SAW: Fist victim, first call.

Lorri:

Lorri is in a cold black room. She slowly wakes up and sits up straight. Lorri feels nothing sees nothing then the lights snap on. Lorri looks down and see a long silver rod percing her body. She begins to breath heavy looks around. She stands up in pain. After a minute of standing a tv turns on, with an odd looking doll and blood red eyes.
The doll starts talking.
"Hello Lorri, I want to play a game. So far in what could so loosely be called your life you've taken advantage of your power and used against so many innocent people. Do you think that just because your an atternoy you can do anything. Well let's put your so called "power" to the test. I'm assuming you've figured out that there's a rod pericing through your body.And that rod is chained to the wall. So if you want to get out you'll have to have the strenght to walk out of this door and make it out alive. Well at least before that other rod on the other side of the wall comes racing towards you. You have 90 seconds. Let the game begin... LIVE OR DIE... MAKE YOUR CHOICE!

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Lorri gasps for air that she doesn't need. She looks at the spring timer attatched to the other rod.
"SOMEONE HELP ME!" She pants franticly and begins to panic. She starts to pull the rod and hears a string snap and then a clock counting down. 1:30..1:29..1:28.. Lorri looks around for some sort of help. "ANYONE! HELP!" 1:20..1:19..1:18

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it'll have you laughing if you've seen the real Saw.
This one nearly killed me: http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=DxM7CgGuTIw&...feature=related

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Lorri pulled the chains from the rod. She begins to whimper.
"HELLLLP!" She cluches her teeth and begs for anyone. 1:14...1:13...1:12...1:11.
Lorri soon starts to think and realizes that the only way to live is to pull herself from the rod. So she grabs hold of it before her and begins walking. One foot slowly at a time. As her body begins to slide she is screeching in pain. Blood is falling from all open skin of her body. She moves another foot forward. 1:08...1:07...1:06...1:05...
She panics again. Blood is now pouring from her mouth. She yelps and pushes the rod back.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!" She stops for the pain is too much for her to handle. Her face is of choking agony and tears have mixed with blood covering her face. .56....55.....54....53.....52....51

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She looks down at the skin crawling scene. Her body is now adapting to the pain. However, she will make it out. 'I will' she thinks. Lorri continues pushing the rod back harder and harder. Every scream louder and louder. Her fingers seem to have grown to pushing that pipe out.
.46....45....44....43....42....41.
"Oh god no! Please," she pleads quietly. Tears have now become a habit to falling. And blood from her mouth is like spit. Everything seems to slow down. Her voice, her movements and then she realizes. This next breath is her last. The time seems to speed up or at least that last 20 seconds went by very fast. She turns her head still holding on to the pipe. Her eyes wide and filled with water. 15...14...13...12...11...10...9...8...7...6...5...4...
"No, no, no!" 2...1... Beep! The rod fast forwards and gripps her straight in the heart. She thinks for one split second 'I'm dead' and her head drops and blood trickels down her chest.
Her hands are still holding the pipe.

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Lorri's Fate: The Call

Olivia is sitting at her desk. She is going through old files looking at all the cases that were closed. She then looks at the number of cases that weren't closed. Tears slip from her eyes. The phone rings startling her. She closes the folder and answers the phone.
"Benson, special victims," she answers.
"You have a case called down at wilson wharehouse. It's a murder crime. Are you willing to take this?" the voice asks.
"Well, I deal with sex crimes why would I get called-"
"Not just you the whole squad," the man interrupts. Olivia relaxes herself in the chair.
"Excuse me?"
"The whole squad. You were um... requested,"
"Ok, we'll take it," Olivia hangs up the phone and leans forward. "El, Munch, Finn...we've um...gotta case,"

They all head to the Wilson wharehouse heading to the crime scene. Elliot enters first. The smell of blood and rotting skin lingers throughout the whole room. Olivia enters next holding her arm up to her nose. Munch steps in and squints his eyes. Finally Finn comes in and wrinkles his nose.
"What the hell-" Elliot spots the dead body with long rods piercing her body.
"Holly crap," Munch mutters. Olivia slips her gloves on and goes over to the woman. She lifts up her head. Olivia shrieks and jumps back frightened.
"What?" Elliot rushes over to Olivia.
"That's Lorri. She an attorney. I used to go to school with her,"

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Olivia cradles her head against Elliot's chest. She is crying and you can hear her. Munch goes over to the body. He looks at both rods piercing her body. He see's that she is holding one of rods.
"This could be suicide," Finn suggests noticing her holding the rods. Munch chakes his head.
"No, it's not suicide. It's Jigsaw," Munch corrects turning to everyone.
"Whose Jigsaw?" Elliot asks as Olivia turns to face Munch.
"Jigsaw is a twisted cerial killer. He takes people that don't appreciate their lives and puts em' to the test. Technically speaking...he's not really a killer at all, he make sure his victims chose to die,"

"WELL FORCING SOMEONE TO DIE IS MURDER!" Olivia bellows. Other investigators walk in the room. Two head for the tv. Olivia walks out and Munch follows her.
"Olivia it's a game he plays," Munch whispers.
"This isn't a game John!" she shouts in a whisper voice.
"No, he wants them to survive. He wants these people to cherish their lives, not hate them. They have to play by the rules!" Munch argues.
"You're a real jerk! Lorri cherished her life!" Olivia snaps.
"Yeah, but did she take it for advantage?" he comes back smoothly. Olivia looks down and thinks. "She had a great deal of power. I wouldn't be surprised if-" an investigator comes out.
"We got the tape out clean," she hands the tape to Munch. Munch smiles hoping this will be the answer to everything.
He was wrong.

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Finn: Living for the dead

It had been a long day at the squadroom. Finn was tired and particularlly they had found no leads. However Finn was obsessed with finding who did this. So he decided to go home and work.
He sat on his bed restlessly and began pulling out all the papers of other victims of Jigsaw before today. He first pulled out an xavier. He had been to jail more then twenty times and was found dead in an old bathroom. Autopsy said they found nerve gas in his system and he died of a slit to the throat. Finn put that file down and moved on to another one. This time it was a girl named Amanda. And it said she had lived. A loud clash echoed in the house. Finn snapped his head up to see what happened. He grabbed his gun and got off his bed. He slowly inched for the source of the sound. He heard another step and saw a blach flash sweep by him.

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"Come out!" Finn called. He held his gun out for protection. He stepped on the other side of the doorway. Finn lowered his gun. He felt a needle stick him in his arm. Finn turned around and saw a pig face right at him.
Everything fell to blackness.


Finn's Trap:

He awoke with a sharp pain in his head. His vision came into focus. He was in a smalled captivated room, dark and warm. He had seen a key in front of him in a box full nails ready to stab anything at first touch. Finn began looking around and he saw a tape recorder. He reached for it and grabbed the recorder of the string. The tape said 'Play Me'. Finn pushed play.

"Hello Finn, you're probably wondering where you are. While I can assure you that your location is not important what these walls offer you is important. The gift of Life, or death if you choose so.
The device your wearing on your head is what I like to call the snapper. It is merely placed on your head and his tightened alittle tighter than comfertable. The key to unlock the device is in the box amung other uncomfertable feelings. When this tape if finished the device on your head will start pulling back very slowly, eventually til your neck breaks. You have to get the key out in time. You can barely hold up your head with all these cases pouring on you. And your hands merely just hold up the gun to bring others down. Are you worth losing your feeling in your hands to go on living? Live or die make your choice,"

poor Fin. I remember the "snapper". I can't wait what happend Please make him alive :-)

Finn began pulling the device on his head. He screamed for help, but it only echoed through out the room. He heard a beeping sound and frooze. He spotted a timer immeadately as it was counting down from one minute. .59....58....57....56....55.
"No, no, no!" He paniced, but figured the only way to live is to get the key. So he slowly placed his hand near the opening to get the key. .52....51....50....49.
Finn slowly pushed his hand through the nails. Blood trickled from his hand as he kept persuing for the key. One of the nails stabbed him roughly and ripped his hand back out. Willing to live Finn stuck his other hand in the box. .47....46....45....44.

Oh my gooooooood Go Fin go! Don't give up!

Finn kept reaching in no matter a great of deal of pain he was in. One of the nails slightly scrapped his skin making him jump. His hand got stuck on three nails. Finn shrieks.
"SOMEONE HELP ME! ANYONE HELLLLP!"
.40....39....38....37....36....35....34....33.
Finn paused for a minute. Everything seemed to slow down. He turned his head to the left. The device gave a great jerk pulling his head back. Then everything seemed to fast forward. The time went from .33 to .15....14....13....12....11....10....9....8.
"No, no, no, no," Finn stuck his other free hand in the box, but he paniced to much to get his hand out.
.5....4....3....2....1.... beep! The device gave one more quick jerk. Finn laying there dead.

Munch's Doom:

Munch sit at his desk playing with a cush. His feet up on the table and his head relaxed. But somewhere inside munch felt alittle tensed like he knew something was wrong. Munch fell back in his chair. And layed there on the ground. Cragen came stomping in. Munch scrambled to his feet.
"Munch quit foolin around. We've got a serious problem,"
"What,"
"We just got a call about Finn," Cragen whispered.
"Is he alright?" Cragen sighed

oh no Fin is dead That's really sad

Munch began charging out of the squad room to his car. Cragen came to the window.
"It's Wilson's Wharehouse, two other Jigsaw experts will meet you there to talk with you," Cragen said. Munch backed up and took off.
He arrived at the wharehouse in a matter of minutes. He saw two girls standing out front. He walked up to him.
"I'm Detective Shay, this is my partner Detective Ria. We've been on the jigsaw case for years," one introduced. Detective Shay was tall pulled up chocolate hair and matching brown eyes. Detective Ria was petit curly brown hair hanging on her shoulders and goldish color eyes.
"I'm Detective Munch," he greeted back. They walked inside and to the room where Finn was.
Sure enough Finn was almost hanging dead with the device to his head. Shay walked over to the tape recorder. she knelt down and picked it up, she played it.
"Hello Finn, you're probably wondering where you are. While I can assure you that your location is not important what these walls offer you is important. The gift of Life, or death if you choose so.
The device your wearing on your head is what I like to call the snapper. It is merely placed on your head and his tightened alittle tighter than comfertable. The key to unlock the device is in the box amung other uncomfertable feelings. When this tape if finished the device on your head will start pulling back very slowly, eventually til your neck breaks. You have to get the key out in time. You can barely hold up your head with all these cases pouring on you. And your hands merely just hold up the gun to bring others down. Are you worth losing your feeling in your hands to go on living? Live or die make your choice,"
Munch looked at her feriously. His eyes narrowed.
"Obvioulsy he didn't care to much for his life," Shay said with confidence. Munch inched closer.
"He damn well did care! He was on this force-"
"Just because you have a badge doesn't mean your safe detective," Shay interrupted.
"Found something!" Ria called out. Shay walked over. She shinned the flashlight on what Ria was looking at. A puzzle shape was cut out of Finns skin.
"This is defintely Jigsaw," Shay walked back over to Munch. "Look Munch I suggest you've had enough for one night. Why don't you go home and get some rest, we'll call you if anything comes up alright?" shay suggested. Munch nodded and headed home.

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Munch layed down on his bed after a nice warm shower. He set his glasses on his night stand and closed his eyes. He relaxed himself still thinking of Finns tragic death. Then he feels a stab in his arm. He shoots up in horror and looks around. He see's a pig face right in his breath. Everything becomes dreary and he collapses back to his bed......

Olivia's Game Begins:

Olivia sits at her desk impaitently. He eyes weary, her body restless and her mind totally leaving her. Everyone around her is dying. First Lorri then Finn. Ria and Shay came in the squadroom. Olivia began dozing off. Shay tapped Olivia.
"Hey wake up," she whispered. Olivia opened her eyes and shook her head. She sat up straight.
"Where's Munch?" Olivia asked curiously.
"Sent em' home," Ria replyed.
"Get anything?" Olivia continued.
"Well the tape, and the device that's about it," Ria replyed in monotone once more....

. . . .

Munch opens his eyes very slowly. He can't see anything. He begins swatting his hands around to find a wall. He hits one. Munch places both hands on the wall and begins feeling his way up the wall to a switch. He tunrs the light on. He's placed in some prehistoric bathroom. Munch see's a tape player sitting only five feet in front of him. He reaches for it.

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Munch pulled the tape player up to him. He pressed play.
"Hello John, or as they like to call you at the squadroom Munch. Day after day you have watched rape victim after rape victim go by...and with no sympathy. You believe life should be lived, but as a previous detective for homicide you lived amoung the dead. You give no credit and every woman that you have dated as call you crude. I like to call you unworthy of the body you posess, of the life you've been given. So breathe as little as you can. You have been breathing a deadly nerve gas. You've been breathing it since you arrived. If you wait two hours the door will be opened and you can walk out. Unfourtaneately you i=only have an hour to live. You posess the combination to the safe. The combination is written within you. Will you save yourself or will you die an anger? Live or die make your choice,"

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Munch dropped the player. He began to move forward, but the chain on his foot held him back.
"This can't be happening," he whispered so desperately. He fell to the ground on his knees.
"SON OF A BITCH!" his bellowed. Though the voice traveled nowhere accept throughout the room. No one could hear him. He was only a shadow in the night. Perhaps there was a way to beat this maybe, he could slid his foot......

He was crazy to even begin to think there was another way. He had to suffer. Suffer to live? he thought. Munch stood up and began pacing with the distance he was allowed. He stuck his hands in his pockets. He felt another tape. He froze and was scared and antsy at the same time. He bent down and grabbed the tape player, holding on to it for dear life. He slipped the tape in.

"Hello again. You are probably pacing back and forth again and again wondering how to so called BEAT THIS. Well I can assure you there is only one way to beat this. You must do what I tell you or die hard trying. Listen closely as there are a number of tasks I want you to do..."

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Munch dropped the player. His hands were shaking so bad he couldn't keep himself still. The player continued to talk.
"Your first task is to get out of here, before the nerve slow creeping into your breaks you down and start bleeding from every orophus you have. I understand you are chained though. If you wait an hour the chain will unlock it'self. However you don't have that long to live. There is a key hidden in this room or better yet hidden in you. I'll give you hint as to where..... it's right before your eyes,"
Munch felt his eye which he had no idea was even messed with.
"You don't feel pain yet, but you and you see perfectly fine, but you won't. Will you give up the thing you need most to go on living? Liv or Die make your choice," The tape stopped. Munch look around for a piece of glass. He bent down o his knees and reached forward for the glass. It was part of a mirror. He pulled it to him and looked at himself. His eye swollen, cut up, and bleed ever so slowly. Tears ran down his cheeks. The pain no beginning to kick in. He flipped the glass over. On the back was the scapal. He ripped it from the glass and held it up decidin whether or not to do it.

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Munch's poor eye.. :[
Why'd I send him home?
Sucha dummy I tell you..
haha.
Now if you JigSaw decides to
kill me there will be problems.
LOL.

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Olivia's call:

More tears slipped from his eyes. He couldn't do this. Sit here and die or get the key from the eye.
. . .


Olivia sat at her office tired waiting to hear any word from Munch. Elliot came over to her and shook her slightly. Olivia jumped.
"Nothing from Munch," he said as he sat down on her desk.
"He's gone El. We need to find him," she muttered tiredly.
"That's not all," Elliot began. Olivia sat up straight.
"What?"
"Well Shay isn't here either. And we found photos on her desk of a warehouse. I think that might be where Munch is," Elliot suggested.
"Let's go!"

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Olivia and Elliot along with many other cops from other precints arrived at the wharehouse. All wearing bullet proof vests. Ria soon showed up later.
"I heard you guys had a problem?" Ria asked frightened.
"Munch and Shay are missing," Elliot answered. "Break down the door. We have a warrant!" he called out. The S.W.A.T team broke down the door and headed in first. Elliot, Olivia and Ria followed after. They ran up the stairs into a small warm dark room. The S.W.A.T team stepped aside. Elliot kept into the room first, then Ria then Olivia. Inch by inch step by step they got closer. Holding their guns in front of them. Elliot felt a fence in front of him. He reach out for some sort of handle. The lights came on has he opened. There sat someone in a black coat with red lining. The person looked up. Elliot threw back the hood ans the woman revealed.
"Shay...." Ria said in shock. Shay slowly raised her hands in the air.
"Alright you sick son of a bitch. I'm arresting you." Elliot snaped.
"You can't! Unless you want him to die. I suggest you worry more about him than me!" Shay hissed.
"What are you talking about?" Olivia wondered.
"On the other side of the room there are monitors. Your boy Munch is on one of them," there was a pause. "By they way. Good job Ria. For setting up the photos, the traps. And of course the victim," she finished.