Psych Episode: Gus, there’s a dead guy on the floor!, Super funny and fan made! This ones got good ideas for season 4 Options

[Austinisawesome]

Psych Episode: Gus, there’s a dead guy on the floor!

(Opening scene)

Shawn and Gus just got back from a coffee run, and are walking towards there office.

Shawn: Gus, The obvious reason I don’t like conditioner is it leaves my hair with no flare whatsoever, it makes it all shiny and smooth, but where is the substance? The passion? (Opens door)

Gus: I don’t know what you’re talking about Shawn, it reduces the wear on your hair over time, gives it a more noticeable appearance, and why are we even talking about this now?

Shawn: I don’t know…

Better call the chief, make sure we aren’t sent in tomorrow. Today’s my birthday and it’s time to part-ay! Holla!

Gus: Just don’t bring in those exotic dancers like you did last year, you know, I’m still positive one of them was a guy!

Shawn: Relax, I checked with the business that runs it, there aren’t any guys there…anymore.

Gus: What do you mean…anymore?

Shawn: Oh look, Marley and me is on tonight. Gus, you should go soo DVR this. Spoiler, Marley dies in the end.

Gus: You didn’t answer my question. What about the…

AND THEN… (Both stare in shock at a dead body on the floor!)

Shawn: Guuuusss, is he dead?

Gus: I’m too afraid to check.

He’s not moving…

Shawn: Well of course not, he’s probably just resting from a long day…

Gus: On our kitchen floor? In the middle of the afternoon?

Then why is his skin all white?

Shawn: Probably because he’s not soaking in enough sun, you know, I hear a lot of Americans have decided to go albino these days.

Gus: Then how do you explain the blood on his shirt?

Shawn: There’s blood on his waa???

Both: EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKK!

(Shawn and Gus run to the car)

Gus: I told you. I told you he was dead! (Gus starts breathing insanely fast and takes out an inhaler so he can breathe), we’ve got a dead body on our kitchen floor, been sitting there for who knows how long, with our fingerprints all over the doors and windows, how are we going to explain this to the police?

Shawn: When did you start using an inhaler? And relax, will just tell them we went out for coffee, came back, saw the body, and screamed like little girls til’ we wet ourselves in a moment of panic.

Gus: Very funny, at least I’m not the one who spilled coffee all over his 100 dollar shirt.

Shawn: It was 5 dollars at TJ max. But that’s beside the point; I need to have a look at the body.

Gus: Oh no, I’m not going back in there. Looking at a dead body is bad luck, it’s cursed Shawn.

Shawn: Gus it’s not an “it”, it’s a he….or at least he was until some punk bashed his head open on our kitchen counter. And for the last time, a body can’t be cursed, sure it can be burned and beaten, possibly fired at, zipped up in a body bag, but it’s still a person no doubt.

Gus: Nuhhh uh, I am NOT going in there.

Shawn: Fine, be that way. But I’m sure the guy who did this is probably still around here somewhere, so if you wanna play victim, go right ahead.

(Gus runs in behind him)

Gus: What now?

Shawn: I don’t know (Shawn stares at the body) there’s something about his shirt, it fits so nicely with those jeans, and the haircut is just so, sheik. This guy was a total wanna-be ladies man.

(Shawn notices something)

Look there.

Gus: Where?

Shawn: There, in his jean pocket.

(Shawn pulls something out of it)

It’s a note.

Shawn reads “You found this letter, because today, could be your last chance, to live and pay, follow my instructions, and do them right, and when tomorrow comes, I just might, spare your life”. – The Executioner

Shawn: What? Another Ying Yang wanna be killer?

Gus: No, this one is different, it’s like he wants us to know it’s a game.
There are no stakes, only rules.

Shawn: Yes one rule, live and play, or lose and die.

(Theme song)

Scene 2: At the scene of the crime.

(Outside the office in the parking lot)

Lassiter: Okay, so tell us what happened?

Shawn: Would you like the edited version, or the extended cut with deleted scenes and outtakes?

Gus: What Shawn’s trying to say is, we left the office around 11:30 to go out for some coffee,(Jules: Right.) when we came back at 11:45, there the was the body on our kitchen floor, which I won’t be cooking in now for a month, if ever.

Lassiter: And thisss, just happened? No suspicious activity in the area during this time?

Shawn: Look, Lassie pants, its simple, we came in, saw the body laying there on the floor, like a helpless little baby bird, came out, and called the police.

Jules: And you guys didn’t do anything to the body? Is that correct?

Shawn: Yes, that’s correct. Why do you always have to assume things Jules? Do I look like the kinda guy who’d do things to a dead body?
……
Okay, let me rephrase that, do I sound like I’d do something like that?

Jules: No, I guess not.

Lassiter: Good, now it’s time to take them in for further questioning.

Jules: What? Why?

Lassiter: Look, O’Hara. Spencer’s been a huge thorn in my side since he started helping the department 4 years ago. Look at this as my reward to him. (Looks sharply at Spencer)

Shawn: (Shawn whispers to Gus) why is Lassie looking at me that way?

Gus: Could be because were his top suspects in a murder investigation.

Shawn: What? That’s insane?

Lassiter: Well, until further evidence is shown proving you’re “supposed” innocence, you’re coming with us.

Shawn: Jules, seriously?

Jules: Afraid so…

Shawn: Fine, but I’m riding shotgun.

Lassiter: Oh no you don’t, your riding in the back, where all the other low lives go.

Shawn: Can’t we compromise? Trade seats halfway? Maybe even stop for food?
You know, I hear this place called taco casa has a special on there famous nachos, comes with this dipping sauce that tastes delicious with…

Lassiter: Will you please shut up? Cuff em’ O’Hara!

Jules: Sorry Gus…

Gus: It’s alright; I know you didn’t mean to wrongly accuse us of 1st degree murder.

Lassiter: Spencer, I’ve wanted to do this a long time.

Shawn: Can you please have Jules do it? I’ve always wanted to know what it would feel like to be cuffed by those sweet, soft, innocent looking hands…

(Lassie shoves Shawn into the car rather roughly)

Lassie: Alright, that’s enough out of you. Both of you. (Stares at Gus)

(Shawn and Gus talk in the back of the car)

Shawn: What is Lassies problem today?

I mean look, his hairs looks messed up, he’s got little lassies standing up in the back of his neck, and (stares at coffee cup) he ordered decaf with no cream today!

Gus: Yeah, something’s up. And I think I know what it is.

Shawn: What? What is it?

Gus: Shawn, for once, I’m not telling you what it is.

Shawn: C’mon Gus, you know I still have those Spiderman pajamas you wore back in 7th grade; I can sell them on Ebay for half the price without you ever noticing a thing.

Gus: You wouldn’t!

Shawn: Oh yes, oh yes I would!

Gus: That’s pretty low, threatening me Shawn.

Shawn: It’s not a threat; it’s a special request with underlying and seemingly methodical circumstances (a la you telling me what lassies big secret is!).

Gus: If I told you, I’d have to kill you.

Shawn: Oh right, and why is that?

Gus: Because that way lassie wouldn’t get to me if I kill you first.

Shawn: Oh pish posh, I’ll find another way to obtain this information somehow… (Sees McNab)

Shawn: HEY MCNAB!

Buzz: Yes?

Shawn: What’s up with lassie today? He seems to have woken up on the wrong side of his mother’s bed, probably because his morning coffee smells like a caveman prepared it.

Buzz: Oh, how did you know?

Shawn: Knowww what? That lassie takes sewing lessons on the weekends from old ladies in silver gowns? Yes, I believe so.

Buzz: No, not that.

(Buzz moves in closer)

Buzz: Lassiter moved in with his parents about two weeks ago, and he’s keeping very hush hush about the whole thing.

Shawn: Hush hush? Gus, why didn’t you tell me about this when you found out?

Gus: Juliet made me pinky swear not to tell you Shawn, you never back off from a pinky swear! Ever! That’s like code rule number 1.

Shawn: Well whatever. We need to figure out how to use this information to our advantage…

Gus: We? Umm no, your in this all by yourself Shawn. I’m out.

Shawn: Well technically, your still in the police car, so out really doesn’t make sense.

Unless you escaped, but then that would mean being chased by the cops until your pants fell between your ankles, how embarrassing…

Gus: It was a figure of speech.

Shawn: Right, I knew that.

Gosh…what’s taking lassie and them so long? After all, it’s just a body.

Lassiter: Back away from the building! I repeat back away from the building! There’s a bomb inside, I repeat a bomb inside! All units back away from the…

EXPLOSION!!!!!!!!!!


Gus: Did you see that?

Shawn: Yeah, I think I did. Someone’s out to kill us…

(Commercial break)

Scene 3: Uncovering the mystery
(Back at the station)

Lassiter: Are you sure?

Shawn: Yes I’m sure! All Gus and I did was go out for coffee and come back, nothing more, nothing less.

Lassiter: You better be telling me the truth. Or I swear I’ll rip the hairs on your head off one by one until all that’s left is you crying for your mommy like the helpless little baby you really are.

Shawn: Good luck, that’s going to take awhile.

Gus: A few days at least, even if he didn’t stop for breaks.

Lassiter: I can’t believe this… Chief, can I talk to you for a minute?

(Lassie goes through the door)

Lassiter: Chief, there hiding something. And until I find out what it is, I ask that you cooperate with me and hold these men until further questioning.

Chief: Lassiter, This is Spencer and Guster, not bonnie and Clyde. It’s not like they did anything wrong here. I mean, yes. I find it a little suspicious as to how the body ended up there. But c’mon, just look at them (Shawn and Gus are smiling and looking like statues). Do those look like the faces of suspected killers to you?

Lassiter: No, but they look like possible suspected killers who need to be taught a lesson.

Chief: What exactly are you up to detective?

Lassiter: Uhhh, nothing. Nothing at all, I’m just saying that the only leads we have in this investigation are the ones provided by Spencer and Guster. What harm can 12 more hours do?

Chief: Alright, 12 more hours. After that I expect a full report on my desk first thing tomorrow in my office.

(Lassiter starts walking away)

Chief: And Lassiter.

Lassiter: Yes Chief?

Chief: Be nice? It’s the kid’s birthday after all, give him a break.

Lassiter: Will do chief.

(Shawn and Gus talk while Lassie’s with the chief)

Gus: What do you mean no?

Shawn: I’m just saying, no matter how many times you make me watch it, I’m never going to like Gidget goes to Rome.

Gus: It was a sixties classic Shawn.

Shawn: No, American graffiti was a classic, Gidget is just. Torture: Honestly Gus, does the cheesy-esque singing and low level acting not do it for you? I honestly don’t know how much more I can take, having that annoying musical score popping in and out of my head all day.

Gus: It is quite addicting.

(Jules walks in)

Jules: Okay guys, Lassiter’s not playing nice today (Shawn interrupts)

Shawn: You mean, that was him being nice?

Jules: More or less, yes.

Shawn: Wow, I’d hate to see him try and sit through the Notebook. Oh and Jules, might I add that you are looking mighty foxy today? Especially in that new blouse, red, nice color, accentuates the eyes and makes them sparkle.

And is that Ralph Lauren perfume I smell?

Jules: Wait what? I came in here to ask you if there’s anything you’re not telling us about the case.

Shawn: And what would a guy like me be hiding from a beautiful woman like you? With new highlights?

Jules: I thought I’d treat myself to a little shopping. A girls gotta reward herself every once and awhile. Especially with all the work they’ve been piling down on my desk lately. And most of it is just paperwork. Not to mention my brothers coming into town Friday…

Shawn: Jules, you didn’t tell us you had a brother?

Jules: Well, half brother. His name’s mark, he’s sixteen; apparently I’m supposed to be watching him while my parents are off to Cabo for two weeks.

Shawn: Yikes. And why haven’t you told us about him before?

Jules: Because he sort of has a record, and a short temper. My parents told me not to tell anyone here until the timing seemed right.

Shawn: Why is that?

(A kid in a black jacket and sun glasses walks in through the police station doors in slow motion)

Jules: AH! He’s here…

Shawn: How do you know?

Jules: Trust me, I know.

(Cuts to the scene with the kid walking up to a police office desk)

(Pulls off sunglasses)

Mark: Hi, I’m looking for a detective O’Hara.

Jules: Oh no, he’s coming this way (covers eyes)

(Doors burst open)

Mark: Hey sis.

(Commercial break)

Scene 4: The half brother.

Shawn: So this is Mark.

Jules: I thought you weren’t coming into town until Friday?

Mark: Change of plans, mom and dad left early so they could get a discount on there plane tickets.

Jules: And they didn’t bother calling first?

Mark: Oh they did, they told me to tell you... I must have forgotten to call before I flew out here. Oh well.

Jules: You flew? By yourself?

Mark: Yeah, I’m 16. I think I’m old enough to fly on a plane by myself.

(Stares at Shawn and Gus)

Mark: Hey, are these guys wanted for like murder or something?

Shawn: Why? Do we look like the murdering kind to you?

Mark: No, but the guy on your left is looking pretty suspicious.

Shawn: Gus here just has a nervous tick. He’ll be fine.

Gus: I haven’t used the bathroom in twelve hours Shawn. How do you think I feel?

Shawn: I told you to go before we left.

Gus: There was a body on our floor Shawn! It was a crime scene, now our office is blown up and I’m not sure if the insurance is going to pay for it all.

Shawn: Relax; I’m sure a welfare check will hold us by until we…

Mark: Wow, what a couple of losers.

(Shawn and Gus stare up at him)

Shawn: Pardon?

Mark: Just look at you two, one of you has a sweat stained shirt, and the other one smells like garbage.

Shawn: Hey, I have normal sweat glands thank you very much!

Mark: I was talking about him (points to Gus)

(Gus looks down at pits)

Gus: Well, it is hot outside!

Shawn: But were inside…

Gus: Whatever, I don’t have to answer to you Shawn.

(Shawn turns to Mark)

Shawn: Hi, I’m Shawn Spencer. (Goes out to shake hand)

Mark: And let me guess, your “Gus-sweat stains Mc-Guster” is that correct?

Shawn: Wow, he is good!

Anyways. Nice to meet you. Juliet here has told us so little about you.

Mark: Yeah. And why is that sis?

Jules: Because (starts pulling Mark away toward the door) Mom and dad don’t want you getting into trouble, so they told me to introduce you to as little people as possible.

Shawn: Do you mean little people as in dwarves?

Jules: I mean little people as in no one steps into the same room as him, unless you’re prepared to lose your wallet.

(Shawn and Gus check pockets)

Gus: Hey! Where’s my wallet?

Shawn: Mine too!

(Juliet pulls the wallets out of marks coat pocket and tosses them to Shawn and Gus, and finally manages to get Mark out the door)

Jules: See, I told you he was trouble.

Shawn: Hey, I have twenty bucks missing out of here, Gus let me see if…

Gus: No Shawn (sees wallet) Hey he stole my hundred dollar gift card from best buy! I got that as a present from my mom last year for my birthday. I’m going to…

Jules: Relax; I’ll take care of it. But for now, you still haven’t answered my question.

Is there anything…

Shawn: Wait, wait. Stop. Is that your brother I see stealing candy from the vending machine?

Jules: Oh no, just one second. Don’t move!

Shawn: Gus, is it me. Or does that kid look a whole lot like Zack Efron to you?

Gus: I hear that!

(Jules confronts Mark and forces him to sit down and wait)

(Shawn and Gus banter)

Shawn: Hey what is up with Jules? She’s looking hot in that new blouse. But there’s something else about her that seems different…

Gus: What, you mean her new SUV that’s out front?

Shawn: No not that, wait, what? Jules bought an SUV? Who buys an SUV these days? Desperate soccer moms in need of a pick up ride?

Gus: OH trust me, you haven’t seen this Shawn. It’s huge! I have a picture of it in my wallet.

Shawn: You do? Who keeps a picture of an SUV in there wallet?

Gus: Shut up and just look (hands it to Shawn).

Shawn: Wow your right, she is huge.

Gus: She? (Notices that Shawn was looking at the photo for the biggest loser’s new season) Turn it around.

Shawn: OH I (notices something on the vehicle). Gus, I saw this exact same car yesterday right in front of the coffee shop.

Gus: So?

Shawn: So there was no license plate on it.

Gus: And you didn’t find that suspicious?

Shawn: No, if this is a new car it means it’s hardly been on the market. Plates don’t always come in on time.

Gus: True, but you have to have one on the vehicle in order to sell it. Which means…?

Shawn: Someone drove by our office in a stolen SUV the same day we almost get blown up like hot air balloons! Coincidence? I think not!

(Shawn starts dancing along with Gus)

Shawn: We’ve got ourselves a ca-ase we’ve got ourselves a ca-ase!

Gus: shhhh, she’s coming back!

(Both shush each other)

(Jules walks in)

Jules: Okay, sorry. So, is there anything you’re not telling us about this case?

Shawn: You mean, aside from the fact that our office was blown to smithereens, You looking sexy in those high heels, Gus and I winding up riding in the back of a police car, which I swear smelled like the inside of a garbage truck. Your little brother trying to rob us, AND, losing all of the “my little pony” dolls Gus had hidden in his desk. Yeah, I think so.

Gus: Shawn, how did you know about those?

Shawn: I came across your collection while snooping through your stuff last week; I’m still looking for that Lionel Richie mix tape you stole from me in 7th grade.

Gus: I didn’t steal it,

Shawn: Oh right, and it just “magically” disappeared from my backpack while I was enjoying the nice turkey sandwich my mom prepared for me in my lunch box.

Gus: You don’t even like turkey sandwiches!

Shawn: So? You still stole it!

Gus: For the last time. You placed your backpack down on the table, we ate our lunch. That’s it. End of discussion!

Shawn: Nooo, you were talking with Lucy Chang remember? She was a huge Lionel Richie fan! Remember that thing she started with those nerdy kids from gleek club?

Gus: You mean “love doctors anonymous”?

Shawn: Yeah that’s it, hey, how did you remember the name?

Gus: Uhhh…

Shawn: You were in the club weren’t you?

Gus: So what if I was?

Shawn: So what if you were? It proves you stole the tape!

Gus: How? Tell me how Shawn! I didn’t take the tape!

Shawn: Oh right, *starts humming Lionel Richie song*.

Gus: You know I didn’t take it!

Shawn: Oh right, as if I’m going to believe you? Mister mix tape snatcher.

Jules: Alright! Guys, that’s it! Gus, apologize to Shawn.

Gus: For what?

Jules: For making him think you stole the mix tape, when you obviously didn’t.

And Shawn

Shawn: Yes buttercup?

Jules: Apologize to Gus,

Shawn: What, I didn’t do anything. Gus started it; I was just eating my lunch (Gus interrupts)

Gus: What!? You know I didn’t take it, I was sitting next to you watching you eat the entire time (both start bickering back and forth between each other rather comically, with physical fighting aka girly hand waves thrown in).

(Lassiter walks in)

Lassiter: Okay that’s enough! Now I say we take these two rascals out of here, and put them in a holding cell until were ready to begin with phase 2 of our questioning.

Shawn: Phase two?

Lassiter: Yeah, Phase two. It comes right after phase 1.

Shawn: And that would be?

Lassiter: I don’t have to answer to you, O’Hara. Take em’ out of here and put them in there holding cell.

Jules: Okay but.

Lassiter: Don’t okay me, just do it.

Shawn: Ouch, that’s a little rough. Sure it’s not because poor wittle Lassie face didn’t get his coffee this morning?

Lassiter: No it’s not that…

Shawn: Oh wait, I’m sensing something… (Begins shaking and putting hands to head).Your (freezes for a second) living with your parents until the divorce settlement closes aren’t you?

Lassiter: No…why would you think that?

Shawn: Gus do you see this? Can it be more obvious? You haven’t shaved in three days and your shirt’s buttoned up so high that it looks ridiculous, only a mother would dress her son like that, she even did your hair with the little curls on the ends didn’t she? Oh and, your wife’s (Lassiter: Ex wife) is releasing the funds from the settlement to an offshore account where she’ll use the money to buy a brand new European sports car that comes with a killer engine and luxury custom leather seats.

Lassiter: Wait, how did you know about that?

Shawn: 4 Years at the department and you still haven’t gotten it by now? I’m a psychic, and you my friend, have just been served. Holla! *high fives with Gus*

(Walks out rather hip hoppishly with arms waving at sides while Gus follows from behind)

Gus: How did you know about the Sports car?

Shawn: I spotted Lassies ex wife yesterday at the coffee shop talking with some man about European designer hand bags and luxury custom cruisers…put the two and two together and.

Gus: You get a sports car, nice work! I still don’t understand why you haven’t mentioned this to Juliet yet either.

Shawn: I will, just relax; it’s just going to take me some time right now to figure out this case, so many things aren’t making sense, like for instance, why would someone leave an eviction notice on our front door when the rent isn’t even due until next month?

Gus: You saw an eviction notice on the door and didn’t bother telling me about it?

Shawn: I thought it was a prank, so I tossed it in the trash.

Oh look, a bubblegum wrapper (bends over) I bet it has one of those funny jokes inside (opens it up)

Clue 1# Find me at dawn, hiding under a bush, between 7th street, is where you will look. If you follow the plan, according to flight, you will see your next sunset, until then comes daylight.

Gus: What is it?

Shawn: I think we are in trouble, we’re his next targets.

(Two teenage kids bump into them while they are being escorted by police officers)

Both: Hmmp.

Mexican boy 1: Oh we are so sorry mister! Let me help you fix your shirt.

Shawn: Whoa whoa, no touchy!) Who are you two? Paco and senior’ Goushbod?

Mexican boy 2: No, no, I am Marcos, and this is my brother, Julio. We are workers for Mr. Rodeli. We work at his farmhouse out in southeast Santa Barbara?

Gus: Oh yeah I heard about you two on the news, you stole that guys car! And murdered his wife!

Julio: NO, no! We are innocent I tell you!

Shawn: Right, you and every other half man, half Spanish speaking Latino boy in the Southern California region!

Marcos: No, look it! (Shows Shawn the paper)

See! His body was found in a field just outside of the city; Julio and I were busy attending to the crops when this happened!

Gus: Were there any witnesses to prove your innocence?

Julio: No, that’s why we need your help!

Gus: Our help, I don’t know about you, but Shawn and I just had our building blown up, and there’s a killer on the loose and…

Shawn: Whoa, whoa, whoa. Shush, ix nay on the urderer may okay?

Marcos: What are you two talking about?

Shawn: Nothing, alright, Gus and I will help you, under one condition. (Both boys: Yes?) You two need to find a way to distract those two lovely policewomen over there while Gus and I plot our escape.


This post has been edited by Austinisawesome: Jun 28 2009, 07:38 PM

[SnarkyPsychicRul...]

Here is my idea on what Shawn and Gus say

Shawn: Man today blows, do u know how many pineapple pudding pops and Psych business cards I had in that office?

Gus: R u kidding me Shawn?

Shawn: U know I don't kid about pudding pops, dont u remember in 3rd grade when Tyler McGurty took just 1 of my pudding pops and I freaked out.

Gus: Our office blew up, there was a dead guy on the floor, and a threatening message in his pocket and u r worried about pudding and business cards.

Shawn: We r in a police station and u know lassie is gonna keep us here 4 at least 12 hours,.........as long as we say nothing about the message.

Gus: What?

Shawn: he knows we r hiding something but he doesnt know what yet, so he will keep us here untill we tell him.

Gus: Ok Shawn I hope u r right

[door opens]

Shawn: Hey lassie!

[its actually Jules]

Shawn: Oh sorry Jules I was just expecting Lassie!

[psychmate0911]

idea continued........................

jules: hey shwan, gus.

shawn: jules.i know why ur here.

jules: oh yeah. why is that shawn?

shawn: cause lassie and the chief think that you can get information out of me easily.

jules: ur point?

shawn: no point just felt like pointing it out to gus here. (gus sighs)

jules:alrighty i think i'll ask the questions now beginning with the most important one. what do you know that we don't?

shawn: im not sure i know what ur refering to.

jules: okay next question. did you recognize the victim at all based on what u saw.

gus: what do you mean, his blood stained back. i think i speak for both of us when i say we didnt recognize him.

jules: alright. did either of you get into any trouble recently envolving gangs or anything that would invovle payback.

shawn: yes. i dont know if you noticed but gus and i are all over the papers. we stopped mr.yang and sent her to jail. we pratically plastered our pictures on the cork boards of criminals everywhere. i guarantee all of them want a challenge and who better than us.

jules: i see your point.

gus: shawn u just made me afraid to sleep in my own home.

shawn: u should be afraid gus we've been called out by the fricken execu-----.oops.

jules: whos the execuuuuuu?

shawn: no one special. (jules glares at shawn menacingly). jules a killer is out to get us thats all i know. were not the killers thats true but we'll be killed now for sure.

jules: what do you mean you'll be killed.

shawn: have you heard of the executioner, jules?

jules: of course shawn he's become bigger than mr.yang. the only difference is that he's a nomad killer.

shawn: guess where he is now jules.

[psychmate0911]

continued.............

after waiting 12 hours in a holding cell gus and shawn are released

shawn: jules you cant let us just leave. we'll die i can see it very clear through the spirits message.

jules: i dont know what exactly you need me to do.

shawn: could i get in trouble and locked up again.

jules: dont do anything shawn. u and gus can stay the night at my new place if it makes you feel better.

shawn : i can watch my own back. i just dont own a gun and well you do.

later at juliets new apartment

shawn: its just like i imagined it.

jules: shawn, the whole place is a bed a couch a chair and boxes.

shawn: when i imagined your place i imgined it as my place toooo. oh shoot i forgot to call abby!

jules and gus: abby?

shawn: yeah abigail. just hold on a sec. (shawn walks into the kitchen followed by gus and juliet who eavesdrop around the corner)

shawn dials abigails number and she answers

abigail: whats up shawn?

shawn: hey abby. just thought id say that im sorry i didnt call and that another serial killer has felt the need to kill me and gus.

abigail: ur joking right? tell me ur joking shawn.

shawn: sorry abby im sorry to say that this time im not joking in the slightest bit.

abigail: well where are you? i want to see you shawn.

shawn: hold on just let me ask jules.

abigail: wait. why do you have to ask jules?

shawn: gus and i are staying at her place.

abigail: oh, who is she again.

shawn: what jules? she's a cop.

abigail: oh okay. well can u tell me where to find u.

shawn: hold on one minute.

jules! can abby come over please.

jules: tell her to get directions from the station.

shawn: k. thx.

jules and gus walk over to a couple boxes and wait for shwan to finish on the phone

gus: r u sure ur okay with abigail coming over?

jules: why wouldn't i be?

gus: don't give me that juliet. im not stupid.

jules: gus its fine were all adults here and i plan to act like one. as long as she doesnt start anything i'll be fine.

gus:uh-huh

shawn: she'll be over in about an hour.

jules: okay.

shawn: something wrong?

jules: not a thing.

shawn: great im gonna go put on my pj's.

[psychmate0911]

later on when abigail arrives

knock on door........jules walks over to answer

abigail: you must be jules, im abigail.(abigail extends a hand and they shake awkwardly)

jules: nice to meet you abigail, ive heard alot abou------.

shawn: abby!

abigail: hey shawn(they meet together and hug)

shawn: u got here quick(microwave beeps)i made us mac and cheese.

abigail: how thoughtful. (shawn and abigail walk into the kitchen his arm draped over her shoulders. gus enters the living room with jules and collapses on the couch)

jules: can u believe that gus how thoughtful. she annoys me already.

gus: i thought u didnt have a problem with this?

jules: i don't she just.......rubs me wrong i guess.

gus: its okay if you like him, juliet. i already made a bet with lassie and mcnab on how long they'll last.

jules: and........

gus: juliet, shawn hasnt had a lasting relationship over a month. i give him that long before he gets bored. lassie says two weeks and mcnab says they'll get married, but he's a romantic at heart anyway so you cant really count his bet.

jules: abigail is the one he called back after seeing her at a high school reunion. how textbook is that. she really is pretty isnt she. i mean her hair is shorter than mine and her eyes are so pretty. did you see her eyes gus.

gus: i think that ur just as much if not more attractive than abigail. besides she said that she didnt like my pink shirt. only real men wear pink juliet. im a real man.

jules: he made her mac and cheese

gus: he made u a candle lit dinner during the derby case.

a window breaks in the kitchen and abigail shrieks. the lights go out and juliet clutches her gun as she rounds the kitchen. when the lights flicker back on abigail is on the floor with glass in her arm while shawn is no where to be seen. shawn and gus exchange glances and thats when gus realizes the note on the counter

dear SB police

your well known psychic will die. when is his choice. he will either lose or win. the games are endless so if he loses once you'll find the pieces of his body scattered around SB if he wins he continues to the next game. the psychic as you know him is dead so lets hope you said ur goodbyes cause you'll never see him again!

signed, the executioner

[psychmate0911]

continued with jules, abigail, and gus

jules: what happened?!

abigail: i dont...the lights....then the widow....my arm.....shawn.

gus: i just called 911, their on their way.

jules:u didnt see anything at all.

abigail: there was a flash of white light that forced me to shut my eyes, when i opened them again he was gone.

back toshawn

shawn: where am i ? marco?

executioner: polo.

shawn: as it lives and breaths. listen dude im gonna set u strait okay.

executioner: okay.

shawn: the girl u kidnapped me from wont be happy, the guy i was with,gus, yeah he wont be happy either, and jules,well jules has pin-point gun accuracy. your as good as dead.

executioner: oh yeah. what about u? are u just gonna sit there until someone comes to rescue u psychic. i really thought you would be more of a challenge. maybe i should just kill you now.

shawn: yeah you know what maybe you should cause i dont play anyones games. plus being tied up and blidfolded leaves me a little defenseless.

executioner: the first game is sink or swim. location:here, challenge:avoid being pulled down to the depths of my olympic sized pool. the only thing you have to do is get yourself out of the position ur in now starting in 5....4....3....2....1...splash

shawn hit the icy cold water and sunk to the bottom. his skin felt like it was being pricked with large knives. he quickly pulled his hands under his feet and in front of him. he stripped of the blind fold and noticed that he was whereing cuffs. a small silver key glimmered and shined on a silver chain in front of him. he squirmed to it and quickly unlocked his hands and feet. once he had room he flapped his arma to reach the surface to take a large breath. the air felt damp and dusty. he looked around as quick as he could and noticed an envelope on a chair. he pulled himself out of the water and walked to the chair.

shawn: this game sucks!

the note was printed on a plain white sheet of paper folded twice.

congradulations,

you have passed the first game and now its time for the next. its one of my favorites entitled the climb. i sicerely hope you dont die

signed the executioner

shawn: this ssssuuuuuccckkkkkkksssssss!!!!!!!

exucutioner intercom: please enter through the opening doors shawn.

shawn entered through the doors after realizing that the entire room was just a square pool. the only way out was the way he needed to go.once he entered the room a tall rock wall stood before him. it had bumps and rocks from the very bottom to the tip top. wild wolves in small dog cages growled at him with fierce anger.

shawn: i really wish i didnt skip gym.

executioner intercom: u have 20 secounds to get ur barings on the wall before the dogs are released.

shawn quickly glanced around the room and noticed a black rope hiding underneath a brown canvas beside the wall. he ran to it and used it to wrap around the three dog cages. the dog doors remained shut after 20 minutes had passed so shawn decided to explore the room. the only exit was a small garage door that was manually pulled up. he walked up to the wall and slowly manuevered his way into the harnass and up the wall. on top was another not and instructions.

shawn: u suck. can i go soon?

take the zip line down and crawl out of the slime pit once you crash. after you get to your feet run for your life because the birds will be released. the object is to find the note that i tapped underneath a red square with a square design.

[psychmate0911]

continued with jules, abigail, and gus

jules: what happened?!

abigail: i dont...the lights....then the widow....my arm.....shawn.

gus: i just called 911, their on their way.

jules:u didnt see anything at all.

abigail: there was a flash of white light that forced me to shut my eyes, when i opened them again he was gone.

back toshawn

shawn: where am i ? marco?

executioner: polo.

shawn: as it lives and breaths. listen dude im gonna set u strait okay.

executioner: okay.

shawn: the girl u kidnapped me from wont be happy, the guy i was with,gus, yeah he wont be happy either, and jules,well jules has pin-point gun accuracy. your as good as dead.

executioner: oh yeah. what about u? are u just gonna sit there until someone comes to rescue u psychic. i really thought you would be more of a challenge. maybe i should just kill you now.

shawn: yeah you know what maybe you should cause i dont play anyones games. plus being tied up and blidfolded leaves me a little defenseless.

executioner: the first game is sink or swim. location:here, challenge:avoid being pulled down to the depths of my olympic sized pool. the only thing you have to do is get yourself out of the position ur in now starting in 5....4....3....2....1...splash

shawn hit the icy cold water and sunk to the bottom. his skin felt like it was being pricked with large knives. he quickly pulled his hands under his feet and in front of him. he stripped of the blind fold and noticed that he was whereing cuffs. a small silver key glimmered and shined on a silver chain in front of him. he squirmed to it and quickly unlocked his hands and feet. once he had room he flapped his arma to reach the surface to take a large breath. the air felt damp and dusty. he looked around as quick as he could and noticed an envelope on a chair. he pulled himself out of the water and walked to the chair.

shawn: this game sucks!

the note was printed on a plain white sheet of paper folded twice.

congradulations,

you have passed the first game and now its time for the next. its one of my favorites entitled the climb. i sicerely hope you dont die

signed the executioner

shawn: this ssssuuuuuccckkkkkkksssssss!!!!!!!

exucutioner intercom: please enter through the opening doors shawn.

shawn entered through the doors after realizing that the entire room was just a square pool. the only way out was the way he needed to go.once he entered the room a tall rock wall stood before him. it had bumps and rocks from the very bottom to the tip top. wild wolves in small dog cages growled at him with fierce anger.

shawn: i really wish i didnt skip gym.

executioner intercom: u have 20 secounds to get ur barings on the wall before the dogs are released.

shawn quickly glanced around the room and noticed a black rope hiding underneath a brown canvas beside the wall. he ran to it and used it to wrap around the three dog cages. the dog doors remained shut after 20 minutes had passed so shawn decided to explore the room. the only exit was a small garage door that was manually pulled up. he walked up to the wall and slowly manuevered his way into the harnass and up the wall. on top was another not and instructions.

shawn: u suck. can i go soon?

take the zip line down and crawl out of the slime pit once you crash. after you get to your feet run for your life because the birds will be released. the object is to find the note that i tapped underneath a red square with a square design.

[SnarkyPsychicRul...]

Back 2 Gus, Jules, and Abby @ the police station so Lassie and Cheif are there 2

Gus: U dont remeber anything

Abby: I already told u everything that haapened

Jules: [mumbling under her breath] She's a big help

Lassie: What o'Hara?

Jules: what? nothing

Lassie: Gus, O'Hara do u 2 remember anything?

Jules: We were................

Lassie: [cutting off Jules] Wait. Y were Gus, Shawn, and his girlfriend @ ur house?

Jules cringing @ the words his girlfriend

Gus: Shawn asked if we could....

Abby: [cuts off Gus] What he said he was their for protection and had no other choice!

Jules: He......

Gus: Just fely more cumfortable 2 b with a cop since there is a serial killer after him.

Abby: [under her breath] its not like she was a big help

Jules: Excuse me!

Abby: U just let MY shawny be stolen away by a serial killer!

Jules: Yeah and u were such a help!

Abby: Im not a cop!

Jules: But u were with him last!

Lassie: Girls break it up u can fight over Shawn later. Now onto a Gus

Gus: What?

Lassie: Y didnt u tell us about the executioner!

Gus: I told, well Shawn told Jules. Duh, thats y we were @ her house. Keep up

Lassie glaring @ Gus

Jules: [trying 2 divert the conversation] Anyways....

Abby: We need 2 find Shawny!!

Jules: Please stop interuppting

Abby: We need 2 find him

Jules: We will

Abby: What is ur problem, Gus is worried because they've been friends 4ever, and im wooried because im his girlfriend, but y r u worried?

Jules: i've known him for 3 years, were really good friends.

Gus Lassie and Abby: Uh huh

Back 2 Shawn

Shawn: This is the worst sleepover ever

Then he climbs up and caribeans himself 2 the Zipline

Shaw: Just like old times

he Ziplines down

Shawn: Woo Hoo!

He crashes

Shawn gets 2 the surface of the green slime

Shawn What did u rob the kids choice awrds b4 u kidnapped me?

Executioner: [on the intercom] U better run i'm releasing the birds

As he sees a whole lotta seagulls released

Shawn: Seagulls, really, What r they gonna do? Beg me 4 french fries?

Executioner:[on the intercom] Genetically altered love and will kill 4 fish guts, which is what is in the green slime u r covered in.

Shawn: 1st of all gross!! 2nd of all this sucks!

Shawn runs trying not 2 b eaten alive then sees the red squares all 157 of them

Shawn: Dude, really!

Executioner: Yeah, but u know, Whats my favorite number?

Shawn: Dude, I don't know?

Executioner: Really?

Shawn goes over 2 box 13 and there is the second clue tapped under the red box

Shawn: Predictable.

Note Reads:

Shawn,
I was sure u would never make it this far but u've proved me wrong. Go through the door u seemed 2 miss @ the bottom of the slime pit, yeah sorry I fooled u. Then crack the color code and try not 2 be beaten, and the clue will be released. I hope u can work under Pressure!
-The Executioner

Shawn: How could I have missed it? This guy really has issues! I wonder how jules is doing?...............And Gus, oh and Abby? Y was Abby last and Jules first, weird?

[BlackTsChica]

More please, guys! This is great!!!! I love the "this sucks!!" and "worst sleepover EVER!!!" Great banter..keep it coming!!!

[SnarkyPsychicRul...]

Back @ the SBPD

Lassie: Ok, McNab u got your job?

McNab: Fresh Coffee?

Lassie: No.... find out all u can on the executioner

Jules: Y not just bring back Mary?

Lassie: Per Mr.Guster's advice he has taken up Raquet ball and is out of the country.

Gus: 4 rauet ball?

Lassie: Y r u still here and her [he points 2 Abby]

Jules: There is a serial killer on the loose and has kidnapped Shawn, and u just want 2 let them leave.

Lassie: No I just dont want them anywhere near me.

Jules: Fine I'll put them in an office

Abby: So we rn't going home?

Gus: I dont think so

Jules: 4 the time being no

Abby: Gus, Im freaking out................what if something happened 2 shawn?

Jules: Nice job thinking positively

Gus: what she means is Shawn has been in worse secenrios, he'll be just fine.

Lassie: In the mean time I want all man-power on this, search every basement, attic, heck look in tree houses if u have 2. We need 2 catch this guy. And find Shawn

Gus: Dont b 2 emotional now Lassie.

Lassie: Lets go!! McNab, get hurry up get ur info on the executioner.

Jules: What about me?

Lassie: Stay here comfort these 2, ur a lot better @ that than me.

Jules: I think my time really would be better spent looking 4 Shawn.

Lassie: Dont worry as soon as we here anything about the man-child u will be the first I will call..................Dont worry he will be just fine, I know he means a lot 2 u, just dont worry.

Jules: What do u mean?

Gus: Jules I think Abby remember's something

Jules: Really what is it?


Bact 2 Shawn


Shawn: Yay now I have 2 get back in the slime, great i'll feel just like Jack Black again.

He swims 2 the bottom and finds the hatch and then falls through and lands on a big gym mat.
Then on the other side he sees the "code cracker" which is a Simon Says only with what seems 2 b higher steaks. Attacthed 2 toy is a gaint bomb and a gaint axe that would swing and slice Shawn in half b4 the bomb blew up.

Shawn: Well this has a fair chance of not ending in my favor.

He also notices not 1 but 3 cameras that he presumes the executioner is watching him from.
He walks over 2 the code cracker and above it reads

-Once u begin u cannot stop, I hope u have a great memory, quick reflexes, and a high tolerence 4 pressure. U have 10 minutes 2 beat my score. Have fun! -xoxo The Executioner-

Shawn: Well his high score cant b that high.

the code cracker says high score 98

Shawn: Ha I got a better score than that in ten minutes when I was eleven!

He starts in and beats the high score massively in 9minutes and 30seconds, then the bootom falls off the code cracker, the bomb hits zero then reads "Gottcha", and under the bottom of the codecracker another clue! Oh, and the axe breaks loose and it is made of foam rubber.

@ that momement Shawn realizes that everything here seems 2 be from old moviese, and a prop storage room.

New Clue:

Have u noticed my pattern, all the similarities? Of course u have! How would I expect less, I feel so ashamed. Anyway here is ur next assignment, pull one of the cameras out of the wall believe me it doesnt matter[or does it]. Behind it is a phone:internet enabled u can email an1 of ur choosing but only 5 e-mails. Choose who wisely and what u say. Then u also might want 2 find a way out of this room 4 a pineapple treat and b4 the water rises so u dont drown.
-The Executioner-

Shawn: What no hugs and kisses, he's a pretty mean serial killer. Wow was that a double negative if I ever heard one.

Shaw: Altough I do get a Phone, I hope it can text and has emoticons, though the water thing is a drag.

[psychmate0911]

ur thinking exaclty like i did when i jotted down notes for this story. meaning the birds and slime. continued.........

shawn: ur repeating urself and honestly the connection to saw is unbearable isnt there any serial killer out there with any spec of originality.

shawn picked up the phone and found the emails of all his closest friends on the screen. he chose gus first.

gus, im okay for now. i'll probably drown in a few minutes but hey i lasted longer than everyone thought. i dontreally know where i am but i do know that im in a huge warehouse type place. theres a pool and slime and wild dogs and uhh...birds. anyway just in case i dont get out of this i'll miss u and your amazing magic head-ness(and yes i know head-ness isnt a word) bye-xoxo shawn

next he chose jules

jules, hey. first how are u? secound i just wanted to say that if i dont drown then please find me, i know u can. all i can really tell u that i know about my local is that the air is dusty and smells horrible. yet faintly like tons and tons of antiseptics. miss u 2.-xoxo shawn

next abigail

abby i just wanted to say that i really care about u and that i miss u lots and lots. hope to see you in the near future(as long as im not in a coffin or in a vase on gus's mantle) -xoxo shawn

last but not least the ever so reliable lassie

hey lassie its spenser. or as u like to call me SPENCER! anyway just wanted to let you know that im not dead yet. i gave clues to my whereabouts to gus, abby,jules and u so far. maybe ill no...no. dont tell my dad. oh yeah the executioner sucks!

shawn finished typing his last letter when the water began to rush into the room and soak his slime covered converse. he stood and noticed that the room was filling up fast.

executioner: ur priority is to get out. choose door number 1 2 or 3. just realize that one door will kill u with a simple touch.

shawn turned to look behind him and noticed the doors. they were small and their frames rested five feet above the ground. the knobs at eye level. he walked up to them and noticed that there were small scratches on two of the door knobs. the third one was clean of all blemishes. he didnt even want to imagine the ammount of people that must've chosen wrong and ...

shawn pulled and turned on the knob until it loosened and opened. the water soaked his jeans now up to his knees. he manuevered his way into the door that opened up into a small air vent. he quickly crawled in and as fast as possible so that the water wouldnt catch up. he saw another vent half way and the water began to soak his feet again. more scratches covered the walls. he continued on until he saw a bright light slowly appear around a twisty corner. the water was now soaking his shirt and he tried to hold his head above the water. a grey grate leaked the light. he pushed on it and fell on to a concrete surface. water splashed around him and he choked on it as it filled his lungs. without a moment of rest a large hand cupped his mouth and injected a fluid into his arm. in minutes he was unable to move and his eyes drifted shut.

back at the police station

gus: shawn sent me an email!

jules: me too!

lassie: it seems i have one.

abigail: he misses me.

jules: he misses me too and left an emoticon that has cool glasses.

abigail: my emoticon is rolling its eyes at you.

gus: shawn says he's in a factory of some sort. it has a pool and my guess is that its in this location.

lassie: how do u know that.

gus: my message came with coordinates.

jules: mine too.

abigail: mine too.

lassie: i'll send the swat team and we'll be off.

This post has been edited by psychmate0911: May 19 2009, 05:31 PM

[SnarkyPsychicRul...]

Shawn suddenly awoke hazzily not relly knowing where he was. As he rubbed his eyes he found that he was in the main hall of th SBPD, What?

Shawn: What, am I seriously in the police department, where is every1? And the executioner never gave me my pineapple treat!! 2day sucks!

then his pocket vibrated and he took out his phone, still sitting on the floor not strong enough 2 yet get up. It was a message from the Executioner

Shawn: great, i get 2 here from a deranged serial killer after being drugger.

Message:

Dear Shawn,
U were less intriguing then I hoped for, though I should have known u would win. So i delivered u home and u r safe 4 now. I may be back but who says it has to be for u? Say hi 2 Gus, Jules, and Abigail for me.
-xoThe Executioner-

Shawn: Ok that was moderately and creepily endearing. Now I have 2 protect Jules and Gus and myself, uggh. Oh and Abigail. Well I beter call every1 and tell them I'm ok!

As he gets up he looks over 2 Jules desk and there waiting 4 him is a pineapple pudding pop and pineapple smoothie!

Shawn: Yay! At least I got a new phone and a pineapple treat, this day wasn't all bad, ok yeah it was.

Back 2 Jules, Gus, Lassie, and Abby

They r at an abandoned movie prop house near a barge

Jules: Did they do a full sweep?

Lassie: Yeah and nothing came up but a bunch of clues and random things like birds,red boxes, slime, a rockwall, a simon says, a rubber axe, and a zipline. What were they doing in there?

Gus: whatever it was, more than likely Shawn is gonna need some therapy.

Abby: Did they find Shawn?

Jules: Not.........[here phone rings] Hold on Lassiter u tell her.

Lassie: So far we haven't found him yet.

Jules walks aways
Jules now talking 2 Shawn

Shawn: Wazzup Jules?

Jules: Shawn!! Oh my god, r u ok, where are u?

Shawn: Jules, come down I'm fine, I'm @ the SBPD, unharmed. R u ok?

Jules: I'm fine I'm just happy u r ok

Shawn: Thanks Jules can u just come back, I want 2 c a friendly face.

Jules: 10 minutes

Shawn: Ok c u then. Bye Jules.

click phone hung up

Jules: Shawns 2 the department lets go!

Lasie Gus and Abby: What?

Jules: Lets go!!

Gus and Abby: Y didnt he call me?

Gus and Abby: u?

Gus: friends since pre-k, beats girlfriend and cop he's know for 4 years!

Jules: Come on!

10 minutes later @ the police station

This post has been edited by SnarkyPsychicRules: May 19 2009, 09:17 PM

[SnarkyPsychicRul...]

Shawn is sitting in Jules desk drinking his pineapple smoothy. Then all of a sudden Jules and Gus practically run in and Lassie and Abigail walk in a few yards behind.

Jules: Shawn, thank gos your ok

Shawn stands up and Gus hugs him and talks to him

Gus: I cant believe your ok

Shawn: Thats right stay positive

Gus: I'm glad your still alive

Shawn: Me two

Gus: I dont know what I would have done without you. I'm gonna stop hugging you now before it gets really awkward.

Shawn: Sounds good buddy

Abby: My turn, Hi Shawny

They hug

Shawn: Hi Abby

Abby: We have a lot to talk about

Shawn: What, Why?

Abby stops hugging Shawn and starts walking away

Abby: You'll see, i'll call you

Lassie: Don't worry I have three black&whites guarding her house. You need to be debreifed.

Shawn: Thanks for showing the love Lassie!

Lassie: I'll go set it up

Gus: I'm gonna take this pudding pop and go help Lassiter.

Shawn: Bye

Jules: I guess its my turn

Shawn and Jules hug

Shawn: You are the person I asked to see.

Jules: That's sweet Shawn,.........SO how did you get out

Shawn[still hugging]: Jules, I'd rather not I just want to stay here and now talk to you.

Jules: Ok

Shawn:Ok, besides I have to save something for Lassie.

Jules: I like this.

Shawn: Me too.

They reluctanly stop hugging

Shawn: I have to go, before Lassie kilss Gus.

Jules: Ok I'll talk to you after

Shawn[waving]: Bye, see u then.

Jules: What about Abby?

Shawn:I have a feeling she wants to break up.

Jules: How do u know?

Shawn: She sent me a text saying were threw

Jules: Your ok

Shawn: I'm great

[SnarkyPsychicRul...]

I was gonns add more to the other version but I like yours way 2 much 2 add more! I love all the compliments Shawn gives jules and how she thinks its sweet and gets off track by Shawn's cute self. Also the whole idea of Jules having a con-artist/stealer brother that gets in trouble!

Just a prediction/question does the brother get accused of something and Gus and Shawn have 2 figure it out, then Shawn is the hero 2 Jules? And have to solve the Executioner case?

[Austinisawesome]

I was gonns add more to the other version but I like yours way 2 much 2 add more! I love all the compliments Shawn gives jules and how she thinks its sweet and gets off track by Shawn's cute self. Also the whole idea of Jules having a con-artist/stealer brother that gets in trouble!

Just a prediction/question does the brother get accused of something and Gus and Shawn have 2 figure it out, then Shawn is the hero 2 Jules? And have to solve the Executioner case?

Actually no.

Thanks for reading it!

What happens in the story is, Shawn And Gus are going to run into...a couple of kids. And Jules is gonna make a deal with Shawn, involving him and Gus babysitting her half brother. So the half brother tags along with them for the case, as well as a slew of other characters I know your going to love!

Stay tuned for details.

For now, get ready for some more of my script!

I'll be posting some more pages either tonight or tomorrow.

Get pumped for season 4!

[SnarkyPsychicRul...]

I love it already!

[Texasartchick]

Hey guys,

How about condensing this story, edit and eliminate the "text-type" (like "r u serious?"), and posting this thing on a fanfic site? Psychfic and fanfic.net are both good places to post. Psychfic has beta readers to help, too. Expand your audience!





Texasartchick

[BlackTsChica]

Too funny!!! Nice job gang....keep it comin'. And like Texasartchick said, make sure to put it on a fanfic site too.

Bring it..keep it comin'.

[Austinisawesome]

more pages of my script coming soon!!!!!!

[BlackTsChica]

more pages of my script coming soon!!!!!!

Sounds good.