Sarah1989
May 8 2008, 11:30 AM
Wow really good. I really like your story
RollingStone
May 8 2008, 05:38 PM
I love this fanfic! So glad Liv is with who she should be with. Please continue!!
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SVUangel161
May 9 2008, 04:21 PM
love it post more soon!!!
jacobsmommy06
May 11 2008, 01:07 PM
Chapter 15
"What is taking the judge so long?" Elliot asks his mother.
"Elliot, you have to be patient. It takes time for these things." Noreen tells Elliot, as she sits on the
bench outside the courtroom. She wonders if the judge would give her custody of Olivia. A few minutes the
judge comes out of the courtroom. She looks over at Noreen and Olivia.
"Could you two please come with me." She tells them.
"Elliot you and Fin, you wait here." Noreen tells the two boys, as her and Olivia follow the judge into
chambers.
When they enter the judge's chamber. Donnelly looks at them. A smile comes across her face. Noreen and
Olivia look at each other.
"Does that mean I get to go live with Elliot and his family?" Olivia asks the judge.
"Yes it does. I wish everybody luck." Donnelly tells them.
Noreen gives Olivia a hug. They walk out of the courtroom, and find the two boys looking at pictures on
the wall. Elliot turns around and sees his mother standing there.
"Well what did the judge say?" Elliot asks his mother.
"Are you ready to have a temporary sister?" Noreen asks him.
"Do you mean Olivia is coming to live with us?" Elliot questions his mother.
"Yes, but now remember it's only temporary. When Serena gets better, then Olivia will to live at home."
Noreen tells Elliot.
Elliot runs over to Olivia. He wraps his arms around her, and welcomes her to the family.
A few minutes Olivia Benson walks out of the courthouse with Elliot Stabler and Fin Tutuola to start her new
life.
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Sorry the chapter is so short. It ends the first part of the story. I will starting writing part two
tomorrow.
SVUangel161
May 11 2008, 02:26 PM
post more soon love it!!!!
magret2you
May 13 2008, 02:27 PM
AWWW!!!! I LOVED IT!!!! Great job!!!! Post more soon!! Please!!!