olivia:"hey case!" she rushed threw the croud and stood by her best friend, that was a girl.

casey:"hey liv, how you like the halloween party?"

olivia:"i'd love it if everyguy in this place wasnt wearing a mask, i cant find elliot, or any of them but lake." she said pointing to lake.

casey:"yeah i know." all of a sudden the song "life is beautiful" came on.

You can’t quit until you try
You can’t live until you die
You can’t learn to tell the truth
Until you learn to lie

olivia:"oh my god thats my favorite song!" then she saw a masked man approach her, she couldn't see his eyes, so she couldnt tell if she knew him or not. he pulled her away into the croud.

You can’t breathe until you choke
You gotta laugh when you’re the joke
There’s nothing like a funeral to make you feel alive

olivia:"el?" she whispered no reply. she kept dancing with him his hands were soo warm, he kept his eyes closed there were little slits in the mask, from her close proxcimity if he opened them she could see their color. he slid one leg inbetween hers. she was warm, he always wanted to know how she would react to his touch, but was it different because she didnt know who he was at the moment,he didnt know, he also didnt care. he was touching her in ways he could never imagine she would let him.

Just open your eyes
Just open your eyes
And see that life is beautiful.
Will you swear on your life,
That no one will cry at my funeral?


olivia:"open your eyes..." she whipered to him before she knew it, his lips covered hers thank god the mask didnt have lips. the kiss was sweet and passonite, best kiss she had every had. before she knew it he jerked away quicky and dissapeared before her eyes in the croud he took one look back at her . he dissapeared like the phantom he was dressed up to be.

I know some things that you don’t
I’ve done things that you won’t
There’s nothing like a trail of blood
to find your way back home.........



what you think shall i continue?

Its great! Please continue! Great work choice!

mee likee :]
add more please <3

olivia tried to chase after him but so many looked the same in the dark it was unbelievalble how hard it was to find out who was even dressed up like a phantom.


I was waiting for my hearse
What came next was so much worse
It took a funeral to make me feel alive

olivia felt an awkward tapping on her shoulder almost nervous. she turned to see a man wearing a hockey mask, she hated to movie jason and this was an acctual hockey mask, olivia jumped. she slid the mask up his face and it reavealed a nervous elliot.

Just open your eyes
Just open your eyes
And see that life is beautiful.
Will you swear on your life,
That no one will cry at my funeral?

olivia:"el..?"

elliot:"will you dance with me?" he looked like a nervous teenager, the words just kinda poored out when he opened his mouth. she smiled.

olivia:"of course ill dance with you, jason." she said almost giggling at the confused look on his face and then he looked up at the mask perched on the top of his head.


Just open your eyes
Just open your eyes
And see that life is beautiful.
Will you swear on your life,
That no one will cry at my funeral?

he smiled back and slid the mask down to cover his face and moved her back to the dance floor. she layed her head on his chest and closed her eyes and listned to the rythmic beat of his heart. she slid her hand down his chest and lower abdomen an felt every curve of his body, and muscles. what did she care about the masked man. probly some jerk. she had elliot's stablers arms around her.




Just open your eyes
Just open your eyes
And see that life is beautiful.
Will you swear on your life,
That no one will cry at my funeral?


she felt one of his hands disapear but didnt moved then she felt the warmth of his breath on her ear.

elliot:"open your eyes...." he said huskily, she remembered she had said that to the masked man. she looked up and stared at the face of a phantom, and the crystal blue eyes of her partner. and before she knew it elliot slid the mask off his breath was rapid and uneasy. he tilted his head and olivia slid her hand to cup his, face and with out a word he kissed her. and they danced the night away. the phantom, and his partner.


oh wont you open your eyes
open your eyes
And see that our life is beautiful.
Will you swear on your life,
That no one will cry at my funeral?

olivia mouthed the words in her head 'i will.'



i changed the last verse of the song to fit the story....
song is "life is beatiful." by sixx am, or nixxi sixx

You should add more, I like it :]

idk it was more a double shot.

but if you'd like guys i could turn this forum into my musical one shots/ two shots?

That was great sammie!
I loved it!
The phantom and his partner
hehehehe

karma



karma was sitting under an over pass in manhattan. she saw a black sedan pull up near her, it stoped a tall gentle man approximetly 22, and an older gentel man tall scraney looking maybe 40-42. got out of the car the younger one flashed his badge.


Im standing on a brige.
im waiting in the dark
i thought that youd be here by now


elliot:"im elliot stabler, this is my partner john munch we wanted...." karma leaped up and ran in the other direction as fast as she could. if street life tought you one thing that was very clear, it was cops. run. the younger one caught her and tried to grab her she fell. he ended up on top of her.

theres nothing but the rain no footsteps on the ground im listening but theres no sound

karma:"get off me asswipe." she said she spit in his face. he grinned. he also put her in handcuffs.

elliot:"sweety whats your name?"

karma:"karma, whats yours?"

elliot:"your real name?"

isnt anyone tryin to find me. wont somebody come take me home. its a damn cold night. tryin to figure out this life. wont you take me by the hand take me somewhere new i dont know who you are but im.. im with you.

karma:"id appriceate a real date before you ask that?"

elliot:"little young to be hitting on an old guy like me arent ya?"

karma:"in your case dont bother me a bit." elliot chuckled.

elliot:"seriously, how old are you?"

karma:"im only telling you cause i like you, 16." elliot laughed

im looking for a place im searching for a face is anybody here i know. cause nothin's goin right and everythings a mess and no one likes to be alone.


elliot:"girly, i could be old enough to be your dad." she chuckled.

karma:"if you had me at 6, whats the charges?"

elliot:"you ran."

karma:"besides?"

elliot:"your mom reported you missing?"

karma:"thats why i ran, dirty whore cant stay sober for 15 min."

elliot:"she's dead."

isnt anyone tryin to find me. wont somebody come take me home. its a damn cold night. tryin to figure out this life. wont you take me by the hand take me somewhere new i dont know who you are but im with you.. im with you. yeah yeah
O!


karma:"got what was coming to her."

elliot:"she was raped."

karma:"no she just had sex before she died. sex and booze. that her life not me."

why is everthing so confusing? maybe im just out of my mind yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeahhhh.
its a damn cold night. tryin to figure out this life. wont you take me by the hand take me somewhere new i dont know who you are but i im with you.
wont you take me by the hand take me somewhere new i dont know who you are but i im with youuuu im with you
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my new story titled "karma"

p.s. her names not really karma you'll find out later whats going on in the story.

karma sat in the interigation room she stared blankly at the wall. munch walked in.

munch:"so you gunna tell me your real name?" karma spit at him.

karma:"kiss ass."

Where have all the good men gone
And where are all the gods?
Where's the street-wise Hercules
To fight the rise of odds?
Isn't there a white knight upon a fiery steed?
Late at night I toss and turn and dream of what I need


munch:"glad your amoung the living." karma had and evil grin.

karma:"dont look like you will be for much longer."

munch:"smart ass are you?" she snickered.

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life

karma:"proud."

munch:"how many times was your mother raped?" she stood abruptly.

karma:"shut up!" she screamed in his face.

Somewhere after midnight
In my wildest fantasy
Somewhere just beyond my reach
There's someone reaching back for me
Racing on the thunder and rising with the heat
It's gonna take a superman to sweep me off my feet

munch:"how many times did they sneek into your room!?!" his voice was escalating. karma covered her ears.

karma:"got to hell!!!!"

munch:"how many times did you scream?! and she just laughed?!" karma ran to the 2-way mirror.

karma:"elliot!!!! tell him to stop!!!" she slid down and started crying. elliot ran in, ignoring captains question as to why she asked for him.


I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life

elliot:"its okay, he'll stop, just tell me your name. and i'll make him go away." she sniffled.

karma:"olivia, olivia benson." she looked up at him with wide eyes. he held her as she cried.

karma:"it hurt, it wasnt gunna stop. im glad she's dead."

Somewhere after midnight
In my wildest fantasy
Somewhere just beyond my reach
There's someone reaching back for me
Racing on the thunder and rising with the heat
It's gonna take a superman to sweep me off my feet

should i continue this story or end it?

elliot stabler tried to stand but olivia squezzed him tighter. she wrapped her arms around his neck and pressed her lips to his ear.

You're so good to me, baby, baby

I want to lock you up in my closet, where no one's around
I want to put your hand in my pocket, because you're allowed
I want to drive you into the corner, and kiss you without a sound
I want to stay this way forever, I'll say it loud
Now you're in and you can't get out

olivia:"dont leave me, elliot."

elliot:"i wont olivia, i promise."

You make me so hot
Make me wanna drop
You're so ridiculous
I can barely stop
I can hardly breathe
You make me wanna scream
You're so fabulous
You're so good to me baby, baby
You're so good to me baby, baby

god he was so gorgeous, he was sooo soo hot! his crystal blue eyes, his hands his smell his scruffy voice. she wanted to feel his lips, she allready knew he had a drop dead sexy ass kiss. kiss me! she screamed in her head, she knew he was about six years older than her. she didnt care. she knew nothing would ever happen between them he was a cop, a sex cop at that. how ironic? she was getting herself all hot and bothered just thinking about all the things she would do with him in a locked dark room, alone. wow, that was a sexy image. oh my god listen to me, im thinking about having sex with a 22 year old sex cop! what is wrong with me? nothing was her answer i mean look at him.

I can make you feel all better, just take it in
And I can show you all the places, you've never been
And I can make you say everything, that you never said
And I will let you do anything, again and again
Now you're in and you can't get out

olivia:"can i stay here tonight?"

elliot:"want me to ask?"

olivia:"yeah." she slowly loosend her grip elliot stood and walked out.
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captain:"she should stay at your place, she needs a good nights sleep, she's going to be placed in a foster home tomarrow."

elliot:"you sure?"

captain:"she stays here, you stay here."

elliot:"and why is that?"

captain:"she aint gunna let you leave."

elliot:"good point."
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You make me so hot
Make me wanna drop
You're so ridiculous
I can barely stop
I can hardly breathe
You make me wanna scream
You're so fabulous
You're so good to me baby, baby
You're so good to me baby, baby

elliot sat in the front seat as olivia buckled her seat belt in the passanger seat.

olivia:"got a girl?" she said looking at him. damn, she looks gorgeous. she doesnt look 16 at all. oh my god elliot stop thinking about that. STOP! she is a 16 year old girl, you arent supposed to have thoughts about a 16 year old girl like that. your 22 for christ sake!

olivia:"hello." she said waving her hand in front of his face.

elliot:"what! yeah."

Kiss me gently
Always I know
Hold me love me
Don't ever go, oh oh oh...
Yeah!


olivia:"you do?" she looked disapointed. elliot studderd.

elliot:"i mean no, no girl." he said quickly and blushed and looked out the window and smiled widely, he wiped his hand across his face and shook his head as if to rid away the dirty thoughts but for some reason he couldnt stop smiling. she smiled, he was thinking about her.

olivia:"what you thinking about?"

elliot:"nothing in particular." he looked at her and smiled the full blown stabler smile, and ment it. she almost melted.


You make me so hot
Make me wanna drop
You're so ridiculous
I can barely stop
I can hardly breathe
You make me wanna scream
You're so fabulous
You're so good to me


olivia:"your sexy ass aint got no women?"

elliot:"what about you?"

olivia:"nope, well i guess this is my lucky day." she said grinning at him. he smiled back, he reached for her hand and linked his fingers with hers. he looked back at her and smiled.

elliot:"i guess so."

You make me so hot
Make me wanna drop
You're so ridiculous
I can barely stop
I can hardly breathe
You make me wanna scream
You're so fabulous
You're so good to me baby, baby
You're so good to me baby, baby

You're so good




what ya'll think soo far shall i continue?

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i should b workin on my story but i think i'll just stick to readin stories 4 now thats much easier

they pulled up in the driveway, olivia didnt want to let go, but she knew she had to. she went to get out but elliot jogged around and opened the door for her.

I don’t want another heartbreak
I don’t need another turn to cry
I don’t want to learn the hard way
Baby, hello, oh, no, goodbye
But you got me like a rocket
Shooting straight across the sky

olivia:"thank you." as she stood he closed the door and reached for her hand he threaded their fingers and couldnt help but kiss her, at least on the cheek. as they walked in he turned her to him and graped both her hands and he quicky pecked her lips. she smiled, he was tall so she leaned on her tippy toes a hand on his chest and kiss him. when his other arm went around her her to bring her closer and press himself to her body he deepend the kiss. she moaned and it snapped him back to reality. 'ELLIOT SHES 16!' he thought he pulled away she tried to grab his neck and pull him back but he pulled away one arms still draped across her lower back he brought his hand to her face. she looked almost as if she would cry.

It’s the way you love me
It’s a feeling like this
It’s centrifugal motion
It’s perpetual bliss


olivia:"wh...what...what's wrong?" she said it as tears threatened to fall.

elliot:"i cant...." he couldnt look her in the eyes but she forced him to.

olivia:"why?"

It’s that pivotal moment
It’s impossible
This kiss, this kiss (Unstoppable)
This kiss, this kiss

elliot:"your to young, or i would i just cant not now......." she looked him in the eye and pulled away. she wrapped her arms around herself as if she felt violated. she started shaking, and elliot rushed up behind her.

Cinderella said to Snow White
How does love get so off course
All I wanted was a white knight
With a good heart, soft touch, fast horse



elliot:"olivia..." olivia stuck her hand up to stop him, he was gunna try touching her and she wouldnt be able to bear it.

olivia:"dont." he grabbed her waist, she jerked around.

Ride me off into the sunset
Baby, I’m forever yours

elliot:"i.."

olivia:"i said dont." her voice was warning, she had tears streaming down her face. he removed his hands from her body and he pushed her long brown hair behind her ear.

It’s the way you love me
It’s a feeling like this
It’s centrifugal motion
It’s perpetual bliss

elliot:"okay..."

olivia:"i need to umm...take a shower soo can we....uhhh..."

elliot:"store." she smiled.

olivia:"yeah."

It’s that pivotal moment
It’s unthinkable
This kiss, this kiss (Unsinkable)
This kiss, this kiss

You can kiss me in the moonlight
On the rooftop under the sky
You can kiss me with the windows open
While the rain comes pouring inside
Kiss me in sweet slow motion
Let’s let every thing slide
You got me floating, you got me flying

It’s the way you love me
It’s a feeling like this
It’s centrifugal motion
It’s perpetual bliss

It’s that pivotal moment
It’s subliminal
This kiss, this kiss (It’s Criminal)
This kiss, this kiss

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isnt anyone tryin to find me. wont somebody come take me home. its a damn cold night. tryin to figure out this life. wont you take me by the hand take me somewhere new i dont know who you are but im with you.. im with you.

whats this song called again its on the tip of my tongue but i just cant think of it

im with you- by avril lavigne! ha. me write more now.





the drive to the store was silent, pulled intop a parkinng space. olivia benson saw somone from her past near the car. her street father. she ducked and layed her head across elliots lap. he whispered.

When you're around I don't know what to do
I do not think that I can wait
To go over and to talk to you
I do not know what I should say



elliot:"who do you see?"

olivia:"no one."

And I walk out in silence
That's when I start to realize
What you bring to my life
Damn this guy can make me cry

elliot:"well then if there isnt anybody would you mind removing your head which is shockingly close to my...uh..man hood?" she didnt move.

It's so contagious
I cannot get it out of my mind
It's so outrageous
You make me feel so high

elliot:"olivia, who do you see?"

olivia:"my old street dad. over there." she said pointing

All the time


elliot:"its okay, i got you anything happens im here." he looked at her. he looked so sweet she leaned up and pecked his lips.

They all say that you're not good for me
But I'm too close to turn around
I'll show them they don't know anything
I think I've got you figured out


olivia:"okay." she smiled so did he. she sat back and he went to her side and opened the door for her. as soon as he closed it she gripped his hand tightly and stood close to him resting her head some what on his shoulder and arm, its not my fault he's tall. she thought to herself. as they walked into the store, she walked into the womens section elliot said he'd be just over there she grabbed a couple things like shower gell little shampoo things and a small perfume spray. her eyes drifted to the side. condums? well it would be funny, and you never know. she looked quickly before grabbing some that were durex, they said thin for extra sensation or somthing like that. she put it in the bottom of the little basket elliot gave her. she went to find him he was gone.

So I walk out in silence
That's when I start to realize
What you bring to my life
Damn this guy can make me smile

olivia:"elliot?" she walked around abit and found him walking out of the electronic area with a bag. well she didnt see him at first till she felt arms wrap around her and kiss her neck.

elliot:"boo.."

It's so contagious
I cannot get it out of my mind
It's so outrageous
You make me feel so high

olivia:"mmmm..." she turned around and lightly kissed his lips, he teased her lips with his tongue but when she obliged to give him the accsess he wanted he pulled away and smiled. they got in line at the cash register he put the hole basket up there. and turned and was chatting with olivia.

I will give you everything
I will treat you right
If you just give me a chance
I can prove I'm right


cash register person:"do you want these or do you want them in the bag?"

elliot:"i didnt...." his gaze drifted to olivia, who just looked up at him with wide eyes and a big grin.

elliot:"ill take them he said slipping them into his pocket.

It's so contagious
I cannot get it out of my mind
It's so outrageous
You make me feel so high
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in the car..............

elliot:"why the f*ck did you buy condums?" he said looking at her.

It's so contagious
I cannot get it out of my mind
It's so outrageous
You make me feel so high
olivia:"i figured you didnt have any."

elliot:"my first question is whyyou were thinking of that and my second question is what makes you think that?"

olivia:"you do?" a blush crept up his cheeks. he slightly galnced at her.

elliot:"i have a droor full."

All the time

elliot stepped out of his bedroom with a cell phone in his hand.

olivia:"cool phone, yours?"

elliot:"no, yours." he said handing it to her. she had a looked of pure shock on her face.

olivia:"thank you." she hugged him tightly, his arms wrapped around her his head on her shoulder. he picked her up and lightly kissed her quickly.

elliot:"im gunna jump in the shower you can after me like 5?"

olivia:"okay." she was allready engrossed in her phone. he was allready gone when she opened it she smiled. the backround was a picture of him grining and the headline said "your boy toy, love elliot. <3" awww she thought he looks soo adorable. she walked down the hall still looking at her phone she looked in contacts. boy toy aka elliot 'ha' she thought he is so cute. she took a picture of her puckering up like to kiss the camera. she sent a message with it, it read. "your baby girl, livie loves you!<3" he walked out in a towel which only covered his waist and jumped when he saw her. she was staring at his body it was soo wet and shiney and built.

olivia:"damnn.........." he blushed.

elliot:"go jump in the shower." she stared at his body. all she could do was shake her head up and down. she stalked into the bathroom and started taking her clothes off. she soon realized she didnt have clothes. she wrapped a towel around her she had taken her hair out of the pony tail and her long brown curls feel smoothly across her face. she stuck her head out of the door.

olivia:"el...?"

elliot turned around:" yeah?" she blushed.

olivia:"i dont have clothes."elliot walked away and came back and tossed her one of his shirts,

elliot:"here." he smiled and she diappeared behind the door ready to take her shower leaving elliot to fantisize of how close he was from pushing the door open...........



sorry im upset couldnt find a song 4 it

olivia walked out of the bathroom in elliots long shirt. she came up behind him. she pressed her lips to his ear.

But I couldn't tell you why she felt that way she felt it everyday
And I couldn't help her I just watched her make the same mistakes again
What's wrong what's wrong now
Too many to many problems
Don't know where she belongs
Where she belongs

She wants to go home but nobody's home
It's where she lies broken inside
With no place to go with no place to go
To dry her eyes broken inside

olivia:"hey sexy...." he looked her up and down and grinned.

elliot:"i think its my turn to say damn." she got this playful glint in her eyes, and grinned. her voice was below a whisper.

Open your eyes and look outside
Find the reasons why
You been rejected
Now you can't find what you left behind
Be strong be strong now
Too many too many problems
Don't know where she belongs where she belongs


olivia:"lets play truth or dare."

elliot:"i...umm..." she cut him off. still standing in the hallway he leaned against the wall.

She wants to go home but nobody's home
It's where she lies broken inside
With no place to go with no place to go
To dry her eyes broken inside


olivia:"you first!"

elliot:"spin...."

olivia:"huh?" elliot swigled his finger in a circular motion,

Open your eyes and look outside
Find the reasons why
You been rejected
Now you can't find what you left behind
Be strong be strong now
Too many too many problems
Don't know where she belongs where she belongs

elliot:"spin." she giggled and spun the shirt lifted a little which were elliots intentions. it caused alot of skin to be exsposed exspecially around her inner thigh. his eyes widened.

olivia:"like what you see detective?" all he could do was gulp and shake his head yes. elliot grinned flirtishley.

She wants to go home but nobody's home
It's where she lies broken inside
With no place to go with no place to go
To dry her eyes broken inside


elliot:"dare me, babe."

olivia:"take it off, down to the boxers boy toy." he blushed and started strippping.

Her feelings she hides
Her dreams she can't find
She's loosen her mind
She's falling behind
She can't find her place
She's loosen her faith
She's fallen from grace
She's all over the place
Ya


olivia:"better, much better." he pulled her to him and put his hand on the back of her upper thighs and started sliding his hands up to cup her bottom. she grinned evilly.

She wants to go home but nobody's home
It's where she lies broken inside
With no place to go with no place to go
To dry her eyes broken inside



olivia:"touch me...." elliots gaze dropped to her lips. he started kissing her as he slid one hand between her legs. she spred them slightly apart to grant him the acsess he needed. her thighs were burning from where he was touching her. he got to the middle of her thighs and the shirt started sliding up he knew he was close cause of the way her thighs started curving. he knew she wasnt wearing panties or a bra they were in his washer at the moment, swirling around like his thoughts only they were getting clean, his thoughts were getting dirty. the bulge in his boxers was getting noticable.

She's lost inside lost inside
Oh, oh
She's lost inside lost inside
Oh, oh
Oh


ding-dong........
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ILOVE THIS your cliffhangers i love :]
suspence killing me

ill write more if you write more deal?

i will ok :]
yours is way better than mine though don't know why you like it so much. ?
but okay only cuz i love yours the suspence is killing me :l

olivia:"people in this fu*king world have the fu*king perfectes fu*king timing, i swear to fu*king god..." olivia grumbled elliot removed his hand and chuckled, he kissed her ear.

elliot:"ill be right back." and relesed her and walked past her to the door....elliot answered the door and looked confused.

?:"is olivia benson here?" elliot closed the door so only his head stuck out because he was only wearing his boxers and he knew olivia had her arms crossed and tilting her head to see who was there and elliot was gunna make damn sure this external rectal opening didnt see how short his shirt came up her thighs....

elliot:"who wants to know...?"

?:"simon...her brother.."

elliot:"yeah, she is why?" he opened the door a little more and turned his head toward her.

elliot:"livie baby, come here.." she approached cautiously with her arms still crossed...

olivia:"simon!" she ran up to him and wrapped her arms around his neck and he squeezed her hard....

simon:"girly i missed you sooo much."

olivia:"i didnt think you were coming back...."

simon:"but i promised...."'











la la la gotta leave a cliffy!

soo here i go song : one in a million by hannah montana.........so do you guys like my new siggy?


olivia:"how did you get to come home?"

simon:"told 'em my little sis's mom died, you needed me." olivia turned towrd elliot..

olivia:"i wouldnt exactly say that." she smiled, elliot smilled back leaning against the door frame.

How did I get here
I turned around
And there you were
I didn't think twice or rationalize
Cuz somehow I knew
That there was more than just chemistry
I mean I knew you were kind of into me
But I figured it's too good to be true
I said pinch me where's the catch this time
Can't find a single cloud in the sky
Help me before I get used to this guy




simon:"oh really?" he looked at elliot, he could see why. he stuck out his hand, elliot took it and shook it.

elliot:"elliot, elliot stabler."

simon:"simon, simon smith." olivia stood there as if left out.

olivia:"olivia, olivia benson." they all chuckled...

They say that good things take time
But really great things happen in the blink of an eye
Thought the chances to meet somebody like you were a million to one
I can't believe it
You're one in a million
All this time I was looking for love
Trying to make things work
They weren't good enough
Til I thought I'm through
Said I'm done
Then stumbled into the arms on the one


simon:"i guess i'll see you tomarow, girly." he kissed her cheek and was gone.

You're making me laugh about the silliest stuff
Say that I'm your diamond in the rough
When I'm mad at you
You come with your velvet touch
Can't believe that I'm so lucky
I have never felt so happy



elliot:"where was he?"

olivia:"marines...."


Every time I see that sparkle in your eyes



elliot:"i was there for a little while..." olivia's eyes got big....

olivia:"when?"


They say that good things take time
But really great things happen in the blink of an eye
Thought the chances to meet somebody like you were a million to one
I can't believe it
You're one in a million
All this time I was looking for love
Trying to make things work
They weren't good enough
Til I thought I'm through
Said I'm done
Then stumbled into the arms on the one


elliot:" a year ago..."

olivia:"how long...?"

I said pinch me
Where's the catch this time
Can't find a single cloud in the sky
Help me before I get used to this guy

elliot:"two years...." she closed the space between them and rested her head on his chest.

olivia:"im glad im with you....im glad your back and okay..."

They say that good things take time
But really great things happen in the blink of an eye
Thought the chances to meet somebody like you were a million to one
I can't believe it
They say that good things take time
But really great things happen in the blink of an eye
Thought the chances to meet somebody like you were a million to one
I can't believe it
You're one in a million
One in a million
You're one in a million

elliot:"i wouldn't have left if you were there with me...." he smiled. 'my god he's one i a million, im sooo lucky..'

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olivia benson awoke the next morning to a naked elliot, she smiled. 'not being a virgin was a good thing somtimes, i mean you could have sex with a 22 year old sexy ass greek model body sex cop who probly wouldnt have fit if you were still a virgin' that made her giggle....'i wonder whats gunna happen today.....?'
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she sat in the precinct waiting for her new foster parents.... she had a year before simon turned 18, a year of torture..
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she steped into her new room, wow they have alot of kids she thought. there was one a boy his name was seeley...who the frack ames their kid seeley. i guess the good thing was that he was hot and that all the kids were fosters. another one was geeky wierd but really pretty. her name was temperance. another excentric name. then there was jenny, preppy bitch! i am not gunna like her and im gunna knock her on her ass one of these days, she could allready tell she had her share of boyfriends. then there was mya goth didnt talk she looked, like her whole body was peirced lets not even start with the tatoos. her life was going to be a living hell......where, and why wasnt elliot answering her? she looked at his picture on her screen and mouthed the words'i miss you'

pls add more i added more to my new one you like so well
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but it's getting good add more. :]

olivia layed in her bed and stared at the ceiling, god did she miss him she had been afraid to call him because she didnt know if she was the only ones with the feelings. she frowned. so she opened her phone and started texting him.

hey, el. i miss you, i guess your probley buisey so i'll go. i just wanted to say hi. so ummm hi. bye elliot. - livia

she sent the message and closed her phone. she stood and shut the door, thank god she was the only one with her own room. she grabbed her favorite pink squishey pillow, hugged it tight to her chest and sobbed. why did she have to love him?
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she supposed she had fallen asleep, because she opened her eyes and saw that it was light out. she looked around and saw temperance sitting in the big round soft chair in her room with a tray of food she supposed was for her and temp.

olivia:"hey..." she said grogily temps head shot toward her and she smiled.

temperance:"hey sleepy head, i heard you crying last night so i figured you might want the normalest girl in the house to help relate?" she smiled softly. olivia laughed.

olivia:"the fact that everyone in the house is sooo diffrent."

temerance:"tell me about it......"
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elliot stabler sat at his desk chewing the end of his pen, after a while he went to continuesly clicking it which was driving munch crazy. his phone beeped...

new text message recieved yesterday at 12:34 a.m.

why did he see it now? he flipped open his phone and saw it was from olivia....'oh my god, olivia!' she thought he was ignoring her he could tell he just didnt know if he should call back he was afraid maybe she'd say it was a one time thing. he frowned thinking about how stupid he sounded, afraid of being dumped by a 16 year old. he chuckled.


olivia, thak god i missed you soo much. and no im not buisey, umm i was wondering if you wanted to go out saterday? movies, or dinner? maybe both? text back soon, -elliot

awww a date. .
wish tht would happen for real tho :]
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they will in the show but i think they will just sleep together and make a baby! ha ha you can soooo tell!

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pls oh pls. :]

me likee so much.

olivia rushed down the stairs, she heard a honk in front and knew it had to be elliot. she quickly jogged down the stairs, her sweater buttoned tightly so no one would see what she was wearing. she had black cargo pants that were mid shin length. and a black sweater. it was all you could see, her shirt was black and red strips, at tatered bow at the top. it rose a little over her belly button which had a dangly dimond stud in it, nobody knew she had. her hair was pulled in a lazy pony til a piece of her bangs fell out. her earings were medium dimond hoops. she also wore small combat boots.

cynthia:"where are you going sweet heart?"

olivia:"out."

cynthia:"where?"

olivia:"dinner."

cynthia:"with who?"

olivia:"elliot."

cynthia:"who?"

olivia:"detective stabler."

cynthia:"oh tell him i said hello."

olivia:"i will."

cynthia:"and im sure he will have no trouble getting you home by nine?"

olivia:"no he wont." and with that she walked out to elliots awaiting sedan.

olivia ran to his car jumped in and stripped of her coat, elliot's eyes strayed over her body, he wanted to touch her, sooo bad it hurt. olivia leaned over and pecked him on the lips.

olivia:"hey." elliot looked behind him and pulled out.

elliot:"you make me fell so old.." they stopped at a stop light.

olivia:"i dont think your old.."

elliot:"liv, baby i've been thinking..." her face changed to worry..

olivia:"your not gunna break up with me are you?"

elliot:"i dont know if we can continue to see eachother liv.." her face turned red the volcano erupted..

olivia:"YOU HAD TO INVITE ME TO DINNER TO BREAK UP WITH ME? WHY COULDN'T YOU JUST DO IT ON THE PHONE SO I COULD CRY IN PEACE!?! PULL THE FUC/KING CAR OVER YOU ASS>>>HOLE!!" elliot didnt look at her.

elliot:"your not getting out of this car."

olivia:"YOUR NOT MY DAD, MY DAD IS A RAPIST AND I HOPE HE IS IN A DITCH SOME WHERE! COME TO THINK OF IT HE'S NOT MUCH BETTER THAN YOU!"

elliot:"olivia calm down...." tears poured from her eyes but she was still fuming, the last thing she said to him was shakey scared and sad.

olivia:"you...you said you loved me...OR WAS THAT JUST TO GET INTO MY PANTS?!?"

elliot:"livia please calm down..." he looked her in the eyes, silently pleading with her. tears poured from her face and she looked like a little broken child left in this world all scared and alone..

olivia:"HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO CALM DOWN?!? YOUR BREAKING UP WITH ME AND IM THE ONE PREGNANT WITH YOUR CHILD!?!" her face lost all emotion, she wasnt going to tell him after he broke up with her, no. no this wasnt happening. no. it couldnt. no. no. No. NO.

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Oliva:"i........"

elliot:"olivia i didnt...." she held up her hand and looked the other way.

olivia:"dont."

elliot:"you sure it's mine?" she shot him a death glare.

olivia:"yes im sure its yours." she spit the words harshly at him, like venom.

elliot:"im sorry, lets forget this whole break up never happened."

olivia:"no, im not leting you be in my life just because im pregnant i can do this on my own."

elliot:"i want to be involved in my child's life."

olivia:"but you dont love me...." elliot's hand cupped her cheek and forced her to look at him.

elliot:"olivia, i do love you, with all my heart. i just didnt want you to think im a sicko, olivia im 22. your 16."

olivia:"love doesnt have an appropriate age."

elliot:"in the eyes of the court it does."

olivia:"in my eyes, that doesnt matter." she leaned over and kissed him gently on the lips, his tongue slipped through her lips slightly and brushed hers. elliot didnt realize people started honking.

angry driver:"come on cock sucker! move the damn car!" elliot pulled away and stuck his middle finger out at the guy.

elliot:"shove it up your ass!"

Sammieisback: 3 words, keep it up!!!

i agree with "iloveliv" PLS, KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
Your doing an AWSOME JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wasnt planning on stopping! =) anybody else see the lunar eclipse? talk about awsome! oh and here are some of my banners that i made, feel free to use them. and you can make requests if u would like.... they arent the best but you know....

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olivia bit her lip and smiled, then giggled. elliot turned to look at her with an amused look on his face.

elliot:"did you just..."

olivia:"giggle?" elliot nodded then they both started laughing. elliot reached for her hand and she threaded her fingers with his.

elliot:"i love you." olivia smiled and looked at him.

olivia:"i love you too."

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olivia:"ell.........! the lines to long were gunna miss the movie!" she grabbed his sleeve and tugged.

elliot:"move." he shoved past her clutching her hand tightly. he was fast walking toward the door.

olivia:"ell?!" she wined.

elliot:"theres a guy, dont look back, he's staring at you, i saw him at the scene of your mothers, i think he has somthing to do with it."
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short cliffy i wanted to update somthing else sowwy.

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