Well I love to write stories but not in english *lol* So I thought I will try to write a story about SVU and of course in english. I think it's a good exercise for me and I hope you can read it *lol* Sorry for any mistakes or grammar mistakes :-)
Well I will start:

Olivia and Elliot sat on her desks and drank a cup of coffee. Suddenly, a dazed and scared girl entered the room. Her clothes were torn and her eyes were covered with tears.
Olivia stood up and walked to the girl. She put carefully her hand on her shoulder.
Olivia: "Sweatheart.. it's ok. You are save now. Everything is ok!"
She tried to calm her down but she didn't stop crying.
Olivia: "What's your name? I'm Olivia and this", she pointed at Elliot who sat on his desks," is Elliot. We really want to help you!"
Girl: "My name... my name is Vanessa!"
Elliot: "Hey Vanessa. Can you tell us what happend to you?"
Elliot spoke with a softly voice. Vanessa began to cry again.......

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It is really good so far. Please update soon.

Okay I like so far!
This your first fan-fic?
If yes so cool

No it's not really my first fanfic. But it's my first SVU fanfic and my first story in english *lol* I'm not so fast with updates because I need a lot of time for writing *lol* I had need 30 minutes for the first part lol It's not easy and it's not so good like the other stories because I can't really describe you the details. My english is not good enough for this but I hope you like it even so :-)
So I will continue a little bit :-)

Olivia: "It's ok Vanessa. Elliot can you bring her a glass of water?"
Elliot: "Sure"
Elliot walked away.
Olivia pointed at a chair, which stood in front of her desk "Take a seat. I promise you everything is ok"
Vanessa nodded and sat down on the chair. She sighed. Olivia took a seat on her chair.
Olivia: Ok Vanessa. Can you tell me how old are you?"
Vanessa: I'm fiveteen.
Olivia: Fine. So can you tell me what happend?"
Vanessa began to cry again. Olivia stood up and knelt in front of Vanessa. She hold her hands.
Olivia: Sweetheat listen. I really want to help you but I need your help. Do you understand this? Please tell my what happend"
Olivia spoke with a calm voice.
Vanessa nodded and answered slowly: "My stepfather.... my stepfather. He.. he... he raped me"
She cried again, harder than ever. Olivia hugged her and whispered: " It's ok. I promis you. He never touch you again!"
Elliot entered the room with a big glass of water in his hand. He handed Vanessa the glass. A very quiet "Thank you" was her answer.
Olivia told Elliot what happend.
Elliot: "Vanessa can you tell me where's your mother?"
Vanessa: "She's dead. Since 4 years!" She sighed very loud.
Olivia: "Do you have any relative here?"
Vanessa: "No... I only have my stepfather... but please don't send me back to him.. please!"
Elliot: " No I promis you, you will never go back to him. We will call the youth welfare service!"
Vanessa: "No please. I don't want to go there. No... no...!"
She began to scream and cry. Olivia tried to calm her down but it didn't work.
Olivia: "Vanessa listen to me. You can sleep today at my appartment. And than tomorrow we will see. Okay?"
Vanessa smiled and nodded........

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One short update today :-) And than I will go to bed (it's 10pm now and I have school tomorrow):

Elliot: "Ok but before we have to go to the hospital. You need an examination Vanessa!"
Vanessa looked sad : "I don't want to go to hospital. I'm scared. I don't want that they examine me!"
Olivia stroked gently about Vanessa's hair: "I know it's difficult but it's very important. We need this to arrest him. Do you understand this? I will be with you. You are not alone. Is this ok?"
Vanessa nodded and answered: "Yeah.. I guess!"
Olivia, Elliot and Vanessa drove to the hospital. After the examination they drove to Olivia's appartment.
Eliott: "Ok girls. I will see you tomorrow. I wish you a good night!"
Olivia: "Yeah thanks. Well we see us tomorrow at the police station. Thanks for driving us!"
Elliot: "No problem. And if you need me, you know, you can call me the whole time!"
Olivia: "Yeah thanks. See you later!"
Olivia and Vanessa left the car and climbed the stairs to Olivia's appartment. Olivia unlocked the door.
Olivia: "So Vanessa that's my home. I hope you like it. Are you hungry, sweetie?"
Vanessa nodded and asked carefully: " Do you think I can have a shower?"
Olivia smiled: "Of course. The next door on your right side is my bathroom. You can use the towel for guest. If you need something call me. I will make something to eat for us!"
After showering and eating cheese macaroni, Olivia prepared the couch for Vanessa. Vanessa layed down. Olivia carpeted her with a smooth blanket and sat down at her side.
Vanessa: "Olivia?!"
Olivia: "Hm?"
Vanessa: "I'm so glad that I can sleep here. Thank you very much. I don't know how to thank you!"
Olivia smiled: "It's ok sweatheart. There is nothing to thank. You need to sleep now!"
Vanessa: "What happend know? What will you do? What if he look after me?"
Olivia stroke about her head: "You are save now. And we search afer your stepfather. I promis you we will find him. And now you have to sleep. It was really difficult for you today. I'm in the next room. So if you need me, don't hesitance calling me, ok? Good night"
Vanessa nodded and closed her eyes. After Vanessa felt into sleep, Olivia went to bed too. She was very tired and felt really fast into sleep.

Olivia woke up suddenly because she heard a loud scream.....

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Olivia ran along the hallway and stormed into the living room. Vanessa sat weeping on the couch. Olivia sat down beside Vanessa and hugged her carefully.
Olivia: "Hey.. what's wrong? What happend?"
Vanessa sobbed: "I'm scared. I dreamt that he found me and he did things to me again... I can't stand it any longer!"
Olivia gave her a squeeze: " Sweety it's ok. It was only a dream. No one is going to hurt you. It's ok! I'm here at your side"
Olivia spoke with a calm voice. She sat beside Vanessa till she fell asleep.
Suddenly Olivia woke up because she heard noises. She opend her eyes and saw Vanessa's stepfather, who stroke in her face.
Olivia: "Hey! Police! Let her go! You son of a bitch! You are arrested for rape, assault and trespass!"
Olivia shouted and grabbed for her gun, which lays normaly on the table
stepfather: "Are you looking for this?"
He asked with a smile and hold up Olivia's gun. Olivia screamed.
Suddenly someone came from the back and hold a cloth with chloroform on her mouth and nose.
Olivia screamed: "No! Let go of me"
Olivia's eyes were heavy and she fell senseless.........

I hope you like it Tell me what do you think

That was good!!!

Thank you very much sweetie

I will update tomorrow. I'm very tired now (it's 10pm and I haven't slept yesterday good) and I have a big headache
I hope you can wait *loool*
Thanks for reading my story.

Yea I can wait. Sorry bout your head ache. Feel better soon.

i love this story.!
and your doing a great job so far with your english.!
just wondering, whats your normal language?
well, hope you update soon.!
i cant wait.!

Thank you very much. My normal language is German *lol* I have english in school so yeah I hope it's good enough *lol*


And Aliecia thank you too. Yeah my headache is gone

That was freaky good. Like the kinda good that has me shaking wanting more!! Update soon, it's AWESOME!!

So I will update now

Olivia woke up. It was cold and she felt that she lay at a cold ground. She saw Vanessa besides her. Vanessa sat on the floor with tears in her eyes
Olivia: "Vanessa? Are you ok?" Olivia whispered. Vanessa was happy that Olivia was awake.
[bVanessa:][/b] "I'm fine. And you?"
Olivia: "I'm doing well!" Olivia had a light headache. It smelled moldy in the room. It was dark but they could see each other.
Vanessa: "I'm scared. It was my stepfather. He found us... please... I'm scared!"
Olivia stroke Vanessa's arm: "You need not be afarid. I'm here with you. Trust me. Elliot and the other cops will find us. I promise you!"
Vanessa nodded and tears ran down her cheek. . Olivia wiped away her tears.

Suddenly they heard footsteps and someone unlocked the door. The stepfather entered the basement. Vanessa hid immediately behind Olivia and began to cry
Olivia: "It's ok sweetheart. I'm here with you. Don't be afraid!"
The stepfather approached Olivia and Vanessa. He rose his hand and hit Olivia in her face. Vanessa screamed.
The stepfather shouted: "Shut up, bitch!"
Vanessa begged: "Please, don't hurt Olivia! Leave her alone!"
stepfather: "shut up! It's her fault. She wants to be stronger than me. Ha! And Vanessa shut up or do you want that we have a nice evening together again?"
The stepfather roared with laughter. Vanessa shook her head and wnet to Olivia, who lay on the ground.
Olivia stood up: "You will never touch Vanessa again! I hamper it! Give up bastard! My partner look after us and he will find us and than you will go to hell!"
The stepfather laughted: "In your dreams sweety! Well I like this game. Good cop and bad man. ha! Vanessa, you know what? I want you know!"
Vanessa: "No please. Daddy... please. Let Olivia and me go. please... I'm your stepdaughter!"
Vanessa started to cry again.
stepfather: "Yeah I know. You are my pincess. And I love you and I want you know!"
Olivia: "YOu son of a bitch! You don't rape her again! I swear it!"
The stepfather grinned: "Ha! You swear it? What will you do? Do you want to hit me?!"
He grasped Vanessa's arm. Olivia wanted to slap him but he was faster. He hit Olivia in her face. Olivia felt to the ground.
Vanessa screamed.
Olivia: "You don't rape her again. I don't let you do this!" Olivia stood up again and wanted to hit him again.
Suddenly the stepfather got a gun out of his pocket. He aimed the gun at Olivia
Stepfather: "Bitch! You never stop me. I'm sorry but you need a beating!"
Vanessa screamed "Noooooo!" and Olivia screamed to" Don't do this! You will regret it!"
<Shoooooooooooooot>
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Olivia fell injured to the ground.
Vanessa screamed: Oliviaaaa!! Noooooo! Please!"
Vanessa ran to Olivia and held her in her arms.
stepfather: "Ha. It's your fault detective. And Vanessa you have the main fault. You do everything wrong! Think twice!"
The stepfather laughted and left the basement.
Vanessa cried: "Olivia. Please say something. I'm so sorry. It's my fault!"
Olivia opened her eyes: " Ouch... I'm ok Vanessa. The bullet hit only my arm. It's ok!"
Vanessa: "No it's not ok. It's my fault. I'm so sorry. I think the best thing is that I will give up and go back to him"
Olivia: "No belive me it's not your fault. And you go never back to him. I will never let you go back!"
Olivia sat up and hold her left arm. Her blue shirt colored red with her blood. She tore her trousers and band her arm with this.

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At the same time, Elliot and Fin knocked at Olivia's appartment door.
Elliot: "Why doesn't she opend the door? I know that she is at home with Vanessa"
Fin: "Yeah that's strange. You have a spare key to her appartmend, haven't you?"
Elliot: "Yep. Do you think I should opened the door?"
Fin nodded. Elliot unlocked the door: "Olivia? Vanessa? Hey! I have breakfast for you"
No answer. Elliot entered the living room and saw the chaos: Olivia's table fell over and a glass lay at the floor.
Elliot: "What the hell? Fin come!"
Fin ran into the living room: "Oh my god!"
Elliot found at the floor Olivia's necklace: "fin look! Olivia would never take off her necklace! Something bad happend here. We must found Olivia and Vanessa!"
Fin: "Yeah I will call the captain"
Fin left the room. Elliot looked at Olivia's necklace: " Olivia I will find you. I will rescue you and Vanessa. I promise you!"
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Vanessa and Olivia sat in the basement.
Vanessa: "It's so cold here!"
Olivia stroke her hand: "My partner will come for help!"
Vanessa: "What's with your arm? Does it hurt a lot?"
Olivia: "No it's ok Vanessa. It's not so bad!"
Vanessa began to cry: "I'm so sorry, Olivia! It's my fault. I'm so sorry!"
Olivia: "Vanessa belive me. It's not your fault!"
Suddenly the stepfather entered the basement.
Stepfather: "How are you bitch?"
He grinned at Olivia. Olivia stared angry at him. He looked at Vanessa: "You come with me, my little princess. I have a good idea what we can do together!"
Vanessa: "No please! Please leave me alone!"
Olivia stood up: " Leave her alone!"
stepfather: "What will ypu do? Remember, I shot at you. I will kill you the next time!"
He laugthed and grabbed Vanessa's arm. Vanessa screamed.
Olivia shouted: "Don't touch her, you bastard!"
The stepfather hold the gun in his hand: "Don't move or I will kill you! I swear it"
Olivia stood still.
Stepfather: "Good girl!" He grinned and left the basemant with Vanessa.
Olivia ran to the basement door and heard Vanessa's cries for help: "No! Don't touch her. Please! Please!"
Tears ran down Olivia's cheeks : "No please. I can't help her. He will rape her and I can't help her. That's not fair. I'm a police officer. My job is to help people!"
Olivia slid down.....................

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Ok that was truely awesome update soon.

Oh my gawd. That was sooooo good. I bet Olivia's gonna ask for a trade off. Like he can take her instead. She always does that.... I just hope no one gets hurt.. more than they already have!

Thank you very much for your lovely comments. I'm so sorry that I let you wait for an update but I have not much time at the moment and I'm sick too. So I hope you forgive me :-) I will update as soon as possible

Oh, don't worry sweetie. I hope you get better soon! I'll be here waiting when your ready though! I love this fanfic!

Okyour forgiven now get better soon

Thank you for your lovely comments Yeah I feel better now and I will update for you Thanks for reading my story and I'm happy you like it :-)

Olivia stood up and screamed: "Hey.... please let Vanessa go. Take me. Did you hear! Take me instead of Vanessa!"
Olivia heard a laughter and Vanessa screams stopped.
Stepfather: "Shut up bitch! I don't want you. You can't help Vanessa. Shut up. It's to loud here, what do you think Vanessa?"
Olivia heard footsteps going upstairs.
Vanessa: "Pleaseeee let me go!"
The screams disappeared. Olivia was alone in the basement. Tears ran down Olivia's cheek.
Olivia whispered: "That's not fair...!"
Suddenly, Olivia heard steps
"Liv.... Vanessa?!"
Olivia stood up and answered: "El? I'm here! In the basement!"
Elliot opened the door and ran with Fin to Olivia.
Elliot: "Oh god.. Liv... you are shot in your arm. What happend?"
Fin: "And where is Vanessa?"
Olivia looked sad: " The bastard take her in his appartment! We must help her. He rape her!"
Elliot: "Fin and I will help her Liv. You stay here. You are wounded!"
Olivia: "No! I come with you! Please, help me up! We must hurry!"
Fin and Elliot helped Olivia up and they ran the stairs to the stepfather's appartment up. In front of the door, they heard Vanessa's cry for help. Elliot tried to open the door but it was locked.

Elliot screamed: "Police! Open the door or we will break them up!"
The Stepfather laughted: "Piss off. If you entered the room I will kill Vanessa!"
Olivia screamed: " Son of a bitch. I will kill you. Don't touch Vanessa!"
Elliot and Fin kicked against the door. The door lumped up.
The detectives saw Vanessa laying on the bed. Her clothes were torn up and her face was covered with tears. But no a sign of the step father.
Olivia ran to Vanessa and hugged her: "It's ok sweetheart. It's allright!"
Fin and Elliot searched the whole appartment but no sign of the stepfahter.
Elliot came to Olivia and Vanessa: "Vanessa... Do you know who he is?"
Vanessa sobbed: "No .... I don't know... I don't know..."
Vanessa was all of a tremble.
Olivia stroke her hair: "It's ok honey. We will find him. Don't worry!"
Elliot wrapped Vanessa with his jacket and carried her carefully to his car. Olivia and Fin followed him.

Elliot got Vanessa in the car: "Liv we drive to the hospital now. You need an ambulance too""
Olivia : "It's only a graze shot. But ok we will drive to the hospital."

Suddenly the stepfather stood behind Olivia and hold her tight and threatened her with a knife.
Vanessa screamed..............

I hope you like it :-) Let me know what you think *g*

I only want to say that I will update the next week or maybe at the weekend I have a lot of stress now so that's the reason :-)

How could you cliff-hanger like that!!
Come on update update update.

I'm sorry that I keep you waiting I hope you forgive me *lol*
Here's an update. I hope you like it:

Vanessa tried to get out of the car.
Elliot: "Vanessa! Stay in the car. Please do it!" He closed the door. Elliot approached the stepfather, who threatened Olivia with his knife.
the stepfather screamed:"Don't move! If you come to me, I will kill your co-worker! Take it seriously! I will kill her!"
Elliot spoke with a calm voice: " It's ok. Make no mistake. Let her go. You did enough bad things. So let her go and we will see what we can do for you!"
The stepfather grinned: " Of course! Don't move. One murder more or less is not important for me. I have nothing to lose!"
The stepfather held the knife tighter at Olivia's neck. Olivia screamed out.
Elliot:" NO! Stop it. Keep calm! Let Olivia go and I promise you, I let you run away! You don't need Olivia!"
The stepfather laughted and shook his head: " I'm not stupid. But I will make a deal with you. You will get your co-worker and I will get Vanessa in return. Deal or no deal?" The stepfather laughted.
Olivia sobbed: "You will never ever get Vanessa back. You bastard!"
The stepfather: "Shut up bitch. I didn't ask you. What do you think, Elliot right?! Deal or no deal?"
Elliot: "You are sick! You hurt Vanessa so much. Do you think I will give her to you again? Come on. Give it up!"
The stepfather laughted out loud: " Ha! Will you play the super hero? The "super" cop? Vanessa is my stepdaughter. I can make with her whatever I want. It's not your business! She belongs to me!"
Elliot: "She never ever belongs to you. You are a sick rapist! You hurt her in such many ways. You are sick!"
The stepfather: "Shut up. Vanessa like it. I will ask it the last time: Deal or no deal?!"
Olivia: "Elliot don't make a deal, please. I'm fine. You can't let Vanessa go back to him. He will rape her again and again and again. You know this. Elliot!"

The stepfather hit Olivia in her face: "I said shut up bitch! DEAL or NO DEAL?"
Elliot: I'm sorry Liv!"
Olivia sobbed: "It's ok. I'm fine."
Elliot screamed: "NO DEAL!"
The stepfather laughted: "Ok. So you will that I kill your co-worker? No problem!"
He threw Olivia in a car and drove away..............


I hope you like it :-) Let me know what you think

OH my...
Sarah please don't make him kill her please. I love the story, but Please LIV KICK HIS AS*

I'm so sorry that I leave you with such a cliffhanger, but the last week was so stressful and I hadn't time for writing (you know I need a long time for thinking about the story and then writing in english lol)

So please forgive me and I promise that I will write more this evening or tomorrow

Forgiven just take it easy.

Elliot got silent in the car and drove the car.
Vanessa: "Why do you did this? Why?" Vanessa began to cry.
Elliot: " He don't kill her. He wants you. If he kills Olivia he doesn't have a form of pressure anymore. Do you understand?"
Vanessa: "Yes I understand. I hope you're right. What should I do? I want to help her. But he wants me!"
Elliot: "You do nothing. I bring you now in our police station and our Captain will take care of you. And me and the other detectives resue Liv!"
Vanessa: "How? He has a weapon and he is so strong. Please I will hep you. It's my fault that this happend to Olivia. If I didn't go to the police and told them waht happend, Olivia wasn't in this situation. It's my fault. I'm sorry!"
Vanessa began to cry again.
Elliot spoke with a soft voice: "No, it's not your fault Vanessa. Your stepfather is a sadist. If you didn't go to us and told us what happend, he would rape you again and again. Belive me, it's not your fault. And Olivia don't want, that you upbraid, ok? Trust me. We will rescue her. You can help us, if you go to our captain and stay with him. Ok?"
Vanessa nodded.

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Aww so sweet update

Yikes!
Wow I hope Liv is going to b ok

Thanks for your comments
So I'll update now:

Elliot, Fin and Munch sat at a big table at the police station. They discussed about the situation and how the will rescue Olivia. Cragen opened the door and entered the room
Munch:" Where's Vanessa?"
Cragen smiled: "She's sleeping on the sofa in my office. She was really tired and she need a break!"
Fin: "Good. Elliot, what should we do now? Do you have an idea?"
Elliot nodded: "Well, we know that he is in his parent's house. I would say that I will entered alone the house and I will try to speak with him. Munch and Fin, you will give me support. If I need you, you will come for help. What do you think captain?"
Cragen: "Well, I haven't a better idea. But please be careful. I don't want to lose a detective! Did you understand!?"
The three detectives nodded
Cragen: "Well, I will stay here with Vanessa. I will give you a few police officers for help! Go and rescue Olivia!"
The detectives left the building

Elliot entered the house. He didn't heard a noise.
Elliot shouted: "I'm detective Stabler. Where are you?!"
Elliot heard a laugh.
Stepfather: "Detective Stabler. Ha.. that's a surprise. What do you want?"
Elliot: "Where's Det. Benson? Don't play games!"
Suddenly the stepfather walked the stairs down. Olivia wasn't with him.
Elliot: "Where's Olivia?!"
The stepfather laughted: "Not here. I gave you a deal! I'm a good human so I will give you the chance again: You give me my step daughter and I will give you your co worker!"
Elliot: "Forget it! Listen, it's better for you to give up!"
Stepfather: "Never ever! ut I have something for you!"
The stepfather chucked something on the ground.
Elliot: "What's that?"
The Stepfather grinned: "That's a strand of hair from your partner!"
Elliot was shocked: "You bastard! What have you done?!"
The stepfather:" I only cut a strand of her hair. But the next time I will give you something else. oerhaps a finger?! Listen! I don't make jokes! I shot at her this morning, you know. But the next time I will make it right and not only in her arm!"
Elliot: "You sick idiot!"
Stepfather: "Shut up. Your last chance!What will you do? Make your decission. Now!"

He is such a pig.

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Elliot started sweating: "Ok deal. You will get Vanessa and I will get my co-worker!"
The stepfather laughted: "Smarter cop! Listen: You go and bring Vanessa to me. We will meet us in one hour here again. And I swear you, if you kidding me, I will kill your partner!"
Elliot nodded:" One hour!"
He left the house

Fin: "What will you do? You can't give him Vanessa!"
Elliot: "What should I do? Should he kill Liv?"
Fin: "I know but we have to find another solution!"
Elliot: "It's too late. We don't have another choice!"
Munch: "But Ellliot. She's a kid..."
Elliot walked away

Fin: "What the hell is wrong with him?"
Munch shruged his shoulders: "I don't know"

One hour later, Elliot went back to the house with Vanessa.
Fin: "You mean this serious?"
Vanessa: "It's ok. I will help Olivia. It's my fault so I have to help you!"
Munch: "Elliot. What the hell are you doing? Do you know what you are doing?"
Elliot: "Belive me... I know what I do. I don't let him kill Olivia. Please, trust me. I have a plan. Trust me ok?"
Fin: "What for a plan?"
Elliot: "Trust me. Vanessa, let's go. It's time!"
Elliot and Vanessa entered the building
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Elliot screamed: "Hey! I'm back. Where are you?"
The two heard a noise. Vanessa stood at Elliot's side and pressed Elliot's hand.
Elliot whispered: "It's ok Vanessa. Trust me!"

Suddenly, the stepfather stood with Olivia in front of the two. The stepfather threatened Olivia with a gun
Stepfather: "Hi Vanessa my darling. I missed you so much, honey!"
Vanessa pressed Elliot's hand tighter.
Olivia screamed: "What the hell are you doing El? Are you stupid!"
Elliot: "I haven't another choice Liv!"
Stepfather: "Right cop. Vanessa come here to me!" He laughted.
Elliot: " I want my co-woker at first!"
Stepfather: "Sure. Are you kidding me? Vanessa come here and I will let Olivia go!"
Elliot:" Well ok. Vanessa go!"
Olivia started to cry: "NO! El no! Vanessa go back...go back.. please!"

The stepfather pressed Vanessa at his breast and pitchforked Olivia in Elliot's arms.
Elliot hugged Olivia. She looked at him with tears in her eyes and said: "no... please...!"

Stepfather: "And now go! You have your co-worker and I have my step daughter. So we finished our deal. Go away!"
Elliot turned around with Olivia in his arms.
Olivia sobbed: " No El. No... we must help her. El we are cops! What's wrong with you. I didn't understand you!"
Elliot didn't listened and walked with Olivia away.
As the left the building, they heard Vanessa crying
Olivia: "NO! Elliot we must help her!"
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gah is el that stupid how could he do that to her i understand he loves liv but rawr!!

I would have his arse for that if i was IAB! But as an EO fan I would love it! As a cop I would find a way to kill/arrest that stepdad (can we kill him)

That's a good one, Sarah. Don't worry the English will grow with writing experience and so will the details in your fiction.

Hm, don't bash me but I have the strange feeling that El won't leave without BOTH Olivia and Vanessa. How they both acted before Vanessa goes to her stepdad implies that they've made a plan. Or maybe I just don't want to realize the obvious. But the guy has four kids - he can't be serious, right?

More, young lady.

Knowing El and Liv I rest assured they will be fine!
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