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QUOTE (PsychNickNack @ Mar 26 2009, 05:56 PM)
Hello everyone, new to the forums. I had a title for an episode in my head and I really wanted to post it here.
The SegaGenesis Continues
Not really sure what you could make it about thought, I know it has to be about video games, I'd like to see one about video games.
I also want to see one where Shawn and gus need to work a case at somne sort of pizza place/arcade cause that one scene in black and tan was just awesome, but I wish it was longer.
And I want to see one where Shawn and Gus need to go to a graveyard... just because I like all kind of creepy stuff, and all the freaky episode in every season (Scary Sherry: Bianca's Toast - Shawn (And Gus) of The Dead - Tuesday The 17th)
cunaboy213 I'd like to see that episode! What would make it even funnier is the fact that Lassy isn't fond of Shawn, and would have to point out all the cool things, so I imagine it would be the kind of moment where he was forced to say something that he doesn't really think. And Gus would point out things to Shawn like Juliet's outfit or something, but the whole time Shawn would be like "Dude, what's up? Do you have like a crush on Jules now or something? You were so normal the other day."
Yeah and lassie being impressed by shawn or actually being nice to shawn while pointing out a detail about jules....... shawn would be like WHAT???!! what is he up to? Then gus pointing out things to shawn about jules shawn would think, either HEY! JULES IS THE GIRL I HIT ON, SHE IS MINE, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN FOR 3 YEARS?? I AM NOT WITH ABIGAIL ANYMORE!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? or he would figure out what lassie and him were trying to pull and accept/denie/ it or rat them out to jules and have a scheme for it to backfire on the other two, or know everything and get jules to fall for him. The thing with this cowboy epidode is there are so many things that could tottaly backfire or work out it just has so many angles.
Now onto the videogame eppy, it could show the more nerdy side of the team and their guilty pleasures of gaming. Like one of them could get completely sucked into the game, lassie would love the shooting games and probably some nerdy game as a guilty pleasure, jules would love something tottally unlike her or the same game shawn loves.....hmm, and shawn would love something like celebrity, 80s trivia challenge, nad of course fruit related[pineapple]! The crime side of it could be the high score holder of some game was killed/ has a death threat on him, the owner killed/death threat, or some other person [relavent to the gaming palace] has the same deal.
Payment[for shawn+gus possibly jules+lassie]: Free games and refreshments for life!!
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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Yeah and lassie being impressed by shawn or actually being nice to shawn while pointing out a detail about jules....... shawn would be like WHAT???!! what is he up to? Then gus pointing out things to shawn about jules shawn would think, either HEY! JULES IS THE GIRL I HIT ON, SHE IS MINE, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN FOR 3 YEARS?? I AM NOT WITH ABIGAIL ANYMORE!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? or he would figure out what lassie and him were trying to pull and accept/denie/ it or rat them out to jules and have a scheme for it to backfire on the other two, or know everything and get jules to fall for him. The thing with this cowboy epidode is there are so many things that could tottaly backfire or work out it just has so many angles.
Now onto the videogame eppy, it could show the more nerdy side of the team and their guilty pleasures of gaming. Like one of them could get completely sucked into the game, lassie would love the shooting games and probably some nerdy game as a guilty pleasure, jules would love something tottally unlike her or the same game shawn loves.....hmm, and shawn would love something like celebrity, 80s trivia challenge, nad of course fruit related[pineapple]! The crime side of it could be the high score holder of some game was killed/ has a death threat on him, the owner killed/death threat, or some other person [relavent to the gaming palace] has the same deal.
Payment[for shawn+gus possibly jules+lassie]: Free games and refreshments for life!!
Ooooo! Both of those are really good! I like that about the whole Lassy and Gus hooking up Shawn and Jules. And about the videogame one, I like all the ideas, but I see Shawn as more of a, all kinds of games guy, like he could just pick up a controller and playing the game. (hehe... I could just imagine Gus being an MMORPG guy. I could see him playing World of Warcraft.) I'd like to see them get the reward of free games and refreshments for life! That would be awesome!
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QUOTE (PsychNickNack @ Mar 26 2009, 07:21 PM)
Ooooo! Both of those are really good! I like that about the whole Lassy and Gus hooking up Shawn and Jules. And about the videogame one, I like all the ideas, but I see Shawn as more of a, all kinds of games guy, like he could just pick up a controller and playing the game. (hehe... I could just imagine Gus being an MMORPG guy. I could see him playing World of Warcraft.) I'd like to see them get the reward of free games and refreshments for life! That would be awesome!
I agree now that i think about it i think that shawn should be able to play any game and almost as good as the pros, i mean what kind of psychic detective would he be if he cant play every game ! LOL!
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Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ Mar 26 2009, 08:33 PM)
I agree now that i think about it i think that shawn should be able to play any game and almost as good as the pros, i mean what kind of psychic detective would he be if he cant play every game ! LOL!
I could just imagine if they did go to a pizza place/arcade then I could see Shawn or Gus or any of them in like one of those ball pits or the little junglegym thingies...
Oh! And for my other episode idea where they have to work at a grave yard it could be called- Shawn and Gus Walk At Midnight
And other titles could be
Little Butcher Shop of Horrors
A Night With A Murder, And A Day At The Station They would investigate some sort of murder at a movie theater, or a production theater (preferably movie, because i like movies)
The full title of the video game one would be Psych Wars: The SegaGenesis Continues
And I got an idea for one where it's like Chistine but it would be the Psychmobile and it would target the chief and Lassy and Juels and McNabb, and they'd all approach Shawn and Gus about it, but they wouldn't know what everybody was talking about, and in the end the car would go after Shawn and Gus. I don't know what a title would be, I want to base it off the Night Cycle thing in Shawn (And Gus) of the Dead.
"...Unless it's about a motorcycle that comes to life at night, solves crimes, and does sweet wheelies."
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QUOTE (PsychNickNack @ Mar 26 2009, 07:47 PM)
I could just imagine if they did go to a pizza place/arcade then I could see Shawn or Gus or any of them in like one of those ball pits or the little junglegym thingies...
Oh! And for my other episode idea where they have to work at a grave yard it could be called- Shawn and Gus Walk At Midnight
And other titles could be
Little Butcher Shop of Horrors
A Night With A Murder, And A Day At The Station They would investigate some sort of murder at a movie theater, or a production theater (preferably movie, because i like movies)
The full title of the video game one would be Psych Wars: The SegaGenesis Continues
And I got an idea for one where it's like Chistine but it would be the Psychmobile and it would target the chief and Lassy and Juels and McNabb, and they'd all approach Shawn and Gus about it, but they wouldn't know what everybody was talking about, and in the end the car would go after Shawn and Gus. I don't know what a title would be, I want to base it off the Night Cycle thing in Shawn (And Gus) of the Dead.
"...Unless it's about a motorcycle that comes to life at night, solves crimes, and does sweet wheelies."
Sweet i think they should do a movie theater murder and another murder at the station or with out of state cops that are pretty much morons called
Santa Barbra 911
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ Mar 27 2009, 07:33 PM)
Sweet i think they should do a movie theater murder and another murder at the station or with out of state cops that are pretty much morons called
Santa Barbra 911
"Yes... and yes!" lol I like that one, I like it very much. And in that one Lassy would finally see how Shawn feels when the SBPD put him down (mainly lassy himself) because the moron cops would really not care what Lassy or Jules had to say, and they'd kind of listen to the Chief, but eventually disregard what she said.
Hmm... My brain is really REALLY stuck on what to call my Cristine based episode!!!!
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QUOTE (PsychNickNack @ Mar 27 2009, 06:43 PM)
"Yes... and yes!" lol I like that one, I like it very much. And in that one Lassy would finally see how Shawn feels when the SBPD put him down (mainly lassy himself) because the moron cops would really not care what Lassy or Jules had to say, and they'd kind of listen to the Chief, but eventually disregard what she said.
Hmm... My brain is really REALLY stuck on what to call my Cristine based episode!!!!
Yeah, the Santa Barbra 911 would be cool if they put lassie and jules down and finally got a taste of their own medicine. Plus they should only listen to shawn and gus because they REALLY believe in psychhicness but the department keeps trying to worm their way back.
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ Mar 28 2009, 12:55 PM)
Yeah, the Santa Barbra 911 would be cool if they put lassie and jules down and finally got a taste of their own medicine. Plus they should only listen to shawn and gus because they REALLY believe in psychhicness but the department keeps trying to worm their way back.
But Shawn wouldn't like the Santa Barbra 911 and he and Gus would give them wrong leads and give the SBPD the real leads, and in the end the SB-911 would be like "WTH?" and Shawn and Gus would be like "We only work for the SBPD, sukkas!" OR Shawn and Gus are glad they are finally accepted by some people, and then they would help the SB-911 and show lassy and Juels what they go through on a daily bassis, and I can just see Lassy sneaking on to the crime scene and Shawn would be like "Lassy, what did I tell you? This is the SB-911's case and ours, so we need you to leave, okay flat stanly?"
Another title idea I got Smells Like Team Spirit
And in that there is an allegid suicide by a Musician but Shawn Gus Lassy and Jules don't believe it was suicide, but the chief does and disregards what they say because they don't have any good proof or leads, and the only way to solve the case is Shawn, Gus, Lassy, and Jules would all have to work together to figure out who killed the musician.
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Great thread..great ideas!
I keep coming up with titles but can't seem to put the whole idea together..so I'll drop them here..maybe it will spark some ideas for some folks.
And USA Network..feel free to use...I give up all rights!
"Sense and Insensibility"
"No Country for Dead Men"
"One Night at McNabb's"
"Law and Disorder" (another chance for Gus to flex his high-school, "accelerated-class for law" knowledge)
"Regarding Henry" (not like the Harrison Ford movie...just an eppy with Henry is involved..like the Treasure Hunt eppy)
"Becoming Jane" (crossover with The Mentalist)
"Murder by Death and a Maiden"
"iShawn" (an eppy where a suspect's name is Sean and Shawn and Gus investigates and meets a girl name Shahn...is that confusing..heck yeah!!)
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QUOTE (BlackTsChica @ Mar 28 2009, 04:03 PM)
Great thread..great ideas!
I keep coming up with titles but can't seem to put the whole idea together..so I'll drop them here..maybe it will spark some ideas for some folks.
And USA Network..feel free to use...I give up all rights!
"Sense and Insensibility"
"No Country for Dead Men"
"One Night at McNabb's"
"Law and Disorder" (another chance for Gus to flex his high-school, "accelerated-class for law" knowledge)
"Regarding Henry" (not like the Harrison Ford movie...just an eppy with Henry is involved..like the Treasure Hunt eppy)
"Becoming Jane" (crossover with The Mentalist)
"Murder by Death and a Maiden"
"iShawn" (an eppy where a suspect's name is Sean and Shawn and Gus investigates and meets a girl name Shahn...is that confusing..heck yeah!!)
Those are some great titles! I like the idea for iShawn, and I think you would need to incorperate his iPhone in it somehow (Not to be a product placement guy) And the suspect's friend would be named Guess (Pronounced Gus) hehehe, now THAT would be a confusing episode.
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QUOTE (PsychNickNack @ Mar 28 2009, 03:09 PM)
Those are some great titles! I like the idea for iShawn, and I think you would need to incorperate his iPhone in it somehow (Not to be a product placement guy) And the suspect's friend would be named Guess (Pronounced Gus) hehehe, now THAT would be a confusing episode.
Yeah! iPhone and Guess and a jewel heist for Jules....and Carrolton for Carlton. And don't forget Vicks Vapor Rub for the Chief.
Edit: One more title, "Signed, Sealed and Murdered" - Gus and Shawn must work at the Post Office..or Fed Ex. Shawn would never be on time..but he may dig wearing the shorts.
Title inspiration came from an old school song called "Signed, Sealed, Delivered"
OH..plus "Becoming Jane" - the crossover with The Mentalist..it's with the ACTOR Simon Baker....not with the Mentalist character..since Psych WISELY pointed out it's a "TV Show". Smart writers. Shawn can be called in as a consultant.
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EPISODE TITLE: "Pet Shop Boys"
SUMMARY: Shawn and Gus are called to investigate a possible crime at Zombie's Pet Shop. A man insists that a murder has occurred, and hires Shawn and Gus to prove it.
MAN: My parrot is dead, and the owner of the pet shop, Monty Piethong, is the one who done it! (points to bird in cage)
M. PIETHONG: He's not dead, he's resting.
GUS: Shawn, I think he may be right.
SHAWN: Are you saying that because the bird is standing up in his cage?
MAN: The only reason he's standing up is because he was nailed to the perch!
M. PIETHONG: I only had to nail him to the perch to prevent him from escaping. He's a Norwegian blue, and was pining for the fjords.
SHAWN: I'm pretty sure that Norwegian blue parrots don't live on fjords in Norway. I think they live in cages.
GUS: Dead or alive, this bird's got lovely plumage. *****
I'll stop now and run away (like brave Sir Robin) from the virtual rotten tomatoes that are sure to be thrown my way for this.
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I like the idea "Murder by Death and a Maiden" I think it should be about and at a renisance fair imagine the team talking in ye old english, going under cover there, the mocking, shawn telling peoples futures because he is "psychic" and more!! I will give more in detail but change the name because uts not my idea.
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ Mar 28 2009, 07:46 PM)
I like the idea "Murder by Death and a Maiden" I think it should be about and at a renisance fair imagine the team talking in ye old english, going under cover there, the mocking, shawn telling peoples futures because he is "psychic" and more!! I will give more in detail but change the name because uts not my idea.
Hehe..it's your idea now..run with it!!
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QUOTE (BlackTsChica @ Mar 28 2009, 08:03 PM)
Hehe..it's your idea now..run with it!!
Thnx!! mainly because i can not for the life of me think of a better name at ALL! lol! once again thank u! I'll add more tomorrow i am really tired right now. lol
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ Mar 28 2009, 11:52 PM)
Thnx!! mainly because i can not for the life of me think of a better name at ALL! lol! once again thank u! I'll add more tomorrow i am really tired right now. lol
No problemo...anytime!! I look forward to seeing what you do with it..sounds great!
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Sorry it took me forever to reply but i just got sooo busy! LOL Anyway i have a lot of my story down but i dont plan on revealing all of it untill im done, ubt i thought i would give you almost all of what i have now.
present day: [Shawn +Gus walking into/through the Renissance Festival]
Gus: Shawn why did you take me to a renissance festival? You know I hate thesse kind of places!
Shawn: What? You love the middle ages, bad english accents, and fake sword fighting. Remember your part in our high school's production of Romeo and Juliet.......... remember Romeo! [He sneers]
Gus: You know i hated that play and my mom pushed me into auditioning.
Shawn: Yeah but who landed romeo because of 3 summers at acting camp which you never told me about
Gus: What?! That never happened.
Shawn: Sure, anyway you know you loved it because you got to kiss Susan McGurty.
Gus: Worst 10 seconds of my life
Shawn: [he snickers]
Gus:What?
Shawn: You counted! Anyway I took this tickets as payment from our last case, just enjoy it!
Gus:The linderber case! The case where I missed a week of work, had to reapulstore[spelled completely wrong sorry] my company car and....l
Shawn:[interupting] Psychmobile!
Gus: What?
Shawn:Nothing go on.
Gus: and shampoo 14 cats. We need money shawn not tickets to a carnival!
Shawn: Renissance festival, im just saying its not a carnival.
Gus: At whatever rate, we need money if you want to keep playing psychic we need funding. The next case better bring in money, real money, nothing else.... nothing shawn.
Shawn: NOt even magical beans, a golden goose egg,.............jerk chicken
Gus:No Shawn
ShawnJerk Chicken
Gus:Shaaawn... money
Shawn: Fine!
LAter after a Department moment I havent got that down yet
[Gus with a sheild, a dagger, a huge gold medallion, and a t-shirt with a dragon on it that says " I slayed the dragon but i did not slay my buddy" eith a big arrow pointing to the right where shawn usually is]
[Shawn in a giant " I m a night in shinning armor" t-shirt, ith a sword, a sheild, and a choclate covered pineapple kabob] [ [Sitting down about to watch the joust]
Shawn: Dude this is going to be awesome!
Gus: Sure.
Shawn: Come'on lets duel before the match, get stoked.
Gus: No, I only have a dagger and you have a giant sword. Nu un that ain't right!
Shawn: That's why you have a sheild, besides because you bought that ridiculous shirt you only had enough for a dagger.
Gus:You know that's because the "Ye Old ATM" wasnt working
Shawn:Ha! Your loss, you should have handled your money like me.
Gus: We had the same amount, you even bought more stuff than me, how do you still have money?
Shawn: I bargained with the wenches at every shop. I just showed them my hair, shirt, carisma, teeth, and of course my psychic ability. [ he puts his hand psychic style to his head]
Gus:What about Abiagil?
Shawn:What about her?
Gus: I dont think she'd like you "bargaining" with every wench we see.
Shawn: No me and Fergie, her music was just to D-E-L-I-C-I-O-U-S.
Gus: Is it because of Jules? i mean something happened between you two, you've been acting really weird around each other!
Shawn:Joust's starting!
Gus:Shawn, Shawn, Shawn what happened between you two at the drive in?
This is as far as I've gotten so far but i'm gonna keep working on it untill it is perfect or as close as an ameature writer like me can get!
This post has been edited by SnarkyPsychicRules: Apr 2 2009, 06:15 PM
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ Mar 30 2009, 08:14 PM)
Sorry it took me forever to reply but i just got sooo busy! LOL Anyway i have a lot of my story down but i dont plan on revealing all of it untill im done, ubt i thought i would give you almost all of what i have now.
This is as far as I've gotten so far but i'm gonna keep working on it untill it is perfect or as close as an ameature writer like me can get!
Nice..keep going! I love the Ye Ole ATM..LOL! You're doing good!
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QUOTE (BlackTsChica @ Mar 30 2009, 07:29 PM)
Nice..keep going! I love the Ye Ole ATM..LOL! You're doing good!
thnx! I love having good feedback! lol
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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QUOTE (SnarkyPsychicRules @ Mar 30 2009, 07:51 PM)
thnx! I love having good feedback! lol
Anybody else have any ideas for new episodes? Come on we need fresh blood here![not real blood thats a bit creepy] LOL
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Father Wesely: I can't believe you are psychic detectives. Shawn: We also write jingles. Gus: No we don't. Shawn: We will............ Boom....Boom...Boom....Mufiins
Shawn: I think I broke my back and my neck and my arm. Gus: That's nothing I just bruised my cocyx Shawn:Say what? Gus: You know what I mean. Shawn: I most certainly do not!
Shawn: Just remember what the instructor said, french fries to speed up, pizza slice to slow down.
Shawn: He just shot that guy. Lassiter: I know isn't it great!
Lassiter: What the hell is going on here? Shawn: This is called 19-card stud. Gus: Regular poker is to complicated, makes it easier to get pairs. Shawn: Anything with a picture is wild
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