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El_n_liv_shipper
Alright shipper writers i decided we should start a new e/oshipper thread since admin told us to A LOOONGG while ago lol...so write away biggrin.gif
BensonFanatic
QUOTE (El_n_liv_shipper @ Apr 6 2007, 06:34 PM) *
Alright shipper writers i decided we should start a new e/oshipper thread since admin told us to A LOOONGG while ago lol...so write away biggrin.gif

Hey just a quick questioin, can anyone post, or just select few?
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (BensonFanatic @ Apr 6 2007, 08:27 PM) *
Hey just a quick questioin, can anyone post, or just select few?



..No sorry it was just the selected few sad.gif
BensonFanatic
QUOTE (El_n_liv_shipper @ Apr 7 2007, 05:58 PM) *
..No sorry it was just the selected few sad.gif

Hey no prob, just wanted to make sure before i got bored and posted. Thanks!
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (BensonFanatic @ Apr 7 2007, 05:04 PM) *
Hey no prob, just wanted to make sure before i got bored and posted. Thanks!



lol its kool.
meggy
yeah sorry... if you really wanna become a writer on the shipper story pm me and i'll pm some of the other writer's and we'll talk about it so...yeah i had the last post on the other thread so it's someone else's turn now... shipper you haven't written in a while (hint hint!)
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (meggy @ Apr 7 2007, 05:45 PM) *
yeah sorry... if you really wanna become a writer on the shipper story pm me and i'll pm some of the other writer's and we'll talk about it so...yeah i had the last post on the other thread so it's someone else's turn now... shipper you haven't written in a while (hint hint!)



true that lol but im completely CLUELESS! on where we are lol sooo id just mess it up big time!! but you can always go twice wink.gif
meggy
hah no... i'm practically braindead... shipper do you think you could bring the last few parts of the story from the other thread over here??? just the ones from page 99
El_n_liv_shipper
Of course i can biggrin.gif Great part by the way!!




Olivia: *starts to turn to point gun at white*

white: *smacks elliot's head and then liv's with the handle of his gun*ah ah ahh... now see i knew u you were gonna try that sweetie, *bends down and cups li's chin to where if she opened her eyes she would be looking staight at him* but i couldn't have you ruin my sweet little plan now could i?

Olivia:*eyes barely flutter open* you bastard...

White: now that's not a very nice thing to say... *hits her with gun again*... stupid b itch

a few hours later... liv starts coming around to find that...
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (El_n_liv_shipper @ Apr 8 2007, 10:49 PM) *
Of course i can biggrin.gif Great part by the way!!




Olivia: *starts to turn to point gun at white*

white: *smacks elliot's head and then liv's with the handle of his gun*ah ah ahh... now see i knew u you were gonna try that sweetie, *bends down and cups li's chin to where if she opened her eyes she would be looking staight at him* but i couldn't have you ruin my sweet little plan now could i?

Olivia:*eyes barely flutter open* you bastard...

White: now that's not a very nice thing to say... *hits her with gun again*... stupid b itch

a few hours later... liv starts coming around to find that...



That shes in this Old Room with a bed a chair on the side and a window at the top of the bed.

Olivia: Shyt *she thinks to herself* how the hell did i end up here!!

*she stands at the top of the bed to try to open up the window but the window seemed to be too high up. so she decides to put the chair on the bed and stand on it knowing it might not even work but its worth a try. she puts one foot on it then the other when she feels the chair tipping over she trys to keep her balance but instead tips over with the chair on to the floor. at this point shes on the floor rubbing her head and her back when she hears the door at the side of her open. she quickly glares side ways and sees white coming in*

White: Oh Detective what was your bright self trying to do???......Trying to escape through the window now werent you??

*he walked closer to her and bend down so his face was close to livs. Olivia tried backing away but he held her face close to his.*

White: Olivia..*he said with his creepy voice!!!* it doesnt have to be this way you know?

*olivia didnt take her sight off his gun in his pocket*

White saw her staring at his gun so he took it out and asked....did you want this??

*she quickly tried snatching it but failed this made white mad*

White: I SAID IT DIDNT HAVE TO BE LIKE THIS!!! but since you insist!! then it will be !!!! *he said getting closer to livs face*

*he picked her up and made her stand up*

White:sit your ass down!!!

*olivia Was trying to calm him down*

Olivia: white...

*interupted*

White: I said sit your ass down NOW! *he said pointing at the bed*


Olivia:




****I KNOW IT SUCKED!!! SORRY!!!**** you can just skip mine if ya like wink.gif
MrsJeter
QUOTE (BensonFanatic @ Apr 7 2007, 05:04 PM) *
Hey no prob, just wanted to make sure before i got bored and posted. Thanks!


How do you get to be select
FAN4EVER
^^ Great job. It didn't suck... Keep it up you guys
meggy
QUOTE (MrsJeter @ Apr 9 2007, 03:18 AM) *
How do you get to be select

pm me... i started the original shipper story and i'll talk to the other writer's and look at some of your other posts and then we'll pm you back saying yes or no... by the way shipper... THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't think of anything to write though...sad.gif
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (meggy @ Apr 11 2007, 08:43 PM) *
pm me... i started the original shipper story and i'll talk to the other writer's and look at some of your other posts and then we'll pm you back saying yes or no... by the way shipper... THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't think of anything to write though... sad.gif



I found it!!! biggrin.gif .....not that it was lost lol AWWW thnx!!!! i know it toook me like forever to respond but thanks!!!! biggrin.gif
meggy
ur welcome... i still have no idea what to write though... oh hyper!!!!!!!!!!!! where the heck is that girl... dry.gif ... *walks off to try and find hyper*
DetectiveMcPDQ
Aww,man.How come I'm never one of the selected few at anything?Special field trips I'm never selected,extra candy to be given out never selected,being on SVU never selected. sad.gif And I've got a brain full of ideas!Aww,well.Guess I'll go write fanfics in my own little corner.............................
xoxo,
A very sad DetectiveMcPDQ
meggy
WAIT!!!!!! don't leave yet! i'm gonna pm you now... actually DetectiveMcPDQ... i've read your other fan fics, or at least some of them so you know what... if you want you can write with us, but if you have any q's make sure you ask... and it can't be all to random... it does have to be reasnable... so if you have an idea go ahead and put it up...
DetectiveMcPDQ
Here's an idea,just the basics of the story before I go wild.
Either Elliot or Olivia gets sick.They get married without knowing
that the other spouse is sick.Then the ill detective Elliot or Olivia
starts collapsing at work or things start happening that affect
their working enviroment..
Just an idea that's been floating around.I've started the fanfic but
don't really like where it's headed so maybe someone else can help.
xoxo,
DetectiveMcPDQ
P.S.Thanks! smile.gif
meggy
o crap... i forgot you were newer to the board... crap... elliot and olivia are already married in this... i think... ask shipper i can't remember.. di we start over on this...
meggy
okay i've figured it out.. el and liv are already married cuz this WAZ a continuation of the other part we didn't start over... they also have a baby girl named maria... this is gonna be harder since you haven't read the 1st part...
DetectiveMcPDQ
No problem,I'll get to reading.
I'll be able to get through it fast enough....
If I'm gonna be a pain in the butt I'll just let you guys write.
Who knows,maybe I'll learn some fanfic ideas as I read this and I can help with the next E/O shipper story! smile.gif
It's not a huge problem,that day I was being a big baby.... wink.gif
xoxo,
DetectiveMcPDQ
meggy
okay thanks you can just skip over all off ourlittle conversations just read the story parts if you want... it is really long...
Hyper
QUOTE (El_n_liv_shipper @ Apr 8 2007, 11:20 PM) *
That shes in this Old Room with a bed a chair on the side and a window at the top of the bed.

Olivia: Shyt *she thinks to herself* how the hell did i end up here!!

*she stands at the top of the bed to try to open up the window but the window seemed to be too high up. so she decides to put the chair on the bed and stand on it knowing it might not even work but its worth a try. she puts one foot on it then the other when she feels the chair tipping over she trys to keep her balance but instead tips over with the chair on to the floor. at this point shes on the floor rubbing her head and her back when she hears the door at the side of her open. she quickly glares side ways and sees white coming in*

White: Oh Detective what was your bright self trying to do???......Trying to escape through the window now werent you??

*he walked closer to her and bend down so his face was close to livs. Olivia tried backing away but he held her face close to his.*

White: Olivia..*he said with his creepy voice!!!* it doesnt have to be this way you know?

*olivia didnt take her sight off his gun in his pocket*

White saw her staring at his gun so he took it out and asked....did you want this??

*she quickly tried snatching it but failed this made white mad*

White: I SAID IT DIDNT HAVE TO BE LIKE THIS!!! but since you insist!! then it will be !!!! *he said getting closer to livs face*

*he picked her up and made her stand up*

White:sit your ass down!!!

*olivia Was trying to calm him down*

Olivia: white...

*interupted*

White: I said sit your ass down NOW! *he said pointing at the bed*
Olivia:
****I KNOW IT SUCKED!!! SORRY!!!**** you can just skip mine if ya like wink.gif



HEY GUYS!!!!!!! I haven't been online in forever!!!!!!! I think I part of the select few right? if not just delete this lol here it goes...


Olivia: OK OK i will go sit down
*she tuned and sat down on the bed*
White*calming down*:Thats a good girl my pretty olivia now we can talk some business...
Olivia: Business? what business?
White*laughing evily*: Why little olivia how we are going to spend our night together
Olivia:....

I am really tired so i tried plus i didnt know if i was the "selected few" lol
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (Hyper @ Jul 27 2007, 10:19 PM) *
HEY GUYS!!!!!!! I haven't been online in forever!!!!!!! I think I part of the select few right? if not just delete this lol here it goes...


Olivia: OK OK i will go sit down
*she tuned and sat down on the bed*
White*calming down*:Thats a good girl my pretty olivia now we can talk some business...
Olivia: Business? what business?
White*laughing evily*: Why little olivia how we are going to spend our night together
Olivia:....

I am really tired so i tried plus i didnt know if i was the "selected few" lol



Oh Em gee LOL! We have to start the Story again!!!! so heres my piece...somebody better add the next part *Shaking fist up* happy.gif

"Oh god" she thought "Please Elliot get here in time.....get here in time!"

White: SO any ideas sweety?
Olivia: White....
White: yes my love?
Olivia: sooner or later your going to get caught why not give it up?
White:*he laughed* and make this easy on you? Tisk tisk liv for even asking me that question...now maybe we should go along by spur of the momment wink.gif

*he got up infront of Olivia, Olivia was already squinting knowing what to Expect. she tried untangaling herself from the rope but wasnt able to. WHite then Made her stand up and Pushed her back down "God Please! dont let this Happen...Dont...." she thought to herself. White slowly layed over her and BAM! somebody Begins Throwing the door down."

Elliot: LIV!
*she hears on the other end of the door. she quickly opens her eyes *
Olivia:ELliot! *she thinks*

White: RATS!
HE pulls Olivia towards him holding her infront of him by her hair and Chest.

"Elliot and a couple other NYPD cops knock down the door*

Elliot: Olivia <3
Olivia:elliot <3

White:Stay back!! all of you's stay back or il kill her! *he pulled the gun out of his pocket*

*elliot tightend his fist out of anger ready to kill white but he knew that was what he wanted so he didnt want to give him the satisfaction*

Elliot:WHite...Just let her go...
meggy
yay!!!!!!!!!!! I would add something but i have no idea what i would make them say... i suck at writing hostage scenes...

p.s. i kno no one cares, but... I GOT A LAPTOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's what i'm on right now, but i'm at the library cuz my house doesn't have wi-fi... dry.gif ... but still... LAPTOP! yay! i am so happy... it's a very early christmas present...
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (meggy @ Nov 18 2007, 03:20 PM) *
yay!!!!!!!!!!! I would add something but i have no idea what i would make them say... i suck at writing hostage scenes...

p.s. i kno no one cares, but... I GOT A LAPTOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's what i'm on right now, but i'm at the library cuz my house doesn't have wi-fi... dry.gif ... but still... LAPTOP! yay! i am so happy... it's a very early christmas present...



NO!!! YOU DONT SUCK!!^_^ ! THats awesome you have a laptop! i got mine last year! happy.gif I know how awesome it is to have one too hehehe!!!!!!!!!
Bubba_Bridges
Hi Bubba here, another good story. I have to get me a laptop soon.
xXXoliviabensonXXx
I am new here but started reading this a long time ago and I was wonder if anyone was going to finish this story.
meggy
ummmm... well, if you've read the first one you should kno that it can take us forever to get the next part up... i think this is supposed to be ending the story but idk. i would write but i CAN'T write hostage scenes to save my life no matter what shipper says...
xXXoliviabensonXXx
QUOTE (meggy @ Dec 30 2007, 04:05 PM) *
ummmm... well, if you've read the first one you should kno that it can take us forever to get the next part up... i think this is supposed to be ending the story but idk. i would write but i CAN'T write hostage scenes to save my life no matter what shipper says...


hey well that is totally fine I was just wondering. and there is no rush. Thank you
Hyper
QUOTE (xXXoliviabensonXXx @ Jan 2 2008, 06:14 PM) *
hey well that is totally fine I was just wondering. and there is no rush. Thank you


Hey guys I'm back this is like the tenth time this has hapened to me...lol I have been cut off from the SVU world yes it twas a hard time but now I'm back! What's going on with this story now...meggy...shipper?
xXXoliviabensonXXx
QUOTE (Hyper @ Jan 3 2008, 03:14 PM) *
Hey guys I'm back this is like the tenth time this has hapened to me...lol I have been cut off from the SVU world yes it twas a hard time but now I'm back! What's going on with this story now...meggy...shipper?


I have been asking the same thing!! I really wanted someone to finish it. it was really good.
meggy
QUOTE (El_n_liv_shipper @ Nov 16 2007, 11:35 PM) *
Oh Em gee LOL! We have to start the Story again!!!! so heres my piece...somebody better add the next part *Shaking fist up* happy.gif

"Oh god" she thought "Please Elliot get here in time.....get here in time!"

White: SO any ideas sweety?
Olivia: White....
White: yes my love?
Olivia: sooner or later your going to get caught why not give it up?
White:*he laughed* and make this easy on you? Tisk tisk liv for even asking me that question...now maybe we should go along by spur of the momment wink.gif

*he got up infront of Olivia, Olivia was already squinting knowing what to Expect. she tried untangaling herself from the rope but wasnt able to. WHite then Made her stand up and Pushed her back down "God Please! dont let this Happen...Dont...." she thought to herself. White slowly layed over her and BAM! somebody Begins Throwing the door down."

Elliot: LIV!
*she hears on the other end of the door. she quickly opens her eyes *
Olivia:ELliot! *she thinks*

White: RATS!
HE pulls Olivia towards him holding her infront of him by her hair and Chest.

"Elliot and a couple other NYPD cops knock down the door*

Elliot: Olivia <3
Olivia:elliot <3

White:Stay back!! all of you's stay back or il kill her! *he pulled the gun out of his pocket*

*elliot tightend his fist out of anger ready to kill white but he knew that was what he wanted so he didnt want to give him the satisfaction*

Elliot:WHite...Just let her go...

that's the last thing that happened in the story and i can't write hostage scenes and shipper is the one that wrote that so... Hyper? also i'm not sure if you remember but alli used to be a member on the board and i'm friends with her in real life cuz we went to school together but then her account freaked out and wouldn't remember her so she gave up but she just sent me a pm saying she got a new account the name is AllisonElizabeth just so you know...
AllisonElizabeth
hi guys! i really like the story it's very good! lol keep it up!!!!
meggy
where are shipper and Hyper and cassie when you need them?
Hyper
QUOTE (meggy @ Jan 5 2008, 05:25 PM) *
where are shipper and Hyper and cassie when you need them?


I'm HERE!!!! WOOOT! Ok so who is going to finish the story...? I havent talk to shipper or cassie in a long time!
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (Hyper @ Jan 7 2008, 03:05 PM) *
I'm HERE!!!! WOOOT! Ok so who is going to finish the story...? I havent talk to shipper or cassie in a long time!



Ah! Hyper!! Meggy!! alli! Or your new SN! AllisonElizabeth! wink.gif i missed you guys!!! alright i just got the urge to continue the EOshipper! C'mon Guys help me out!!! happy.gif i cant post right after me it wouldnt be fair wink.gif
meggy
uhm... yeah shipper if you have an idea... WRITE! i have no clue of what to do so if you have any clue just go... i promise if you write something that i will try really hard to update the story after you... did that make sense???
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (meggy @ Mar 4 2008, 10:39 PM) *
uhm... yeah shipper if you have an idea... WRITE! i have no clue of what to do so if you have any clue just go... i promise if you write something that i will try really hard to update the story after you... did that make sense???


Kaykay. So i relized that We're all Stuck at this part of the story which means the story ends here. BUT that cant happen!!!! >_< so iv decided we should start Somewhere Else and go from there. What do you gals think?
SVUangel161
love it post more soon
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (SVUangel161 @ Apr 10 2008, 06:05 AM) *
love it post more soon



Why thank you! happy.gif Im actually trying to get all the other writers to try since i was the last to write and quite frankly im stuck....grrr damn writers block anywho hopefully they'll get on soon so we can Decide what to do but thanks smile.gif
meggy
QUOTE (El_n_liv_shipper @ Nov 16 2007, 11:35 PM) *
Oh Em gee LOL! We have to start the Story again!!!! so heres my piece...somebody better add the next part *Shaking fist up* happy.gif

"Oh god" she thought "Please Elliot get here in time.....get here in time!"

White: SO any ideas sweety?
Olivia: White....
White: yes my love?
Olivia: sooner or later your going to get caught why not give it up?
White:*he laughed* and make this easy on you? Tisk tisk liv for even asking me that question...now maybe we should go along by spur of the momment wink.gif

*he got up infront of Olivia, Olivia was already squinting knowing what to Expect. she tried untangaling herself from the rope but wasnt able to. WHite then Made her stand up and Pushed her back down "God Please! dont let this Happen...Dont...." she thought to herself. White slowly layed over her and BAM! somebody Begins Throwing the door down."

Elliot: LIV!
*she hears on the other end of the door. she quickly opens her eyes *
Olivia:ELliot! *she thinks*

White: RATS!
HE pulls Olivia towards him holding her infront of him by her hair and Chest.

"Elliot and a couple other NYPD cops knock down the door*

Elliot: Olivia <3
Olivia:elliot <3

White:Stay back!! all of you's stay back or il kill her! *he pulled the gun out of his pocket*

*elliot tightend his fist out of anger ready to kill white but he knew that was what he wanted so he didnt want to give him the satisfaction*

Elliot:WHite...Just let her go...


white: give me one good reason.

elliot:... because i love her...

white *laughs at elliot*- i meant one good reason for ME. and fyi that's not it. in fact, that just makes me want to hurt her even more...*he smiles evilly then to olivia* come here sweetie

*white pulls her as close to him as possible by the hair and she lets an involuntary squeak of pain out and he turns her around so she is facing him but she is still in the way of ne1 being able to get a shot in*

White: that's it. *he pulls her closer still smiling at Elliot's obvious fury that he is unable to do anything to help his wife* now wwhat shall we do my baby? it must be something to make every1 here other than me uncomfortable...

*White feins thinking very hard for a minute, then snaps his fingers*

White: I got it! You wanna know what we're gonna do sweetie? We're gonna...



SHIPPER! you can post now! hint hint! btw sorry if that (^) sucked. we just couldn't let it die... we've worked so hard on it...
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (meggy @ May 16 2008, 04:10 PM) *
white: give me one good reason.

elliot:... because i love her...

white *laughs at elliot*- i meant one good reason for ME. and fyi that's not it. in fact, that just makes me want to hurt her even more...*he smiles evilly then to olivia* come here sweetie

*white pulls her as close to him as possible by the hair and she lets an involuntary squeak of pain out and he turns her around so she is facing him but she is still in the way of ne1 being able to get a shot in*

White: that's it. *he pulls her closer still smiling at Elliot's obvious fury that he is unable to do anything to help his wife* now wwhat shall we do my baby? it must be something to make every1 here other than me uncomfortable...

*White feins thinking very hard for a minute, then snaps his fingers*

White: I got it! You wanna know what we're gonna do sweetie? We're gonna...



SHIPPER! you can post now! hint hint! btw sorry if that (^) sucked. we just couldn't let it die... we've worked so hard on it...

ANd it shall not die! biggrin.gif
I loved it meggy! GJ!!!!!!!!!!!


Alrighty heres my very Lame attempt.

White: What more To make Your partner cringe than seeing you with another man?

*Elliot eyes began to glare at white. He held the grip on his gun alot tighter*

Elliot: i swear to god white if you dare touch her il Kill you!....

White: ahahah! Oh stabler and risk the life of your loved one?

*Elliot could feel his blood boil and the sweat between his gun and his hands.*

*olivia stood there with the feeling of WHites arms wrapped around her shoulders and his other with the gun pointed behind her back. She shuttered at the chilling thought of what white would do to her. Elliot heard a big bang while Olivia felt a sharp Pain on her back her eyes opened at the shocking relization that she had just been shot.*

Elliot: Liv? *elliot asked trying to keep calm. he watched her slowly collapse onto the floor. everything around her was blurry but the picture of liv laying there was the clearest thing to elliot.*

*White tried running away until elliot shot him right in the back as well. Elliot ran up to him and pointed the gun straight at his head. The gun was shaking and elliots tears began to overwhelm his eyes. he Lowered his gun down with not enough strength to shoot White, all his strength was being accupied by his pain and suffering for liv." He tried walking his way down to liv with all the strength he had left and collapsed next to her. he held her......


SORRY! i messed it up! i had nothing better! sad.gif you may proceed now happy.gif
meggy
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO FOLLOW THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

obviously i have no ideas at the moment but i will try to think of something... awesome job shipper!
El_n_liv_shipper
QUOTE (meggy @ May 16 2008, 05:13 PM) *
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO FOLLOW THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

obviously i have no ideas at the moment but i will try to think of something... awesome job shipper!



LOL! why spank you! lol i been practicing with my own fic!!!! anyways Who shall end it???????????????
meggy
bump... we actually do have an ending but we would like it if people actually read what we wrote first... sad.gif
meggy
bump......................
meggy
bump........ someone please post...
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