sammieisback
Jan 23 2008, 12:10 AM
olivia benson walked out of that house pissed. picking up her phone she started dialing....
elliot:"who are you calling?"
olivia:"children servises.."
elliot:"dont."
olivia:"you cant posibley be okay with what they're doing to her?"
elliot:"look its a nightmare, but its a bad situation no matter what they do they think they're doing whats best for the kid."
olivia:"they're trapping her in a childs body forever."
elliot:"as a parent you have to make hard choices, now for instance this last pregnancy kathy was over 40 it makes it for much higher risk things like downsindrom."
olivia:"and you know what? eli turned out perfect, so spare me the perils of women over 40 having babies." she walked away pissed 'so what if i have a baby, if anything is wrong with him or her i could take care of it.' she slammed the car door and sat down elliot must have caught on and when he said it she wanted to slap him so hard he couldnt think of any coherant thoughts.
elliot:"you know you'd make a great mom."
olivia:"ohhhh my god, i am not having this conversation." she looked the other way.
elliot:"your great with kids.."
olivia:"yeah i know..." elliot leaned over and looked at her, he looked serious she wanted to smack the look off his face...
elliot:"maybe you should think about having kids you know anyway you wanna do it, i'll support you." he said that last part in a rush, she almost melted...'anyWAY you wanna DO IT, i'll support you..' what the hell does that mean. in the middle of his confusing sentence, still looking away, her jaw dropped no way he just said that.
olivia:"elliot do me a favor?"
elliot:"yeah?" he nodded his head an answered all to willingly.
olivia:"shut the hell up and drive before i take out this gun and waste a bullet on you." he looked at her taken aback by her statement insted of saying anything, he drove...
what do ya'll thinky? what can i say writing is in my blood? well its gunna get better! the are also gunna bring up what elliot ment later. comment!
EandOshipper01
Jan 23 2008, 12:33 AM
very evil.. . he should hve sex with her so they could hve hott kids. .
lol
sammieisback
Jan 23 2008, 12:36 AM
im getting there! and yes from usa and yes im trying to add you! aha

i dont think there are multipule emo country girls out there!
Bubba_Bridges
Jan 23 2008, 04:00 AM
Hi Bubba here, thanks for the chapter.
sammieisback
Jan 23 2008, 09:09 AM
elliot was a little nervous, his hand waas slightly shakey but he wiped his face with it and it stopped, well sort of. her hand was sitting there and to him it looked empty, he went to grab it.
elliot:"liv...." as soon as his hand touched hers, it jerked away.
olivia:"dont." it held no sarcasm, no joking no sorrow, just vicious, evil almost cruel.
elliot:"i should be the one to say that." her head jerked toward him.
olivia:"acording to who, you!?"
elliot:"i know you want kids, okay! i want you to have them. to have a family!"
olivia:"im not meant to have a family, and last time i checked i dont give a damn what you think!" her voice was escalating, she was getting angry and elliot, weird enough was not angry at all. didnt prevent his voice from sounding like it wasnt though. but his voice lowered to almost a whisper, he was actually hurt.
elliot:"right, 8 years dont mean anything. longest realationship with a man doesnt mean anything. bestfriends or atleast we used to be....." he had tears threating to fall but he was damn sure he wasnt gunna shed a damn one.
olivia:"elliot....?"
elliot:"your right its none of my buisness, sorry."
olivia:"elliot....."
elliot:"you've always had family, liv and always will whether you like it or not...." olivia knew what he meant but she wanted to hear him say it, out loud for her ears.
elliot:"you'vee always had me and always will livie....." he caught his slip up and knew it would piss her off....
elliot:"i....." but instead she smiled and kind of blushed she put her hand on his and happily whispered.
olivia:"dont...." she looked in his eyes, so blue, so sweet. he didnt smile, but his eyes were.
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munch just caught olivia off gaurd and the first thing that came out of her mind was elliot. she walked by him fast so she wouldnt bitch slap him....olivia whispered through clenched teeth though she knew most of them heard her.
olivia:"jerk off...." elliot grabbed her arm. and pulled her back she jerked around which was almost impossible with how close he was his hand still on her arm caused fire. his forhead touched hers, the flame died from her eyes and she looked deep into his eyes bright blue, how did he do it? one day she just wanted to ask if he had contacts....or was legally blind. she could barely breath with his proximity she couldnt help but notice how close his lips were to hers, slightly parted..
elliot:"i didnt." he couldnt take his eyes off her lips, he couldnt breath he didnt mean to do this. her proximity was killling him.
olivia:"i..."
captain:"can you two please registar back in reality?" pulling apart she could finally breathe, but wanted so bad to be that close to him, again.
sooo what you thinky?willl write more after school, want many, many comments!
StablerBensonShipper17
Jan 23 2008, 12:43 PM
Ooo, that's really good.
Please continue?
Pleaseee?
{kat}
sammieisback
Jan 23 2008, 06:04 PM
Munch:"ya'll two a little friendly there today..."
Elliot:"munch? you gotta learn to keep your mouth shut before I make it swell shut..." munch stepped closer to elliot, in return elliot took a step forward as well. She stepped between the two aragont sons a' bitches. She put a hand on elliot's chest. She looked him in the eyes suprised to see him looking at her.
Olivia:"don't."
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Walking to the elevator
Elliot:"you know I didn't say anything to the guys about you wanting to have a baby..."
EandOshipper01
Jan 23 2008, 06:23 PM
pls add more
AllisonElizabeth
Jan 23 2008, 09:58 PM
OMG! it was sooo good please please please write more soon!
sammieisback
Jan 24 2008, 12:27 AM
olivia:"i realize that now..."
elliot:"look olivia if you need anybody to...." it was said in a rush but olivia cut him off.
olivia:"el, i tried for adoption..." she also said this in a rush, she looked down. elliot had a smile that bared his teeth she loved the smile but could tell it was fake.
olivia:"el, whats wrong?"
elliot:"nothing im happy cant you tell?" he was busted 'damn'
olivia:"el, i've been telling you alot if you dont want me to have a baby,i wont." she looked serious. his faced changed he looked remorcful sad like a dad felt bad cause his kid thought he was mad.
elliot:"no, liv, never say that again i just, dont want you to adopt i mean you can i dont care its none of my buisness but, i want you to have your baby."
olivia:"well your lucky, they turned me down i was a single parent work all hours, you know the deal...."
elliot:"you okay with that?"
olivia:"yeah, your god doesnt want me to have a baby."
elliot:"just try."
olivia:"with who!"
elliot:"sweety, there's that whole embrio thing, artifical insemanation." he whisped."or you could just go old fasion way."
olivia:"no i cant el."
elliot:"one night stand olivia, you want to know your babies father believe me you do."
olivia:"he would want to be involved in the babies life i'd feel horible."
elliot:"it's your choice liv, but if you need me anything at all, anything i'll be right here just ask." he was trying to get at somthing but what she wanted to know.
EandOshipper01
Jan 24 2008, 01:01 AM
ohh im thinking he wants to get her pregnant
plsd add mooooore
StablerBensonShipper17
Jan 24 2008, 09:40 AM
Please add more. It's getting really
good right now. =D
{kat}
sammieisback
Jan 24 2008, 09:20 PM
this chap includeds a little instant messaging, and text messaging.....
olivia benson sat at her desks, she picked up a piece of paper scriblled a little on it and hurled it at elliots head. hitting his eye.
elliot:"owww..." clutching his eye he glared at her. she grinned, he opened the note and smiled....
go on aim, keep me company, anyway you wanna do it by that sounds wrong what were you thinking el?" -liver :] elliot remembered when he first called him liver she smacked his head so hard it left a mark.
he scribled threw........
okay, benson babe.......
love your sexy eyed partner, -el
she couldnt help but giggle. she logged on so did he.
det.unstabler:bored now?
benson+stabler=bff:no, i got you.....
det.unstabler:and that makes you happy?
benson+stabler=bb:yes.....about what we were talking about earlier............
i know it short but written during commercial be back after its over!
EandOshipper01
Jan 24 2008, 09:31 PM
ADD MOREERERRERE. :]
EO_Not_ED
Jan 24 2008, 09:45 PM
moooooooooooooooooooore????
=[[[
SVUgurl92
Jan 24 2008, 11:06 PM
loooooooove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! add more!! plz
sammieisback
Jan 26 2008, 01:04 AM
det.unstabler:what about it?
benson+stabler=bff:you said"look olivia if you need anybody to...." but i cut you off....
det.unstabler:it was nothing livie..
benson+stabler=bff:were you gunna ask.....
wives+conspiracy=bad has entered chat..
det.unstabler:oh munch......
wives+conspiracy=bad:whats wrong with munch? were you 2 having a privet chat?
drugs,sex,andcops=nyc has joined chat...
wives+conspiracy=bad:fin they dont want us here, they were having a privet discussion
det.unstabler:no we wernt.
drugs,sex,andcops=nyc:how come liv aint talkin?
sorry i got a tummy ache ill ad more tomarro
sammieisback
Jan 27 2008, 02:48 PM
newbietosvu has joined chat........
det.unstabler:all of you go away!
wives+conspiracy=bad:hello there lake.....
i_give_the_orders! has entered chat......
benson+stabler=bff:hey cap...
i_give_the_orders!:hello olivia.....
det.unstabler:my god! is this a free for all!
i_give_the_orders!:watch it stabler!
drugs,sex,andcops=nyc:wow, i like this were talking like one big family!
wives+conspiracy=bad:fin, stop. just stop.
newbietosvu:hey guys sorry, i went and got coffe....
det.unstbler:if you idiots remember were all in the same room.....we saw you get up!
newbietosvu:sorry, munch's coffe is getting to my head...
benson+stabler=bff:ha, we all agree! deal with it munch!
EandOshipper01
Jan 27 2008, 03:23 PM
ADDD MOREEEE. :]
Aliecia
Jan 27 2008, 04:11 PM
I likeeeeeeeee!
EO_Not_ED
Jan 27 2008, 04:14 PM
More!!!!!!
sammieisback
Jan 28 2008, 06:02 PM
ok has anyone ever heard of the movie "in gods country." or ever watched it? it's on life time alot. it's about the Mormons cult. they take young women lowest age twelve, and basically breed them. they can go to men any age as long as he is over 20 or 30. the men have multipule wives. to them they dont consider it rape, child mulestation, or insest. it's a great movie. im thinking about giving svu the case about the mormons in this story. sad thing is the cult acctually exsists. so it will be a true story only given to svu.but i will make upt the case and everything.....tell me what you think....
-sam
elliv16
Jan 28 2008, 11:38 PM
Love story, add more please!!!
sammieisback
Jan 29 2008, 12:42 AM
she walked down the aisle of children staring up at her as though she was a demon child. she held her paper with shaking hands and began to read.
abigail:"she walked through the line of solgiers, all had tear stained eyes. all she could see was the color black all she could smell were the roses on that one lonely coffin. the one that held everything she once had, everything she once had was now dead along with her hopes and dreams. a giant shadow crushed her world that day. from that day on she swore the world never saw the sun break through the horizion. everything changed the day she smelt the roses. years went by and the whiskey was now accompinied by rum and vodka. the one pill bottle was now accompinied by many. she popped pill after pill. with a large grin displayed across her face a smile that will never fade even with her demise. she felt her heart slowly stop, her pulse slow almost to nothing. she saw nothing and everything she smelt nothing and everything she tasted chalky from all the pills. she smiled knowing within moments they would be reunited by the love they deeply shared. she clutched his pillow, closed her eyes. she could have sworn she smelt roses....everything changed the day she smelt those roses."
everyone was silent as if a ghost just passed. she had a gift, she also lived within a curse. with a creative mind but yet weak heart. could she survive the journey that lay ahead for her brothers and sisters. could she survive the hatred and the fear her mother displayed? abigail had a gift but lived within in a curse. no one knew she had courage........
here is a little idea, so tell me if i should give them the mormon case or just leave it. (warning!) i do not mean write another story i mean in this story give them this case! so should i? tell me what you think. p.s. i wrote the poem.
sammieisback
Jan 29 2008, 11:46 PM
HELLO, SHOULD I? i guess not. gotta think of a new idea now....darn!
sammieisback
Feb 1 2008, 05:38 PM
you know what!?! i dont need reveiws! i'll write it for myself! just incase you want to know case part coming up next in an hour or soo! keep checking in!
sammieisback
Feb 1 2008, 07:32 PM
captain walked out of his office.
captain:"we have a case! elliot olivia central park."
when they reached central park. they saw a body warner was leaning over.
elliot:"what do we got."
warner:"16-17, stab wound to the heart. found naked...."
elliot:"any signs of sodimey?"
warner:"none."
olivia:"then why did you call us."
warner:"if your partner would have let me finish. his penis was shredded." elliot flinched.
elliot:"ouch."
warner:"yes indeed, your victim was charles willford."
olivia:"how do you know that."
warner:"my son knew him, and thats what his drivers license says. there is also a picture of a girl in there with him." "maybe you should talk to her."
olivia:"yeah." she said walking away. elliot turned around toward warner.
elliot:"any idea what his ummm.. penis was shredded with?" warner chuckled.
warner:"not yet but ill call you when i get more details."
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what do you think so far i decided to give them a different case. case leads to hints of eo. so tell me what you thinky!
sammieisback
Feb 2 2008, 01:14 AM
i see the ending of this story coming shortly, because you guys dont like it. i guess ill be adding the ending chapter to it tomarrow i guess......
sammieisback
Feb 2 2008, 02:05 PM
FINE! im finishing my story with or with out reveiws.
elliot and olivia drove in silence to charles willford's school. they needed to identify the girl, walking into the principals office. elliot spoke first.
elliot:"excuse me your the principal, correct?"
vice principal:"vice, she's sick today." showing her the picture, he asked....
elliot:"do you know this girl?"
vice principal:"why yes, that mia. she should be helping mr.crawford right now if you need her."
elliot:"thank you, and do you know if she was dating charles willford?"
vice principal:"why yes she was, they were prom queen and king. but i remember this boy, he got into a fight with charlie, i think he had a crush on mia. ummmm, what was his name? alex? yes thats right alex regan. why did somthing happen to charlie?"
elliot:"he was murdered."
vice:"oh poor mia, i believe she was expecting you know....."
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8ElandLiv8
Feb 2 2008, 06:21 PM
This is really good. Don't stop adding to it.
sammieisback
Feb 3 2008, 07:41 PM
elliot and olivia walked out of the office insync....
elliot:"you think she did it?"
olivia:"elliot, she's a teen and pregnant, i think she would want the father....."
elliot:"olivia,"
olivia:"dont."
elliot:"you've been liking that word alot havent you?" olivia smiled.
olivia:"maybe you've been trying to do a few things that your not supposed to lately..." they both laughed....
elliot:"what about that kids, alex?"
olivia:"jelousy, good motive. we should talk to him after the girl...." elliot knocked on the door....
mr.crawford:"come in!" elliot and olivia walked in...
elliot:"mia?"
mia:"yes?" they flashed their badges.
mia:"what do you need?"
olivia:"we wanna talk to you about your boy friend charles?"
mia:"charlie? why what happened? did alex do somthing to him?" olivia's eyebrows rose...
olivia:"come on." they pulled mia out into the hall.
olivia:"mia, alex is dead. he was murdered." she burst out into tears and leaned into olivia while she was sobbing the tears soaked olivia's blouse.
mia:"a...alex did this!"
olivia:"why sweety what did he say?"
mia:"alex found out i was pregnant, he was my ex. he said the baby was his i told him no. he said if he couldnt have me nobody could. i didnt think he would acctually act on it." olivia told the vice it would be best if mia went home to rest. and her and elliot were walking to the car when his phone rang.
elliot:"stabler!"
warner:"get down here!" they got into the car in silence and drove for about 5 minutes when olivia asked..
olivia:"what did warner say?" elliot mocked her.
elliot:"get down here!" olivia laughed elliot grinned staring at her smile....he love to make her laugh.
olivia:"you think she's got somthing?"
elliot:"i hope so." walking into warners office she was staring at the bodies.
warner:"finally"
olivia:"what you got."
warner:"i didnt see this at the crime scene, but the tip..." she said motioning to his man hood..."was filed down..."
elliot:"by what?"
warner:"most likely a nail file."
olivia:"our perp is a female?"
warner:"maybe...the penis was shredded by a cheese grader, most likely gray. i found a peice of gray plastic in the wound......plus with the amount of blood clotting, your vic. was still slowly dying....."
elliot:"you mean our vic was still alive while his penis was being filed and shredded."
warner:"sadly, yes." elliot turned and looked at olivia.
elliot:"ouch, sounds personal."
olivia:"yup." she grinned.
elliot:"dont get any ideas benson." they giggled.
warner:"while you guys flirt im going to get back to my work." they blushed and walked out.
8ElandLiv8
Feb 3 2008, 08:11 PM
That was a great update. Add more soon.
MariskaxGee
Feb 3 2008, 08:52 PM
oh my gooness
you cant do this to a girl.
i need the rest!
sammieisback
Feb 4 2008, 12:21 AM
they walked down the hallway for awhile both to embarressed to talk.
olivia:"do you think we were um??"
elliot:"no i mean...on less..you ummm?"
olivia:"no!"
elliot:"then no." olivia blushed..
olivia:"so ummm..."
elliot:"i think we need to um?"
olivia:"talk to alex....?"
elliot:"yeah, lets..."
olivia:"go." olivia said finishing his sentence, they both looked at eachother and grinned. they approuched the building....knocking on the kids door...
elliot:"police, alex open up!" he opened it quickly.
alex:"yes, i called my lawyer. we should go down to your station...."
elliot:"so your ready to confess?"
alex:"i cant live with out her."
elliot:"what?"
alex:"im not saying anymore with out my lawyer."
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they sat in the interigation for awhile. his lawyer showed up,
elliot:"why'd you kill him?"
alex:"i needed her!"
elliot:"but she wouldnt take you back because of him!"
alex:"no, and i wanted him to suffer!"
lawyer:"dont say anything else!"
alex:"i brought you here to cut me a deal! i say what i want!"
olivia:"how did it happen." he started sniffling....
alex:"i was walking in the park and i ran into him.....i had the knife because i brought it cuz i carved my name in the tree.....then i cut it off. i was going to hang it in my room. i saw him i ran up behind him and poked his shoulder and stabbed him. i kicked him a couple times in the head. he passed out. i figured he was dead. i drug him into the bushes and....." he was choking on his sobs now...." i went home and grabbed the cheese grader......i went back he was choking on the blood.i took his sock and stuck it in his mouth. he shut up, i stripped him! i wanted him to feel embarresed like the day i asked mia to take me back. he laughed in my face....i was sooo mad! i wanted him to feel dirty liked mia must have when he got her pregnant...there was soo much blood........i wanted to get rid of his man hood! he wasnt even a man! i didnt want him to hurt another girl! i had mia dimond file she lefted at my place.....after i did it i went back to mia....she still wouldnt take me back! and i realized it wasnt worth it! i did it i deserve to go to prison!" elliot and olivia were taken aback by the fact he would just confess.....
casey:"no deal."
lawyer:"the boy has a mental issue!" they were fighting in the hallway.....it was moving to the squad room...
elliot:"cut him a deal casey."
casey:"you work for me not him!"
elliot:"you work for cragen so do i!"
casey:"no deal!"
elliot:"he was wound to tight!"
casey:"stupidity!"
elliot:"love makes people do stupid things!"
casey:"love is no excuse for murder elliot! why the sympathy?!?"
elliot:"cause i know what its like to want some one so much your willing to kill for them! and even then you cant have them!?"
casey:"but you didnt go out and kill them!"
elliot:"but i wanted to!" elliot noticed his slip up everyone was staring at him they knew who he ment....he had just about confessed to loving olivia benson.......uhh ohhh he thought. he dared a glace at her. all color had drained from her face....
olivia:"elliot..." he held his hand up.
elliot:"dont" and stumbled back words and dashed out of the precinct...
Aliecia
Feb 4 2008, 02:11 PM
Oh my God I loved that please add MORE!!!!!!
I likeeeeeeee
DolphinPrincessBenson
Feb 4 2008, 07:22 PM
OOOOOO! Add more soon!!! It's getting really good.
sammieisback
Feb 4 2008, 09:47 PM
ok because i must please my fellow readers!

okay i've got a good idea sort of like demons with a secret twist here it goes.
it had been a week since the accident elliot made with his choice of words. captain called him in on a regular basis to his office trying to convince him to talk to huang. he was tired of people treating him like he was handi-cap. they got a case, a guy who targeted women who were in power. after weeks of persuasion he got captain to put him under cover. elliot macovoy! funny right? he told the p.o. after having a short conversation with his target Allen Rawchester. he was sitting in the therapy circle, they each said their names how old they were and why they were there.
maxwell heartson:"im maxwell heartson, im 42. i sexually abused my students. i was a gymnastic teacher."
leahman jersy:"im leahman jersy, 48 i raped and mutilated a 6 year old girl in her own room. i was the gardener.."
allan rawchester:"allen rawchester, 35 i obducted and raped 3 lawyers, after charging me with multipul traffic tickets"
elliot macovoy:"elliot macovoy, 46 i broke into a crimonology campus and raped, a inspiring lawyer and detective. both have become very sucsessfull people..."
therapist:"do you know who they are elliot?"
elliot:"yes..."
therapist:"enlighten me,."
elliot:"i dont think i should sur..." elliot didnt know who to say he only had two names pop in his head and that was a bad idea they would gutt him...
therepist:"its part of facing your problems......" elliot's voice was barely above a whisper...
elliot:"casey novak,,,*deep breath, he paused.* olivia.....ben..benson...."
DolphinPrincessBenson
Feb 4 2008, 10:32 PM
QUOTE (sammieisback @ Feb 4 2008, 09:47 PM)

ok because i must please my fellow readers!

okay i've got a good idea sort of like demons with a secret twist here it goes.
it had been a week since the accident elliot made with his choice of words. captain called him in on a regular basis to his office trying to convince him to talk to huang. he was tired of people treating him like he was handi-cap. they got a case, a guy who targeted women who were in power. after weeks of persuasion he got captain to put him under cover. elliot macovoy! funny right? he told the p.o. after having a short conversation with his target Allen Rawchester. he was sitting in the therapy circle, they each said their names how old they were and why they were there.
maxwell heartson:"im maxwell heartson, im 42. i sexually abused my students. i was a gymnastic teacher."
leahman jersy:"im leahman jersy, 48 i raped and mutilated a 6 year old girl in her own room. i was the gardener.."
allan rawchester:"allen rawchester, 35 i obducted and raped 3 lawyers, after charging me with multipul traffic tickets"
elliot macovoy:"elliot macovoy, 46 i broke into a crimonology campus and raped, a inspiring lawyer and detective. both have become very sucsessfull people..."
therapist:"do you know who they are elliot?"
elliot:"yes..."
therapist:"enlighten me,."
elliot:"i dont think i should sur..." elliot didnt know who to say he only had two names pop in his head and that was a bad idea they would gutt him...
therepist:"its part of facing your problems......" elliot's voice was barely above a whisper...
elliot:"casey novak,,,*deep breath, he paused.* olivia.....ben..benson...."
OMG! WOW! He's useing Casey and Olivia?
elliv16
Feb 5 2008, 07:30 AM
QUOTE (sammieisback @ Feb 4 2008, 09:47 PM)

ok because i must please my fellow readers!

okay i've got a good idea sort of like demons with a secret twist here it goes.
it had been a week since the accident elliot made with his choice of words. captain called him in on a regular basis to his office trying to convince him to talk to huang. he was tired of people treating him like he was handi-cap. they got a case, a guy who targeted women who were in power. after weeks of persuasion he got captain to put him under cover. elliot macovoy! funny right? he told the p.o. after having a short conversation with his target Allen Rawchester. he was sitting in the therapy circle, they each said their names how old they were and why they were there.
maxwell heartson:"im maxwell heartson, im 42. i sexually abused my students. i was a gymnastic teacher."
leahman jersy:"im leahman jersy, 48 i raped and mutilated a 6 year old girl in her own room. i was the gardener.."
allan rawchester:"allen rawchester, 35 i obducted and raped 3 lawyers, after charging me with multipul traffic tickets"
elliot macovoy:"elliot macovoy, 46 i broke into a crimonology campus and raped, a inspiring lawyer and detective. both have become very sucsessfull people..."
therapist:"do you know who they are elliot?"
elliot:"yes..."
therapist:"enlighten me,."
elliot:"i dont think i should sur..." elliot didnt know who to say he only had two names pop in his head and that was a bad idea they would gutt him...
therepist:"its part of facing your problems......" elliot's voice was barely above a whisper...
elliot:"casey novak,,,*deep breath, he paused.* olivia.....ben..benson...."
He's putting Casey and Olivia in complete danger. Wow, can't wait for more.
sammieisback
Feb 5 2008, 05:21 PM
but it leads to a dangerous eo tail spun wildley out of control! aha! you'll love it.
walking out the therapist said to all of them that they were going to bring in some of their victims to see the impact they had on their lives. as soon as they were out Rawchester spoke up....
allan:"so you really raped that benson chick?"
elliot:"yeah whats it to you?"
allan:"i met her before, real hard ass. stubborn, secretive. most of all sexy." he said with a smirk on his face.
allan:"interveiwed me one time, her partner was out she said. some tall skinny dude was with her."
elliot:"and your point?"
allan:"lets go grabb a bite, im starving." he said changing the topic. they arrived at the dinner, elliot got a coffe, allan got a water.
allan:"you ever still think about her." he said looking down at the menu, casually.
elliot:"never stop."
allan:"how was the novak chick, seen her in the papers once or twice." elliot fiddled with his coffee sturrer...
elliot:"quiet, calm. tight. mostly tense."
allan:"i hate that."
elliot:"you and me both." allan chuckled..
allan:"ever wanted revenge?"
elliot:"thought about it..."
allan:"sleep on it." and with that he walked out tossing 3 bucks on the table....
elliv16
Feb 5 2008, 08:21 PM
That guy better not go after Olivia and Casey, and Elliot better fill them in that he used their names. Can't wait fo more.
retartedforever
Feb 5 2008, 10:50 PM
QUOTE (livfan16 @ Feb 5 2008, 08:21 PM)

That guy better not go after Olivia and Casey, and Elliot better fill them in that he used their names. Can't wait fo more.
haha
love it to death
i disagree with "livfan16" or watever
they should go after them
so much more intresting
idk
sammieisback
Feb 5 2008, 10:55 PM
ok ill add more, after 911. but here is a little clip of what happens.....
did you ever think olivia would be willing to get kidnapped to get justice?
but who told her to tell elliot to play along?
sammieisback
Feb 5 2008, 11:55 PM
elliot slammed his way through the precinct, trying to get to olivia and captain. all the whilwe mumbling but he wasnt really mumbling because every body heared him.
elliot:"
mother f..uc.king, dick head. son of a OLIVIA!" he ran up behind her and grabbed her arm, and spun her around.
elliot:"olivia, im sorry im so so sorry!" he was almost pleading with her....olivia took his hands in hers and looked in his eyes...she got a little closer.
elliot:"im so sorry livia, it wasnt my fault forgive me please...." olivia giggled..
olivia:"we will see if im mad after i find out what your freaking out about, okay." she said in a sing song voice. she took her hand and cupped the side of his face.
olivia:"now tell me whats wrong, and i promise i wont be mad at you, okay?" elliot took in a deep breath...
elliot:"okay, umm i was in the therapy under cover thing we were talking about what we did i was supposed to say i raped some women in power and all and the nut job therapist asks me who. he said id be in violation of my parol. i said......
you and casey...."her face was taken aback at first. but calmed
olivia:"thats perfect...."
elliot:"what!"
olivia:"we can get him for conspiring and for kiddnapping an officer...."
elliot:"no you might get hurt, or he might...."
olivia:"dont, i know what im doing..." she pulled him closer to her, her head resting on his chest..
elliot:"after we tell captain..."
olivia:"yea." she was breathing in his cologne...
elliot:"let me come over and just hold you....." he was whispering in her ear, his lips lightly touching....she wanted to moan. but no way in hell that was happening...
olivia:"okay..." she was gripping his shirt for dear life, she loved how his body molded with hers, tightly matching every curve. almost like a puzzle.....they went and told captain. now olivia was eagar to get to her place with elliot.......
OliviaMyHero
Feb 6 2008, 09:32 PM
I like it!
Aliecia
Feb 6 2008, 09:35 PM
That was great!
Update soon
sammieisback
Feb 7 2008, 12:55 AM
my friend, bobert. (the bear) is helping me write this next chapter......:]
olivia slowly slid her key into the lock and quietly turned it, slowly stepping into her dark cold apartment, she layed her stuff down by the door and slowly walked to the couch. she didnt even bother to turn the light on, laying down on the couch. she closed her eyes, her phone vibrated flipping it open she noticed she had a text message.
hey, liv. it's me. elliot...i kind of wanted to know if you wanted me to, you know....come over?
-love elliot....
awwww she thought he said love!
yes, elliot. that would be great.....hurry over, just use your key though.
-love your livia
she smiled and closed her eyes.....
elliot:"liv?" she jumped, her eyes shot open. elliot jumped back.
elliot:"woah sorry liv..."
olivia:"i cant believe i didnt here you come in..." elliot grinned...
elliot:"maybe thats a good thing...." she got up and walked over to the fridge, holding onto the handle she asked him what he wanted to drink, no relpy. she turned around and was shocked by how close he was, he slowly tilted his head, and pressed his lips to hers. at first she was shocked, then she slowly broke into the kiss his tongue nudged her bottom lip begging for its entry. it was granted, she slid her hand up behind his head and brought him down closer. the kiss was slow, sweet, she felt elliot smile against her lips. she leaned into him and moaned...she pulled her head away. she turned around...
her voice shakey...
olivia:"sooo...ummm....what did you want to drink?"
Aliecia
Feb 7 2008, 11:18 AM
Yay Yay Yay!
You know i just loved that right?
keep it coming.
Monevia
Feb 7 2008, 12:22 PM
thats a good one keep going
sammieisback
Feb 7 2008, 04:50 PM
cant read it? well here.....oh and its by asia featuring natasia. and no this is not my video but wanna here it? click here ->http://youtube.com/watch?v=75r9EXThXBEhis voice sounded so unsure it worried her..
elliot:"liv?" she turned around as normal, in her perky glory..
olivia:"yeah?"
Verse 1:
Say hey boy how you doin
you been feelin me now and its yo time to shine
When im wit my gurlz you see me and you wanna say hi
but I pass so fast you only get the chance to say bye dont worry the night just got started
and you might end up comin home with me tonight
and boy everytime i look at you i feel it fo sho
im one of them gurl friends that you can't let go
im like oh oh boy im losin my mind yea
'cause once i see your eyes you'll make me change my mind
our bodies going crazy we wanting each other babyelliot:"you know i just kissed you right?" olivia looked confused but with a sly grin on her face...
olivia:"yeah?" she giggled slightly.
elliot:"your acting, normal?"
No i don't have a man
so lets be lovers and friends
no i don't have a man
so lets be lovers and friends olivia:"i just, you know didnt wanna get carried away." elliot grinned..
elliot:"by carried away you mean...." he wiggled his eye brows. olivia chuckled and softly, playfully slapped him on the chest....her smile faded when he slightly pushed her against her fridge...she felt his breath rigid, against her ear. she leaned into him and slightly brushed her fingers up and down his chest. she felt his hands slowly wander up her thighs, it felt sooo amazing she thought. just thinking about his hands roaming her body did things unimaginable to her body. she felt his lips slowly find the nape of her neck, she threaded her fingers through his hair and pressed her self into him....
Yea boy i could be yo lover
Yea boy i could be yo friend
hell yea can hold me hold hands slow dance while the records spins
everytime im wit chu boy you make me feel so comfortable
yea i know used to play now im all grown up like my gurl Raven
you wanna be my lover wanna be my friend
you wanna be the only one I call on make love to and playfight with till the very end
now i know that aint messed up so boy you better stop trippin
bend back gurl its time for me to get this whippin
hell yea I like it like that and Im not gone fight back yea smack it like that
I'm off work three whole days so on all these days we lay my legs can go their seperate ways
olivia:"
elliot..." she let his name linger on his lips..as he kissed up to her lips, he could tell her moaning was making his friend pitch a tent in his pants....
elliot:"
olivia," it was more of a low throuty growl.
olivia:"
i want you,"
No i don't have a man
so lets be lovers and friends
no i don't have a man
so lets be lovers and friends elliot:"
i didnt bring a rubber,"
olivia:"
dont need one..." she moaned again..
elliot
:"you on the pill?"olivia:
"i want a baby so bad el.." he stopped moving, she could barely hear him breath...
We been knowin each other so long ( shawty)
time to get our grove n (shawty)
so take the time and do me right (shawty)
i feel yo body next to mine (shawty)
baby do it one more time (shawty)
from left to right
in the middle
elliot:"
are you asking me to be the father?" olivia felt tears building up in her eyes...
olivia:"
please, elliot. just this once, you dont even need to be involved in her life. elliot, i need you to be my best friend right now. i need you......" he pressed his lips to hers, he wrapped his arms around her..
elliot:"
im going to be involved in her life, and yours. and right now i dont wanna be your friend, your lover is more like it. i....i love you olivia........." she felt tears pouring from her eyes, she started shaking...
olivia:"
i love you too....elliot make love to me......" elliot's head was spining, god when did it get so dark? he thought he was guiding her throught the hall, his shirt and shoes had came off in the process. her pony tail was gone. her shirt was getting tossed, her heels were gone because elliot just stepped on it.....
no you dont have a man
Letz be Luverz 'n Friendz
no you dont have a man
[scrappy ex-clusive, sam c]
Lady Letz be Luverz 'n Friendz
oh-oh bay'bie can you Listen to me
all clothing was eventually discarded, the sheets were being twisted and pulled tugged and whirled. elliot could have sworn that was his head. head still spinning he whrapped his arms around her and they both drifted off to the best sleep they ever had.....
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