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El_n_liv_shipper
In the criminal justice system sexually based offenses are considered especially heinous in new York city the dedicated detectives who investigate these vicious felony’s are members of an Elite squad known as the special victims unit these are there stories



-Doink Doink-



Elliot sat silently slouched down on his seat just staring up into space. “hey man you cool?” Fin asked Looking at him attentively “Yea” He silently said Getting up and walking towards the crib, he could feel the biggest hangover coming upon him “ugh” he laid down on the nearest bed. “why?” He asked himself practically whispering “why is it that when ever i decide to get close to you ,you move away?” he layed his hands down to rest on the top of his forhead. “liv” he whispered. “if I would have known you would turn away I would have never said anything.” He sighed “hell I would rather have you here as a partner and know your okay than to show feelings for you and have us grow farther apart.” He heard the door of the crib Slighty open. “hey” the anonymous voice of a woman said “that voice” he thought “I know that voice” his eyes fluttered open only to find Olivia standing over him. He quickly sat up. “liv.”…..”Elliot I have so much to explain to you im....” “ no liv its fine you don’t need to explain anything to me.” He interrupted. “no Elliot I do, I been a real jerk lately and I think I should explain why. I hadn’t talked to you earlier because I didn’t want to hurt you and..” Elliot raised his eyebrows and interrupted liv “didn’t want to hurt me? You leaving without saying anything wasn’t hurtfull enough?” “ Elliot It was the best for both of us we needed time away from eachother” “and since when do you not talk to me about these things? Since kurt came into your life right?” “Elliot kurt has nothing to do with this!” "sure he does liv! Why wont you relize that since this kurt guy decided to pop out of nowhere we been so distant? And by distant I mean you not talking to me about things like these." he said “I just been so caught up with my own issues that i…” “see what im talking about!” he interrupted “issues that I could possibly help you with, liv you use to come to me about these things. Now I think you talk to kurt more than you talk to me! What is it with this guy? Is there something else your hiding from me?” ‘elliot..” she said sounding mildly suspicious “there is isn’t there?” he replied getting all up in her face. “elliot…please” …”liv look at me don’t turn away now” He had her face locked straight towards him. “your seeing this guy aren’t you?” Liv could practically hear Elliots heart beat she could feel his cool breath all over her lips and his eyes were unavoidable. She pulled her hands up to his and moved them away from her face gently and lightly “yes…” Olivia slowly turned away. “how long” he asked . “ a month or two” “a month or two?!” He said in disbelief. "okay" he nodded he had decided there was nothing else that needed to be said so He made his way past liv and through the door. Liv closed her eyes and let the breeze elliot left behind gently suround her.


Alrighty yall! Please tell me whatcha think and if i should even continue this story! Thanks!!
svufaneo
hey, i never said you could stop.! smile.gif
just kidding, i LOVE it.!
you an amazing writer, by the way.!
biggrin.gif update soon.!
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, I thought you did a good job.
Addicted2Benson
THAT WAS GREAT I WANT TO READ MORE!!!
Sarah1989
It sounds really good :-) Ich liebe es! (= I love it ) laugh.gif
El_n_liv_shipper
yay! thank yalls for the feedback this part is soo much better tho!!!!! smile.gif please read and tell me what ya think smile.gif

Elliot walked through the precint doors putting pressure on the back of his neck, he had a headache the size of Texas. He relized Olivia was sitting at her desk doing paper work. “What are you doing here” he asked. Olivia looked up at him “I work here” she went back to her paper work trying her hardest to ignore him. Elliot kept staring at her and eventually he sat down. He grabbed a pen and paper and began to write. He couldn’t concentrate so he jiggled his pen side to side until he placed it down on his desk with a loud thump. Olivia looked up and then back down trying her best to ignore him. Elliot slouched back into his seat and stared at her. Waiting for her to look back. When she finally did she had given up on ignoring him and sat up .“So what does this guy do?” Elliot asked “he writes stories.” She said hoping elliot wouldn’t catch what she meant “Hes a reporter isn’t he???” he asked in disbelief. “Yea why?” she asked waiting for him to say something wrong so she could just get the hell out of the precinct “Liv! You know how it went with your first reporter boyfriend. Now why do you want to try this again?” he asked “Elliot what are you trying to say?” “im trying to say that this guy might just be trying to take information out of you and..” “Hold on! What? Elliot I cant believe you just went there!” “ liv I just don’t want you to get hurt and..” no elliot you obviously need to see somebody else hurt you didn’t approve kurt even before you knew he was a reporter! So don’t give me that crap!” she got up from her desk and walked towards her locker got her stuff and left “I wont approve of anyone liv…” he whispered.



-Doink doink-

about a week later Kurt walked through the precint doors asking for Olivia. Elliot was standing right behind him “Hey do you know where I can find Olivia Benson?” he asked fin “shes in interrogation can i..” “can I help you with something shes my partner.” Elliot interrupted from behind. Kurt turned around and said “Oh that’s nice, shes my girlfriend” he smiled. Elliot Relized that the external rectal opening who took Olivia from him was standing right in front of him. He wanted to rip kurts heart out from his chest, but relized it was the other way around Olivia was doing that to him. liv walked right behind elliot and asked Kurt “What are you doing here?” “ah there you are” he walked passed Elliot and Grabbed Olivia in his arms. Elliot was too afraid to look back so he stood there. “I just wanted to visit my girlfriend at work” “more like he wants a Story to write about” Elliot mumbled while he turned around to face them he said it loud enough for Kurt to hear and low enough for Olivia not to. “I met your Partner” kurt said to olivia. “You know she talks a lot about you, so im wondering what she’s said about me.” He smirked. Elliot looked Olivia straight in the eye he knew kurt was doing this to bother him and kurt knew damn well Olivia hadn’t told him nothing about him. Elliot looked back at Kurt and said “you know she doesn’t really talk about you, there must be a reason behind that” he looked back at Olivia. Olivia could feel an argument coming up. “Yea well you and her have been partners and friends for several years there must be a reason why she never told you about me.” Elliot was ready to pound this guy in the face when Olivia butted in between them “That’s enough!” Kurt Please wait for me outside. And you stay!” she told Elliot. Elliot looked up at kurt and gave him one last glare before he walked out. “Elliot id appreciate you treat Kurt with respect like I treat Kathy with respect ” Elliot looked at her furiously and walked away.Olivia walked out the precint doors to find kurt. “Kurt that was uncalled for please do not call Elliot Out like that again. Not only did you embarrass him but you embarrassed me as well. “Olivia it was only a joke.” “Elliot isn’t the “joke” type of guy.” “alright it wont happen again. Now you going to invite me to your apartment or what?” He Winked and She smiled and kissed him “Later” He grabbed her by the waste and brought her into a kiss. Elliot walked in on them. He stood there and bit his lips he couldn’t believe what he was seeing. this guy who He grew to hate during the few minutes he met him, was groping and practically having sex with liv outside of the precint. “Liv…” She turned around, her hair disheveled. “Elliot uh...” “Cragen needs us.” He looked at kurt, he had a smile on his face not just any smile but a “rubbing it in your face” type of smile yet elliot knew that if kurt didn’t stop smiling like that he was going to rub his fist in his face. “okay il be right there.” Liv said. Elliot stood there waiting for her to tell kurt she had to go he wasn’t going to let another one of these make out session go on while he could help it. Olivia looked back at him and relized he wasn’t leaving without her. “I have to go ill see you later” she kissed him good bye. “Later?” Elliot thought. Olivia walked right passed him almost making it into the precint and then she stopped “Elliot? C’mon” there was no way she was leaving Elliot and Kurt alone. Elliot looked back at her and resigned. he walked right by her, now rubbing it in kurts face that he had her for the rest of the day.
Addicted2Benson
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY THE JEALOUSY IS GREAT I THINK ITS ABOUT TIME FOR HIM TO BE JEALOUS OF ONE OF LIVS BOYFRIENDS BUT ANYWAY I LOVE IT ...MORE PWEEEZ!!!!
Sarah1989
Perfect! More more moreeee , please biggrin.gif
RollingStone
Moree.. puhhhleessee??
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (RollingStone @ Apr 30 2008, 02:02 PM) *
Moree.. puhhhleessee??


oh! i had forgotten i had a fanfic up hehe sorry peeps! Im so happy you all liked it your comments are what keep me posting so thank you soo much ppl! although i had some mixed feelings about it il still be sure to update! BTW i dont know how i feel about this part lol. well here it is.
-DOINK DOINK-

After solving a case Fin and Munch were already on there way home while Elliot and liv were barely getting ready to go home. Olivia was at her locker getting her coat when Elliot stepped up. "Hey you need a ride?" She looked at him and smiled "No thanks." She closed her locker but before she could make it passed Elliot he tugged her back and said "Olivia let me take you home." he knew very well she was getting a ride from Kurt but he wanted to hear it from her. "Elliot Iam fine I don’t need a ride." "oh really? Is Kurt outside?" she looked down to her feet and then looked back up building confidence to tell him. "Yea." She nodded. She was just about to walk right passed him again when he pulled her back and trapped her against the lockers. She flinched at the big thump the lockers made when her back hit them. Elliot didnt use all that much force just enough to grab her attention, the noise from Olivias back hitting the locker was alot stronger than the force he used to put her there. she couldn’t believe it. What the hell was Elliot doing? He put his face close to hers and looked her straight in the eyes "if you don’t want this as bad as I do tell me now." Elliot whispered. Olivia looked straight at him opened her mouth to say something but incredibly enough Elliot had left her speechless. who was she kidding she wanted this more than anything, Elliot could read her eyes like a book, so without hesitation Elliot put his hands on Olivia’s waist and brought her close to him and kissed her. Olivia wrapped her arms around Elliot’s neck and he lifted her up. she wrapped her legs around his waist. "I need you benson..." he said muffled by her lips "i want you so bad" Olivia still kissing him moved her hands even lower from his back. They heard the precinct doors open Olivia quickly parted from Elliot’s lips. "I been waiting for you in the car" Kurt said standing at the doors. Elliot put Olivia back down and stepped farther away from her. "Kurt listen I..."Olivia tried to explain but kurt didnt give her time to "Olivia? I need to talk to..." "Kurt?" Elliot interrupted "before you come to any conclusion I just want you to know it was my fault. I Stopped Olivia from going outside because I over heard you guys talking. That wasn’t good from my part and if she wants this I don’t want to be the one taking it away from her." "Olivia can I talk to you alone?" he said ignoring elliot. Olivia nodded looked at Elliot and fixed her hair and clothes then walked out.



I hope you all like it! happy.gif

Addicted2Benson
OMG I LOVE THE WHOLE JEALOUSY THING IT IS SO MUCH MORE INTERESTING...KEEP IT GOING I LOOOVE IT...UPDATE SOON PWEEEZZZ!!!!!
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (iluvbenson @ Apr 30 2008, 11:30 PM) *
OMG I LOVE THE WHOLE JEALOUSY THING IT IS SO MUCH MORE INTERESTING...KEEP IT GOING I LOOOVE IT...UPDATE SOON PWEEEZZZ!!!!!



yay! thank you! happy.gif il try my best to update tommarow thanks for reading wink.gif
El_n_liv_shipper
heres the next part! Please read it and let me know what you think!! well i dont know how i feel about the first part but i do like the second paragraph ad the third!

“I had it with you olivia!” “What?” she asked in disbelief has he gone mad? “ just when you told me there was nothing going on between You and your partner You go on and Contradict yourself” “Kurt listen Iam sorry I…” “No you listen Olivia." he interrupted “we can talk about this at your apartment now let’s go” he grabbed on to her arm and pulled her towards the car. “Wait! Lets just settle this first” she said “We are, now get in the car!.” Olivia had never seen him act like this and there was no way she was getting into a car with him like this either. “Kurt! Please just Stop Iam not going with you ” She said trying to calm him down. He laughed “ oh this was just what I needed but alright I see how were going to have to settle this then!” He slapped her across her face and she fell down to the floor. she held on to the side of her face glaring up at kurt. She couldn’t believe he had just assaulted her and she couldn’t imagine what he would have done if they were at her apartment. then he grabbed her arm and pulled her up and said “Now I wouldn’t have to slap you around if you would just listen!!!” meanwhile Elliot was inside the precinct he figured Olivia had decided to stay with Kurt since she wasn’t back inside so he decided he’d go home and get some sleep and talk to her tomorrow, he grabbed his coat and headed outside “Slap me around?? “She yelled! “I will not let you assault me again you hear me!!” she looked him straight in the eyes and said “get the hell out of here.” He grabbed her from her arms “Olivia why are you making me do this!” he was ready to slap her again when Elliot walked out from the precint. “Don’t you dare Kurt!” Kurt turned around and glared at Elliot. “Your knight in shining armor is here” kurt laughed she looked at Kurt and demanded he let her go or she would arrest him. He did let her go but only to strike Elliot instead so she kneed Kurt in the gut before he did. Elliot laughed and said “I guess she’s my knight in shining armor.” Olivia looked up at him with the big ol bruise on her face and smiled. Elliot realized Kurt had hit her even before he had gotten there. So He ran towards Kurt and punched him across the face. “Oooh you have no clue how long I waited to kick your ass!” Elliot kept striking him. “Elliot that’s enough!” he punched him one last time and knocked him out “He looked up at liv exhausted and walked up to her he held her face close to his and finally kissed her. “God look what this ass hole did to you.” He said rubbing her cheek gently. She smiled and said “you know I’ve had worst.” He wrapped his hands around her waist and held her close “now do you want a ride?” “If you insist” she smirked.



-Doink doink-

In the car Elliot held Olivia’s hand in his while he drove with the other. “You okay?” He asked concerned. She turned to look at him “Yea, just a little shook up you know.” He smiled and held her hand tighter “I know” Olivia kept looking out of the window while Elliot stared at her attentively. “How are we going to let cragen know?” she asked still looking out the window into the darkness of the night. “Know what?” he wondered. He didn’t know whether she meant the beginning of a good relationship or the whole Kurt situation. Olivia turned to look at him and sighed “you and me” Elliot knew she was worried about it but he wanted to let her know it was all going to be alright “he doesn’t have to know liv, whatever goes on with our personal life is our business.” he lifted her hand up while still clasped in his and gave it a gentle peck. “professionally he does el.” “true, but you know that if we tell him one of us will have to be switched off to another unit and just the thought that I won’t be there to have your back from all these perves gets me fed up.” She smiled “Iam a big girl Elliot” “yea but your not superwoman” she stared at him for a while before she thanked him for the ride to her apartment. “You want to come up?” “You sure?” he asked. “Yea I’d rather not be alone” He smiled at her and said “then I wont ever leave you alone Benson” he turned his car back on and parked it. They went up into her apartment hand in hand. She finally got the door open and she pulled him in. She closed the door and pushed him towards it to trap him between the door and herself. “Dajavu?” she asked. Elliot smiled and kissed her he turned her around so now he would have her trapped in between his body and the door. He picked her up and Olivia wrapped both her legs around his waist “Now its dajavu” he smirked She giggled out loud while Elliot made a trail of kisses down her neck. She held on to him even tighter. “Don’t worry babe I won’t let you fall” she smiled and said “I trust you with my life Elliot Stabler” He turned her around while kissing her and still holding her. he made his way towards her room and kicked the door closed behind him.









-Doink Doink-

“Benson?” Olivia answered her phone. She was still laying on Elliot’s bare chest with the sheets around her. “Yea Capt.?” “Il call him...” she said. It was the first time she ever lied to cragen about something so important. “Little does he know he’s laying right here next to me” She thought. She looked up at Elliot and smiled. She kissed his chest hoping to wake him. He moaned and looked down at her. “Hey you’re awake?” she laughed and the absurd question he just asked “yea iam.” “Why?” Elliot wondered “cragen just called its urgent.” He groaned! “JOY!!” She kissed his chest one last time and got up. “I’ll be in the shower she said” he grabbed her arm without any bad intention and she moaned “Oh! Iam sorry liv!!” she was still sore from all the tugging Kurt had done. He kissed her arm being silly and said “sorry.” She smiled sat next to him and said “what were you going to ask?” “well dont we have less than an hour to get ready? “Right but where are you going with this” she smiled suspiciously. “There’s not enough time for us to take showers individually so...” she cracked up and pulled him towards her “c’mon” and pulled him towards the bathroom.
Addicted2Benson
I CANT BELIEVE THAT BASTARD HIT HER I WAS SO UPSET BUT I STILL LOVED IT AND I NEED TO READ MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE !!!!!!
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (iluvbenson @ May 2 2008, 09:47 AM) *
I CANT BELIEVE THAT BASTARD HIT HER I WAS SO UPSET BUT I STILL LOVED IT AND I NEED TO READ MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE !!!!!!

LOL! thank you so much for reading my story!! happy.gif I have the next part. its very similar to undercover but iv change a couple of things up. You'll see what iv changed when you read it.
THANK YOU!

-DOINK DOINK-

At the Precinct Cragen came up to Elliot, Olivia, Munch and fin. “Here’s your case” he handed all four of them there files “get started” he walked back into his Office. “What’s eating him?” Elliot asked. “I don’t know he was fine in the morning.” Munch said. Elliot and Olivia looked at eachother they wondered if somehow Cragen had found out about there relationship, but there was noway! Unless one of them told him but they would never jeopardize there job. “don’t sweat it hes just getting old” Munch cracked. “this is an on going investigation on a CO.” Fin read from the file he was trying to get back on the case. “Says theres been over hundred reported rapes but none have actually made it to court.” Olivia Read on. “Maybe we should pay sealview a visit and see whast going on.” Elliot looked up at liv at that same moment His cell phone rang “Stabler” he answered. “we’ll be right there” He closed his phone and turned towards the squad. “ I guess we’ll have a reason to go to sealview now.” The gang looked at him confused . “That was NYPD, apparently a young girl was beaten unconscious outside of sealview.” He explained.



-doink Doink-

After Questioning the victim and witnesses for hours Olivia was exhausted. She was heading home with elliot at her side. “ im thinking of going undercover I can actually catch this bastard in the act.” She said completely out of the blue. “Undercover? Where?” He asked worried “sealview. As an immate” she said as if it weren’t a big deal “wait catch him on the act?? Olivia there’s no way. You do know that if you go undercover you won’t have back up and you’ll go in completely unprotected.” He said trying to talk some sense into her. “Elliot and that’s a risk im willing to take. If I don’t do it this bastard will keep raping woman and we wont have evidence to collar him.” “Well then ill go in with you.” “What?” she laughed at the absurdity “Elliot this is an all woman jail. “Yea I know I mean as a new guard or something that way I can keep an eye on you.” “Elliot you don’t have to. il be fine I can handle it. “Listen you have no clue what you’re getting yourself into. in jail you wont be known as a cop but somebody who commited a crime, an Immate! just let me have your back.” He pleaded hoping she would say yes. “alright.” she resigned.



-Doink Doink-

Olivia knocked on the door to cragens office. Elliot was right besides her. “Just let him know you want to go undercover and il back you up on the rest.” He whispered to olivia before cragen opened the door. Cragen found it suspicious to find both Elliot and Olivia at his Office. He immediately knew something was up. “what’s going on?” cragen asked. “well Capt you know that case in sealview?” “yea what about it” he nodded. “well I want to go undercover.” “No.” he said sternly “Capt please I can catch this guy in the act and if you don’t let me we wont have enough to put him away” “No” he answered once again. “what do I tell ashley? That her mother doesn’t count because shes an immate?” “Capt, Il go undercover with her il have her back.” Elliot reassured him. Cragen looked at both of them and said “Fine but I want you both out of there if the smallest thing goes wrong you hear me?” Elliot and Olivia both nodded. And they rushed out of his office
Addicted2Benson
OOOOOOOOO THIS IS GONNA GET REAL GOOD I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!! laugh.gif
EODOlover
WOW! WOW! WOW!
Sarah1989
Sehr sehr gut (very very good tongue.gif ). Please update soon
Addicted2Benson
IM GETTING IMPATIENT HERE...I NEED AN UPDATE!!!
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (iluvbenson @ May 9 2008, 07:03 PM) *
IM GETTING IMPATIENT HERE...I NEED AN UPDATE!!!



LOL! im so sorry! il get to it! happy.gif
El_n_liv_shipper
This part is very very similar to undercover But there are a couple differences. smile.gif

-Doink Sealview Doink-

Olivia had already put on her Orange jump suit and was ready for her search. She walked through the Detectors and then down to a CO. She read his name tag before actually meeting up with him it read "CO parker". She immediately realized this was there perp and stared him straight in the eye. "You over here" he called her over. Olivia walked towards him and he ordered her to turn around against the wall "Ugh don't you guys have woman who do this?" she asked " Shut up and put your hands against the wall." She turned around pissed and felt him patting her Shoulders her stomach her legs and then her butt. "Mm somebodys been working out" He murmured She quickly grabbed his hand and pushed him towards the wall it was one of her cop reflects. "don't you ever touch me like that again" She whispered in his ear. Elliot Grabbed her and pushed her against the wall hard. She groaned "You don't ever hit a CO you hear me?! " Elliot yelled at her. and then whispered "you ok?" she nodded and then answered "He assaulted me first!." "Then another CO began to make his way towards her "oh great" she thought he was tall With brown hair and colored eyes he came up and grabbed her from behind. "we aren't rikers here! We don't use brutality you hear me?" he scolded elliot. He nodded "You alright?" he asked liv. she looked at him in disbelief and Left with him.

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[font="Times New Roman"]-Doink Doink-


Olivia was out in the court yard with other inmates. "Hey you new?" one of them asked. Olivia knew she had to be cautious since she had no clue why half of them were in this dump. so she replyed "yea" "you aint going to make it in here like that. Let your stuff stand out more, it's the only way you get things around here if you know what I mean." Elliot and a CO Were headed there way. "COs on there way see you later girl." And she walked off. Olivia turned around and tied the bottom of her shirt up so her belly was showing. "Feeling better today?" Parker asked with Elliot by his side. "What is she doing?" he thought "Is she trying to provoke him?" "Peachy" she answered. Parker looked at her and said "the right answer would be yes CO" she glared at him and said "Yes CO" Elliot couldn't stand this. CO parker made his way around her and pushed the basketball racket behind her until all the balls began to bounce on the floor. Olivia turned around in disbelief. "pick them up" he demanded. She glared at him. "I said pick them up." She looked back at elliot and bit her lip. She could tell Elliot was pissed by the look in his eyes. She smiled at him to reassure him it wasn't any big thing she couldn't handle. She bent down and began picking up the balls. "keep up the good work Sweet chicks."CO parker said. Olivia Quickly stood up and gave out a big sigh. Elliot couldn't wait to collar this external rectal opening but he just went on with the flow meanwhile.


LOL "external Rectal Opening" HAHAHAHAHAH! thats hilarious I actually put "as*hole" But without the star and "external Rectal Opening" is what it turned out to be when i posted t.
EODOlover
Woah
EO4EVR
MORE MORE MORE
Enaka
You people have inspired me a lot! Maybe I should get out there and create a fic of my own! I love it, El_n_Liv, you rock! biggrin.gif
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