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funch24
hey dudes and dudettes well this lovely93 i just changed my sn but I made this story and in this story there is another detective named NIcole BUT SHE DOESNT DISTURB ELL OR LIV wat sooooo ever! the ending is kind of shipper. Nicole is a new cop and she is the youngest one there.

Next week when a detective gets shot, just a distraction for the other detectives not to notice that the shooter was part of an organization which stalks woman and then kidnaps them, who will be there next victim??

2 min. speech
Man: Hello, I there an Elliot stabler here?
Front desk lady: yes down the hall and make a left.
Man: Thank you
The man walks down and sees the squad laughing and talking. Nicole sees the mysterious man take a gun out of his pocket and starts to run.
Nicole: ELLIOT!
Elliot: what?
The man shoots twice and Nicole jumps in front of it. Then Elliot just sits there shocked while Cragen calls a bus and Fin, Munch, and Olivia put their guns up.
Olivia: put your gun down and hands on your head.
Cragen: I will check her pulse (he checks her neck), she has a small pulse.
The man puts the gun down and just sits there while Munch arrests him.
Olivia: ELLIOT!!
Elliot: she jumped for me!
Fin: here is the bus…
The men run in and take Nicole and then rush out, another police officer takes the mysterious man.
Munch: I will ride with her.
Cragen: okay go, did you guys see the man
Fin: no
Elliot: I should have turned around or stopped her or this is my fault.
Olivia: no its not, you couldn’t of done anything Elliot, she wanted to save you.
Cragen: Elliot do you want to take some time off?
Elliot: I-I am going to go to my house.
Cragen: okay… Olivia go to the front desk
Olivia goes
Olivia: HI I need to know who was the man who came in and asked for detective stabler.
Lady: yes his name was Matthew Rifer.
Olivia: thank you
Olivia goes back…
Olivia: his name was Matthew Rifer.
At the hospital
Doctor: Hello are you here for Nicole Roday?
Munch: yes, how is she?
Doctor: she is fine; she will only be here for two days at least. Both bullets hit here but nothing serious they didn’t go in that far.
Munch: can I see her?
Doctor: yea
Munch: goes into Nicole’s room
Munch: how are you doing?
Nicole: great
Munch: why did you jump in front of that bullet?
Nicole: I didn’t want Elliot to get hurt.
Munch: you are a good person, Nicole.
Nicole: thank you, how is Elliot?
Munch: he went home
Munch’s phone starts to ring
Munch: Munch? OK I will be right there. Bye.
Munch: that was the cap, he needs me, I will see ya later bye.
Nicole: Bye.
Station house
Olivia: hey how is she?
Munch: fine; who is the guy that tried to shoot Elliot?
Olivia: his name was Matthew Rifer.
Munch: do we know anything else bout him/
Fin: yea he lives in an apartment in Brooklyn.
Cragen: yes and bout that I want all 3 of you to go.
Olivia: okay
At his apartment
Olivia: okay, Munch take the left, Fin right and I will do right here.
Both: okay
Fin: hey guys look!
Olivia: what?
Fin this card it says “LTGW” what do you think that stands for?
Olivia: I don’t know?
Munch: Liv, Fin look!
Olivia: huh… Damn!
Fin: what is it?
Olivia: It is a list of his buddies; did anyone check his room yet?
Fin: I will go do it.
Fin goes in the room.
Fin: OLIVIA, MUNCH!!!!!!!
Olivia: what the hell is it?
Munch: look, its Nicole.
Olivia: everywhere, I am going to call Elliot. Hey, I need you to go to the hospital were Nicole is… the guy who shot her is stalking her.
Hospital
Elliot: HI I need to go Nicole Roday room
Nurse: I am sorry but a man checked her out bout 2 hours saying he wanted to switch hospitals because this one was too far.
Elliot gets his cell phone out and calls Olivia
Elliot: Hey a man named Michael Rifer checked her out. OK I will see you there.
Station house
Cragen: okay so what do we know?
Elliot: Matthew’s brother Michael kidnapped her and,
Then Elliot’s phone rings
Elliot: Stabler? Okay thank you, bye.
Elliot: Ahmm… “LTGW” means loving the Good Woman and it means you stalk, kidnap, and kill a good woman such as-
Munch: Nicole
Elliot: exactly
Then a fax comes in…
Cragen:
If any of you want to see your sweet Nicole again you will come to the Queens Junkyard, see ya there
Michael
Munch: were going
Cragen: I know lets go
The junkyard
They see Nicole hanging by a rope
Michael: Hello I am very glad you guys are here to join us, it got a little lonely, just the 2 of us.
Fin: you sick pervert give us Nicole!!!
Michael: What if I say no and I will shoot her again.
Michael shots the rope so that she falls to the ground and shoots her.
Elliot shoots him.
Olivia: God dam nit!!! Call a bus she barely has a pulse!
Munch: okay
Cragen: we wont tell them bout this one.
Elliot: is she- I didn’t mean- he shot her!!!
Cragen- we know
Fin: here is the bus
Elliot: I am going to ride with her.
Cragen: okay
Hospital
Doctor- this bullet was a little worse she will only need 3 days, all it did was made her need some stitches but nothing serious.
Elliot: Can I just see her/
Doctor: go ahead
Elliot walks in the room
Elliot: you know, I never got to thank you…
Nicole: for what/
Elliot: for jumping for me when that bullet came. Actually both bullets.
Nicole: well, it’s just that I didn’t want you to get hurt, especially because you have people in your life. You have the captain, Fin, Munch, your kids, and…Olivia.
Elliot: thank you, but you have us too?
Nicole: yea but not really, I have lost everything, parents, brothers, sisters, step parents, and I couldn’t risk any of you guys leaving my life, and well I don’t have someone special or some one who means so much to me.
Elliot: what do you mean/
Nicole: you have your kids, I never had kids. You have AMAZING friends, no one has ever liked me, and you have Olivia, I have never had someone so close to me, or someone that cared for me the same way I card for them, but you do. And it is Olivia.
Executive producer
Dick Wolf
funch24
tell me wat u think i was just really bored
kiana_is_queen
Wow.This is a great story.Do you think I could add on some too?
funch24
if u want to, that would be cool
kiana_is_queen
Nicole's Hospital room

Elliot:*speechless*H-h-how did you know?

Nicole:*laughs*Even though I haven't been here long,I have sensed sexual tension in the air between you and Olivia.You love her a lot don't you?

Elliot:Yeah.Have for a long time.I've always wanted to tell her but I always get nervous.It's like being in high school all over again.

Nicole:*thinking*Hmmmm...I could always play matchmaker for the both of them.I know Olivia's madly in love with Elliot but she will never admit it.She values their partnership too much.

Elliot:Earth to Nicole.Are you there?

Nicole:Huh?What?Yeah I'm here.Just daydreaming.

Elliot:About?

Nicole:When I can get back on coffee rush.

Elliot:

Olivia walks in.Elliot blushes but it fades away before Olivia could see it.Nicole saw it though.

Elliot:Umm...I think I'm gonna go now.See ya later Nicole.Bye Olivia.

Olivia:Bye El.Hey Nicole.How ya feelin?

Nicole:I'm fine.Olivia,do you love Elliot?

Olivia:*nervous*Uhhh...Why?

Nicole:Oh nothing.Just wondering.*thinking*She does.

Olivia:Fine.Just between me and you I do.*sighs*He problably doesn't feel the same way about me though.

Nicole:You never know.He just might.

Olivia:*scoffs*Yeah right.Why would he want me?I can't give him what other women can.

Nicole:Olivia.You're being too hard on yourself.Now if you like him just tell him.If you can't I'll be your coach to help you tell him.And when you do,if you want,I can be right there with you for support.

Olivia: You would do that for me?

Nicole:Sure.Now get outta here.I want some sleep.

Olivia:Okay.Bye Nicole.And Nicole?

Nicole:Yeah?

Olivia:Thanks.

Executive Producer
Dick wolf
kiana_is_queen
Hope everyone likes this!
n_luv_wit_svu
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. I like Nicole. Great job you guys. This is a really good story. Keep it up.
svu_fan_1
hey i really really love your story i wish i could write like that
funch24
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hey i really really love your story i wish i could write like that



any one can do anything so just try..but first i am gonna add on then u can
funch24
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Nicole's Hospital room

Elliot:*speechless*H-h-how did you know?

Nicole:*laughs*Even though I haven't been here long,I have sensed sexual tension in the air between you and Olivia.You love her a lot don't you?

Elliot:Yeah.Have for a long time.I've always wanted to tell her but I always get nervous.It's like being in high school all over again.

Nicole:*thinking*Hmmmm...I could always play matchmaker for the both of them.I know Olivia's madly in love with Elliot but she will never admit it.She values their partnership too much.

Elliot:Earth to Nicole.Are you there?

Nicole:Huh?What?Yeah I'm here.Just daydreaming.

Elliot:About?

Nicole:When I can get back on coffee rush.

Elliot:

Olivia walks in.Elliot blushes but it fades away before Olivia could see it.Nicole saw it though.

Elliot:Umm...I think I'm gonna go now.See ya later Nicole.Bye Olivia.

Olivia:Bye El.Hey Nicole.How ya feelin?

Nicole:I'm fine.Olivia,do you love Elliot?

Olivia:*nervous*Uhhh...Why?

Nicole:Oh nothing.Just wondering.*thinking*She does.

Olivia:Fine.Just between me and you I do.*sighs*He problably doesn't feel the same way about me though.

Nicole:You never know.He just might.

Olivia:*scoffs*Yeah right.Why would he want me?I can't give him what other women can.

Nicole:Olivia.You're being too hard on yourself.Now if you like him just tell him.If you can't I'll be your coach to help you tell him.And when you do,if you want,I can be right there with you for support.

Olivia: You would do that for me?

Nicole:Sure.Now get outta here.I want some sleep.

Olivia:Okay.Bye Nicole.And Nicole?

Nicole:Yeah?

Olivia:Thanks.

Executive Producer
Dick wolf



2days later at the sation house
cragen: ok guys nicole wont be here for a couple of days does anyine have any questions?
nicole: yea i do(nicole walks in) where am i going??
cragen: ok..nvm then, everyone just like do apper work or something i dont really care
olivia: sweet
nicole goes to her desk withc is attached to livs and ells and past notes she passes liv a note sayin "olivia, how much do u like elliot" and olivia rites back "alot!" then she passes ell a note syain "how much do u like olivia elliot" and he rite " i love her"then after eadin thisshe passes the note that she rte with elliot to liv and the one with liv to elliot afetr she sees them both read it she says...
nicole: comin captain
cragen: i didnt call u;
nicole: i said coming captain
......
funch24
hope u like
kiana_is_queen
Great job funch!I have 2 rite tomorrow morning b 4 skewl because in less then 10 minuts im goin 2 get off here and watch The Girls Next Door
funch24
ok koolio
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