a small nap. Her vision began to blur, her head was spinning, she was hearing Elliot telling her to hold on, but it sounded so faint, as if it wasn't even there. Her hand moved over to her flat stomach and she laid it there, just then, her eyes closed, and darkness began to overwhelm her.
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Well, that's all for now... I'll hopefully be able to update again in a few minutes... let me know what you think! Your comments always make me VERY happy, and and jump with glee!

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I'll update this afternoon, I can't now, because I need to go out in a few minutes... lol! PROMISE!!!

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Ok, I'm back! And yes, in my world it only has been a few minutes! LOL! Thank you to those who reviewed! Ok, on with the rest of this chapter! Oh, and by the way, I sped up Olivia's pregnancy, so right now she's like 3 months along, I just forgot to tell you guys that at the beginning of the chapter... and Cragen, the guys, nor Casey, and Mel know about the baby... Anyway! ENJOY!!
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Chapter 5 Part 3

Olivia's eyes fluttered open, but she closed them tightly again at the sight of the intruding, bright light. She heard quiet whispering from at least five other voices. Squinting, she opened her eyes again, and looked around though her vision was still a bit foggy because of her long nap.

Just then, Eli noticed that his mommy was awake, well in his eyes anyway, and launched himself to Olivia's bed screaming, "Mommy!!! You're awake!! And you're ok!!!" Eli was now sitting on her stomach, he then went over and grabbed Olivia's cheeks and munipulating her face said "Don't ever never, EVER scawe (scare) me like that again do you undoostand (understand) me Olivia Benson?"

Olivia smiled at him and nodded. Those had be her exact same words she had tole Eli when she took him to the park one afternoon and he just completely disappeared. Olivia almost had a heart attack, she was calling him and calling him and he wouldn't answer, and then she just began crying frantically thinking that someone had kidnapped him or done something bad to him. Then Eli had just decided that he didn't want to play hide and seek anymore and popped out from behind a bush. She was so relieved that she had found him, but angry that he had left her side in the first place.
"I wub you mommy" he said looking her with beautiful, crisp, aqua blue eyes that were filled with sincerity.

"I love you too baby!" Olivia rasped coughing a bit in the process. Her throat felt dry, as if she hadn't drank anything in ages, and felt very thirsty.

Looking around the room, Olivia realized that Eli was the only one there, so where were the others whom owned those voices she had heard earlier?

"Eli honey, come lay here next to mommy, your squishing the baby," she said, Eli laughed and laid next to Olivia, his thumb in his mouth, and his head on her chest, Olivia then asked "Where's everyone else?"

Eli took his thumb out and replied "daddy in the bathroom, Mo, Katie, Lizzie, and Dickie in cafferteria (cafeteria) getting me a cookie... I hopes!"

She chuckled a bit and heard the bathroom door open and reveal a very tired and worried Elliot. He looked at Olivia and was quickly relieved "Liv baby! You're alright! How you feeling? You ok? Maybe I should call a nurse, or...or... or.. a doctor? Are you sure you're ok?"

"Elliot, I'm fine; just a bit thirsty... can you give me some water?"

Without saying anything, Elliot grabbed a plastic cup of water that had a straw in it to make it easier for her to drink it. She tried to sit up completely, but she felt so weak that had to lay back down and just let Elliot give her the water. After she drank, she asked Elliot "What did the doctors say? When can I get the hell out of here?"

Elliot replied "The doctors said that you were fine, just had to keep the stress level down to a minimum. And you should be able to leave by tomorrow afternoon, if everything goes well."

And Elliot was just awaiting the next question she asked, it's like they were mind reading again "And the baby?"

The look on Elliot's face was one Olivia couldn't read, and there were very few looks from Elliot that she couldn't read...
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Ugh!!! Ok, I am officially very mad!! My pc totally just deleted the chapter I had written!! Grr!!! Luckily it was written on paper first! But I was just about ready to post it! Well, I'm now going to go and rewrite it... be back in a jiffy!

Ok, so here we go again... My pc went totally stupid on me and DELETED the entire part that I already had written! Grr!! Well, I am over that... but I am still a bit mad! It was just about to be posted! Well, I'm still not sure whether or not I live on Earth... you see, Everything here is PURPLE! YAY!!! lol! And 15 minutes really is 900 seconds? COOL!!! Well here we go again.. ENJOY!
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Chapter 5 Part 4

Elliot grabbed hold of Olivia's hand and looked at her Her dark chocolate, brown eye were filled with fear, sadness but mostly worry. But he had to tell her what happened no matter how sad it may seem.

He squeezed her hand light and said to her "Sweetie, when they brought you in, they did an ultrasound to see and make sure that the baby was ok, but when they did it, the doctor didn't exactly find A baby." Olivia looked at him and then tears began to run down her cheeks, and suddenly after understanding she began sobbing, thinking that she had just lost her baby.

Little Eli looked up and his mommy and put his tiny arms around waist and growing belly and hugged her tightly, trying to to comfort her. "It's okay mommy! It's okay, I positove (posititve) the UPS peoples can brung (bring) you anuder (another) baby! Don't cry! Pwease!"

Elliot smiled at how Eli would try and comfort someone at the age that he was at. He then said to his lover "Livy, honey, don't cry..--"

Olivia cut him off angrily "Elliot!! How am I not supposed to cry? I just lost my child and I don't even know how or why!!"

Elliot didn't interupt her ramblings, and just said quietly "You didn't loose one, you just gained one."

Olivia stopped and looked at him wth tear-stained eyes, stunned "Wh-what?"

"Twins" he said with a wide grin.

"Oh my god! Twins!!" Olivia said happily with tears of joy now falling from her eyes. But then sudden she turned to Elliot angrily "Elliot Christopher Stabler! You almost gave me a heart attack!" she said and jokingly hit his arm.

"I'm sorry baby. Do you forgive me?" Elliot said with a pout.

"I don't know... What do you think Eli?"

Eli nodded quietly and Elliot said to his currently smallest child "Thank you. Now Eli cover your eyes, I'm gonna give your mommy a kiss."

Eli giggled and covered his eyes with his tiny hands, seperating his fingers, so that her can see just a little bit. Elliot Leaned into Olivia and planted a soft, gentle kiss on her lips, then they whispered 'I love you's ' to each other and let go.

Just as they let go, they heard someone from the entrance of the room say playfully "Then you ask where babies come from?"
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Well, That's all I'm giving you guys...WHta'd you think? Can oyou guys guess who was at the entrance? Hehehe!! Let me know what you think, and if I get into a better mood, I'll update again tonight... I hope!

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I want to know what will happen next, twin girls or boys or mix?

I hope my pc is more coopertive too! LOL!

I'll be able to update today... hopefully!

You know, I'm not too sure myself, as to what the babies will be... what about you guys?

I don't mind, but...
two girls would be great and it is always nice
two boys would be great as it is always nice
a mix would be great as she could be a mother of a boy and a girl....
what....I did not help you?

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Where's the rest? I'm dying to know what happens! Pleass up date!!!!!! SOON

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Ok, I shall be updating in a little while... I just gotta go update Little Miracle, then this one.. okie dok? AWESOME! Be right back!

Ummm... what happen to be right back, I'm dyin over here!

OH NO!!!! Don't die PLEASE!!!! I'll be back very soon... just after...*yawn*... I take a little... *yawn*... nap.... *goes to sleep*

Woh wait what is this sleeping stuff goin on while I'm dyin to know what happens! Update im goin dye! I see a bright light, It's comming for me......

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Elliot's, Olivia's and Eli's heads all spun around to see Maureen at the door. Eli began to jump up and down, like a hyperactive rubberball. He stumbled off the high hospital bed and ran in full-speed to his older sister and said hyperly "Cookie! COOKIE!!! COOKIE!!!COOKIE!!!!COOKIE!!!!!!"

Maureen reached the bag containing the cookie higher than Eli can reach, and he began to jump up and down for it. "Down boy!" Maureen joked, laughing.

Eli stopped and Maureen patted his head "Good boy!" and handed him his chocolate chip cookie.

Elliot laughed at the scenerio, and Olivia chuckled "Isn't he hyper as it is?"

Maureen waved her hand in the air dismissing the thought and said "It's sugar free, won't have too much affect on him."

"If you say so... How are you?" Olivia asked.

"Shouldn't I be asking you that?" Maureen asked and gave Olivia a hug, repeating the same actions with her father.

Elliot got up stating that he had to pick up a phone call. They didn't pay much attetion to that and continued to talk for the rest of the night. And as for Eli... turns out that the cookie, WASN'T sugar free!!!! OH poor Liv and El. Little Eli, began vibrating after that cookie, and looked as if he were a rocket ship about to take off in hyper-speed!!!!

And they lived happily ever after... The End!
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Meanwhile, outside in the hall, Elliot picks up his cell phone but not before reading the caller ID which said: Unknown Caller.

Picking up, he heard a VERY seductive voice say "Why hello detective?"

"Oh hey," Elliot responded instantly recognizing the woman's voice.

"I heard your dear Olivia was in the hospital... poor thing..." The woman on the other line laughed.

"Uh... yea she is... Listen what do you want?!" he asked getting a bit aggravated by the woman.

"Oh nothing... Jus thought I'd pay her a visit at the hospital to make Livvy feel better," she responded.

"Listen, if you dare to show up here, I'll--"

She cut him off "Oh relax Elliot, I jus wanna have some...fun..."

"No, not here... Not now... and definitely NOT with Olivia!!!!" Elliot said... but by the time he was done speaking to her, the dead line tone was heard on the other line.

He slammed his phone shut out of pure frustration. He walked over and stood at the entrance of Olivia's hospitaal room and looked at her. She had Eli in her arms who looked just about ready to knock out, and she was talking to Maureen and laughing and all. How was he suppose to tell them about this. He sighed and entered the bedroom.
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Well, that's all... what'd you think?? Let me know... hoped you liked it!!! hehehe!

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PLEASE keep going!

I have gotten so obsessed. I wanna know how it ends. so the person on the phone is Kathy right??? omg the suspension is killing me!!!

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