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imsvu23
After working on a 3 day case, with no break, no going home, and being stuck in the precienct, Elliot and Olivia were ready to go home.
El: alright well i'll see you later, Liv

Liv: k, good night.
He kept staring at her as he put on his jacket. He didn't really want to go home, he just wanted to go out and have a drink or two.
El: hey do you wanna go grab a Long Island at Melone's?

Liv:uh, who's buying?

El: (laughs) i guess me.

Liv: no im playing, um yea why not?
She put on her jacket and grabbed her keys.

El: why take your keys? just leave em here, i can take you home.

Liv:you sure? its ok i can drive, i wont get drunk

El:yea but i might, i need someone to drive if i do
She left her keys on her desk and followed him out the door. It was quarter to midnight and the night was still and quiet as they walked out into the parking lot. He unlocked the door and Olivia got in the passenger seat.
He turned on the radio and they drove off.

El: tough day huh?

Liv:yea i thought the day would never be over. This case really hit hard.

El: yea i figured it would get to ya. I mean we were dealing with a teen mom who dumped her new born into the river. God, you know how can you do that? i mean i look at Eli and i think God im lucky to have him. I don't see how you can take an innocent child and do away with them

Liv: well she was raped, and i guess the thought of her carrying a child from rape just wasn't gonna cut it for her. I just um.....
She drifted off and stared out her side of the window. They were at a stop light which abled El to put his hand on her hand that was set on the glove compartment.
El: hey, you did good with this case though, Liv. You did good. Don't worry about it, your mom was so lucky to have you as her daughter.
Liv:somehow i want to beleive you El, i really do, but i just can't fake the fact that i was a child of rape. I will never know how my mother put up with it. I can't say that it's hard to look at a child and not want to get rid of it. You have Eli, along with four other beautiful children, and my time is almost up and i don't have anyone still.

El:...you have me.

Liv:(whispers) i wish i did

El: what do you mean, of course you do...

T
he car behind them honked.
Liv: El, the light turned green, go
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so this is my 3rd story, let me know what you all think so far. i like it, dont know how i will take this....but whatever....smile.gif
Aliecia
MORE MORE! MORE! Please
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Hi Bubba here, ...

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8ElandLiv8
That was really good. Update soon. biggrin.gif
EODOlover
QUOTE (Bubba_Bridges @ Mar 25 2008, 02:31 PM) *
Hi Bubba here, ...



You didn't like it, did you? laugh.gif
i loved it
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imsvu23
LOL omg this is what i LIKE to read! thanks guys!!
ok ok here i go, its 11:20 lets see what i can stir up this late at night! hehe
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He didn't respond to her when she addressed him that the light had turned green
The car behind them honked once more and the driver yelled out

driver:hey, what the hell dude, move it!

Elliot rolled down the window and yelled back,

El: you hold your dirty drawers you jerk!

Olivia looked at him and said

Liv: Oh my God El, what are you doing just go!

He pushed on the pedal slowly and began to drive. The car went around them towards Olivia's side and yelled out once more

Driver: where'd ya learn how to drive loser?

He rolled down her side of the window.

El: in your mother's backyard A hole!

Liv: oh my God, El, you're gonna get us killed.

El: what? you afraid of that guy? Please....

They sat quiet til they got to the bar. He turned off the car and sighed. Olivia was about to unbuckle her seatbelt and open the door until he spoke.

El: Liv, you gotta know that i am here for you. For whatever it is you need. I mean it..

Liv: El, its ok really. Come on, you can buy me my first beer.

She opened the door and fixed her jacket. She shut it just before Elliot shut his. They walked in together.

Bartender: hey folks, can i get you two lovelys something to drink?

El:uh we'll both take a couple of beers, the best you got.

Bartender: aww come on, don't treat your date with some cheap 3 dollar beer. Get her a nice drink mister!

They looked at each other and laughed.

Liv: no it's ok. im good with the 3 dollar beer. We don't have a lot to spend anyway..

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ugh im sorry im really tired now! lol i will come on tomorrow and write more peeps! see ya!

Sarah1989
That's soooo good. Moreeeeeeee please
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8ElandLiv8
Great update.
Aliecia
I'm loving it!
svufaneo
darn cliffhangers.! dry.gif UPDATE SOON.! smile.gif
imsvu23
thanks for the reviews guys! smile.gif

ok im back.
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After Elliot's 7th beer and Olivia's 5th and a shot of tequila that Elliot dared she couldn't drink,they decided that it was time to leave. Not only that, but the bartender was throwing em out on the count of they were the only ones in there and it was closing time.

Elliot: (in a loud tone voice) SO, Livy, you have fun tonight?

Olivia: uh yea i did. thanks for that. SO....who's driving?

Elliot: ahh, i can do it, im fine.

Olivia: El, you had 7 beers, i only have 5, i think i can do it.

Elliot: oh but let's not forget who had that shot. I'm fine really.

Together, they stumbled out the bar and into the parking lot.
There were some on duty cops sitting in their car, watching them walk out.

Cop 1: they look a little drunk to be driving, Lewis?

Cop 2: oh let em go. They look like they're gonna go home and do the nasty anyway. Let em be, Rackers.

Elliot unlocked the door and opened her side for her first.

Elliot: there you go m'lady.

Olivia: (laughing) thank you sir.

He closed the door and skidded his feet to his side. He got in and turned on the car.
Then before he backed up, he just sat there staring at her, fixing her jacket once more.
She noticed that they had not yet moved and looked over towards him.

Olivia: what? you ok?

Elliot: um, no i gotta pee.

Olivia:(laughs) uh, well go back in the bar, go see if its still unlocked.

Elliot: uh, i'll be back, sorry

Olivia: take your time....

He hopped out of the car and ran to the entrance of the bar. Meanwhile, Olivia kept laughing at her partner. She never knew how funny he can be outside of work. Probably because they never spent time outside of work.
Then she heard a knock on the window on her side.
He rolled it down

Olivia: what are you doing now?

Elliot: its closed, the lights are off inside. That lady is gone. Olivia i gotta piss so bad it's not even funny.

Olivia sat there laughing in his face.

Elliot: im serious Liv!

Olivia: well just go over there, behind that dumpster, i won't look i promise.

Elliot: what? ew no, are you kidding me, the cops will see me.

Olivia: well, here let me drive and we'll go to my house first, its closer and then you can go there.

Elliot: oooh, alright but hurry. i don't think i can hold it anymore

She got out of the car still laughing. She walked around and got in the car again. They drove off as quick as they could to her apartment.
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do your thing people! gracias!
8ElandLiv8
Great update. That was very funny.
imsvu23
QUOTE (8ElandLiv8 @ Mar 28 2008, 04:44 PM) *
Great update. That was very funny.



haha thank you!
EODOlover
please more and soon
svufaneo
agh.! *slight heart attack* update.! laugh.gif very very funny. i love it.!
Sarah1989
That' so good sweety. I loooooove it and want to read more biggrin.gif Good job my CSI partner :-)
imsvu23
thanks for the awesome reviews guys and gals!
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Olivia ran through so many stop lights, she was sure some cop on duty was going to pull her over. But she couldn't help the fact that her partner was yelling at her to go through the lights all because he had to take a leak. It wasn't long til they got to her apartment.

Elliot: well Olivia, its about time. Now hurry get out and opent the door.

Olivia: well gee El, you wanna chill for a sec?

She reached for her house key and got out. He was already at the door hoping on each foot hol,ding himself and grunting.

Elliot: Olivia please, this is no joke. I'm literally about to piss in my pants out here.

As she tried to adjust the keys, she just kept laughing persistantly. She unlocked it and watched her partner grab the keys out of her hand and run up the stairs. She followed him up there and saw her door wide open. She walked in and closed the door. She turned on the lamp she had set on her coffee table. Took off her jacket and turned on the television. Then she went over to the kitchen and got out two water bottles.
The sound of a flush was heard and then the faucet turning on. A while later, Elliot came out of the bathroom sighing.

Elliot: wow, that feels good.

Olivia: oh i bet. so...you thirsty?

Elliot: oh ha ha very funny. But yea i guess, to shake off some of the alcohol in my system.

She tosses it over towards his direction for him to catch it. He went and sat on her couch.
She followed him afterward.

Elliot: ahh, yep. So, what's on the t.v nowadays?

Olivia: um i don't know. i don't really ever have time to watch t.v

Elliot: yea at my house, it's usually between MTV, Spongebob or the Food Network.

Olivia: hahaha, yea well um Elliot, don't you think you should be getting home now?

Elliot: Liv, if you want me gone, all you had to do was ask. I can take the hint

Olivia: well then why would i have to ask if you can 'take the hint?'"

He didn't respond. He stared at the photos she had on her table. He noticed one picture that was with her, and some other people he didn't recognize.

Elliot: who's that?
Olivia looked at what it was he was staring at to understand what he was talking about.

Olivia: who? in that picture? oh well it's me when i was in Oregon. That was this girl i talked to while i was down there. She was a memebr of the group i had to infiltrate in.

Elliot: oh yea, i remember that. Did you like that job?

Olivia: well..i mean it was a job, i had to focus on it and treat it like any other case. Trying so hard not to get caught.

Elliot: so in other words, you didn't? hahahaha

Olivia: you know what? don't you have a wife to go to mister?

Elliot: Nah, she's fine. So..i'm hungry...feed me!

Olivia: i'm sorry what?

He started laughing and got up and walked over to her kitchen. She just watched him invade her stuff.
When she saw him going under into the cabinets, she walked in the kitchen to see what he was doing.
She began to laugh again when she saw the mess he was making with her pots and pans. She knelt down to help him.

Olivia: hey? kid? lemme help you there. Making a mess of my stuff there buddy!

Elliot: oh lemme make you some of my famous pasta!

Olivia: no, how about not?

Elliot: oh come on Livy? please?

He sat there on the floor with the pots on his lap as she tried to take them off of him. He kept touching her hair as she stood there cleaning it up.

Elliot: My god, your hair is soft..what do you use?

Olivia:oook, yea you're pretty much wasted El, come on. Let's get up. Here grab your stuff and let's go back into the car. I'm gonna take you home.

Elliot: what? no..i don't want to go back HOME!

Olivia: well...El? you can't stay here all night. i'm so tired i can barely keep my eyes open anymore.

Elliot: Liv, please, just talk to me a little while longer ok? please thats all im asking you

Olivia: ok El, this is getting silly...
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8ElandLiv8
Great update.
imsvu23
QUOTE (8ElandLiv8 @ Mar 29 2008, 10:09 PM) *
Great update.



thank you!
Sarah1989
I love it! And want to read more laugh.gif
imsvu23
QUOTE (Sarah1989 @ Mar 30 2008, 07:24 AM) *
I love it! And want to read more laugh.gif



awww thanks! yea i will write more tomorrow, its time for me to get to bed! lol got school tomorrow ugh!
Sarah1989
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awww thanks! yea i will write more tomorrow, its time for me to get to bed! lol got school tomorrow ugh!


Ok I look forward to reading more :-) It's so good biggrin.gif
imsvu23
QUOTE (imsvu23 @ Mar 29 2008, 10:06 PM) *
thanks for the awesome reviews guys and gals!
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Olivia ran through so many stop lights, she was sure some cop on duty was going to pull her over. But she couldn't help the fact that her partner was yelling at her to go through the lights all because he had to take a leak. It wasn't long til they got to her apartment.

Elliot: well Olivia, its about time. Now hurry get out and opent the door.

Olivia: well gee El, you wanna chill for a sec?

She reached for her house key and got out. He was already at the door hoping on each foot hol,ding himself and grunting.

Elliot: Olivia please, this is no joke. I'm literally about to piss in my pants out here.

As she tried to adjust the keys, she just kept laughing persistantly. She unlocked it and watched her partner grab the keys out of her hand and run up the stairs. She followed him up there and saw her door wide open. She walked in and closed the door. She turned on the lamp she had set on her coffee table. Took off her jacket and turned on the television. Then she went over to the kitchen and got out two water bottles.
The sound of a flush was heard and then the faucet turning on. A while later, Elliot came out of the bathroom sighing.

Elliot: wow, that feels good.

Olivia: oh i bet. so...you thirsty?

Elliot: oh ha ha very funny. But yea i guess, to shake off some of the alcohol in my system.

She tosses it over towards his direction for him to catch it. He went and sat on her couch.
She followed him afterward.

Elliot: ahh, yep. So, what's on the t.v nowadays?

Olivia: um i don't know. i don't really ever have time to watch t.v

Elliot: yea at my house, it's usually between MTV, Spongebob or the Food Network.

Olivia: hahaha, yea well um Elliot, don't you think you should be getting home now?

Elliot: Liv, if you want me gone, all you had to do was ask. I can take the hint

Olivia: well then why would i have to ask if you can 'take the hint?'"

He didn't respond. He stared at the photos she had on her table. He noticed one picture that was with her, and some other people he didn't recognize.

Elliot: who's that?
Olivia looked at what it was he was staring at to understand what he was talking about.

Olivia: who? in that picture? oh well it's me when i was in Oregon. That was this girl i talked to while i was down there. She was a memebr of the group i had to infiltrate in.

Elliot: oh yea, i remember that. Did you like that job?

Olivia: well..i mean it was a job, i had to focus on it and treat it like any other case. Trying so hard not to get caught.

Elliot: so in other words, you didn't? hahahaha

Olivia: you know what? don't you have a wife to go to mister?

Elliot: Nah, she's fine. So..i'm hungry...feed me!

Olivia: i'm sorry what?

He started laughing and got up and walked over to her kitchen. She just watched him invade her stuff.
When she saw him going under into the cabinets, she walked in the kitchen to see what he was doing.
She began to laugh again when she saw the mess he was making with her pots and pans. She knelt down to help him.

Olivia: hey? kid? lemme help you there. Making a mess of my stuff there buddy!

Elliot: oh lemme make you some of my famous pasta!

Olivia: no, how about not?

Elliot: oh come on Livy? please?

He sat there on the floor with the pots on his lap as she tried to take them off of him. He kept touching her hair as she stood there cleaning it up.

Elliot: My god, your hair is soft..what do you use?

Olivia:oook, yea you're pretty much wasted El, come on. Let's get up. Here grab your stuff and let's go back into the car. I'm gonna take you home.

Elliot: what? no..i don't want to go back HOME!

Olivia: well...El? you can't stay here all night. i'm so tired i can barely keep my eyes open anymore.

Elliot: Liv, please, just talk to me a little while longer ok? please thats all im asking you

Olivia: ok El, this is getting silly...
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Elliot: what are you saying, that I am lazy? huh? is that it? well you know what, (stands up and fixes himself) I don't have to take this. Fine, im gone.

He makes his way over to her couch and lays down. She looks at him with a funny face.

Olivia: El, i thought you were leaving?

Elliot: well that's what you WANT me to do. But i see how you look at me, Liv. I know wink.gif

Olivia: huh.gif know what?

Elliot:...you want me... smile.gif

Olivia: laugh.gif what? um Elliot, come on, its late. you gotta go home to your WIFE, and make some love to her and then the next morning, we can all laugh about it at work.
She turned off the lamp and walked over to her door. When she turned around to face the couch, she saw that her partner was gone. SHe couldn't see that black figure that was laid on the couch, she turned back on the lamp and looked over to the floor thinking he might of rolled over and passed out. mellow.gif she couldn't find him. All of a sudden, she heard her radio in her room playing. She leaned over to the hallway and saw her bedroom light on. SHe walked in there and saw Elliot taking off his jacket and unbottoning his shirt to the music.

Olivia: um,Elliot. what are you doing?

Elliot: I'm dancing. you know whow to dance Liv?

Olivia: i tend not to.

Elliot: Oh come on, here come here, lemme show you.

Olivia: Um no thanks. El look this is silly, come on. I'm tired.

Elliot: me dancing with ya will wake you up.

She continued to stare at him while he continued to dance in her bedroom.

Elliot: I knew it you know?

Olivia: Knew what?

Elliot: that your room would smell like you. it smells sooo beautiful.

Olivia: huh.gif thank you?

Then the music changed from "Low" by Flo Rida to "Soulmate" by Natasha Bedingfield. This was Liv's favorite song.

Elliot: oh i hate this song..

Olivia: wait don't turn it off!

Elliot: blink.gif you like this song?

She only responded by singing to the song.
who doesnt love for someone to hold
who knows how to love you without being told
somebody tell me why im on my own
if there's a soulmate for everyone...........

Elliot: That was pretty. You never told me you could sing.

Olivia: You never asked..................
8ElandLiv8
Great update.
imsvu23
QUOTE (8ElandLiv8 @ Apr 6 2008, 12:54 PM) *
Great update.



thanks!
svufaneo
agh.! update soon.! smile.gif
Aliecia
OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!
Sarah1989
Sooo good I love it! More pleaseeee and I love this song (soulmate :-)) It's one of my favourite songs biggrin.gif
imsvu23
QUOTE (Sarah1989 @ Apr 7 2008, 07:34 AM) *
Sooo good I love it! More pleaseeee and I love this song (soulmate :-)) It's one of my favourite songs biggrin.gif



aww thanks! thank you to everyone!
Sarah1989
QUOTE (imsvu23 @ Apr 9 2008, 07:24 PM) *
aww thanks! thank you to everyone!


you're welcome. I love your story and hope you will continue soon biggrin.gif
SVUangel161
omg love it post more soon
IBleaveinDreamin
so good! smile.gif more por favor? is that spelled right?! lol i failed spanish class! lol well not for real, more like a c. ANYWAYS...lol yes more!
EODOlover
holy sh*t more
Addicted2Benson
WOW THIS IS GREAT UPDATE SOON I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!
imsvu23
QUOTE (imsvu23 @ Apr 6 2008, 12:38 PM) *
Elliot: what are you saying, that I am lazy? huh? is that it? well you know what, (stands up and fixes himself) I don't have to take this. Fine, im gone.

He makes his way over to her couch and lays down. She looks at him with a funny face.

Olivia: El, i thought you were leaving?

Elliot: well that's what you WANT me to do. But i see how you look at me, Liv. I know wink.gif

Olivia: huh.gif know what?

Elliot:...you want me... smile.gif

Olivia: laugh.gif what? um Elliot, come on, its late. you gotta go home to your WIFE, and make some love to her and then the next morning, we can all laugh about it at work.
She turned off the lamp and walked over to her door. When she turned around to face the couch, she saw that her partner was gone. SHe couldn't see that black figure that was laid on the couch, she turned back on the lamp and looked over to the floor thinking he might of rolled over and passed out. mellow.gif she couldn't find him. All of a sudden, she heard her radio in her room playing. She leaned over to the hallway and saw her bedroom light on. SHe walked in there and saw Elliot taking off his jacket and unbottoning his shirt to the music.

Olivia: um,Elliot. what are you doing?

Elliot: I'm dancing. you know whow to dance Liv?

Olivia: i tend not to.

Elliot: Oh come on, here come here, lemme show you.

Olivia: Um no thanks. El look this is silly, come on. I'm tired.

Elliot: me dancing with ya will wake you up.

She continued to stare at him while he continued to dance in her bedroom.

Elliot: I knew it you know?

Olivia: Knew what?

Elliot: that your room would smell like you. it smells sooo beautiful.

Olivia: huh.gif thank you?

Then the music changed from "Low" by Flo Rida to "Soulmate" by Natasha Bedingfield. This was Liv's favorite song.

Elliot: oh i hate this song..

Olivia: wait don't turn it off!

Elliot: blink.gif you like this song?

She only responded by singing to the song.
who doesnt love for someone to hold
who knows how to love you without being told
somebody tell me why im on my own
if there's a soulmate for everyone...........

Elliot: That was pretty. You never told me you could sing.

Olivia: You never asked..................


WOW i couldnt beleive all the FABULOUS reviews i got over this story, i see that this a a fave from the voting on the Fave story thread, (blushes) you guys are too beautiful!! lol so i shall write more!!
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Elliot: well, we're sex crimes detectives, it never crossed my mind to ask my partner if she could sing..

Olivia: you know what, just shut up ok? come on Elliot, im tired. i can't stress that enough

Elliot: well then go to bed. What's stoping you?

Olivia:....you!

It should of been the perfect moment to turn off the radio, but it was too late, The Usher song Love In This Club started playing. The DJ announced
DJ: oook you cool cats, this is for all the lovelies out there that are out in the car on the streets, or...in a club, go make love! this song is for you, right now its Usher..Love in this Club....

Elliot and Olivia didn't say anything, just listened to the DJ talk. When the music turned up, they looked at each other.

Olivia: dry.gif what?

Elliot: nothing. Alright, i'll go.

Olivia: unsure.gif oh, ok

Elliot: what's wrong now?

Olivia: Nothing. whats wrong with you?

Elliot: oh nothing.. so i guess i shoulld get out of here

Olivia: Don't forget your stuff. its out in the living room

Olivia went over towards her bed and turned off the lamp while they were still in the room. She passed by the door and let him go before her. He glided his body against her which caused her to hold her breath for just a second. He heard her gasp for air as he passed her. He giggled inside. He knew right then and there that he had her hooked. The grabbed his jacket and put on his shoes that he took off earlier. She leaned on the wall watching him. She could feel the drop of sweat slithering down her back, she just wanted to grab him and do away with him. But that would not be her. It couldn't be him. She flashbacked to when she was in Oregon and she fell asleep in the hospital room. She got caught dreaming about her partner. She swore that that would never happen again. She almost lost it when Elliot had asked her about the girl in the picture he had asked about earlier. It was her. If he had ever met her, her life would be exposed. And that was what she didn't want. She didn't want Elliot in her life. She knew that once he was, he wouldn't be able to come back out. He wanted him from he beginning, but she couldn't let him know that. She was seeing her true one, her reason for getting up in the morning, hell her reason for living. She sometimes would pretend she was Kathy, and pretend that he lay next to her in her bed. But sadly she wasn't Kathy, she just wasn't.

Elliot: Olivia

He broke her trance

Olivia: (whispers) Elliot..

Her whisper startled him. He dropped his jacket and walked over to her............


ElandLiv03
Please add more.
I <3 your story. It's so great. smile.gif
8ElandLiv8
Great. Update soon.
IBleaveinDreamin
ohmy.gif wub.gif im in love with this one!

well what the heck svu23? why did you stop!!! now im jumping up and down waiting for you! lol good job, i like it.....YOU BETTER MAKE IT AN EO ENDING! LOL i love those! hehe
Aliecia
You are evil how could you stop there?
I want more please!
Oh and is The Return of Dani finished?
Mary82
WOW! That was really good. I like how this story is written and I cannot wait to read just what it is Elliot intends to do about the situation. wink.gif
EODOlover
brillant
Sarah1989
Pleaseeeee more biggrin.gif I can't wait
imsvu23
thaaaaanks guyyyyys! lol i appreiciate it, yea im in school right now so i cant really write more...but i will tonight!
and Aliecia, i haven't updated Return of Dani, i might do that tonight, i forgot all about it! lol whoops!
Addicted2Benson
OMG MORE NOW... I NEED MORE... ALOT MORE!!!
imsvu23
QUOTE (imsvu23 @ Apr 13 2008, 07:10 PM) *
WOW i couldnt beleive all the FABULOUS reviews i got over this story, i see that this a a fave from the voting on the Fave story thread, (blushes) you guys are too beautiful!! lol so i shall write more!!
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Elliot: well, we're sex crimes detectives, it never crossed my mind to ask my partner if she could sing..

Olivia: you know what, just shut up ok? come on Elliot, im tired. i can't stress that enough

Elliot: well then go to bed. What's stoping you?

Olivia:....you!

It should of been the perfect moment to turn off the radio, but it was too late, The Usher song Love In This Club started playing. The DJ announced
DJ: oook you cool cats, this is for all the lovelies out there that are out in the car on the streets, or...in a club, go make love! this song is for you, right now its Usher..Love in this Club....

Elliot and Olivia didn't say anything, just listened to the DJ talk. When the music turned up, they looked at each other.

Olivia: dry.gif what?

Elliot: nothing. Alright, i'll go.

Olivia: unsure.gif oh, ok

Elliot: what's wrong now?

Olivia: Nothing. whats wrong with you?

Elliot: oh nothing.. so i guess i shoulld get out of here

Olivia: Don't forget your stuff. its out in the living room

Olivia went over towards her bed and turned off the lamp while they were still in the room. She passed by the door and let him go before her. He glided his body against her which caused her to hold her breath for just a second. He heard her gasp for air as he passed her. He giggled inside. He knew right then and there that he had her hooked. The grabbed his jacket and put on his shoes that he took off earlier. She leaned on the wall watching him. She could feel the drop of sweat slithering down her back, she just wanted to grab him and do away with him. But that would not be her. It couldn't be him. She flashbacked to when she was in Oregon and she fell asleep in the hospital room. She got caught dreaming about her partner. She swore that that would never happen again. She almost lost it when Elliot had asked her about the girl in the picture he had asked about earlier. It was her. If he had ever met her, her life would be exposed. And that was what she didn't want. She didn't want Elliot in her life. She knew that once he was, he wouldn't be able to come back out. He wanted him from he beginning, but she couldn't let him know that. She was seeing her true one, her reason for getting up in the morning, hell her reason for living. She sometimes would pretend she was Kathy, and pretend that he lay next to her in her bed. But sadly she wasn't Kathy, she just wasn't.

Elliot: Olivia

He broke her trance

Olivia: (whispers) Elliot..

Her whisper startled him. He dropped his jacket and walked over to her............




Oh crap she thought. what's he doing?
Olivia: huh.gif what are you doing? Elli-
He stopped her by grabbing her waist and standing literally on top of here.
With his right hand, he grabbed her left hand and closed them together. His other hand was busy holding her waist. She stared at him. The deep dark holes where his eyes stayed caught her attention. He was just holding her there in the dark.

Elliot: You sure you don't wanna dance?

Olivia: um, yea im sure. But thanks for the effort.

Elliot: I tried.

He let go of her and went to pick up his jacket. They said their goodbyes and he closed the door behind him. Once she heard his footsteps going down the stairs did she go and locked the door. Her heart kept beating fast. She felt stupid for a slight second. When he held her like that, it was the first time ever. She should have taken advantage of that, but she didn't. That was one thing she hated about herself. She always did the opposite her heart told her to do. The only thing she could do now was go to bed and-again, pretend that she was Mrs. Kathy Stabler; and cuddle up with her fluffy pillow she calls "Elliot".
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The next morning, she had to call Elliot, because she left her car at the station last night. She was a little embarassed to talk to him, but to her advantage he was drunk so she thought maybe he wouldn't rememebr anything that happened. But what Olivia did not know was all the while he was acting the way he did with her, he was sober and well to understand what he was doing. At first, he thought that maybe he was just playing with her, but he was starting to understand that those feelings that he had for her were real. He just didnt want to take it too far unless she was ready. He was ready. She needed to know that.

Elliot: yea Liv, im on my way.

Olivia: ok cool, i'll wait for you.

Elliot: thanks..

Olivia: for what? waiting for you?

Elliot: wub.gif yea

Olivia: huh.gif um ok

Elliot: alright see you soon...bye.

As Olivia waited for him, she went and sprayed her "Infinity" perfume once more. She knew that Elliot loved this perfume. He bought this exact kind for Kathy for her birthday one time. She remembered him telling her that it was the first perfume that he picked out for her by himself. Some lady that worked in the perfume section thought he gay and just trying out some of the women's perfume. He told the lady he was looking for one for his wife. After that, he finally decided on this one. It wasn't like Olivia was trying to copy Kathy, but trying to get Elliot. Her partner for crying out loud.

A car horn was heard from outside, so Olivia ran outside. She got into the car and said their hellos. A wift of the perfume caught Elliot's attention.

Elliot: mmm you smell good.

Olivia: thanks, yea i just got this perfume the other day.

Elliot: smells great on you.

Olivia: You call captain?

Elliot: yea we gotta check out that one victim Priscilla Knowles,

Olivia: I thought cap'n said that case was closed?

Elliot: yea well, she was raped again.

Olivia: oh God, that makes what the third time she was raped?

Elliot: we'll see when we get there....
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8ElandLiv8
Great update. I love your signature.
imsvu23
QUOTE (8ElandLiv8 @ Apr 19 2008, 11:11 PM) *
Great update. I love your signature.



thanks i love yours! smile.gif
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