angel1986
Mar 26 2007, 10:21 AM
this is my first so please keep that in mind.
Natalie Stabler is at her best friend Keri's house. The two girls are both 17, and they are in Keri's room.
Keri- Natalie you have to tell your parents about what Justin did to you.
Natalie- I just want to forget this ever happend. If it comes back negitive i'll just forget it but it it's positive i'll tell them.
Keri- Ok. fine. you are just as stubbern as your parents.
Natalie-( TIMER DINGS) you cheek it,Keri.
Keri- Well, Nat it's positive. (natalie break's down)I can call fin and you can talk to him.
Natalie- Good, i will call him on the way.
the girls are on there way to the station house.
Natalie- hey Fin are my parents there? NO good, look i need to talk to you about something and right now i just want to talk to you about it. Ok well will be there in a few. Yah, Keri's with me.
Keri- shoot i forgot to hide the test. Well at leat my mom wont be home till like, 8 and it's only 3.
Natalie- Well even if your sisters find it just tell them the truth.
Keri- Yah, but you know Mindy.
AT THE STATION HOUES
Fin-Hey Natrat what's wrong?
Natalie- Can we go in the crib and talk, i don't want to tell everyone just yet.
Fin- Sure.
princessEmily
Mar 26 2007, 04:30 PM
I like it alot !
Good job.
FAN4EVER
Mar 26 2007, 06:37 PM
GOOD JOB!!!
Keep it up and write more soon
angel1986
Mar 27 2007, 11:55 AM
Nataie, Keri and Fin are in the crib.
Natalie- Ok i'll just start from the beggining. A few weeks ago when i was at nationals for my solo and my duet with Justin a few of us went out to celabreat are victorys and while we were eating out i started to feel sick so Justin took me to my hotel room and i woke up the next mornign and he was gone and he had raped me, i was inbed with no clothes on. And i just layed there till i took a shower because i could not face goign thur teh exam all by my self and know i am well you know.
Fin- Baby why did you not call one of us.
Natalie- i was scared and i just wanted to forget about it.
Keri- She told me a few days ago what happend when she started felling sick.
Fin- Ok. Well i'll get munch up hear and we can take your statement. But we need to tell your parents ok.
Natalie- Ok.
down stairs
Fin- Munch go up stairs and take Nat's statment ok.
Munch- What, why?
Fin- Just get you but up there.
LIV and EL enter
Fin- I need to talk to you.
Elliot- OK, SHOOT.
Fin- Well, Natalie and Keri are up stairs and well, Natalie needs to tell you something, but Elliot i know your temper so please be calm Nat's in no condition to listen to you yell, ok.
Olivia- WHat are you not telling us?
Fin-Look just go talk to her ok, she wants me there when she tells you ok?
Olivia-OK.
Crib.
Natalie-THats all Munch.
Elliot- Whats all. baby?
Natalie- Well, daddy when i was at nationals Justin druged and raped me and know i am pregneat.
ok so what do you think. I am not the best speller in the world and by the way I was a compatition dancer for 10 years so natalie is a compatition dancer as well.
FAN4EVER
Mar 27 2007, 05:02 PM
It was good. Don't worry about the spelling
princessEmily
Mar 27 2007, 07:56 PM
Ur story is coming along great.
angel1986
Mar 29 2007, 12:07 PM
thanks for all the kind words hears more.
Olivia-(is now sitting by her daughter) What happend.
Natalie- Well, after the awards were giving out me, Justin, Maddie, Lily, Kate, Paige, Sydney, Lindsey and Ms. Susan wanted to go out to celabreat are wins so me and Justin said we would head to the El Napal a mexican place accross the street and get a table. When we got there i told him what i wanted to drink and that i had to go to the bathroom. And when i get back i start drinking my drink i start to fell sick. (crying) i could fell everythign he was doing to me but i could not do anything about in.
Elliot-(Tryingot hold in his anger) Why didn't you say something.
Natalie- I was scare to. Telling makes it real , i just wanted to forget about it.
Elliot-Ok baby, look lets go home and talk about this some more ok. Liv, let me go talk to Cragen while you stay the the girls. (He leave)
Natalie- Mom can Keri stay with me tonight. I want her there when Kenny comes over so i can tell him.
Olivia-Sure, but we need to talk about this tonight if your fine with Keri being there then its' ok with me. I know you to are like sisters. Why don't you to got to Keri's house and that way she can get her stuff and me and you dad will meet you two at the house.
Natalie- Ok. love you mom.
Cragen's office
Cragen- Ok, well Munch adn Fin can talke care of the case and everything, but you and liv can't be envolved in the investagation.
Olivia-(enters) We can to that. But i want to take some time off. i need to be with Natalie.
Elliot-Me to.
Cragen- Ok just let me know when you are coming back, and take care of my granddaughter ok.
Elliot- Ok.(they leave)
sammie
Mar 29 2007, 04:46 PM
good job!!!!!!!!!!
meggy
Mar 30 2007, 10:20 AM
it's really good...please write more...
angel1986
Apr 2 2007, 09:46 AM
At the stabler house
Elliot- What are we goign to do liv. She's only 17
Olivia- I know i fell like history is repeating it's self first my mom and know my daughter.
Natalie and keri enter
Natalie- Hey mom, dad. Where are Rachel and Cole? I asked John and Alex to pick them up from school and they are stayignthe night there.
Keri- Hi i am just going to go put my stuff in your room nat. ( she goes up the stairs)
Natalie- Ok what do we do from here.
Olivia- Well there is adoption or you can keep the baby.
Elliot- Abortion is out of the question.
Natalie- I know dad. Look i talked to Keri on the way here and i want to keep the baby. Mom i know how your childhood was but let me explain, i have a loving family, great friends and an extanded family at y'alls work. And because of that i won't end up like your mother mom.
Elliot- Well, it this is want you want to do then i want you to talk to George at lest one a week ok.
Olivia- ok if you think this is best.
Natalie- Iknow i have thought about this an as long as i keep God first and formost and if i have my family and friends support i will be ok.
sorry so short but i will right more tomorrow
angel1986
Jun 11 2007, 02:15 PM
Natalie and Keri are in her room.
Keri- are you going to tell him over the phone or call himand tell him to come over?
Natalie- I'll tell him to come over.
Keri- Good. Do you want me to stay with you when you tell him?
Natalie- Yah.
A few hours later Kenny arrives at Natalie's house
Kenny- hey, Elliot and Olivia.(Natalie and Kenny have been dating for three years, and he is two years older)
Elliot- Hi, natalie is in her room so you tow can just hang out and watch tv.
Kenny- Ok. Thanks ya'll.(he goes up stairs)
Olivia- Why did you not say anything?
Elliot-Nat needs to tell him.
In Natalie's room
Natalie-Hey baby. (they kiss)
Kenny- Hey baby, hey Keri.
Keri-Hey.
Natalie-Look, kenny i need to tell you something ok so just listen ok. While i was at national Justin druged and raped me and know i am pregneat. Fin and Munch got him and are guestioning him know. I'm keeping the baby.
Kenny- I, why did you not tell anyone at first?
Natalie- i was scared.
Kenny- Of what me ,what i would do?
Natalie- Yah.
Kenny-Look i am not going anywhere. I am hear to stay ok. I love you.
Natalie- I love you to.
Keri- See Nat i told you. (trying to lighten the mood)
Kenny- hey it's only 7 why don't we go see a movie. I'll call Billy and he can come to.( Billy is Kenny's friend and also Keri's boyfriend.)
Keri- Sure. I say we see a movie with a lot of hot guys in it like Ocean's 13. Got to love that Brad Bitt.
Natalie- i agree.
Kenny- Great just great.
Natalie- Hey you and Billy made us see Spider Man3.
Kenny- well you have a point.
They all go down stairs.
Natalie- Mom, Dad can we go meet Billy at the movies and see Ocean's 13?
Olivia- Yah. have fun ok.
Natalie- We will.
FAN4EVER
Jun 11 2007, 04:54 PM
Good Job...
I like how her boyfriend is so understanding
angel1986
Jun 29 2007, 01:33 PM
Here's more
Elliot- You know when Nat left she seemed like nothing ever happend.
Olivia- I know but seh just wants to be a normal teen for a night adn go back to the way things were because tomorrow she has a doctores visit adn she is telling Susan what happand. Just don't worrie and let her be a normal teen while she can be.
Elliot-Ok.
The next Day.
Center Stage dance school
Natalie- Hey Susan do you have a second?
Susan- For you all the time in the world. Hi Olivia.
Olivia- Hi Susan.
Natalie- Well i have to tell you something and i don't really know how to so i am just going to tell you out right, ok. i was raped by Justin at National and at first i did not report it but the other day i found out i was pregneat.
Susan- I am so sorry baby. Look i will help you in whatever way i can and just so you know as of know Justin is fired. Will you still want to work here and dance here, because i need you hear but if you need the break it's yours.
Natalie- I want to teach and dance i need it know more then ever. But could i start teaching my classes a little early so when i have the baby the dances are finished. The baby is due January 2nd.
Susan- yah, anything you need or want it's yours. So how about i call your students parents and tell then your sisuation if it's ok and we start in July with your classes as well as your solo which i already have picked the best song for you. I want everything to be as normal for you a possible and back to the way things were before this happend.
Natalie- Ok its fine if you tell then. Let's see i have the 8-9 company tap, 5-6 tap, 11-13, Tap and Lyrical company,and i have Kallyn, Mindy, Tara,Maya, and Brittani's solo's and Allysa and Rachel's duet.
Susan- ok, i'll call then today.
Natlaie- Ok, well i have to go but here is a picture of the baby.
Susan- Oh thinks i'll keep it on my desk. Call me if you need anything ok?
Natalie- i will.
Later Natalie is at home with Kenny and Olivia
Kenny- Olivia i know with everything that just happend Nat might not want to go but my mom'ssister called me today and got me and Nat tickets to a concert for when we visit my mom's family in Atlanta. My aunt knows she likes Gary Allan and she got us great seats, along wtih meet ang great passes.
Olivia- i think she will want to go still just be understanding if she says no but i think it will be good for her to go.
Natalie- I hate morning sickness!
Olivia- [Laughing ]Well get used to it. But Kenny has somethign that will cheer you up.
Kenny- Remember how next mounth we are going to visit my family in Atlanta well my Aunt Grace got us tickets to Gary Allan and meet and great passes as well if you still want to go.
Natalie- I want go but should i go i mean what will your family think. Mom is it a good idea i go.
Olivia- GO dont' worrie about his family besides they all love you.
Kenny- don't worrie they all love you and we don't have to tell then about what happand just yet olny my mom and sister know.
Olivia- Well Nat do you want to go?
Natalie- Yes.
Olivia- then go.
Kenny- Great i'll call mom but i have to go to work i'll see you later ok bye i love you. {he kisses her} Have fun with Keri and the guys tonight. Tell then i said hi.
By the way i am a huge Gary Allan fan.
LawAndOrderSVUFan
Jul 6 2007, 09:25 PM
i like it so far
angel1986
Jul 10 2007, 01:34 PM
Olivia- So Nat what's the plan for tonight.
Natalie- Well, me, Keri, Ryan, Rodney,and Deaton are going to Ryan's house to watch a movie and Deaton is cooking dinner for us. You know a normal friday night.
Enter's Elliot- So i here you've got plans for tonight.
Natalie- Yah, a normal friday night for us.
Elliot- you know i never wanted my daughter to hang out will all boy's but i really like those boy's. (laughing)
Olivia-Well, as for your dad and me it looks like we are taking the twins to see Nancy Drew. Cole picked last time so know it's Rachel's turn.
Elliot- Whycant' they go see that and we go see Ocean's 13?
Olivia- Maybe.
enter's Keri- hey y'all. So nat what movie do you want to watch this week.
Natalie- Well, i got Ya Ya's, Double Jepordey, and Friday Night Lights.
Keri- Good choices.
Natalie- Well, by mom and dad see you later.
they leave.
Elliot- so when are the twins getting here.
Olivia- Well, as soon as Casey get out of court. Fin is with them till them along with Ashley and Kaemon. ( Ashley and Kaemon are fin and casey's kids.)
Elliot- Ok.
At Ryan's house.
Rodney- Well,look who showed yp late as always.
Natalie- Hey, at least we are here.
Deaton- It's Grace and Karen.
Natalie and Keri- Will!!!
Ryan- I will never understand those three.
Rodney- me either.
Keri- so whst's for dinner? Deaton.
Deaton-well, la Cocina special. Chicken, shimp, rice and cheese.
Ryan- sweet.
Rodney- know what's the movie for tonight?
Natalie- Well, Ya Ya's, Double Jepordey, and Friday Night Lights.
Keri- Ya Ya.
Ryan- Friday night lights.
Rodney- Same as ryan.
Nat.- Ya Ya's
Deaton- Well i am going to go with Ya Ya's. Ok, let's eat ang then watch the movie.
Ryan- Where's Billy and Kenny at tonight?
Nat and Ker--Woking.
ok on the weekends me and my best friend hang out with a lot of guys and we will go to the church's old pastor's house and watch movies and one of the guy's always cook's for all of us. We are all broke college students who live in the middle of nowhere in the country so there is not alot to do. And one of are guy friends is like are Will, but he's stright, and he call's me and my friend Grace and Karen. It's a big inside joke.
angel1986
Jul 12 2007, 02:22 PM
after a while the guys' go to the kitchen to cook and the girls go out side to talk.
Rodney-Alright, let's eat! (enters the kitchen)
Ryan- Ok i'll set set the table and deaton you can fix drinks.
Deaton- Cool. Hey where did the girls go?
Ryan- Outside to talk.
Deaton- OK, i'll go get them. But first i need to finish cooking.
Natalie and Keri are on swing.
Keri- So any word on the case?
Natalie- Well, not really Casey is trying to ger a warrent and John and Fin are on it. I just hope the plea the case out i don't want it to go to trile i don't think i could go through that.
Keri- Look, you know my cell is on 24/7 and so is Billy and Kenny's and if you tell the guys in there so will they. We are all here for you.
Deaton- What about us guys?
Keri- Crap!
Deaton-What's going on? Is everything ok?
Natalie- Yes and no? So good news or bad because they go together.
Keri-Before she says a word do not say anything to the the guys ok. And it you say anything to upset her i will kill you.
Deaton- Ok, just start from the begging ok.
Natalie - While i was at national Justin druged and raped me and know i am pregneat. And i am keeping the baby.
Deaton- What? Justin as in my Justin who i have known since pre-k?
Natalie- Yas.
Deaton- Oh gosh i fell so bad. Keri is right i am here for you 24/7. God when i see him he is going to be dead.
Keri- dont' worrie John and Fin are working the case.
Deaton- Look i want you to know i am here for you no matter what and as for Justin he is dead to me no one gets away with hurting you.
Natalie- Thanks, Just don't say anythign to ryan and rodney yet ok.
Deaton- Yah, sure.
Keri- SO what did you come out here for. Food done.
Deaton- Yes.
Natalie- Ok, lets eat.
At the table
Ryan- So i say tommorow night we go shopping. I need a new suit adn after we go shopping we can go to the Olive Garden.
Rodney- Sure, works for me.
Natalie- Sure i need new outfints for my vaction with kenny's family.
Keri- Well, i could use some new shoes.
Deaton- Ok, I just have to say one thing Ryan there better not be a repeat of last time we went ot the mall.
Natalie- Yah. so what do you need a new suit for?
Ryan- i'm preaching on youth sunday.
Natalie- I will so be there dad can just get over it. I can miss one mass.
Keri- Cool, i'll be there to.
Deaton- Anyone want more?
Natalie-Yah.
Ryan- Dang girl you must be hungery you never eat that much.
Deaton- maybe she is trying to gainsoem weight because you know if a good wind came she would blow away.
Keri- well chande of subject are we all ready for are end of school testing.
Natalie- Yah, i am just worried about my music performance test i have to sing a song called 'Stars in the Moon"( it's from an off broadway play)
Keri- Math.
Deaton-Yah me to
Ryan-History
Rodney-Science.
Natalie-Well, howabout sunday afternoon we have a big study session since are test are monday. That way Billy and Kenny and be there as wel. we can be at my house because my parents are catching that day.
Ryan- Sounds like a plan.
Rondney-Now lets watch the movie.
Here are the lyrics to the song "Star's and the Moon" My sister in law is a music teacher and at her freshman concert in college she sang this song and ever since then i have loved this song.
I met a man without a dollar to his name
Who had no traits of any value but his smile
I met a man who had no yearn or claim to fame
Who was content to let life pass him for a while
And I was sure that all I ever wanted
Was a life like the movie stars led
And he kissed me right here, and he said,
"I'll give you stars and the moon and a soul to guide you
And a promise I'll never go
I'll give you hope to bring out all the life inside you
And the strength that will help you grow.
I'll give you truth and a future that's twenty times better
Than any Hollywood plot."
And I thought, "You know, I'd rather have a yacht."
I met a man who lived his life out on the road
Who left a wife and kids in Portland on a whim
I met a man whose fire and passion always showed
Who asked if I could spare a week to ride with him
But I was sure that all I ever wanted
Was a life that was scripted and planned
And he said, "But you don't understand —
"I'll give you stars and the moon and the open highway
And a river beneath your feet
I'll give you day full of dreams if you travel my way
And a summer you can't repeat.
I'll give you nights full of passion and days of adventure,
No strings, just warm summer rain."
And I thought, "You know, I'd rather have champagne."
I met a man who had a fortune in the bank
Who had retired at age thirty, set for life.
I met a man and didn't know which stars to thank,
And then he asked one day if I would be his wife.
And I looked up, and all I could think of
Was the life I had dreamt I would live
And I said to him, "What will you give?"
"I'll give you cars and a townhouse in Turtle Bay
And a fur and a diamond ring
And we'll be married in Spain on my yacht today
And we'll honeymoon in Beijing.
And you'll meet stars at the parties I throw at my villas
In Nice and Paris in June."
And I thought, "Okay."
And I took a breath
And I got my yacht
And the years went by
And it never changed
And it never grew
And I never dreamed
And I woke one day
And I looked around
And I thought, "My God...
I'll never have the moon."
angel1986
Jul 17 2007, 01:40 PM
the next morning 10 am
Elliot- Morning sleepy head.
Nat- Morning all.
Rachel- hwo was last night?
Nat- FIne. Deaton cooked and we watched Ya'Ya's
(in his room)Cole- Hey mom where is my first baseman's glove?
Olivia-Try dad's truck.
cole-(now in the kitchen) Ok. fine.
Olivia- So, Rachel, when is Leah's mom picking you up.
Rachel- Concert starts at 7 but she is geeting here at 12 so me,leah and Ally can hang out at the mall for awhile, then we are eating at the cheesecake factory.
Elliot- Well, Rach, why don't you get in the shower and get ready becuaes it takes you two hour's to get ready.
Rachel-K, and fyi it does not take me two hour's to get ready hour and half tops. (she laughs).
Elliot- Just go. (laughing)
Cole- and JJ and his dad will be here in like 5 seconds for are game.
Oliva- Ok so here is the deal, me and dad have to go to the station house for a little bit them we will be at your game. Ok. We will be there promise.
Cole-k, see you later.
Elliot- Know that they are gone, Casey called last night and we won't plead out. I am sorry but it looks like it's going to court.
Olivia- Look, i know it is not what you wanted but he won't take rape one with 15 years, he wants sexual misconduct with 3 years max.
Natalie-Ok, So what's next.
Olivia- Well, Casey is going to call you, Keri, Susan, some of your dance friends, Kenny, and some of your guy friends. Plus us and Don, Fin and Munch, because Justin's lawyer is going make you look..
Natalie- Like a slut.
Elliot- yah, pretty much. Casey it going to push for a quick trial date. SO it can all be over as quick as possible.
Natalie- Ok. I just want this to be over with.
Olivia- How is Kenny taking all of this.
Nat.- Good. He is really being understanding.
Elliot- Good. I always liked that boy.
Olivia- Well, you should since he is the son of your Marine bubby, Andrew.
Natalie- Yah, dad.
Elliot- Well, we are off the station house, call us when you leave to go to the mall, k.
Nat.-ok. Love you.
SVUluvr1
Jul 17 2007, 02:31 PM
This is a good story I really like it update soon
angel1986
Jul 19 2007, 03:54 PM
Natalie, Keri, Billy, Kenny, are at the mall.
Nat. Ok, so we are meeting the guys at 8 at the olive garden, right.
Keri- yes.
Nat.- SO we got three hours to shop. I need to find cloths that will hide my belly because i will start showing soon.
Keri-Nat you should so get this top.(holding a blue and black top) it will look so cuit with you black leggings. (in a lower voice) and it will hide you belly when you start to show.
Nat.- yah, you are right. Plus i love it.
Kenny- Hey Nat what about this one(holding a pink baby doll dress)
Nat.- Cool, hey what about this( holding a black dress with an empire waist)
Keri- love it.
After a while Natalie had a few outfits she could where to hid her belly when it started to show.
Keri- Ok, now it't my turn to shop. Hollister and Forever 21, here we come.
Billy- Great, Keny lets go to Feild of Dreams and look around k.
Kenny-(Looking at nat.)
Nat.- Go meet us at Great American Cookie in an hour and a half.
They part ways.
keri- Nat are you going to tell Ryan and Rodney?
Nat.- Can you tell them.
Keri- You can tell them, look tonight after we eat and we are hanging out in the parking lot tell them. Me, Kenny, Billy, and Deaton will be there k.
Nat- Deal.
At olive garden parking lot. Everyone is just standing arond talking.
Nat.- Hey can i tell y'all something? (kenny takes one had and Keri takes another for support).
Ryan- Sure , what's up?
Natalie- I was reped by justin at nationls two mounths ago. And i am pregneat. And i am keeping the baby. And the court date in in a mounth.
Rodney- I'll kill that SOB.
Ryan- Little punk.
They all hug her.
Ryan- I'm it you need anything k.
Rodney- same here.
angel1986
Jul 27 2007, 02:57 PM
it's sunday and they are all helping each other study for exams on monday.
Keri- Kenny, just take your time and you will do fine ok?
Kenny- I know, it's just Ms. Gilbert's guestions are allway so ramdom, "Like what color was the dress she wore in chapter 6?"(at my high school there really was a teacher who always had guestion's like that on her test).
Keri- Well, if you get stuck always go with c.
Natalie- I can never hit that it's to high.
Deaton- Just close your eyes and just worrie about that part of the song.
Natalie-(singing)And I thought, "Okay."
And I took a breath
And I got my yacht
And the years went by
And it never changed
And it never grew
And I never dreamed
And I woke one day
And I looked around
And I thought, "My God...
I'll never have the moon."
Deaton- Amazing. Told you you could hit it.
Billy- Rodney, remember y=mx+b always works with that.
Rodney- Got it.
Ryan- Alright, it's late lets call in a night and get some sleep. One more day of school and it's summer break.
Natalie- Cool, i cant' wait because after school i leave for a week and a half of fun in the sun.
Deaton- What tiem does your plan plane take off?
Kenny-at 9PM. We will land at around 10:45 ish.
Keri- Well, at lest you have a cell to keep in touch with us.
Natalie- Oh i will.
At school after schools out.
Keri- Ok, nat lets go get an ice cream at cold stones and then we can go to your parents work and talk to them.
Natalie- Ok.
At the 1-6
Munch- Hey girls, how was the exams?
Natalie, Keri- Good past them all.
Munch -Good.
Fin- Hye girls. Whats' up?
Natalie- Schools out,
Keri- And eating a strawberry shortcake icecream.
Fin- go figure, See you later.
Nat.-Hey, mom and Dad.
Elliot- Hey, sweetie,.
Olivia- Hey, baby.
Natalie- So, what do we need to talk about.
Elliot- trial date is in three weeks from today.
Olivia- And while you and Kenny gone Casey needs to prepair Keri and Billy. Then when you two get back she will work with you two.
Keri- Ok.
Nat.- Ok. Are you and dad goingot be home before i leave .
Olivia- Yah, well be home as soon as we get done at the me's office.
Nat.- Ok, see you then. Me and Keri are goign home to watch General Hospital.
At the Ariport
Olivia- Nat, have fun and call us when you land ok,
Elliot- Have fun ok, and don't worrie about anything.
Natalie- I will love you.
Elliot and Olivia- love you to.
angel1986
Sep 11 2007, 01:25 PM
i know it's been awile but with finishing up my summer classes and starting my job back it's been crazy. I will try to update tomorrow.
angel1986
Sep 12 2007, 01:43 PM
Elliot and Olivia are leaving the airport.
Olivia- El do you think Nat is not telling us every thing?
Elliot- What do you mean?
Olivia-Everything from the attack to how she is doing. She comes home and does not say much but if you ask her if she is ok she says she is. Ans Susan told me that at dance she just is not acting like her self but tells her she is ok. I just wish she would talk to us.
Elliot- i know, but she is talking to Haung and he would say if something was realy wrong.
Olivia- i know it just seem like she tells Keri and Kenny more then us.
Elliot- i know that and when she is ready she will, at lest she has keri and kenny to talk to. And, maybe this week will be good for her your know. She needs to feel like a normal teen every now and then.
Olivia- I know. You know you have been really great throught all this.
Elliot- i know it's been hard because everytime i look at nat i eat to kill Justin.
Olivia- Me, to and i think Kenny, Billy, fell the same way.
In atlanta.
Natalie- I am so tired. All i wantto do is go to bed.
Kenny- Me to.
Julie-(kenny's mom) It's only about a hour drive to my sister Ruth's house. They can't wait to see yall.
Natalie- So are Ruth, Emma, and Brian going th teh concert with us?
Julie- Yah, Emma is a huge Billy Currington fan.
At the concert the next night. Nat and Emma are getting food and drinks
Emma- I love your outfit youlook hot nat.
Natalie- Thanks. Kenny picked it out. ( a black tank top with beads around the neck adn a pair of short black shorts.)
Emma- Ok they have the best margerita's here i will get you one if yotu want?
Nat. No thinks i can't drink.
Emma- Ok.
the girls are back to there sets listening to Billy Currington.
Emma- he is so hot.
Nat- YES he is but not as hot as Gary Allan.
Emma- Ok suit yourself.
kENNY- hey, boyfirend over here.
Nat. i know i am just playing ok.
Later on that night.
Billy Curringotn is singing "let's get it on"
eMMA- I found my man he just don't know it yet!
Natalie- Yah right and i am going to end up with Gary Allan.
the girls laught.(ok i went to a concert with a friend and he was really singing that song and she looked at me and said that she had found her man and know it's a joke with us)
Later that night
Nat- Oh my Gary was amazing i love the song "Addiction". That is the best concert i have been to in a while.
Ruth- well, just wait next friday while we are in flordia i got us tickets to see kenny Chesney, with Sugerland.
Emma- What on my mom how?
Ruth- My friend Sharon at work has connections and she got then for us.
Natalie- Yes, i am so exicted. I have to call mom. HI MOM. yah the concert was great. yah, we leave tomorrow for the beach. But guess what Kenny's aunt got us tickets to Kenny Chesney for when we are in flordia. Yah i know, i just had to tell you. Ok i will love you two.
In New York
Olivia- El, your were right she need to be a normal teen. On the phone she sounded truly happy for once since all of thsi has happaned.
Elliot- See, just give her time and she will come around and tell us. She just needs a mental break for all of this.
mrslee
Sep 12 2007, 09:16 PM
lol, "you look hot nat"...That's something I would say.
Update soon.
angel1986
Dec 21 2007, 03:17 PM
In the car on the way to panama city.
natalie wakes up from a nap.
Natalie- Hey, where are we?
Kenny- just entered bay county. so about 40 min. from the condo.
Natalie- Ok, so what on the agenda when we get there?
Julie- Well unload the car, go to the store and get ready to go eat, how does Montego Bay sound?
Kenny- Good. Oh call your mom she called when you were alseep.
Natalie- Ok.. Hey mom, yah almost there maybe 30 mim. Ok, yah i was taking a nap we got home arond 1 last night only got 3 hours of sleep. Ok, yah tell everyone i said hey. Bye.
At the condo
Julie-ok in the room upstairs with the 2 double beds are natalie, Emma, kenny, and brian,then in the room across the hall are me and your dad, kenny, then in the downstairs bedroom is Ruth and Berry.
Emma- sound good to me.
Kenny-ok lets get unpacked.
Ruth- Me and Julie are going to the store so when you get unpacked start doing whatever you need to do to get ready.
2 hours later it's 6 oclock
nat- Kenny where is my pink backless top with the beads on the neck.
Keny- in my bag remember you keep it at my house for when we go to whild bills so your dad doesent' know about it.
Nat-right. Thinks. know help me tie the back strings.
Kenny- yes sweeetie.
Emma- Already wiped.
Kenny- shove it.
Brian- i have to agree with my sis.
Kenny- well, at leat i have a girlfriend.
Berry- stop fighting.
Emma- yes dad.
A FEW MIN. LATER everyone is down stairs ready to leave.
Barry- Nat, does you dad know about that outfit.(nat is wearing a pink backless top with white shorts and pink flipflop.)
Nat- Most of it not the top though.
Julie- stop bugging nat.
Barry- But it funs' to bug her.
( when i go on vaction we always go with another family and the husband always bugs me but it all in fun infact it's become a tridition whenever we see eachother.)
Julie- To the excurision.
around 2 am Kenny wakes up to a crying natalie.
Nat, wake up.
Nat- Oh, i'm ok.
Kenny-no your not spill.
Nat- i just want this to be over i want to be normal again. I dont' want to go to court i want him to plea out and i want you to be the father of the baby not that sick freak.
Kenny- look, first of all you are normal, and call Casey and tell her what you want not what everyone else wants you to do, and lastly i will be a father to this baby and love it as if it is mine ok. You know i love and i want us to be together forever ok, just breath and we will take it a day at a time. i'm hear always remember that ok. Know get some sleep yuohave a busy day for laying out in teh sun ahead of you.
Natalie- ok, I love you so much kenny.
Later when kenny was sure she was alseep he called her dad.
Kenny- Hey it me, look he have a .. issue with nat.
Bubba_Bridges
Dec 21 2007, 10:50 PM
Hi Bubba here, keep going.
angel1986
Dec 28 2007, 03:06 PM
natalie and kenny are gettind ready for the beach
Kenny-did you talk to your dad?
Nat- Yah, we agreed for me to talk to someone when i get back and Casey is going to offer 8-10 and see if he takes that.
kENNY- good. maybe he'll take it
Nat- i hope so, look thanks for calling my dad. It means alot.
Kenny- Look i love you and i want what's best for you. (he kisses her forhead).
Natalie- i love you to. know lets go to the pool.
at the pool
Emma-look who's here the lovebirds.
Kenny- emma shut-up
Ruth- kids stop it. So jump on in the pool.
Nat-ok.
After everyones is in the pool
Ruth- So nat waht are you singign for the snl at church in afew weeks?
Nat- for the christian half i am singing "Thank you" and for the non christian half i am singing "I told you so"
Emma- I "i told you so" is my fav.
Ruth- good choice, show of that great voice.
kenny- them me, nat, Keri, and Billy are singing "Good as Gone" and Arise my Love.
Ruth- Good as Gone?
Emma- cool.
Ruth- WHen is you last compatition?
Nat- 2 weeks. I'm takign my solo "crazy ex-girlfirend and are group lyrical to to Ice.
Emma- Ice is the one you"die" in right?
Nat-Laughing) Yah.(When i was dancign i did a dance to Ice and the idea behind the dance was another girl was trying to "kill me'. It was a pretty cool dance. one of my favorvites i did)
A few hours later
Kenny- so can we go to Angleos' tonight.
ruth- Sure
Nat- well that's fine with me i an goign in to shower i;m not felling so good.
Kenny- Mornign sichness.
Nat- Yah.
Another few hours pass.
Natalie-Emma can you tie my halter tie.( nat is wearign a red holter dress)
Emm-a sure.
Berry- Girls let go.
Nat- coming.
Berry- well, now that we are all here lets hit the road.
more to come in the next few days i'm not fellign so good today
angel1986
Jan 25 2008, 04:45 PM
Natalie- Those ribs were so good. I love that place.
Kenny- Yah, me to. So what movis do you want to watch?
Nat.- Oh Brother Where aet thou, i'm in the mood to laught
Kenny- me to.
After the movis is over he moves her her bed.
the next afternoon
Emma- So what are you wearing to the concert tonight?
Nat- My off the sholder lacey coral top with my blue jean shirt and my coral kitten heals. what about you?
Emma- First off love that top, as for me i am wearing my yellow dress with my black heals and black hoops with the matching chocker,
Nat- Cute.
Kenny- girls it 3 so you need to come in, remember i am just doing as i was told.
Nat(laughing) ok.
an hour later
Kenny- your mom is on the phone
Natalie-Hey, yah trying to find my shoes for tonight, yah really great, yah ok tell Casey i said thanks, yah it's like a weight lifted of me, tell day i said hey, love y'all. Bye.
Kenny- Well.
Nat-He pleaded out, 10-15 years.
Kenny- Really
Nat, yes, so it's over with. It's really over with.
Kenny(kisses her) I OVE YOU
nAT- i LOVE YOU TO.
jULIE- LET'S go, we leave in 5 seconds.
Later that night after the concert on the ride home.
Nat. _ That was the best concert ever, i love the song off the coast of Somewhere beautiful.
Kenny- Yah i kinda like that one
Emma- well, i love You save me. I cant' believe thsi vaction is almost over. Only two more days of laying out in the sun.
Nat, i know because when i get back that means i have one week to practice then i have nationals which are going to be on telivision. And that adds more stress.
Julie- Well, dont's worrie about it. You'll do great but i have to say my favort song is She thinks my trackor's sexy.
Later on while in bed.
Kenny- It's really over,
Nat- Yah it is.
Keny- Good, know go to sleep i have a suprise for you tomorrow ok.
Nat,- Ok, love you
Kenny-love you to.
iloveliv
Jan 26 2008, 06:23 PM
Angel1986, your story's fantastic!!! PLEASE update soon, Please????
angel1986
Mar 15 2008, 01:23 PM
a week later at Nationals.
Natalie- mom i need you to lace you my corset.( for her solo she is wearing a black beaded corset top, blue jeans very tight and with hole's in the knees, a black jewled gun holster, a black chocker, and a curly ponytail)
Olivia- Sure, you know you look really good. You look like a crazy ex-girlfriend(both start laughing)
Natalie- Yah i really do. Thanks for jewling the gun holster whiel i was gone.
Olivia- Ok, nat, just be yourself, smile, have fun and most of all act pissed of. Remember your crazy.
Nat.-Yah, ok, thinks mom i'll see you later.
After she has danced
Olivia- That was the best you have ever danced that.
Elliot- Yah, the was great, you looked really pissed at the end.
Kenny- Remind me not to piss you off ok.(laughing)
Nat-thanks.
Susan- Girl, you rocked it, now just sit back and wait for the results. I think your only real comation is that girl who did 'Aint no other man", and after the results change into your "Ice" outfit and you Maddie, and Becca need to run through it ok.
Leaving the compatition
Nat- i can't believe that i won first on my solo and first for "ice." This is great.
Susan- Did you read jugde nunber 4's comments, well according to her you were belivable in the dance, your abilities as a dancer are unbelievable, and you looked great. And for "ice" all of the above.
Olivia- Yah, were really proud of you. Now, lets go celabrate.
Nat-cool, but can i call Keri and see if she want's to come,
Ellot- Yah.
Olivia- Ok you pick Nat.
Nat- Lets wait till tomorrow when we are back home ok.
Elliot-Yah, that sounds good.
angel1986
Mar 21 2008, 10:28 AM
The next day back in New York
Nat- So i have to go sign papers at Casey's office?
Olivia- Yah, just saying you understand what's going on.
Nat- ok. well lets get it over with.
At the office.
Casey- (Hugs nat) Congrats on the compatition. I heard you got 2 first place finnishes.
Nat- Yah, i got a perfict score on my solo.
Casey- Is there anything you cant' do? Your sing, dance, act, adn yrou super smart.
Olivia- Yah, she can't hit a ball of a tee.
Nat- mom i was 4 ok.
Olivia- Yah, and it was at that momient i knew you were not ment to play sports.
Casey- oK, well, it's ok. I cant' sing to save my life. Know lets get this over with i need you to sign thwsi sayign you understand what's going on and that the deal of 15-20 years for you attack can't be undone and that you understand there will not a trial.
Nat- ok, Where do i sign?
Casey- Done. So how are you doing with all of this?
Nat- Well, i guess my family is really keepimg me together along with my friends and Kenny. But other then the morning sickness i guess i'm ok. I mean i have things that keep me going.
Olivia- Yah, this one's stronger then me, i dont' know if i would have done as well as you have it is was me.
Casey- Well, you know just keep your head on stright and kerp your faith because i think you faith is very importetn to you,and it keeps you together.
Nat- Ok.
Olivia- Well, Cas well go we are goign to pick up El and Don want' to see nat.
the 1-6
Don- Hey, nat, (hugs her)
Nat- Don, you squizing me.
Don- Sorry, just happy for you. Hey lets go in my office i got a little something.
Elliot- So how did it go at casey's?
Olivia- ok, i think it's really hitting her that things will never be the same. I mean she'll be 17 and have a kid and all the things my mom faced she'll face, she wont' be able to enjoy her college years hell, even her last year of high school. I'm glad she already has someone.
Elliot- look, i know everything you just said has crossed my mind but, she smart she knows when to ask for help, and i am going to do everything i can to make sure she get do all things we ddi in high school and college.
(In walks Trever Langen)
Trever- Hey, Olivia, Elliot. Look i kow you are wondering why i'm here. I just wanted you to know i am sorry about Natalie, and that his lawyer is in my practice and that if it goes to trial i'll do what i can to help you.
Olivia- Well, this is a suprise and think you but his lawyer pleaded it out. He realized he didnt' have a shot in hell at getting him off.
Trever-Good, Jenifer really, looks up to Natalie and i want her to have justice.
Nat- hey, Trever, how's Jenifer.
Trever- Good, can't wait to start her solo with you. Well, i have to go talk to Munch.
Nat- look what Don gave me, its' the new vera bradley i wanted with the matchign wallet.
Elliot- Good, well, lets go meet everyone at Taki.
Nat- Ok, don't have to tell me twice to eat.
ok here's more, i have read over it, and i believe i got all the mistakes, my college is on spring break so my brain's not really working this week. I have been very lazy this week.
Sarah1989
Mar 21 2008, 12:34 PM
That's a great story. I like it. Belive me, I make more mistakes than you
angel1986
Apr 26 2008, 10:05 PM
a few weeks later...
at the 1-6
Natalie walks in..
Nat- Hey Fin, where's dad?
Fin- Elliot's interviewing a suspect why?
Nat- Well, we were going to go grap a bite to eat with mom before my doctors appioment today.
Fin- yah, i forgot so you going to find out if it's a boy or girl.
Nat-Yah, i want to stop calling is acorn. When i found out kenny looked on the internet and said it looked like an acorn and it's kinda stuck.
Fin- Thats' kinda cute.
Elliot- Hey, Nat ready to go.
Nat- Yah, Kenny is going to meet us at Dr. Browns.
Elliot- Ok, well lets go up stairs to get Liv.
Don- Call us when you find out.
Elliot- Will do.
At the doctors office Natalie, Elliot, Kenny, and Olivia are both in the room
Nurse- Well, do you have any idea on the sex?
Nat- Yah, i got a felling it's a boy, but i dont' know.
Nurse- Well, lets see here ... It looks like your wrong, it's a girl.
Nat- Really?
Nurse- Yep. Looks good. (She leaves)
Nat- Oh my God, this so..i can't say i'm speachless, in a good way.
Kenny- Well thats a first.
Elliot- Yep
Olivia- All i care about it she healthy, and I just want you happy.
Nat- I am happy. Know i have to call Susan and Keri.
Olivia- I'll call Casey.
Elliot- Well, i have to call Don.
Later on that night at Keri's house
Keri- So any names yet?
Nat- Yah, Chloe Blair.
Keri- I like Chloe, and Blair is you moms middle name. Cool.
Nat- Yah, i just have always liked Chloe and after everything moms done it just seems right.
Keri-Yah, i see where your coming from. So tomorrow we are going shopping for you some cute new clothes and baby stuff.
Nat- i can't wait...crap danm she just kicked the crap out of me.
Keri- You ok..
Nat- Yah, just caught me by suprise. Well, it's like midnight so i am going to go to sleep. I'm been really tired lately.
Keri- Cool, i'm tired to. See you in the morning. (Nat goes into the guest room).
angel1986
May 9 2008, 01:08 PM
At the mall...
Keri- So where to first.
Nat- Lets go to motherhood first. I need shorts.
Keri- Cool.
At Motherhood
Nat.- So what do you think fo this dress,(it's a lavender and brown empire dress with a lavender jacket)
Keri- Cuit. You could were it at the SNL, tommorow night, when we sing.
Nat- so this dress, two denim shorts and one pair of black. And there all on sale.
Keri- Yep, now at New york and Company my sister said they have some cool tops that are lose fitting we cn try there.
Nat- Ok, I sure hope we dont' see Nikki here, i think if i saw her i'd knock the crap out of her.
Keri- me two. Can you believe her, mom said if she keeps calling me then i have to change my cell number.
Nat- me to, dad said that if seh calls or texts me on more time mine's changeing.
Keri- Does your dad know the whole story, about..
Nat.- no, but mom does. Dad would freak out.
Keri- i know, all my parents know is that we caught her making out with my ex, and that's it. They don;t know about the party.
Nat- moms' cool with the party but dad would be so pissed. I was so drunk that night.
a few hours later...
Keri- Yah, ok, hold on, Nat Billy wants to know if we want' to meet then at church at 7 to practice and then go see a late movie with Kenny, Cheif, Ryan, Lindsey and Courtney.
Nat- Yah.
Keri- ok see you then. Ok it's 5 know so we need to leave in like an hour.
At practice..
Nat- Ok i cant' make you my mind,so i'll sing both and you tell me the one i'm better at.
Lindsay- Cool.
Natalit sang "You won't find this" and " I told you so"
NAT- Well?
Everyone- i told you so.
nat ok, lets do Good as Gone once more then we can go see Maid of Honer.
Kenny- What?
Lindsey- Hey last time we saw a movie as a group you boys picked that stupid one miss call. It's are turn now!!
angel1986
May 30 2008, 04:19 PM
A mounth later... at the one six
Natalie- Hey Fin where's dad?
Fin- in Don's office. Why?
Nat- I was just goign to take a nap in the crib inbetween school and work.
Fin- Yah it's cool. So how is college going?
Nat.- ok i guess, since ist's summer i don't have to be full time so i am taking math and english. I want ot get them out of the way before Chloe get's here. I'm glad i decided to do joint emrollmentfor my senior year.
Fin- Well i'm happy for you now go sleep ok. What time do i need to get you up.
Nat.- 1:30 ISH.
a while later...
Elliot- Nat, get up it's 1:30.
Nat- ok, i'm up.
Elliot- Ok, look remember to take it easy know ok, don't over work yourself. So which job are you off to.
Nat- Well, i'm recording a demo at 2 then at 4 i have jennys' solo, Kate and Keelys' duet then i have my solo. So i'll be home at like 7 no later them 7:30.
Elliot-ok lust go to sleep early tonight please.
Nat- Ok.
A few hours later...
Susan- So how did it go today with the recording.
Nat- Good. I recorded a song called "21".
Susan- Cool. Ok today i just want to review what we have learned so far for "Call me when your sober" and get you home early ok.
Nat: Cool.
Susan- Just remember its' sharp, yet graceful.
Nat- OK.
At home.
Nat- Hey mom i'm home.
Olivia- Your early, it's 6:45
Nat-Yah, Susan just wanted me to review what we've learned so far and let me go home so i could rest.
Olivia- Any homework?
Nat- i already did my math and i just have to take a guiz on blackbroad. Only two more weeks to go.
Olivia- Nat, why did you really want to do joint enrollment?
Nat-The sooner i can graduate the sooner i can support me and Chloe, and...
Olivia- Look you dont' have to rush it ok, i ment when i said we would do whatever we had to so you can have a normal senior year and college experince. I love the fact you want to reach you goal of being a teacher but, don't risk you well-being or Chloe's ok. Just rest and take it easy.
Nat- i know, and after these next two week i have a mounth off and i wont' be able to do demos much longer because it's heard to control my breathing while i sing and i'm almost six mounths. look i know i need to take it easy an i will, next quarter will be alot less srtessful because i am taking two online classes and one one campus plus i'll only be teaching dance two nights a week for three hours each night. Then on January 3 CHloe will be here, plus i'm done with school on Dec. 10.
Olivia- Ok, just take it easy ok. Know go take a hot bath and then eat some dinner and let's watch a Gray's re-run. Dad it on a case, Cole is at Chase's and Rachel is at MaKenna's for the night.
Nat- Ok, i will, besides i need my McDreamy fix.
angel1986
Jun 6 2008, 02:04 PM
Time had past very fast for everyone before they know it is was December.
Olivia- Nat,when is your last exam?
Natalie- Today at 10am. And it's math 193.
Elliot- Ok, well good luck. I'll see you later i have court today.
Nat- Bye Dad, see you later.
Olivia- Well, if you can stop by after and we can have lunch, i text you if i catch case. oK.
Nat- Yah, that cool, well i need to go so i'll see you later.
Later that day at lunch..
Nat.- Hey Munch, where's mom?
Munch- On a case with Fin, Why?
Nat- Well, i was going to meet mom for lunch but she caught a case so i though i could take a nap in the crib. I've been so tired the past few day's.
Munch- Yah, you sleep as long as you want ok.
Nat- Thanks. Munch.
A few hours later Munch goes to cheek on Nat. upstairs.
Munch- Hey, Nat where are you?
Nat-In the bath room my water broke.
Munch- This better not be a joke.
Nat- It's no joke call Mom and Dad.
Munch- (Dialing both Olivia and Elliot) crap. Cant' get either one.
Nat.-SO well keep calling and take me to the hospital.
In the car
Munch- Elliot, dang man what took you so long to answer. Yah, well I've got Nat with me she went in to labor, Long story wanted to take a nap. Ok, well get your butt to the hopsital, ok. Call Liv, to she's not answering either. Bye.
Nat- well, i called Kenny and will net us there in a while going to pick up Keri.
Munch- Well, Dads' on his way and he is calling Liv.
Nat- (Laughing) Just my luck to go into labor and your the only one around.
Munch- Well, trust me i've known you since your were two and thought of you like a daughter but , trust me this is not how i visisioned it either.
Nat- Great minds think alike.
At the hospital a few hours later...
Nat- Ok, Dad i love you but i only want mom, and Kenny inhere ok?
Elliot- I understand 100 percent. (Kisses her forhead) Gool luck ok.
Nat- Thanks Dad.
Elliot leaves.
John- How is she?
Elliot- Good, ready to push so it won't be long. I can;t beleive this is happaning you now. Not how i wanted this to be for her.
John- Me either, i mean, she like a daughter to me, but she's strong,and she's going to be fine as long as we all back her up.
Elliot- I know it's just i think she's doing ok then last week, i came home and found her alseep on the sofa and when i touched her sholder to wake her up she flinched saying dont' touch me. What if Chole looks like him, can she deal with it.
Jonh- Look a reaction like that is normal,thank about it it's been almost a year,so there are bound to be set backs like that, but it'll be awhile before she is back to the old Natalie you know. It' only been 8 months give or take.
Olivia- Chole Blair 6 lb's and 5 oz's and 20 inches long. Head full of Blond hair like Rachel.
Elliot- When can we see her?
Olivia- NOW.
In Natalie's room
Nat- Hold her dad.
Elliot-- Hey Chloe i'm your grandpa.
Olivia- he's already wrap around her finger.
Kenny- and your not?
Olivia- Yah. so.
Natalie- She is going to be so spoiled.
Kenny- Danm right.
Olivia- Get some sleep ok, we've got Chloe.
Nat- Good Idea.