Munchismyman
Jun 26 2007, 08:19 AM
Okay, I thought it would be a good and funny idea to write this one... hope u like it!
It was an unusual morning. Everyone was at their desks doing nothing and it was snowing like hell outside. John was about to fall asleep. Elliot was waiting paitently for Kathy to call like she always did on snowy days. Olivia was talking on the phone w/ her boyfriend and Finn well, he was playing his gameboy. Everyone was colder than hell and the squad room was normally hot. Ring, Ring, Ring! Elliot quickly grabbed the phone and answered it.
"Hello," Elliot answered. Kathy answered back.
Captain came out of his office.
"Okay, everyone I hope u can find a way to stay warm, because our heat is busted,"
Everyone moaned at the sound of those words...
*Ninth Gate*
BensonFanatic
Jun 26 2007, 08:47 AM
Hey, i like it so far. Looks like it'll be different, and funny. Keep it up!
~BF~
Munchismyman
Jun 26 2007, 08:54 AM
John stood up and looked over at liv. He couldn't help but to stare at her. They way her lips moved, her eyes and her voice. John's phone rang. He snapped back into reality.
"Hello," john answered.
"John," another sweet young voice answered.
"Who is this?" John asked confused.
"You don't know who I am but I know who you are..."
*Ninth Gate*
BensonFanatic
Jun 26 2007, 09:03 AM
uh oh...wounder who the mystery person is...
~BF~
Munchismyman
Jun 26 2007, 09:06 AM
QUOTE (BensonFanatic @ Jun 26 2007, 09:03 AM)

uh oh...wounder who the mystery person is...
~BF~
Oh man ur gonna really be surprised...
*Ninth Gate*
FAN4EVER
Jun 26 2007, 10:02 AM
Can't wait to see who that mystery person is
Munchismyman
Jun 26 2007, 11:31 AM
QUOTE (FAN4EVER @ Jun 26 2007, 10:02 AM)

Can't wait to see who that mystery person is
John waited a second to see if there was anytihng else to be said.
"Who r u and how do u know my name?" The was a deep silence. "Answer me!" John demanded.
"I tell u when I get down there," she answered.
"R u crazy there is no way u'll be able to get down here," The young girl hung up. John paused and hung up the phone...
*Ninth Gate*
DetectiveMcPDQ
Jun 26 2007, 02:41 PM
QUOTE (Munchismyman @ Jun 26 2007, 12:31 PM)

John waited a second to see if there was anytihng else to be said.
"Who r u and how do u know my name?" The was a deep silence. "Answer me!" John demanded.
"I tell u when I get down there," she answered.
"R u crazy there is no way u'll be able to get down here," The young girl hung up. John paused and hung up the phone...
*Ninth Gate*
LOL,I'm guessing it's either you,Lea or Alex*jumps up and down at the idea of Alex returning*!Awesome script but again with the cliffhangers!You evil person!
xoxo,
Girl Interrupted
Munchismyman
Jun 26 2007, 04:58 PM
John waited paintly for the woman to show up. He kept taking off his glasses. Someone tapped him on the shoulder. John looked up. Olivia was standing next to a girl w/ short brown hair and brown eyes.
"John, this girl says she knows u?" Olivia said confused.
"Uh, yeah, give us a minute," john said softly. Olivia left w/out another word.
"who r u?" John asked.
"I should have known wouldn't recongized me," she whispered.
"Am I susposed to?"
"Yeah,...
BensonFanatic
Jun 26 2007, 10:56 PM
BECAUSE I'M YOUR DAUGHTER!!!! DUM DUM! LOL j/k!!!!!

cliffhangers! ah!
~BF~
Munchismyman
Jun 27 2007, 04:07 PM
QUOTE (BensonFanatic @ Jun 26 2007, 10:56 PM)

BECAUSE I'M YOUR DAUGHTER!!!! DUM DUM! LOL j/k!!!!!

cliffhangers! ah!
~BF~
Crap! how'd u know??? Lucky guess!
*Munchett 4th Amigo*
Munchismyman
Jun 28 2007, 08:12 PM
QUOTE (Munchismyman @ Jun 27 2007, 04:07 PM)

Crap! how'd u know??? Lucky guess!
*Munchett 4th Amigo*
The young girl came closer to john.
"Im ur daughter," she whispered. John took a few steps and paused.
"y-y-you're my my daughter?"
*Munchkin The 4th Amigo*
DetectiveMcPDQ
Jun 28 2007, 08:37 PM
QUOTE (Munchismyman @ Jun 28 2007, 09:12 PM)

The young girl came closer to john.
"Im ur daughter," she whispered. John took a few steps and paused.
"y-y-you're my my daughter?"
*Munchkin The 4th Amigo*
Uh,lemme guess you play his daughter?
I still want it to be ALEX!!!
Good job,keep it up!Killing me with the cliff hangers yet again.
xoxo,
Girl Interrupted
Munchismyman
Jun 29 2007, 10:24 AM
"How r u my daughter? I never had a kid?" John asked lost in his thoughts.
"Well, that's a question for mom," she suggested.
"Im not married anymore. Who's ur mom?"
"Taylor," she answered quickly. "My name is Destiny, im 16 years old and I don't live w/ mom so I thought I'd come to find u. Do u have a girlfriend?" Destiny asked. John looked over at Olivia.
"Olivia," John called panicing...
svulover2008
Jun 29 2007, 10:33 AM
please update asap this is getting good
FAN4EVER
Jun 29 2007, 12:13 PM
Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please *baby face*
Munchismyman
Jun 29 2007, 02:39 PM
Olivia came over to john.
"Yeah," she answered. John walked away dragging olivia w/ him.
"I need u to be my girlfriend," john beeged.
"EWWWWWW! No, way how dumb do u think i am?" Olivia asked.
"No, not for me for Destiny, alright I can't do this on my own. Pleaseeeeeeee!" John begged again...
PREVIEWS:
New Fan Fic. One of the most terrifying, twisted svu cases yet! Coming Soon.
DetectiveMcPDQ
Jun 29 2007, 03:01 PM
QUOTE (Munchismyman @ Jun 29 2007, 03:39 PM)

Olivia came over to john.
"Yeah," she answered. John walked away dragging olivia w/ him.
"I need u to be my girlfriend," john beeged.
"EWWWWWW! No, way how dumb do u think i am?" Olivia asked.
"No, not for me for Destiny, alright I can't do this on my own. Pleaseeeeeeee!" John begged again...
PREVIEWS:
New Fan Fic. One of the most terrifying, twisted svu cases yet! Coming Soon.
I like how the story is going,Preview sounds good...
I think I'm gonna just go ahead with my idea and make it a fanfic since it seems your hands are full.
xoxo,
Girl Interrupted
FAN4EVER
Jun 29 2007, 03:02 PM
EWWW Liv & John???????
Update soon please
Munchismyman
Jul 1 2007, 12:47 PM
QUOTE (FAN4EVER @ Jun 29 2007, 03:02 PM)

EWWW Liv & John???????
Update soon please
Liv looked at john and then over at destiny.
"Alright fine but for destiny only," liv caved in. Destiny seemed like such a sweet girl and liv knew that john was going to need help sooner or later. John and liv went back over to destiny.
"Destiny, this is my girlfriend Olivia," john introduced. Liv smiled and held out her hand to shake. Destiny hesitantly shook her hand.
"Hi," destiny muttered...
Nasha
Jul 2 2007, 06:21 PM
Very cute story so far!
Hope you update soon!
Peace and French Fry Grease,
Nasha
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