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QUOTE (Austinisawesome @ Jun 5 2009, 02:38 AM)
new stuff added to the script!
Come check it out!
I'll work on updating it everyday as much as i can
for now enjoy!!
I can't tell what part you altered. Are you following the other folks' additions too?
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ May 20 2009, 12:27 AM)
Shawn is sitting in Jules desk drinking his pineapple smoothy. Then all of a sudden Jules and Gus practically run in and Lassie and Abigail walk in a few yards behind.
Jules: Shawn, thank gos your ok
Shawn stands up and Gus hugs him and talks to him
Gus: I cant believe your ok
Shawn: Thats right stay positive
Gus: I'm glad your still alive
Shawn: Me two
Gus: I dont know what I would have done without you. I'm gonna stop hugging you now before it gets really awkward.
Shawn: Sounds good buddy
Abby: My turn, Hi Shawny
They hug
Shawn: Hi Abby
Abby: We have a lot to talk about
Shawn: What, Why?
Abby stops hugging Shawn and starts walking away
Abby: You'll see, i'll call you
Lassie: Don't worry I have three black&whites guarding her house. You need to be debreifed.
Shawn: Thanks for showing the love Lassie!
Lassie: I'll go set it up
Gus: I'm gonna take this pudding pop and go help Lassiter.
Shawn: Bye
Jules: I guess its my turn
Shawn and Jules hug
Shawn: You are the person I asked to see.
Jules: That's sweet Shawn,.........SO how did you get out
Shawn[still hugging]: Jules, I'd rather not I just want to stay here and now talk to you.
Jules: Ok
Shawn:Ok, besides I have to save something for Lassie.
Jules: I like this.
Shawn: Me too.
They reluctanly stop hugging
Shawn: I have to go, before Lassie kilss Gus.
Jules: Ok I'll talk to you after
Shawn[waving]: Bye, see u then.
Jules: What about Abby?
Shawn:I have a feeling she wants to break up.
Jules: How do u know?
Shawn: She sent me a text saying were threw
Jules: Your ok
Shawn: I'm great
Hi. I'm new here. i really like ur story. i was at the edge of my seat while i was reading it. i'm very inpressed by ur creativity. Keep up the good work.
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QUOTE (gooie_choclatechip_cookie5 @ Jun 10 2009, 08:50 PM)
snarkypscyhicrules are you going 2 continue your version cause i really like it!!!
Thanks, I wasn't but because of all the positive response I think that I shall!
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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Picking up where I left off as requested I'll have more soon
[Shawn walks into the debreifing room while Jules smiles and sips the pineapple smoothie that she figures is undoubtly Shawn's at her desk wating for Shawn to come out and see what happens]
Lassiter: Finally Spencer, where have you been?
[Shawn opens his mouth to speak, actually make a sly remark]
Gus[cuts in]: with Juliet
[Shawn and Lassiter look over at Gus both puzzled Shawn more shocked that he was right] [Gus smirking slightly and liking his pudding pop]
Shawn: What?
Gus: Dude, its SO obvious! You only look that happy, and some how more enthused and hyper when you just were either with Juliet, talking to Juliet, talking about Juliet, hearing someone talk about her, see her or somehow made progress with her liking you. Which by the way she alreadly tottaly does.
Shawn[now with his mouth open and totally beyond shocked]: What?
Lassiter smirking in the corner
Lassiter: It's true, but we need to debrief you, so come on!
Shawn: For once I thank you! For being yoursel...... Wait did you just say it's true? Who are you and what have you done with the Lassie I've grown to know and annoy?
Lassiter[saying this completely reluctantly]: Fine, I'll explain this AFTER we debreif you.
Shawn[now fully pouting]: Lassie its like you show a starving, rabid monkey a banana than give it a dead fish. It's just cruel.
Gus: I disagree with the whole metahpor.......
Shawn[cuts in]:analogie
Gus: Whatever, Shawn grow up, go through debreifing then talk to Lassie....Wait you want to know now because you know Jules is waiting This just gets better!
Shawn: I was staying at JUles, I was serving Abby Mac'n'Cheese
Lassie buts in
Lassie: What about Abby?
Shawn:WE broke up. irrelevant anyway then a bright light flashed I was stuffed in a car tied up, said something to the Executioner, just trying to get him to let me go.
Lassie: Ok go on.
Shawn[talking as fast as possible]: Went through some seriously disturbing games, then at the end right befrore the water killed me, I mean drowned me which would have resulted in death, I was stabbed with another syringe passed out and woke up groggy in the SBPD then I got a message from the xecutioner on this phone he gave me[he takes it out and Lassie grabs it] saying he'll be back, Who says it has to be for me say hello to Gus, Lassiter, Abigail, [his voice slows down and volume goes to a whisper] and Jules.[Everthing flashes through his mind untill he sees the smoothie cup, then whispers no and take off running down towards Jules desk]
[Right at that moment Juliet passes out, drops the smoothie cup and is dragged away]
Comercial
Thats all I have right now. Hope you like it!
This post has been edited by SnarkyPsychicRules: Jun 12 2009, 12:41 AM
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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[Shawn is looking down at the spilt smoothie with a tear almost in his eye and Gus walks up somewhat aggrivated]
Gus: Shawn, Juliet just got taken away by the executioner and your tearing up over a spilt smoothie......................wait your tearing up? This isn't about the smoothie is it?
Shawn: Great job Sherlock, you cracked the case [now with one tear going down his cheeck]
Gus: God, you really care about her, don't you.
Shawn: Gus, she's not just the girl I wanted to date once and forget about anymore, its been 3 years of being her freind, working with her, having fun, and being there for her. God Gus if anything happened to her
Gus: This is the first time I've ever heard you care so much for one girl, probably even the first time you have cared that much for a girl.
Shawn: Yeah
Gus: Don't worry Shawn, we'll get her before anything happens and you can have your girl.
[Gus smiles and Shawn looks up and smiles]
Gus: I mean she's a cop! And you made it out there is no way she can't
Shawn: You made a dig at me, I'm so proud I might cry
Gus: You already are
Shawn: Whatever at least I didn't cry at bolt!
Gus: He was lost Shawn, it was a tearjerker.
Shawn: Come on we have to find Jules![he walks away] Come on!
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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Cute! Keep it comin' ya'll!!!
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ Jun 12 2009, 08:02 PM)
[Shawn is looking down at the spilt smoothie with a tear almost in his eye and Gus walks up somewhat aggrivated]
Gus: Shawn, Juliet just got taken away by the executioner and your tearing up over a spilt smoothie......................wait your tearing up? This isn't about the smoothie is it?
Shawn: Great job Sherlock, you cracked the case [now with one tear going down his cheeck]
Gus: God, you really care about her, don't you.
Shawn: Gus, she's not just the girl I wanted to date once and forget about anymore, its been 3 years of being her freind, working with her, having fun, and being there for her. God Gus if anything happened to her
Gus: This is the first time I've ever heard you care so much for one girl, probably even the first time you have cared that much for a girl.
Shawn: Yeah
Gus: Don't worry Shawn, we'll get her before anything happens and you can have your girl.
[Gus smiles and Shawn looks up and smiles]
Gus: I mean she's a cop! And you made it out there is no way she can't
Shawn: You made a dig at me, I'm so proud I might cry
Gus: You already are
Shawn: Whatever at least I didn't cry at bolt!
Gus: He was lost Shawn, it was a tearjerker.
Shawn: Come on we have to find Jules![he walks away] Come on!
ok, love it, but they need to be longer, for the sake of my sanity!!!
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QUOTE (gooie_choclatechip_cookie5 @ Jun 12 2009, 07:14 PM)
ok, love it, but they need to be longer, for the sake of my sanity!!!
Ok but I wont be able to post for a couple of days because I'm going on a roadtrip to Washington, but when I get there I will start posting again
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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QUOTE (Austinisawesome @ Jun 28 2009, 07:42 PM)
OKay so check it.
EVERYONE read my post at the topd of the first page, It's my script, It's going to be completed within the coming months.
I added a bunch of new scenes and things to the storyline to help better fit it in with the episode.
I'd love your opinion on it, and especially would like to know if I should send this into USA or not.
Anyways, thanks for reading, and have a great week!
love, sir jingleinmypants haha (aka austinisawesome)
You should send it no matter what. Go for it!
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i LOVE it!!!! continue ASAP! but y didn't Shawn get knocked out when he drank the mouthwatering-ly delish pineapple smoothie? its just a detail, stuf like that kinda bugs me, anyway, its awesome!
Psych Episode: Gus, there’s a dead guy on the floor!, Super funny and fan made! This ones got good ideas for season 4
Jun 5 2009, 02:38 AM
