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Ch. 1

It was another Friday in the 1-6 precinct. Eveyone was hard at work on the new case they just got. Except no one was getting anywhere; they had no leads && couldn't even identify their Jane Doe. at about 5:00 the Captain came out of his office only to hear the small conversations among his detectives. He told them all to go home, if they found anything he would let them know. Fin, Munch, && Lake were the first ones to leave. He then went back to his office. Once more he came out to see his two lead detectives still at their desks. He didn't know why Olivia was still here because he thought he heard her say something about going out to dinner with "Thomas."

[flashbckk].
Fin: Hey Olivia, why didn't you answer your phone awhile ago?
Olivia: Did we get something on the case?
Munch: No, but you didn't answer.
Olivia: Oh.
Fin: So why didn't you? [Elliot walks in]
Elliot: Didn't what?
Munch: Olivia didn't answer her phone.
Elliot: How come Liv?
Olivia: I was having dinner.
Elliot: With who?
Olivia: Why would I be with someone.
Elliot: You always answer your phone unless your on one of your "famous dates."
Olivia: . . . . We just had dinner, nothing else.
Fin: Olivia on a date?
Elliot: So when are you "having dinner again?" [saying discusted]
Olivia: He wants me to go out Friday once I get off work. But I'm not sure.
Munch: Why not?
Olivia: It just doesn't feel right you know? [looking at Elliot]
[end of flashbckk.]

Cragen: Olivia why are you still here? I thought you had plans.
Olivia: I don't know.
Cragen: Just try it.
Olivia: . . . . .
Cragen: No excuses, get out of here, we'll call if we find out something.
Olivia: Fine. Bye El. Bye Cap.

With that she left the precinct. She slowly made her way to her apartment complex. Even though it was only 2 blocks away; the walk was long. The brisk New York wind blew upon her coat she pulled it tighter around her. She finally made her way into her building && onto the elevator. She went on into her apartment. Laying her keys, gun && badge on her counter. She saw her machine blinking. 8 New messages. She walked over && pressed play.

Thomas: Hey babe. Remember tonight. Gimme a call.

SHe thought to herself how obnoxious could he be? He knew she got off usually at 7 && it was only 5:40. This was one of the reasons she didn't like him much. He seemed like he was only with her for sex anyway. && She wasn't about to get put into one of those situations again. She would end it tonight after dinner. So she picked up her phone && dialed his number. It only rang once.

Thomas: Hey sexy I'll be over in twenty.
Olivia: Bu. t. .
Thomas: Just wear something sexy.
Olivia: But we need to talk.
Thomas: Later. Be ready. Ok.
Olivia: Thomas.
Thomas: Bye. [with that he hung up]

By the time she founf her only half-way descent dress && reddi her hair && makeup she heard him at her door. SHe let him in && told him she would be a few. She headed back into her room to get her coat, all the while thinking of ways to tell him it was over.

Thomas: Come on you look hott enough.
Olivia: Ok. ready.

She came out of her bedroom && motioned for himto follow her out && so he did. Once in the elevator he had already tried to make a move on her, But she stopped him before he could go anywhere.

Olivia: Stop. Stop.
Thomas: Ok. Calm down.
Olivia: So umm. . where are we going?
Thomas: Some new one on 53rd && Market.

The elevator door ringed && they both stepped out && walked to his car. He didn't even bother to open her door. She knew they would never work out if he didn't even ave enough manners to open her door. So the ride to the resturant was silent except for the radio.

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Ch. 2

Once they got to the resturant he pulled into one of the parking spaces. Before he got out he turned to kiss her but only got a pec on the cheek. Dissatisfied he got up && got out of the car. [size="4"]She soon followed. They walked towards the doors, hand-in-hand. They went in && a waitress took them to a booth-like table towards the back of the resturant.



Waitress: What can I get you two to drink?

Olivia: Umm. I'll have a tea please.

Thomas: Get me a beer.

Waitress: I'll be back in a few to get your orders.

Olivia: Ok. Thanks.



Olivia: Could you have been more rude to her, she's just trying to do her job?

Thomas: Why does it bother you?

Olivia: Because were here together you know.

Thomas: Your to nice.

Olivia: && your too rude.

Thomas: Fine. I'll be nicer next time.

Olivia: Good. That's all I ask.



The waitress came back with their drinks.



Waitress: Do you know what you'd like?

Olivia: I think I'll have the Chicken Salad please.

Waitress: && you.

Thomas: The Steak dinner. . . please.

Waitress: Ok, I'll go put your orders in.



They had been sitting there for about 20 minutes && she had heard "Your so sexy" for the millionth time; after about the 10th time it became aggravating. She felt like some dirty whore when men called her sexy. She would much rather be called beautiful. This brought back memories.



[flashbckk.]

It was about a year ago. Yes because Elliot had just finalized his divorce. The Policeman's Ball was just a couple hours away && Olivia had just seen her dress && done her makeup. Casey had went to buy it one day while Olivia was at work becase she knew if she went to buy something to wear she'd come back with some jeans && shirts. It was a dark brown with a gold like trim around the neck. It accentuated her body perfectly && made her chocolate eyes pop. She was supposed to meet all the guys at the bar before so they could get some drinks. When she walked through the doors at the bar evryone's eyes were on her. Fin, Munch, && even Elliot were in awe. She went over to where they were sitting && took a stool next to Elliot.

Fin: WOW!

Munch: Wow is right.

Olivia: Uhh. Thanks guys.

Elliot: So that dress. It looks. . . .

Olivia: It looks horrible doesn't it. I told Casey it looked I would look bad in it. I'm going home to change, my jeans will be perfectly fine. I don't care.

Elliot: No Liv don't. The dress looks great. && you look. .

Olivia: I look what El?

Elliot: You look. . . BEaUTIFUL.

Olivia: Thank you El. [she said blushing.]

[end of flashbckk.]



For some reason after that night her feelings for Elliot deepend. She knew before how she felt about him but since when did he notice how she looked in her clothes. Did he feel the same way? Was he just being a good best friend? She didn't know. If she asked would it ruin their friendship? Would it ruin everything? Her thoughts were so abruptly interrupted by Thomas's hand rubbing her upper arm.



Thomas: You okay babe?

Olivia: Yea, I think. I'm just going to go to the restroom.

Thomas: Ok.



SHe got up && subtlely took her cell phone into her jacket pocket so he wouldn't see it. She quietly asked a waitress in which direction the restroom was && walked in that direction unitl she found it. She pushed open the door && hoped no one was in there. Luckily there wasn't. She went into a stall && took out her phone && dialed Casey. It must've rang 6 or 7 times because she was giong to hang up when she answered.



Casey: Hello.

Olivia: Hey Casey, umm are you doing anything right now?

Casey: Were in a recess, why something wrong?

Olivia: Not really but I needed someone to pick me up or call && say we've got something on the case to get me out of this date from hell.

Casey: Your not drunk are you.

Olivia: No. This is horrible. I. . . just.

Casey: Umm. . Well I'll figure something out, just at 6:35. uhh call me back I should be out by then. Ok.

Olivia: Thanks.

Casey: Uh-huh. Bye.

Olivia: Bye.



She left the bathroom && headed back to the table once she got there Thomas was digging into his steak. He didn't even wait for her to get back. She glanced at her phone to see how long it would be before she would need to call back Casey. It read 6:15. 20 more minutes, he might think I'm sick. So he'll end it early. They finished their food && he ordered dessert. 20 minutes passed slowly && she went back to the restroom && dialed her number once more.



Casey: Olivia.

Olivia. Yes. What are we going to do?

Casey: Were done I'll be there in about 10 minutes just come to the front && I'll pick you up && take you home or something.

Olivia: Ok. Could we talk? I just need to clear my head. I mean if you want to.

Casey: Yepp that's fine. I'm sure I know what you'll want to talk about though. But where is this place anyway?

Olivia: Uhh. 53rd && avenue.

Casey: Ok. I'll be there. Bye.

Olivia: Bye.



She left the bathroom && went to sit down. He had saved her two bites of his chocolate covered browine. It was really good. She had to find a way to stall him for ten minutes until she got there but how?



Olivia: Thomas let's get some champagne.

Thomas: Uhh. Ok. What kind?

Olivia: I don't know surprise me.



He motioned for their waitress to come over && her ordered them a bottle of champagne. a coulpe minutes later she brought their glasses && then the ice box && champagne. 10 minutes were up && they were done with && he went to go pay she said she'd wait in the car. She left out the front door && headed for what looked to be Casey's car. She went to the passenger side && opened the door to get in but was stunned when she saw who was driving the car. It wasn't Casey it was Elliot.



Olivia: Wh. h. y. are you here? I thought. . .

Elliot: She called me.

Olivia: But. Why?

Elliot: Get in out of the cold && before he sees you getting into another car other than his.

Olivia: Yea. I guess I should huh?

Elliot: It would help if you wanted to get out of your date.

Elliot: So would you like some food before we stop?

Olivia: Stop where?

Elliot: Central Park.

Olivia: Why are we going there?

Elliot: Casey also told me you needed to clear your head && I remember you telling me you like to go there at night when no one else is there to think && stuff. So I figured I'd take you there for a while let you think then take you home. Is that ok?

Olivia: You remembered that?

Elliot: Uhh yea. I did.

Olivia: Wow. . I didn't know you did. . Well let's get going before he comes out && notices I'm not there.

Elliot: Good idea.



They were on the road && they both reached to turn the radio on && their hands met. That spark she felt, she felt it the night he called her beautiful. That dress she had it on NOW. all those memories came flooding back to both of them. His eyes how they shined when they touched. Her eyes were glued to him. SHe quickly looked away but she couldn't hide her smile. He turned his attention back to the road but neither could get this off their minds. This would be something she would think about all night long. He turned into the park. They slowly got out && she headed to the swing sets like a little kid. He quickly followed. Little did either of them know this night would change their lives.



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When he got to the swings she was sitting there pushing herself with her feet. He took the swing next to her && did the same.

Elliot: So. . Do you feel ok.. with me here. I know you like to be alone but it's late && I'm your ride home.
Liv: El, your overprotective.
Elliot: I've got to protect my best friend.
Liv: Sure El, I'm fine. I think to myself.
Elliot: Do you feel like talking bout it?
Liv:. . .
Elliot: I know during the divorce I felt better after our late nite talks.
Liv: Isn't that why she divorced you in the first place?
Elliot: What?
Liv: Me.
Elliot: No. Liv. don't even think like that. We did not get divorced because of you. && You know that.

There was a short silence. Until he could see she was thinking && went over && caught her off guard && gave her swing a light push sending her gliding through the air.

Liv: What are you doing?
Elliot: What you do in the park. Swinging.
Liv: El. .
Elliot: Uh-huh.
Liv: DO you ever feel like that your going to keep waiting on something && then you decide to take things into your own hands &&. . .
Elliot: They won't feel the same?
Liv: Yes. . no, I meam no. hypothetically thinking.
Elliot: Well hypothetically yes. But if she feels the same then everything will fall into place && we'll be together.
Liv: But what if you wait to long to say something?
Elliot: You'll still in his heart Liv. No matter what.
Liv: Look at me. . .
Elliot: What?
Liv: I'm turning 38 in 4 months.
Elliot: So. I turn 41 in about 3.
Liv: Elliot, my life is almost over. && I still don't have. . .
Elliot: a family?
Liv: Yes.
Elliot: You'll have yourself a family. [if I hve anything to do with it] he said under his breath.
Liv: How do you know?
Elliot: You will.

She got up && turned around in her swing so that she was facing him. This was the first time he had actually saw how beautiful she was. He stood there gawking at her until her phone rang. She brought it out of her coat pocket to see the caller i.d say Thomas.

Liv: crap. It's him El. What do I tell him?
Elliot: Here.

He took the phone from her && answered it.

Elliot: Hello.
Thomas: Who is this?
Elliot: WHo is this?
Thomas: I'm looking foe my girlfriend && this is her cell. Is that little whore with someone else?
Elliot: How dare you call her something like that. You little . . . .

Elliot cussed him for a good 10 minutes before Liv took the phone form him. She just pushed the end button.

Liv: What was that bout?
Elliot: Nothing I took care of him for you.
Liv: What did he say El. Tell me.
Elliot: He called you a whore, he thought you were out with me.
Liv: I am. with you. Elliot: No like on another date.
Liv: Good.
Elliot: What?
Liv: Im glad I'm 37 && single.
Elliot: You'll fond someone. Don't worry.
Liv: EL you don't get it do you?
Elliot: No Liv I don't so inform me.
Liv: My mother was right.

By now he was sure he saw a tear roll down her cheek.

Elliot: bout what?
Liv: I'm never going to have someone love me.
Elliot: YESSS. you will.
Liv: No. I won't.
Elliot: You already do.
Liv: WHo?
Elliot:. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

He pulled her up from the swing && took her into his arms && wiped the tear off her cheek before he slowly bent down && &&&&&&&.


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Elliot slowly bent down and caressed her cheek with his hand && before she could so anything he lightly kissed her lips. They had now moved from where she was sitting in the swing to being backed up on the pole of the swing set. They kissed for only a while before she stepped back from him and he couldn't tell how she was feeling by the look on her face. He thought she would try to run but to his amazement she didn't. A few short moments of silence seemed like forever but she spoke up.

Liv: I. . uh. wh. was. . th
Elliot: God Liv I'm so sorry. I shouldn't of done that. I don't know what was going through my head.

If she didn't stop him he would of rambled on forever. But all she did was push her herself into him &&
kiss him once more. He was took back but was not about to object. After she kissed him she stepped back && looked him staight in the eyes.

Liv: I just wanted to make sure it was for real. We really kissed. [she said laughing.]
Elliot: Well how about I make sure we just kissed then?
Liv: Your not mad?
Elliot: I kissed you first remember?
Liv: I do.

By the size of the smile on her face he knew he finally found the woman he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. He alaways knew the feelings he had for her were more than what he put on. But did she feel the same? He didn't know. What he did know was that she looked absolutely stunning in that dress && she was one heck of a kisser.

Elliot: So, is it a good thing you wanted to make sure we kissed or what?
Liv: Let's take a walk around the park.
Elliot: You can't kiss a guy && then say "Let's take a walk around the park." Come on Liv.
Liv: I'll tell you. . . while were walking. Is that good enough?
Elliot: I guess it'll have to be right?
Liv: You got it.

They made their way off of the playground && headed for the path that went throught the park. He reached down && took her hand in his just like all the elderly couples they would see walking during the day. She willingly accepted and squeezed his hand a little tighter. She glanced up at him && smiled one of those smiles that made his heart melt. He sent her one of his famous "Stabler smiles." All they could see was the street lights that were strewn thoughout the park. && each other of course.

Elliot: So now you have to answer my question. Were taking a walk through the park like you wanted && you can answer my questions like I wanted.
Liv: You can't tell me you don't like walking throught the park when your by yourself, no little kids on bikes trying to run you over, those outrageous power walkers, && all the other distractions. It's so peaceful.
Elliot: I do like being out here but only because I'm walking through the park with you.
Liv: It's just a park El.
Elliot: I know. I just like being here with you. You know. Now quit trying to change the subject && answer my question.
Liv: OK. OK.
Elliot: I'm waiting.
Liv: Hold on I'm trying to figure out how to say it right.
Elliot: Just tell me.
Liv: Alright. . . . I've known for a while that my feelings for you were ones I WAS NOT supposed to have. Not just because you were my co-worker but because you were married && my best friend. I sort of felt like I was. . I don't know how to say it but they were feelings I tried to hide so you wouldn't fond out. I thought if he finds out we'll never be able to work together again && I couldn't bare that. You don't know how mant times I've tried to tell myself you don't feel this way, your not head over heels in love. . . .
Elliot: LOVE?
Liv: I knew you wouldn't love me && that's why I had to make sure we really did kiss. So I could tell myself once more it was just a kiss between best friends. Because I knew. . . . . . .

He stopped right there on the middle of the park && turned her around to where he could see her face && looked at her. He kissed her this time it was filled with passion && angst. He brought his arm && placed it on her waist. && just as he did that she brought her arm that was hanging aimlessy && put it on his back. He deepend the kiss when he noticed a smile creep across his face from hers. She titled her head back. They kissed for a good couple minutes when they had to come up for air. He slowly brought his lips away from hers like it was their last kiss && stood in front of her, with the light pole behind them being their only light. They were both sort of in an awe.

Elliot: Now could you tell me if you've ever seen best friends kiss like that?
Liv: I think we just did.
Elliot: Liv, when are you going to get it through your head were more than best friends, we have been for a while.
Liv: El. .
Elliot: Oliva Benson. You are more than a best friend to me && I don't know how much longer I can keep hiding my feelings from you. So I'm just gonna come out && tell you. . . I. . . . . Love. . . . . You.


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She pulled herself out of his embrace, && looked up at him.

Olivia: El. Don't. .
Elliot: Don't what Liv?
Olivia: Don't say that.
Elliot: Why not? If I can't say it to you then who will I tell it too?
Olivia: Your wife. Were BEST FRIENDS.
Elliot: But if I tell it to Kathy it won't be true.
Olivia: El. You have to still love her, you went back to her.
Elliot: Is that why you think me telling you I love you doesn't mean a thing?
Olivia: Why did you go back then?
Elliot: To make sure I felt this way before I made an ass of myself but I guess that ship has already sailed. Huh? I thought that maybe, just maybe you would feel the same way.
Olivia: El. . . . . . . I do. But. .
Elliot: But nothing. Liv.
Olivia: We can't do this.
Elliot: WHY NOT?
Olivia: I remember the last time I got involved with a co-worker.
Elliot: Cassidy? You didn't get "involved" with him. You two just had sex. I want more than that.
Olivia: Elliot I can't do it.
Elliot: Can't or won't? Liv you && I both know we've been more than friends for the last couple years. Hell everyone in New York state knows it.
Olivia: Elliot, You need a woman who you can come home at night to && be ready with dinner on the table && your perfect little kids everything in place && I can't give you perfection. Never will I be able to either.
Elliot: I don't want perfection. I want you.
Olivia: No you don't El.
Elliot: Just listen to me. If this is all you hear tonight. Then that's fine. But just hear me out.
Olivia: Fine.
Elliot: From the day I saw you wlak through those precinct doors, you had me. I didn't know what to do I had never felt like that before. Not even with Kathy, so I knew it was the real deal. But I also knew we were co-workers. But little did I know you would grow to become one of my best friends. Giong home at night I would think && hope yo would get home safe just so I could see you again the next day at work. Kathy knew from the beggining that we were something; I mean I couldn't talk about the cases so we would lay in bed at night, Kathy && me && I would talk about you. How bad is that? But I want so bad to just be something more to you than a Best Friend. && I'm hoping you'll let me. Please. Your the type of woman who will whatever it takes to succeed && I;m going to do whatever it takes to get you. Olivia: El, I've never had anyone say that to me before. Ever. I don't know what to say.

The moonlight shone brightly on the two. && she pulled herself back into his arms && wrapped hers to where they fit perfectly around him. SHe then looked up to him.

Olivia: I don't think you'll have to do much to get me.

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Elliot: What do you mean?
Olivia: I mean . . . . .
Elliot: I don't want you to think I'm pushing you into this. Or if there will be any us.
Olivia: There will be an us for sure. You just have to give me time.
Elliot: I'll give you all the time in the world.
Olivia: That;s what I'm afraid of.
Elliot: Of me waiting for you?
Olivia: No. You waiting all this time on me when you could of found your soulmate && then it not work ou the way we want it to.
Elliot: Listen to me. YOU are the only one for me. I've never ever in my entire life felt the same way as I do when I'm with you.
Olivia: Me too.

She grabbs his hand && pulls him towards the pathway again. They begin to walk through the park. Start a conversation && their walking hand in hand together, like a young teenage couple. [how cutee]

Elliot: So were going to try this?
Olivia:Yeah. I think so.
Elliot: Think so?
Olivia: I know so El, don't worry.
Elliot: I'm really glad you felt the same I really don't know what I would have done if I could have told you.
Olivia: I;m glad you mad e the first move. Because I know I had to do it I would of chickened out.
Elliot: You would of done it.
Olivia: I don't know what I would have done if I told you && YOU didn't feel the same, I probablly switched precincts or something. I couldn't habdle it.
Elliot: But you didn't && even if you wanted to Cragen wouldn't let you.
Olivia: I know. [laughing]

Olivia: But what I don't get is how someone could leave you. I mean your every girls dream or atleast my 7 year old selfs dream guy.
Elliot: You. . 7. . . had a dream guy?
Olivia: Well any man would of been good just to get away from my other. I just wanted someone to love me the way she couldn't.
Elliot: Well I'm here for you && no matter what happens I will always be here. To love you, comfort you, whatever you need I'm your guy. MMk.
Olivia: Good, Because I want to be your every thing to. Really.
Elliot: That's good. because I was going to be yours even if we didn't work out.
Olivia: See El I don't see how Kathy just left you. Your great. WHy did she leave or are you ready to talk? I mean I'm here if you are.
Elliot: Do you really want to know why she left?
Olivia: If you want me to.
Elliot: You should know.
Olivia: Ok, tell me then.
Elliot:. . . . .

He stops her while their walking. && Turns her to him && wraps his arms around her waist && pulls her into his coat.

Elliot: SHe thought I was having an affair.
Olivia: How? You were always at work. WHy would she . that little. . .
Elliot: SHe thought it was. . . . .
Olivia: Who El. Who did she think you were cheating on her with?
Elliot: ummm,
Olivia: You can tell me.
Elliot: SHe thought Iwas having an affiar with you.
Olivia: ME?


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Olivia: What I don't get is how Kathy left you.

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She was stunned that Kathy could think her && El were sleeping together, it just didn't make sense. They were such good friends. She knew they spent alot of time together but that was because of the job.

Olivia: Me? El are you sure?
Elliot: I tried to tell her you weren't the type of woman to sleep with a married man but she just wouldn't believe me.
Olivia: You could of told her that you weren't the type of married man that slept with his co-workers.
Elliot:. . . . . . .
Olivia: You did tell her that El right?
Elliot: Not exactly.
Olivia: What do you mean?
Elliot: You know all those late nights where we would just go out && walk through the city like this?
Olivia: Yea, what does that have to do with it?
Elliot: She told me after about the second time shse would call the precinct to see if I had gotten off && I usually had && whoever she talked with told her that me && you left the precinct together like always.
Olivia: El, but she should have known I would never do that && you. . you would never ruin your marriage.
Elliot: I tried to tell her.
Olivia: Why didn't she believe you?
Elliot: Because. . . .
Olivia: Because why El?
Elliot: [he let out a huge sigh] Look Liv I really don't know how I control myself at work around you, I really don't.
Olivia: Hmm. what.
Elliot: Theres no denying that I have feelings for you ther never will be. I let that slip one night && all hell broke loose.
Olivia: WHAT HAPPENED?
Elliot: You remember the banquet I told you about I had to go to with Kathy a couple months back?
Olivia: Yea.
Elliot: Well I was coming home that day && I was one the phone with her she told me by && said I love you. && well let's just say I told her the I love you but was telling it to you. I'm guessing she didn't hear becuase she didn't say anything but then once I got home she was showing me her dress she had to wear && asked how it looked.
Olivia: What did you say?
Elliot: I go WOW! Liv you look really sexy.
Elliot: SHe went off. && I guess after I told her that I might as well tell her how I feel about you.
Olivia: && how is that?
Elliot: Well. . . .


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Thanks to everyone that commented. This will be sort of a short update Starved is coming on in 25 minutes. Hope you like it.


Olivia: How is that?
Elliot: I've already told you.
Olivia: I know.
Elliot: Why do you want to hear it again for then?
Olivia: I like hearing you say it.
Elliot: Is that it huh?

He said before pulling her into his embrace && engulfing her into a pec on the cheek which lead to a very passionate kiss before they were through. Before continuing on their walk she sighed.

Elliot: WHat?
Olivia: I like that.
Elliot: I'm glad. I like doing it.
Olivia: Me too.
Elliot: Then what's wrong?
Olivia: How do you know something's wrong?
Elliot: I've known you long enough to know when theres something wrong with you, I know you babe.
Olivia: Oh really?
Elliot: YEA, really. But seriously what's on your mind?
Olivia: How are we gonna do this. I know we will but work?
Elliot: Well I've held my feelings for you in for 8 years I can do it until were ready to tell them.
Olivia: BUt I can't.
Elliot: WHy not?
Olivia: I've got you all to myself now. I don't know if I can keep such a wonderful thing like that to myself at least not long.
Elliot: Well we could just go into work tomorrow && tell the captain.
Olivia: But what if. . . . .
Elliot: Non of these what if's ok. I want to be with you.
Olivia: I do too.
Elliot: We can compromise I guess.
Olivia: As long as I have you it's ok.
Elliot: Good. Because if I had to give you up now that I have you . . well I don't know . . :]
Olivia: What do you mean I don't know?
Elliot: I really like you && I don't know what I'd do without seeing you. Your beautiful eyes I melt in. Your smile could brighten a dead man's day && I really like that little bottom of yours.

He playfully slaps her just to see her smile.

Elliot: See there it is.
Olivia: You just like me for my body huh?
Elliot: No. Your personality is so sexy too.
Olivia: Hmm.
Elliot: So me. WHat does the detective like?
Olivia: Well your eyes are like looking at the ocean, which I do love. && Your muscles well let's just say my hands will be touching them an aawful lot:) && your "stabler booty"
Elliot: My booty?
Olivia: Yea,it's pretty much perfect.
Elliot: No your pretty much perfect.
Olivia: WHat do you say we get out of here?
Elliot: Where to my lady?
Olivia: Hmmm? Wherever you'd like. Surprise me.
Elliot: Ok. Let;s get out of here then.

They begin walking back to the car. WHo knows where Elliot will take them?
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So this will be the first time I've ever did a smut type scene I guess that's what it's called so let me know completely what you think. Please, r&&r. I really want to know what you think of this chapter.

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He led her to her side of the car adn snatched a quick kiss before retreating to his side of the car.

Olivia: Hmm. So where are we going?
Elliot: It's a surprise remember.
Olivia: Come on El.
Elliot: Nope.
OliviaL PLEASE, tell me.
She made the cutest outy face he had ever seen. Even better then any of his daughters.

Elliot: No, Liv you can't do that pouty thing with me.
Olivia: But why not?
Elliot: Because. . . . I'll telll you.
Olivia: Really?
Elliot: Yepp.
Olivia:. . . . So?
Elliot: When we get there.
Olivia: Come on.
Elliot: Nope. You'll like it I promise though or atleast I hope.
Olivia: Do I know this place?
Elliot: Yes, very well.
Olivia: Were not going to the precinct are we? Please tell me we aren't.
Elliot: No.
Olivia: Good. Hmm. ?
Elliot: You'll see we'll be there in 10 minutes tops.
Olivia: Fine. I'll wait but this better be good Stabler.

With that she reached over to the driver's side of his car && kissed him, not a pec but a very deep one to say the least.

Hope you like. Will add part 2 tonite
I know this part isn't very good but it will be getting better.