svufaneo
Mar 17 2008, 10:00 PM
liv walked into her apartment. she turned on the lights and put her stuff on the counter. she went to her fridge to get something to eat. she was starving. her belly was growling, she opened the fridge door. the buzzer rang. "damn" she went to the intercom and pressed the button. "who is it?" she asked with a questioned look.
"its me, elliot"
she let him up. he knocked on her door while she was snacking on a chocolate bar. she opened the door to him smiling at her. she returned a smile. "hey"
"stopped by to see if you wanted to come to fins house for a movie."
she opened the door wider and he stepped inside. she closed the door behide them.
"fin has movie nights now"
"yeah. you in?"
"sure"
she walked over and picked up her coat.
"hold this?"
he held her chocolate for her while she put on her coat. when she wasnt looking, he took a bite. she got her keys and her purse. elliot handed her the chocolate bar.
"elliot.!"
"what?"
"you ate my chocolate.!"
"did not.!"
he wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. they laughed and headed for fins house. half an hour later they pulled into fins driveway and parked the car. they got out. liv laughed.
"whats so funny?"
"i can tell munch is here"
she pointed to munchs car parked next to theirs and fins.
"how can you tell?"
"look at the plate"
elliot looked at the lisence plate. it read: CNSPRAC THRES "conspiracy theories. well, thats him alright"
they laughed again and walked up to fins door. elliot knocked. fin opened up. "hey guys. come in, chill out."
they walked in seeing how nice his crib was. going into the living room they passed a flat screen tv with surround sound. they sat down with munch on the new looking couch. fin sat next to liv on her right side. elliot on her left. and munch next to fin. she glanced around herself a second time. "nice crib"
F: "yeah, i like to spend my money on stuff i need. unlike mr. junkman over here"
he nodded over towards munch, who looked up from the remote he was inspecting.
M: "i am not a junk man. i just happen to have a lot of fun things to do in my spare time"
E: "by the way munch, i really liked your lisence plate you got out there"
M: "yeah, i about to sue the guy cause he wouldnt let me spell out the whole words. told him if he had a problem with the government, then see me"
O: "youd be the last person id trust with the government"
she smiled. everyone laughed, including munch.
M: "your sympathy is overwhelming" he said, and streched out his legs and rested them on top of fin and livs lap. giving elliot, and the rest of the crew, a wiff of his feet.
E: "oh, man. when was the last time you cleaned these babies?"
M: "why just last night"
munch laughed. olivia couldnt handle the smell so she moved over to the love sofa diagonal to them. elliot was in no means to stay there either. he moved and sat with her.
F: "man, you takin up my couch"
fin moved to the other end of the couch. placing a pillow in between his feet and munchs.
F: "alright guys, lets get this movie goin"
they got threw half of the movie. munch was getting hungry.
M: "hey boy, im starving like a horse over here, you got any food in this joint?"
F: "yeah, its called my kitchen, let me show you where its at"
they got up off the couch. fin looked over and went to open his mouth to ask if elliot and liv wanted anything, but he turned to munch with a smile. "yo john, take a look at this." munch turned and stopped streching. he looked at where fin was pointing. at elliot and liv on the love sofa...
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Bubba_Bridges
Mar 17 2008, 10:27 PM
Hi Bubba here, pretty good story.
Sarah1989
Mar 18 2008, 02:42 AM
It sounds good. Please write more
EODOlover
Mar 18 2008, 02:50 PM
pplease write more that is so so good
Aliecia
Mar 18 2008, 10:08 PM
Lovely may I have some please?
Aliecia
Mar 19 2008, 12:15 PM
Thank you, but two scoops would have been great. it's lunch and i'm hungry so may i have some more please?
Sarah1989
Mar 19 2008, 12:20 PM
O it's so exciting. What happend with Elliot? Pleaseee upload more
EODOlover
Mar 20 2008, 03:14 PM
yes more more and more pleae
Aliecia
Mar 20 2008, 04:46 PM
Ok! I think my tummy will be okay till you get back from your date. But I still want more.
Aliecia
Mar 21 2008, 09:16 AM
Thank you so much. And thank you I am gain weight. Yipeee.
Thanks much I enjoy it.
HOLY GOOD FRIDAY
Aliecia
Mar 21 2008, 02:01 PM
I live for these stories. Even if the writers of L&O SVU won't do it. Please more, heal my broken heart.
EODOlover
Mar 21 2008, 04:42 PM
please more please and dont forget ur other story flirt tthats good to but pleasee more
Aliecia
Mar 21 2008, 06:24 PM
You are fast becoming one of my fave writers.
I'm straved please feed me. And check out my new story Two Wishes One Shooting Star
Sarah1989
Mar 24 2008, 03:21 AM
That's so good

I wnat to read moreeeeee :-)
Aliecia
Mar 24 2008, 08:41 AM
Okay you need to make up you haven't feed me in like what two days? And I'm still hungry may I have some more please that was delicious
EODOlover
Mar 24 2008, 02:36 PM
o dang casey is in that room o dang and waung o dang
svufaneo
Mar 24 2008, 05:57 PM
of course.! heres more.!
olivia put her hand on his chest and pushed away. she stared at him, shifting her eyes back and forth between his. they breathed heavy in eachothers faces, waiting for movement. casey sat up in bed, breaking the moment and scaring liv, sending her into elliots arms.
O: "casey?"
C: "liv? what are you guys doing here?"
O: "i'd have to ask the same question" she said. wuang sat up and looked at casey, rubbing his eyes.
W: "casey, whats going on?" he asked her, rubbing her back with one hand. he stopped and looked up, jumping a little. "um, hey guys"
E: "wuang?"
W: "elliot?"
E: "yeah, what are you doing here?"
O: "i dont want to know"
W: "olivia?"
O: "morning.!" she said jokingly, with a smile. wuang leaned back and reached over, turning on a little lamp. seeing waung half naked bothered elliot and liv. they turned there heads in discust at the sight, so he covered up.
E: "ok, never mind. dont tell me." he said. liv chuckled, walking over to the chair and picking up his coat. she handed it to him as they started to walk out. before they reached the door, liv looked back at them, grabbing the doorknob.
O: "by the way wuang, keep your shoes under the bed next time" she said with a smile, closing the door afterwards. elliot already had his coat on as they walked down the hallway.
E: "next time?" he asked, looking at her.
O: "yup" she said, smiling at him. they got down to the car and to the mourg with silence. when they got in, warner put on a white doctors jacket and pulled her hair back into a low ponytail. putting on some gloves, she examined the body with her eyes. liv and elliot stood against the door frame, watching. warner picked up joyce's arm, searching around her shoulder.
W: "theres a needle mark" she said, putting the arm down. this got there attention, moving closer to joyce. she walked down to her feet and looked at them, liv and elliot joining her. nothing was there so they walked with her to the other side of the table, looking at her other arm. "none on the toes or on this arm" she said, putting the arm down after. she lifted up the shirt, exposing joyce's stomache. elliot cleared his throat and put his hands behind his back. liv looked up at him, then at warner."bullet mark indicates that the shooter was standing a couple feet in front of her" she stated as they squinted at her with confused looks. "but theres a circular mark on the back of her neck"
O: "so your saying there were two shooters?" she asked, looking up at elliot. he shrugged and they turned there attention back to warner.
W: "most deffinatly. the shooter must have forced her to do something"
E: "how can you tell?" he said, squinting.
W: "take a look at the mark." she said, walking over to the picture and pointing to the big purplish spot. they fallowed her and looked at it. "the ring around the bruise is indented into her skin. the shooter put the gun to her neck and pushed harder on it each time she didnt do what they asked, causing the ring to be permanent."
O: "can you find out what gun they used?" she asked, squinting at warner who put her hand down and looked at them.
W: "sure, i'll call you if find anything else" she said, walking back to joyce. they walked towards the door.
E: "alright, thanks." he said. she smiled as she watched them leave. awkward silence carried down the hallway with them, until liv felt like talking.
O: "so, about what happened earlier"
E: "you mean at the hospital?"
O: "yeah"
E: "about us, or wuang and casey?" he asked. she chuckled and looked at him.
O: "both." she said. he looked at her and she looked down at her feet, he copied.
E: "well, what about it?" he asked. they stopped at the elevator, he pushed the up button and they looked at eachother, waiting.
O: "why?"
E: "i dont know, mabey wuang just felt like getting some. who kn..."
O: "...no i mean us" she said, interupting him. he opened his mouth but didnt say anything. the elevator opened and they walked inside, leaning against the wall. while it took them up three floors to the 1-6, they chatted more.
E: "i thought about what happened"
O: "with kathy"
E: "yeah" he answered, even though it wasnt a question. "i relized i spend more time with you at work, then my own wife and kids" he said, looking at her. she looked at him, knew what he meant but wanted to know more.
O: "el..."
E: "...i know, i just...i just couldnt wait anymore." he said sadly. the doors opened and he walked out looking down at the floor. liv sighed and quickly walked to catch up to him, but didnt get next to him till he stopped at the precinct doors. liv looked at what he was looking at, laughing but also in shock. munch was standing on his desk with his hands on his hips and chin in the air. liv ran over to the edge of his desk while elliot walked to his own desk, put his jacket on his chair, and sat down.
O: "john, what the hell are you doing?"
M: "praising the doc"
O: "let me guess. you heard about him and casey." she said, putting the tips of her fingers in her front pant pockets. munch got off of his desk and looked at her.
M: "he finally got lucky" he said. liv smiled, then nodded while looking at the floor.
O: "yeah" she whispered. she walked back to her desk and sat down. munch smiled and sat down. just then, fin walked in. elliot leaned back in his chair and put his feet up on his desk. liv looked up and noticed fin, stoping what she was doing.
O: "hey" she said, smiling.
F: "hey" he said, smiling back and taking a seat at his desk.
O: "you look happy. you know something i dont?" she asked, still smiling at him.
F: "actually, yeah.!" he said.
O: "well share"
F: "alright.!" he said, getting up and jogging to her. "guess who has a tattoo on their butt" he whispered, in her ear with his hand around his mouth. she switched with him and whispered in his ear.
O: "um, john?" she asked. elliot watched them trade secrets while he tried to figure out what they were saying. fin traded with her again, whispering to her.
F: "nope, elliot" he whispered. they pulled away and looked at eachother.
O: "are you serious?" she asked out loud, but still quiet enough for only them to hear.
F: "yeah, baby" he said, loud enough for everyone to hear now. he smiled when she did. "you'll find out"
O: "what?"
F: "dont look at me, i just know stuff" he said, backing up and sitting down again. liv tried to go back to work but she kept glancing up at elliot with her eyes. it bugged her that she didnt know when. she turned and looked at fin.
O: "when?" she screamed, over at him. fin looked up at her.
F: "soon, trust me" he said, going back to work. she exhaled loudly, crossed her arms on her desk, and smacked her head down on them. elliot was worrying about this, but he didnt say anything to her.
M: "found something" munch said as he stoped typing on his computer.
O: "what is it?" she said as her and elliot got up and walked over to munchs desk. they stared at his screen while he talked.
M: "i ran joyce's prints through the system, turns out she used to be a drug dealer till narcotics caught her dealing to minors on the street"
E: "do they have the names of her customers?"
M: "couldnt find any. not even a list of phone numbers"
F: "dont worry, i still have friends in narcotics. they can give me the info"
E: "alright liv, lets go" he said, looking over at her.
F: "nah, let me and theories over here take this one. you guys catch some sleep" he said putting on his coat. elliot nodded while they started to walk out. fin looked back at liv, giving her a smile. she had a mad face on, quickly smiled, then went back to being mad. her and elliot headed up to the crib for some sleep as they left.
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svufaneo
Mar 26 2008, 06:59 PM
of course. theres always more.!
they got inside and elliot closed the door behind him. liv grabbed the top bunk, elliot took the bottom one. they both layed on their backs in silence. just until liv felt like talking again.
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