chapter 1 " why did i say that"



olivia and elliot are talking. it is 12 am and they are at work talking.

olivia: i love you for all those years.

elliot: how long did you have these feelings?

olivia: i had this feeling for 9 years.

elliot: should we continue to be partners?

olivia:...................

thats really good. update soon

sounds juicy.! and let me tell you, i like juice.! update soon.!

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olivia: i wish i knew the answer.

elliot: me too.

olivia: i know it will be hard working around each other.

elliot: are you dating anyone now?

olivia: yes i am.

elliot: do you love him?

olivia: i dont know but my feelings for you will never go away.

elliot: do you think we should tell cragon about this issue.

olivia: why so he can split us up.

elliot: who house are you going to tonight. mine or his?

olivia:.............................

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olivia: he wants me to be home tonight.

elliot: that is ok.

olivia: but i will go to your house tonight.

elliot: wow.

olivia: what happened to kathy?

elliot: she died last year.

olivia: where are the kids?

elliot: mureen is married and has a kid. kathylen is fineshing college this year. the twins are just starting out in high school. eli is in high school now.

olivia: what do you want to do?

elliot: lets go undercover with our relationship. is that alright with you?

olivia:.............................

more please

Very nice.

olivia: maybe

elliot: why do you say maybe?

olivia: what if i fall in love with this guy. i dont want to hurt you.

elliot: let's just see what happen. how do you feel about the relationship[ now

olivia: .........................

continue gooing good.

i will start writing chapter 2 on april 13, 2008.

heres whats in chapter 2 i wont give you the good and juicy stuff. something will happen with elliot and olivia undercover relationship and friendship. olivia will get a suprise from her boyfriend lincoln. and it is just shocking moments and twists and turns check them out. i will update chapter 1 everyday. but not on spring break which is next week becuase i will be out of town for the week but on the 28 of march i will update. but i will leave yaw with a huge cliff hanger

I like this please write more.

olivia: ok. we can give it a shot.

elliot: ok. so go home to him tonight and say you work over late tommorow up.

olivia: why?

elliot: we have to cover it up.

olivia: i like how you think ell?

elliot: me to

they laugh and they kiss each other.

olivia: wow. will you do that every night?

elliot: yeah why?

olivia:........................................

olivia: well i am going to feel diffrent.

elliot: why?

olivia: you kiss me and i have to turn around and go home and kiss him.

elliot: well we will just test it out.

olivia: what if this guy want to marry me?

elliot: that is a good question?

olivia: are you going to answer it ell?

elliot:.......................

Pretty cool

elliot: i cant right now.

olivia: when you are ready to answer it then give me a call.

(olivia gets up and walks out the room. and elliot starts hiting the wall and walk out. olvia goes home to lincoln.)

olivia walks in the room.

lincoln: what is wrong?

olivia: i dont want to talk about it.

lincoln: did something happen between you and your partner?

olivia: we just had a little fight.

lincoln: what was it about?

olivia:....................................

May I have some more please. I think O like where it is headed.

olivia: i re=ather not say just yet.

lincoln: ok. when you are ready.

lincoln kisses olivia and then they go to sleep. the next day came and elliot and olivia are at the office talking.

elliot: did he ask you about why you were mad?

olivia: yeah. i didnt tell him. look can we just drop this conversation.

elliot: yeah. can i meet lincoln tonght so we can talk.

olivia: what will you talk about?

elliot:..............................

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elliot: we are just going to get to know each other.

olivia: whatever.

elliot: you will not know the other part i will tell him.

olivia: are you trying to ruin a friendship and relationship.

elliot:......................

okay update.

elliot: i dont know.

olivia: well you better know because i love lincoln ell.

elliot: i thought you loved me?

olivia: dont screw with my head ell

elliot: whatever i think i should get another partner.

olivia: are you going to mess up everything we worked hard for?

elliot:.......................

Wow.

i am traveling for spring break and will return on friday. my next update will be march 28,2008.
look out for chapter 2 on april 12,2008.

i will leave yaw with that cliff hanger until i return.

have a nice spring break and thanks for reading my story

Your story is really good. And I look forward to reading more :-) I hope you have a nice journey

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elliot: i dont know.

olivia: will you give me an answer?

elliot: im going on vacation for a few days.

olivia: why

elliot: to get away from you.

olivia: what!!!!!!!!!

elliot: if you cant tell who you want then im leaving.

olivia: i guess this is it for right now. our friendship is over

elliot:.................................

More pleaseeee :-) I want tor read more

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elliot: no our friendship is not over we are just taking a break.

olivia: how long are we taking a break for?

elliot: 3 months.

olivia: thats a long time.

elliot: i just need to think about somethings.

olivia: will you call me while we are on a break.

elliot: ...............................................

agh.! i need to know.! update please?!

elliot: maybe. but i will keep you posted on text messages.

olivia: i cant here your voice.

elliot: the only voice you will be listerning too is lincoln.

olivia: well maybe i might marry him

elliot: wolud you marry him and not invite me to the wedding?

olivia:...........................

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olivia: maybe i havent decided yet.

elliot: i am you best friend

olivia: yeah but that shrink was right we are to close

elliot: so we shouldnt be friends

olivia: yeah for right now.

elliot: when will we be friends again?

olivia:................................

Good job! More please

olivia: i say let's give us a three month break from each other.

elliot: you should have never told me how you feel about me.

olivia: i am sorry but it was just on my mind most of the time

elliot: do you still like me?

olivia:.........................................................................
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Great update.

olivia: yeah alot more than i did before

elliot: want do you want from me

olivia: i just want you to trust me.

elliot: who will you marry me or lincoln?

olivia:.........................................................................
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Great update. What episode are the quotes in your signature from or did you just make them up.

Good job! More please

i like it con u please make ace and fenish this u are keeping me into too many suspence

Olivia: i want to marry you ell

Elliot: what about lincoln.

olivia: what do you mean?

elliot: what if he wants to marry you while i am gone?

olivia: ......................................................

more more more

olivia: i really can not answer that right now.

elliot: text me when you have the answer.

elliot storms out the room. olivia goes home to talk to lincoln

lincoln: hey whats wrong?

olivia: will you marry me lincoln?

lincoln:......................................................................

...............................

lincoln: i want to marry you.

olivia: when will you do it?

lincoln:in a few weeks. are you dating another guy behind my back like your partner?

olivia:.................................................

WTF IS GOING ON THIS IS GETTING GOOD MORE PLEASE!!!