People have been responding greatly on my other stories and I decided to start another story I've had in my head for a while.The story starts at the end of Fault.

"Captain,I just can't take this anymore"she said as she walked out the door.
Tears ran down her face,as she got her stuff and ran out the door.
Munch and Finn had been getting ready to leave when they saw this happen.
They ran after her."Olivia!"Finn yelled at he cashed after her down the hall.
She stopped in front of the elevator.She pressed the button and ran in.The only thing Munch saw was Olivia lean against the elevator wall and slowly slide down,then the doors closed.
Olivia held her face as tears ran wildly down her cheeks,she was red and her stomach was hurting.When the doors of the elevator opened she ran as fast as she could out of the precient.As soon as her car started she raced down to her apartment.When she got home she locked her door dropped everything she had right on the floor and walked into her bed room.She curled up on top of her matress and cried her sobbing was so loud it caused the neighbor to come ask if she was alright.She replied a "yes" in between all her crying.Why?Why was this happening to her?She'd just given up the best thing she'd ever had had.
Then she heard pounding on the door,she wiped her tears and slowly rose out of her bed.She looked at the clock it was midnight.She slowly walked to the door her body was so weak she practially had to drag her feet.She unlocked the door and opened it.
Elliot was just standing there staring into her eyes.She began to cry even more when she looked right back into his."Liv,what's the matter?"he asked as his heart broke to the sight of his partner and best friend crying."I..I.." she couldn't even manage speak through all the sobbing.She let him in as she walked over to her kitchen and crashed on the floor near the counters.Her heart was pounding so fast that it seemed like there was a stampeed in her chest.
Elliot walked over near her and sat near her.He grabbed her arm and touched it,it was so smooth and he touched it like a peice of gold.
She looked at him and he looked at her they were both thinking the same thing.They had chosen each other over the job because they couldn't bare to lose each other.She leaned her head on his shoulder.



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He held her face in his hand and stared into her eyes."I've kept this in so long,but I just can't anymore"Olivia said passonitally.They looked at each other as their lips met,they held each other tight."You're beautiful."he said as he moved a lock off hair away from her eyes.


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They kept kissing,then,they started getting more intense.Elliot got up and Olivia led him into her bed room.Elliot had to admit that he had never felt this way for anyone and so did Olivia.Elliot took his shirt of,Olivia felt his hard muscles with her hands as he slowly took hers off.There skin met as Olivia slowly leaned onto the bed.It just didn't feel right,Olivia thought but she'd waited so long."Elliot?"Olivia said as she pulled her lips away from his."Yea?"he asked.Do you have protection?"No,he said"as he looked her in the eyes.His hormones were going crazy and he was dieing to go further.Olivia felt the same way and so she just decided one time without protection wouldn't kill.Elliot slowly kicked his shoes off and took off his pants,without stopping their kissing.Olivia slipped her jeans off.Both took everything off until their bare skin was the only thing under the sheets.Elliot kissed Olivia's neck as she touched his face.This is it Olivia thought as Elliot entered her.Olivia let out a quiet moan and kissed Elliot's chest.Then,their tounges met again and they kissed for what seemed to be years.After a hour of making passonite love they lie on the bed wrapped in each others arms and legs crossed together.

To Be continued!!!!
Hope it wasn't discreet...

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The morning light came through the blinds in the small bedroom.Elliot stared at the sun's golden reflection on Olivia's face and looked her shiny hair.He ly there thinking of what her reaction would be when she woke up.He suddenly got distracted from his thoughts when Olivia stretched a little.A small smile spread across her face when she opened her eyes.God her eyes are beautiful Elliot thought.She placed her hand on his chest."Hey"he whispered gently."Hey"she replied as she looked into his eyes,he kissed her forehead.Then,she placed her head on his chest near her hand.
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E/O Love To Be continued!

"What time is it?"Olivia asked as she watched how Elliot's stomach expanded with each breath he took.
"Don't worry about the time,we don't have work."Elliot replied as he ran his fingers through her hair.
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DetectiveMcPDQ
I know it's short...I want people to be able to read it a little at a time so it's easier to understand their feelings.

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"Yes, we do have work..." Olivia corrected as she sat up with a smirk on her face. "Aww, I thought I'd trick you.." Elliot smiled as he began to kiss Olivia again. "You know we have to talk about this," Olivia said as the kissing continued. "What is there to talk about Olivia? I love you. I can't live without you anymore." Olivia grinned, "what about our job, if they find out.." her grin turned into a frown "if they find out, we're screwed." "Without you I'm screwed," Elliot whispered "we'll find a way to work around the law" he assured her. She nodded "It's gonna be hard as hell... but it's worth it" she sank back down into the bed.
"Hey, El.." she said as she twirled her hair around her finger. "Yeah?" he smiled as he got closer. "I think we don't have work today.." she laughed. "Good," and with that Elliot began kissing Olivia again.

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After a few minutes of fooling around in bed Olivia got out of bed and put on her robe. "Where you going?," Elliot questioned.
"Breakfast,"she turned "what would you like." "Whatever your having..," he jumped out of bed. "I'm having some OJ,toast and eggs..,will that do?" Elliot nodded and followed her into the kitchen "I can help." "Oh, Elliot cooks now.." she teased. "As a matter a-fact I do!"

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