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BensonPrincess
Elliot hires a new caretaker for his kids. Will she work out? Or will she end up like all the others?



Disclaimer: I do not own SVU. The only thing I own is this story. (Actually, part of it was inspired by a movie, so even the story isn't totally mine, is it? LOL)

AN: As I mentioned in the Disclaimer, this story was inspired by a movie. I was watching it and thought to myself, "It'd be interesting to write an SVU story with the same basic concept. Hmmmmm....". And thus, this story was born. Not sure how many chapters it's going to be. It depends on how many it takes to get the general idea across, I guess. (BTW, if you figure out what movie I was watching at the time, you get a virtual cookie. biggrin.gif And I hope you won't get too bored with it if you do. It may be inspired by the movie, but I hope to make it SVU style. LOL)

Oh, and I kinda guessed at the "11th street" part. I don't know if there is really an 11th street in Manhattan, but for the sake of the story, we'll pretend there is. LOL

Enough of my ramblings. On with chapter one.

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Kathy stopped at the red light. She tapped her fingers on the steering wheel as she waited for the light to switch to green. She was on her way home from the store. Kathy knew her husbond could be called in at any time, so she hoped she'd be home before that happened.

The light changed and Kathy again headed for home. Her cell phone rang.

"Hello?"

"Hey, Kath. It's me. Cap. wants me at the station as soon as possible."

Kathy sighed.

"Ok. I'm on my way."

"Ok. See you when you get home. I love you."

"Love you too, El."

Kathy hung up her phone. She pushed a little more on the gas. As she turned the corner, bright headlights blinded her as her car was hit head on.

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Four Years Later

Captain Elliot Stabler fixed the cuff of his suit. He adjusted his tie and dusted off some lint on his sleeve. He was preparing to interview applicants for the new live-in caretaker. The Stabler family had been through sixteen care takers since Kathy's death, adveraging about three months per caretaker.

Elliot had become used to hiring new caretakers every so often. He honestly didn't know how long each one would last, but he knew it wouldn't take too long for them to quit.

Captain Stabler walked into the living room. He looked at his watch. The first applicant was due to be there in ten minutes.

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Applicant number one sat in the chair across from Elliot. Her name was Gretchen Sanders. She was 65 years old, and she seemed a bit odd.

"So have you had experiances taking care of children before?"

"Oh, I'd love some cookies. Thank you, Dear."

Elliot raised an eyebrow.

"Thank you, Miss Sanders. That'll be all."

Elliot helped her out of the door and into a cab. He shook his head as he prepared for applicant number two.

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Amila Diaz now occupied the chair Gretchen Sanders occupied an hour ago. Not only was Diaz late, she was eyeing the house like she was a potential buyer.

"So how patient would you say you are?"

Diaz, chewing her gum, looked at him.

"I'd say I'm pretty patient, but the state don't think so."

"The state?"

"Yeah, they said I had an extremely short fuse. That's why my ex has custody of our kids."

Elliot thanked her for her time and escorted her out the door.

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Over the course of the day, Elliot interview over a dozen applicants, each with their own "unique characteristics". He began to wonder if his kids had ran off every good caretaker avalible in New York. He sighed and took a drink of his scotch. He had one more applicant left for the day.

Fifteen minutes later, there was a knock at the Stabler's door. Elliot opened it. A tall brunette woman with chocolate brown eyes entered the room.

"Hello. My name is Olivia Benson. I'm here about the caretaker position."

She smiled. Elliot smiled back and nodded. She walked to the chair and took a seat. Elliot sat in the chair across from her.

"Now, Miss Benson. Have you ever had experiance working with children before?"

"Yes. I worked for the children's shelter on south 11th street."

Elliot nodded.

"So I take it the shelter was your last employer?"

"Yes, Sir."

"How long did you work with them?"

"Three years."

"What was the reason for your departure?"

"Budget cuts. They had to let go of four higher paid employees."

Elliot nodded.

"So would you say your a patient person?"

Olivia nodded.



"At the shelter, I worked with children from various backgrounds; Some of which were very troubled. I've worked with abused children of all kinds, mentally and physically handicapped children, and even delinquent children with records. I've never lost my cool with any of the children."

Elliot nodded. She sounded perfect. After he asked a few more questions, he told her he'd be in touch.

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The next day, after he checked Olivia for a criminal record, he called her to inform her she had gotten the job.

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So? What do you all think so far? I will update as often as I can. It all depends on how much time I have to write and when I'll be able to type the chapters up. It will most likely be on weekends, but I don't know. So if you like this, don't give up on it. smile.gif

If you read, please leave a review. Reviews make me smile. smile.gif

(For the USAboard members. I know I said I didn't want any open stories in the process of my move, but I just couldn't help myself. smile.gif )

TammyBee
its really good continue plzz n im gonna guess from ur sig n the fact that its my favorite movie nd i basically no it by heart with all that said is it ~> The Sound of Music??? am i rite
BensonPrincess
QUOTE (TammyBee @ Mar 10 2008, 06:06 PM) *
its really good continue plzz n im gonna guess from ur sig n the fact that its my favorite movie nd i basically no it by heart with all that said is it ~> The Sound of Music??? am i rite


Yay! Another TSOM fan. Yep. That's the movie. But I hope knowing that won't make it boring for anyone.
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, I thought you did a good job.
svufaneo
this story is amazing.! biggrin.gif hope you find time to type up the next chapter. i will definatly be reading it.!
Aliecia
Yea I liked it.
And Kathy is dead awww. Freedom at last!
EO finally
Monevia
OKay this is nice. I love the movie TSOM.
BensonPrincess
AN: Hey guys. I'm not sure when I'll be able to update this story. I'm still trying to work out a few things in chapter 2. It's not coming along like I want it to and I'm trying to get it to work. If it's not up by the 26th, it'll be a while before I get it updated. Here's why:

My father is getting out of the military. The packing guys are coming on the 26th and they will pack up the computers so I won't have access to the board or anything. We have our final inspection of this house on the 27th or 28th and we are leaving here on the 28th or 29th. Once we leave it will take us a few days to get back to our hometown and then I'll have to work on getting a job. So I won't have as much time to be on the computer as I do now.

I'll try to get my parents to let me keep my story stuff so I can continue writing. Maybe I'll be able to make chapter 2 work. Sorry about all this, but life doesn't always work out the way you wish they would.

Again, Sorry about the long wait. I'm doing what I can.

DPB/Sparkling Dolphin
Aliecia
OK
hope you able to update soon take it easy.
BensonPrincess
AN: I'm sorry to have to inform you all that I will be out of touch for a little while. My family is moving. On the 26th, my family will be having packing people to come in and pack our things, including the computers. We will be leaving our current home and hitting the road back to my hometown on the 28th. I don't know how long it will take for things to get settled, but once they do, I hope to be able to update my stories. I waited to post this, in hopes of having an update for one or both of my open stories, but it has been nearly impossible to write with the move on the horizon and the cleaning out the house of things we're not keeping and such.

So to those who are reading "The New Caretaker" and/or "Learning To Feel", please hang in there. I'll try to be back as soon as I can.

I'll be posting this everywhere I have posted my stories, and also on both my message boards, USAnetwork.com & JulieAndrewsFourm.com. And to those on the boards, Have fun, and I can't wait to come back and read all the things that happened in my absence.

I'll be around untill the 25th, and after that, I wish you all to have fun and enjoy yourselves!



Sparkling Dolphin, DolphinPrincessBenson, Maria4ever

BensonPrincess
Disclaimer: I do not own SVU. The only thing I own is this story. (Actually, part of it was inspired by a movie, so even the story isn't totally mine, is it? LOL)

Hey guys! I'm back. It's been a while. Almost two weeks. Things aren't completely settled yet, but I wanted to get this update to you guys as soon as possible. I really hope you all like this. I worked with this FOREVER to get it to work the way I wanted it.

Ok. In this chapter, Olivia meets the kids. I adjusted their ages. I wanted them to be relatively close in age, and quite young when Kathy died.

Enough of my ramblings. On with chapter two.

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Olivia looked around the room she'd be living in. It wasn't big, but it wasn't small either. She brought her suitcases into the room and began to unpack. She wanted to change before the kids got home from school. She decided on a pair of navy blue slacks and a light blue shirt with darker blue tulips on it. She fixed her hair into a ponytail. She walked into the living room and awaited the kids arrival.

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An hour later, the door opened and five children walked into the living room. Elilot stood.

"Kids. Line up."

All five children lined up in order from oldest to youngest.

"This is Miss Olivia Benson. She's your new caretaker. "

"Hello, Olivia." the children said in unison.

Olivia smiled. "Hello."

The oldest girl was glaring at her and the youngest boy was eyeing her curiously. Elliot walked behind the oldest girl.

"This is Maureen. She's 15."

He walked behind the next child in line.

"This is Kathleen. She's 12."

He walked behind the next two kids. "This is Elizabeth and Richard. They're 8."

Twins. Olivia thought.

Then finally Elliot walked behind the youngest boy.

"And this is Eli. He's 5."

Olivia smiled again. "It's nice meeting all of you."

Suddenly Elliot's phone rang. "Sorry kids, I've got to go. You guys mind Olivia."

Elliot looked at Olivia and smiled. "Good luck." he said. Olivia nodded.

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Once it was just Olivia and the kids, she rose from the couch.

"Well, I'm sure you have plenty of homework to do, so why don't you guys take care of that, and I'll start dinner. Any requests?"

Eli cocked his head to the side. "Can you make grilled cheese?" he asked.

Olivia smiled. "Yes, I can."

Eli smiled broadly. Maureen crossed her arms.

"Don't bother making any for me. I'm not hungry." She grabbed her bag and took off upstairs.

Olivia quietly sighed. She knew which child to start with.

"Ok. You guys get your homework and I'll make the grilled cheese."

The remaining four children grabbed their bags and, like Maureen, headed upstairs.

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Ten minutes later, Olivia had everyone's dinner made. She even made some for Maureen, just in case.

"Kids! Dinner!" Olivia called out.

At the sound of Olivia's voice, four children came scurring down the stairs. Olivia noticed it was Maureen who remained upstairs.

"Kids, you guys sit and eat. I'll be right back. I'm taking Maureen's dinner up to her."

"Good luck." Kathleen said. "She's not going to listen to you."

Olivia grabbed the plate and glass of milk and headed up. Each child had his or her name on the door. Olivia found Maureen's door and knocked.

"Who is it?" Maureen asked.

"Olivia"

The door opened. "What do you want?"

Olivia held up the dinner. "I brought you your dinner."

Maureen rolled her eyes. "I said I wasn't hungry."

"You need to at least try to eat."

Maureen glared. "I said I wasn't hungry. Why do you care anyway?"

Olivia looked at her. "Why shouldn't I?"

Maureen seemed a little surprised by the answer. "I just want the milk."

Olivia smiled. "Okay." She handed her the glass. Maureen shut the door.

At least it's a start. Olivia thought.

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After the kids had eaten, Olivia cleaned up the kitchen. Elliot walked in the door as she was washing dishes.

"Oh, Hello Mr. Stabler." Olivia greeted him warmly.

Elliot gave a small smile. "Hello, Miss Benson. How were the kids?"

"Good. They ate dinner, and are now finishing up their homework."

Elliot looked at her. "What about Maureen? Did she eat anything?"

Olivia smiled. "She drank a glass of milk."

Elliot's eyes widened slightly and he smiled. "Wow! Day one and you've already accomplished what other caretakers couldn't. I'm impressed and very greatful you got her to have something for dinner."

Olivia just smiled and continued the dishes. She picked up a knife out of the water. Elliot hung up his coat and shut the closet door. The door startled Olivia.

"Ow!" she said

"What?" Elliot asked.

"Oh, It's nothing. I just cut my finger."

Elliot walked into the kitchen. "Let me see."

Olivia showed him the cut. "See. It's nothing."

Elliot took Olivia's hand and began to apply a little pressure to the cut.

"Ow." Olivia said softly.

"Sorry." Elliot said.

Olivia couldn't help but notice how gental his big hands were. After a few minutes, Elliot released her hand. The cut had stopped bleeding.

"There." he said, as he looked up from her hand. Olivia felt herself blush.

She smiled. "Thanks." She resumed the dishes.

Elliot noticed her blush. He smiled and left the kitchen.

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So? What do you all think so far?

If you read, please leave a review. Reviews make me smile. smile.gif

jacobsmommy06
Read your story for the first time. I love it. Please keep going. biggrin.gif
RollingStone
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness.. Oh my goodness.. OH MY GOODNESS!!
I love it.. please continue when you get the chance.. this fanfic puts a good spin on E/O and you're doing an amazing job writing it!!
Sarah1989
wuaaaa like it :-) Please update soon :-)
Aliecia
Ok, i've been blown away!
That was great!
Update soon.
Addicted2Benson
THIS IS SO COOL ITS A DIFFERENT EO BUT I LOVE IT PWEEZ WRITE MORE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!! biggrin.gif
OliviaMyHero
Oh My that was awesome. UPdate soon.
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