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im real bored so im gonna start a new story about el and liv. this is my first story so please dont leave any nasty comments. I hope you enjoy the story!!
Part 1
I loveyou were the words in Olivias head. these are the words she wished Elliot would say to her but new it would never happen. It was 12:00pm and Olivia couldn't sleep. She was lying in bed thinking how cute Elliot looks in a back suit. Just then th phone rang.
Liv:"benson...yeah im on my way".
and she left.
15mins later Olivia arrived at Winsbelt 57th avenue. Elliot was thinking of the time he almost saw Olivia naked. He had accidently walked into the womens bath room and liv had just put her towl around her after a shower.
He jumped as some one touched him from behind.
El:oh Liv its just you.
Liv: who else would it be. So what happened here?
El:we got a call from the victims best friend saying she'd been raped and kidnapped.
Liv:whats the victims name?
El: the victims Casey and the friend is Mel.
Liv:well, how did Mel know Casey was raped?
El:Casey was staying at mels house when it happed.
Liv:poor girl. well we'll pick her up tomorrow and take back to the precient for questioning.
El:ok. would you like a ride home?
Liv:sure, thanks Elliot.
they reached Olivias appartment building.
Liv: thanks again Elliot, your a life saver. It sucks taking the subway at night.
El:no problem. hey Liv, is your car fixed yet cos if it is i can take you down to get it tomorrow afer work.
Liv: thanks but it won't be fixed for at least another 3 weeks. El:oh okay.
Olivia was streching after they got out of the car. Elliot could see part of Livs red lace bra. he thought" victorias secret". victorias secret was were Olivias bra was from, after all Elliot would know he used to have a wife. Liv was laughing
EL:whats so funny?
Liv:victorias secret, you have good tase.
El:huh?
Liv: vicorias secret, thats waht you just said.
Elliot just realised he'd said that out loud. he blushed.
El: oh umm.....i was just thinking of something.
Liv:okay then
she said still giggling.
El:okay, heres your appartment. Would you like me to walk you up? you never know some perve could jump out and grab you.
Liv: sure. she said laughing. i could kick their ass anyway but walk me up if you want.
it took five minutes to get up htere.
El:i guess ill see you in the morning.
Liv: oh you can come in for coffee if you like.
El:sure
I loveyou were the words in Olivias head. these are the words she wished Elliot would say to her but new it would never happen. It was 12:00pm and Olivia couldn't sleep. She was lying in bed thinking how cute Elliot looks in a back suit. Just then th phone rang.
Liv:"benson...yeah im on my way".
and she left.
15mins later Olivia arrived at Winsbelt 57th avenue. Elliot was thinking of the time he almost saw Olivia naked. He had accidently walked into the womens bath room and liv had just put her towl around her after a shower.
He jumped as some one touched him from behind.
El:oh Liv its just you.
Liv: who else would it be. So what happened here?
El:we got a call from the victims best friend saying she'd been raped and kidnapped.
Liv:whats the victims name?
El: the victims Casey and the friend is Mel.
Liv:well, how did Mel know Casey was raped?
El:Casey was staying at mels house when it happed.
Liv:poor girl. well we'll pick her up tomorrow and take back to the precient for questioning.
El:ok. would you like a ride home?
Liv:sure, thanks Elliot.
they reached Olivias appartment building.
Liv: thanks again Elliot, your a life saver. It sucks taking the subway at night.
El:no problem. hey Liv, is your car fixed yet cos if it is i can take you down to get it tomorrow afer work.
Liv: thanks but it won't be fixed for at least another 3 weeks. El:oh okay.
Olivia was streching after they got out of the car. Elliot could see part of Livs red lace bra. he thought" victorias secret". victorias secret was were Olivias bra was from, after all Elliot would know he used to have a wife. Liv was laughing
EL:whats so funny?
Liv:victorias secret, you have good tase.
El:huh?
Liv: vicorias secret, thats waht you just said.
Elliot just realised he'd said that out loud. he blushed.
El: oh umm.....i was just thinking of something.
Liv:okay then
she said still giggling.
El:okay, heres your appartment. Would you like me to walk you up? you never know some perve could jump out and grab you.
Liv: sure. she said laughing. i could kick their ass anyway but walk me up if you want.
it took five minutes to get up htere.
El:i guess ill see you in the morning.
Liv: oh you can come in for coffee if you like.
El:sure
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thanks! so back to the story.
Part 2
Elliot came in for some coffee. They talked a bit about the case and it was getting really late so El said goodbye and headed home. By then it was 2:30am and Liv was so tiered. She was wishing they would have kissed. Lying on her bed deep in thought (about Elliot) Olivia fell asleep.
Meanwhile Elliot was almost home. He was thinking about when he saw part of Olivias bra
Elliots thoughts: did she she see me staring at her? does she know i saw her bra?
Just then he got home. Elliot was to tiered for a shower so he just took his pants and shirt off, set his alarm for 5:ooam (which was in two hours any way) lyed on his bed and fell in to a deep sleep.
Ding ding,buzz buzz,ding ding, buzz buzz. Olivia woke up to her anoying alarm clock. I really need a new alarm clock she thought. She didn't want to get up (who would with only 2 hours of sleep!!). Liv had a shower, put on her make up, grabbed a cup of coffee and left her appartment. Outside the building Elliot was waiting for her.
Liv: what are you doing here?
El: do you want a ride to work?
Liv: sure. thanks a heap El.
10 minutes later they arrived at Winsbelt 57th avenue. They walked up to the door togeher and Elliot knocked.
Woman: Hello, who are you?
Liv: im detective Olivia Benson and this is my partner Detective Stabler. Can we please speak to Mel.
Woman: yes ill just get her. Come inside and make your selves comfortable.
Elliot and Olivia went inside and sat on the sofa. There were lots of pictures of Mel and what Liv and El assumed was Casey.
Mel:uh, hello.
Mel was still a bit jumpy from the few hours before.
Liv: hi sweetie, im Olivia and this is my partner det.Stabler. We're here to help you find your friend.
Mel:o..okay.
Liv: So how old are you?
Mel: Im 12 and so...so is C..Casey.
Liv.Okay. Mel you knoe you very brave.
Mel:um..thanks.
El: now Mel you're not in any trouble but we need to bring you back to the station to ask you a few questions.
Mel: O..Okay.
TO BE CONTINUED.......
Part 2
Elliot came in for some coffee. They talked a bit about the case and it was getting really late so El said goodbye and headed home. By then it was 2:30am and Liv was so tiered. She was wishing they would have kissed. Lying on her bed deep in thought (about Elliot) Olivia fell asleep.
Meanwhile Elliot was almost home. He was thinking about when he saw part of Olivias bra
Elliots thoughts: did she she see me staring at her? does she know i saw her bra?
Just then he got home. Elliot was to tiered for a shower so he just took his pants and shirt off, set his alarm for 5:ooam (which was in two hours any way) lyed on his bed and fell in to a deep sleep.
Ding ding,buzz buzz,ding ding, buzz buzz. Olivia woke up to her anoying alarm clock. I really need a new alarm clock she thought. She didn't want to get up (who would with only 2 hours of sleep!!). Liv had a shower, put on her make up, grabbed a cup of coffee and left her appartment. Outside the building Elliot was waiting for her.
Liv: what are you doing here?
El: do you want a ride to work?
Liv: sure. thanks a heap El.
10 minutes later they arrived at Winsbelt 57th avenue. They walked up to the door togeher and Elliot knocked.
Woman: Hello, who are you?
Liv: im detective Olivia Benson and this is my partner Detective Stabler. Can we please speak to Mel.
Woman: yes ill just get her. Come inside and make your selves comfortable.
Elliot and Olivia went inside and sat on the sofa. There were lots of pictures of Mel and what Liv and El assumed was Casey.
Mel:uh, hello.
Mel was still a bit jumpy from the few hours before.
Liv: hi sweetie, im Olivia and this is my partner det.Stabler. We're here to help you find your friend.
Mel:o..okay.
Liv: So how old are you?
Mel: Im 12 and so...so is C..Casey.
Liv.Okay. Mel you knoe you very brave.
Mel:um..thanks.
El: now Mel you're not in any trouble but we need to bring you back to the station to ask you a few questions.
Mel: O..Okay.
TO BE CONTINUED.......
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Part 3
In Elliots car Mel was siting in the back staring at her knees. Olivia thought poor girl, shes been thourgh so much. Elliot was thinking the same thing.
Mel:are we nearly there??
Liv:yes honey, about 2 more minutes.
they all sat in silence for the next two minutes.
Liv: okay Mel we"re here. Come with me honey
They all went inside. Liv took Mel into a small room were they usually took the children under 15.
El: Mel you look a bit pale, would you like some thing to drink??
Mel:uh, yes please.
Elliot left the room and returned a few seconds later with a small cup of juice.
Liv:okay honey, we're gonna start asking you questions now. you ready?
Mel:uh huh.
Liv: what time did you and Casey go to bed last night?
Mel: umm i think it was around ten.
El: did you leave any windows open or unlocked?
Mel: um yeah it was hot last night so Casey opened a window half way.
Liv:so what happened next??
Mel:mum went down stairs and then a guy climbed through the window.
Mel started sobbing.
Liv: okay honey seetie, we understand this is hard for you to say but you really need to tell us if we're going to find Casey.
Mel:okay. he had duck tape and it put it over our mouths and he was wearing black gloves and a mask. th..thats when he did it to her. he made me watch.
Mel burst out crying.
Mel: i dunno what he looked like because it was really dark and the mask. he spoke once. that was when he told me to watch or he'd kill her and my mother. i dont remember what his voice sounded like.
Olivia sat down and hugged Mel tightly. Elliot was thinking what a wonderful women shes so kind and caring.
Mel:can i go now.
Liv:yeah honey we'll take you home now.
After they dropped Mel off at her house they went back to the station. By then it was 12:00 pm and everyone was having lunch. Liv grabbed two cups of coffee and gave one to Elliot(like she always did). After they had finished ther're lunch Cragen called El and Liv.
Cragen:Casey only lives with her father and has ever since she was 4 years old. Her mother was shot and they never caught the guy who did it. anyway John and Fin have gone to get Peter now and should be back soon. So you can ask him a few questions.
Liv:yep
El:okay cap.
they left Cragens office and john and Fin walked in with Peter.
Liv: hi Peter come with me.
He follwed her into a bigger room.
El: we understand your going through hell right now but we need you to answer a few questions.
Peter: okay. but please find my daughter.
Liv: we will find her i promise.
El: do you know of anyone who might have wanted to you or your daughter?
Peter:ummm... theres this one guy who i've hated for years. the bastard shot my wife. he swiped all the evidence from the cops so they had nothing on him.
Peter was starting to get really angry.
Liv: what is his name?
Peter: Romeo Cortez. that name is stuck in my head like a bullet. He lives in an appartment building on 25th street.
Liv:(whispers) Oh crap Elliot thats my aapartment building.
Elliot and Olivia open the door.
Peter:what? can i go now.
El: whatever. we'll contact you if we find something.
In Elliots car Mel was siting in the back staring at her knees. Olivia thought poor girl, shes been thourgh so much. Elliot was thinking the same thing.
Mel:are we nearly there??
Liv:yes honey, about 2 more minutes.
they all sat in silence for the next two minutes.
Liv: okay Mel we"re here. Come with me honey
They all went inside. Liv took Mel into a small room were they usually took the children under 15.
El: Mel you look a bit pale, would you like some thing to drink??
Mel:uh, yes please.
Elliot left the room and returned a few seconds later with a small cup of juice.
Liv:okay honey, we're gonna start asking you questions now. you ready?
Mel:uh huh.
Liv: what time did you and Casey go to bed last night?
Mel: umm i think it was around ten.
El: did you leave any windows open or unlocked?
Mel: um yeah it was hot last night so Casey opened a window half way.
Liv:so what happened next??
Mel:mum went down stairs and then a guy climbed through the window.
Mel started sobbing.
Liv: okay honey seetie, we understand this is hard for you to say but you really need to tell us if we're going to find Casey.
Mel:okay. he had duck tape and it put it over our mouths and he was wearing black gloves and a mask. th..thats when he did it to her. he made me watch.
Mel burst out crying.
Mel: i dunno what he looked like because it was really dark and the mask. he spoke once. that was when he told me to watch or he'd kill her and my mother. i dont remember what his voice sounded like.
Olivia sat down and hugged Mel tightly. Elliot was thinking what a wonderful women shes so kind and caring.
Mel:can i go now.
Liv:yeah honey we'll take you home now.
After they dropped Mel off at her house they went back to the station. By then it was 12:00 pm and everyone was having lunch. Liv grabbed two cups of coffee and gave one to Elliot(like she always did). After they had finished ther're lunch Cragen called El and Liv.
Cragen:Casey only lives with her father and has ever since she was 4 years old. Her mother was shot and they never caught the guy who did it. anyway John and Fin have gone to get Peter now and should be back soon. So you can ask him a few questions.
Liv:yep
El:okay cap.
they left Cragens office and john and Fin walked in with Peter.
Liv: hi Peter come with me.
He follwed her into a bigger room.
El: we understand your going through hell right now but we need you to answer a few questions.
Peter: okay. but please find my daughter.
Liv: we will find her i promise.
El: do you know of anyone who might have wanted to you or your daughter?
Peter:ummm... theres this one guy who i've hated for years. the bastard shot my wife. he swiped all the evidence from the cops so they had nothing on him.
Peter was starting to get really angry.
Liv: what is his name?
Peter: Romeo Cortez. that name is stuck in my head like a bullet. He lives in an appartment building on 25th street.
Liv:(whispers) Oh crap Elliot thats my aapartment building.
Elliot and Olivia open the door.
Peter:what? can i go now.
El: whatever. we'll contact you if we find something.
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I wonder if liv knows the guy? Something to think about i guess
I wonder if liv knows the guy? Something to think about i guess
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thanks you guys!! does she know the guy? hmmm.. you'll have to wait and see.
Part 4
Olivia and Elliot went to her appartment building.
Frank:(guy at front desk) Hi Olivia what are you doing here so early?
Liv:oh hi Frank im not coming home yet accually i was looking for a guy, Romeo Cortez.
Frank:okay hes in 13C five doors right from your appartment. oh and hes moving tommorow anyway so you had better see him now if you want to see him at all.
Liv:oh okay.thanks.
Up at the appartment Elliot knocked on the door. A tall, cute nice looking man answered.
El: are you Romeo Cortez?
Romeo: whats it to you
Liv:uh maybe cos we're cops!
She flashes her badge at him.
Romeo:Yeah im Romeo and for the last fricken time i didnt shoot her!!
El: we're not here because of that, we're here cos you raped and kidnapped her 12 year old daughter!
Olivia and Elliot pushed through the door just eyeing the place.
Romeo: what! i didnt do crap to her daughter!
Liv: well you're looking pretty good for it!
Romeo:Peter told you didnt he. well that proves. look i didnt do it okay.
Liv: we need you to come down to the precient.
Romeo: fine! i have nothing to hide.
they arrived at the station. Elliot took him into the interogation room, Olivia following behind.
Romeo:im telling you, i didnt do it. i have no reason to do such a sick thing
El: where were you last night.
Romeo: out on a date, all night. i will give you her number if you want to check with her!
Liv: fine give it now.
He gave the number to Olivia.
Romeo: can i go now.
Liv:wait a minute!.
El and Liv left the room.
Cragen:that was too easy. Liv ring that women and see if his alabi checks out.
10 mins later Liv lets Romeo go.
Liv:yep. he was with that women last night. she even gave me the number of the bartender who saw them there.
Cragen:okay.
Itwas 11:00pm and Liv was putting some files and things in her locker.Elliot walked past.
Liv: hey, you wanna come over my place tonight for a few beers?
El:sure why not i need it.
Liv:cool.
In the car Olivia was staring at Elliot and smiling. he looked at her, returning the smile.
El:what?
Liv:oh, nothing.
Liv thought:oh my gosh does he know im in love with him? i hope he didnt notice i was staring!
El thought: wow her eyes are so beautiful. She'll never love a guy like me.
Liv:thought: i wish hed just kiss me. even if it was only for one moment.
Olivia really wanted to tell Elliot her feelings about him but was afraid of getting rejected.
Liv:i...i emm
El:what is it Liv?
Liv:oh um nver mind its not important.
Olvias heart was beating 100 beats per second.
El thought:it must be about one of her cases. she wont tell me cos we always end up arguing about it. oh well.
Liv thought: Stupid!! you cant tell him, well at least not yet anyway. ill wait until the divorce is done.
Olivia and Elliot went to her appartment building.
Frank:(guy at front desk) Hi Olivia what are you doing here so early?
Liv:oh hi Frank im not coming home yet accually i was looking for a guy, Romeo Cortez.
Frank:okay hes in 13C five doors right from your appartment. oh and hes moving tommorow anyway so you had better see him now if you want to see him at all.
Liv:oh okay.thanks.
Up at the appartment Elliot knocked on the door. A tall, cute nice looking man answered.
El: are you Romeo Cortez?
Romeo: whats it to you
Liv:uh maybe cos we're cops!
She flashes her badge at him.
Romeo:Yeah im Romeo and for the last fricken time i didnt shoot her!!
El: we're not here because of that, we're here cos you raped and kidnapped her 12 year old daughter!
Olivia and Elliot pushed through the door just eyeing the place.
Romeo: what! i didnt do crap to her daughter!
Liv: well you're looking pretty good for it!
Romeo:Peter told you didnt he. well that proves. look i didnt do it okay.
Liv: we need you to come down to the precient.
Romeo: fine! i have nothing to hide.
they arrived at the station. Elliot took him into the interogation room, Olivia following behind.
Romeo:im telling you, i didnt do it. i have no reason to do such a sick thing
El: where were you last night.
Romeo: out on a date, all night. i will give you her number if you want to check with her!
Liv: fine give it now.
He gave the number to Olivia.
Romeo: can i go now.
Liv:wait a minute!.
El and Liv left the room.
Cragen:that was too easy. Liv ring that women and see if his alabi checks out.
10 mins later Liv lets Romeo go.
Liv:yep. he was with that women last night. she even gave me the number of the bartender who saw them there.
Cragen:okay.
Itwas 11:00pm and Liv was putting some files and things in her locker.Elliot walked past.
Liv: hey, you wanna come over my place tonight for a few beers?
El:sure why not i need it.
Liv:cool.
In the car Olivia was staring at Elliot and smiling. he looked at her, returning the smile.
El:what?
Liv:oh, nothing.
Liv thought:oh my gosh does he know im in love with him? i hope he didnt notice i was staring!
El thought: wow her eyes are so beautiful. She'll never love a guy like me.
Liv:thought: i wish hed just kiss me. even if it was only for one moment.
Olivia really wanted to tell Elliot her feelings about him but was afraid of getting rejected.
Liv:i...i emm
El:what is it Liv?
Liv:oh um nver mind its not important.
Olvias heart was beating 100 beats per second.
El thought:it must be about one of her cases. she wont tell me cos we always end up arguing about it. oh well.
Liv thought: Stupid!! you cant tell him, well at least not yet anyway. ill wait until the divorce is done.
This is gonna be a exciting chapter!!
Part 5
In Olivias appartment Elliot had had 4 beers and Olivia had had 3.(they wernt drunk though!) It was 12:00am.
El: well id better head home now.
Liv: oh no you dont! youre over the legal limit to drive. you're not going any where!
El: im fine Liv dont worry.
Liv: dont be silly, you're staying here tonight.
El:okay but ill sleep on the couch.
Liv:are you sure,you can sleep in my bed if you want, ill sleep on the couch.
El:no its fine live, its a pull out couch ill fit.
Liv: okay but ill make your bed, i mean couch.
Liv went and got a sheet, pillow and blanket.
Liv:here you go
Liv was trying to pull the couch out.
Liv: damn things jamed again. El could you please help?
El: yep.
Elliot pulled and it finaly came out really fast. Liv and El fell on the ground, one on top of the other. they stared at each other for a moment then theyre lips touch softly. they moaned as they kissed passionatly. Olivia pulled back slowly and they got up.
El: whats wrong?
Liv:Elliot i have to tell you something
El: what is it?
Liv: ive wanted to tell you this for so long. i..i..i love you Elliot and have for a few years ive dreamed of kissing you for so long.
Elliot just stood there.
Liv:oh my god i new i shouldnt have told you, you could never love me!!
El: wait Liv, this has come as a shock to me. I thought youd never love me.
Liv:you mean..
El: yes i feel the exact same way.
Olivia and Elliot both had big smiles on there face. He kissed her again and they went into the bedroom. Elliot took off His shirt and pants. He also took off Livs shirt and pants.LOL. they got in bed, Elliot on top of Olivia.
El:are you ready?
Liv:yes
El:are you sure?
Liv: ive never been more sure about somehting my entire life.
He entered her and they made passionate love all night long.
Liv woke up at 3 in the moring, Elliot by her side. She woke him up.
El: hey babe.
Liv:hey sweetie. im just thinking. are we together or is this just a one night stand?
El: we're together of course, we love each other
Liv: good. i was afraid you were gonna say this was a one time thing.
El:course not!i love you Olivia and you love me. we were meant to be together.
Olivia had a huge smile on her face as she kissed him.
Liv: El, could we please keep this a secret until you're divorce is final?
El: okay. oh yeah the kids will be really upset if they find out im with another women at the moment. could we can anounce it after it though?
Liv:id be happy to.
And with that they fell asleep in each others arms.
Part 5
In Olivias appartment Elliot had had 4 beers and Olivia had had 3.(they wernt drunk though!) It was 12:00am.
El: well id better head home now.
Liv: oh no you dont! youre over the legal limit to drive. you're not going any where!
El: im fine Liv dont worry.
Liv: dont be silly, you're staying here tonight.
El:okay but ill sleep on the couch.
Liv:are you sure,you can sleep in my bed if you want, ill sleep on the couch.
El:no its fine live, its a pull out couch ill fit.
Liv: okay but ill make your bed, i mean couch.
Liv went and got a sheet, pillow and blanket.
Liv:here you go
Liv was trying to pull the couch out.
Liv: damn things jamed again. El could you please help?
El: yep.
Elliot pulled and it finaly came out really fast. Liv and El fell on the ground, one on top of the other. they stared at each other for a moment then theyre lips touch softly. they moaned as they kissed passionatly. Olivia pulled back slowly and they got up.
El: whats wrong?
Liv:Elliot i have to tell you something
El: what is it?
Liv: ive wanted to tell you this for so long. i..i..i love you Elliot and have for a few years ive dreamed of kissing you for so long.
Elliot just stood there.
Liv:oh my god i new i shouldnt have told you, you could never love me!!
El: wait Liv, this has come as a shock to me. I thought youd never love me.
Liv:you mean..
El: yes i feel the exact same way.
Olivia and Elliot both had big smiles on there face. He kissed her again and they went into the bedroom. Elliot took off His shirt and pants. He also took off Livs shirt and pants.LOL. they got in bed, Elliot on top of Olivia.
El:are you ready?
Liv:yes
El:are you sure?
Liv: ive never been more sure about somehting my entire life.
He entered her and they made passionate love all night long.
Liv woke up at 3 in the moring, Elliot by her side. She woke him up.
El: hey babe.
Liv:hey sweetie. im just thinking. are we together or is this just a one night stand?
El: we're together of course, we love each other
Liv: good. i was afraid you were gonna say this was a one time thing.
El:course not!i love you Olivia and you love me. we were meant to be together.
Olivia had a huge smile on her face as she kissed him.
Liv: El, could we please keep this a secret until you're divorce is final?
El: okay. oh yeah the kids will be really upset if they find out im with another women at the moment. could we can anounce it after it though?
Liv:id be happy to.
And with that they fell asleep in each others arms.
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Sorry but this capter is going to be real short.
Part 5
Olivias annoying alarm went off at 5:00am.
Liv:(groaning) El, honey.
El: im out here babe.
Liv got up and walked out into the kitchen.
Liv: you look happy
El: it was just a good night last night thats all.
He leaned over the kitchen counter and kissed her lips.
Liv: im gonna have a shower now.
El: i'll join you.
they were in the shower for 3 quarters of an hour making love.
Liv: oh crap hon, we'd better get out now or we'll be late for work. you know how Cragen gets when were late.
El: okay, lets continue this after work.
Liv: most definatly.
Liv said with a huge smile filling her face. When they got out Olivia put on her make up, they grabbed a coffee and headed to work.
Sorry about the short chapter i'll make up for it in the next one. hope you liked it.
Part 5
Olivias annoying alarm went off at 5:00am.
Liv:(groaning) El, honey.
El: im out here babe.
Liv got up and walked out into the kitchen.
Liv: you look happy
El: it was just a good night last night thats all.
He leaned over the kitchen counter and kissed her lips.
Liv: im gonna have a shower now.
El: i'll join you.
they were in the shower for 3 quarters of an hour making love.
Liv: oh crap hon, we'd better get out now or we'll be late for work. you know how Cragen gets when were late.
El: okay, lets continue this after work.
Liv: most definatly.
Liv said with a huge smile filling her face. When they got out Olivia put on her make up, they grabbed a coffee and headed to work.
Sorry about the short chapter i'll make up for it in the next one. hope you liked it.
sorry i haven't posted in a while, I hope to update sometime this week 
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i rele like ur story. update soon pleazze.lolx .
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QUOTE (LawAndOrderSVUIsLove @ May 31 2007, 09:22 PM) 
i rele like ur story. update soon pleazze.lolx .
.i know i havn't posted in ages but thats because my computer broke down and at the moment im at my sisters house using her computer and i dont have my draft with me so i dont know what to write. theres just alot happened in the past two weeks and im realy busy so i dont know when i can post next it could be quiet a while though so hang in ther its coming!! and thanks for reading my story
QUOTE (mariska_rox @ Jun 8 2007, 07:58 AM)
i know i havn't posted in ages but thats because my computer broke down and at the moment im at my sisters house using her computer and i dont have my draft with me so i dont know what to write. theres just alot happened in the past two weeks and im realy busy so i dont know when i can post next it could be quiet a while though so hang in ther its coming!! and thanks for reading my story
ahh...to bad
i cant wait till u update!!
:}
Update soon! This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!
Hi Bubba here, we haven't heard from her in a while.
Hey, i'm so sorry I haven't been on in awhile, nearly 2 years! its just that my computer broke down and when i got a new one i didn't get the internet but i have now and i'm keen to carry on this story.
i'll write some more tomorow but i live in newzealand and at the moment its 2:50 am and i'm very tierd so i'm going to bed now. i'll post some more of the story tomorrow or the next day but definatly sometime soon so hang in there!...
i'll write some more tomorow but i live in newzealand and at the moment its 2:50 am and i'm very tierd so i'm going to bed now. i'll post some more of the story tomorrow or the next day but definatly sometime soon so hang in there!...
Part 6
Olivia and Elliot were in the car on the way to the precinct
Liv: El, you realise if we tell people we're together it will eventually get to the captain and we won't be able to work in the same precinct anymore
El: I never thought about that. I don't want another partner, at least not yet because if we break up we won't ever see eachother. I don't think we should tell anyone until we know we're totally serious about eachother, okay?
Liv: okay.
as Elliot was about to say something, he saw a Liv squinting at something out the window.
El:what is it?
Liv: i don't know...hold on pull over
they both got out of the car
Liv: oh my god its a person
they both ranover to person lying naked and bloody under a tree in the park. she was badly beaten and bruised and Elliot thought she might be dead. Liv bent down by the girl to feel if she still had a pulse
Liv: shes still alive, call an ambulance! hang in there, you're gonna be okay
Girl: n...n...no...im.. not
Liv: yes honey you will ve, just hang in there until the ambulance gets here.whats your name?
Girl: Ca...Casey
Liv recognizes the name.
Liv: oh god Elliot its Casey, the girl from the other night. call cragen too
Liv but her jacket over Caseys bloody, naked body.
A few minutes later....
the ambulance arrives and Liv goes in it with Casey. Cragen and Elliot follow in the squad car.
at the hospital Casey is taken in to surgery and Elliot, Olivia and Cragen are waiting outside.
to be continued....
sorry if this chapter is short and not very exciting but i'll update again sometime this week
Olivia and Elliot were in the car on the way to the precinct
Liv: El, you realise if we tell people we're together it will eventually get to the captain and we won't be able to work in the same precinct anymore
El: I never thought about that. I don't want another partner, at least not yet because if we break up we won't ever see eachother. I don't think we should tell anyone until we know we're totally serious about eachother, okay?
Liv: okay.
as Elliot was about to say something, he saw a Liv squinting at something out the window.
El:what is it?
Liv: i don't know...hold on pull over
they both got out of the car
Liv: oh my god its a person
they both ranover to person lying naked and bloody under a tree in the park. she was badly beaten and bruised and Elliot thought she might be dead. Liv bent down by the girl to feel if she still had a pulse
Liv: shes still alive, call an ambulance! hang in there, you're gonna be okay
Girl: n...n...no...im.. not
Liv: yes honey you will ve, just hang in there until the ambulance gets here.whats your name?
Girl: Ca...Casey
Liv recognizes the name.
Liv: oh god Elliot its Casey, the girl from the other night. call cragen too
Liv but her jacket over Caseys bloody, naked body.
A few minutes later....
the ambulance arrives and Liv goes in it with Casey. Cragen and Elliot follow in the squad car.
at the hospital Casey is taken in to surgery and Elliot, Olivia and Cragen are waiting outside.
to be continued....
sorry if this chapter is short and not very exciting but i'll update again sometime this week
You're back here, great !!!!
I've never reviewed this story but I read it before I registered on this board, but I loved it and I'm glad you'll update it !!!
and ...
your siggy is wonderful !!
I've never reviewed this story but I read it before I registered on this board, but I loved it and I'm glad you'll update it !!!
and ...
your siggy is wonderful !!
QUOTE (jolec @ May 4 2009, 06:15 AM)
You're back here, great !!!!
I've never reviewed this story but I read it before I registered on this board, but I loved it and I'm glad you'll update it !!!
and ...
your siggy is wonderful !!
I've never reviewed this story but I read it before I registered on this board, but I loved it and I'm glad you'll update it !!!
and ...
your siggy is wonderful !!
thanks! =)
I'll update sometime this weekend
Part 7
After talking to a doctor Cragen told Olivia and Elliot to go back to the station because the surgery could take a while.
Back at the station Liv, El, Munch and Fin were all waiting for the call to say Casey was out of surgery.
while they were waiting they all grabbed a coffee.
an hour later...
ring ring, ring ring
Liv: detective benson
Doctor: hello detective its Dr.Jones, Caseys just gotten out of surgery and its not looking to good for her. and theres something i would like to discuss with you in person if you don't mind
Liv: okay,we'll be down in a few minutes.
Olivia grabbed her coat
Liv: Caseys just come out of surgery
and walked out the door with Elliot behind her.
At the hospital...
Dr. Jones: detectives, I'm afraid I have some bad news. Casey died a few minutes ago.
El: crap!
Dr. Jones: but wait theres more. Casey was pregnant. she was raped a few nights ago, right?
El and Liv both nodded.
Dr.Jones: well heres the twist, she was 3 months pregnant
Liv and El just looked at eachother.
Liv and El went back to the precinct and updated Cragen, Fin and Munch.
Cragen: Fin, Munch go talk to the girls father, friends and anyone you can think of to see if she had a boyfriend, stalker, crush etc.
Munch and Fin walk out.
El walked back to his desk and picked up an envolope with no name or anything on it
El: have you ever seen this before?
he shows the unopened envolope to olivia.
Liv: no. where was it?
El: on my desk.
El opened the folder and took out what was inside. There were a whole bunch of photos of Casey and some guy who looked to be 25 lying naked on a bed touching eachother.
the note said:
I found these pictures on my husbands computer.
Please don't tell him I sent them to you or he WILL kill me.
Cragen: El, get a picture of the mans face and run it through the system, see if anything comes up.
El: I'm on it.
Liv: she looks like shes enjoying it she said with a confused and serious look on her face.
El: we have an I.D. on the guy. his names Ethan and hes Mels stepdad.
to be continued...
After talking to a doctor Cragen told Olivia and Elliot to go back to the station because the surgery could take a while.
Back at the station Liv, El, Munch and Fin were all waiting for the call to say Casey was out of surgery.
while they were waiting they all grabbed a coffee.
an hour later...
ring ring, ring ring
Liv: detective benson
Doctor: hello detective its Dr.Jones, Caseys just gotten out of surgery and its not looking to good for her. and theres something i would like to discuss with you in person if you don't mind
Liv: okay,we'll be down in a few minutes.
Olivia grabbed her coat
Liv: Caseys just come out of surgery
and walked out the door with Elliot behind her.
At the hospital...
Dr. Jones: detectives, I'm afraid I have some bad news. Casey died a few minutes ago.
El: crap!
Dr. Jones: but wait theres more. Casey was pregnant. she was raped a few nights ago, right?
El and Liv both nodded.
Dr.Jones: well heres the twist, she was 3 months pregnant
Liv and El just looked at eachother.
Liv and El went back to the precinct and updated Cragen, Fin and Munch.
Cragen: Fin, Munch go talk to the girls father, friends and anyone you can think of to see if she had a boyfriend, stalker, crush etc.
Munch and Fin walk out.
El walked back to his desk and picked up an envolope with no name or anything on it
El: have you ever seen this before?
he shows the unopened envolope to olivia.
Liv: no. where was it?
El: on my desk.
El opened the folder and took out what was inside. There were a whole bunch of photos of Casey and some guy who looked to be 25 lying naked on a bed touching eachother.
the note said:
I found these pictures on my husbands computer.
Please don't tell him I sent them to you or he WILL kill me.
Cragen: El, get a picture of the mans face and run it through the system, see if anything comes up.
El: I'm on it.
Liv: she looks like shes enjoying it she said with a confused and serious look on her face.
El: we have an I.D. on the guy. his names Ethan and hes Mels stepdad.
to be continued...
QUOTE (mariska_rox @ May 9 2009, 01:42 PM)
Part 7
After talking to a doctor Cragen told Olivia and Elliot to go back to the station because the surgery could take a while.
Back at the station Liv, El, Munch and Fin were all waiting for the call to say Casey was out of surgery.
while they were waiting they all grabbed a coffee.
an hour later...
ring ring, ring ring
Liv: detective benson
Doctor: hello detective its Dr.Jones, Caseys just gotten out of surgery and its not looking to good for her. and theres something i would like to discuss with you in person if you don't mind
Liv: okay,we'll be down in a few minutes.
Olivia grabbed her coat
Liv: Caseys just come out of surgery
and walked out the door with Elliot behind her.
At the hospital...
Dr. Jones: detectives, I'm afraid I have some bad news. Casey died a few minutes ago.
El: crap!
Dr. Jones: but wait theres more. Casey was pregnant. she was raped a few nights ago, right?
El and Liv both nodded.
Dr.Jones: well heres the twist, she was 3 months pregnant
Liv and El just looked at eachother.
Liv and El went back to the precinct and updated Cragen, Fin and Munch.
Cragen: Fin, Munch go talk to the girls father, friends and anyone you can think of to see if she had a boyfriend, stalker, crush etc.
Munch and Fin walk out.
El walked back to his desk and picked up an envolope with no name or anything on it
El: have you ever seen this before?
he shows the unopened envolope to olivia.
Liv: no. where was it?
El: on my desk.
El opened the folder and took out what was inside. There were a whole bunch of photos of Casey and some guy who looked to be 25 lying naked on a bed touching eachother.
the note said:
I found these pictures on my husbands computer.
Please don't tell him I sent them to you or he WILL kill me.
Cragen: El, get a picture of the mans face and run it through the system, see if anything comes up.
El: I'm on it.
Liv: she looks like shes enjoying it she said with a confused and serious look on her face.
El: we have an I.D. on the guy. his names Ethan and hes Mels stepdad.
to be continued...
After talking to a doctor Cragen told Olivia and Elliot to go back to the station because the surgery could take a while.
Back at the station Liv, El, Munch and Fin were all waiting for the call to say Casey was out of surgery.
while they were waiting they all grabbed a coffee.
an hour later...
ring ring, ring ring
Liv: detective benson
Doctor: hello detective its Dr.Jones, Caseys just gotten out of surgery and its not looking to good for her. and theres something i would like to discuss with you in person if you don't mind
Liv: okay,we'll be down in a few minutes.
Olivia grabbed her coat
Liv: Caseys just come out of surgery
and walked out the door with Elliot behind her.
At the hospital...
Dr. Jones: detectives, I'm afraid I have some bad news. Casey died a few minutes ago.
El: crap!
Dr. Jones: but wait theres more. Casey was pregnant. she was raped a few nights ago, right?
El and Liv both nodded.
Dr.Jones: well heres the twist, she was 3 months pregnant
Liv and El just looked at eachother.
Liv and El went back to the precinct and updated Cragen, Fin and Munch.
Cragen: Fin, Munch go talk to the girls father, friends and anyone you can think of to see if she had a boyfriend, stalker, crush etc.
Munch and Fin walk out.
El walked back to his desk and picked up an envolope with no name or anything on it
El: have you ever seen this before?
he shows the unopened envolope to olivia.
Liv: no. where was it?
El: on my desk.
El opened the folder and took out what was inside. There were a whole bunch of photos of Casey and some guy who looked to be 25 lying naked on a bed touching eachother.
the note said:
I found these pictures on my husbands computer.
Please don't tell him I sent them to you or he WILL kill me.
Cragen: El, get a picture of the mans face and run it through the system, see if anything comes up.
El: I'm on it.
Liv: she looks like shes enjoying it she said with a confused and serious look on her face.
El: we have an I.D. on the guy. his names Ethan and hes Mels stepdad.
to be continued...
SO CONTINUE !!!
Olivia and Elliot were on their way to NYC Universtiy to arrest Ethan. When they got there Olivia asked a woman where Ethans lecture room was and she pointed it out to her.
Liv: thank you ma'am. (to El) Lets go nail this bastard.
They ran to the room and bust opan the door.
El: Ethan Crenshaw?
Ethan: yes, can I help you?
Liv: You're under arrest
Ethan: arrest? what for?
Liv: The rape and murder of Casey Middleton
Ethan: what? shes dead? no, no she can't
Liv cut him off
Liv: You have the right to remain silent if you give up that right anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to an attorny if you can't afford one we eill provide one for you
Olivia nad Elliot walked out, Elliot pulling Ethans arm as 100 Uni students watched in astonishment
Back at the precinct...
Elliot was leaning on the wall watching Olivia interogate Ethan.
Elliot liked it when Olivia took control, he thought it wa sexy. Liv was very good at her job and El really liked that about her. She had a way of making suspects squirm and feel uncomfortable, just how she liked them.
El could'nt wait till after work when no one was aorund and he could have her all to himself. He imagined grabbing her by the waist and kissing her passionatly. Elliot focused his mind back to the interogatin.
Liv: why'd you do it?
Ethan: I didn't, I loved her! I would never hurt her
Liv: are you sure about that?
Ethan: of course I am. She was my angel
Liv: yeah, your 13 year old angel
Ethan: Its not like that! age didn't matter to us
Liv: it does when you're old enough to be her father
Ethan: I'm only 30.
Liv: 17 years is a big difference.
There was a silence. Olivia liked the silence, it always made the suspect uncomfortable and they'd say the 1st thing that came to mind just to break the silence.
Ethan: I didn't rape her. It was consensual
Liv started to raise her voice
Liv: she was 13 for god sake. either way you're going down for stagatory rape
More silence.
Liv: why would you start dating a 13 year old girl? shes barely gotten her period and you already have children! she was a teenage girl who only needed to worry about teenage boys and her friends not being pregnant with a 30 year old mans baby
Ethan: pregnant?
Liv: oh i'm sorry didn't you know? you knocked up your 13 year old mistress
Ethan: oh god, no, no! shes dead and so is my baby!
he started to sob
Ethan: how far along was she?
Liv: 4 months
Ethan sobbed harder. Liv and Elliot left the room just as her phone rang.
Liv: Benson
Melinda: Hey liv its Melinda, I've got Caseys body down at the morgue. I've done rape kit and found semen on her underwear and vagina.
Liv: okay. I'll see if I can get a sample from Ethan and bring it down to see if it matches
Melinda: Okay, see you soon
Liv: that was Melinda. She found semen in Casey. All we need now is a sample from Ethan and see if they match up
El: if hes innocent that should be easy
Liv: thank you ma'am. (to El) Lets go nail this bastard.
They ran to the room and bust opan the door.
El: Ethan Crenshaw?
Ethan: yes, can I help you?
Liv: You're under arrest
Ethan: arrest? what for?
Liv: The rape and murder of Casey Middleton
Ethan: what? shes dead? no, no she can't
Liv cut him off
Liv: You have the right to remain silent if you give up that right anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to an attorny if you can't afford one we eill provide one for you
Olivia nad Elliot walked out, Elliot pulling Ethans arm as 100 Uni students watched in astonishment
Back at the precinct...
Elliot was leaning on the wall watching Olivia interogate Ethan.
Elliot liked it when Olivia took control, he thought it wa sexy. Liv was very good at her job and El really liked that about her. She had a way of making suspects squirm and feel uncomfortable, just how she liked them.
El could'nt wait till after work when no one was aorund and he could have her all to himself. He imagined grabbing her by the waist and kissing her passionatly. Elliot focused his mind back to the interogatin.
Liv: why'd you do it?
Ethan: I didn't, I loved her! I would never hurt her
Liv: are you sure about that?
Ethan: of course I am. She was my angel
Liv: yeah, your 13 year old angel
Ethan: Its not like that! age didn't matter to us
Liv: it does when you're old enough to be her father
Ethan: I'm only 30.
Liv: 17 years is a big difference.
There was a silence. Olivia liked the silence, it always made the suspect uncomfortable and they'd say the 1st thing that came to mind just to break the silence.
Ethan: I didn't rape her. It was consensual
Liv started to raise her voice
Liv: she was 13 for god sake. either way you're going down for stagatory rape
More silence.
Liv: why would you start dating a 13 year old girl? shes barely gotten her period and you already have children! she was a teenage girl who only needed to worry about teenage boys and her friends not being pregnant with a 30 year old mans baby
Ethan: pregnant?
Liv: oh i'm sorry didn't you know? you knocked up your 13 year old mistress
Ethan: oh god, no, no! shes dead and so is my baby!
he started to sob
Ethan: how far along was she?
Liv: 4 months
Ethan sobbed harder. Liv and Elliot left the room just as her phone rang.
Liv: Benson
Melinda: Hey liv its Melinda, I've got Caseys body down at the morgue. I've done rape kit and found semen on her underwear and vagina.
Liv: okay. I'll see if I can get a sample from Ethan and bring it down to see if it matches
Melinda: Okay, see you soon
Liv: that was Melinda. She found semen in Casey. All we need now is a sample from Ethan and see if they match up
El: if hes innocent that should be easy
Next chapter, please !!
I want to know if he's guilty...and I want EO of course !!
I want to know if he's guilty...and I want EO of course !!
Elliot went back into the interoggation room to ask Ethan for a DNA sample. Ethan agreed to one as long as he could get an asprin and a cup of hot coffee. Elliot and Olivia went down to lab to give the DNA to Melinda and they waited anxiously as Melinda compared the two samples.
El: you think he did it?
Liv: to be honest, I don't anymore. If he was guilty why would hand over the DNA without a fight?
El: maybe he just isn't up for a fight.
five mins later...
Melinda: The two samples don't match.
El: Damn.
Liv and El both walked out of the lab and walked to were there lockers were.
Liv: well I think we should call it a night.
El: what are we going to do with Ethan?
Liv: Fin can deal with him.
El: ok. so am I coming to yours?
Liv: you sure are
Liv said trying to hide her excitement but couldn't hold back a giant smile. and at that they walked out of the precinct, hopped in El's car and drove to Livs appartment complex.
Inside the appartment...
As soon as they walked in the door both El and Liv took thier jackets off and threw them onto the couch.
El: that was a hell of a day
Liv: I know hun but lets not talk about our day.
El: how about lets not talk at all
El said with a sly smile on his face. He grabbed Liv and pushed her gently against the wall. he kissed her lips slow and gentle as he put his warm hands up her top and felt her soft skin. as he went to undo her bra Liv pushed away
El: whats wrong?
Liv: nothing, its just that i had something special planned for us tonight and if you keep kissing me like that I won't be able to resist you for much longer
El: and thats a bad thing?
Liv: no of course not but we have to wait until i get everything set up for our special night
El: okay.
Liv walked off into the bathroom, the biggest most fancy room in the whole appartment. A few years ago one of her great aunts (who she'd only meet once) left her a rediculous ammpount of money and Olivia decided to use some of it to renovate the bathroom. she'd put a big hot tub and giant shower in the room. normally Liv wouldn't bother wasting money on renovations but she was in the mood to spoil herself which was very rare.
she filled up the hot tub, putting in anything she could find, bubbles, sented salts etc. Liv got a few candles and placed them around the room. She got a big bottle of red wine, two wine glasses and placed them by the side of the tub. Liv took her sterio out of her room and plugged it in in the bathroom. she put on some romantic music which she had bought thismorning from a CD shop around the corner from the precinct. the song that came on first was The Colour of Love by Boys II Men. She lit the candles, turned out the lights, took all her clothes off and walked into the lounge were El was waiting patiently.
As soon as El saw Liv he looked like his eyes were gonna pop out.
El: Oh my gosh you're so beautiful
he said eyeing her up. Liv just smailed. She walked over to him and grabbed his tie
Liv: you're coming with me
El had the giantest, cheesyist smile on his face.
Liv: now get those clothes off
El: yes ma'am
once all Els clothes were lying on the floor they both hopped into the giant hot tub. El started to kiss Liv passionatly and he could tell that she wanted him inside her. El got on top Liv and they started making passionate love.
later, still in the hot tub...
El: have i mentioned I love you?
Liv: *smiles* only about million times
Liv hands El a glass and fills it with wine
El: you are so beautiful words can't even describe
Liv: *smiles again* I'm so happy that we're finally together. I've loved you for so long and I was afraid to tell you
El: I feel the exact same way.
And as the night went on they talked and made love in the hot tub until they were so tired that when they got out they didn't even put any clothes on, instead flopping into Livs bed and falling asleep imediatley.
El: you think he did it?
Liv: to be honest, I don't anymore. If he was guilty why would hand over the DNA without a fight?
El: maybe he just isn't up for a fight.
five mins later...
Melinda: The two samples don't match.
El: Damn.
Liv and El both walked out of the lab and walked to were there lockers were.
Liv: well I think we should call it a night.
El: what are we going to do with Ethan?
Liv: Fin can deal with him.
El: ok. so am I coming to yours?
Liv: you sure are
Liv said trying to hide her excitement but couldn't hold back a giant smile. and at that they walked out of the precinct, hopped in El's car and drove to Livs appartment complex.
Inside the appartment...
As soon as they walked in the door both El and Liv took thier jackets off and threw them onto the couch.
El: that was a hell of a day
Liv: I know hun but lets not talk about our day.
El: how about lets not talk at all
El said with a sly smile on his face. He grabbed Liv and pushed her gently against the wall. he kissed her lips slow and gentle as he put his warm hands up her top and felt her soft skin. as he went to undo her bra Liv pushed away
El: whats wrong?
Liv: nothing, its just that i had something special planned for us tonight and if you keep kissing me like that I won't be able to resist you for much longer
El: and thats a bad thing?
Liv: no of course not but we have to wait until i get everything set up for our special night
El: okay.
Liv walked off into the bathroom, the biggest most fancy room in the whole appartment. A few years ago one of her great aunts (who she'd only meet once) left her a rediculous ammpount of money and Olivia decided to use some of it to renovate the bathroom. she'd put a big hot tub and giant shower in the room. normally Liv wouldn't bother wasting money on renovations but she was in the mood to spoil herself which was very rare.
she filled up the hot tub, putting in anything she could find, bubbles, sented salts etc. Liv got a few candles and placed them around the room. She got a big bottle of red wine, two wine glasses and placed them by the side of the tub. Liv took her sterio out of her room and plugged it in in the bathroom. she put on some romantic music which she had bought thismorning from a CD shop around the corner from the precinct. the song that came on first was The Colour of Love by Boys II Men. She lit the candles, turned out the lights, took all her clothes off and walked into the lounge were El was waiting patiently.
As soon as El saw Liv he looked like his eyes were gonna pop out.
El: Oh my gosh you're so beautiful
he said eyeing her up. Liv just smailed. She walked over to him and grabbed his tie
Liv: you're coming with me
El had the giantest, cheesyist smile on his face.
Liv: now get those clothes off
El: yes ma'am
once all Els clothes were lying on the floor they both hopped into the giant hot tub. El started to kiss Liv passionatly and he could tell that she wanted him inside her. El got on top Liv and they started making passionate love.
later, still in the hot tub...
El: have i mentioned I love you?
Liv: *smiles* only about million times
Liv hands El a glass and fills it with wine
El: you are so beautiful words can't even describe
Liv: *smiles again* I'm so happy that we're finally together. I've loved you for so long and I was afraid to tell you
El: I feel the exact same way.
And as the night went on they talked and made love in the hot tub until they were so tired that when they got out they didn't even put any clothes on, instead flopping into Livs bed and falling asleep imediatley.
Great part, I want to read more, please !
And I love your new siggy, well done !!
And I love your new siggy, well done !!
QUOTE (jolec @ May 27 2009, 03:42 PM)
Great part, I want to read more, please !
And I love your new siggy, well done !!
And I love your new siggy, well done !!
(:
sorry i haven't been on in a while i just havn't had much time on my hands latley and i don't know when i'm going to have enough enough time to write another chapter so if anyone wants to carry on writing my story for me, feel free.
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