Latoya
Jul 10 2005, 02:16 AM
Okay the big one i'm working on is called With this Ring?
In the story is the wedding of Dana and Johnny. It has an ending you will not forget. It all starts with Johnny touching her and first seeing a flash of there wedding that he knows nothing about followed by a flash of her funeral which happens days after the wedding. It takes place season 2 right after the storm.
the next one is called The New Neighbor
Johnny has a new neighbor she's young a kid actually and she seems to be stalking him, but when she comes over and he touches her he doesn't get a read on her, he gets nothing, but when she comes in his house she tells him things about him becasue she got it from him, just one touch is all it took. She helps him comes to terms on a lot of stuff. this takes place right after playing god.
And the final one i'm working on is Mental Case. Johnny was out of town and was mugged and left for dead in an alley. He can't recall the last couple of days but somehow he's in a mental institution. He was mugged so he had no ID on him and he tries to explain to people who he is but no one believes him. It's all about the people he meets in the asylum including someone who claims to be HIM also a hidden story of the dealing going on in he asylum.
so guys tell me would you read this?
Ruralstar
Jul 10 2005, 07:23 AM
They all sound like interesting premises. I'm working on something similar to the last one actually. All you can do is post and see Good luck
KYDZFan
Jul 10 2005, 12:01 PM
Wow! They all sound really interesting!
DZC
Jul 10 2005, 12:34 PM
why dont you post it on a fanfic site and give us the link?
Latoya
Jul 10 2005, 12:51 PM
oh i plan to i'll probably post the rough drafts on the old board so i can see if anyone is liking but i'm a member of fanfiction.net and on the sixteenth i can start posting again. have any of you been there they have some great dead zone fanfic. oh and adultfanfiction.net has a great deadzone fan fic too.
Scifiroots
Jul 10 2005, 09:32 PM
fanfiction.net...... *shifty eyes* Sorry to say I have some big issues with the place. I can't remember the last time I went near the place, way over a year, that's for sure. aff.net I have a little more respect for since I watched it start up and it started off great. I hear its quality of stuff has gone down considerably, though. *sighs*
October
Jul 19 2005, 12:38 AM
I like the second and third, just because I have issues with Johnny romance fics, or Johnny/Dana fics.
I love fanfiction.net, and have two DZ screen plays there. The reviews you get depends on what sections you write in. For example, if you write Lord of the Rings, be prepared for tough critizism(as I've learned the hard way) and for Lost, be prepared for demands for romance chapters.
brattytxn
Jul 19 2005, 12:53 AM
They sound great, but I hope you post the completed ones first. I hate waiting.
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