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Addicted2Benson
THIS IS MY FIRST FAN FIC SO I HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!!

It was 12 midnight and the squad was just closing a rape/murder case when the phone rang:
Olivia: "benson"
Caller: "this case is not over, there are bodies all over this city and you have the wrong guy"
Olivia: "who is this?"
The phone goes dead
Elliot: "who was that"
Olivia: "I don't know but I think we should go over the case one more time"
Elliot: "I gotta get home Kathy and I got into a-"
Olivia: "I understand "
As Elliot walks out Olivia watches him leave wondering, what if?
Olivia is now alone in the squad room when she gets another phone call but the phone immediately hangs up. After about the third time Olivia calls up Elliot. He answers on the first ring and she tells him what happened. Elliot is staying in a hotel room because of the fight and tells Olivia to come over. She gets there in 15 minutes and knocks on the door.
Elliot: "wats up"
Olivia: "nothing its just...its just... i'm stressing out over this case and my personal life is falling apart I just can't-"
Elliot: "whats going on with you"
Olivia: "I just told you"
Elliot: "no I mean at home"
Olivia: "its a long story"
Elliot: "you can stay here tonight and talk about it"
Olivia: "but theres only one bed"
Elliot: "you can stay in mine"

IM GONNA STOP RIGHT HERE BUT I'LL WRITE MORE FEEL FREE TO COMMENT AND YOU CAN GIVE ME SOME IDEAS IF YOU LIKE!!! biggrin.gif
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, it looks interesting.
Sarah1989
It's sounds good biggrin.gif I want to read more, please
EODOlover
good start, more
sharrie15
can we have some more please
Addicted2Benson
IM HAPPY YOU GUYS LIKE IT DO FAR!!!!

As Olivia walked passed Elliot she could smell that he had been drinking heavily.
Olivia: "you know drinking yourself half to death isn't going to help you get Kathy back"
In a drunken slur Elliot says "i dont want her back liv I just want you"
Olivia: "el your drunk and you dont know what your saying"
Elliot: "no i've been feeling this way for a long time, why do you think me and kathy argue all the time..." pause... "because were not in love anymore and she knows how I feel for you"
Olivia: "I dont know what to say el...I mean I have feelings for you too but we work together"
Elliot: "I'll quit"
Olivia: "you dont mean that"
moving closer to her and slighty touching her face
Elliot: "yes I do I dont care what it takes I want to be with you"
They begin kissing and Elliot pushes her softly onto the bed while holding her back, just as Elliot takes his shirt off Livs phone rings. She tries to ignore it but it keeps on ringing. She gets up to answer it.
Olivia: "wat-I mean benson"
Caller: is that any way to answer your phone when an old friend calls"
Olivia puts the phone on speaker so Elliot can hear the person on the phone
Olivia: "who is this"
Caller: "maybe you should close your blinds before you sleep with a married man"
Liv and El look at the window, the blinds are open...THEY HEAR A KNOCK AT THE DOOR...

I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT NEXT TIME IT WILL BE LONGER I PROMISE BUT ANYWAY I HOPE YOU LIKE IT AND PLEASE COMMENT biggrin.gif
Sarah1989
Yeah I like it smile.gif Continue please
Aliecia
I love this! PLease Please continue
EODOlover
O F*CK
Addicted2Benson
Elliot gets his gun off the night stand and walks over to the door while Olivia stands beind him with her gun...another knock
Elliot: "who is it"...no answer, Elliot whispers to Liv "call for backup"
As she calls for backup Elliot puts the chain on the door before opening. He slowly opens the door and sees a woman... its kathy
he hesitates before opening the door knowing liv is there and what they just did, he finally opens it
Elliot: "kathy what are you doing here"
Kathy: "what is olivia doing here"
Olivia: "el just called and asked me to stop by, he said you got in an arguement and he wanted to talk to someone"
Kathy: "well I can take it from here"
Olivia: "fine I guess i'll leave"
as she turns to walk away Kathy calls to her and says "thank you"
olivia: "for what"
kathy: "for being there for him"
Olivia walks out of the hotel room feeling guilty
Just as she put the key in the door someone comes up behind her and grabs her shoulder length hair
Person: "if you reach for a gun i WILL slit you throat"
olivia panics not hearing a word he said and reaches for her gun....
SORRY ITS SO SHORT BUT I HOPE YOU LIKE IT ANYWAY!!!!
EODOlover
o f*ck o FUC*K
Sarah1989
ohmy.gif Oh my good. Poor Olivia. But it's really good. Can't wait for moreeee
Addicted2Benson
Sorry its taking me so long to write but I have been working and going to school alot lately so its hard for me to get on but anyway back to the story.

Just as Liv reaches for her gun the backup that she called earlier arrives with their guns drawn at the perp.
Cop:"put the weapon down and step away from the woman now"
the guy stands there quiet and still holding the weapon
cop: "i repeat put the weapon and step away from the woman now"
the perp is choking her and Olivia is now turning blue and feeling faint. she feels herself slipping into a coma and closes her eyes. she hears a gunshot and feels a sharp pain in the back of her head...
I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT I HAVE TO GO TO CHURCH NEXT TIME I PROMISE IT WILL BE ALOT LONGER!!!
svufaneo
poor liv.! update.! ohmy.gif
Aliecia
ARGH!!!
I want more!
Sarah1989
Oh my god more! You can't let me with this short update *loool*
SVUangel161
OMG POST MORE SOON LOVE IT!!!
Addicted2Benson
OKAY I PROMISED A LONGER ONE SO HERE IT IS!!!
Elliot rushes into the e.r.
Elliot says to a nurse while flashing his badge... "there was a shooting outside of a hotel. they said the victim was here."
nurse: "unfortunately you're a little too late. the victim was pronounced dead on arrival."
El goes blank
Nurse: "he sustained fatal injuries to the-"
el: "he?"
Nurse: "yes, the victim is a robert schalls"
El: "is there another victim"
Nurse: "yes, an olivia benson"
El:"liv?"
Nurse: "yes the doctor should be out in a few minutes if you want to talk to him, as a matter of fact there he is now."
El approaches the doctor and ask... "is she alright"
doc: "who are you?"
el: "im her partner detective stabler"
doc:"shes fine, she only sustained minor injuries to the back of the head. the perp was shot by a cop and she fell but shes fine and should be eligible for release in less than an hour"
el: "can i see her?"
doc: "right this way"
Elliot walks into livs room and shes sleeping so he sits in a chair and watches her until she wakes up about ten minutes later.
el: "how you doing?"
liv: "im fine, what happened?"
el: "i dont know all the details yet but whoever did this to you is dead now"
liv: "did what to me?"
el: "im not sure but i will find out"
liv: "what happened with you and kathy?"
el: "like what?"
liv: "did you make up?"
el: "not exactly, i kinda told her that i love you and she left"
liv: "what?"
el: "i cant be with her anymore knowing that im not in love"
liv: "so what are you going to do?"
el: "i was just getting ready to ask you that"
liv: "i dont know... i mean i have too much baggage at this point in my life and i dont want to burden anyone"
el: "i can handle anything as long as we do it together"
captain interrupts their conversation
captain: "we just identified the guy who tried to kill you"
liv: "kill me?"
captain: "yea he put a knife to your neck but was stopped before he could do anything else"
liv: "who?"
captain: "it was simon marsden"
liv: "my brother?"
Aliecia
Okay, that was good. You are quite unpredictable.
EODOlover
damn more please
SVUangel161
that is f***ed up lol. Post more soon love it!!
Sarah1989
AWESOME. Pleaseeeee continue. I want to read more :-)
Addicted2Benson
liv: why would my brother try to kill me?
cap: "i dont know but munch and fin are on their way to jersey to talk to his girlfriend"
liv: "tell them to wait, im on my way"
cap: "no, the doc says you should take a break for a while so when you leave here youre going home and i dont want to hear anything from you"
liv: "no offense cap but whether i go to his house on my own or as a detective under your authority im still going because my brother tried to kill me and i want to know why the hell he did it and i dont want to hear it from munch or fin. the only person who may have the slightest idea as to why is his girlfriend and i am going to talk to her!"
cap: "fine you and el can go but if youre not back in two hours im calling for backup. your brother just tried to kill you and i dont need his girlfriend taking a shot at you too"
liv:"fine"
THE DOC WALKS IN
doc: "youre all set to go"
LIV, EL AND THE CAP ALL EXIT THE HOSPITAL
cap: "you two be safe and remember two hours"...he goes his seperate way leaving el and liv alone
el:"you scared me liv i thought i lost you"
liv: "you wont get rid of me that easily"
el: "i dont ever want to get rid of you"...silence
liv: "so whats going to happen to the kids el"
el:"i dont know but she seemed pretty understanding, she said she already knew what i was feeling"
LIV TAKES THE PASSENGER SEAT AND THEY ARE ON THEIR WAY TO JERSEY
el: "call munch and tell him not to move until we get there"
liv: "hey munch...yea im fine...listen me and el are on out way so dont make any moves until we get there"
munch: "i was just getting ready to call you, me and fin are already here and you wont believe who we just saw"
liv: "who?"
munch: "simon marsden"
LIV LOOKS AT THE PHONE AS IF SHE HAS JUST SEEN A GHOST
Sarah1989
Wow great update! I like it. More please biggrin.gif
Aliecia
Okay that was cool update soon please
svufaneo
hey, i never said you could stop.! laugh.gif but, update soon.! blink.gif i l ove it too much.!
EODOlover
what the fu*k that was good thought
Addicted2Benson
OKAY THIS IS MORE ABOUT E/O SO I HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!
Elliot sped down the New Jersey turnpike and got to Simons house in 30 minutes
Liv: "wait in the car and let me go talk to them."
El: "no, im going with you."
Liv didnt fight back so El got out of the car, grabbed her hand and they walked to the house together.
El: "I thought Fin and John were here"
Liv:"they are"
El:"where are they?"
Liv:"in that car over there...Liv pointed to the car with her free hand...I told them not to go in"
They reach the door and Liv hesitates before knocking. Two minutes later Simon's girlfriend answers the door.
SG:"Liv!"...she gives her a big hug..."how are you, its been a while"
Liv:"Yea I know, is Simon here?"
SG:"Yea hold on"
Simon comes to the door a few minutes later, gives his sister a hug and invites her and El in.
Simon:"so whats up?"
Liv:"im just shocked to see you"
Simon:"why?"
Liv:"its a long story"
Simon:"start from the beginning"
Liv:"well, someone tried to kill me and tried to frame you"
Simon:"what? Did you see him? Where is he?"
Liv:"I never saw him, he was shot and killed, i was sent to the hospital before I could see the persons face"
Simon:"did you believe it was me, what am i saying, of course you believed it, thats why you're here, right?
Liv was silent
El:"no, we're here to prove everyone else wrong"
Simon:"well, now that you know it wasnt me what do you say we go out for a drink, you know like a double date"
Liv and El lokk at each other surprised
Liv:"what makes you think we're dating?"
SG:"its so obvious"
El:"i dont think we can, we have to get back to new york"
Simon:"come on, when do I get to see my big sister"
Liv:"let me just make a phone call"
They're all waiting for Liv in the living room.
Simon:"whats taking her so long?"
El:"i'll go see"
Elliot goes to look for Liv and sees her on the phone in the bathroom.
El:"dont you think you might want to close the door."
Liv:"i wasnt using the bathroom i was talking to the cap"
El:"what did he say?"
Liv:"he said it was fine and to take our time"
El:"oh i'll take my time" el said seductively
Liv:"what?"
Liv tried to turn around but El stops her by standing behind her. he takes in her perfume and is mesmerized. he gives her alittle space to turn around and immediately kisses her, putting his fingers through her long brown hair. She helps him take her shirt off. Neither of them heard thier phones ring. Liv was unbuckling Elliots pants when she heard Munch clear his throat and she pushes El off of her not realizing he already unbuttoned her shirt. she turns to see simon, his girlfriend, munch and fin all staring at her.
Liv:"what are you all doing here?" she says alittle embarrased while closing her shirt back
Munch:"well, since you guys didnt want to answer your phones, cap called me"
El:"what did he say" el said while buckling his pants.
Fin:"we gotta get back to new york. they just found out some shocking news about our perp"
OliviaMyHero
Good good I like it. nope i'm lying!
That was horrible Horribly Good!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UDATE!
Aliecia
So so so good!
Great update.
EODOlover
brilliant
Sarah1989
wow great update! Please moreeee biggrin.gif
Addicted2Benson
I CANT WRITE ANYTHING TODAY BUT I MUST SAY THAT THE SEASON PREMIERE ON NBC WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING...BEST BENSON PERFORMANCE EVER!!! I WAS CRYING YELLING AND SCARED...I WANTED TO KILL THAT GUARD!!! BUT ANYWAY I HAVE TO GO TO BED BUT I HAD TO GET THAT OFF MY CHEST!! I PROMISE TOMORROW TO WRITE MORE AND I HAVE ALOT MORE TO SAY ABOUT THIS EPPY AND NEXT WEEKS BUT I HAVE TO GO TO BED FOR SCHOOL TOMORROW!! MARISKA IA HAVING HER TRUE HOLLYWOOD STORY APRIL 18TH (JUST THOUGHT I SHOULD MENTION IT IN CASE ANYWAY DIDNT KNOW SO NOW YOU CAN WATCH IT)
GOOD NIGHT!! biggrin.gif
Addicted2Benson
OKAY SORRY FOR TAKING SUCH A LONG TIME TO WORTE MORE BUT I HAVE BEEN SEARCHING FOR A SUMMER JOB BUT IM BACK AND THIS CHAPTER IS GREAT SO GET READY!!!


As Elliot and Olivia drive back to the precint neither of them know what to say about what happened and five minutes into the ride Olivia is falling asleep...Elliot looks over and sees this and attempts to start a conversation.
"so, that must have been embarassing having all of them see us"...he says with an awkward laugh that screamed NERVOUS!!!
"if thats all you have to say than i rather you be quiet"...olivia says still half asleep
Elliot:"i know i know but im just trying to say that uuumm i guess what im trying to say is..."
Olivia:"you have no idea what youre trying to say...you dont have to say anything all the time...we both know what happen...we were both there"
Elliot:"i know but dont you think we should talk about it"
Olivia:"lets just act like it never happened"
Elliot:"but why?"
Olivia says nothing...and for the rest of the ride Elliot is left to think to himself...why?
They both pull up to the precint and head for their desk when captain walks in "elliot and olivia...in my office"
Elloit:"wats up cap"
Captain:"we just identified the perp"
liv:"who is it?"
cap:"warner wants to see you"
liv:"who is it?"
cap:"go now"
AT THE M.E's OFFICE
liv:"what is it?"
warner:"you dont sound to happy"
liv:"someone tried to kill me and im being sent around and im getting nowhere and im tired"
warner:"well you came to the right place"
liv:"well"...she says alitte anxious and nervous at the same time
warner:"your guy is actually a woman...a Patricia Cardwell"
liv: "no one could tell by looking at her that she wasnt a man from the beginning"
warner:"not even i could...hes gorgeous but he or she i should say had a sex change about two months ago, you can still see some of the marks from sergury"...she lifts up the blanket from her private..."and no penis"
liv:"so a transgender tried to kill me...what the hell is going on"
warner:"well i sent her name down to one of my friends in comp crimes and got some info"...opens the folder..."your perp Patricia Cardwell was arrested three months ago when she was still a woman for the rape of a little girl but was released because there wasnt enough evidence"..."guess who the arresting officer was"
liv: "i remember her she was a teacher is P.S 16 and she got fired after the accusations"
warner:"she also said that she would pay you back"
liv:"so what was the sex change about"
warner: "it says here it was recommended by an FBI psychiatrist"
liv:"who?"
warner: "Dr.George Wuang"
svufaneo
woah.! blink.gif
nice little twist.! wink.gif
ok, now you really need to update on this one, hun.!
cause i cant wait.! biggrin.gif
Aliecia
Ok that's so cool!
More please you know you need to update,.
SVUangel161
wow nice twist in the story I never saw that coming post more soon love it
Sarah1989
PERFECT! Please update soon. I can't wait :-)
Addicted2Benson
Elliot drove like a maniac to Wuangs office and got there in ten minutes
El:"i cant believe Wuang...when did he start perscribing sex changse"
Liv:"what are you getting so upset about"
El:"why are you not upset when he...or she...or IT tried to kill you"
Liv:"i know but im still here so what you need to do is relax because getting upset about everything isnt going to help us solve this case"
El:"sure"
As Liv and El approached Wuangs door Olivia got nervous about Elliots possible reaction so she grabbed his hand
El:"what are you doing"
Liv:"making sure you're okay"
Elliot didnt say anything but at that moment he felt like nothing could make him angry..all was perfect
Wuang opens the door..."wats up"
Liv:"we were actually getting ready to ask you that"
Wuang:"what are you talking about"
El:"you perscribing sex changes now"
Wuang:"what are you talking about"
El:"Patricia Cardwell"
Wuang:"come in"
Elliot:"so you gonna tell us whats going on"
Wuang:"Patricia was one of my old patients...she was having alot of sexual problems...she couldnt function properly as a woman and I thought it was best for her to have a sex change..."
Elliot:"its that simple"
Wuang:"no...she was taking testosterone but it wasnt working...she was producing sperm in a females body...it was irreversible...so i suggested the best possible thing...a sex change"
Liv:"she still didnt have a penis"
Wuang:"that procedure is alittle more complicated but medically perscribed testosterone was helping her become more of a man...why are you concerned about this"
Liv:"she tried to kill me"
Wuang:"what?!"
Liv:"did she ever seem angry like she wanted to harm someone"
Wuang:"she did talk about a cop who arrested her but she didnt talk too much about it...all she said was she was going to go talk to the cop"
Liv:"and you didnt say anything"
Wuang:"i cant thats confidential...she didnt threaten anyone"
Liv:"yeah she just tried to kill me...she said sarcastically
Wuang:"i didnt know"
Elliot:"well maybe you werent paying attention"
Wuang:"what...he was getting upset"
Liv:"lets just go el"
They walked out the door once again holding hands and got on the elevator. They were alnoe and Elliot felt free to express himself..."liv i need to tell you something"
Liv:"what?"
Elliot:"i kind of been thinking bout what happened at your brothers house"
Liv:"again"
Elliot:"yea...i cant stop thinking about it"
Liv:"so what do you want to talk about"
Elliot:"why did it happen"
Liv:"i font know...it just did"
The elevator door opened and they walked to the car
As they drove Liv realized they were going the wrong way
Liv:"where we going"
Elliot:"i gotta go to my house"
Liv:"you can take me to the precint"
Elliot:"it'll only take a minute"
Liv:"whatever"
Elliot parked in front of the house and opened the door for liv...she didnt move
Elliot:"are you coming"
Liv:"i'll just wait here"
Elliot:"come on stop being afraid im not gonna touch you"
Liv:"alright"
They walk into the one bedroom apartment and it is completely dark and cold"
Elliot:"wait right here i'll be right back"
Liv searches for a light but gives up after five minutes and sits on the couch in the dark
Elliot:"liv where are you"
Liv:"on the couch...do you have lights"
Elliot:"yea but i havent gotten around to changing the bulbs"
Liv:"great...what did you have to get"
Elliot:"nothing"
Liv:"so why are we here"
Elliot:"to talk"
Liv:"in the dark"
Elliot:"its the only way i can express myself"
EODOlover
brilliant
Addicted2Benson
OKAY THIS CHAPTER MAY BE ALITTLE X RATED BUT INTERESTING NONE THE LESS SO I HOPE YOU STILL ENJOY!!!
Liv:"what do you want to tell me that you feel you need to say in the dark elliot"
Elliot:"okay but i need you just to listen without interrupting"
Liv:"im listening"
Elliot:"well you know that im having alot of problems with my marriage and-"
Liv:"yea i know but what-"
Elliot:"just listen"
Liv:"yea okay im sorry...go ahead"
Elliot:"anyway kathy and i havent really talked but she knows what im feeling and shes fine with it but it seems like you dont know what im feeling so im just gonna come right out and say it...he takes a deep breath...liv...pause...i love you and ive been in love with you from the first day i saw you ive never felt this way about anyone not even kathy and even if you dont feel the same way i just need you to know that i will always feel this way about you"
Liv:"i dont know what to say except wow...i mean i have always loved you elliot but you know youre married with kids and i didnt want to get between that"
El:"liv there is nothing between me and kathy and i need you to know that"
He moves closer to Liv and gently grabs her neck and even in the midst of the dark he could feel her beautiful brown eyes looking straight through him and with that he kissed her softly like it was the first time he had ever kissed a woman...it was real. They kissed passionately for about five minutes and he gently pushed her back onto the couch. he lay on top of her and she saw his blue diamonds piercing through at her and at that moment she felt safe he kissed her again while she helped him take his shirt off she slowly explored his muscles he quickly unbuttoned her shirt and removed it from her as he felt her breast against him he became erect and swiflty took off his pants and hers liv was taken back by his sudden fast pace and pushed him away without her having to say anything he knew she wanted him to take it slow he finished undressing the both of them and was ready to go in for the kill he took one of her legs and wrapped it around his waist and slowly pushed himself inside of her 'i cant believe this is happening' she thought to herself 'is this for real' he thought as he thrusted inside of her elliot was the happiest man in the world as he made love to the woman of his dreams...elliots phone rings and he ignores it...livs phone ring and after the third ring she answers it out of breath and in an attempt to sound normal with elliot still deep inside of her..."benson...yea we'll be right there"
Liv:"its cragen and he wants to see us now"

I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT I HOPE YOU LIKED IT AND THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE CRAZY!!!
Aliecia
OK I'm Loving i t
EODOlover
BRILLIANT
Sarah1989
Wow good job! Please, I want to read more :-)
Addicted2Benson
OKAY I KNOW I HAVENT POSTED IN A WHILE BUT I HAVE BEEN PREPARING FOR A DINNER PARTY AND I JUST FINISHED AND IT WAS SOOOO MUCH FUN BUT ANYWAY IM BACK AND I SHOULD BE POSTING REGULARLY...BACK TO THE STORY
Elliot and Olivia arrive to the station an hour after cragens call.
Cragen:"what the hell took you so long?"
El:"sorry cap i guess we lost track of time"
Cragen:"well next time i suggest you keep track or both of you will be filing paper
until you retire...in my office now"
They both enter his office alittle afraid and embarrased.
Cragen:"whats going on with you two"
Liv:"nothing cap just forget it...what was so urgent"
Cragen:"we got a serious problem"
El:"well are you gonna tell us or have us sit here with our thumbs up our asses"
Cragen gives him a mean stare..."a little girl was just found in an alley on bleecker street"
Liv:"is she alive?"
Cragen:"barely...get to the hospital now and i mean now detectives"
They rush to the hospital and get there in ten minutes where paramedics are working on the little girl
Liv:"what the hell happened"
Paramedic:"i dont know yet we received a phone call about a dead little girl lying naked in an alley
way
Liv:"who called it in?"
Paramedic:"anonomys"
Liv:"why would someone call paramedics for a dead girl instead of calling the cops"
El:"they must have known she wasnt dead"
Liv:"you mean our perp called it in"
El:"how else would they have known and why wouldnt they have stayed"
Liv:"i dont know but i hope she wakes up soon so we can ask her"
Paramedic:"im sorry detectives but the girl didnt make it"
Liv:"what?"
Paramedic:"there was nothing else we could do whoever called waited too long"
El:"they knew she wasnt going to make it"
Liv:"so why not just leave her there...why go through the process of having to call when the perp knew she would die"
El:"i dont know but whoever called it in sure as hell didnt want to be known"
Liv:"lets get back to the station"
Liv bust open the station door
Munch to Liv:"well whos got your panties in a bunch"
Liv:"not now john...wheres cap"
Fin:"in his office waiting for you to storm in"
Liv storms into the office..."the girl didnt make it"
Cragen:"did you identify her"
Liv:"no...did anyone get in contact with her parents?"
Cragens phone rings..."alright...yea...keep me posted...thanks"
Liv:"who was that?"
Cragen:"csu...they just found another body in the alley"
I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT IM REALLY TIRED I JUST GOT BACK FROM A PARTY AND I AM EXHAUSTED BUT I WILL DEFINITLEY MAKE THE NEXT ONE LONGER biggrin.gif
EODOlover
Wow good job!
OliviaMyHero
ok so cool hurry up!
Aliecia
You really need to update!!
SVUangel161
love it post more soon
Addicted2Benson
I KNOW ITS TAKING A LONG TIME TO UPDATE BUT I HAVE BEEN REALLY BUSY BECAUSE ITS THE END OF THE SCHOOL YEAR AND I HAVE ALOT OF TEST BUT I AM POSTING AS MUCH AS I CAN...SORRY ITS TAKING SO LONG
El and Liv rushed back to the crime scene where they met their second victim
Liv:"any i.d on her"
CSI:"yes"
Elliot:"are you gonna tell us who she is"
CSI:"yes"
Elliot:"who the hell is it?"
CSI:"the i.d says maria santos but im not so sure"
Liv:"why"
CSI:"shes not hispanic"
Liv:"maybe shes married"
CSI:"thats the thing she has no wedding ring"
Liv:"any relation to the little girl we found earlier"
CSI:"i dont think so"
Liv:"so we have two different bodies in the same location with no relation to each other...i find that hard to believe im gonna ask the little girl"
CSI:"well we'll let you know if we find anything"
Liv:"thanks"
As they drive back to the station
El:"liv i think we need to talk"
Liv:"about what"
El:"about what happened at my house"
Liv:"i think we should just leave it alone"
El:"why do you always get defensive when i want to talk about me and you"...liv is silent..."hello liv did you hear what i said"
Liv"huh...um yea i heard you"
El:"so whats wrong"
Liv:"El...um i dont know how to really say this but um..."
El:"what is it liv?"
Liv:"im kinda seeing someone right now"
Elliot fell silent and didnt speak for the rest of the ride he couldnt believe what he had just heard.
They pull up to the station and before Liv gets out she hears Elliot slamming his door and sees him walking into the precint she follows behind him.
Cragen:"what the hell is wrong El?"
Liv:"i dont know"
Cragen:"well find out cuz i cant have one of my best detectives upset when he has a job to do"
Liv:"fine i'll ask him when im finished questioning the girl"
Cragen:"did you i.d the second"
Liv:"maria santos"
Cragen:"go see if she knows her"
Liv walks into the childrens interrogation room
Liv:"hey sweetie my name is olivia and im here to help you...can you tell me your name?
girl:"i want my mommy"
liv:"we're gonna find her but first i need to know your name
girl:chanell
liv:"okay chanell can you tell me the last person you were with"
chanell:my mommy where is she?"
liv:"we're gonna find her for you...can you tell me her name?"
chanell:"maria...she helped me when my real mommy left and she said i can call her mommy"
liv:"do you know where your real mommy is"
chanell doesnt say anything she just looks down
liv:"thats okay sweetie...i'll be right back"
liv walks out the room"
Liv to cragen:"wasnt expecting that...what do you want me to do?"
cragen:"talk to elliot we're gonna give her something to eat and maybe she'll have more to say"
liv goes to find elliot in the locker room
liv:"elliot"
el:"what?"
liv:"can we talk"
el:"now you wanna talk...why didnt you tell me"
liv:"i was going to"
el:"when before or after we had sex"
they hear the locker door close
cragen:"both of you to my office now"
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